Feerum wrote:

Requested Mod


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Red means Unrankable stuff
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Normal are Suggestions
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Hello Ruberusu. Sorry that it take's some time. But now i'm here to Mod your Map. I played this Map and it make's so much fun!
I really hope that i can again help you to improve your Map. Osu!Mania need's more Touhou!
So let us start

Genral

Artist: Right // Since it's the same like last time i think its right lol
Title: Right
Source: Right
Tags: Right // Oh my god so many Tags. More then last Time
AiMod: Right
Background: Whoops. Should a Background not be 1366x768 or 1024x768?
BPM/Offset:I found one Unsnapped Timing Point. http://puu.sh/jAmAa/6579c285a5.png fixed
Other: Since Storyboard is WIP i will not check it :3 I dont even can because i have no exp with Storyboards :c

Alright, after a great Meta Check *Feerum pats himself*
Let's finally begin the Mod!

Phantasm stage

00:09:528 (9528|2,9686|3) - CTRL + G here for more balance. fixed
00:13:159 (13159|2) - Move to 2 to remove the 3 Jack on Col 3. Also flows really good to the music. fixed
00:18:212 (18212|2) - Maybe better to 4? Fit a bit to the Melody and gives a bit balance before the 3Chord fixed
00:26:186 - Is here a Note missing? It looks so when you Map all the time the Music with 2 Chords (Example 00:21:133 - ) no change
00:27:212 (27212|3,27370|3) - :c . My suggestion is to 00:27:370 (27370|3,27528|1) - CTRL + G these. fixed
00:38:580 - From this Part. I really don't get how you Map every 2nd LN. Nvm 00:51:686 (51686|1,51686|3,51843|3) - here i can hear it lol.
When i hear it right you Mapped the Piano? with Single Notes. Then there are some notes missing. Like 00:39:607 - or 00:40:870 - lol fixed
00:46:317 - here's a little suggestion that gives some balance and that flows really good to the music. fixed

Screen

00:48:449 - heres again a little Suggestion. Maybe you should 00:48:449 (48449|2) - delete this one note. And then add here one more 00:48:528 - and 00:48:607 - here one. it would fit really great to music to the drums. And makes it similar to 00:48:212 (48212|1,48212|0,48291|3,48370|0) - delete C
00:54:843 (54843|3) - Move to 3 for some balance. fixed
00:58:001 (58001|1,58001|2) - Move one Col to right, because same like 00:57:528 - . Fit maybe better fixed
01:03:528 (63528|3,63686|0) - CTRL + G makes this much better to play. fixed
01:08:580 (68580|3,68620|2,68659|1,68699|3,68738|2,68778|1,68817|3,68857|2,68896|1) - :O These are Wrong Snapped! This sound is 1/6 and you should better Fix this fixed
01:26:738 (86738|0) - Move to 4. Better Flow fixed
01:30:370 - is here a note Missing? no change
01:31:633 - Remove one. Same like 01:30:212 - or? no change
01:35:422 - and 01:35:580 - missing notes to? no change
01:40:475 - and 01:40:633 - too? Slowly i think i just see something wrong here lol. I mean 01:30:528 - this is Mapped to. And it's same :c no change
Or maybe you Added the Extra Note only for the sound who includes Drums? Then there are still some Missing notes. // Ayy this parts confused me >~< Drum+main sound or piano sound ><
01:59:265 - Maybe add a note here on 3? I don't think it would be make it much harder to play but better flow. fixed
02:00:686 (120686|1,120765|2) - CTRL + G and then 02:00:843 (120843|1,120922|0) - CTRL + G too, flows much better. fixed
02:01:475 (121475|2,121554|3) - CTRL + G again more Balance and better Flow. fixed
02:08:501 (128501|0,128580|0,128817|3,128896|3,129133|0,129212|0) - these Jacks (And the next one) I dont know, they dont really fit to the music here and don't really flow. You can keep it but i recommend to change these repattern
02:16:317 (136317|1) - Should this not be a Normal note? see here 02:11:265 - fixed
02:33:527 - Little Suggestion for some Balance and nice flow: fixed

Screen

02:38:106 (158106|0,158264|1) - maybe better CTRL + G? fixed
02:39:053 (159053|1,159211|2) - Same CTRL + G fixed
02:45:685 (165685|1,165843|0) - CTRL + G too no change
Let me explain. The Jacks while the LN's plays really good. Nice idea. But at this small point you should not Jack to emphasize the Sound in the Music. To emphasize the change to the next part.
02:52:474 (172474|3) - Missing hitsound for the drum? no change
02:54:211 (174211|3) - Move to 3 and 02:54:369 (174369|0) - to 4, flows better fixed
03:39:211 (219211|3) - Should this LN not be a Normal Note? I mean look here 03:29:106 - 03:28:158 - to 03:38:263 - 's LN follow≠ 03:38:263 - to 03:45:842 - 's LN follow
03:39:527 (219527|2) - This LN should be then 1/2 beat shorter and 03:40:000 (220000|1) - should begin here 03:39:842 - . I am right?
I see 03:40:790 - you Follow from this point (maybe earlier) an other sound with LN but i highly recommend to do this from really this point because from here the sound is really audible and the Change would fit.
04:03:979 (243979|0,243979|1,244133|1,244133|2) - CTRL + G and it fit great to pitch fixed
04:05:979 (245979|2) - Suggest move this to 2. Then 04:06:286 (246286|2,246286|1) - One Col to the right and 04:06:440 (246440|3) - on 2 fixed
04:30:822 (270822|0,270898|3) - CTRL + G maybe? then 04:31:051 (271051|0) - on 4. fixed
04:57:051 - Suggestion for Pitch, maybe you like it: fixed

