1. Easy - 4Key (1.45 stars, 260 notes)
2. Normal - 4Key (2 stars, 347 notes)

Status : Ranked

Bubbled by Kawawa
Qualified by Fresh Chicken
Disqualified by Feerum
Re-Bubbled by A v a l o n
Re-Qualified by Kuo Kyoka

List Difficulty
Easy by Me (Mods : 12)
(Notes : 100%) (Hitsound : 100%)

Normal by Me (Mods : 22)
(Notes : 100%) (Hitsound : 100%)

Special Thanks

WolfyArmato- for irc mods & recheck
SpectorDG for irc mods
Mage for mods
Bolgom for mods
Critical_Star for mods
Wonki for mods and 2 Stars
Interlude- for irc mods and star
EYA- for mods
-SoraGami- for mods & hitsound check
eyes for mods
Shana Lesus for mods
arcwinolivirus for hitsound files
Vampir for irc mods
erlinadewi- for star
juankristal for mods
nowsmart for mods
Suzuko-P for mods
Draftnell for mods
Verniy_Chan for irc mods
Kawawa for BN check
IamKwaN for metadata check
Fresh Chicken for BN check
SanadaYukimura for mods
A v a l o n for BN check

WolfyArmato- wrote:

noob irc mod

12:28 *- [ L e a h ] - is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1082345 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV Size Ver.) [Easy]]
12:28 - [ L e a h ] -: pattern chack plz
12:28 - [ L e a h ] -: *check
12:46 WolfyArmato-: 00:58:548 - 
12:47 WolfyArmato-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6112261
12:47 WolfyArmato-: try dis
12:48 WolfyArmato-: 01:25:360 - a
12:48 WolfyArmato-: 1/12
12:49 - [ L e a h ] -: how about Normal difff?
12:50 WolfyArmato-: 00:37:548 - 
12:50 WolfyArmato-: why not try to follow hats
12:50 WolfyArmato-: i think it's will be comfortable to play
12:50 WolfyArmato-: imo
12:50 WolfyArmato-: lol
12:50 WolfyArmato-: uwu
12:52 - [ L e a h ] -: i should delete LN?
12:52 WolfyArmato-: nope
12:52 WolfyArmato-: since it's hard
12:52 WolfyArmato-: have to hard
12:52 WolfyArmato-: keep LN
12:52 WolfyArmato-: uwu
12:52 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
12:52 - [ L e a h ] -: look at Normal pls
12:52 WolfyArmato-: 01:25:173 - 
12:53 WolfyArmato-: 1/4 stair from right
12:53 - [ L e a h ] -: like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6112284
12:54 WolfyArmato-: yes
12:55 WolfyArmato-: 00:57:798 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6112293
12:55 WolfyArmato-: how zabout this
12:55 WolfyArmato-: 01:01:548 (61548|3) - 
12:56 WolfyArmato-: reference to hard diff
12:56 - [ L e a h ] -: hmm....
12:56 WolfyArmato-: 01:02:298 -  ln should end here
12:56 WolfyArmato-: but it up to u
12:56 WolfyArmato-: since it's your map
12:56 WolfyArmato-: uwu
12:57 *WolfyArmato- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1082345 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV Size Ver.) [Easy]]
12:57 WolfyArmato-: i think piano at the start
12:57 WolfyArmato-: have the wrong pitch
12:57 WolfyArmato-: i mean
12:57 WolfyArmato-: pap
12:57 - [ L e a h ] -: = =
12:58 WolfyArmato-: 00:07:548 (7548|1,8298|1) - 
12:58 WolfyArmato-: i dunno
12:58 WolfyArmato-: but
12:58 WolfyArmato-: should move
12:58 WolfyArmato-: =w=
12:58 WolfyArmato-: uwu
12:58 WolfyArmato-: eh
12:58 WolfyArmato-: feel free to reject my opinion nya
12:58 WolfyArmato-: 5555555555555
12:59 - [ L e a h ] -: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6112303
12:59 - [ L e a h ] -: moved
12:59 WolfyArmato-: ja
12:59 WolfyArmato-: so
12:59 WolfyArmato-: that's all i can find
12:59 WolfyArmato-: nya
12:59 WolfyArmato-: uwu
12:59 - [ L e a h ] -: ok thx wolfy-nyan >w<

