1. Easy - 4Key (1.45 stars, 260 notes)
2. Normal - 4Key (2 stars, 347 notes)

Status : Ranked

Bubbled by Kawawa
Qualified by Fresh Chicken
Disqualified by Feerum
Re-Bubbled by A v a l o n
Re-Qualified by Kuo Kyoka

List Difficulty
Easy by Me (Mods : 12)
(Notes : 100%) (Hitsound : 100%)

Normal by Me (Mods : 22)
(Notes : 100%) (Hitsound : 100%)

Special Thanks

WolfyArmato- for irc mods & recheck
SpectorDG for irc mods
Mage for mods
Bolgom for mods
Critical_Star for mods
Wonki for mods and 2 Stars
Interlude- for irc mods and star
EYA- for mods
-SoraGami- for mods & hitsound check
eyes for mods
Shana Lesus for mods
arcwinolivirus for hitsound files
Vampir for irc mods
erlinadewi- for star
juankristal for mods
nowsmart for mods
Suzuko-P for mods
Draftnell for mods
Verniy_Chan for irc mods
Kawawa for BN check
IamKwaN for metadata check
Fresh Chicken for BN check
SanadaYukimura for mods
A v a l o n for BN check

WolfyArmato- wrote:

noob irc mod

12:28 *- [ L e a h ] - is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1082345 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV Size Ver.) [Easy]]
12:28 - [ L e a h ] -: pattern chack plz
12:28 - [ L e a h ] -: *check
12:46 WolfyArmato-: 00:58:548 - 
12:47 WolfyArmato-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6112261
12:47 WolfyArmato-: try dis
12:48 WolfyArmato-: 01:25:360 - a
12:48 WolfyArmato-: 1/12
12:49 - [ L e a h ] -: how about Normal difff?
12:50 WolfyArmato-: 00:37:548 - 
12:50 WolfyArmato-: why not try to follow hats
12:50 WolfyArmato-: i think it's will be comfortable to play
12:50 WolfyArmato-: imo
12:50 WolfyArmato-: lol
12:50 WolfyArmato-: uwu
12:52 - [ L e a h ] -: i should delete LN?
12:52 WolfyArmato-: nope
12:52 WolfyArmato-: since it's hard
12:52 WolfyArmato-: have to hard
12:52 WolfyArmato-: keep LN
12:52 WolfyArmato-: uwu
12:52 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
12:52 - [ L e a h ] -: look at Normal pls
12:52 WolfyArmato-: 01:25:173 - 
12:53 WolfyArmato-: 1/4 stair from right
12:53 - [ L e a h ] -: like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6112284
12:54 WolfyArmato-: yes
12:55 WolfyArmato-: 00:57:798 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6112293
12:55 WolfyArmato-: how zabout this
12:55 WolfyArmato-: 01:01:548 (61548|3) - 
12:56 WolfyArmato-: reference to hard diff
12:56 - [ L e a h ] -: hmm....
12:56 WolfyArmato-: 01:02:298 -  ln should end here
12:56 WolfyArmato-: but it up to u
12:56 WolfyArmato-: since it's your map
12:56 WolfyArmato-: uwu
12:57 *WolfyArmato- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1082345 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV Size Ver.) [Easy]]
12:57 WolfyArmato-: i think piano at the start
12:57 WolfyArmato-: have the wrong pitch
12:57 WolfyArmato-: i mean
12:57 WolfyArmato-: pap
12:57 - [ L e a h ] -: = =
12:58 WolfyArmato-: 00:07:548 (7548|1,8298|1) - 
12:58 WolfyArmato-: i dunno
12:58 WolfyArmato-: but
12:58 WolfyArmato-: should move
12:58 WolfyArmato-: =w=
12:58 WolfyArmato-: uwu
12:58 WolfyArmato-: eh
12:58 WolfyArmato-: feel free to reject my opinion nya
12:58 WolfyArmato-: 5555555555555
12:59 - [ L e a h ] -: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6112303
12:59 - [ L e a h ] -: moved
12:59 WolfyArmato-: ja
12:59 WolfyArmato-: so
12:59 WolfyArmato-: that's all i can find
12:59 WolfyArmato-: nya
12:59 WolfyArmato-: uwu
12:59 - [ L e a h ] -: ok thx wolfy-nyan >w<

SpectorDG wrote:

