NeBuSC2 wrote:

Hey, feel free to ignore this mod, i'm not good mapper, but i love this map <3

00:59:767 (13) - i think this empty place don't fit, maybe double small slider instead of long one and empty circle? I'm not sure if you're looking at the same thing I'm looking at but the sound is repeating and I find this to be okay.
01:29:842 (1,2) - maybe one slider because its slow part with only circles [?] 3 different keys playing = 3 circles. One slider repeating or 3 sliders with mute end could work but then it'd be slightly inconsistent with what I've mapped already so far. I like the idea of having note note note until the violins come, that's where the sliders should be imo.
01:52:342 (2) - in my opinion it looks better without circle, but its not needed to remove this one. The circle is there to get rid of the awkward pause and to keep the map moving. I know this part should be slow, but I don't' want it to be 'dead' slow.

theres nothing to change actually, this map is perfect in my opinion. GL HF, hope to see this ranked soon! <3

Azulae wrote:

04:25:417 (6) - Is that a mistake (hitsound) ? Yup. Found a few others near that section to be fixed as well.

And what is wrong with the Preview point ? Intended to be at the slow part.

@ Side's 11/17

Most of the mod was done through IRC so you should have most of these changes

00:57:292 (8,1) - 8 should use SC: 58 and 59 on tail. 1 should use 26 (cuz I guess those are the long notes) or 60 if you feel a short note is better

00:57:892 (6,1) - 6 should use 55 and 56 on tail and 1 should use 25 for long note 57 for short note. Your preference.

00:58:492 (6,1) - 6 should use 54 56 on tail and 1 should use 24 for long note which makes sense here.

00:59:842 - 20 works here. Changed to 54 for shorter sound.

01:00:142 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - This part is tricky as fug cuz the scales go lower than the hitsounds you have and I don't think you wanna add MORE hitsounds :v. Technically you can improvise this. I made a meh improv by doing the following (going in order): 49, 51, 54, 56, 57, 56, 54, 51, 57, 54, 56, 54. I'll bring this up in the next point though because....

That next part at 01:01:342 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Should technically be hitsounded since you wanted to emphasize 01:02:542 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - The problem is 01:01:642 - Should be A in the 2nd octave (as in A-22 in that piano thingy) which uh..you don't have. For now I'll use the long sound 13, but I'm sure you wanted me to use the shorter sound so we'll come back to these improv areas. I could improv here too but uh...I'm still not sure what you wanna do. I still need to know what you want in terms of keysounds whether it's to follow the piano truly or decorate it with harmonies and improv in the less intense parts. If you're not sure then don't mess with this 00:59:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) -

01:03:142 (9,10,11,12,1) - 9 is right but the rest should also be descending so (starting from 9) it should be 59, 57, 54, 52, 27.

01:04:942 (5,6,7,8,9) - SC:50, 49, 50, 51, 52.

01:05:692 (5) - 59 Changed to 25 for longer sound.

01:06:142 (5,6,7) - SC:50, 49, 50, 51, 52.

UUUUGH Man You should really add the lower notes. There's so much I can't hitsound because it's missing that lower A


Actually that's probably what took up the most of my time since I had to map around that missing note (as well as maybe the B right after basically what would be 48 and 47)

I'll stop here for now I really wanna get that sorted out because I'd rather not have to improv and follow the song personally and based on how most of the map is layered out it seems you do too so uh...Yeah don't kds this just find me in game and we'll try to get those missing hitsounds added somehow because they're pretty damn important. Also I'm out of time anyway :v Fixed all of em save for the improv..

Karen wrote:

delete these green lines since no sv changes on them, change sampleset on the red lines Fixed
04:52:642 - Fixed
04:55:115 - Fiixed
04:58:958 - and is this red line here really useful? there is no sound after it. Removed green line, applied it to Red line like I did with the others. Yes it is necessary because BPM change.

04:55:115 - 04:55:904 (1,2,3) - timing sounds a bit off here, please ask others to confirm it.

ask the previous BN(monsterata) for a rebubble then call me back.

Spaghetti wrote:

I LOVE YOU

NXTKitKat wrote:

Why does it show drain time 4:53 in beatmap score/listing? I thought it should be 5 minutes or up?

NXTKitKat wrote:

Why does it show drain time 4:53 in beatmap score/listing? I thought it should be 5 minutes or up?

