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Hello Ruberusu! The time has come to move this Map to Qualify.
I'm here to check everything again, should be everything alright we can move this Map into Qualify.
Let's hope it will not be too much.. xD
Genral
Artist: RightTitle: Right
Source: Right
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Alright. Here i have something to mention. For this i will use a Box
BPM/Offset and Greenline check
Other: SB Looks fine, Hitsounds are Fine.I found some Greenlines that looks not right snapped. I would like to ask you if i'm right or you put the Greenlines on purpose like they are.
Following Greenlines :
08:10:553 -
08:11:258 -
08:11:692 -
08:12:218 -
08:15:747 -
08:22:875 -
08:25:205 -
08:28:734 -
Like you can see here the Greenlines are slightly off. Thats not an unrankable issue like Loctav told me as long they don't influence the Map but i recommend to fix all these.
All other looks fine for me.
Following Greenlines :
08:10:553 -
08:11:258 -
08:11:692 -
08:12:218 -
08:15:747 -
08:22:875 -
08:25:205 -
08:28:734 -
Like you can see here the Greenlines are slightly off. Thats not an unrankable issue like Loctav told me as long they don't influence the Map but i recommend to fix all these.
All other looks fine for me.
Phantasm stage
Are you really sure that you want to name it "Phantasm stage" and not "Phantasm Stage" ? Its you last chance00:13:159 (13159|1) - should be here a whistle sound?
00:46:870 (46870|2,47028|2) - Move one of them to 2 because of different pitch.
01:03:370 (63370|1,63370|3,63449|2,63528|1,63528|0) - I'm a bit confused here. You have Mapped here the Drums but 00:58:317 (58317|1,58370|2,58422|1,58475|0) - here you did map the 1/6 Sounds. Wouldn't it be better to be consistent and only take one of them?
01:16:633 (76633|2) - Add W hitsound?
03:19:790 (199790|3) - Move to 3 and 03:19:948 (199948|2) - to 4 to continue your Jack pattern here.
03:27:211 (207211|0,207369|0) - You could add clap here
04:49:051 (289051|0) - Missing C hitsound
05:26:280 (326280|3) - Move this to 2? For the Guitar Pitch change beacuse 05:25:973 (325973|3,326049|2,326126|3,326203|2) - these belong together and 05:26:280 (326280|3,326357|0,326434|1,326511|0) - these
06:31:126 - When i listen closely to the Music it seems here is a note missing?
06:47:899 - unnecessary Greenline? It has exactly the same settings like the last one. Same Volume, same Sampleset, same SV?
07:47:096 (467096|0) - Mh.. should this LN end 07:47:679 - ?
07:51:096 (471096|2) - This LN should end 07:51:679 - ?
12:22:678 (742678|3,742832|2) - CTRL + G here and 12:23:139 (743139|3,743293|2) - CTRL + G here to remove 12:22:370 (742370|3,742524|3,742678|3) - , the only place in this Mash where you have a 3 Jack. For better Balance and playability c:
16:02:410 (962410|1) - Should this LN end 16:03:281 - ?
16:10:376 (970376|1) - And this should end 16:11:248 -
Call me back when everything is done