IRC

17:41 - [ L e a h ] -: uh...can u check my beatmap?
17:41 SpectorDG: hmm
17:41 SpectorDG: which one
17:41 SpectorDG: i can irc
17:41 *- [ L e a h ] - is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1083211 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV Size) [Hard]]
17:42 SpectorDG: TV Size
17:43 - [ L e a h ] -: -w-
17:43 *SpectorDG is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1083211 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV Size) [Hard]] <osu!mania> |4K|
17:45 *SpectorDG is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1083211 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV Size) [Hard]]
17:46 SpectorDG: wrong offset
17:46 SpectorDG: 1 ms dly
17:46 SpectorDG: i can hear that
17:46 SpectorDG: change it 1558
17:46 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
17:47 SpectorDG: 00:10:558 - very awkard to catch
17:48 SpectorDG: 00:10:558 (10558|2) - Move to 2
17:48 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
17:48 SpectorDG: 80 BPM + 1/8 stream
17:48 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
17:49 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/re6Kr/259bca655b.jpg
17:49 SpectorDG: Normal have 2 notes here?
17:50 - [ L e a h ] -: oh
17:50 SpectorDG: 00:26:308 - same as here
17:50 SpectorDG: 00:27:808 - ^
17:51 SpectorDG: you following something/
17:51 SpectorDG: ?
17:52 SpectorDG: 00:30:058 (30058|3,30245|2,30433|3) - 3 2 3 ? you should rearrange 00:30:245 (30245|2,30433|3) - this pattern from 2 3
17:52 - [ L e a h ] -: just follow piano sound at 00:10:933 -
17:52 SpectorDG: 00:30:245 (30245|2,30433|3) - move to 2 3
17:53 - [ L e a h ] -: like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6112969
17:54 SpectorDG: no because [http://puu.sh/re6Vr/64c1ce5713.jpg here] 
17:54 SpectorDG: 2 4 2 4
17:55 SpectorDG: rearrange 2 3 is better
17:55 - [ L e a h ] -: http://puu.sh/re6Xt/80ace5b473.png
17:56 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/re6YN/1974eadcf8.png i think it's enough
17:57 - [ L e a h ] -: นา
17:57 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
17:57 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
17:58 SpectorDG: 00:37:558 - you mapped 4 3 4 3 ?
17:58 SpectorDG: 00:40:558 - i saw same part here
17:59 SpectorDG: but it's difference on first
17:59 - [ L e a h ] -: owo
17:59 SpectorDG: 00:46:183 (46183|1) - it's should be jack ?
18:00 SpectorDG: 00:39:808 - same as
18:00 SpectorDG: 00:42:808 - ^
18:00 - [ L e a h ] -: rearranged
18:00 - [ L e a h ] -: -w-
18:07 SpectorDG: 01:09:245 (69245|3) - Move to 1
18:07 SpectorDG:  01:13:183 (73183|1,73558|0) - and swap this ?
18:08 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
18:08 SpectorDG: that all
18:08 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
18:08 - [ L e a h ] -: thx >w<
18:08 SpectorDG: 00:37:933 (37933|2,38308|3,38683|2,39058|3) - anway
18:08 SpectorDG: you rearranged this ?
18:08 SpectorDG: 00:44:683 (44683|1,45058|0) - move to 3 2
18:09 SpectorDG: 00:46:183 (46183|1) - 1
18:09 SpectorDG: 00:47:683 - and you sure ? 1 note is enough ?
18:10 - [ L e a h ] -: hmm....
18:10 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/re7s8/2b5d71fdfb.png
18:11 SpectorDG: 00:47:683 - from
18:12 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
18:13 SpectorDG: okay 
18:13 SpectorDG: done
18:13 - [ L e a h ] -: thx :D

goodluck!

Mage wrote:

1|2|3|4

Easy

00:06:808 - add note Fixed

00:09:433 - add note Fixed

Normal

00:02:683 - add note to 4 No,Thanks


00:48:433 - add note to 3 No,Thanks


00:54:058 (54058|0) - move to 3 Fixed

01:25:183 (85183|3) - remove Fixed

Hard

00:31:745 - i hear sound, so add note No,Thanks


00:34:933 - ^ No,Thanks


00:37:370 - ^ No,Thanks


00:47:120 - ^ No,Thanks


00:52:933 - ^ No,Thanks


00:53:870 - 00:54:245 - 01:02:495 - 01:04:933 - 01:05:495 - 01:06:058 - and etc. ^ No,Thanks


01:01:558 - add note to 4 No,Thanks


01:13:558 - add note to 3 No,Thanks

01:22:558 - add note to 3 Fixed

Bolgom wrote:

hi... this mod by my modding queue~ :3

Hard Now its Normal

00:25:558 - add one...? strong piano sound here.. maybe not let me think

00:34:558 (34558|3) - finish here..? 00:35:120 - its finish at 00:34:558-

00:46:183 (46183|0,46558|1,46933|0) - ctrl + h..? huh? no, thx

Normal Now its Easy

00:42:433 - add one for drum..? Fixed

00:54:058 - add one..? no, thx

good map <3 i love this song!!

• 
  00:01:183 (1183|1,1370|2,1558|3) - should add W
  00:05:308 - remove a note? yes is a high pitch piano but for easy diff u did not map double for these high pitch piano, example: 00:01:558 - 00:05:683 -
  00:07:558 (7558|3) - why not make into LN? it just the same like 00:08:683 (8683|3) - <actually u should snap this at 00:09:808 - the long sound stopped here
  00:10:933 - like before, i think single note is fine
  00:14:683 (14683|1,14683|3) - 2 W here, u should remove 1, a W hitsound here is enough to empyhasize the piano note
  00:16:558 (16558|2,16558|3,17683|1,17683|0) - 00:19:558 (19558|0,19558|3,20683|0,20683|1) - 00:22:558 (22558|2,22558|0,23120|3,23120|0,23683|2,23683|1) - 00:25:558 (25558|0,25558|2) - same case ^ remove a W , u may want to recheck your hitsound again
  00:26:308 (26308|1,26308|0) - make it single? doesn't seems worth to use double note here since the sound is just the same like these single note , u should double here 00:26:683 - instead
  00:28:558 (28558|2,28558|1) - like before ^ and so on with those double W hitsound
  00:38:683 (38683|3) - the LN should end at 00:39:433 -
  00:41:683 (41683|0) - the LN should end at 00:42:433 - but if u are following the louder bass long sound, then u should had start at 00:40:558 - just like in your normal diff
  then 00:42:433 - add a note for kick here could be nice
  00:46:558 (46558|0) - how about move to 4 and 00:46:933 (46933|1,47308|2) - move to the left by 1 and 00:47:683 (47683|0) - move to 3? just a pattern layering suggestion
  00:48:433 - add a note for kick?
  00:58:558 (58558|2,58745|1,59683|1,59870|2) - CTRL+H?
  01:02:683 (62683|0) - i think end this at 01:03:808 - better
  01:04:558 - here should be something similiar like 01:01:558 (61558|3,62120|2,62308|1) - , u can use this pattern again for consistency
  01:07:558 (67558|3) - this should stop at 01:08:308 - is just something like 01:01:558 (61558|3) -
  01:13:558 (73558|3) - same thing here ^, it should stop at 01:14:308 -
  01:14:683 (74683|0) - better end at 01:15:808 -
  01:16:558 (76558|3) - this could be LN like 01:01:558 (61558|3) -
  
  pretty solid map~ but u should check your pattern consistency for the same part, some sound which are similiar but diffferent LN length

• 
  00:02:308 (2308|2,2308|3) - this should be single since is not high pitch piano sound like 00:02:683 (2683|0,2683|1) -
  00:10:370 (10370|2,10464|3) - how about CTRL+G to variate the pattern here?
  Some pitch suggestion~ > 00:11:308 (11308|1) - move to 3 and 00:11:683 (11683|3) - move to 2 and 00:11:683 (11683|2) - move to 4
  00:25:558 - u can use double note here too since the piano sound are louder
  00:34:933 - add a note at 1?
  00:38:683 (38683|2,39058|3) - could move to the left by 1 to variate the pattern here
  01:07:558 - can add another note here for cymbal
  01:08:495 - there is an obvious kick sound here probarly u shouldn't want to miss it
  01:09:058 - 01:15:058 - 01:18:058 - 01:21:058 - add a note? since u follow this sound too like 01:09:245 (69245|0) -
  01:10:558 - 01:16:558 - 01:19:558 - 01:22:558 - 01:23:683 - like before u can add another note here for cymbal
  01:13:183 - 01:13:370 - u missed the kick note sound, since this is the hardest diff u should try to follow the kick sound too
  01:16:933 - this sound is pretty obvious here i would highly suggest to add them
  
  nice~ but there are much missing note where u can map them here!