SpectorDG wrote:

IRC

17:41 - [ L e a h ] -: uh...can u check my beatmap?
17:41 SpectorDG: hmm
17:41 SpectorDG: which one
17:41 SpectorDG: i can irc
17:41 *- [ L e a h ] - is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1083211 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV Size) [Hard]]
17:42 SpectorDG: TV Size
17:43 - [ L e a h ] -: -w-
17:43 *SpectorDG is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1083211 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV Size) [Hard]] <osu!mania> |4K|
17:45 *SpectorDG is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1083211 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV Size) [Hard]]
17:46 SpectorDG: wrong offset
17:46 SpectorDG: 1 ms dly
17:46 SpectorDG: i can hear that
17:46 SpectorDG: change it 1558
17:46 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
17:47 SpectorDG: 00:10:558 - very awkard to catch
17:48 SpectorDG: 00:10:558 (10558|2) - Move to 2
17:48 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
17:48 SpectorDG: 80 BPM + 1/8 stream
17:48 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
17:49 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/re6Kr/259bca655b.jpg
17:49 SpectorDG: Normal have 2 notes here?
17:50 - [ L e a h ] -: oh
17:50 SpectorDG: 00:26:308 - same as here
17:50 SpectorDG: 00:27:808 - ^
17:51 SpectorDG: you following something/
17:51 SpectorDG: ?
17:52 SpectorDG: 00:30:058 (30058|3,30245|2,30433|3) - 3 2 3 ? you should rearrange 00:30:245 (30245|2,30433|3) - this pattern from 2 3
17:52 - [ L e a h ] -: just follow piano sound at 00:10:933 -
17:52 SpectorDG: 00:30:245 (30245|2,30433|3) - move to 2 3
17:53 - [ L e a h ] -: like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6112969
17:54 SpectorDG: no because [http://puu.sh/re6Vr/64c1ce5713.jpg here] 
17:54 SpectorDG: 2 4 2 4
17:55 SpectorDG: rearrange 2 3 is better
17:55 - [ L e a h ] -: http://puu.sh/re6Xt/80ace5b473.png
17:56 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/re6YN/1974eadcf8.png i think it's enough
17:57 - [ L e a h ] -: นา
17:57 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
17:57 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
17:58 SpectorDG: 00:37:558 - you mapped 4 3 4 3 ?
17:58 SpectorDG: 00:40:558 - i saw same part here
17:59 SpectorDG: but it's difference on first
17:59 - [ L e a h ] -: owo
17:59 SpectorDG: 00:46:183 (46183|1) - it's should be jack ?
18:00 SpectorDG: 00:39:808 - same as
18:00 SpectorDG: 00:42:808 - ^
18:00 - [ L e a h ] -: rearranged
18:00 - [ L e a h ] -: -w-
18:07 SpectorDG: 01:09:245 (69245|3) - Move to 1
18:07 SpectorDG:  01:13:183 (73183|1,73558|0) - and swap this ?
18:08 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
18:08 SpectorDG: that all
18:08 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
18:08 - [ L e a h ] -: thx >w<
18:08 SpectorDG: 00:37:933 (37933|2,38308|3,38683|2,39058|3) - anway
18:08 SpectorDG: you rearranged this ?
18:08 SpectorDG: 00:44:683 (44683|1,45058|0) - move to 3 2
18:09 SpectorDG: 00:46:183 (46183|1) - 1
18:09 SpectorDG: 00:47:683 - and you sure ? 1 note is enough ?
18:10 - [ L e a h ] -: hmm....
18:10 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/re7s8/2b5d71fdfb.png
18:11 SpectorDG: 00:47:683 - from
18:12 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
18:13 SpectorDG: okay 
18:13 SpectorDG: done
18:13 - [ L e a h ] -: thx :D

goodluck!