MillhioreF wrote:

Hey Kroytz! Very cool map, just a couple things I'd like to see taken care of before this moves into the leaderboards.

[Final Moment]
As -GN mentioned, the alternating between piano and normal hitsounds is a bit jarring to keep rhythm on in almost all skins. It may be better if you turned the piano sounds into additions rather than replacing hitnormal, but at the same time I didn't find it -too- difficult to play, so I'd like more discussion about this.

MillhioreF wrote:

Hey Kroytz! Very cool map, just a couple things I'd like to see taken care of before this moves into the leaderboards.

[Final Moment]
As -GN mentioned, the alternating between piano and normal hitsounds is a bit jarring to keep rhythm on in almost all skins. It may be better if you turned the piano sounds into additions rather than replacing hitnormal, but at the same time I didn't find it -too- difficult to play, so I'd like more discussion about this. I can either destroy my keysounds by adding in a soft-hitnormal/feedback underneath each one of them ruining the beauty this song has to offer, or destroy the raw hitsounding by applying these to additionals. A third option would be to replace all these sound files with a different keyboard set (ie a harpsichord) but then it wouldn't sound proper to the music. There should be a 3rd option alongside Sampleset and Additions to layer hitsounds so problems like this regarding feedback wouldn't occur. It'd also promote creative hitsounding while not faulting the player but currently this doesn't exist and the only way to do so is to apply to additions or hitnormal, both which suck for my map. I'll keep them as is and to players who want a good score on this map, turn off custom hitsounds.

00:24:367 (3) - This note is overmapped. Please change (2) and (4) into a slider, since there's no sound in the music where this note is at all. Removed (3), changed (2,4) into slider, deleted unused timing section.
00:29:092 (4) - This slider is obnoxiously loud because of all the drum sounds, lower the volume on it or change the sounding maybe? I don't think it should pose a problem when it follows the music, but I'll agree in the sense that the 'loudness' comes from the unexpected DRrRrrRRs off the repeats. I removed all but the first Finish on the red tick so it isn't so' jarring' as you would put it.
00:54:142 (2) - Having this slider end in the opposite direction of the next stream is kinda weird, I'd suggest Ctrl+G here. Good suggestion, fixed.
01:13:792 (5) - Should be a finish on the head of this slider to match the other drum sounds in this section. Good catch, fixed.
01:22:567 (4,1) - I really don't like this sudden spacing increase right here, I think it would be better with the same spacing as the rest of the miniature streamjumps in this pattern (maybe a tiny bit more, but not with this big of a gap) Toned down the jump a bit. Should be easier to hit while maintaining emphasis.
01:52:342 (2) - Also overmapped. I'm okay with putting silenced sliderends on nothing, since those play well enough and are part of the meta now, but putting down a circle just to fill the gap between sliders isn't cool. Removed the note, removed unused timing section.
02:00:142 (1,2,3,4,5) - Taking a close listen at this part (on 50% and 25% speed) it seems like these should all be placed 1/16 earlier. That's pretty weird (and may or may not require an additional timing section) so I'd like other opinions on this section. It may be better to turn it into a repeat slider or something. It's actually snapped 1/6 prior to where I started my 1/4's but the sliders are in 1/3 while being 1/6 apart from each other. It should start 02:00:092 -. I basically moved my sliders across on the timeline 1/6 backwards, and resnapped the 1/4's to 1/3's. Talk to me about how this plays out and whether a different rhythm should be used or if this should be taken out altogether. Idk why xi made this different than 03:36:292 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - but I personally feel as if it should remain 1/4's for playability's sake. Though, this alternative isn't bad I suppose either.
02:22:942 (2) - I don't really like the sharp jump from (1) to (2) or the way the flow is kind of awkward from going (2) to (3), so I'd recommend repositioning this slider to be more friendly. I don't like how your suggestion goes against my idea of placing both repeat sliders inside the stream loops, but the flow I'll agree isn't the greatest, so I made (2) a better friend to (1) and (3).
02:58:042 (9,10,11) -, 02:58:567 (16,1,2) - Putting both of these sharp curves in a row causes my hand to cramp awkwardly every time I play it. That's not a problem on its own if it's the sort of difficulty you're going for, but the rest of the map plays so smoothly that I thought it was worth mentioning in case it wasn't intended. I'll leave this alone for now.
03:15:442 (1,2) - Is there a reason the spacing between these two notes is slightly lower? Looks like a mistake. Fixed.
03:22:342 (13,14,15,16,1) - I really don't like how heavy the spacing gets here, the speeding up stream is cool but the end is just a little too mean for my tastes. I'd at LEAST like for you to lower the spacing of the final leap to the slider (the distance between (14) and (15) is plenty enough for it imo), but it would be nice to have more skilled players weigh in on this. This build-up into slider stream is a toned down version of the 2nd chorus in regards to spacing. Also factor slider leniency which helps the player reach the slider. I don't space this because I hate the player, I do it because I follow the music ^^.
03:31:042 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really like the hitsounding on this star, the alternation between normal hitsounds and the custom (generally quieter) piano sound is a bit jarring since the song's piano is pretty static. I see your point, made them all into whistles.
04:39:217 (14,15,16,1) - This whole stream is kinda lol, I can't really play it but it feels ok for the most part. The spacing increase does feel better than the first one though since it's already wide and doesn't get much wider, but I'd still like to see the last couple of notes (or at least the jump to the slider) nerfed slightly. Surprisingly this plays well (lol) but I'll have to go back to what I said with the former jump in the sense that slider leniency helps the player. And because the 2nd chorus is much more intense than the first, of course the spacing will be that much larger (but really, compared to the first chorus, it isn't all that bigger, but the intensity is more evident here).
04:47:842 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same hitsounding issue as last time. Turned these all into whistles as well.

