Hey from my queue o/
I wrote that i'm not going to mod it yesterday since i won't find any mistakes. i'm gonna try it nevertheless since i like this map and would love to see it ranked :3
General:
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- 02:40:258 i understand what you did there but i would consider not doing this sudden break in kiai. aimod also suggests it.
- I guess you already know that hitsounds are missing in most difficulties
- It seems to be mostly fine but there are some parts in i guess every difficulty where the new combo's don't look right. try to use this as a guideline:
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- 00:42:238 i would add a note here. maybe stacked to the end of the last slider but that's up to you.
- It wouldn't be bad if there was a spinner somewhere. It is a guideline to have at least 1 spinner in every difficulty. I think this is especially important in easy difficulties since there are people doing this with fl+hr+hd+dt and in that case it's good to have a spinner to get a definite first place in my opinion for reference: t/385507
Normal:
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- Think about adding a spinner here as well although it's not aaaas important as in easy imho.
Advanced:
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- Looks perfectly fine to me.
Insane:
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- 01:47:343 I would personally change the sampleset to normal.
- 02:25:336 wow, this pattern looks hard. think about making it a little easier. just a suggestion though. (edit: it looks harder than it plays. i'll still let that suggestion here)
Little Girl:
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- Looks fine as well
good luck with this :3 If i get enough kudosu i might shoot a star sometime since i really like it :3
I wrote that i'm not going to mod it yesterday since i won't find any mistakes. i'm gonna try it nevertheless since i like this map and would love to see it ranked :3
General:
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- 02:40:258 i understand what you did there but i would consider not doing this sudden break in kiai. aimod also suggests it.
- I guess you already know that hitsounds are missing in most difficulties
- It seems to be mostly fine but there are some parts in i guess every difficulty where the new combo's don't look right. try to use this as a guideline:
Easy:monstrata wrote:
NC (New Combo) Pattern IssuesThis is a general issue. Once you've mastered how to do NC's, you'll know them for life!
NC's should be placed on the downbeat because that is the start of a new measure in a song. Lets look at the timeline: The large white ticks are the downbeats. Always try to have a New combo there. For easier difficulties, you may choose to NC every second downbeat, but make sure your pattern is consistent! If you NC every downbeat, don't randomly switch to every two downbeats. Only do so if the music shifts (for example, during a calm section or a slow-down).
Essentially, you want every downbeat to be the beginning of a New Combo, as such:
Another reason to NC may be because you are using a different slider-velocity. NC'ing the slider gives the player a better visual cue that the slider may be faster, or slower, and because of your NC, they will have more time to prepare.
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- 00:42:238 i would add a note here. maybe stacked to the end of the last slider but that's up to you.
- It wouldn't be bad if there was a spinner somewhere. It is a guideline to have at least 1 spinner in every difficulty. I think this is especially important in easy difficulties since there are people doing this with fl+hr+hd+dt and in that case it's good to have a spinner to get a definite first place in my opinion for reference: t/385507
Normal:
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- Think about adding a spinner here as well although it's not aaaas important as in easy imho.
Advanced:
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- Looks perfectly fine to me.
Insane:
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- 01:47:343 I would personally change the sampleset to normal.
- 02:25:336 wow, this pattern looks hard. think about making it a little easier. just a suggestion though. (edit: it looks harder than it plays. i'll still let that suggestion here)
Little Girl:
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- Looks fine as well
good luck with this :3 If i get enough kudosu i might shoot a star sometime since i really like it :3