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YuNa - Torawarebito

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Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

Leorda wrote:

Hi

[File]
Your bg (KQTOP0807.jpg) need to resize to 800x600 (current 800x566), and the bg (SGDE_kabegami02_SD.jpg) need to resize to 1024x768 (current 960x768)Tried to resize but it eather gets too wide or too tall

[Joker]
There's some lot spacing issue in AIMod. Open AIMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) and make sure the distance snap is on. Fix that

00:17:004 (1) - Unsnapped LOLXD Fixed
00:36:114 (1) - Move the new combo to 00:36:983 (2)?Fixed
00:50:027 (6) - Mix it up with clap and finish looks awful, remove one??Done
01:14:375 (1,2,3,4) - The pattern are screw upNo
01:25:136 (1) - Move backward to white tick and extend??Finished

[Ace]
01:28:500 (T) - Mark "Inherit previous timing settings" in Timing and Control PointsDid that

00:48:288 (5) - New combo
00:55:244 (7) - ^Done
00:57:310 (11,12,13,14) - Can you combine this object into one slider??? A bit confusingNo
01:10:897 (6) - New comboDone
01:32:200 (6) - ^Done
01:35:244 (11) - ^[/color]Done

[Queen]
00:18:505 (5,6) - Spacing error
01:25:464 (3,4) - ^[/color]^
01:41:334 (1) - Cut short to 01:42:204?Sure

[King]
Some lots of object is unsnapped, pls snap it (Timing -> Resnap all notes -> Yes)Did it

[Killer Queen]
There's some lot spacing issue in AIMod. Open AIMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) and make sure the distance snap is on. Fix thatI'll let Teras deal with it, his map.

01:06:333 ~ 01:06:985 (x) - Feels empty~

Nice song
STAR
[color=#FF0000]
Thanks~
Tatsuo
575 posts
Joined January 2009
Tatsuo
I keep getting "loading audio error" when importing your beatmap. Would you mind a full submission? Thank you.
PM me when you have fixed it.
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

I keep getting "loading audio error" when importing your beatmap. Would you mind a full submission? Thank you.
PM me when you have fixed it.
Strange, I just redownloaded and everything worked perfect. :o

Download: Yuna - Torawarebito (Oyashiro Beatrice) [Killer Queen].osu
Tatsuo
575 posts
Joined January 2009
Tatsuo
Finally I get to mod this~

[Overall]
BPM and Offset are fine.
You can remove Yuna from your tags since it's the artist name. You can also remove techno from the tags because that can be set as a genre.
Randomly placed beats for Oyashiro Beatrice difficulties. It's not bad... It just lacks fun. You need to toss in some beatmapping techniques in there. Still quite a bit of spacing errors, but Teras is so keen on mapping without Distance Snap. Silly Teras. I liked your map anyways.

[Joker]
This is okay.

[Ace]
This is good.

[Queen]
This was boring and felt generally the same as [Ace]. Spice this up a bit by placing more hit circles/sliders.

[King]
Same thing as [Queen]. All your difficulties (excluding [Joker] seem to feel as though they are around normal, with King being a slightly more difficult normal difficulty. They all need some style to give some spice to your maps. Make it more fun and playable.

[Killer Queen]
Good map Teras. Then again, all your maps are interesting.

Errr... Ah, I'll toss a star your way. Just be sure to make it more fun to play. Good luck on mapping this and making it more interesting.
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Finally I get to mod this~

[Overall]
BPM and Offset are fine.
You can remove Yuna from your tags since it's the artist name. You can also remove techno from the tags because that can be set as a genre.
Randomly placed beats for Oyashiro Beatrice difficulties. It's not bad... It just lacks fun. You need to toss in some beatmapping techniques in there. (Jeez, you think distance snap gives a damn?) Still quite a bit of spacing errors, but Teras is so keen on mapping without Distance Snap. Silly Teras. I liked your map anyways.

[Joker]
This is okay.( :) )

[Ace]
This is good.( :D )

[Queen]
This was boring and felt generally the same as [Ace]. Spice this up a bit by placing more hit circles/sliders.(Hope you like the additions)

[King]
Same thing as [Queen]. All your difficulties (excluding [Joker] seem to feel as though they are around normal, with King being a slightly more difficult normal difficulty. They all need some style to give some spice to your maps. Make it more fun and playable. (Go pick on Teras about this)

[Killer Queen]
Good map Teras. Then again, all your maps are interesting.

Errr... Ah, I'll toss a star your way. Just be sure to make it more fun to play. Good luck on mapping this and making it more interesting.
Tatsuo
575 posts
Joined January 2009
Tatsuo
SPOILER

Oyashiro Beatrice wrote:

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Finally I get to mod this~

[Overall]
BPM and Offset are fine.
You can remove Yuna from your tags since it's the artist name. You can also remove techno from the tags because that can be set as a genre.
Randomly placed beats for Oyashiro Beatrice difficulties. It's not bad... It just lacks fun. You need to toss in some beatmapping techniques in there. (Jeez, you think distance snap gives a damn?) Still quite a bit of spacing errors, but Teras is so keen on mapping without Distance Snap. Silly Teras. I liked your map anyways.

[Joker]
This is okay.( :) )

[Ace]
This is good.( :D )

[Queen]
This was boring and felt generally the same as [Ace]. Spice this up a bit by placing more hit circles/sliders.(Hope you like the additions)

[King]
Same thing as [Queen]. All your difficulties (excluding [Joker] seem to feel as though they are around normal, with King being a slightly more difficult normal difficulty. They all need some style to give some spice to your maps. Make it more fun and playable. (Go pick on Teras about this)

[Killer Queen]
Good map Teras. Then again, all your maps are interesting.

Errr... Ah, I'll toss a star your way. Just be sure to make it more fun to play. Good luck on mapping this and making it more interesting.
I was unaware that Teras mapped King. I should have read the description on the first page. My bad~~ I will SURELY bug Teras about this lol~ I'll look at your map again later~
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

[Overall]
BPM and Offset are fine.
You can remove Yuna from your tags since it's the artist name. You can also remove techno from the tags because that can be set as a genre.
Randomly placed beats for Oyashiro Beatrice difficulties. It's not bad... It just lacks fun. You need to toss in some beatmapping techniques in there. (Jeez, you think distance snap gives a damn?) Still quite a bit of spacing errors, but Teras is so keen on mapping without Distance Snap. Silly Teras. I liked your map anyways.

[Joker]
This is okay.( :) )

[Ace]
This is good.( :D )

[Queen]
This was boring and felt generally the same as [Ace]. Spice this up a bit by placing more hit circles/sliders.(Hope you like the additions)

[King]
Same thing as [Queen]. All your difficulties (excluding [Joker] seem to feel as though they are around normal, with King being a slightly more difficult normal difficulty. They all need some style to give some spice to your maps. Make it more fun and playable. (Go pick on Teras about this)

[Killer Queen]
Good map Teras. Then again, all your maps are interesting.

Errr... Ah, I'll toss a star your way. Just be sure to make it more fun to play. Good luck on mapping this and making it more interesting.
[/quote][/spoilerbox]

Nooo. Oyashiro. You shouldn't have said it D:

:3
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Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras
SPOILER

Oyashiro Beatrice wrote:

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Finally I get to mod this~

[Overall]
BPM and Offset are fine.
You can remove Yuna from your tags since it's the artist name. You can also remove techno from the tags because that can be set as a genre.
Randomly placed beats for Oyashiro Beatrice difficulties. It's not bad... It just lacks fun. You need to toss in some beatmapping techniques in there. (Jeez, you think distance snap gives a damn?) Still quite a bit of spacing errors, but Teras is so keen on mapping without Distance Snap. Silly Teras. I liked your map anyways.

[Joker]
This is okay.( :) )

[Ace]
This is good.( :D )

[Queen]
This was boring and felt generally the same as [Ace]. Spice this up a bit by placing more hit circles/sliders.(Hope you like the additions)

[King]
Same thing as [Queen]. All your difficulties (excluding [Joker] seem to feel as though they are around normal, with King being a slightly more difficult normal difficulty. They all need some style to give some spice to your maps. Make it more fun and playable. (Go pick on Teras about this)

[Killer Queen]
Good map Teras. Then again, all your maps are interesting.

Errr... Ah, I'll toss a star your way. Just be sure to make it more fun to play. Good luck on mapping this and making it more interesting.
I will not bug Teras about this.[/quote]

:3

Noes, kay. Will try to remap it.. Need to avoid it turning I... gawd
ShanaTan
184 posts
Joined August 2009
ShanaTan
General~
-Although the spacing is irregular at some parts I feel like it's still very much playable so I'm not gonna complain about that.
-Feels like there are some lacking of hitsounds? =P

Joker~
Seems fine although a bit one going? Since it's an easy difficuilty I won't complain anyways =P
01:21:331 (1) - Stack it better?

Ace~
00:56:549 (4,5,6,7,8) - Fix the spacing here, the spacing between the beats is the same although between some beats there are 3/4 ticks and others 2/4 which makes it confusing.

Queen~
00:18:505 (5,6) - Fix the spacing?
00:29:810 (7,1) - Stack it better?
01:07:855 (2,3) - You might want to increase the spacing between here by a little to avoid confusion.
01:21:768 (2,3) - Why does the spacing here differ from 01:22:638 (4,5,6,7) ?
01:24:812 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, fix the spacing here, the spacing between the beats is the same although they differ by 3/4 or 2/4 ticks, fix please.

