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Hello Ruberusu. Sorry that it take's some time. But now i'm here to Mod your Map. I played this Map and it make's so much fun!
I really hope that i can again help you to improve your Map. Osu!Mania need's more Touhou!
So let us start
Genral
Artist: Right // Since it's the same like last time i think its right lolTitle: Right
Source: Right
Tags: Right // Oh my god so many Tags. More then last Time
AiMod: Right
Background: Whoops. Should a Background not be 1366x768 or 1024x768?
BPM/Offset:I found one Unsnapped Timing Point. http://puu.sh/jAmAa/6579c285a5.png
Other: Since Storyboard is WIP i will not check it :3 I dont even can because i have no exp with Storyboards :c
Alright, after a great Meta Check *Feerum pats himself*
Let's finally begin the Mod!
Phantasm stage
00:09:528 (9528|2,9686|3) - CTRL + G here for more balance.00:13:159 (13159|2) - Move to 2 to remove the 3 Jack on Col 3. Also flows really good to the music.
00:18:212 (18212|2) - Maybe better to 4? Fit a bit to the Melody and gives a bit balance before the 3Chord
00:26:186 - Is here a Note missing? It looks so when you Map all the time the Music with 2 Chords (Example 00:21:133 - )
00:27:212 (27212|3,27370|3) - :c . My suggestion is to 00:27:370 (27370|3,27528|1) - CTRL + G these.
When i hear it right you Mapped the Piano? with Single Notes. Then there are some notes missing. Like 00:39:607 - or 00:40:870 -
00:46:317 - here's a little suggestion that gives some balance and that flows really good to the music.
00:48:449 - heres again a little Suggestion. Maybe you should 00:48:449 (48449|2) - delete this one note. And then add here one more 00:48:528 - and 00:48:607 - here one. it would fit really great to music to the drums. And makes it similar to 00:48:212 (48212|1,48212|0,48291|3,48370|0) -
00:54:843 (54843|3) - Move to 3 for some balance.
00:58:001 (58001|1,58001|2) - Move one Col to right, because same like 00:57:528 - . Fit maybe better
01:03:528 (63528|3,63686|0) - CTRL + G makes this much better to play.
01:08:580 (68580|3,68620|2,68659|1,68699|3,68738|2,68778|1,68817|3,68857|2,68896|1) - :O These are Wrong Snapped! This sound is 1/6 and you should better Fix this
01:26:738 (86738|0) - Move to 4. Better Flow
01:30:370 - is here a note Missing?
01:31:633 - Remove one. Same like 01:30:212 - or?
01:35:422 - and 01:35:580 - missing notes to?
01:40:475 - and 01:40:633 - too? Slowly i think i just see something wrong here lol. I mean 01:30:528 - this is Mapped to. And it's same :c
Or maybe you Added the Extra Note only for the sound who includes Drums? Then there are still some Missing notes. // Ayy this parts confused me >~<
01:59:265 - Maybe add a note here on 3? I don't think it would be make it much harder to play but better flow.
02:00:686 (120686|1,120765|2) - CTRL + G and then 02:00:843 (120843|1,120922|0) - CTRL + G too, flows much better.
02:01:475 (121475|2,121554|3) - CTRL + G again more Balance and better Flow.
02:08:501 (128501|0,128580|0,128817|3,128896|3,129133|0,129212|0) - these Jacks (And the next one) I dont know, they dont really fit to the music here and don't really flow. You can keep it but i recommend to change these
02:16:317 (136317|1) - Should this not be a Normal note? see here 02:11:265 -
02:33:527 - Little Suggestion for some Balance and nice flow:
02:38:106 (158106|0,158264|1) - maybe better CTRL + G?
02:39:053 (159053|1,159211|2) - Same CTRL + G
02:45:685 (165685|1,165843|0) - CTRL + G too
Let me explain. The Jacks while the LN's plays really good. Nice idea. But at this small point you should not Jack to emphasize the Sound in the Music. To emphasize the change to the next part.
02:52:474 (172474|3) - Missing hitsound for the drum?
02:54:211 (174211|3) - Move to 3 and 02:54:369 (174369|0) - to 4, flows better
03:39:211 (219211|3) - Should this LN not be a Normal Note? I mean look here 03:29:106 -
03:39:527 (219527|2) - This LN should be then 1/2 beat shorter and 03:40:000 (220000|1) - should begin here 03:39:842 - . I am right?
I see 03:40:790 - you Follow from this point (maybe earlier) an other sound with LN but i highly recommend to do this from really this point because from here the sound is really audible and the Change would fit.
04:03:979 (243979|0,243979|1,244133|1,244133|2) - CTRL + G and it fit great to pitch
04:05:979 (245979|2) - Suggest move this to 2. Then 04:06:286 (246286|2,246286|1) - One Col to the right and 04:06:440 (246440|3) - on 2
04:30:822 (270822|0,270898|3) - CTRL + G maybe? then 04:31:051 (271051|0) - on 4.
04:57:051 - Suggestion for Pitch, maybe you like it:
05:20:589 (320589|1,320897|3) - Why here two Notes? Other have only one
05:45:434 - maybe add here a Stair?
05:48:588 - heres another suggestion for this part. Maybe you like it:
05:51:973 (351973|3) - suggest move this to 3. It this Chord has not the same pitch like the previous.
