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General
- The first Kiai in Normal and the second Kiai in Little Girl is different than the the other diffs
- I suggest you put some more hitsounds on the chorus because it feels kinda bland right now. At least add a cymbal at the downbeat or a clap on each second and fourth white tick. Or you can try to imitate the hitsounds on Little Girl diff for your other diffs
- Lower Little Girl tick rate to 1
- 00:21:890 (1) - This shape could use some improvement
- 01:05:300 (1,2) - Balance their corners?
- 01:27:004 (1) - The corner is covered up by the sliderend and it's not allowed in Easy. I recommend you balance the corner to avoid this
- 01:59:561 (1) - It almost looks like a straight slider. Why not just remove the anchor points altogether?
- 02:15:840 (1,2,3) - These look really imbalanced
- 00:26:977 - Circle here
- 00:54:108 (4,2) - Fix slight overlap
- 00:54:447 (1,3) - ^
- 01:39:892 (4,5) - Make (4) a slider and (5) a circle then add a circle at the downbeat
- 02:02:275 (1,3) - I think you could change this to a better shape. Its path is pretty bad with its current lenngth
- 02:04:988 (7) - NC here, remove NC here 02:05:666 (1) -
- 02:09:057 (1,4) - Fix slight overlap
- 02:11:770 (1) - Move this (the head) to x:60 y:56 and this 02:14:483 (2) - to x:452 y:324
- 02:38:901 (3,1) - Fix overlap
- 02:40:258 (1) - Remove all the repeats and make a sliderart with the long slider
- 02:42:632 (1) - Change this to a circle then add another circle where the slider used to end
- My NC suggestions are to keep consistency because in the chorus you seem to alternate the new NC between every big white tick and every two big thite ticks.
- 00:24:603 (1) - Balance the corner
- 00:36:812 (7) - NC
- 00:44:951 (6) - ^
- 00:50:378 (6) - ^
- 00:53:091 (7) - ^
- 01:01:230 (6) - ^
- 01:28:361 (6) - ^
- 01:33:787 (6) - ^
- 01:36:500 (7) - ^
- 01:44:639 (6) - ^
- 01:50:574 (7) - NC here maybe?
- 01:55:491 (1,2,3,4) - Imperfect pattern here. (1) and (2) is rotating anti0clockwise but (3) and (4) goes clockwise which breaks the rotating flow
- 02:22:623 (6) - NC
- 02:28:049 (6) - ^
- 02:30:762 (7) - ^
- 02:32:119 (1,2,3) - Fix the slight overlap
- 02:38:901 (6) - NC
- 02:42:971 (5) - NC for downbeat
- 02:45:684 (7) - NC here too
- Sory for NC spam. Everything else is good already. The only issues are the NCs and some little things here.
- Same NC thing. Try to apply the same thing that I pointed out on Insane
- 00:02:899 (6) - NC here, remove NC here00:03:577 (1) - , NC here 00:05:612 (5) - and here 00:06:968 (8) - , remove NC here00:07:816 (1) - , and NC here 00:08:325 (4) -
- 00:05:612 (5,6) - Sudden jump really confusing
- 00:06:968 (8,1) - ^
- 00:13:073 (3) - Shape can be improved
- 00:23:416 (9) - You don't need the second last point to make the curve
- 00:31:556 (7) - This is imbalanced
- 00:35:117 (10,1,2,3,4) - Fix overlap
- 00:39:186 (5,7,9) - ^
- 00:40:882 (1,2) - Blanket
- 00:49:699 (4,5) - ctrl+g this and ctrl+g this 00:50:039 (6,7) -
- 00:54:447 (1,2) - Fix overlap
- 01:36:670 (1,2,3,4,5) - Do a proper star pattern
- 01:37:856 (1,2) - Fix overlap
- 01:48:709 (1,3,4) - ^
That's all for my mod! Hope this helps and good luck with your map!