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Normal00:28:524 (3,4) - in general you should avoid direct 1/2 rythm in a normal. In this case i think it fits better if you play the slider first and then the circle (more consistent rythm for a newer player aswell)
true, fixed00:30:190 (3) - you can do the same here as above
keep for diversityYou use way too many NC in this part try cutting them down
changed NCs to every 2 downbeats instead of 100:36:024 (1) -
this straight line looks rly wierd. Mb move the red point a bit to the left. (for that you should first move 00:35:190 (2) - a bit upwards and follow with 00:35:607 (3) - with a higher drop than before
fixed00:36:857 (2,3) - mb change 2 into a repeat slider? As it stand this ~160° edge looks wierd. (so we can lower the amount of "1/2 slider + note" patterns aswell)
the sharper angle is a good way to complement the change in vocals imo. also, i couldn't get a smooth flow using the repeat slider w/o some ugly overlaps00:40:190 (2,3) - first slider then circle feels better fere aswell
i want to use 1 slider to capture both of the whistle sounds in the song00:47:690 (1,2,3) - put those into a circular pattern
i did something similar to make flow more curved00:52:482 - its wierd that you dont play the finish and let a reverse slider do it
lol yes it is00:54:357 (1) - change this to a single note. Works better imo
i like the slider fade better01:05:607 (4) - i strongly belive this should be changed into 2 clickable notes. 01:05:815 - this needs to be played in order for 01:06:232 - to have an impact. Pls concider this
i was worried about the difficulty spike, but i think you're correct. changed to 2 circlesI remind you here again to work on your NC. I m too suck to help you with NC but sooner or later you ll get them modded away, so you might wanna start now or smth.
01:31:857 (3) - change this to a 1/1 slider so the space between those two 01:31:857 (3,1) - isnt as akward an misleading (there is roughly a 3/2 pause since you dont fully play the sldier end)
a 1/1 slider sounds strange to me w/ the 1/2 spacing between slider end and the next note. i'll wait and get more opinions on this01:44:357 (1,2,3) - dont JUST make this a straight line.. You cuold try to tilt it a bit. IN ADDITION: i wouldnt keep it liek that. Again you have this wierd rythm in the background which end on a red tick. i would try to change this pattern to a brown single note (as it is atm) and then put a 1/2 slider followed up by a normal circle and then ofc the great payoff circle on the red tick. Like this guid the player into the red tick smoother since you let them play a slider.
good idea01:47:690 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I would delete this and map it less dense. WHat i mean by that is: You have this rly chilled part ver here (chill enough to put a pause actually) so you should keep it relativly speaking even more hcill than before even tho its a normal dif. You map would feel more "alaive" aswell since you change up your used pattern aswell (its a gift from the song rly). (tip: dont just full map the vocals.)
agreed. that's what I was planning to do, and then for some reason I didn't do it lol. remapped with fancy sliders02:01:857 (2,3) - same as before
fixed02:07:274 (4) - tillt this slightly to the side and fix this blanket 02:07:690 (1) - . It also adds a better flow to it
fixed02:08:524 (2,3) - same
fixed02:21:857 (2) - personally i wouldnt blanket this.
reworked the flow02:32:690 (1) - now this slider is kinda random. Mb make it smoother, more curvy
fixedi would have put a circle here 02:38:315 - and a 1/1 slider here 02:38:524 -
sure02:48:107 (2) - uh.. mb change it to curve to the other side ?
remapped this part03:11:857 (3) - somehow move this a bit mroe away?
its fine03:16:232 (3,4) - change these to a 1/2 slider and a circle
doesn't follow music as well03:22:899 (3,4) - same here
^03:24:357 (1) - this doesnt look very pretty
did something more normal, i can't make nice sliders :/03:38:315 (2) - make this a normal slider, move this 1/2 steps back and add a circle here 03:38:940 (3) -
doesn't represent music as well, but i'll work on making my rhythm less awkward to read03:48:940 (3,1,2) - this is kinda wierd aswell :/
:/03:48:940 (3) - chaneg this to a normal circle, add a 1/1 slider here 03:49:149 - , and a 1/1 slider here 03:49:774 - and ofc remove the 1/2 in this short part
(or change the scond 1/2 slider to a normal circle and follow it up with a 1/2 slider here 03:50:190 - )
keep since i feel the 1/2 sliders add more intensity03:50:190 - these slider are wierd aswell
made sthis one straigthAgain dont forget to fix NC
yepHardmb increase od to 6 (cause gud map)
idk... bumped up to 5.5 for now01:47:690 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - mb map this less dense aswell
i'll think about this, a little too lazy right now to change it 03:10:190 (3,4) - mvoe these a bit farther away. they are "nearly touching" eachother
fixed03:24:357 (1,3) - make this blanket a bit smoother on 3 (use 2 white points)
fixed03:47:065 (4,5,6) - is the slightly missmatched triple intentional?
nope, fixed03:55:607 (4) - move this a bit down and to the right mb
keep so it flows into 03:55:815 (1) - betterthis one is pretty nice, i can hardly complain
thx!It look sliek you had fun mapping it !!!
Insane00:31:649 (4,5) - this is a bit to sharp compared to the rest o the start. Mb move 5 a bit closer?
fixed00:44:982 (4,5) - same (although this one will have to be fixed in another way since you have the whole thing inside a pattern)
Look at the others aswell i wont point all of them out
i think i fixed all of them01:10:086 (4) - (this is just me being picky) You can move this just a square up then you will have this ilusion of a curve in the triple which would look prettier.
i think the linear triple is better otherwise the flow between 01:09:774 (2,3) - feels strange imo01:16:649 (3,4) - have this slightyl curbed aswell so it "harmonizes" with 01:17:482 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - ( i m not even sure what i m saying, just dont have them blantly linear or smth)
fixed01:19:149 (6) - emphasis should be on this and not on 01:18:940 (5) - . Try to space 6 more and 5 less (swap the spacings in a way or smth)
i liked the anti-jump, but i changed it to a more normal spacing instead01:22:690 (1,2) - i think a higher spacing on 2 would be cooler :^)
hmm, bumped up spacing by 0.1501:47:690 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - again the same. Tryto tune it down. (although its kinda ok..ok nvm its ok)
i tried to use lower spacing instead of lower note density, so hopefully its ok :p01:49:045 (5,1,2) - i played this and i got rly surprised. The 172 repeat slider doesnt flow well into the low spaced 1/2 single notes imo
i'll get some more opinions on this, for now i lowered spacing between slider and note03:21:857 (4) - move this a TINY bit away so its slide rend has more space inside the blanket
fixed03:24:357 (1) - those are usually kinda meh btu ok
i suck at making sliders x.xmap looks nice overall, the normal needs some work doe
good luck :O
thx for the detailed mod! applied most suggestions!