Mage wrote:

1|2|3|4

Easy

00:06:808 - add note Fixed

00:09:433 - add note Fixed

Normal

00:02:683 - add note to 4 No,Thanks


00:48:433 - add note to 3 No,Thanks


00:54:058 (54058|0) - move to 3 Fixed

01:25:183 (85183|3) - remove Fixed

Hard

00:31:745 - i hear sound, so add note No,Thanks


00:34:933 - ^ No,Thanks


00:37:370 - ^ No,Thanks


00:47:120 - ^ No,Thanks


00:52:933 - ^ No,Thanks


00:53:870 - 00:54:245 - 01:02:495 - 01:04:933 - 01:05:495 - 01:06:058 - and etc. ^ No,Thanks


01:01:558 - add note to 4 No,Thanks


01:13:558 - add note to 3 No,Thanks

01:22:558 - add note to 3 Fixed

Bolgom wrote:

hi... this mod by my modding queue~ :3

Hard Now its Normal

00:25:558 - add one...? strong piano sound here.. maybe not let me think

00:34:558 (34558|3) - finish here..? 00:35:120 - its finish at 00:34:558-

00:46:183 (46183|0,46558|1,46933|0) - ctrl + h..? huh? no, thx

Normal Now its Easy

00:42:433 - add one for drum..? Fixed

00:54:058 - add one..? no, thx

good map <3 i love this song!!

• 
  00:01:183 (1183|1,1370|2,1558|3) - should add W
  00:05:308 - remove a note? yes is a high pitch piano but for easy diff u did not map double for these high pitch piano, example: 00:01:558 - 00:05:683 -
  00:07:558 (7558|3) - why not make into LN? it just the same like 00:08:683 (8683|3) - <actually u should snap this at 00:09:808 - the long sound stopped here
  00:10:933 - like before, i think single note is fine
  00:14:683 (14683|1,14683|3) - 2 W here, u should remove 1, a W hitsound here is enough to empyhasize the piano note
  00:16:558 (16558|2,16558|3,17683|1,17683|0) - 00:19:558 (19558|0,19558|3,20683|0,20683|1) - 00:22:558 (22558|2,22558|0,23120|3,23120|0,23683|2,23683|1) - 00:25:558 (25558|0,25558|2) - same case ^ remove a W , u may want to recheck your hitsound again
  00:26:308 (26308|1,26308|0) - make it single? doesn't seems worth to use double note here since the sound is just the same like these single note , u should double here 00:26:683 - instead
  00:28:558 (28558|2,28558|1) - like before ^ and so on with those double W hitsound
  00:38:683 (38683|3) - the LN should end at 00:39:433 -
  00:41:683 (41683|0) - the LN should end at 00:42:433 - but if u are following the louder bass long sound, then u should had start at 00:40:558 - just like in your normal diff
  then 00:42:433 - add a note for kick here could be nice
  00:46:558 (46558|0) - how about move to 4 and 00:46:933 (46933|1,47308|2) - move to the left by 1 and 00:47:683 (47683|0) - move to 3? just a pattern layering suggestion
  00:48:433 - add a note for kick?
  00:58:558 (58558|2,58745|1,59683|1,59870|2) - CTRL+H?
  01:02:683 (62683|0) - i think end this at 01:03:808 - better
  01:04:558 - here should be something similiar like 01:01:558 (61558|3,62120|2,62308|1) - , u can use this pattern again for consistency
  01:07:558 (67558|3) - this should stop at 01:08:308 - is just something like 01:01:558 (61558|3) -
  01:13:558 (73558|3) - same thing here ^, it should stop at 01:14:308 -
  01:14:683 (74683|0) - better end at 01:15:808 -
  01:16:558 (76558|3) - this could be LN like 01:01:558 (61558|3) -
  
  pretty solid map~ but u should check your pattern consistency for the same part, some sound which are similiar but diffferent LN length