Critical_Star wrote:

nyahalo Leah-san~
mod as requested
column
1 2 3 4

Easy

• 
  00:01:183 (1183|1,1370|2,1558|3) - should add W
  00:05:308 - remove a note? yes is a high pitch piano but for easy diff u did not map double for these high pitch piano, example: 00:01:558 - 00:05:683 -
  00:07:558 (7558|3) - why not make into LN? it just the same like 00:08:683 (8683|3) - <actually u should snap this at 00:09:808 - the long sound stopped here
  00:10:933 - like before, i think single note is fine
  00:14:683 (14683|1,14683|3) - 2 W here, u should remove 1, a W hitsound here is enough to empyhasize the piano note
  00:16:558 (16558|2,16558|3,17683|1,17683|0) - 00:19:558 (19558|0,19558|3,20683|0,20683|1) - 00:22:558 (22558|2,22558|0,23120|3,23120|0,23683|2,23683|1) - 00:25:558 (25558|0,25558|2) - same case ^ remove a W , u may want to recheck your hitsound again
  00:26:308 (26308|1,26308|0) - make it single? doesn't seems worth to use double note here since the sound is just the same like these single note , u should double here 00:26:683 - instead
  00:28:558 (28558|2,28558|1) - like before ^ and so on with those double W hitsound
  00:38:683 (38683|3) - the LN should end at 00:39:433 -
  00:41:683 (41683|0) - the LN should end at 00:42:433 - but if u are following the louder bass long sound, then u should had start at 00:40:558 - just like in your normal diff
  then 00:42:433 - add a note for kick here could be nice
  00:46:558 (46558|0) - how about move to 4 and 00:46:933 (46933|1,47308|2) - move to the left by 1 and 00:47:683 (47683|0) - move to 3? just a pattern layering suggestion
  00:48:433 - add a note for kick?
  00:58:558 (58558|2,58745|1,59683|1,59870|2) - CTRL+H?
  01:02:683 (62683|0) - i think end this at 01:03:808 - better
  01:04:558 - here should be something similiar like 01:01:558 (61558|3,62120|2,62308|1) - , u can use this pattern again for consistency
  01:07:558 (67558|3) - this should stop at 01:08:308 - is just something like 01:01:558 (61558|3) -
  01:13:558 (73558|3) - same thing here ^, it should stop at 01:14:308 -
  01:14:683 (74683|0) - better end at 01:15:808 -
  01:16:558 (76558|3) - this could be LN like 01:01:558 (61558|3) -
  
  pretty solid map~ but u should check your pattern consistency for the same part, some sound which are similiar but diffferent LN length

Normal

• 
  00:02:308 (2308|2,2308|3) - this should be single since is not high pitch piano sound like 00:02:683 (2683|0,2683|1) -
  00:10:370 (10370|2,10464|3) - how about CTRL+G to variate the pattern here?
  Some pitch suggestion~ > 00:11:308 (11308|1) - move to 3 and 00:11:683 (11683|3) - move to 2 and 00:11:683 (11683|2) - move to 4
  00:25:558 - u can use double note here too since the piano sound are louder
  00:34:933 - add a note at 1?
  00:38:683 (38683|2,39058|3) - could move to the left by 1 to variate the pattern here
  01:07:558 - can add another note here for cymbal
  01:08:495 - there is an obvious kick sound here probarly u shouldn't want to miss it
  01:09:058 - 01:15:058 - 01:18:058 - 01:21:058 - add a note? since u follow this sound too like 01:09:245 (69245|0) -
  01:10:558 - 01:16:558 - 01:19:558 - 01:22:558 - 01:23:683 - like before u can add another note here for cymbal
  01:13:183 - 01:13:370 - u missed the kick note sound, since this is the hardest diff u should try to follow the kick sound too
  01:16:933 - this sound is pretty obvious here i would highly suggest to add them
  
  nice~ but there are much missing note where u can map them here!

Good Luck~ hope these will help

1. Hitsound 30% is good to listen
2. BG size pls change 1366x768 or 1024x768

Wonki wrote:

hii :3

mod req

1. Hitsound 30% is good to listen fixed
2. BG size pls change 1366x768 or 1024x768 i am finding a new bg....

Easy

00:25:558 - section changed part 2note is fine fixed

00:37:558 - also 2note fine fixed

00:58:745 - 2note same sound 00:58:558 (58558|0,58558|1) - fixed

00:59:870 - same fixed

01:01:558 - should note here like 01:02:683 (62683|2) - fixed

01:25:370 (85370|2) - Awkward delete pls :3 fixed

01:25:558 (85558|0) - move 4 and 01:25:558 (85558|1) - 1! hand balance :3 fixed

Normal

00:24:433 (24433|3) - should be LN same piano sound like 00:23:683 (23683|0,24808|1) - fixed

00:30:245 - ghost note delete fixed

00:31:745 - have sound :3 added

00:35:495 - also have sound so 00:35:308 (35308|1,35308|0) - delete 1of these and add ! http://puu.sh/resvw/63b6c9bcb5.jpg What Sound?

00:37:183 (37183|1) - delete I think follow the 00:36:058 (36058|3,36433|0,36620|3,36808|1,36995|3) - this sound so recommendhttp://puu.sh/resRi/3ecda7aa87.jpg fixed

okii done ~ go rank!