To tell the truth, I wasn't a big fan of this map when I started modding it, but the way you manage to make the streams and even some of the sliders follow the music is absolutely excellent.
Call me back for a bubble after you've cleared up and discussed the points made here!

Key

1. Green means my opinion or aesthetic
2. Purple means semi important
3. Red means very important

General

1. 03:59:917 (1) - Maybe change the preview point to here. Another good spot to put it could be here 02:04:717 (1) -

Final Moment

1. 03:22:642 (1) - Sliders at the end of this are somewhat hard to read sometimes, and it would be stupid if someone were to FC through the streams and lose it due to these. Maybe you could slow down the slider velocity and make slider art that doesn't overlap itself.
   
   
2. 04:39:442 (1) - There is a chance that the player could be jumpy due to the recent extremely difficult spaced streams. I would suggest lowering the SV and recreating another slider art that doesn't overlap itself.
   
   
   
3. 02:00:092 (1,2,3,4,5) Maybe change this pattern to this because it's how most people would be used to playing star patterns "isn't that how like any preschool kid is taught to draw a star anyway?" -Side
   
   
   
4. 02:59:692 (15) - Random slider in this particular stream pattern, maybe change to another sharp turn. (I know you use this in other patterns but it was the only one I saw for this stream)

1. 02:00:092 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sounds very weird to me. In my opinion shorten them by one 1/12 tick fits better, I think.

"fuck you Kroytz" - Cookiezi 2015

Desperate-kun wrote:

I am not able to play this map at all, but I have to say I have never seen such beautiful looking longstreams before (not sure if Blue Zenith is the same level) and your sliderart and overall atmosphere are beautiful too! The only thing that bothers me a bit is the section at the beginning (not counting the slow intro) before the long streams start. The rhythm and 1/4-jumps seem a bit too messy (and too generic) there compared to the rest of the map, imo it would have been much more professional to simplify it for the sake of the whole map having simplistic rhythm and patterns. Oh well, that's complaining at a highest level here, good luck with this great map!

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Guys, you know, that's just convert slider to stream tool ;w;
A TOOL CAN'T MAKE MORE BEAUTIFUL THINGS THAN THINGS MADE BY HAND

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Guys, you know, that's just convert slider to stream tool ;w;
A TOOL CAN'T MAKE MORE BEAUTIFUL THINGS THAN THINGS MADE BY HAND

Asphyxia wrote:

Disqualified on mappers' request, there will be a storyboard.

arviejhay wrote:

i will throw all my stars if there's a storyboard, wait. . who's going to be the storyboarder?

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

best of the best <3 10/10
it will have storyboard? 100/10

Rilene wrote:

Storyboard when?
Ranked when?

domSaur wrote:

Rilene wrote:

Storyboard when?
Ranked when?