Screen

05:20:589 (320589|1,320897|3) - Why here two Notes? Other have only one delete 23
05:45:434 - maybe add here a Stair? no change
05:48:588 - heres another suggestion for this part. Maybe you like it: fixed

Screen

05:51:973 (351973|3) - suggest move this to 3. It this Chord has not the same pitch like the previous. fixed
06:03:819 - just a suggestion. You Mapped all finishes in the whole song with a 3Chord. Maybe then here too? added
06:04:742 - you could add here a note to emphasize the drums while LN holding. fixed
06:22:588 (382588|0) - maybe move this to 2? To remove the 3Jack on Col 1 fixed
06:46:163 (406163|2,406320|1,406478|0) - Move all one col to right for pitch fixed
07:47:763 (467763|3) - Should this LN not begin on the next Blue tick? Means here 07:47:846 - fixed
07:49:763 - here the Pitch of the LN Change. The Long LN could end here and here you could add another LN for the pitch change :3 fixed
07:50:763 - Add here a note. Same like 07:50:429 - no change
08:07:384 (487384|0,487672|2,487961|3,488249|2) - Do you have here the right BPM or Offset? The Notes looks not correct. Check this or maybe you need to change the Beat Snap? I check it with 1/16 and then it was correct. Really suggest to check this
08:38:992 (518992|0) - maybe move this to 4 for Pitch? fixed
08:44:159 (524159|0) - Move to 3 for Balance. fixed
08:52:325 - Okay i hear this part now like 10 Times and i still don't understand the 3 Chords here but i think you know why you have them. So i try'd to balance it a bit better: fixed

Screen

09:05:992 (545992|2,546159|0) - CTRL + G here. no change
09:09:325 (549325|3) - Move this to 3, 09:09:492 (549492|1) - to 4 and 09:09:659 (549659|3) - to 1 for Balance fixed
09:10:659 (550659|1) - to 3, Balance. no change
09:19:825 (559825|1,559881|3,559936|2,559992|0) - these are Wrong Snapped. They should be in 1/8 fixed
09:22:325 (562325|1,562409|0) - maybe would CTRL + G fit here better? fixed
09:25:159 (565159|2) - should this LN not begin here 09:24:992 - ? fixed
09:26:075 - here 09:26:242 - here and 09:26:409 - here i still hear the sound in the melody. Maybe you can map this? Just like this: 09:25:825 - fixed

Screen

09:31:714 (571714|2) - i think this one is a Ghost Note. I only hear two sounds. 09:31:603 (571603|2,571658|0) - these looks correct. no change
09:47:742 - still has the Sound which you follow in this 1/4 Part. You should add here a note. fixed
09:49:658 (589658|2) - move to 2 for Pitch. fixed
09:51:658 (591658|2) - to 4 for Balance. fixed
09:52:158 (592158|0,592325|1) - CTRL + G for really nice Pitch catch. fixed
10:01:908 (601908|2) - to 4, 10:01:992 (601992|3) - to 3 and 10:02:075 (602075|2) - to 2 for better play. fixed
10:20:492 - until 10:31:158 - // OKAY! That i have to say. This part plays awesome!
11:04:986 (664986|1) - move to 1, 11:05:139 (665139|2) - to 2 and 11:05:447 (665447|1) - to 4 for really good pitch catch. fixed
11:08:216 (668216|1,668370|0) - CTRL + G and 11:08:447 (668447|3,668524|2) - one Col to left. Plays really good. fixed
11:30:370 (690370|0,690524|3) - Maybe CTRL + G here? fixed
11:55:447 (715447|0) - Move to 2 and 11:55:524 (715524|2) - to 1 for better balance. fixed
12:01:601 - I have to confess that i change here some pattern and don't know how it was previous.. but it is really great to play this way so i just show it to you maybe you like it xD fixed

Screen

http://puu.sh/jBkNw/d7db970618.png

12:21:447 (741447|3) - maybe better to 2? fixed
12:34:678 (754678|2,754832|1) - Suggest to CTRL + G here for some balance. fixed
12:39:909 (759909|0) - this one would maybe better fit on 3 fixed
12:54:524 (774524|3,774575|2,774627|1) - uhm.. o.o What exactly you mapped with this 1/6 Stair? I don't get it. Is there really need for it? fixed 1/4
14:10:413 (850413|0) - This one you can move to 4 and 14:10:628 (850628|1) - to 1 because this is already same with the next 4 LN's fixed
14:24:128 (864128|0,864342|1) - Same Suggestion like above. Same pitch so you could change them :3 Means 14:24:128 (864128|0) - to 4 and 14:24:342 (864342|1) - to 1 fixed
14:31:413 - Add here a note? Drum + Finish. Would fit good. fixed
14:43:467 (883467|3) - This one is Wrong Snapped. You follow the Piano. This one should be here 14:43:521 -
14:51:556 (891556|0,891771|1) - well, again same suggestion like the previous LN's fixed
15:17:753 (917753|0) - I'm pretty sure this one is Wrong Snapped. It should be on the next 1/6 Beat Snap Line. fixed
15:24:610 (924610|2) - Again This one is Wrong Snapped. Should be on the next 1/6 Beat Snap Line. fixed
15:52:199 (952199|1,952306|2) - Maybe Jack these? Same pitch. no change
16:06:393 (966393|2,967389|2) - Just a Suggestion to move these LN's to 2. Heres a really audible different pitch to the previous one. fixed
17:16:369 (1036369|3) - This one is Wrong Snapped. It should be on the next 1/6 Beat Snap Line.fixed
17:23:226 (1043226|1) - This one is Wrong Snapped. It should be again on the nest 1/6 Beat Snap Line. fixed