• 
  00:02:308 (2308|2,2308|3) - this should be single since is not high pitch piano sound like 00:02:683 (2683|0,2683|1) -
  00:10:370 (10370|2,10464|3) - how about CTRL+G to variate the pattern here?
  Some pitch suggestion~ > 00:11:308 (11308|1) - move to 3 and 00:11:683 (11683|3) - move to 2 and 00:11:683 (11683|2) - move to 4
  00:25:558 - u can use double note here too since the piano sound are louder
  00:34:933 - add a note at 1?
  00:38:683 (38683|2,39058|3) - could move to the left by 1 to variate the pattern here
  01:07:558 - can add another note here for cymbal
  01:08:495 - there is an obvious kick sound here probarly u shouldn't want to miss it
  01:09:058 - 01:15:058 - 01:18:058 - 01:21:058 - add a note? since u follow this sound too like 01:09:245 (69245|0) -
  01:10:558 - 01:16:558 - 01:19:558 - 01:22:558 - 01:23:683 - like before u can add another note here for cymbal
  01:13:183 - 01:13:370 - u missed the kick note sound, since this is the hardest diff u should try to follow the kick sound too
  01:16:933 - this sound is pretty obvious here i would highly suggest to add them
  
  nice~ but there are much missing note where u can map them here!

Critical_Star wrote:

nyahalo Leah-san~
mod as requested
column
1 2 3 4

Easy

• 
  00:01:183 (1183|1,1370|2,1558|3) - should add W
  00:05:308 - remove a note? yes is a high pitch piano but for easy diff u did not map double for these high pitch piano, example: 00:01:558 - 00:05:683 -
  00:07:558 (7558|3) - why not make into LN? it just the same like 00:08:683 (8683|3) - <actually u should snap this at 00:09:808 - the long sound stopped here
  00:10:933 - like before, i think single note is fine
  00:14:683 (14683|1,14683|3) - 2 W here, u should remove 1, a W hitsound here is enough to empyhasize the piano note
  00:16:558 (16558|2,16558|3,17683|1,17683|0) - 00:19:558 (19558|0,19558|3,20683|0,20683|1) - 00:22:558 (22558|2,22558|0,23120|3,23120|0,23683|2,23683|1) - 00:25:558 (25558|0,25558|2) - same case ^ remove a W , u may want to recheck your hitsound again
  00:26:308 (26308|1,26308|0) - make it single? doesn't seems worth to use double note here since the sound is just the same like these single note , u should double here 00:26:683 - instead
  00:28:558 (28558|2,28558|1) - like before ^ and so on with those double W hitsound
  00:38:683 (38683|3) - the LN should end at 00:39:433 -
  00:41:683 (41683|0) - the LN should end at 00:42:433 - but if u are following the louder bass long sound, then u should had start at 00:40:558 - just like in your normal diff
  then 00:42:433 - add a note for kick here could be nice
  00:46:558 (46558|0) - how about move to 4 and 00:46:933 (46933|1,47308|2) - move to the left by 1 and 00:47:683 (47683|0) - move to 3? just a pattern layering suggestion
  00:48:433 - add a note for kick?
  00:58:558 (58558|2,58745|1,59683|1,59870|2) - CTRL+H?
  01:02:683 (62683|0) - i think end this at 01:03:808 - better
  01:04:558 - here should be something similiar like 01:01:558 (61558|3,62120|2,62308|1) - , u can use this pattern again for consistency
  01:07:558 (67558|3) - this should stop at 01:08:308 - is just something like 01:01:558 (61558|3) -
  01:13:558 (73558|3) - same thing here ^, it should stop at 01:14:308 -
  01:14:683 (74683|0) - better end at 01:15:808 -
  01:16:558 (76558|3) - this could be LN like 01:01:558 (61558|3) -
  
  pretty solid map~ but u should check your pattern consistency for the same part, some sound which are similiar but diffferent LN length

Normal

• 
  00:02:308 (2308|2,2308|3) - this should be single since is not high pitch piano sound like 00:02:683 (2683|0,2683|1) -
  00:10:370 (10370|2,10464|3) - how about CTRL+G to variate the pattern here?
  Some pitch suggestion~ > 00:11:308 (11308|1) - move to 3 and 00:11:683 (11683|3) - move to 2 and 00:11:683 (11683|2) - move to 4
  00:25:558 - u can use double note here too since the piano sound are louder
  00:34:933 - add a note at 1?
  00:38:683 (38683|2,39058|3) - could move to the left by 1 to variate the pattern here
  01:07:558 - can add another note here for cymbal
  01:08:495 - there is an obvious kick sound here probarly u shouldn't want to miss it
  01:09:058 - 01:15:058 - 01:18:058 - 01:21:058 - add a note? since u follow this sound too like 01:09:245 (69245|0) -
  01:10:558 - 01:16:558 - 01:19:558 - 01:22:558 - 01:23:683 - like before u can add another note here for cymbal
  01:13:183 - 01:13:370 - u missed the kick note sound, since this is the hardest diff u should try to follow the kick sound too
  01:16:933 - this sound is pretty obvious here i would highly suggest to add them
  
  nice~ but there are much missing note where u can map them here!

