1. Bonzi's Advanced (2.18 stars, 191 notes)
2. Deif's Chemical Overdose (6.07 stars, 703 notes)
3. Hard (2.75 stars, 270 notes)
4. Hollowversible's Extra (5.53 stars, 658 notes)
5. Normal (1.55 stars, 131 notes)
6. Priti & Bonzi's Ultra (6.3 stars, 783 notes)
7. Pritiphyxia's Hyper (3.91 stars, 454 notes)
8. Spec's Acidic Rain (5 stars, 563 notes)
9. Tess' Insane (5 stars, 656 notes)
10. wa's Extra (5.53 stars, 702 notes)

General

1. Difficulty Spread : ☑
2. Unsnapped objects : ☑
3. Metadata Issues : Make sure not to forget to add all GD mapper's names on the tag
4. Timeline Issues : ☑
5. Combo Colors : ☑
6. Unused hitsounds : ☑
7. Hitsounds Issues : ☑
8. Background size : I'm unsure about the size of background image. Is 850x606 even rankable?
9. Inaudible hitsounds : ☑

Deif's Overdose

1. 00:04:738 (4,5,6,7) - Would be great to make this more horizontal as the space between 7 and 8 seems kinda unexpected for me.
2. 00:08:072 (1,2) - This is pretty hard to get actually since the jump between 1 and 2 is so ruthless considering the previous hdash. Trying this would be great for the better flow
3. 00:09:072 (1,3) - Swap NC?
4. 00:10:072 (5) - Add NC here
5. 00:10:738 (1,2,3,4) - Streams here seem kinda broken imo. Try this instead
6. 00:11:822 (3) - The slider here plays awkward for me. I'd ctrl+g 3 and make it more right-sided actually.
7. 00:18:405 (5) - Try x:176 for this. It'd make the flow better even if the part becomes a little more harder
8. 00:24:072 (1,2) - The jump between 1 and 2 is pretty harsh as it comes right after the strong hdash. I'd move 2 to a bit right
9. 00:42:988 (2) - It would be great if you move this to the left slightly
10. 00:44:238 (5) - This slider is pretty harsh imo. Try this instead
11. 00:44:405 (6) - How about moving this to x:208? I feel like it's lack of movement between 5 and 6
12. 00:44:738 (1,2) - If you agree with above suggestion. Don't forget to hold 1 and 2 and move them to a bit left as well(to keep the spacing)
13. 00:46:072 (6) - Add whistle on the tail of the slider to follow the sound properly
14. 00:49:655 (2) - I'd move this to the left just very slightly. Try move it to about x:261
15. 00:51:405 (6) - Whistle on the tail as it'd fit well with the background sound
16. 01:00:572 (6) - Missing finish here
17. 01:01:405 (1,5) - It'd sound great if you add whistles on 1 and 5
18. 01:02:405 (1) - Whistle on the head of the slider
19. 01:15:072 (5,6) - I feel it's lack of enough space between 4 and 5. How about moving 5~6 to a bit left?
20. 01:15:738 (3) - How about using normal-sampleset for the slider?
21. 01:16:405 (3) - Missing whistle on the head
22. 01:04:738 (3,4,5,6,7) - It plays kinda uncomfortable. Thus I recommend you to redesign the stream a little. (adding a hdash between 6 and 7 would be really great imo)
23. 01:19:572 (2,3) - There's NO sound on 01:19:572 and 01:19:822 , but actually are on 01:19:655 and 01:19:905. Please adjust the timeline like this
24. 01:20:072 (1) - It would sound way better if the slider finishes at 01:21:072 -
25. 01:22:738 (1) - Whistle on the head just like you did at 01:17:405 (1) -
26. 01:23:905 (1) - Same here, whistle on the head
27. 01:34:738 (1) - I'd make this slider more horizontal so you could get them easily while holding dash.
28. 01:38:405 (8) - It'd be better to move this to x:176 for an ideal movement
29. 01:40:988 (5) - To make the spacing here more consistent. I'd move this to x:256
30. 01:45:905 (3) - Remove whistle on the head of the slider
31. 01:47:405 (7) - Better add NC here as 15 fruits in a single combo might be too much
32. 01:47:905 (1) - Please move slider's end to a bit left to make the flow better
33. 01:48:738 (7) - You should add NC here <_<
34. 01:58:572 (10) - I'd use normal-sampleset here as it fits pretty well imo
35. 01:59:405 (1,2,3) - Anti-flow HDash jump. I highly recommend you to redesign this part as getting 1 after the 3 is really, really hard. If you wanna keep 3, please consider ctrl+h (1).
36. 02:02:572 (10) - Adding soft-finish would be great as it could emphasize the cymbal sound from the background

Axarious wrote:

Hollowversible's Extra[/b][/size]

1. 00:02:572 (6) - unexpectedly loud. agreed
2. 00:08:738 (1) - NC to show the groups of the changed rhythm? agreed
3. 00:09:738 (1,2) - Link along with ^, perhaps keep the blue tick 1/2 sliders consistent like on these three times: 00:08:822 - 00:09:322 - 00:09:822 - ? agreed
4. 01:06:072 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - this pattern is really hard to hit and will stop all hr plays (i'm not sure if mod playing is even something that should be taken into consideration when ranking) Not quite sure about it, but I might consider it later. As for now, no fix as I like that pattern.
5. kiai section is absolutely stunning.
6. 01:31:072 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - yes. just yes.
7. 01:34:655 (9,10) - yes.
8. 01:39:738 (7,8,1) - oh my yes.
9. 01:41:738 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - the little things are so beautiful.
10. 01:48:988 (4,1) - yes. Glad you like it!