I DID IT! Finished!
Ruberusu this song is awesome. The Beatmap play's awesome and i really hope my Mod helps you to improve. If you have any questions to parts of my Mod please don't be shy to ask me. I would really like to help you to improve this Map ^_^

I wish you good luck with this Map

FreeezeForward wrote:

Hallow, -w-)b some bunch of mods incoming. xD I promise I will finish the mod but not this week, maybe another time.
I have a feeling that this will be ranked, if mapped properly plus the SB would be great.

Phantasm Stage

05:30:819 (330819|1) - I think move to 4, the pattern before is is thrills, not staircases. no change
05:44:434 05:44:588 05:44:742 Add them a note to 3, a single note may not be enough for this beat. no change
05:45:973 Add to 3, for the Drum-like beat no change
05:46:588 Add to 2, same as above no change
05:47:203 Add to 3, same as above no change
05:48:434 Add to 3, same as above no change
05:50:280 Add to 4, same as above no change
05:50:896 Add to 3, same as above no change
05:51:511 Add to 4, same as above no change
05:52:434 (352434|2) - Move to 4, all I see is the connecting minijack pattern is columns 2,3,1,4 no change
05:52:896 (352896|1) - Move to 3, I hear that the sound is not appropriate for a minijack add 3
05:53:357 Add to 4, same as others, for the drum-like beat no change
05:53:357 Add to 4, same as above no change
05:58:280 I think add to 4, for it will have a double note pattern and 05:58:280 (358280|0) will consider for the bass. changed pattern
06:06:896 (366896|3,367049|0) - I think switch columns, in this pattern some columns are alternating notes like 06:05:357 (365357|2,365511|1,365665|2,365819|1,365973|2,366126|3,366280|2,366434|3) and it should be also alternated no change
06:17:357 I think add to 1, there is a loud beat here, no change
06:22:280 I think add to 1, same as above no change
08:40:325 (520325|2,520659|3) - I think switch columns, the pattern 08:39:825 - 08:40:325 is horizontally flipped fixed
08:52:492 I think remove a note here, look the following pattern, this is double noted in this beat. no change
09:45:492 (585492|2,585658|3) - I think switch columns, patterns here are repeated and it must be like 09:45:158 (585158|3,585242|1,585325|2,585408|0) no change
10:09:325 (609325|3) - I think move to 3, the following double notes have the same beats as well as this. no change

Feerum wrote:

I DID IT! Finished!
Ruberusu this song is awesome. The Beatmap play's awesome and i really hope my Mod helps you to improve. If you have any questions to parts of my Mod please don't be shy to ask me. I would really like to help you to improve this Map ^_^

I wish you good luck with this Map

Aphrodena wrote:

Hi, from queue, sorry for the late mod D:

btw, I really love these beatmaps, keep it up!~

Pitch things are optional, just some minor nitpicking, also sorry for poor mod

[03:51:210 - to 06:44:742]
03:54:902 (234902|0,235056|2) - Ctrl+G for pitch fixed
04:11:979 - Add note, you used 2 notes at 04:05:825 - 04:07:363 - 04:08:902 - 04:10:440 etc, and they all have the same pattern and sound fixed
04:24:746 (264746|2,265053|0,265361|2) - LN should in col 1, 3, 1 for pitch no change
05:34:819 - Remove note, doesn't seem like there's a sound here changed pattern
05:37:049 (337049|1,337280|2) - Ctrl+G for pitch no change
05:50:357 and 05:50:511 - Should add notes for the bass kicks no change

FreeezeForward wrote:

Hello again, =w=)b This is the last batch of my mods, and I hope it would be useful.

Phantasm Stage

10:20:742 (620742|1,620825|3) - Move to 4 and to 3 respectively, I see that it might be easily hit because of ascending staircases. fixed
10:27:742 (627742|1,627825|3) - Move to 4 and to 2 respectively, I saw the constant beats 10:25:825 (625825|1,625825|0,626492|1,626492|0,627158|0,627158|1) so it must be in the same beat. fixed
10:30:492 - 10:30:825 Try to repattern this to a connecting staircase, the length is made up of staircases and the pattern instrument should not be changed. fixed
10:31:658 (631658|0) - Move to 4, it considers as hand balance and note density. fixed
10:33:825 (633825|3) - Move to 3, same as above fixed
11:08:832 (668832|1,669139|2) - Switch columns, for hand balance and pitch notes fixed
11:10:370 (670370|1,670524|0,670678|1) - Move to 3, 2 and 3 respectively, notice the note 11:09:755 (669755|2) must be the same as 11:10:370 (670370|1) and hand balance for some reasons. fixed
11:12:216 (672216|1,672370|0) - Move to 3 and 2 respectively, for hand balance fixed
11:12:216 (672216|1,672370|0,676370|3) - Move to 1, for hand balance, change patterns as necessary, or something like that. fixed
11:23:524 (683524|0,683678|0,683755|1) - Switch columns, it is easier to have alternating notes in columns [2,4] fixed
12:08:832 (728832|3) - Move to 1, the minijack pattern is reversed to this pattern. no change
12:23:832 (743832|2) - I think move to 1, this pattern is very hard to hit perfectly or you could repattern this. no change
THE END BTW

