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00:35:496 (2) - Make the followpoint parallel with the border
00:35:845 (3) - Angle it more so the follow point from 3 to 4 is parallel with the border
Suggestion : 00:47:007 (2) - all the sliders in this stream should have a higher SV. I was so nervous playing this part because of sliderends and stuff.
Suggestion : 00:58:868 (4) - Make all the circle sliders have some distance between the beginning and end, or increase SV. Not knowing which way the slider goes also made me nervous.
01:30:961 (1) - Why not full kiai in this section?
01:44:914 (1) - I was about to comment on the blanket from 1 and 2, but i noticed 2 blanketed 4 instead. Why not make the 1 have a sharper corner or just be straight and not gay
01:51:891 (1,2) - Should not stack because 01:52:414 (4,5) and 01:52:675 (6,7) stack.
02:18:577 (2,4) -inconsistent with the sliders like this in the beginning, but why not ctrl+g these so it will flow into the stream after it better?
02:30:961 (1,2) - again
02:42:124 (1,2) -
02:52:414 (1) - these 1/3 / 1/6 are pretty difficult to land 300s on sightread. How about slider to connect 02:52:763 (2,3) ?
02:53:286 (1,2) - im marking these because 00:33:752 (1) slider isnt stacked (ofc). It's just easier to read this way.
03:04:798 (1) - your other spinners are 1/16 away from the note behind them, why isn't this one?
03:06:193 (1) - suggestion on the slider velocity again.
03:18:403 (4) - again with circle sliders
03:36:542 (1,2) - Why not blanket?
03:42:124 (1) - Maybe increase slider velocity because pitch is rising?
04:35:496 (2,5) - Perhaps blanket with 04:36:542 (1) ?
05:04:449 (1,2) -
05:07:240 (1,2) -
05:21:193 (1) - see this one matches the one at the beginning of the song..?
05:35:264 (1) - The loop at 05:37:964 should be more circular imo, just because of the circles at the beginning and the end of the slider. Its a pretty slider anyways
Well... It's honesty really good, especially the streams. I feel like since the jumps are pretty big at times, the streams need to be more spaced at times as well. Perhaps make the streams more spaced when the pitch is rising, and less spaced when the pitch is lowering?
00:35:845 (3) - Angle it more so the follow point from 3 to 4 is parallel with the border
Suggestion : 00:47:007 (2) - all the sliders in this stream should have a higher SV. I was so nervous playing this part because of sliderends and stuff.
Suggestion : 00:58:868 (4) - Make all the circle sliders have some distance between the beginning and end, or increase SV. Not knowing which way the slider goes also made me nervous.
01:30:961 (1) - Why not full kiai in this section?
01:44:914 (1) - I was about to comment on the blanket from 1 and 2, but i noticed 2 blanketed 4 instead. Why not make the 1 have a sharper corner or just be straight and not gay
01:51:891 (1,2) - Should not stack because 01:52:414 (4,5) and 01:52:675 (6,7) stack.
02:18:577 (2,4) -inconsistent with the sliders like this in the beginning, but why not ctrl+g these so it will flow into the stream after it better?
02:30:961 (1,2) - again
02:42:124 (1,2) -
02:52:414 (1) - these 1/3 / 1/6 are pretty difficult to land 300s on sightread. How about slider to connect 02:52:763 (2,3) ?
02:53:286 (1,2) - im marking these because 00:33:752 (1) slider isnt stacked (ofc). It's just easier to read this way.
03:04:798 (1) - your other spinners are 1/16 away from the note behind them, why isn't this one?
03:06:193 (1) - suggestion on the slider velocity again.
03:18:403 (4) - again with circle sliders
03:36:542 (1,2) - Why not blanket?
03:42:124 (1) - Maybe increase slider velocity because pitch is rising?
04:35:496 (2,5) - Perhaps blanket with 04:36:542 (1) ?
05:04:449 (1,2) -
05:07:240 (1,2) -
05:21:193 (1) - see this one matches the one at the beginning of the song..?
05:35:264 (1) - The loop at 05:37:964 should be more circular imo, just because of the circles at the beginning and the end of the slider. Its a pretty slider anyways
Well... It's honesty really good, especially the streams. I feel like since the jumps are pretty big at times, the streams need to be more spaced at times as well. Perhaps make the streams more spaced when the pitch is rising, and less spaced when the pitch is lowering?