Good Luck~ hope these will help

1. Hitsound 30% is good to listen
2. BG size pls change 1366x768 or 1024x768

Wonki wrote:

hii :3

mod req

1. Hitsound 30% is good to listen fixed
2. BG size pls change 1366x768 or 1024x768 i am finding a new bg....

Easy

00:25:558 - section changed part 2note is fine fixed

00:37:558 - also 2note fine fixed

00:58:745 - 2note same sound 00:58:558 (58558|0,58558|1) - fixed

00:59:870 - same fixed

01:01:558 - should note here like 01:02:683 (62683|2) - fixed

01:25:370 (85370|2) - Awkward delete pls :3 fixed

01:25:558 (85558|0) - move 4 and 01:25:558 (85558|1) - 1! hand balance :3 fixed

Normal

00:24:433 (24433|3) - should be LN same piano sound like 00:23:683 (23683|0,24808|1) - fixed

00:30:245 - ghost note delete fixed

00:31:745 - have sound :3 added

00:35:495 - also have sound so 00:35:308 (35308|1,35308|0) - delete 1of these and add ! http://puu.sh/resvw/63b6c9bcb5.jpg What Sound?

00:37:183 (37183|1) - delete I think follow the 00:36:058 (36058|3,36433|0,36620|3,36808|1,36995|3) - this sound so recommendhttp://puu.sh/resRi/3ecda7aa87.jpg fixed

okii done ~ go rank!

Interlude- wrote:

Hello!

IRC modding

2016-09-18 14:43 - [ L e a h ] -: hi Lude- can u check my beatmap?
2016-09-18 14:44 Interlude-: hello
2016-09-18 14:44 - [ L e a h ] -: ACTION is away: watching W Two Worlds
2016-09-18 14:45 - [ L e a h ] -: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1082345 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV Size) [Easy]]
2016-09-18 14:45 - [ L e a h ] -: check pls
2016-09-18 14:45 Interlude-: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1083211 GARNiDELiA - MIRAI (TV Size) [Normal]] <osu!mania> |4K|
2016-09-18 14:47 - [ L e a h ] -: -3-
2016-09-18 14:47 Interlude-: which thing do you want me to check?
2016-09-18 14:48 - [ L e a h ] -: pattern
2016-09-18 14:48 Interlude-: 00:05:308 - delete one
2016-09-18 14:48 Interlude-: doesn't need double there
2016-09-18 14:49 Interlude-: 00:37:183 - you could delete notes and add a LN for the bass sound
2016-09-18 14:49 Interlude-: it's your choice, though
2016-09-18 14:49 Interlude-: its nicely patterned
2016-09-18 14:50 - [ L e a h ] -: 00:37:183 - i ll reject this -w-
2016-09-18 14:50 Interlude-: k
2016-09-18 14:50 Interlude-: are you planning to make hard too?
2016-09-18 14:50 - [ L e a h ] -: i dont think i can make it
2016-09-18 14:50 Interlude-: 01:01:558 - add note for crash?
2016-09-18 14:51 Interlude-: you can still make it harder
2016-09-18 14:51 - [ L e a h ] -: this is my hardest i can make
2016-09-18 14:51 Interlude-: 01:05:683 - add note for crach
2016-09-18 14:51 Interlude-: crash*
2016-09-18 14:51 - [ L e a h ] -: ok
2016-09-18 14:51 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed
2016-09-18 14:51 Interlude-: 01:08:683 - maybe here too?
2016-09-18 14:51 Interlude-: 01:11:683 - same, at col 4
2016-09-18 14:52 Interlude-: 01:14:683 - 01:17:683 - same!
2016-09-18 14:52 Interlude-: wow nice song
2016-09-18 14:53 - [ L e a h ] -: fixed owo
2016-09-18 14:53 Interlude-: i'd like to make hard diff, but i think it'll be fine
2016-09-18 14:53 Interlude-: with 2 diff
2016-09-18 14:53 Interlude-: good luck on ranking!
2016-09-18 14:53 - [ L e a h ] -: oh
2016-09-18 14:53 - [ L e a h ] -: thx >w<
2016-09-18 14:56 - [ L e a h ] -: u can post in my forum if u need kudosu -w-
2016-09-18 14:56 Interlude-: oh
2016-09-18 14:56 Interlude-: ok

Good luck~!