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Language : English

Hi Reberu-san

Mod Via ★☭ Верный Mania Queue ★☭

: Seem Nothing Issue
: Still Questionable
: Unrankable Issue General

■ Mapset


■ Metadata


■ Timing

Break time?? it's 10:37:658 - to 10:43:224 - . There is no sound here

■ Audio


■ Background


■ Other

Still not check yet your SB, i'am noob for SB check.. lel

4K = |1|2|3|4|

(Focus : Note Presence , Hand Balance, Variety/Consistency Pattern)
Phantasm stage

HP : 8,5
OD : 8,5

00:01:299 - 04:58:282
00:19:475 (19475|1) - move to 2, for variety fixed
00:25:633 (25633|3) - are you sure 1 note with 2 hitsounds? better remove 1 HS or add note :3 00:25:554 (25554|2) - move to 00:25:633 -
00:26:738 (26738|1) - ^ 00:26:738 - add note
00:37:159 (37159|1) - move to 1, avoid 4 jack, then 00:37:633 (37633|0,37949|1) - move to right fixed
00:45:528 (45528|1,45607|2) - move to right fixed
00:48:686 (48686|1,48686|3,48686|2,48843|0,48922|1,49001|3) - Ctrl + H, then 00:49:080 (49080|0) - move to 3 fixed
00:58:633 (58633|2) - move to 4? no change
01:02:422 (62422|1,62580|2) - move to right, then 01:02:896 (62896|3,63054|2) - Ctrl + G fixed
01:08:896 (68896|3) - wow, 2 HS no change
01:12:528 (72528|2) - move to 1, then 01:12:686 (72686|1) - move to 2 fixed
01:25:633 (85633|2) - move to 4 fixed
02:35:422 (155422|3) - move F or C to 02:35:422 (155422|1) - avoid overlap lol fixed
02:48:211 (168211|3) - move to 2, then 02:48:369 (168369|1,168448|3) - Ctrl + G fixed
02:55:869 - add note, for beat sounds? and here too 02:59:659 - no change. this part followed main sound and piano sound
03:26:263 (206263|3,206895|2) - avoid overlap HS no change. I need hitnormal
04:51:976 (291976|2,292284|3) - wow, overlap HS :3 delete W

04:58:282 - 09:48:492
05:03:513 - & 05:03:666 - for electric guitar maybe? no change. not followd guitar sound
05:09:666 (309666|3,309974|3,310282|3) - avoid overlap, you can move 1 HS to other note no change
05:25:051 (325051|2) - ^ no change
06:15:203 (375203|1,375357|2) - Ctrl + G? fixed
06:43:511 (403511|2,403742|2,403973|2) - avoid HS overlap no change
06:53:763 - & 06:55:096 - why not add 1 again like 06:52:430 - high pitch 06:52:430 - is followd main sound, cymbal sound and kick sound. but, 06:53:763 - is no main sound
08:00:763 (480763|0) - or 08:00:763 (480763|2) - move to 4 08:00:763 (480763|0) - move to 4
08:32:109 - i think 1 LN better than 2 LN :3, and that LN not end here 08:32:934 - xD maybe here 08:33:084 not fix 1 LN end to 08:33:084 -

09:48:492 - END
10:14:658 (614658|3,614992|2) - Ctrl + G fixed
11:35:755 (695755|3) - move to 2? fixed
12:22:216 (742216|2,742370|3) - Ctrl + G no change
14:03:556 (843556|1) - move to 1? fixed
14:55:842 (895842|1) - move to 3 no change
15:09:556 (909556|1) - ^ no change
15:40:735 (940735|3,940842|3) - are you sure 2 jack here? :3 yes. i think here is jack needs
15:41:699 - add note? fised
15:54:771 (954771|3,954878|3,954985|3) - hmm... i think this jack not suit on music no change
16:02:410 - add F fixed
17:57:529 - remove 1 LN, since previous pitch only 2 note no change

Verniy_Chan wrote:

My Rating

89

(1-100)

please ignore it, just for fun only

Thanks for requesting
Хорошо~ Good Luck..