06:03:819 - just a suggestion. You Mapped all finishes in the whole song with a 3Chord. Maybe then here too?
06:04:742 - you could add here a note to emphasize the drums while LN holding.
06:22:588 (382588|0) - maybe move this to 2? To remove the 3Jack on Col 1
06:46:163 (406163|2,406320|1,406478|0) - Move all one col to right for pitch
07:47:763 (467763|3) - Should this LN not begin on the next Blue tick? Means here 07:47:846 -
07:49:763 - here the Pitch of the LN Change. The Long LN could end here and here you could add another LN for the pitch change :3
07:50:763 - Add here a note. Same like 07:50:429 -
08:07:384 (487384|0,487672|2,487961|3,488249|2) - Do you have here the right BPM or Offset? The Notes looks not correct. Check this or maybe you need to change the Beat Snap? I check it with 1/16 and then it was correct. Really suggest to check this
08:38:992 (518992|0) - maybe move this to 4 for Pitch?
08:44:159 (524159|0) - Move to 3 for Balance.
08:52:325 - Okay i hear this part now like 10 Times and i still don't understand the 3 Chords here but i think you know why you have them. So i try'd to balance it a bit better:
09:05:992 (545992|2,546159|0) - CTRL + G here.
09:09:325 (549325|3) - Move this to 3, 09:09:492 (549492|1) - to 4 and 09:09:659 (549659|3) - to 1 for Balance
09:10:659 (550659|1) - to 3, Balance.
09:19:825 (559825|1,559881|3,559936|2,559992|0) - these are Wrong Snapped. They should be in 1/8
09:22:325 (562325|1,562409|0) - maybe would CTRL + G fit here better?
09:25:159 (565159|2) - should this LN not begin here 09:24:992 - ?
09:26:075 - here 09:26:242 - here and 09:26:409 - here i still hear the sound in the melody. Maybe you can map this? Just like this: 09:25:825 -
09:31:714 (571714|2) - i think this one is a Ghost Note. I only hear two sounds. 09:31:603 (571603|2,571658|0) - these looks correct.
09:47:742 - still has the Sound which you follow in this 1/4 Part. You should add here a note.
09:49:658 (589658|2) - move to 2 for Pitch.
09:51:658 (591658|2) - to 4 for Balance.
09:52:158 (592158|0,592325|1) - CTRL + G for really nice Pitch catch.
10:01:908 (601908|2) - to 4, 10:01:992 (601992|3) - to 3 and 10:02:075 (602075|2) - to 2 for better play.
10:20:492 - until 10:31:158 - // OKAY! That i have to say. This part plays awesome!
11:04:986 (664986|1) - move to 1, 11:05:139 (665139|2) - to 2 and 11:05:447 (665447|1) - to 4 for really good pitch catch.
11:08:216 (668216|1,668370|0) - CTRL + G and 11:08:447 (668447|3,668524|2) - one Col to left. Plays really good.
11:30:370 (690370|0,690524|3) - Maybe CTRL + G here?
11:55:447 (715447|0) - Move to 2 and 11:55:524 (715524|2) - to 1 for better balance.
12:01:601 - I have to confess that i change here some pattern and don't know how it was previous.. but it is really great to play this way so i just show it to you maybe you like it xD
Screen
12:21:447 (741447|3) - maybe better to 2? http://puu.sh/jBkNw/d7db970618.png
12:34:678 (754678|2,754832|1) - Suggest to CTRL + G here for some balance.
12:39:909 (759909|0) - this one would maybe better fit on 3
12:54:524 (774524|3,774575|2,774627|1) - uhm.. o.o What exactly you mapped with this 1/6 Stair? I don't get it. Is there really need for it?
14:10:413 (850413|0) - This one you can move to 4 and 14:10:628 (850628|1) - to 1 because this is already same with the next 4 LN's
14:24:128 (864128|0,864342|1) - Same Suggestion like above. Same pitch so you could change them :3 Means 14:24:128 (864128|0) - to 4 and 14:24:342 (864342|1) - to 1
14:31:413 - Add here a note? Drum + Finish. Would fit good.
14:43:467 (883467|3) - This one is Wrong Snapped. You follow the Piano. This one should be here 14:43:521 -
14:51:556 (891556|0,891771|1) - well, again same suggestion like the previous LN's
15:17:753 (917753|0) - I'm pretty sure this one is Wrong Snapped. It should be on the next 1/6 Beat Snap Line.
15:24:610 (924610|2) - Again This one is Wrong Snapped. Should be on the next 1/6 Beat Snap Line.
15:52:199 (952199|1,952306|2) - Maybe Jack these? Same pitch.
16:06:393 (966393|2,967389|2) - Just a Suggestion to move these LN's to 2. Heres a really audible different pitch to the previous one.
17:16:369 (1036369|3) - This one is Wrong Snapped. It should be on the next 1/6 Beat Snap Line.
17:23:226 (1043226|1) - This one is Wrong Snapped. It should be again on the nest 1/6 Beat Snap Line.
I DID IT! Finished!
Ruberusu this song is awesome. The Beatmap play's awesome and i really hope my Mod helps you to improve. If you have any questions to parts of my Mod please don't be shy to ask me. I would really like to help you to improve this Map ^_^
I wish you good luck with this Map