Interlude- wrote:

Hello!

IRC modding

2016-09-18 14:43 - [ L e a h ] -: hi Lude- can u check my beatmap?
2016-09-18 14:44 Interlude-: hello
2016-09-18 14:44 - [ L e a h ] -: ACTION is away: watching W Two Worlds
2016-09-18 14:45 - [ L e a h ] -: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1082345 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV Size) [Easy]]
2016-09-18 14:45 - [ L e a h ] -: check pls
2016-09-18 14:45 Interlude-: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1083211 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV Size) [Normal]] <osu!mania> |4K|
2016-09-18 14:47 - [ L e a h ] -: -3-
2016-09-18 14:47 Interlude-: which thing do you want me to check?
2016-09-18 14:48 - [ L e a h ] -: pattern
2016-09-18 14:48 Interlude-: 00:05:308 - delete one
2016-09-18 14:48 Interlude-: doesn't need double there
2016-09-18 14:49 Interlude-: 00:37:183 - you could delete notes and add a LN for the bass sound
2016-09-18 14:49 Interlude-: it's your choice, though
2016-09-18 14:49 Interlude-: its nicely patterned
2016-09-18 14:50 - [ L e a h ] -: 00:37:183 - i ll reject this -w-
2016-09-18 14:50 Interlude-: k
2016-09-18 14:50 Interlude-: are you planning to make hard too?
2016-09-18 14:50 - [ L e a h ] -: i dont think i can make it
2016-09-18 14:50 Interlude-: 01:01:558 - add note for crash?
2016-09-18 14:51 Interlude-: you can still make it harder
2016-09-18 14:51 - [ L e a h ] -: this is my hardest i can make
2016-09-18 14:51 Interlude-: 01:05:683 - add note for crach
2016-09-18 14:51 Interlude-: crash*
2016-09-18 14:51 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
2016-09-18 14:51 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
2016-09-18 14:51 Interlude-: 01:08:683 - maybe here too?
2016-09-18 14:51 Interlude-: 01:11:683 - same, at col 4
2016-09-18 14:52 Interlude-: 01:14:683 - 01:17:683 - same!
2016-09-18 14:52 Interlude-: wow nice song
2016-09-18 14:53 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed owo
2016-09-18 14:53 Interlude-: i'd like to make hard diff, but i think it'll be fine
2016-09-18 14:53 Interlude-: with 2 diff
2016-09-18 14:53 Interlude-: good luck on ranking!
2016-09-18 14:53 - [ L e a h ] -: oh
2016-09-18 14:53 - [ L e a h ] -: thx >w<
2016-09-18 14:56 - [ L e a h ] -: u can post in my forum if u need kudosu -w-
2016-09-18 14:56 Interlude-: oh
2016-09-18 14:56 Interlude-: ok

Good luck~!

EYA- wrote:

PM request

Hi there! In this mod Ill focus on ur patterns and handbalance.
1 | 2 | 3 | 4

Normal

00:04:933 (4933|2) - to col 4

00:05:308 (5308|3) - col 3

00:05:683 (5683|2) - col 4

00:05:683 (5683|1) - col 2

00:19:558 (19558|0) - col 2

00:25:933 (25933|3) - i think here we can move dat note to 3 col to make

00:58:558 (58558|3,58558|2,58558|0,58745|3,58745|0,58745|2,59683|1,59683|3,59683|0,59870|3,59870|1,59870|0) - using 3 notes is ban idea for normal diff i recomend u to make them doubles so if u agreed delete dat notes 00:58:558 (58558|3,58745|3) - 00:59:683 (59683|3,59870|3) -

01:03:620 - here a sound

01:04:933 - and here

01:06:058 - ^

01:06:620 - ^

01:07:933 - ^

okay here is many sounds lost, if u consider this listen this part on 25% and fix it

01:23:683 (83683|2) - to col 2

01:11:683 (71683|1) - col 3

01:17:683 (77683|3,78058|2,78433|3,78808|2) - reverse it

oh i found it! 01:16:933 (76933|3) - here u use note on sound in the middle of ln, but in others Ln u ignored them

-SoraGami- wrote:

hi leah~
i will just take a look and will point out some suggestions

Column Format:
4K = |1|2|3|4|

[Normal]

- you might want to follow the pitch here 00:01:933 (1933|1,2308|2,2683|1) it can add some feels since the song is slow, try moving it to 3,2,4 and then from here 00:04:933 (4933|3,5308|2,5683|1,5683|3) you can move it to 3,4,13 and then the last 00:06:433 (6433|0) you can move it to 2 to sort out balance

- 00:25:558 (25558|2,25933|2) - i think there's no sound that can represent it to jack, try moving 00:25:933 (25933|2,26308|0) to 1,2

- this LN 00:34:558 (34558|3) should technically end at 00:35:120 and the doubles should be in the blue line also since you follow mainly the piano synth like the one you did here 00:23:120 im suggesting like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6122917

- 00:40:558 (40558|3) - move to 3, i think it will be good if you jack it with 00:40:183 (40183|2) since they are same sound which can make the feels more deeper

- 00:46:183 (46183|0) - move to 2 to jack it with 00:46:558 (46558|1) like the reason i said above

- 00:53:308 (53308|2,53683|1) - ctrl + h, to vary the patterns between 00:53:308 and 00:54:058 and i think it will be good if you jack it with 00:54:058 (54058|2)

- 00:50:308 - try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6122984 to vary also the doubles

- 01:02:495 - add note here, it will be good for the flow and there is a sound, rearrange the next note so it will not result to a jack

- 01:05:495 - ^

- 01:07:183 - add note, kick sound and it will be good for some emphasis for the patterns

- 01:10:183 - add also

- 01:11:495 - ^

- 01:14:683 (74683|1) - move to 3, it feels off if you pair it with 01:14:308 (74308|1,74308|3)

- 01:14:683 (74683|2) - add also, you can move the LN cuz of the column limit, something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6123153

- 01:17:683 (77683|1) and 01:19:558 (79558|1) dont have the same pitch so maybe you can move it to another column this one 01:19:558 so you can properly add note here 01:20:495 and also there has a cymbals here 01:20:683 so it should be triple, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6123180

- 01:23:495 - add note, and also you might want to move this LN 01:23:683 (83683|0) to other column because it has different pitch with 01:22:558 (82558|0)

really nice diff =w=)b

nice song
Goodluck hope this helps~

eyes wrote:

Hello!