Marirose wrote:

private check

overall:
hs no lag issue,great
bg okay
sb awesome

then there are some of my advice for pattern

col=1-4

part1-2(?)mod

00:04:476 - here,try this,,it fits better for pitch fixed
00:05:108 - and here,i think there should be 2 same column notes for the same sound as 00:04:950 - ,so my advice is : fixed
00:13:080 - not only chord sound ,there's also a drum sound,you could try to add at col4 fixed
00:13:238 - then here,only chord, you chould ignore this
00:20:817 - drum hit, add at col2 ,according to 00:22:870 (22870|2) - fixed
00:22:870 (22870|2) - ^same,youd better add no change
00:27:370 (27370|1,27449|2,27686|0,27765|1) - these sounds fits little jackhammer well,you could try this pattern : fixed

00:35:738 - and 00:36:370 - see,better to add one for more playable fixed

00:36:607 - i think you miss a chord sound here fixed

00:36:686 (36686|3) - actually this LN sound end at 00:37:475 - end to 00:37:317 -

00:47:186 - why empty? lol fixed
00:47:501 - why empty again? >< no piano sound

00:57:212 (57212|2,57370|3) - i think they should be the same column for the same sound,col3 better fixed
then 00:57:528 (57528|2,57528|3,57686|1,57686|2,57843|0,57843|1,58001|2,58001|3) - ctrl+h, thats all fixed

00:58:159 - really cant understand why you ignore this evidently sound ><,heres my advice : fixed (00:58:159 - col 4)

01:26:896 - here and 01:27:370 (87370|0,87449|1) - fixed

my osu crashed oh… lol I also often will cause itxD

01:31:159 (91159|0) - better move this to col3,according to 01:31:265 (91265|2) - ,it think keep them in same column would be great fixed

01:33:765 - drum hit,dont miss it fixed

01:36:212 (96212|3) - ^move to col2 fixed
01:41:265 (101265|0) - ^you know wat to do fixed
01:46:317 (106317|3) - ^ fixed


the end

good luck ruber take my star w/

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

how about merge the first part and last part into one map? lol

i will check offset this soon

Ameth Rianno wrote:

what's happened

also, Senpi- isn't capitalized (senpi-)
I'm sure all (actually some) of the song names were wrong. 6th 03:48:369 - to 04:55:513 -This song is called "The Kappa Way as Said ~ One-Way Accelerator", not Kappasama no Iutoori. Alice Margatroid spelled wrong, Flandre Scarlet spelled wrong, Treasures spelled wrong.

(eyy sorry for telling this at bubble xd)

shionelove wrote:

1234

[Phantasm stage]
00:16:528 (16528|2,16580|1,16633|0,16686|2,16738|3,16791|1,16843|2,16896|0,16949|1,17001|2,17054|0) - 1/4 fixed.これに合わせて後ろを少し配置し直した
00:58:317 (58317|0,58370|1,58422|3,58475|2) - 個人的な意見としては、こういう音は3432か2321の二択になってしまう 2321にした

02:30:211 (150211|0,150369|2,152106|0,152264|2) - addできる
02:32:974 (152974|1,153053|3) - タッタタッって感じて・・・
うーん…piano音を強調したいからno change
あと02:32:264 - が謎のdouble noteだったから片方削除した
そして何故か戦ピーが"線"ピーになってて草生えた。修正済み

05:58:280 (358280|0,358280|1) - 13 fixed
08:07:708 (487708|2,488009|3,488297|2) - unsnapくさいんだけど BPM線とかで無理やり合わせてみたけど…


17thのパート全般について：密度が薄すぎないすか　特に最初のほう
せっかく和太鼓が段々盛り上げてるのに、密度が薄くなっていくなんてもったいない
うーん…一部を除いてno change.手抜きとかじゃなくてピアノを強調したりLNでメインサウンド強調したりとかしてるから…太鼓の強調はピアノがない最初の曲名表示が終わった後の所と最後の盛り上がりのところだけ
途中でunsnapしてるのがあったので修正

Okoratu wrote:

so uhhhm why is it Phantasm stage and not Phantasm Stage for the diffname...?

Feerum wrote:

Qualify Check


Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
======================================================
Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
======================================================

Hello Ruberusu! The time has come to move this Map to Qualify.
I'm here to check everything again, should be everything alright we can move this Map into Qualify.
Let's hope it will not be too much.. xD

Genral

Artist: Right
Title: Right
Source: Right
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Alright. Here i have something to mention. For this i will use a Box lol fixed

BPM/Offset and Greenline check

I found some Greenlines that looks not right snapped. I would like to ask you if i'm right or you put the Greenlines on purpose like they are.
Following Greenlines :
08:10:553 -
08:11:258 -
08:11:692 -
08:12:218 -
08:15:747 -
08:22:875 -
08:25:205 -
08:28:734 -

Like you can see here the Greenlines are slightly off. Thats not an unrankable issue like Loctav told me as long they don't influence the Map but i recommend to fix all these.
All other looks fine for me.

Other: SB Looks fine, Hitsounds are Fine.

