MadHypnofrog wrote:
m4m thing
general
the correct artist is "Yall feat. Gabriela Richardson" Yes. That's an error when I writed the name. Fixed now
easy
00:08:477 (2,3) - this blanket can be improved
00:20:665 (3,1) - fix this stack, 00:22:540 (1) - should be at 276 132
The editor don't want it. When I try to move a bit, the slider goes too far & when I try to approach the slider, it move it the actual place of the slider.
00:25:352 (3) - I'd remove the repeat and put a circle at 00:25:352 (3) - so it'd be clickable
I like my pattern
00:28:633 (2,3) - blanket
00:38:477 (2) - I'd move this a bit upwards to create a smoother flow (you'll have to readjust the other objects as well)
That will change pretty nothing and it can create placing problems, so... No.
00:40:821 (4) - same as 00:25:352 (3) -, I'd split those into two circles
00:45:040 - why didn't you map this?
Because I followed the lyrics
00:53:946 (3,4) - blanket
My blanket is good
01:00:040 (2) - I'd move this one to the left a bit
Why ?
01:03:321 (5) - 228 136 to fix the stack
It's good like it is
01:13:165 (3) - I'd curve this one to the left, Ctrl-H it and move to the same place
Why ?
01:15:040 (1) - 340 300
01:24:415 (3,4) - idk something like this should sound nice
My pattern also sound nice
normal
00:15:040 (1) - move this one to 242 223 to fix the stack; you'll have to readjust (6) and (2) a bit
00:15:977 (2) - I know that (3) is blanketing it, but you can try to have (1) blanket it as well
3 & 1 Are blanketting 2
00:17:852 (4,2) - a meh overlap. I'd Ctrl-H 00:19:727 (2) - and everything after it
I want this overlap
00:23:243 (1) - I'd add a repeat to this one and remove NC
applies to this whole section: those 1/1 sliders ending on big white ticks are meh, I would strongly suggest turning them into two circles. also, the second one which lays on this big white tick would need NCing instead of NCs when the lyrics start (e.g. 00:26:993 (1) - , 00:30:977 (1) - etc)
If I made that like that, that's because the Lyrics are more hearable than the ryhthm
00:27:227 (2) - why, this one feels completely out of place
00:33:790 (4) - idk I'd curve it like that
00:44:571 (5,1,2) - meh overlaps, try to space them somehow
00:53:477 (3) - big white tick stuff
big white tick stuff ^
00:55:352 (1) - ^ ^
01:00:040 (1,4) - I'd stack those
Nah, I want to keep my triangle & my good linear flow.
01:03:790 (1,4) - ^
01:11:290 (1,2,3,4,5) - mind rotating this whole pattern a bit so that (2) won't overlap with 01:10:352 (3) - ?
Changed but not like you said01:13:165 (6) - also I'd move this a bit down for teh flow
01:29:102 (1) - AFAIK this is unrankable, 1/1 gap between the spinner and the next object is not allowed. ending the spinner at 01:28:165 - should work
hard
OD6
AR7
00:14:336 (4) - I'd replace it with a circle
Don't need to do it. And a slider fits better
00:20:196 (2) - stack this with 00:18:321 (4) -
00:25:352 (2) - this one seems a bit asymmetrical
00:37:540 (1) - no stack plz
00:37:540 (1,2) - this gap feels unnatural, mind mapping it? I'd do something like this
Nah. There isn't really important beats and I don't like to map it
00:39:180 (5) - big white tick stuff Read again your big white tick stuff, it speaks about NCs principally, this is an emphasis problem, that I will not fix now because that don't create NC problem here
00:41:290 (1,2) - same as above, though removing one repeat from (1) and putting an 1/2 slider would work there
00:43:165 (6) - this should be more emphasized, it's both a strong beat and a new line in vocals
In what it is a new line ? o.o (/me don't understand)
00:46:915 (6) - ^
Oh I understand now, here it is a new line but before that was (7) the new line. But I can't emphasize more this.
00:48:790 (1,2) - gap thing
00:49:727 (2,3,4,5,6) - first of all, why do you use the same DS for all the objects in there when you were using different DSes before? also, 6 needs more spacing LOL
1) About the same DS here, that's because it's an harder & different part than before because you haven't 1 or 2 second to replace your cursor etc.. And the player need a consistent moment.
2) 6 don't need more spacing, it's good now & I really like that part
00:55:821 (6) - y u no 1/2 slider
I like like that (Aha like like lol)
01:01:446 (4) - are those extended sliders necessary? making those 1/2 sounds much better for me, also it'll be easier to play - 01:02:032 (1,2,3) - is hella hard for a 2.6* map
I like my extented sliders. And 1/2 don't really fits with the rythm. And I used hard patterns for a hard diff. Idk where is the problem xD
01:24:180 (4) - 196 244
I can't do it the editor don't want ;w;
good luck!
Thanks !