m4m thing
general
the correct artist is "Yall feat. Gabriela Richardson"
easy
00:08:477 (2,3) - this blanket can be improved
00:20:665 (3,1) - fix this stack, 00:22:540 (1) - should be at 276 132
00:25:352 (3) - I'd remove the repeat and put a circle at 00:25:352 (3) - so it'd be clickable
00:28:633 (2,3) - blanket
00:38:477 (2) - I'd move this a bit upwards to create a smoother flow (you'll have to readjust the other objects as well)
00:40:821 (4) - same as 00:25:352 (3) -, I'd split those into two circles
00:45:040 - why didn't you map this?
00:53:946 (3,4) - blanket
01:00:040 (2) - I'd move this one to the left a bit
01:03:321 (5) - 228 136 to fix the stack
01:13:165 (3) - I'd curve this one to the left, Ctrl-H it and move to the same place
01:15:040 (1) - 340 300
01:24:415 (3,4) - idk something like this should sound nice
normal
00:15:040 (1) - move this one to 242 223 to fix the stack; you'll have to readjust (6) and (2) a bit
00:15:977 (2) - I know that (3) is blanketing it, but you can try to have (1) blanket it as well
00:17:852 (4,2) - a meh overlap. I'd Ctrl-H 00:19:727 (2) - and everything after it
00:23:243 (1) - I'd add a repeat to this one and remove NC
applies to this whole section: those 1/1 sliders ending on big white ticks are meh, I would strongly suggest turning them into two circles. also, the second one which lays on this big white tick would need NCing instead of NCs when the lyrics start (e.g. 00:26:993 (1) - , 00:30:977 (1) - etc)
00:27:227 (2) - why, this one feels completely out of place
00:33:790 (4) - idk I'd curve it like that
00:44:571 (5,1,2) - meh overlaps, try to space them somehow
00:53:477 (3) - big white tick stuff
00:55:352 (1) - ^
01:00:040 (1,4) - I'd stack those
01:03:790 (1,4) - ^
01:11:290 (1,2,3,4,5) - mind rotating this whole pattern a bit so that (2) won't overlap with 01:10:352 (3) - ?
01:13:165 (6) - also I'd move this a bit down for teh flow
01:29:102 (1) - AFAIK this is unrankable, 1/1 gap between the spinner and the next object is not allowed. ending the spinner at 01:28:165 - should work
hard
OD6
AR7
00:14:336 (4) - I'd replace it with a circle
00:20:196 (2) - stack this with 00:18:321 (4) -
00:25:352 (2) - this one seems a bit asymmetrical
00:37:540 (1) - no stack plz
00:37:540 (1,2) - this gap feels unnatural, mind mapping it? I'd do something like this
00:39:180 (5) - big white tick stuff
00:41:290 (1,2) - same as above, though removing one repeat from (1) and putting an 1/2 slider would work there
00:43:165 (6) - this should be more emphasized, it's both a strong beat and a new line in vocals
00:46:915 (6) - ^
00:48:790 (1,2) - gap thing
00:49:727 (2,3,4,5,6) - first of all, why do you use the same DS for all the objects in there when you were using different DSes before? also, 6 needs more spacing LOL
00:55:821 (6) - y u no 1/2 slider
01:01:446 (4) - are those extended sliders necessary? making those 1/2 sounds much better for me, also it'll be easier to play - 01:02:032 (1,2,3) - is hella hard for a 2.6* map
01:24:180 (4) - 196 244
farewell
OD7
AR8
00:29:102 (3,4) - this should work better, if you do this, remove NC from 00:30:977 (1) -
00:31:915 (4) - NC
00:36:133 (2,3) - space those a bit more
00:37:540 (7) - NC
00:38:477 (1) - remove NC
00:39:415 (3) - NC
00:41:290 (6) - NC
I believe Curi also mentioned all this NC stuff in their mod, my opinion is the same so I won't point it out anymore
00:42:696 (2,3) - blanket
00:47:852 (7) - 128 152
00:48:321 (9) - I'd reduce it to 1/2
01:01:680 (4,1) - (1) needs bigger spacing
01:03:321 (8) - tone this one down a bit, I'd recommend making the DS between 6-7 and 7-8 the same and then increase the 8-1 one
%insert stuff about NC needing bigger spacing here%
01:13:047 (8) - why, there's no audible sound in there
01:16:915 (5,6,7,8) - woah. spaced streams in a 3.7* map? please don't, tone it down so that they'll at least touch each other
01:18:672 (4) - ^
01:20:665 (1,2,3,4) - pls
good luck!
general
the correct artist is "Yall feat. Gabriela Richardson"
easy
00:08:477 (2,3) - this blanket can be improved
00:20:665 (3,1) - fix this stack, 00:22:540 (1) - should be at 276 132
00:25:352 (3) - I'd remove the repeat and put a circle at 00:25:352 (3) - so it'd be clickable
00:28:633 (2,3) - blanket
00:38:477 (2) - I'd move this a bit upwards to create a smoother flow (you'll have to readjust the other objects as well)
00:40:821 (4) - same as 00:25:352 (3) -, I'd split those into two circles
00:45:040 - why didn't you map this?