Short mod

[Easy]
00:01:933 (1933|1,2308|2) - ctrl+H no,thx
00:06:433 (6433|0,6808|2) - ^
00:49:370 (49370|2) - delete fixed
01:23:683 (83683|1) - ln ends here - 01:23:683 (83683|1) fixed
[Normal]
00:43:558 (43558|3) - ln ends here - 00:45:808 fixed
00:49:464 - http://puu.sh/rfvUz/d7332e7fdd.jpg no,thx
00:55:933 - 00:56:308 - 00:56:683 - 00:57:058 - 00:57:433 - 00:57:808 - 00:58:183 - +1 note no,thx
01:15:995 - add note fixed
01:16:370 - ^ fixed
01:19:933 - ^ fixed
01:21:058 - ^ fixed
01:21:995 - ^ fixed
01:22:370 - ^ fixed
01:22:933 - ^ fixed

Good Luck!

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hello Leah, mod

[Easy]

00:02:683 - add note to 4, here a loud sound
00:05:683 - add note to 1, same reason
00:16:558 - add note to 2 ^
00:19:558 - add note to 3 ^
00:22:558 - add note to 3 ^
00:46:933 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6125424 this pattern will be more pleasant to play
01:03:245 (63245|2) - move to 4, continue previous pattern 01:02:120 (62120|2,62683|2) -
01:04:183 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6125457
01:15:245 (75245|2) - move to 4 and 01:15:433 (75433|1) - move to 3

[Normal]

00:22:558 (22558|2) - move to 4
00:30:058 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6125475 more in keeping with the rhythm
00:55:558 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6125499 it looks more interesting
01:02:308 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6125508 and 01:04:558 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6125514
01:12:245 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6125534
01:15:058 (75058|2) - move to 1, 01:15:245 (75245|1) - move to 4 and 01:15:433 (75433|3) - move to 3
01:18:433 (78433|3,78808|3,79183|3,79558|3) - um no, 01:18:808 (78808|3) - move to 3

Very good map , i hope that soon it will get qualify, because map does not contain more errors !

Good luck Leah !

Vampir wrote:

IRC Mod

2016-09-19 17:39 - [ L e a h ] -: can u mod my beatmap?
2016-09-19 17:39 Vampir: 네
2016-09-19 17:40 Vampir: yes
2016-09-19 17:40 Vampir: 4k?
2016-09-19 17:40 - [ L e a h ] -: yes
2016-09-19 17:40 Vampir: map plz
2016-09-19 17:40 - [ L e a h ] -: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1082345 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.)]
2016-09-19 17:41 Vampir: now check?
2016-09-19 17:41 - [ L e a h ] -: up to u
2016-09-19 17:41 - [ L e a h ] -: -w-
2016-09-19 17:44 Vampir: i will give you 10 minutes later.
2016-09-19 17:44 - [ L e a h ] -: okay
2016-09-19 17:56 Vampir: ok
2016-09-19 17:56 Vampir: im ready
2016-09-19 17:56 Vampir: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1082345 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.) [Easy]]
2016-09-19 17:57 Vampir: I've got to speak in advance.
2016-09-19 17:58 Vampir: hey?
2016-09-19 17:58 - [ L e a h ] -: oh
2016-09-19 17:58 - [ L e a h ] -: sorry
2016-09-19 17:58 Vampir: I am not good at English. I'm using a translator since I'm Korean.
2016-09-19 17:58 - [ L e a h ] -: owo ok
2016-09-19 17:58 Vampir: Please understand me.
2016-09-19 17:58 - [ L e a h ] -: will u pm mod?
2016-09-19 17:58 Vampir: IRC
2016-09-19 17:59 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
2016-09-19 17:59 Vampir: im only IRC :D
2016-09-19 17:59 Vampir: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1082345 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.) [Easy]]
2016-09-19 17:59 - [ L e a h ] -: ok lets start
2016-09-19 17:59 Vampir: 00:01:933 (1933|1,2308|2) -  Ctrl + H
2016-09-19 18:00 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
2016-09-19 18:00 Vampir: 00:09:433 (9433|2,9808|1,10183|0,10370|2,10558|1) - 
2016-09-19 18:00 Vampir: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6130403
2016-09-19 18:00 Vampir: How about this?
2016-09-19 18:00 Vampir: I personally like.
2016-09-19 18:01 - [ L e a h ] -: hmm...
2016-09-19 18:01 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
2016-09-19 18:01 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
2016-09-19 18:03 Vampir: Be perfect
2016-09-19 18:03 Vampir: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1083211 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.) [Normal]]
2016-09-19 18:03 Vampir: Next
2016-09-19 18:03 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
2016-09-19 18:04 Vampir: 00:07:933 (7933|1,8308|0,8683|1) -  https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6130408
2016-09-19 18:04 Vampir: Was also really like this one here.
2016-09-19 18:04 - [ L e a h ] -: oh
2016-09-19 18:04 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
2016-09-19 18:06 Vampir: 01:21:245 (81245|3,81433|1) -  This note is vocal sound?
2016-09-19 18:06 - [ L e a h ] -: uh...no
2016-09-19 18:07 Vampir: OK :D My mistake.
2016-09-19 18:07 - [ L e a h ] -: xD
2016-09-19 18:08 Vampir: 01:25:558 (85558|3,85558|0) -  I don't know this part. 
2016-09-19 18:08 Vampir: I don't know, there seems to be a mistake.
2016-09-19 18:08 Vampir: May be my imagination.
2016-09-19 18:08 - [ L e a h ] -: bass sound
2016-09-19 18:09 Vampir: :D
2016-09-19 18:09 Vampir: My mod request is end
2016-09-19 18:09 - [ L e a h ] -: okay thx :D

Good luck!!

