Hello, M4M from my queue! Sorry for the delay.
I guess that's enough for me, i like the song as well, so don't be down :3/
Good Luck!
[> General <]
- - You should remove "English" from tags, it'll be added on the song genre later on.
- - Not good at SB modding, but i've seen some of the sb files have some unnecessary transparency on the images. So try to find those.
- - If you're planning to disable Stack Leniency or state rarely stack all together, then it's probably unrankable.
- - Seen some NC inconsistencies, but i don't think it's that important for a major issue.
- 00:21:833 (2) - Ctrl + G?
- 00:30:919 (3,4,5) - Flow is okay, but distance is quite unbalanced, Or try to make a small jump here. Like Ctrl + G on (4) and (5), or make another formation.
- 00:35:719 (1) - Move to x:216|y:48?
- 00:46:862 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is quite a sudden for triplets...
- 00:58:004 (2,4) - Symmetry, or make both the same position by curving them?
- 01:03:147 (1,2,3,4) - Good SV changes, but short distance. Since it's for app, i prefer extending the spacing for a bit.
- 01:12:062 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I always love to see this pattern and a huge fan of those, but at least try to scale or extend spacing for a better visibility.
- 01:15:490 (1,2) - Is this blanket on purpose?
- 01:22:690 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Good flow, but staying stacked on a single place might bore players. This is for app map, every notes should be active, as player's cursor as well.
- 01:30:233 (6) - I don't feel this part should need to have a repeat arrow, it's suggested to make a downbeat here, or replace slider as circles.
- 01:32:976 (6) - ^
- 01:35:719 (6) - ^, there are more, so not gonna mention them all.
- 01:40:347 (3,4,5) - Recorrect blanket.
- 02:05:719 (8,9,1) - Rotate -30?
- 02:12:404 (4,5,1,2,3) - Recorrect blanket.
- 02:24:404 (3,4,5) - ^
- 02:25:433 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - A bit too straight...
- 02:29:033 (4) - Extend the spacing here? or stack on circle (1).
- 02:37:776 (2,3) - I won't say this overlap is ugly, but i wanted to say that you should keep the position a bit visible. Since it'd look like an anti-jump, it's better you split them.
- 02:46:004 (2,3,4,5) - Some slider tails aren't stacked well, so do that?
- 02:47:547 (2,3) - Ctrl + G?
- 02:54:062 (5,1) - Stack together? It'd look better imo.
- 03:01:262 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - I know what you're trying to do here, but the notes are likely scattered.
- 03:14:804 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is good as well, i prefer you put the slider tails on the exact center from the previous slider.
- 03:27:148 (1,2) - A proper overlap? doesn't look great to me, but i guess it should be a bit visible. You should've done it before.
- 03:28:862 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Almost the same reason as 01:22:690 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
- 03:34:347 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - A little confusion between circles' spacings, looks really unbalanced.
- 03:41:547 (5,6,1) - Try making a better Cycle formation, by making three sliders the same positions. Don't forget about blanket.
- 03:52:519 (3) - Instead of stacking here and getting back from the current place, try finding somewhere else for a better placement for this slider.
- 04:05:719 (3,5) - Symmetry?
- - Can't mod further, sorry. Your map is probably great and fine, but the way you add notes are completely random scattered. So i don't like making huge mods of note placements. Well, i was quite picky, so i suggest you to check a few weird-placed notes and try to move them on their best place for players to have fun.
I guess that's enough for me, i like the song as well, so don't be down :3/
Good Luck!