EYA- wrote:

PM request

Hi there! In this mod Ill focus on ur patterns and handbalance.
1 | 2 | 3 | 4

Normal

00:04:933 (4933|2) - to col 4

00:05:308 (5308|3) - col 3

00:05:683 (5683|2) - col 4

00:05:683 (5683|1) - col 2

00:19:558 (19558|0) - col 2

00:25:933 (25933|3) - i think here we can move dat note to 3 col to make

00:58:558 (58558|3,58558|2,58558|0,58745|3,58745|0,58745|2,59683|1,59683|3,59683|0,59870|3,59870|1,59870|0) - using 3 notes is ban idea for normal diff i recomend u to make them doubles so if u agreed delete dat notes 00:58:558 (58558|3,58745|3) - 00:59:683 (59683|3,59870|3) -

01:03:620 - here a sound

01:04:933 - and here

01:06:058 - ^

01:06:620 - ^

01:07:933 - ^

okay here is many sounds lost, if u consider this listen this part on 25% and fix it

01:23:683 (83683|2) - to col 2

01:11:683 (71683|1) - col 3

01:17:683 (77683|3,78058|2,78433|3,78808|2) - reverse it

oh i found it! 01:16:933 (76933|3) - here u use note on sound in the middle of ln, but in others Ln u ignored them

-SoraGami- wrote:

hi leah~
i will just take a look and will point out some suggestions

Column Format:
4K = |1|2|3|4|

[Normal]

- you might want to follow the pitch here 00:01:933 (1933|1,2308|2,2683|1) it can add some feels since the song is slow, try moving it to 3,2,4 and then from here 00:04:933 (4933|3,5308|2,5683|1,5683|3) you can move it to 3,4,13 and then the last 00:06:433 (6433|0) you can move it to 2 to sort out balance

- 00:25:558 (25558|2,25933|2) - i think there's no sound that can represent it to jack, try moving 00:25:933 (25933|2,26308|0) to 1,2

- this LN 00:34:558 (34558|3) should technically end at 00:35:120 and the doubles should be in the blue line also since you follow mainly the piano synth like the one you did here 00:23:120 im suggesting like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6122917

- 00:40:558 (40558|3) - move to 3, i think it will be good if you jack it with 00:40:183 (40183|2) since they are same sound which can make the feels more deeper

- 00:46:183 (46183|0) - move to 2 to jack it with 00:46:558 (46558|1) like the reason i said above

- 00:53:308 (53308|2,53683|1) - ctrl + h, to vary the patterns between 00:53:308 and 00:54:058 and i think it will be good if you jack it with 00:54:058 (54058|2)

- 00:50:308 - try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6122984 to vary also the doubles

- 01:02:495 - add note here, it will be good for the flow and there is a sound, rearrange the next note so it will not result to a jack

- 01:05:495 - ^

- 01:07:183 - add note, kick sound and it will be good for some emphasis for the patterns

- 01:10:183 - add also

- 01:11:495 - ^

- 01:14:683 (74683|1) - move to 3, it feels off if you pair it with 01:14:308 (74308|1,74308|3)

- 01:14:683 (74683|2) - add also, you can move the LN cuz of the column limit, something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6123153

- 01:17:683 (77683|1) and 01:19:558 (79558|1) dont have the same pitch so maybe you can move it to another column this one 01:19:558 so you can properly add note here 01:20:495 and also there has a cymbals here 01:20:683 so it should be triple, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6123180

- 01:23:495 - add note, and also you might want to move this LN 01:23:683 (83683|0) to other column because it has different pitch with 01:22:558 (82558|0)

really nice diff =w=)b

nice song
Goodluck hope this helps~