-SoraGami- wrote:

HS mod

19:18 - [ L e a h ] -: hi sora 0/
19:18 -SoraGami-: Hi~
19:19 - [ L e a h ] -: can u do hitsound mod?
19:19 -SoraGami-: right now?
19:19 - [ L e a h ] -: yes
19:19 - [ L e a h ] -: or up to u
19:19 -SoraGami-: umm.. oke
19:20 -SoraGami-: can you give me again your map
19:20 -SoraGami-: i'll redl
19:20 *- [ L e a h ] - is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1082345 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.)]
19:22 -SoraGami-: i will just look for hitsound consistency
19:22 -SoraGami-: ok 
19:22 *-SoraGami- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1082345 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.) [Easy]]
19:22 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
19:24 -SoraGami-: you can look at normal diff as reference
19:24 -SoraGami-: i suggest make the volume a bit more louder
19:24 -SoraGami-: around 50?
19:25 - [ L e a h ] -: hmm...
19:25 -SoraGami-: it's up to you
19:25 -SoraGami-: but it is too soft
19:25 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
19:25 -SoraGami-: 00:01:558 (1558|3) - W
19:26 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
19:26 -SoraGami-: 00:07:558 (7558|2) - W
19:26 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
19:27 -SoraGami-: 00:40:183 (40183|2) - W
19:28 -SoraGami-: 00:39:808 (39808|0,39808|1) - here i think it is okay if C is only one
19:29 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
19:29 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
19:30 -SoraGami-: 00:42:808 - same
19:30 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
19:31 -SoraGami-: 00:45:808 - same
19:31 -SoraGami-: 00:46:183 (46183|1) - W
19:31 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
19:31 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
19:32 -SoraGami-: 00:48:808 (48808|0) - W
19:34 -SoraGami-: 00:49:558 (49558|3,49558|0) - make it 1 each for F and C
19:34 - [ L e a h ] -: 00:48:808 (48808|0) -
19:34 - [ L e a h ] -: delete clap?
19:34 - [ L e a h ] -: or not?
19:34 -SoraGami-: w8
19:34 -SoraGami-: it should be W
19:34 -SoraGami-: not C
19:35 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
19:35 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
19:35 -SoraGami-: 00:49:558 (49558|0,49558|3) - W and F
19:35 -SoraGami-: but make 1 each
19:35 - [ L e a h ] -: okay
19:36 - [ L e a h ] -: what else?
19:36 -SoraGami-: 00:51:808 - remove 1 C
19:36 -SoraGami-: 00:53:308 - 1 C
19:37 -SoraGami-: 00:55:558 (55558|0) - W
19:38 - [ L e a h ] -: how about 00:55:933 (55933|3,56308|0,56683|2,57058|0,57433|2,57808|1,58183|2) - ?
19:38 - [ L e a h ] -: should add W?
19:38 -SoraGami-: yes
19:38 - [ L e a h ] -: ok fixed
19:38 -SoraGami-: 00:58:558 (58558|0,58558|1,58745|3,58745|2,59683|3,59683|2,59870|1,59870|0) - 1 C each
19:39 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
19:39 - [ L e a h ] -: 01:00:808 (60808|1,61183|2) -
19:39 -SoraGami-: 01:00:808 (60808|1,61183|2) - W
19:39 - [ L e a h ] -: check this pls
19:40 -SoraGami-: yah
19:40 - [ L e a h ] -: ok fixed
19:41 -SoraGami-: 01:01:558 (61558|0) - W not C
19:41 -SoraGami-: but remain the F
19:41 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
19:42 -SoraGami-: 01:02:683 (62683|2) - same
19:42 -SoraGami-: 01:05:683 (65683|0) - same
19:43 - [ L e a h ] -: 01:05:683 (65683|0,67558|1,68683|1,71683|2,73558|0,74683|1,76558|2,77683|1,80683|1,83683|2) -
19:43 - [ L e a h ] -: same all?
19:43 -SoraGami-: yes
19:43 -SoraGami-: 01:06:808 - remove 1 C
19:44 - [ L e a h ] -: how about 01:05:683 (65683|0,67558|1,68683|1,71683|2,73558|0,74683|1,76558|2,77683|1,80683|1,83683|2) -
19:44 - [ L e a h ] -: wait...
19:44 - [ L e a h ] -: 01:10:558 (70558|3,70558|2,79558|0,79558|2,82558|1,82558|2) -
19:44 - [ L e a h ] -: this
19:45 -SoraGami-: W and F
19:45 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
19:45 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
19:46 -SoraGami-: 01:12:245 (72245|3) - W
19:47 -SoraGami-: 01:17:120 (77120|1) - W
19:48 -SoraGami-: 01:18:245 (78245|1,78433|0) - W
19:48 - [ L e a h ] -: check this pls 01:25:558 -
19:48 -SoraGami-: 01:19:558 (79558|2) - W
19:49 -SoraGami-: it's fine i think
19:49 -SoraGami-: yah no hs
19:49 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed already
19:49 -SoraGami-: 01:23:683 (83683|2) - this too?
19:49 -SoraGami-: W F
19:50 - [ L e a h ] -: yah
19:50 -SoraGami-: update it
19:50 -SoraGami-: ill check it 1 more to be sure
19:51 - [ L e a h ] -: only easy?
19:51 -SoraGami-: normal later
19:51 -SoraGami-: done updating?
19:52 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
19:52 - [ L e a h ] -: updated
19:52 - [ L e a h ] -: yes
19:52 - [ L e a h ] -: i ll have a dinner
19:52 - [ L e a h ] -: i ll come back in 10 minutes
19:52 -SoraGami-: okay
19:52 -SoraGami-: ill eat too
19:57 -SoraGami-: 00:54:808 - remove 1 C
19:57 -SoraGami-: 01:07:558 (67558|3) - remove C
19:59 -SoraGami-: 01:13:558 (73558|0) - WF
20:00 -SoraGami-: 01:10:183 (70183|1) - W
20:05 -SoraGami-: ok that's all from easy
20:06 -SoraGami-: just pm me anytime after you eat
20:06 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
20:06 - [ L e a h ] -: okay
20:07 - [ L e a h ] -: i eat already
20:07 - [ L e a h ] -: -w-
20:07 -SoraGami-: wow so fast xD
20:07 - [ L e a h ] -: lel
20:08 -SoraGami-: do the same in normal
20:08 -SoraGami-: just copy the hs
20:08 - [ L e a h ] -: how?
20:09 -SoraGami-: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6131017
20:09 -SoraGami-: do the same on the other diff
20:09 - [ L e a h ] -: owo ok
20:09 -SoraGami-: pm me after you're done
20:10 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
20:16 - [ L e a h ] -: updated
20:16 -SoraGami-: ok w8
20:17 -SoraGami-: adjust the volume on normal
20:18 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
20:18 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
20:18 - [ L e a h ] -: what else?
20:18 -SoraGami-: w8 im rechecking
20:20 -SoraGami-: 01:10:183 (70183|1) - W
20:21 - [ L e a h ] -: 01:11:683 (71683|3) -
20:21 -SoraGami-: 01:11:683 (71683|3) - F
20:21 - [ L e a h ] -: owo i forgot
20:21 -SoraGami-: lol
20:21 -SoraGami-: 01:12:245 (72245|3) - 
20:21 -SoraGami-: W
20:22 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
20:22 -SoraGami-: 01:17:120 (77120|2) - W
20:22 - [ L e a h ] -: updated
20:22 - [ L e a h ] -: update all
20:23 -SoraGami-: 01:19:183 (79183|2) - this too?
20:23 -SoraGami-: oke we're done
20:23 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
20:23 -SoraGami-: should i post it?
20:24 - [ L e a h ] -: fine