King~
00:20:897 (2) - Stack it better?
01:06:114 (6) - Stack it better?

Killer Queen~
00:39:376 (5) - Stack it better?
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Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras

Nekoo[] wrote:

King~
00:20:897 (2) - Stack it better? I like how it looks already. So no :o
01:06:114 (6) - Stack it better? ^

Killer Queen~^
00:39:376 (5) - Stack it better?
Download: Yuna - Torawarebito (Oyashiro Beatrice) [Killer Queen].osu
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

Nekoo[] wrote:

General~
-Although the spacing is irregular at some parts I feel like it's still very much playable so I'm not gonna complain about that.
-Feels like there are some lacking of hitsounds? =P

Joker~
Seems fine although a bit one going? Since it's an easy difficuilty I won't complain anyways =P
01:21:331 (1) - Stack it better? Done that

Ace~
00:56:549 (4,5,6,7,8) - Fix the spacing here, the spacing between the beats is the same although between some beats there are 3/4 ticks and others 2/4 which makes it confusing. I'm listening to the song and there's a part where the bass booms, that's what they are there for so, sorry, can't fix it :(

Queen~
00:18:505 (5,6) - Fix the spacing? Did as best as distance snap would let me
00:29:810 (7,1) - Stack it better? Ok
01:07:855 (2,3) - You might want to increase the spacing between here by a little to avoid confusion. Hope it's fixed
01:21:768 (2,3) - Why does the spacing here differ from 01:22:638 (4,5,6,7) ? It was from an erlier update, fixed
01:24:812 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, fix the spacing here, the spacing between the beats is the same although they differ by 3/4 or 2/4 ticks, fix please. Matching the final drumroll since it dosen't stay in 1/4 or 2/4 ticks all the way through I had to add on both, won't change. :o

King~
00:20:897 (2) - Stack it better? Leaving to Teras
01:06:114 (6) - Stack it better?

Killer Queen~
00:39:376 (5) - Stack it better?^
ShanaTan
184 posts
Joined August 2009
ShanaTan
I'm not asking you to remove them I'm just telling you that you just NEED to fix the spacing there like this for example:

Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

Nekoo[] wrote:

I'm not asking you to remove them I'm just telling you that you just NEED to fix the spacing there like this for example:

Oh, ok will do ^w^ *Sorry for the misunderstandment :? *
Clare
530 posts
Joined October 2009
Clare
hi~
good song!
[Joker]
01:21:331 (T) - You have to line on 01:21:114

[Ace]
00:16:984 (T) - Delete this green line,he did not use
00:25:679 (3) - Left one grid

[Queen]
00:16:984 (T) - Delete this green line,he did not use
01:00:028 (5) - remove whistle? It sounds strange,i think
01:08:507 (5,6) - Spacing
01:22:421 (5) - ^

[King]
00:16:984 (T) - Delete this green line,he did not use
00:44:817 (T) - Put this line in 00:44:701
01:28:307 (T) - Put this line in 01:00:353
01:28:307 (T) - Put this line in 01:28:307

[Killer Queen]
00:16:984 (T) - Delete this green line,he did not use
00:49:592 (3,4,5) - Spacing
01:21:331(T) - Put this line in 01:21:223

star!
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

Clare wrote:

hi~
good song! :D
[Joker]
01:21:331 (T) - You have to line on 01:21:114 Done that~

[Ace]
00:16:984 (T) - Delete this green line,he did not use DELETED
00:25:679 (3) - Left one grid Done

[Queen]
00:16:984 (T) - Delete this green line,he did not use DELETED
01:00:028 (5) - remove whistle? It sounds strange,i think Changed to Cymbal
01:08:507 (5,6) - Spacing Spacing is ok
01:22:421 (5) - ^ See above

[King] Teras's map so he fixes this
00:16:984 (T) - Delete this green line,he did not use
00:44:817 (T) - Put this line in 00:44:701
01:28:307 (T) - Put this line in 01:00:353
01:28:307 (T) - Put this line in 01:28:307

[Killer Queen] Teras's map so he fixes this
00:16:984 (T) - Delete this green line,he did not use
00:49:592 (3,4,5) - Spacing
01:21:331(T) - Put this line in 01:21:223

star!
Mok
1,226 posts
Joined August 2009
Mok
Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3

[General]
Why Yuna is a tag too?
[King] and [Killer Queen] haven't the same tags as the others. Fix it.
Maybe it wil be better if you have all bg at the same size (800x600).
Try to make Kiai Time all the same in all diffs.

[Joker]
00:18:723 (3) - 1 grid right.
00:23:070 (4) - Spacing.
00:30:027 (4) - ^.
01:02:636 (3) - Adjust this slider.
01:07:418 - Add a hitcircle.
01:30:027 - 01:40:027 - You can use sliders instead of some beats.
01:40:027 (2) - Offscreen.

[Ace]
00:18:723 (3) - Spacing + 1 grid left.
00:22:201 (3) - 1 grid left.
00:25:679 (3) - ^.

[Queen]
00:30:027 (1) - Remove New Combo.
01:14:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Flip horizontally.

[King]
Okay.

[Killer Queen]
Okay.
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

tmokb93 wrote:

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3

[General]
Why Yuna is a tag too? Sorry, Removed
[King] and [Killer Queen] haven't the same tags as the others. Fix it. Edited
Maybe it wil be better if you have all bg at the same size (800x600). This comes from a game that not to many people know about...near impossible :P
Try to make Kiai Time all the same in all diffs.

[Joker] All Fixed
00:18:723 (3) - 1 grid right.
00:23:070 (4) - Spacing.
00:30:027 (4) - ^.
01:02:636 (3) - Adjust this slider.
01:07:418 - Add a hitcircle.
01:30:027 - 01:40:027 - You can use sliders instead of some beats.
01:40:027 (2) - Offscreen.

[Ace] Fixed
00:18:723 (3) - Spacing + 1 grid left.
00:22:201 (3) - 1 grid left.
00:25:679 (3) - ^.

[Queen]
00:30:027 (1) - Remove New Combo. Done
01:14:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Flip horizontally. ???

[King]
Okay.

[Killer Queen]
Okay.
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras

Clare wrote:

hi~
good song!
[Joker]
01:21:331 (T) - You have to line on 01:21:114

[Ace]
00:16:984 (T) - Delete this green line,he did not use
00:25:679 (3) - Left one grid

[Queen]
00:16:984 (T) - Delete this green line,he did not use
01:00:028 (5) - remove whistle? It sounds strange,i think
01:08:507 (5,6) - Spacing
01:22:421 (5) - ^

[King]
00:16:984 (T) - Delete this green line,he did not use
00:44:817 (T) - Put this line in 00:44:701
01:28:307 (T) - Put this line in 01:00:353
01:28:307 (T) - Put this line in 01:28:307

[Killer Queen]
00:16:984 (T) - Delete this green line,he did not use Done.
00:49:592 (3,4,5) - Spacing Nope.
01:21:331(T) - Put this line in 01:21:223 No.

star!
Tbh, Oyashiro you can delete my [King] diff. I can't bother to really make it more playable or fun as Tatsuo mentioned earlier... I'm a slacker right now D:
But I'll see if I really feel like remapping it. Because now I just think it sucks XD

Download: YuNa - Torawarebito (Oyashiro Beatrice) [Killer Queen].osu
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
Where is bloody mess skin?


~Joker~
00:45:679 (1) - remove new combo
00:56:983 (7) - end on next white tick
00:57:636 (8) - delete
01:07:418 (5,1) - too far

~Ace~
00:47:418 (4) - move down 2 grids (Lv3)
00:50:027 (4) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:58:179 (8) - move right 2 grids (Lv3)
01:01:766 (3,4) - too far
01:28:505 - remove red timing section
01:30:896 (4,5) - too close

~Queen~
00:59:594 (5,1,2,3) - too close
01:01:550 (4) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:02:420 (6) - ^

~Killer Queen~
00:19:592 (1,2,3) - move up 2 grids (Lv3)
00:25:679 (7) - new combo
00:41:550 (2) - move left 1 grid (lv3)
00:55:246 (2,3) - move 1/4 left
01:14:377 (7) - move up 1 grid (lv3)
01:24:812 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - wrong spacings


+Star
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras

DJPop wrote:

~Killer Queen~
00:19:592 (1,2,3) - move up 2 grids (Lv3) Done.
00:25:679 (7) - new combo Done.
00:41:550 (2) - move left 1 grid (lv3) Done.
00:55:246 (2,3) - move 1/4 left Done.
01:14:377 (7) - move up 1 grid (lv3) Done.
01:24:812 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - wrong spacings Oyashiro haven't downloaded the update yet. And I don't think they are wrong in the actual version.


