Hi! ( =w=)/
M4M
Good luck!
M4M
[Dynamic Congeniality]
Hope it helped, though.
I like the map. - Remove countdown.
- 00:12:124 (4,5) - Maybe it's just me, but I find the flow between these two weird. A similar style like here: 00:11:600 (2,3) - , would do.
- 00:23:635 (4) - NC. SV changed at this point.
- 00:51:542 (4,1) - 00:51:891 (1) - Might not be read, so I suggest not stacking it with 00:51:542 (4) - .
- 01:30:612 (4) - NC.
- 01:33:054 (4) - In my opinion, this should be emphasized more, since the sound here is very significant. Consider increasing the DS between 01:32:879 (3,4) - .
- 01:47:356 (5,6,1) - Just a suggestion. Switch 01:47:356 (5,6) - so that it would be like a back and forth style jump. Seems better imo.
- 01:53:308 (1) - 1/16 snap? Putting it at the blue tick (1/4) will do.
- 02:10:031 (1) - Would be better imo if this slider would face towards 02:10:205 (2) - . You may do this by moving these (02:09:856 (2,3,1) - ) a bit lower.
- 02:10:728 (5) - Maybe put a NC here?
- 03:11:252 (1) - Same as 00:51:891 (1) - .
- 04:09:159 (2) - I'm not quite sure about this (since this a 1/4 slider), but I don't think this slider shape is rankable.
- 04:20:845 (4) - , 04:43:170 (4) - NC
- 04:34:449 (4) - Emphasis. Same as 01:33:054 (4) - .
- 04:45:612 (4) - ^
- 05:35:264 (1) - End this slider at the blue tick next to it? It sounds better... I think.
Hope it helped, though.
Good luck!