00:53:946 (3,4) - blanket
01:00:040 (2) - I'd move this one to the left a bit
01:03:321 (5) - 228 136 to fix the stack
01:13:165 (3) - I'd curve this one to the left, Ctrl-H it and move to the same place
01:15:040 (1) - 340 300
01:24:415 (3,4) - idk something like this should sound nice
normal
00:15:040 (1) - move this one to 242 223 to fix the stack; you'll have to readjust (6) and (2) a bit
00:15:977 (2) - I know that (3) is blanketing it, but you can try to have (1) blanket it as well
00:17:852 (4,2) - a meh overlap. I'd Ctrl-H 00:19:727 (2) - and everything after it
00:23:243 (1) - I'd add a repeat to this one and remove NC
applies to this whole section: those 1/1 sliders ending on big white ticks are meh, I would strongly suggest turning them into two circles. also, the second one which lays on this big white tick would need NCing instead of NCs when the lyrics start (e.g. 00:26:993 (1) - , 00:30:977 (1) - etc)
00:27:227 (2) - why, this one feels completely out of place
00:33:790 (4) - idk I'd curve it like that
00:44:571 (5,1,2) - meh overlaps, try to space them somehow
00:53:477 (3) - big white tick stuff
00:55:352 (1) - ^
01:00:040 (1,4) - I'd stack those
01:03:790 (1,4) - ^
01:11:290 (1,2,3,4,5) - mind rotating this whole pattern a bit so that (2) won't overlap with 01:10:352 (3) - ?
01:13:165 (6) - also I'd move this a bit down for teh flow
01:29:102 (1) - AFAIK this is unrankable, 1/1 gap between the spinner and the next object is not allowed. ending the spinner at 01:28:165 - should work
hard
OD6
AR7
00:14:336 (4) - I'd replace it with a circle
00:20:196 (2) - stack this with 00:18:321 (4) -
00:25:352 (2) - this one seems a bit asymmetrical
00:37:540 (1) - no stack plz
00:37:540 (1,2) - this gap feels unnatural, mind mapping it? I'd do something like this
00:39:180 (5) - big white tick stuff
00:41:290 (1,2) - same as above, though removing one repeat from (1) and putting an 1/2 slider would work there
00:43:165 (6) - this should be more emphasized, it's both a strong beat and a new line in vocals
00:46:915 (6) - ^
00:48:790 (1,2) - gap thing
00:49:727 (2,3,4,5,6) - first of all, why do you use the same DS for all the objects in there when you were using different DSes before? also, 6 needs more spacing LOL
00:55:821 (6) - y u no 1/2 slider
01:01:446 (4) - are those extended sliders necessary? making those 1/2 sounds much better for me, also it'll be easier to play - 01:02:032 (1,2,3) - is hella hard for a 2.6* map
01:24:180 (4) - 196 244
farewell
OD7
AR8
00:29:102 (3,4) - this should work better, if you do this, remove NC from 00:30:977 (1) -
00:31:915 (4) - NC
00:36:133 (2,3) - space those a bit more
00:37:540 (7) - NC
00:38:477 (1) - remove NC
00:39:415 (3) - NC
00:41:290 (6) - NC
I believe Curi also mentioned all this NC stuff in their mod, my opinion is the same so I won't point it out anymore
00:42:696 (2,3) - blanket
00:47:852 (7) - 128 152
00:48:321 (9) - I'd reduce it to 1/2
01:01:680 (4,1) - (1) needs bigger spacing
01:03:321 (8) - tone this one down a bit, I'd recommend making the DS between 6-7 and 7-8 the same and then increase the 8-1 one
%insert stuff about NC needing bigger spacing here%
01:13:047 (8) - why, there's no audible sound in there
01:16:915 (5,6,7,8) - woah. spaced streams in a 3.7* map? please don't, tone it down so that they'll at least touch each other
01:18:672 (4) - ^
01:20:665 (1,2,3,4) - pls
good luck!