+Star
Download: YuNa - Torawarebito (Oyashiro Beatrice) [Killer Queen].osu
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

DJPop wrote:

Where is bloody mess skin? Here: viewtopic.php?f=15&t=24858&p=387742#p387742


~Joker~
00:45:679 (1) - remove new combo Done
00:56:983 (7) - end on next white tick Ok
00:57:636 (8) - delete deleted
01:07:418 (5,1) - too far Fixed

~Ace~
00:47:418 (4) - move down 2 grids (Lv3) Moved
00:50:027 (4) - move right 1 grid (Lv3) Moved
00:58:179 (8) - move right 2 grids (Lv3) Fixed
01:01:766 (3,4) - too far Distance Snap'd it
01:28:505 - remove red timing section I'm using that so no
01:30:896 (4,5) - too close Ok to me so no ;-;

~Queen~ Remapped chorus
00:59:594 (5,1,2,3) - too close
01:01:550 (4) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:02:420 (6) - ^

~Killer Queen~
00:19:592 (1,2,3) - move up 2 grids (Lv3)
00:25:679 (7) - new combo
00:41:550 (2) - move left 1 grid (lv3)
00:55:246 (2,3) - move 1/4 left
01:14:377 (7) - move up 1 grid (lv3)
01:24:812 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - wrong spacings


+Star
KRZY
Former osu! Champion: OWC#3
4,850 posts
Joined May 2009
KRZY
sorry, i've become a bit lazy over the past few days orz

will mod in the weekend. star for now!
KRZY
Former osu! Champion: OWC#3
4,850 posts
Joined May 2009
KRZY
[Joker]
01:37:853 (3,4) - Try stacking these better?

[Ace]
00:23:940 (1) - Move 2 grids right
00:25:679 (3) - Move 1 grid right
00:58:288 (8) - Move to 00:58:288
01:40:678 (1) - Start at 01:40:461 and end at 01:42:200

[Queen]
00:23:288 (7) - Move 1 grid right
00:58:181 (9) - Move to 00:58:289
01:07:203 (1) - Move 3 grids up and 1 grid right
01:07:855 (3,4) - Move 2 grids right
01:08:290 (5) - Move 3 grids right and 1 grid up
01:26:551 (7) - I consulted two BATs about this, and this slider is unrankable.

[Killer Queen]
Fine.


Generally, note arrangement in easier difficulties are a bit sloppy. Try alinging them by holding on the shift key while placing notes if necessary.
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

DJ KRZY wrote:

[Joker]
01:37:853 (3,4) - Try stacking these better? Done

[Ace]
00:23:940 (1) - Move 2 grids right Moved
00:25:679 (3) - Move 1 grid right Moved
00:58:288 (8) - Move to 00:58:288 Fixed xD
01:40:678 (1) - Start at 01:40:461 and end at 01:42:200 Moved and extended

[Queen]
00:23:288 (7) - Move 1 grid right Moved
00:58:181 (9) - Move to 00:58:289 Moved
01:07:203 (1) - Move 3 grids up and 1 grid right Ok, Done
01:07:855 (3,4) - Move 2 grids right Moved
01:08:290 (5) - Move 3 grids right and 1 grid up Done
01:26:551 (7) - I consulted two BATs about this, and this slider is unrankable. Fine, just kept the note and added spinner

[Killer Queen]
Fine.


Generally, note arrangement in easier difficulties are a bit sloppy. Try alinging them by holding on the shift key while placing notes if necessary.
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras
I think I've managed to fix the hitsounds.... Should be better now I hope

Download: YuNa - Torawarebito (Oyashiro Beatrice) [Killer Queen].osu
SamiPale
766 posts
Joined October 2009
SamiPale
Late mod sorry...

Blue:You'd better fix it
Pink:You must fix it
==================
[General]
The BPM is not the same![Joker] and [Ace] are 138, but [Queen] and [Killer Queen] are 137.995.Fix it,and move notes all on ticks and resnap please
Why you use Custom Hitsound 1 but there are no custom hitsounds in osz file?(except Tera's diff)

[Joker]
00:16:984(T) - Here's double timing section ,delete one please
00:44:810(8) - Clap?oops I heard the lonely clap...and i think clap doesn't fit this song
00:47:418(3) - Spacing issue
01:29:157 - oops distance spacing so high lol i think it's hard to read as beginner

[Ace]
00:44:810(8) - Clap?same thing as [Joker]
01:28:505(T) - Why here's another red timing section?Change to green please ._.

[Queen]
00:44:811(1) - clap?Also the same thing
00:48:289(2) - New combo instead of 00:47:854
01:07:203(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These notes have serious spacing problem,open Distance Snap and move them and make them the same distance please(between(2) to (3),(4) to (5),(5end) to (6) )
01:19:812(6) - spacing issue
01:33:943(4) - spacing,but fine to me,as a map want to be ranked you'd better to fix it
01:42:204(T) - This timing section is useless
01:09:594(8),01:11:985(5),01:13:072(7) - These whistle is so lonely and so randomly lol that seems meaningless,try to put whistles more regularly or more meaningfully?

The placement is so randomly and like a clock x_x perhaps needs more practice?

[Killer Queen]
00:36:115(6),00:41:332(1) - Don't like these finishes @_@
00:50:898(10) - Add finish to the beginning
00:57:311(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'm not sure with these jumps,but it's fine to me,newcombo at 00:58:724 is better?
01:07:420(3) - Remove clap
01:16:551(7,10) - Clap?
01:24:812(3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make these jumps the same spacing please
01:23:508(9) - So lonely clap at this combo,add more?
01:25:682(6) - ...new combo?
01:30:030(7) - New combo instead of 01:30:682?


killer queen,so star :P
Last edited by SamiPale , edited 1 time in total.
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras

samipale wrote:

Late mod sorry...

Blue:You'd better fix it
Pink:You must fix it
==================
[General]
The BPM is not the same![Joker] and [Ace] are 138, but [Queen] and [Killer Queen] are 137.995.Fix it,and move notes all on ticks and resnap! Kay, fixed it for my diff.



[Killer Queen]
00:36:115(6),00:41:332(1) - Don't like these finishes @_@ Removed.
00:50:898(10) - Add finish to the beginningKay.
00:57:311(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'm not sure with these jumps,but it's fine to me,newcombo at 00:58:724 is better?
01:07:420(3) - Remove clap
01:16:551(7,10) - Clap?
01:24:812(3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make these jumps the same spacing please
01:23:508(9) - So lonely clap at this combo,add more?[/color] Added a clap on (10).. Or maybe I removed the clap..i've forgot :P
01:25:682(6) - ...new combo? Done.
01:30:030(7) - New combo instead of 01:30:682? Nah.


killer queen,so star :P
My diff needs so many fixes..This is one of my first guest diffs after all heh. O.o

Anyways, thanks for mod! ;)

Download: YuNa - Torawarebito (Oyashiro Beatrice) [Killer Queen].osu
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras
Cake

Download: YuNa - Torawarebito (Oyashiro Beatrice) [Killer Queen].osu
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

samipale wrote:

Late mod sorry...

Blue:You'd better fix it
Pink:You must fix it
==================
[General]
The BPM is not the same![Joker] and [Ace] are 138, but [Queen] and [Killer Queen] are 137.995.Fix it,and move notes all on ticks and resnap please Have attempted to fix this but keeps rounding off to 138 ;-;
Why you use Custom Hitsound 1 but there are no custom hitsounds in osz file?(except Tera's diff) Removed for my diffs

[Joker]
00:16:984(T) - Here's double timing section ,delete one please tried to but cant ;-;
00:44:810(8) - Clap?oops I heard the lonely clap...and i think clap doesn't fit this song No ones noticed it before, XD changed
00:47:418(3) - Spacing issue
01:29:157 - oops distance spacing so high lol i think it's hard to read as beginner Believe me, if I can hit it then beginners can (I already have a suckish accuracy as it is)

[Ace]
00:44:810(8) - Clap?same thing as [Joker] Fixed
01:28:505(T) - Why here's another red timing section?Change to green please ._. Someone complained about that timing section so I removed it, so no (sad to say)

[Queen]
00:44:811(1) - clap?Also the same thing
00:48:289(2) - New combo instead of 00:47:854
01:07:203(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These notes have serious spacing problem,open Distance Snap and move them and make them the same distance please(between(2) to (3),(4) to (5),(5end) to (6) ) Did my best to fix this
01:19:812(6) - spacing issue
01:33:943(4) - spacing,but fine to me,as a map want to be ranked you'd better to fix it Fixed
01:42:204(T) - This timing section is useless
01:09:594(8),01:11:985(5),01:13:072(7) - These whistle is so lonely and so randomly lol that seems meaningless,try to put whistles more regularly or more meaningfully?

The placement is so randomly and like a clock x_x perhaps needs more practice? First beatmap, give me a break >__>

killer queen,so star :P
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Frill
Dif..'Joker' 'Ace' 'Queen'
Please do the volume adjustment a little.
I think Suitability 75~80% ?


[Killer Queen]

00:50:027 (8) - New combo?

A Very Fun map <3
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

Frill wrote:

Dif..'Joker' 'Ace' 'Queen'
Please do the volume adjustment a little.
I think Suitability 75~80% ? Volume reduced, I'm guessing this means the maps are perfect then?


[Killer Queen]

00:50:027 (8) - New combo? Teras will decide if he wants to change this or not

A Very Fun map <3
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

  • • Offset: 16990 (resnap all notes).
    • Delete "bg6.jpeg" because it's unused.
[Joker]

  • • You might want to consider bringing down the slider velocity a bit. Might be a bit too fast for beginners.
    • 00:36:115 (5,1) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it)
    • 00:42:202 (2,3) - ^
    • 01:06:116 (4,5) - ^
[Ace]

  • • 01:28:505 (red timing section) - Delete this timing section
Sekuyi
181 posts
Joined December 2009
Sekuyi
Heya, some mods:

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

[General]
  • • Offset: 16990 (resnap all notes).
Offset of 30~35 will do too.

