2015-02-10 22:37 Echoy: Hi, deetz
2015-02-10 22:37 deetz: Hi, Echoy
2015-02-10 22:37 Echoy: would you have a look at my map? it's dnb
2015-02-10 22:38 deetz: uhhhh i can try lol
2015-02-10 22:38 deetz: np it
2015-02-10 22:38 Echoy: i like your newly ranked one so much ><
2015-02-10 22:38 Echoy: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/521687 TwoThirds & Feint - Epiphany (feat. Veela)]
2015-02-10 22:38 deetz: wow, thanks lol
2015-02-10 22:38 Echoy: Thank you so much!
2015-02-10 22:39 deetz: hm i cant playtest right now but i can give you my opinion just looking at now
2015-02-10 22:40 Echoy: that's fine! thanks!
2015-02-10 22:41 deetz: i think you have cool pattern sense and i like some of your aesthetic
2015-02-10 22:42 deetz: i think you should work more on fitting ot hte song and a bit of rhythm tho
2015-02-10 22:42 deetz: like 00:22:006 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - is cool but absolutely massive for what it is in the song
2015-02-10 22:42 Echoy: >///< thanks a lot!
2015-02-10 22:43 Echoy: okay, i got this
2015-02-10 22:43 deetz: this is just something im picky about, but its good to be consistent with the rhythm if the song is consistent
2015-02-10 22:44 deetz: i think it's pretty cool overall though
2015-02-10 22:45 Echoy: at first, i was trying to make it echo with the last part
2015-02-10 22:45 Echoy: 06:52:349 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) -
2015-02-10 22:45 deetz: ah, you could do the reverse where it gets bigger in the start because its kinda hard to expect massive jumps right off the bat
2015-02-10 22:46 deetz: you could also reduce the spacing and it would be cool
2015-02-10 22:46 Echoy: thanks! I'll take that!
2015-02-10 22:46 deetz: cause as it is at the start it's almost cross screen :p
2015-02-10 22:47 Echoy: will change it later~ reduce the spacing
2015-02-10 22:47 deetz: mm one thing i dont like though are sv changes, kinda drastic in my opinion for the sounds you want to represent
2015-02-10 22:47 deetz: 05:12:064 (1) -
2015-02-10 22:47 deetz: that sorta thing
2015-02-10 22:48 Echoy: ummm, I've been considering about it, is it too sudden or doesn't fit the music at all?
2015-02-10 22:49 deetz: well you added the hitsound there yourself :p
2015-02-10 22:49 Echoy: yes, that echo thing
2015-02-10 22:49 deetz: i don't like how the other sliders are really fast and then there's that which one would probably expect to be the same
2015-02-10 22:51 Echoy: you mean the player may not expect the sudden change of the slider speed?
2015-02-10 22:51 deetz: yes, and i dont think a change that drastic fits
2015-02-10 22:51 deetz: 02:25:435 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is kinda random and makes me sad
2015-02-10 22:52 Echoy: okay, got it
2015-02-10 22:54 deetz: i really like some of the things you do with 1/4 and slider overlaps tho, just some overlap too much and become hard to read
2015-02-10 22:54 deetz: 03:01:435 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - too many things going on in the same spot
2015-02-10 22:54 deetz: and then you change the direction
2015-02-10 22:55 Echoy: hhh, that's one part I cant read..
2015-02-10 22:55 deetz: 03:18:064 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this is fking cool gj
2015-02-10 22:56 Echoy: thanks/////
2015-02-10 22:56 deetz: 04:18:235 (1,2,3) - slight overlaps look meh
2015-02-10 22:57 Echoy: i'll move it!
2015-02-10 22:57 deetz: i'm not sure if this is silenced but it seems to be 04:24:064 (1) - and its unrankable if it is
2015-02-10 22:57 deetz: note needs proper feedback
2015-02-10 22:57 deetz: stuff in that section
2015-02-10 22:59 Echoy: it's not! I changed the hitnormal sound
2015-02-10 22:59 Echoy: which is extremly like the music
2015-02-10 23:00 deetz: 05:01:092 (1) - i think you can make this slider start part more round
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2740013 <- i just quickly did that
2015-02-10 23:00 deetz: play around a bit with the shape :p
2015-02-10 23:01 Echoy: i was meant to make a musical note but...
2015-02-10 23:01 Echoy: I'll remake it
2015-02-10 23:05 deetz: i dont think many people would notice that, people might just think it's messy
2015-02-10 23:06 Echoy: you're right..orz
2015-02-10 23:06 deetz: slider art is the easiest thing for people to be picky about :p
2015-02-10 23:06 Echoy: TAT
2015-02-10 23:07 deetz: one other thing i don't like 05:11:035 (4) - you have a lot of momentum in this part, when you make the spacing so close it kinda breaks the momentum
2015-02-10 23:09 Echoy: you mean this kind of overlap?
2015-02-10 23:09 deetz: i mean when the slider end is right next to the next clickable object
2015-02-10 23:10 deetz: you cuold make the jump more interesting, like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/27400532015-02-10 23:10 Echoy: ! i understand
2015-02-10 23:10 deetz: up to you
2015-02-10 23:10 Echoy: i'll take this!
2015-02-10 23:12 deetz: in the end, is the sb supposed to be sharp and flashy?
2015-02-10 23:12 Echoy: yes , we want it look like a flash light
2015-02-10 23:13 deetz: ah gotcha
2015-02-10 23:14 deetz: 03:40:521 (6) - ctrl g and blanket on 1 for more interesting flow
2015-02-10 23:14 Echoy: got it
2015-02-10 23:15 deetz: consider adding little images to sb to mark who mapped what part
2015-02-10 23:15 Echoy: I mapped all part, my friend do the sb
2015-02-10 23:16 deetz: ahhhhh i get it, you should make that clear in creator's words
2015-02-10 23:17 Echoy: ah, i know, the sb haven't been done yet, we are working on how to make some rain effect...
2015-02-10 23:17 deetz: ah :p
2015-02-10 23:17 deetz: well i think that's all from me now, i hope you remember some of the things I said and good luck
2015-02-10 23:17 deetz: i hope to see your first ranked!
2015-02-10 23:18 Echoy: thank you so much, deetz ><
2015-02-10 23:18 deetz: np
2015-02-10 23:19 deetz: since you ended up changing stuff do you mind if i post a log
2015-02-10 23:20 Echoy: nooo
2015-02-10 23:20 Echoy: your advice is quite useful