Phantasm stage

Are you really sure that you want to name it "Phantasm stage" and not "Phantasm Stage" ? Its you last chance fixed
00:13:159 (13159|1) - should be here a whistle sound? fixed
00:46:870 (46870|2,47028|2) - Move one of them to 2 because of different pitch. 00:46:870 (46870|2) - move to 2
01:03:370 (63370|1,63370|3,63449|2,63528|1,63528|0) - I'm a bit confused here. You have Mapped here the Drums but 00:58:317 (58317|1,58370|2,58422|1,58475|0) - here you did map the 1/6 Sounds. Wouldn't it be better to be consistent and only take one of them? oh…I didnt notice a thing of mainsound(1/6sound) xD fixed
01:16:633 (76633|2) - Add W hitsound? no change
03:19:790 (199790|3) - Move to 3 and 03:19:948 (199948|2) - to 4 to continue your Jack pattern here. fixed
03:27:211 (207211|0,207369|0) - You could add clap here fixed
04:49:051 (289051|0) - Missing C hitsound fixed. and 04:36:744 (276744|3) - add clap
05:26:280 (326280|3) - Move this to 2? For the Guitar Pitch change beacuse 05:25:973 (325973|3,326049|2,326126|3,326203|2) - these belong together and 05:26:280 (326280|3,326357|0,326434|1,326511|0) - these fixed
06:31:126 - When i listen closely to the Music it seems here is a note missing? added
06:47:899 - unnecessary Greenline? It has exactly the same settings like the last one. Same Volume, same Sampleset, same SV? deleted
07:47:096 (467096|0) - Mh.. should this LN end 07:47:679 - ? fixed
07:51:096 (471096|2) - This LN should end 07:51:679 - ? fixed
12:22:678 (742678|3,742832|2) - CTRL + G here and 12:23:139 (743139|3,743293|2) - CTRL + G here to remove 12:22:370 (742370|3,742524|3,742678|3) - , the only place in this Mash where you have a 3 Jack. For better Balance and playability c: fixed
16:02:410 (962410|1) - Should this LN end 16:03:281 - ? fixed
16:10:376 (970376|1) - And this should end 16:11:248 - fixed

Call me back when everything is done

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

Feerum wrote:

00:46:870 (46870|2,47028|2) - Move one of them to 2 because of different pitch. 00:46:870 (46870|2) - move to 2

aya-hatate.jpg (1366x853)
momiji-a.jpg (1366x994)
momiji-nitori.jpg (679x960)
mitori-a.jpg (905x1280)
mitori-b.jpg (850x966)
mitori-nitori-a.jpeg (1280x960)
yukari-a.jpg (1366x972)
alice-x.jpg (660x860)
alice-a.jpg (660x860)
mugetsu-gengetsu-a.jpg (905x1280)
rika-c.jpeg (700x1059)

1. sb\3rd\aya-hatate.jpg - doesn't do any scrolling, hence it has to be reduced in size/cut.
2. sb\12th\alice-x.jpg - from what I see this one doesn't scroll either. Could also use a cut/resize fix.
3. sb\16th\Flandle.jpg - aspect ratio is broken here. Care to fix that, please.
   
   There might be a few more, so, please have a look at the SB once again.

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

As first i want to congratulate you, but i have to sorry as well for giving bad news D:

hmm ... seems to be some BPM timings are wrong, i will give you the correct one:
You can get it here: http://puu.sh/mMNzb/e0edd3d38d.osu
(Please take note that green timings, which is SV changes and kiai time are not set)
It's more accurate in my opitions
fixed

Furthermore, i found out some issues, which are unrankable:
• Storyboard image file dimensions are more than allowed maximum (640x1440 or 1920x480 for scrolling images) or (1366x768)

aya-hatate.jpg (1366x853)
momiji-a.jpg (1366x994)
momiji-nitori.jpg (679x960)
mitori-a.jpg (905x1280)
mitori-b.jpg (850x966)
mitori-nitori-a.jpeg (1280x960)
yukari-a.jpg (1366x972)
alice-x.jpg (660x860)
alice-a.jpg (660x860)
mugetsu-gengetsu-a.jpg (905x1280)
rika-c.jpeg (700x1059)

And on 16:18:030 - there are two timings on here

It's unrankable issues and won't work perfectly if you kept 2 timings with differents volume
fixed

Few last things:

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[Phantasm Stage]
00:13:120 - on here have 1/8 too, you may want to add it no change
00:27:370 (27370|2,27449|2) - appearancely they're different pitch fixed
00:53:422 (53422|3,53580|2) - make a jack on here, for the pitch and sound exactly same from both of them (move 00:53:580 (53580|2) - to 4th column) fixed
02:35:580 (155580|1) - i suggest to remove this, for focus on main 1/2 jack above fixed
03:16:316 (196316|1,196474|0,196632|0) - may hard to catch on here, hmm, i recomended you to move 03:16:474 (196474|0) - to 3 for more comfortable fixed
04:56:132 (296132|3,296234|2,296337|1,296440|0,296440|3,296440|2,297055|0,297055|1) - Ctrl + H this, pitch is going up, not going down fixed
05:03:517 - and 05:03:670 - you may want to add a note for them on 4th column, for guitar's sound, make it more insteresting for rhythm fixed
05:08:593 (308593|0) - move this to 3, those jack looks hard to catch well fixed
05:10:901 - to 05:11:209 - don't miss this rhythm, fill it with some notes 05:10:901 - added

okay, i checked lightly the rest of the map, seems only few of these issues
and this is a good map, i really love it
Good luck then, tell me if you need rebubbles

Harbyter wrote:

05:40:054 (340054|0,340093|2,340131|3) - 1/6 05:40:029 - 05:40:080 -
fixed. and 05:42:016 (342016|3,342785|0) - move to 1/6

14:05:699 - from here i think the pitch relevancy should be more accurate ,it felt really weird pressing the LNs here no change

Bakari wrote:

Greetings.

I am here as Kuo Kyoka's post lists rather important issues that have to be addressed. While I don't know much about mania, I believe that the concurrent volume levels have to be fixed as well as the SB elements which are of unreasonable size. As those things are valid for all modes.

Here are a few things you should do.