[Joker]
- 01:35:690 ~ (4) spacing

[Queen]
- 00:48:724 ~ (3) 1 grid right

[Killer Queen]
- 01:35:679 ~ (3) 1 grid down

Great maps & song. Cookie*!
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

  • • Offset: 16990 (resnap all notes).
    • Delete "bg6.jpeg" because it's unused.
I deleted that one a while back, let me full submit

[Joker]

  • • You might want to consider bringing down the slider velocity a bit. Might be a bit too fast for beginners. Fixed
    • 00:36:115 (5,1) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it) Seems ok to me and checked AI mod
    • 00:42:202 (2,3) - ^     Fixed
    • 01:06:116 (4,5) - ^ Stacked
[Ace]

  • • 01:28:505 (red timing section) - Delete this timing section
Fixed
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

Sekuyi wrote:

Heya, some mods:

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

[General]
  • • Offset: 16990 (resnap all notes).
Offset of 30~35 will do too.

[Joker]
- 01:35:690 ~ (4) spacing Fixed to my best abilities

[Queen]
- 00:48:724 ~ (3) 1 grid right Moved

[Killer Queen]
- 01:35:679 ~ (3) 1 grid down Teras decides wether to move or not

Great maps & song. Cookie*!
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
As per your request:

[General]
The switching between the soft and normal hit sounds didn't feel right to me, but those are more your own interpretation of the song, hehe. (Minus the guest diff, of course)

[Joker]
01:30:905 (3,4,1,2) - These look really weird. Try aligning them by disabling distance snap and grid snap.
01:34:384 (3) - This was a little tricky, but it's the only one, so eh.
01:36:123 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Ace]
00:43:076 (5,6,7,8) - This doesn't feel like it has much emphasis through mapping - only with the hit sounds. Maybe do two sliders and a single hit?
01:13:076 (5) - Point this a little higher so you don't overlap with the 1 after.

[Queen]
00:29:816 (7,8) - Stack these properly
After 30 seconds in until the kiai is kind of dull to play. Maybe try going with the vocal instead of just the beat?

[Killer Queen]
Nice~

A nice map set altogether.
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[General]
The switching between the soft and normal hit sounds didn't feel right to me, but those are more your own interpretation of the song, hehe. (Minus the guest diff, of course)

[Joker] Seems ok to me, so sorry; no :o
01:30:905 (3,4,1,2) - These look really weird. Try aligning them by disabling distance snap and grid snap.
01:34:384 (3) - This was a little tricky, but it's the only one, so eh.
01:36:123 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Ace]
00:43:076 (5,6,7,8) - This doesn't feel like it has much emphasis through mapping - only with the hit sounds. Maybe do two sliders and a single hit? Done
01:13:076 (5) - Point this a little higher so you don't overlap with the 1 after. If I do note becomes unreadable

[Queen]
00:29:816 (7,8) - Stack these properly Did my best, hope it's enough
After 30 seconds in until the kiai is kind of dull to play. Maybe try going with the vocal instead of just the beat? No, I will not remap it, I 've already remapped twice >:(

[Killer Queen]
Nice~

A nice map set altogether.
Furawa
554 posts
Joined April 2009
Furawa
:3
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

SOGASOGAMO wrote:

:3
Thank you~
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Vikon
[General]
1) the size of your two BG are 800 x 566 and 960 x 768, try to use a 1024 x 768 or 800 x 600 instead?
2) don't start a timing section on a note, to avoid miss hit (e.g. 01:14:375 in [Ace], you should put it at 01:14:163 instead.)

[Joker]
01:16:122 (5) add 1 more reverse?
01:19:600 (5) ^
01:21:340 (1) covered by 01:19:600 (5), doesn't look good.
01:22:209 (2) 1 grid up?
01:21:114 move this timing section to 01:24:383 ?
01:33:514 (2) add whistle on the start ?
01:34:818 (3) add whistle here?
01:35:688 (4) ^

[Ace]
00:23:294 add whistle here?
01:14:381 (1) covered by 01:13:076 (5), doesn't look good
01:21:337 move this timing section to 01:24:383 ?
01:28:505 why you use a red timing section here? if you think the timing is wrong after this point, why this is the only difficulty using it?
01:34:809 (5) add whistle here?

[Queen]
01:24:818 (1) the volume change is too sudden, may be change the timing section at 01:21:079 to Normal audio and turn down the volume?
why there are no hitsound after 01:28:731 ? (except the last finish)


[Killer Queen]
00:29:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) although you increase the volume, it is still hard to notice that. (may be change them to normal audio?)
01:24:381 (11,1) don't stack? (hard to read)
01:41:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) hard to notice the volume changes

Good map, Star~
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

Vikon wrote:

[General]
1) the size of your two BG are 800 x 566 and 960 x 768, try to use a 1024 x 768 or 800 x 600 instead? Tried to find resized versions, but since this is a game that is no longer on the PC, it's hard
2) don't start a timing section on a note, to avoid miss hit (e.g. 01:14:375 in [Ace], you should put it at 01:14:163 instead.) ok

[Joker]
01:16:122 (5) add 1 more reverse? How are they gonna make the jump?!
01:19:600 (5) ^ Did it because this one is possible to do
01:21:340 (1) covered by 01:19:600 (5), doesn't look good. Done
01:22:209 (2) 1 grid up? Ok
01:21:114 move this timing section to 01:24:383 ? No since I wanna keep the soft notes following 1:19:600
01:33:514 (2) add whistle on the start ? Already added it to the tail
01:34:818 (3) add whistle here? ^
01:35:688 (4) ^ *see above*

[Ace]
00:23:294 add whistle here? No since it screws with the whistle rythm I have
01:14:381 (1) covered by 01:13:076 (5), doesn't look good Moved
01:21:337 move this timing section to 01:24:383 ? See [Joker] for views on this
01:28:505 why you use a red timing section here? if you think the timing is wrong after this point, why this is the only difficulty using it? XD it's a white timing section, except when it's over it turns to a red one; I can't explain it, so ignore
01:34:809 (5) add whistle here? Done (I think)

[Queen]
01:24:818 (1) the volume change is too sudden, may be change the timing section at 01:21:079 to Normal audio and turn down the volume?
This is the only diff. with those notes (except mabey KQ) so sorry to say I'm leaving it as it is
why there are no hitsound after 01:28:731 ? (except the last finish) Added hitsounds


[Killer Queen] Teras' diff. not touching it
00:29:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) although you increase the volume, it is still hard to notice that. (may be change them to normal audio?)
01:24:381 (11,1) don't stack? (hard to read)
01:41:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) hard to notice the volume changes

Good map, Star~
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras
All done except for that stack thingy Vikon mentioned. I prefer how it is now. Everythng aren't supposed to be easily seen imo.

Download: YuNa - Torawarebito (Oyashiro Beatrice) [Killer Queen].osu
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
Hello :D

General
Fix some green timing point.
joker
You should use distance snap correctly. :o
Open AImod & reduce spacing miss ;)
00:55:252 (5) new combo?
01:10:035 (4) ^
Ace
00:32:642 (3) 1 grid right&1 grid down(grid lv3)
00:36:120 (5) 1 grid up?
00:50:468 (5) 1 grid down?
01:14:816 (2) 1 grid right?
01:16:990 (6) ^
01:34:374 (5) ^
Queen
00:29:164 (6,7) 1 grid down&1 grid right?
00:45:686 (3,4) spacing is close
00:59:056 (2) 1 grid left
01:09:165 (6,7,8) 1 grid down&3 grid right
01:19:383 (5,6) spacing is close
Killer Queen
01:35:685 (3) 2 grid up
01:35:685 (3) 1 grid up
01:36:772 (7) 1 grid right&1 grid down
nice~
Oh , Teras 0.0

good map overal
star & gl ;)
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

banvi wrote:

Hello :D

General
Fix some green timing point.
joker
You should use distance snap correctly. :o I did :O
Open AImod & reduce spacing miss ;) Some were left since they made huge jumps ;o;
00:55:252 (5) new combo? Done
01:10:035 (4) ^ Doneth
Ace Nazi Mod XP
00:32:642 (3) 1 grid right&1 grid down(grid lv3) Done :|
00:36:120 (5) 1 grid up? No
00:50:468 (5) 1 grid down? Done
01:14:816 (2) 1 grid right? No
01:16:990 (6) ^
01:34:374 (5) ^
Queen
00:29:164 (6,7) 1 grid down&1 grid right? No
00:45:686 (3,4) spacing is close They're close both on the time track and on thep, leaving
00:59:056 (2) 1 grid left Done
01:09:165 (6,7,8) 1 grid down&3 grid right Done
01:19:383 (5,6) spacing is close Leaving
Killer Queen Teras will hit me if I touch his Beatmap
01:35:685 (3) 2 grid up
01:35:685 (3) 1 grid up
01:36:772 (7) 1 grid right&1 grid down
nice~
Oh , Teras 0.0

good map overal
star & gl ;)
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
THIS IS PART ONE OF MY MOD. It's getting late, and I don't want you to think that I'm ignoring your mod. DO NOT KUDOSU THIS POST. Please kudosu the next post I make, when I complete my mod.

EDIT: Here's some overall stuff just to notice. I did it in the next post, but I'll just add it here so you don't miss it during Joker~

Overall:
For soft sections, add whistles on the 2nd and 4th beats. For normal sections, add claps on the 2nd and 4th beats.
01:07:416 - Preferably keep it at normal hitsounds.
01:21:112 - Preferably keep it at normal hitsounds.