no kds~

juankristal wrote:

As you requested by ingame chat.

Normal

00:01:558 (1558|0,1558|3,2683|0,2683|3) - This chords are in different pitches, I recommend to use different patterns for those. Maybe changing the second one to [13]

00:05:683 (5683|0) - If you did that maybe moving this one 1 spot to the right works better for pitch.

00:14:683 (14683|0,17683|2,20683|1) - I mean, I am not too sure about the other ones but I think this ones should be 1/1s, its not a big deal and it plays fine already but maybe it will add a bit more of the calm that the song is asking for.

00:39:058 (39058|2) - Should be in column 4 as it follows the same pitch of 00:37:558 (37558|3,38308|3) - in the piano

01:09:620 - I think you are missing a note here, 01:06:058 (66058|1,66245|3,66433|2,66620|1) - the same you did here.
01:12:058 - 01:12:620 - It is the same as mentioned previously. I would also suggest to add a note in here 01:12:995 - to make it a better transition in my opinion.

01:13:558 (73558|2) - There is no need to have both hitsounds in the same note, try to avoid that

01:15:620 - It seems like you are overall missing all of this ones, maybe it is just better to remove this one 01:06:620 (66620|1) - instead but I think it would be better if you just add in the ones I mentioned and in the ones that are following here.

That sounds about it, sorry if it is a bit too short/rushed but the map is quite fine already in my opinion. Good luck!

WolfyArmato- wrote:

hoi hoi \0/
let me leave my suggestions here
** NO KDS **

[Normal]
00:51:433 - http://puu.sh/riDD2/0467d21d1c.png แบบนี้ไหม เพราะที่ผ่านมาไม่มี jacks แบบนี้ มันจะดูแปลกๆนะ
00:53:308 - http://puu.sh/riDHw/be96a621e1.png เหตุผลเดียวกับ ^^
01:07:933 (67933|3) - ไป 3 มั้ยเพราะ 01:07:558 (67558|3,67938|3,68308|3,68683|3) - มัน jacks กันเยอะเกินแล้วห้องนี้ช่อง 3 มันดูว่างเกิน
01:09:058 - http://puu.sh/riDRP/3c64a16932.png แบบนี้มั้ย ตรงนี้จะได้ไม่ jacks 01:09:433 (69433|1,69808|1,70183|1,70558|1)
01:10:933 - http://puu.sh/riDY0/3be5c40ffd.PNG งี้มั้ย

[Easy]
00:42:433 (42433|1) - ลบออก เสียงไม่ได้ดังอะไร

LINE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wat!!!

nowsmart wrote:

|1|2|3|4|

[Normal]
00:22:558 (22558|3) - ย้ายไป 3 (เสียงเดียวกับ 00:23:683 (23683|2) - )
00:23:120 (23120|1) - ลบ
01:12:808 (72808|3,72808|2,72995|1,73183|3,73183|0,73370|1) - ใส่โน้ต 1/8 ได้ ลองแบบนี้ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6143693

แค่นี้แหละ ไม่รู้จะมอดไรละ 555

no kudos

Suzuko-P wrote:

From pm requested
Column 1|2|3|4

Normal

00:37:183 - เปลี่ยนเป็นLN ช่อง2ถึง 00:37:558 ดีกว่านะ เพราะเสียงเบสมันขึ้นพอดี เป็นโน้ตเดียวๆมันก็แปลกๆ fixed
00:59:120 (59120|0,59120|1,59308|2,59308|3,60245|3,60245|2,60433|1,60433|0) - เปลี่ยนเป็นโน้ตเดี่ยวเถอะ มันมีแต่เสียงกลองทอมเฉยๆอ่ะ fixed
01:00:058 ถึง 01:01:558 - มีเสียงfilterอยู่(เสียงลม)น่าจะทำLNซัก1ช่อง nope
01:03:808 (63808|0,64183|1) - เปลี่ยนเป็นLN จะได้เข้ากับเสียงเบสด้วย nope
01:06:808 (66808|2,67183|1) -^ nope
01:09:808 (69808|0,70183|2) - ^ nope
01:15:808 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6175952nope
01:18:433 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6175957 fixed

ปล.เพลงทำง่วงมาก zzz lol

Draftnell wrote:

here ~

[Easy]
00:31:183 - try this >>> http://puu.sh/rnjgz/c6914a074e.jpg fixed
01:03:245 (63245|3) - i didn't hear a drum in here...so delete ( if i was right lol ) you're wrong xD