1. sb\3rd\aya-hatate.jpg - doesn't do any scrolling, hence it has to be reduced in size/cut.
2. sb\12th\alice-x.jpg - from what I see this one doesn't scroll either. Could also use a cut/resize fix.
3. sb\16th\Flandle.jpg - aspect ratio is broken here. Care to fix that, please.
   
   There might be a few more, so, please have a look at the SB once again.

1. 3rd\aya-hatate.jpg resize fix. 1366*853 → 1366*768
2. 4th\momiji-a.jpg new image. http://puu.sh/mOblV/66d4c40499.jpg
3. 4th\momiji-c.jpg resize fix. 853*639 → 640*480
4. 5th\momiji-nitori.jpg resize fix. 679x960 → 640*906
5. 6th\mitori-a.jpg resize fix. (905x1280 → 640*905
6. 6th\mitori-b.jpg resize fix. 850x966 → 640*727
7. 7th\mitori-nitori-a.jpeg resize fix. 1280x960 → 640*480
8. 8th\marisa-c.jpg resize fix. 853*532 → 769*480
9. 12th\alice-a.jpg resize fix. 660x860 → 640*833
10. 12th\alice-x.jpg resize fix. 660x860 → 640*833
11. 12th\alice-c.jpg resize fix. 853x639 → 640*480
12. 14th\mugetsu-gengetsu-a.jpg resize fix. 905x1280 → 640*905
13. 14th\mugetsu-gengetsu-c.jpg resize fix. 672x672 → 640*640
14. 15th\rika-c.jpeg resize fix. 700x1059 →640*968
15. 15th\rika-d.jpeg resize fix. 853x639 →640*480
16. 16th\yukari-a.jpeg new image. http://puu.sh/mOM5v/818b3b1545.jpg
17. 16th\momiji.jpeg new image http://puu.sh/mON6b/96eba8ae24.jpg
18. 16th\Flandle.jpeg new image http://puu.sh/mON7K/32de5943c3.jpg
19. 16th\ran.jpeg resize fix. 853x639 →640*480
20. 16th\yukari-b.jpeg resize fix. 853x568 →720*480

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Feerum wrote:

okay lets continue.
I will not use my overlay since its just a recheck xdd

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[Phantasm Stage]
01:27:525 (87525|3,87525|1) - According how you mapped the LN Sounds, like 01:24:051 (84051|2,84130|3) - as example, 01:27:525 (87525|3) - this LN should beginn 1/4 later, means 01:27:604 - .
fixed and changed pattern. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4633830

02:22:156 (142156|1) - Uhh shouldn't this Ln end 02:22:630 - and to follow the 1/4 sounds you could add a note then on the Blue line here 02:22:709 -
fixed and changed pattern. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4633801

04:39:898 - (Optional) Could add a note for drum.
added 1

04:59:206 (299206|0) - Bit confused here because maybe this LN is wrong or i just don't hear what you follow. When i'm right this LN should end 04:59:667 - and there should be another LN from 04:59:821 - to 05:00:129 - . I am right or wrong? xd
that is right xD fixed

05:06:283 (306283|2) - Same like here? This LN Should end 05:06:590 - and another from here to next LN? x:
fixed and changed pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4633894

05:35:821 - For this LN Part. Uhm. Some of your LN's end 1/4 beat earlier. But i think you should keep Consistency with this. I tried it and it plays kinda fine so i think following LN's should end 1/4 Beat earlier:
05:36:051 (336051|1) - end 05:36:205 -
05:36:667 (336667|2) - end 05:36:821 -
05:37:282 (337282|2) - end 05:37:436 -
05:38:513 (338513|2) - end 05:38:667 -
05:43:436 (343436|2) - end 05:43:590 -
05:44:051 (344051|1) - end 05:44:205 -
At some LN's its clearly that they end earlier, but at some i'm not sure, but it would be just logical looking at all other,
i will leave a notice for the next BN to recheck this just to be sure.
all fixed

13:29:126 - // Okay you know what. I have mod this now so many times and this is bugging me. PLEASE Tell me who is this guy xD
ZUN!! xD

AYY Thats all i have to say. Let the hype slowly beginn

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

awwwwww i'm totally so sorry
almost forgot this, after checking pending forum and i saw this ;x;
i will check this soon asap, maybe after exams
once again, i'm so sorry for delay D:

Fresh Chicken wrote:

私日本語下手なので、何か知らな部分があったら教えてください！ｗ

１２３４

*05:35:821 - As Feerum said, this LN part seems fine to me too. I think it won't be a problem.

00:04:472 (4472|1,4551|0) - 00:04:630 (4630|1,4709|2,4788|1,4867|2) - この二つはなんか違う音が聞こえるから変化があればいいだとおもいます。ノートの数どかパタンの変化とか。。
パターンのみ変更しました。 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5566277

00:20:735 - これがもっといいだと思いますけどどうですか？
fixed

これ

00:25:788 - 同じ理由です。でも上のパタンと同じですから何か変化があればいいですね
fixed.ここは反転＋パターンを少し変更しました

00:30:604 - synth sound に二つのノートを使っています、一つ追加するのが正しいと思います。例えば 00:35:656 - これみたいにｗ
うーん…no changeで。ここはViolinが主体でピアノの音が小さいです（ 00:35:656 - ははっきりピアノが聞こえます）
逆に00:35:656 - 00:36:288 - 00:36:525 - の2notesを活かすために00:35:735 (35735|3,36367|1,36604|2) - を削除しました。