Joker:
00:16:990 (1) - Add finish
00:17:849 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Instead of making this giant mod post, I'll just say add claps on the even notes, and whistles on the odd notes.
00:31:763 (1) - Add clap
00:35:241 (4) - ^
00:38:719 (2) - ^
00:42:198 (2) - ^
00:43:067 (3) - Fixable spacing~.
00:45:676 (1,2,3,4,5) - Claps on odd, whistle on even.
00:51:763 (1) - Add finish
00:52:633 (2,3,4,1,2) - Add claps on even, whistle on odd
For the entire Kiai section, put claps on 2 and 4
01:07:416 - Preferably keep it at normal hitsounds.
01:12:634 (6) - Add finish at end of slider
01:21:112 - Preferably keep it at normal hitsounds.
01:35:678 (4) - Add whistle

Part 2 coming tomorrow.
Last edited by Shohei Ohtani , edited 1 time in total.
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
Whee.

Overall:
For soft sections, add whistles on the 2nd and 4th beats. For normal sections, add claps on the 2nd and 4th beats.
01:07:416 - Preferably keep it at normal hitsounds.
01:21:112 - Preferably keep it at normal hitsounds.

Ace:
01:28:511 - sdghsdljsd unneccesary red timing section

Dat Kween:
Other than the overall stuff, ~

Dat Killa Kween
00:29:381 - For silent hitsounds, preferably make extremely quiet (in between the 0th and 1st volume section) soft hitsounds, instead of silence.
01:34:924 (7) - Stack this under the end of (6)

All done :D. Whee~.
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

CDFA wrote:

Whee.

Overall:
For soft sections, add whistles on the 2nd and 4th beats. For normal sections, add claps on the 2nd and 4th beats.
01:07:416 - Preferably keep it at normal hitsounds. Change because of the change in YuNa's voice how she goes from hard to soft
01:21:112 - Preferably keep it at normal hitsounds. I didn't like it with normal hitsounds XP sorry

Ace:
01:28:511 - sdghsdljsd unneccesary red timing section Done

Dat Kween:
Other than the overall stuff, ~ Done

Dat Killa Kween Teras has to fix this when he comes back from vacation...
00:29:381 - For silent hitsounds, preferably make extremely quiet (in between the 0th and 1st volume section) soft hitsounds, instead of silence.
01:34:924 (7) - Stack this under the end of (6)

All done :D. Whee~.
Kert
2,082 posts
Joined June 2009
Kert
[Joker]
00:43:512 (4) - move 1 down 2 left? it looks strange now
01:02:643 (3) - I'd prefer it's going straight to the left, or lower
01:29:166 (1,2,3) - all of them are not straight, you can fix that with the help of turning off grid snap
01:32:644 (1) - and this one also
01:36:992 (2) - ^

[Ace]
Why it doesn't have the hitsounds for example in the chorus?
Resnap all notes, because there are a lot of unsnapped ones after you changed timing (?)
01:01:772 (3) - move endpoint 1 right 1 up?
01:05:250 (4) - align in the same way, as previous one
01:10:035 (1) - this can be aligned with 01:08:731 (3)
01:35:685 (2) - I don't like how this is not straight


[Queen]
00:18:294 (4,5) - move them a bit, so that 5 will not be on top of 4?
00:28:946 (5,6) - the same about slider 6
00:29:816 (7) - stack the note, if you don't know what stacking means, you can ask me
00:30:033 (8) - stack the slider
00:31:338 (1) - stack the note
00:40:034 (6) - move 1 right
00:53:947 (5) - move endpoint 1 down?
01:02:426 (5) - 1 down
01:05:252 (4,5) - 1 down
01:07:209 (1) - 1 up
01:12:209 (6) - minor spacing mistake, you can move up these 01:11:339 (3,4,5) saving spacing with 01:10:904 (2)

01:16:339 (6) - remove clap
01:16:557 (7) - add clap
01:16:992 remove clap
I think this way ^ it sounds better. If you like that, you can do the same with hitsounds after this part, or moreover in all difficulties lol

01:20:035 (7) - 1 down probably?
01:40:905 (3) - I don't like how this is not straight
01:42:210 (4) - stack the note

[Killer queen]
01:34:924 (7) - maybe stack with previous slider?
01:35:250 (1,2) and next notes - different spacing

After I played Killer Queen diff, I started to love the song ^_^ Interesting enough maps, good job, star *
Musty
2,254 posts
Joined February 2010
Musty
Hey it's a good song and a good vid'

Killer Queen:

[01:38:741](7) Deletes the first shot Cymbal (Finish) and has put in place a Clap it's coolest ;>
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

CracK wrote:

[Joker]
00:43:512 (4) - move 1 down 2 left? it looks strange now Done
01:02:643 (3) - I'd prefer it's going straight to the left, or lower Done
01:29:166 (1,2,3) - all of them are not straight, you can fix that with the help of turning off grid snap I spent 2 hours stacking them, so no
01:32:644 (1) - and this one also *See above*
01:36:992 (2) - ^

[Ace]
Why it doesn't have the hitsounds for example in the chorus? Fixed
Resnap all notes, because there are a lot of unsnapped ones after you changed timing (?) Fuuuu-
01:01:772 (3) - move endpoint 1 right 1 up? Done
01:05:250 (4) - align in the same way, as previous one all this really throw you off?!
01:10:035 (1) - this can be aligned with 01:08:731 (3) My dear friend distance snap disagrees
01:35:685 (2) - I don't like how this is not straight Fixed....It was hardly noticeablt tho >__>


[Queen] Note: All Nazi mods were ignored, complain, see if I care >>
00:18:294 (4,5) - move them a bit, so that 5 will not be on top of 4? I may have moved it...
00:28:946 (5,6) - the same about slider 6 ^
00:29:816 (7) - stack the note, if you don't know what stacking means, you can ask me It is stacked, and remember how I stacked in [Joker]?!
00:30:033 (8) - stack the slider It's ok to me, so no
00:31:338 (1) - stack the note No
00:40:034 (6) - move 1 right
00:53:947 (5) - move endpoint 1 down?
01:02:426 (5) - 1 down
01:05:252 (4,5) - 1 down
01:07:209 (1) - 1 up
01:12:209 (6) - minor spacing mistake, you can move up these 01:11:339 (3,4,5) saving spacing with 01:10:904 (2)

01:16:339 (6) - remove clap Done
01:16:557 (7) - add clap Done
01:16:992 remove clap Done
I think this way ^ it sounds better. If you like that, you can do the same with hitsounds after this part, or moreover in all difficulties lol

01:20:035 (7) - 1 down probably?
01:40:905 (3) - I don't like how this is not straight
01:42:210 (4) - stack the note

[Killer queen]
01:34:924 (7) - maybe stack with previous slider?
01:35:250 (1,2) and next notes - different spacing

After I played Killer Queen diff, I started to love the song ^_^ Interesting enough maps, good job, star *
Kert
2,082 posts
Joined June 2009
Kert
all this really throw you off?!
No. I am just trying to help you make your map as perfect as it can be.
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

CracK wrote:

all this really throw you off?!
No. I am just trying to help you make your map as perfect as it can be.
I wasn't tryingto be rude BTW,d but there are maps with some imperfections, but that makes them unique~
Kert
2,082 posts
Joined June 2009
Kert
Probably our "unique" taste differs. nvm then
Real1
968 posts
Joined September 2008
Real1
Hi, sorry for late mod. Real1 quick mode. turn on!

[Joker]
I guess it's fine!

[Ace]
  1. You're using soft whistle on every other white tick. I like this effect, but it sounds even better using soft clap. Try it for yourself, hehe. :D
  2. 01:05:250 (4) - One more rpeat on this slider
  3. Last section also sounds better with soft clap isntead of soft whistle!
[Queen]
  1. Maybe you should have hitsounds similar to [Ace] in the beginning? Preferably with soft claps, hehe.
  2. 00:40:469 (8) - Shorten this slider to 00:40:903 (previous white tick), then add a note at 00:41:338 (and that should be the start of the next combo)
  3. 00:50:904 (7) - Shorten this slider to 00:51:339 (previous white tick) and add notes after instead, and they are the start of the next combo.
  4. 01:09:165 (6,7,8) - Too close to (5).
  5. 01:42:210 (4) - Stacked ugly. Stack it manually without gridsnap.
[Killer Queen]
  1. 00:16:989 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - No hitsounds?! Spice it up with some!
  2. Some more places are lifeless without hitsounds. Just spice it up a bit.
  3. 00:59:707 - If you listen closely, there should be a note here. That makes the map harder to read though, so I'm leaving the decision up to you!
Have a star!
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

Real1 wrote:

Hi, sorry for late mod. Real1 quick mode. turn on!

[Joker]
I guess it's fine! Yay :)

[Ace]
  1. You're using soft whistle on every other white tick. I like this effect, but it sounds even better using soft clap. Try it for yourself, hehe. :D Done
  2. 01:05:250 (4) - One more rpeat on this slider Because of spacing, I have to say no ;o;
  3. Last section also sounds better with soft clap isntead of soft whistle! Done!