[Normal]
in here 00:49:370 - just my opinion...this part i hear guitar 1/8 and it is a pity that not in the content, so if you agree my sugesti...just follow >> http://puu.sh/rnjKi/3e8376b7eb.jpg but if you didn't agree, just skip this lol :v fixed
01:01:370 (61370|2) - follow drum ? but it's nothing :v so delete :p i was not follow drum sound

GL ~

Verniy_Chan wrote:

owo owo

IRC

16:20 - [ L e a h ] -: hi verniy 0/
16:21 *- [ L e a h ] - is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1083211 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.)]
16:21 - [ L e a h ] -: mod pls
16:22 Verniy_Chan: ok, i'll do IRC mod
16:24 - [ L e a h ] -: okay
16:29 *Verniy_Chan is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1082345 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.)]
16:29 - [ L e a h ] -: pls wait for a minute
16:29 *Verniy_Chan is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1082345 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.) [Easy]]
16:31 Verniy_Chan: before mod your diff, please turn off widescreen support
16:31 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
16:31 Verniy_Chan: there's no SB in your map
16:31 Verniy_Chan: each diff
16:32 Verniy_Chan: are you ready?
16:32 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
16:32 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
16:32 - [ L e a h ] -: yes~~~~~~~
16:32 Verniy_Chan: wait.. i'll check your meta
16:33 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
16:34 Verniy_Chan: seem fine
16:36 Verniy_Chan: 00:47:683 (47683|3,47683|2) - there's a lot pattern like this
16:37 Verniy_Chan: 00:46:933 (46933|1) - move |1|
16:37 Verniy_Chan: 00:47:308 (47308|0) - move to 3
16:37 Verniy_Chan: 00:47:683 (47683|2) - move to 1
16:38 Verniy_Chan: to creative your pattern
16:38 - [ L e a h ] -: owo
16:38 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
16:39 Verniy_Chan: 00:56:495 (56495|1,56683|2) - Ctrl+G
16:39 Verniy_Chan: the reason same as above, don't forget check HS
16:40 Verniy_Chan: 01:01:558 (61558|0) - overlap HS
16:40 Verniy_Chan: move F to 01:01:558 (61558|3) - 
16:40 - [ L e a h ] -: oh
16:41 Verniy_Chan: 01:02:683 (62683|2) - same ^
16:41 - [ L e a h ] -: 01:05:683 (65683|0,65683|1) - this too?
16:41 Verniy_Chan: 01:05:683 (65683|0) - ^
16:41 Verniy_Chan: yes
16:41 Verniy_Chan: let me explain
16:42 Verniy_Chan: is okay to put HS like this if there only 1 note
16:42 Verniy_Chan: if 2, just move 1 HS to other note
16:42 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
16:43 Verniy_Chan: 01:07:558 (67558|1) - here too
16:43 Verniy_Chan: 01:08:683 (68683|1) - 
16:43 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed all
16:43 Verniy_Chan: owo
16:43 - [ L e a h ] -: :3
16:44 - [ L e a h ] -: next?
16:45 Verniy_Chan: wait.. i will deep check to kiai section
16:47 Verniy_Chan: really hard to find any problem, lel
16:48 - [ L e a h ] -: -w-
16:48 Verniy_Chan: it already great
16:48 Verniy_Chan: owo
16:48 - [ L e a h ] -: OwO
16:48 Verniy_Chan: next diff
16:48 *Verniy_Chan is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1083211 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV size ver.) [Normal]]
16:49 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
16:54 Verniy_Chan: 00:52:933 - missing note in here
16:54 Verniy_Chan: lel.. too long  to found it
16:54 Verniy_Chan: 00:54:433 - here too
16:55 Verniy_Chan: since you already mapped it on easy diff
16:57 - [ L e a h ] -: owo
16:57 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
16:57 Verniy_Chan: 01:00:808 (60808|0,60808|3,60995|1,60995|2,61183|3,61183|0) - there's no need to use W each note, just 1 note enough
16:57 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
16:58 Verniy_Chan: 01:01:183 - i don't think it fit as 2 note
16:58 Verniy_Chan: the pitch is really low than 01:00:808 (60808|3,60808|0,60995|2,60995|1) - 
16:58 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
16:58 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
16:58 Verniy_Chan: fixed?
16:59 Verniy_Chan: i mean, remove 1 note
16:59 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed = removed
16:59 Verniy_Chan: just 1 note remove..
17:00 Verniy_Chan: there still bass sound
17:00 - [ L e a h ] -: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6183888
17:00 Verniy_Chan: 01:03:620 (63620|1) - ghost note
17:00 - [ L e a h ] -: like this?
17:01 Verniy_Chan: nice
17:01 Verniy_Chan: i don't hear anything
17:01 - [ L e a h ] -: deleted
17:02 Verniy_Chan: 01:06:433 (66433|2,66808|2,67183|2) - avoid this anchor
17:02 Verniy_Chan: 01:07:183 (67183|1,67183|2) - move to left 1x
17:02 - [ L e a h ] -: oh
17:02 Verniy_Chan: or 01:06:808 (66808|2,67183|1) - move to left
17:03 - [ L e a h ] -: 01:07:183 (67183|1) - this too?
17:04 Verniy_Chan: i mean there's 3 note in 1 row
17:04 Verniy_Chan: decrease 2 note in 1 row
17:04 - [ L e a h ] -: oh
17:05 - [ L e a h ] -: this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6183903
17:05 Verniy_Chan: good
17:06 Verniy_Chan: 01:09:058 (69058|0) - ghost note + inconsistent with 01:03:058 - 
17:06 Verniy_Chan: 01:13:183 (73183|2) - add W
17:07 Verniy_Chan: 01:13:933 - you can add note in here
17:07 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
17:08 Verniy_Chan: 01:19:558 (79558|3) - overlap HS
17:08 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
17:11 Verniy_Chan: done
17:12 Verniy_Chan: so far this map already good
17:12 - [ L e a h ] -: owo
17:12 - [ L e a h ] -: thx :D
17:12 Verniy_Chan: you're welcome
17:12 Verniy_Chan: good luck for rank >w<)b

solid map
good luck for rank >w<)b