00:48:525 - 一つ追加するほうはどうですか？melodyの強調をために、
fixed

02:07:946 - 今二つのノート使用するパートと同じように一つ追加するのをおすすめします。
fixed

02:29:025 (149025|2,149104|2) - 正直によくないpatternだと思います。02:27:209 (147209|3) - これが one handを作るので02:29:025 (149025|2,149104|2) - これを１や２で移動するほうがいいです。
jackを削除し、パターンを変更しました。

03:07:945 - ＜３＜３＜３

03:23:576 (203576|2) - １で移動してくればもっといいと思います for hand balance.　03:23:576 (203576|2,203655|3,203734|3) - これが全部右手にあるのてよくないと思います。
fixed

07:01:094 - 一つ追加はどうですか？06:57:094 - これと同じだと思いますけど。。。
no change. 06:57:094 - はdramに加えてmain soundがあるため2notesにしています。

09:47:724 (587724|2) - これは削除するほうがいいですよ、プレイするときも全然感じなかったし。。
fixed

13:27:672 - ここかれ出るこのおっさんは誰ですか？ㅇㅅㅇ
ZUNさんです。東方Projectを作った人です(>_<

15:40:730 (940730|3,940837|3) - このjackはいらないと思います。15:45:337 - こんなものとは違うようにはっきり感じなっかたです。15:40:730 (940730|3) - を3に移動させました。

この曲想像以上に長かった；；
返事が日本語なら嬉しいと思います！日本語の勉強もできるしｗ
修正が終わったらTwitterとかPMで教えてください！あとなんか変わった部分があれば（このmod以外）それも教えてください！

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

why I always forgoting something awww D:
I deeply sorry for the delay long away, I forgot about this and somehow get reminded by checking pending list
So i guess i'm qualifier then

Overall seems it's fine then

[Phantasm Stage]
02:59:419 (179419|0) - move to 2nd for the move balanced. kinda blank around here fixed
03:47:103 (227103|2,227260|2,227418|2,227576|2,227734|2,227892|2,228050|2,228208|2) - somehow I feel it have a different pitch than 03:46:155 (226155|2,226313|2,226471|2,226629|2,226787|2,226945|2) - changed pattern…
04:11:514 (251514|1) - move to 3rd for balance fixed
08:32:058 (512058|0,512058|3) - should be begin on 08:32:141 - fixed. and 08:32:058 - SV moved to 08:32:141 -
08:45:308 (525308|2) - imo, move to 2nd would be more better for hand balance and patterning thing fixed
10:25:307 (625307|1,625390|0) - on here have kick sound, since you only follow kick sound on here so maybe make a rearrange and add more note to fit with this kick sound added notes. 10:30:640 - here also the same
11:52:058 (712058|3,712365|3,712673|1,712827|3,712904|2,712981|3,713134|1) - add clap sound for them
11:53:288 - to 12:03:134 - seems to be need kick sound (soft-hitclap)
11:53:288 (713288|3,713596|3,713904|0,714211|2,714519|2,714827|3,715134|3,715442|1,715750|1,716058|2,716365|2,716673|2,716981|0,717288|0,717596|2,717750|1,717827|2,717904|0,718058|1,718211|2,718519|3,718827|0,719134|1,719442|0,719750|2,720058|2,720365|3,720673|1,720981|1,721288|1,721596|2,721904|1,721981|2,722058|0,722134|1,722211|2,722288|1,722365|0,722442|1,722519|0,722596|2,722673|0,722750|2,722827|1,722904|2,722981|1,723058|0) - I marked them, you only need to add soft-hitclap
no change. 11:52:058 - to 12:03:058 - is not follow kick sound. and i think also that it is important hitsound(hit-normal)
13:44:210 (824210|2,824755|1) - switch them, if you remain 13:44:210 (824210|2) - for pitch like you did for the part before fixed
15:14:319 (914319|0) - unsnapped, should be on 1/6 15:14:337 - fixed
15:55:194 (955194|2) - same pitch with 15:54:766 (954766|3,954873|3,954980|3) - fixed
17:12:936 (1032936|2) - should be 1/6 (17:12:954 - ) fixed
17:23:249 (1043249|1) - should be on 1/6 (17:23:240 - ) fixed
17:56:980 (1076980|2) - move to 2nd, reason i mentioned before fixed
17:57:520 - for outro pattern http://puu.sh/qzztA/84cfc3da30.png fixed

Well, only them left I guess so
Call me soon

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Okay, so the last thing i want to say is

11:03:636 - Change BPM from 70 to 71 fixed. and SV changed *2.14→*2.11

and don't forget to fix preview time snap on 11:04:005 - (it's unsnapped now)

And I don't know why you change preview time, 03:07:313 - in before you put it on here, it's better in my opinion fixed

and move 11:43:442 (703442|2) - to 4th for balance fixed

anymore, there is a lot of poor quality image i found
http://puu.sh/qGGo4/532b8f6926.rar download them and replace it, anymore, it's large the size and scale too but the quality is improved, however, you need to fix the storyboard after you apply these files, if you don't know how to fix it, call me for more information. fixed

that's only, call me later when you done

1. aya-c.jpeg (size changed to 770*480)
2. 5th/momiji-nitori.jpg (SB size 0.625→0.7)