[Queen]
  1. Maybe you should have hitsounds similar to [Ace] in the beginning? Preferably with soft claps, hehe. Done
  2. 00:40:469 (8) - Shorten this slider to 00:40:903 (previous white tick), then add a note at 00:41:338 (and that should be the start of the next combo) Finished
  3. 00:50:904 (7) - Shorten this slider to 00:51:339 (previous white tick) and add notes after instead, and they are the start of the next combo. Doneth
  4. 01:09:165 (6,7,8) - Too close to (5). O__o Ok, moved...
  5. 01:42:210 (4) - Stacked ugly. Stack it manually without gridsnap. Hope it's better...
[Killer Queen] I'll make surte to annoy Teras to mod his map when he comes back~ :D
  1. 00:16:989 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - No hitsounds?! Spice it up with some!
  2. Some more places are lifeless without hitsounds. Just spice it up a bit.
  3. 00:59:707 - If you listen closely, there should be a note here. That makes the map harder to read though, so I'm leaving the decision up to you!
Have a star!
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras
To all modders of my diff (Killer Queen).. I remapped it because I wanted it to be more Killer Queen like. So I gave it another shot <.< I think I turned out well... ANd I look forward to see people play it/mod it.
Anyways, it's remapped. So I won't change a single thing of the old mods due to this.
Shulin
1,333 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
General:

-- What is the bloody mess skin? If it's important include it with the map!
-- .mp3 is pretty low quality, find a better one?
-- Offset 16,996, though it's hard to tell with current quality.
-- I think normal hitsounds work more.
-- Best sizes for BG ~ 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768.

Joker:

-- Recheck your spacing on this difficulty, it's not constant and at times confusing.
-- Quite a lot of gaps between beats, consider using sliders instead.

01:07:426 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing~?
01:08:948 (x) - Note.
01:10:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Compare spacings.
01:23:079 (3,4,5) - Spacing.
01:31:775 (4,1) - Stacking.
01:37:862 (3) - ^

Ace:

-- End kiai in the same place as the others.

00:27:424 (6) - New combo.
00:49:598 (3) - Clap, following your pattern.
00:54:816 (6) - ^ ?
00:57:316 (5,6,7,8) - I'd avoid this in a normal.
01:30:903 (4) - Put at the end of the slider like 01:32:642 (2,3) -

Queen:

-- Overall difficulty +2-3
-- Add a spinner.
-- Add some claps, all I hear is whistle and the occasional finish D:
-- Preferred skin isn't set to bloody mess... whatever that skin is.

00:29:816 (7,8) - Stacking. Use x0.0 (look at it in game)
00:36:555 (5,6,7) - Stack this?
00:57:317 (6,7,8,9) - Spacing is confusing here due to low OD.
00:58:730 (1,2,3) - ^
01:09:165 (6,7,8) - Stacking.
01:13:948 (8,1) - ^
01:15:687 (4,5) - ^
01:21:992 (x) - Note.
01:24:818 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Sliders or something might be better here, the spacing is hard to read with the current OD.
01:40:471 (1) - Remove new combo.

In general the patterns could do with a little more work, but it's okay.

Killer Queen:

-- The 1/4 spacing here is too wide making it uncomfortable to play. You might want to consider reducing the spacing/distance snap on your streams etc. (example: 00:50:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and many more)

00:21:772 (7,8,9) - I get the impression that this stack was thrown into the stream just to fit a pattern. It doesn't play that well =/
00:25:359 (8,9) - Similar thing ^
00:25:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Things like this are really messy, the way it all overlaps.
00:27:424 (13,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Strange rhythm. I'd expect notes at 00:27:859 and 00:28:294
00:35:903 (5,6) - Stacking fail?
00:40:468 (8) - Random x0.5 =/
00:55:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - It's messy and is uncomfortable to play as a result. Try to avoid overlapping the same areas over and over, if you highlight some of your combo's you'll see that they tend to be clustered in the same place.
01:35:033 (10,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Another example of cluster.

1/4 is too sparse, too clustered, too much overlapping makes it play badly (imo).

Keep working on it ^_^
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras

Shulin wrote:

General:



Killer Queen:

-- The 1/4 spacing here is too wide making it uncomfortable to play. You might want to consider reducing the spacing/distance snap on your streams etc. (example: 00:50:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and many more)

00:21:772 (7,8,9) - I get the impression that this stack was thrown into the stream just to fit a pattern. It doesn't play that well =/
00:25:359 (8,9) - Similar thing ^
00:25:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Things like this are really messy, the way it all overlaps.
00:27:424 (13,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Strange rhythm. I'd expect notes at 00:27:859 and 00:28:294
00:35:903 (5,6) - Stacking fail?
00:40:468 (8) - Random x0.5 =/
00:55:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - It's messy and is uncomfortable to play as a result. Try to avoid overlapping the same areas over and over, if you highlight some of your combo's you'll see that they tend to be clustered in the same place.
01:35:033 (10,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Another example of cluster.

1/4 is too sparse, too clustered, too much overlapping makes it play badly (imo).

Keep working on it ^_^
Kay. Now I ragequit. Whatever I do with this damn diff people complain. Oyashiro. Delete my diffs. I won't even consider participate here. Seems like I can't map this song.

I give up mapping this. If people mod my diff and it's not deleted I won't care about it. So Oyashiro.. get someone else to make a guest diff. Because I will not remap this again. And when I do. I get even more complains. The diff plays perfectly. I can play through most of it. So I don't really find a problem with it. This is exactly why rules for ranked maps sucks. -.-
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

Teras wrote:

Kay. Now I ragequit. Whatever I do with this damn diff people complain. Oyashiro. Delete my diffs. I won't even consider participate here. Seems like I can't map this song.

I give up mapping this. If people mod my diff and it's not deleted I won't care about it. So Oyashiro.. get someone else to make a guest diff. Because I will not remap this again. And when I do. I get even more complains. The diff plays perfectly. I can play through most of it. So I don't really find a problem with it. This is exactly why rules for ranked maps sucks. -.-
I'll keep the diff since it seems good to me, even if you won't work on it you'll still be the maker of that beatmap...you should know by now that these people are picky on what goes on in a map. I'll keep it but I won't tell you to fix it anymore.
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- What is the bloody mess skin? If it's important include it with the map! If you look up the game you'll understand why...
-- .mp3 is pretty low quality, find a better one? Did once but the mp3 makes the map unable to load the song ;-;
-- Offset 16,996, though it's hard to tell with current quality. I'll fix it -.-
-- I think normal hitsounds work more. I like a mix of both ~~
-- Best sizes for BG ~ 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768. The game has a low following; hard to find decent sized BG's

Joker:
I thought I put these two to rest 3 pages ago?
-- Recheck your spacing on this difficulty, it's not constant and at times confusing.
-- Quite a lot of gaps between beats, consider using sliders instead.

01:07:426 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing~? Done?
01:08:948 (x) - Note. Placed
01:10:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Compare spacings. Seems ok to me
01:23:079 (3,4,5) - Spacing. Done
01:31:775 (4,1) - Stacking. If you knew how long I spent stacking them then you would know why I won't touch this
01:37:862 (3) - ^ *See above*

Ace:

-- End kiai in the same place as the others. Done

00:27:424 (6) - New combo. New combo for 2 notes?
00:49:598 (3) - Clap, following your pattern. Done
00:54:816 (6) - ^ ?
00:57:316 (5,6,7,8) - I'd avoid this in a normal. No one's complained about it being hard...
01:30:903 (4) - Put at the end of the slider like 01:32:642 (2,3) Done

Queen:

-- Overall difficulty +2-3 Fixed?
-- Add a spinner. Where?
-- Add some claps, all I hear is whistle and the occasional finish D: Wait...claps are in there. Either way I did this on purpose
-- Preferred skin isn't set to bloody mess... whatever that skin is. Fixeth

00:29:816 (7,8) - Stacking. Use x0.0 (look at it in game) Stacked ok
00:36:555 (5,6,7) - Stack this? Not 5 though
00:57:317 (6,7,8,9) - Spacing is confusing here due to low OD. Fixed
00:58:730 (1,2,3) - ^ Looks ok?
01:09:165 (6,7,8) - Stacking. It's stacked right...
01:13:948 (8,1) - ^ *See above*
01:15:687 (4,5) - ^ *See above...again*
01:21:992 (x) - Note. Added
01:24:818 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Sliders or something might be better here, the spacing is hard to read with the current OD. Is ok to me and everyone who's modded this map
01:40:471 (1) - Remove new combo. Dine

In general the patterns could do with a little more work, but it's okay.

Killer Queen: Congratulations, u killed Teras.
Kurai
osu! Alumni
7,734 posts
Joined March 2009
Kurai
Hi :)

[Joker]
00:40:469 (4) - Remove whistle and add clap
00:53:513 (3,1) - Remove whitsle and add finish

[Ace]
00:33:946 (1) - Add clap and remove clap at 00:34:381 (2)

[Queen]
00:18:294 (4) - Add clap
00:18:729 (6) - Remove clap at the begin and add clap at the end.
00:20:903 (1) - Add clap
00:21:337 (3) - Remove clap at the begin and add clap at the end.
00:23:511 (1) - Add clap
00:23:946 (3) - Remove clap at the begin and add clap at the end.
00:26:120 (7) - Add clap
00:26:555 (9) - Remove clap at the begin and add clap at the end.
00:46:556 (4) - Spacing Error
00:51:773 (1) - ^
00:52:208 (2) - ^
01:09:165 (6) - ^
01:19:818 (6) - ^
01:21:992 (4) - ^

Star :)
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

KuraiPettan wrote:

Hi :)

[Joker]
00:40:469 (4) - Remove whistle and add clap Doneth
00:53:513 (3,1) - Remove whitsle and add finish Done

[Ace]
00:33:946 (1) - Add clap and remove clap at 00:34:381 (2) Done

[Queen] Did everything
00:18:294 (4) - Add clap
00:18:729 (6) - Remove clap at the begin and add clap at the end.
00:20:903 (1) - Add clap
00:21:337 (3) - Remove clap at the begin and add clap at the end.
00:23:511 (1) - Add clap
00:23:946 (3) - Remove clap at the begin and add clap at the end.
00:26:120 (7) - Add clap
00:26:555 (9) - Remove clap at the begin and add clap at the end.
00:46:556 (4) - Spacing Error
00:51:773 (1) - ^
00:52:208 (2) - ^
01:09:165 (6) - ^
01:19:818 (6) - ^
01:21:992 (4) - ^

Star :)
Blackiris
192 posts
Joined April 2009
Blackiris
Just wanted to give this map a star. So here you go.
[item received : 1x ☆]
Catchy song, nicely done map and interesting game (Killer Queen > Secret Game, though it may be just me).
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
Joined March 2009
Nakagawa-Kanon
[Joker]
fine

[Ace]
00:36:120 (5) - add new combo
00:52:642 (2) - make like this

[Queen]
00:29:164 (6) - distance check please
01:09:165 (6,7,8) - △
01:20:035 (7) - This is unjump? I think delete unjump... make normally

[Killer Queen]
It seems fine

but I don't like high distance....



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good song
Musty
2,254 posts
Joined February 2010
Musty
Can i create a GuestDiff? :p
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

Sweyax wrote:

Can i create a GuestDiff? :p
If you want to, sure....
Soaprman
1,392 posts
Joined January 2008
Soaprman
General
arrrrggghpppbbbggfff flv video my poor computer *disables*

It appears to me that you're not using distance snap (or grid snap, even?). This isn't really a problem (in fact, it's kind of refreshing in a way) but you might want to at least consider using it on Easy since the people playing this might be tripped up by inconsistencies here and there.

Outsider's view on the difficulty names: I know nothing about the source of this song you're mapping but I tend to think of an ace as being higher than a queen. If there's a reason for Queen to be above Ace though then leave them, it's no big deal. :P

Joker
00:30:033 (4) - move a little closer to 3.
00:33:512 (3) - move a little farther from 2.
if there are any more cases of this do them too.

01:34:384 (3) - not sure how appropriate this is on Easy.

Ace

nothing here that I haven't said already in General.

Queen/Killer Queen

YOU HAVE TO ALIGN EVERYTHING TO THE GRID IN THE BACKGROUND PICTURE OMG

But seriously, the difficulty gap between these is kind of big. Maybe make Queen a little harder?

Not a bad mapset you got here. Starred.
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras
I've said it once already. Oyashiro. Delete my iff cuz I won't change a thing in it. It's bad and overmapped <.<
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Kiddo-Kun
[General]
Sometimes the soft clap don't sound to good. Consider replacing them with soft whistles?

[Joker]
00:30:033 (4) - Spacing: Make this closer to 3
00:34:381 (3) - Add finish at slider end
00:37:860 (1) - ^
01:23:948 (5) - Align with 3. Make it look better

[Ace]
00:16:990 (1) - Finish?

Not much wrong with this diff.

[Queen]
00:29:816 (7,8) - Stack properly
01:15:687 (4) - ^
01:23:296 (7) - This is really irritating. Consider moving it.

Overall: I dunno what to say about this map. It's okay, but the beat placements kinda tick me off.

Star
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
thekillerhjkhjk
[queen]
00:51:773 (1,2,3,4,5) - please space these evenly, your spacing here is just... weirdly off
00:56:121 (5) - move further from (4)
00:58:730 (1,2,3) - move 3 closer to 2
01:07:317 (2) - make this start on the main white tick then add a note on the (now empty) blue tick
01:10:904 (2,3,4,5,6) - these notes don't match the words at all if you were trying to make them do that...
01:11:231 (3) - move this note to the blue tick just before where it currently is
the ending of the song after the kiai is pretty badly spaced... the anti-jumps make no sense in relation to the music and should just be removed.

[ace]
the whistle hitsound WITH the clap sound in the beginning is unnecessary. remove whistle please, its just a bit of an eyesore... for the ears

[joker]
fine

starred
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka
Mods done and uploaded~
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,236 posts
Joined June 2010
kanpakyin
Mod
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Blue=Just a suggestion
ReD=I think you should fix this

[Joker]
00:17:804(2)down 2 grid?
00:18:763(3)^
00:32:658(2)left 2 grid?

[Ace]
00:23:901(1)down 2 grid?
00:27:460(6)Please put the slider straight
00:42:654(4)use whistle to substitute the clap
10:13:051(5)left 1 grid?

[Queen]
00:27:442(1)spacing
00:28:679(4)^
00:29:779(7.8)gemination with (6)?
00:32:679(3)down 2 grid?
01:36:593(4)The spacing really close to(3)

[what my suggestion]
~surely,you need to use distance snap
~You need to do a Insane diff

anyway,it is a nice map
star~~
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

kanpakyin wrote:

Mod
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Blue=Just a suggestion
ReD=I think you should fix this

[Joker]
00:17:804(2)down 2 grid? Done
00:18:763(3)^ Done
00:32:658(2)left 2 grid? Doneth

[Ace]
00:23:901(1)down 2 grid?Done
00:27:460(6)Please put the slider straight Fixed
00:42:654(4)use whistle to substitute the clap Changed
10:13:051(5)left 1 grid? Moved

[Queen]
00:27:442(1)spacing Spaced
00:28:679(4)^ Done
00:29:779(7.8)gemination with (6)? Wat?
00:32:679(3)down 2 grid? Done
01:36:593(4)The spacing really close to(3) Fixed....I think?

[what my suggestion]
~surely,you need to use distance snap I did, that's why the map is so loopey ~~
~You need to do a Insane diff D:

anyway,it is a nice map
star~~
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka
Does anyone know a BAT that's takin requests?
eldnl
Former osu!catch Champion: 2013
2,930 posts
Joined March 2010
eldnl
Hi ^^

[Joker]

This difficulty has several spacing errors, please use only one "beat snap divisor"

00:44:817 (7) Add new combo
00:45:686 (1) Remove new Combo
00:50:034 (6) Add new Combo
01:23:948 (5) This object is too close to the previous object
01:31:775 (4) Add new combo
01:32:862 (1) Remove new combo
01:35:688 (4) Add new combo
01:36:123 (1) Remove new combo


[Ace]

00:24:381 (2) Spacing
00:33:946 (4)^
00:48:729 (2) This object is too close to the previous object
00:50:033 (4) Spacing
01:35:250 (1~) from here until the end came down spacing, why?

[Queen]

This difficulty is quite easy to be the hardest, try to put more triple and jumps.

00:38:729 (3) Spacing
00:59:600 (4)^
01:24:601 ~ It sounds as if a note should go here
01:37:862 (7) This object is too close to the previous object

Good song, but I think still has a long way.

Star
Lizzehb
645 posts
Joined March 2010
Lizzehb
Joker~
I see nothing wrong with it.

Ace~
I feel horrible, but this is so well mapped I'm not seeing any issues!

Queen~
Only thing I didn't like about this was the clapping didn't continue through the song, other than that, it's prefect are really fun to play.

Sorry I'm not oh any help but so many people have looked at this!

If you wanna send me another map, please do so.
Disoy
209 posts
Joined February 2010
Disoy
[Joker]
00:17:859 (2,3) - these circle snap...
00:29:164 (3,4) - ^
00:32:642 (2,3) - ^
00:48:295 (5) - 1 grid left
00:52:643 (2,3) - these circle snap...
01:05:252 (4) - 1 grid down
01:34:384 (4,5) - remove this circle and become slider?

[Ace]
00:57:642 (6,7) - remove these circle become slider

[Queen]
00:29:816 (7,8) - not perfect stacked
00:50:034 (5,6) - spacing
Sandpig
847 posts
Joined September 2010
Sandpig
hi, here's my mod :)


orz.. I would like to suggest you resnap all notes in all diff....


Queen

00:16:989(1,2,3) make them even
00:29:816(7,8) stack them
00:40:034(6,7) spacing
01:07:209(1,2,3) stack them or make them even
01:08:513(5,6,7) spacing.
01:10:904(2,3,4) spacing, make them even
01:19:818(6,7) spacing
01:22:861(7,8) ^
01:23:514(8,9) ^
01:29:601(3,4) ^
01:36:123(3,4) ^
01:37:427(6,7) ^

Ace

00:48:294(1,2) spacing
01:04:816(3,4) ^
01:37:859(1,2) ^

Joker

01:34:384(4,5) it's a easy diff so remove the circle at 01:35:253 and extend the slider to here

that'a all :D
ignorethis
osu! Alumni
1,885 posts
Joined August 2008
ignorethis
This mapset gives me a feeling that you're littering objects around. I see there are several spacing mods above, so I don't need to point out
examples:
<Queen>
01:08:513 (5,6,7) -
01:22:644 (7,8,9) -
01:26:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -
01:36:992 (6,7) -
etc.

<Ace>
00:27:424 (6) - add clap at the end
also claps sound messy at times

<Queen>
01:12:426 (7) - move to long white tick and add a note at the current position
01:13:513 (1,2,3) - add normal hitsound fade-in (use inherited timing sections)
Fapfrit
804 posts
Joined December 2009
Fapfrit
Please excuse the delay. The accident at the Internet service provider. I hope for your understanding

Modding:

General:
- I would have reduced the stack (4/9)
- Storyboarding (use Half Speed). sounds better :3

Timing:
Good

Joker:
- Reduced Slider Velosyti (0,90)
- Approach (-1)
- Overall (-1)
- If you want sound mode, w
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00:17:859 (2,3) - I don't understand this. error with spaicing, then, correct (00:18:729 (3,4), 00:19:598 (4,1), 00:20:468 (1,2), 00:21:337 (2,3). correct all, ok D:) used on this place spacing 0,8x
/suggetion: 00:29:164 (3) - delete circle, 00:30:033 (4) - delete slider. 00:29:164 - add a spinner and finished on 00:30:903
00:48:295 (5) - new combo
00:49:165 (1) - delete new combo
01:06:122 (6) - rough slider. giving it elegance =
01:29:166 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,2,3,4,5) - clearly put the sliders under each other (wiyhout gridsnap)
<Sound>
W - Whostle. E - Finish. R - Clap
Time (00:00:00) - exact time of bit
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Ace:
- Reduced Slider Velosyti (1,30)
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00:22:207 (3,4) - spaicing. huh, make it the same
00:37:424 - add a circle, no - better: 00:33:946 (4) - delete this
00:50:468 (5,6) - spaicing, oh, a lot of mistakes with spacings. fix it
00:57:859 (7) - move on 00:58:076
01:16:989 (6) - no
01:28:946 (1) - move on 01:28:729
01:29:163 - add a circle
01:07:859 (Timing Setup Panel) - hmm,can you delete here KIAI? (Applies to all diffs)
01:14:381 - (Timing Setup Panel) - now add KIAI
01:21:337 - (Timing Setup Panel) - delete KIAI

<Sound>
00:23:294 - R
00:28:511 - R
00:38:729 - delete R, put W
00:43:076 - delete E, put W
00:44:816 - delete E
00:54:816 - delete W+R
00:55:250 - R
00:55:685 - delete R
00:56:555 - R
01:28:946 - delete W+R
01:29:163 - R

Queen:
- Approach (+1)
- If you want sound mod, write on queue or pm
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00:18:729 (6) - Rough slider. a lot of sliders in this Diff - rough and clumsy. fix it
00:30:903 (Timing Setup Panel) - KIAI. Why is there? (on map meets at a time, can remove?, or do the same on Joker and Ace)
00:44:382 (8,1) - spaicing. use Distance Spaicing please
00:57:861 (3) - move on 00:58:078
01:09:600 - add a circle
01:26:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - =) nope, altered, it will not do

I note your major mistakes:
1) Spaicing errors at all diffs
2) Rough sliders. giving them a beautiful form
Cool map, star
Sandpig
847 posts
Joined September 2010
Sandpig
oh...I think I have already modded once....

but many spacing problems are not fixed....

check AI mod...

no kds
narakucrimson
osu! Alumni
1,713 posts
Joined March 2010
narakucrimson
Hi there~~

[Joker]

The map is quiet unspaced - or said in another way, it doesn't have consistent distance snappings.

Try turning Distance Snap ON and go circle by circle fixing the spacing issues.

+Positive thing: the hitsounds sound good :)

35:251 (4) - Maybe a new combo here?

38:729 (7) - (^)

1:21:340 (1) - I'd add a clap in the end of the slider and leave the beggining with no hitsound. Same with slider 2.

1:28:731 (T) - The previous inherited timing section (that is now a bit after the spinner) should start here.



[Ace]

25:326 (3) - Why not stacking this under 1? Also, watch the spacing.

Please be careful with the spacing, again. Try to fix the wrong spacings. I'm not mentioning all of them because they are a loooot. Try using distance snap here, too.



[Killer Queen]

I like this one :)

1:00:469 (T) - Try starting the kiai here. Maybe in the other diffs too, to keep the consistency.

1:07:209 (1) - Try ending the kiai time here, and starting a new one at 1:14:383

1:21:122 (1) - End the kiai here

There are a lot of spacing issues here too. I suggest you to do the same thing I said before.



Fix all those things, mainly the spacing issues, and I'll star :D

Edit: As promised, here's my star
Last edited by narakucrimson , edited 1 time in total.
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

narakucrimson wrote:

Hi there~~

[Joker]

The map is quiet unspaced - or said in another way, it doesn't have consistent distance snappings. ...I mapped this one with Distance Snap....

Try turning Distance Snap ON and go circle by circle fixing the spacing issues.

+Positive thing: the hitsounds sound good :)

35:251 (4) - Maybe a new combo here? Done

38:729 (7) - (^) Done

1:21:340 (1) - I'd add a clap in the end of the slider and leave the beggining with no hitsound. Same with slider 2. That clap at 1 comes from the previous slider. But done

1:28:731 (T) - The previous inherited timing section (that is now a bit after the spinner) should start here. Fixed(?)



[Ace]

25:326 (3) - Why not stacking this under 1? Also, watch the spacing. Too lazy and the spacing is good

Please be careful with the spacing, again. Try to fix the wrong spacings. I'm not mentioning all of them because they are a loooot. Try using distance snap here, too. I tripled checked the spacing with Distance Snap, check them yourself. Just because it looks like a huge gap or a small gap dosen't make it so.



[Killer Queen]

I like this one :) Thanks

1:00:469 (T) - Try starting the kiai here. Maybe in the other diffs too, to keep the consistency. Done?

1:07:209 (1) - Try ending the kiai time here, and starting a new one at 1:14:383

1:21:122 (1) - End the kiai here

There are a lot of spacing issues here too. I suggest you to do the same thing I said before. Checked everything and distance snapped. I wish you guys were clearer on where the problems are...



Fix all those things, mainly the spacing issues, and I'll star :D
Thank you!
Dotsu
996 posts
Joined March 2009
Dotsu
~STAR~
artpiggo
315 posts
Joined December 2009
artpiggo
Ace
00:37:433 (6) - add clap

Killer Queen
00:55:912 (4) - new combo

sound volume in soft term are too quiet for me

star
arien666
6,312 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[General]
If you noticed the skin 'bloody mess' in front of BSS notice, delete bloody mess folder inside of your osz file...
[Also, you need to full-submit after this :3]

[Joker]
Resnap please :3
00:21:346 (2,3,4) - 3-4 is with spacing problem orz
00:26:564 (4) - Move into center :3

[Ace]
00:24:390 (2,3,4) - Is 2-3 supposed spacing...?
00:41:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Decreasing spacing... Is this supposed :3?
00:58:737 (1) - This slider would be end on 01:00:476 :3 [Make it 1/4 longer]
01:04:390 (2,3,4) - Is 3-4 supposed spacing...?
01:07:868 (1,2,3,4,5) - Decreasing spacing... Is this supposed :3?

[Killer Queen]
00:18:303 (4,5,6) - Some spacing issue...
00:20:694 (7,8,9) - ^
00:31:781 (3,4,5) - ^ but nazi
00:35:585 (4,5,6) - Some spacing issue...
00:36:129 (6,7,8,9) - Some spacing issue...
00:38:303 (2,3,4) - ^
00:48:303 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:00:151 - Wonder why Kiai start from here... orz
01:12:216 (6,7,8) - Some spacing issue...
01:26:781 (10,1) - Wonder about this jump ;_;



Well... Some spacing issues ;_;
Sorry for no star yet orz
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Hijiri Tezuka

arien666 wrote:

[General]
If you noticed the skin 'bloody mess' in front of BSS notice, delete bloody mess folder inside of your osz file...
[Also, you need to full-submit after this :3]

[Joker]
Resnap please :3
00:21:346 (2,3,4) - 3-4 is with spacing problem orz
00:26:564 (4) - Move into center :3

[Ace]
00:24:390 (2,3,4) - Is 2-3 supposed spacing...?
00:41:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Decreasing spacing... Is this supposed :3?
00:58:737 (1) - This slider would be end on 01:00:476 :3 [Make it 1/4 longer]
01:04:390 (2,3,4) - Is 3-4 supposed spacing...?
01:07:868 (1,2,3,4,5) - Decreasing spacing... Is this supposed :3?

[Killer Queen]
00:18:303 (4,5,6) - Some spacing issue...
00:20:694 (7,8,9) - ^
00:31:781 (3,4,5) - ^ but nazi
00:35:585 (4,5,6) - Some spacing issue...
00:36:129 (6,7,8,9) - Some spacing issue...
00:38:303 (2,3,4) - ^
00:48:303 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:00:151 - Wonder why Kiai start from here... orz
01:12:216 (6,7,8) - Some spacing issue...
01:26:781 (10,1) - Wonder about this jump ;_;



Well... Some spacing issues ;_;
Sorry for no star yet orz
Had a bit of trouble understanding your mod, but hope I did good enough!
Semi_Semi
110 posts
Joined September 2009
Semi_Semi
star～～

good＞＜

my map

pending

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-myun-
66 posts
Joined March 2011
-myun-
good map!
- Suima -
- Suima -
GOOD :)
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