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murutattack wrote:

00:45:905 - A little bit up to x:268 y:136. I prefer using the overlap.
01:02:738 - Need a note here, there is a sound on this note. it would end up beign a little too dense imo
01:44:572 - A little bit down to x:388 y:140. ok
01:56:072 - This one overlaps the HP Bar. Should be fine now

1. 00:34:738 (1) - Suggestion: You could replace this by copy of 00:37:738 (6) - .
2. 01:40:072 (3) - this slider would be more curvy, imo

1. 00:54:238 (2) - I think you should use distant snap 1,00x here, cause you did it before for example: 00:52:405 (4) -, 00:47:072 (4) -, 00:49:905 (4,5,6) -
2. 01:11:405 (1,2,3) - Not sure if this is bit hard for normal players... Putting circles to blue ticks isn't maybe good thing... it's up to you ^^
3. 01:17:405 (1) - really minor thing: +1 y
4. 01:42:738 (5) - I suggest to make this slider more 'angular'?! (is that right word here x_x) something like this
5. 01:54:072 (5,1,2) - ^
6. 02:00:072 (1) - really minor thing again: -1 x

1. 00:54:905 (5) - adding NC here would be nice in my opinion, it fits to music
2. 01:05:905 (6,7) - Would adding one more reverse here work? I think it could, but you know it better. example
3. 02:01:738 (5,6,7,1) - Making jumps at the very end of song isn't maybe wise. The jumps don't really fit to music/the music doesn't say that there should be jumps. But it's up to you!

1. 00:23:072 (8) - Move first dot to x359 y272 so it's lined with 00:22:238 (5) -
2. 00:31:738 (4) - Suggestion: place this slider like this, feel free to ignore completely.
   
   example

   
3. 02:03:738 (2) - Suggestion (again): Try using here 1/4 slider or 1/8 slider with reverse, it fits to music.
   really good map! ^^

1. 01:21:072 (1) - maybe add here NC?
2. 01:55:072 (3,4) - I suggest to do Ctrl + G for both of them. It would flow maybe better, idk, up to you!

smsh150 wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:54:905 (5) - adding NC here would be nice in my opinion, it fits to music Ruins the NC pattern of the whole diff
2. 01:05:905 (6,7) - Would adding one more reverse here work? I think it could, but you know it better. example I'd rather not actually, doesn't feel right to me.
3. 02:01:738 (5,6,7,1) - Making jumps at the very end of song isn't maybe wise. The jumps don't really fit to music/the music doesn't say that there should be jumps. But it's up to you! They play neatly in my opinion and fit the feeling of the end so i'd rather keep it like that.

[Pritiphyxia's Hyper]

1. 00:23:072 (8) - Move first dot to x359 y272 so it's lined with 00:22:238 (5) - Not my part but imo it ruins the flow, it's up to Asphyxia to decide I guess
2. 00:31:738 (4) - Suggestion: place this slider like this, feel free to ignore completely. Ruins the intended flow
   
   example

   
3. 02:03:738 (2) - Suggestion (again): Try using here 1/4 slider or 1/8 slider with reverse, it fits to music. Ruins the intended flow
   really good map! ^^

smsh150 wrote:

[Bonzi's Normal]

1. 00:54:238 (2) - I think you should use distant snap 1,00x here, cause you did it before for example: 00:52:405 (4) -, 00:47:072 (4) -, 00:49:905 (4,5,6) - done
2. 01:11:405 (1,2,3) - Not sure if this is bit hard for normal players... Putting circles to blue ticks isn't maybe good thing... it's up to you ^^ show me something better and i'll be glad to change it
3. 01:17:405 (1) - really minor thing: +1 y nah
4. 01:42:738 (5) - I suggest to make this slider more 'angular'?! (is that right word here x_x) something like this done
5. 01:54:072 (5,1,2) - ^ wat where
6. 02:00:072 (1) - really minor thing again: -1 x ye ok

smsh150 wrote:

#modreqs

[Pritiphyxia's Hyper]

1. 00:23:072 (8) - Move first dot to x359 y272 so it's lined with 00:22:238 (5) - I agree with Priti here, it'd ruin the flow so I'd rather keep it like this

Axarious wrote:

Tess' Insane

1. kiai time party
2. 00:40:405 (2,3) - ds here in the melody is smaller than in the calm section 00:45:738 (1,2) - , perhaps enlarge this spacing a bit Fixed~
3. 00:46:238 (3) - 1/6, not 1/8 You're right
4. 00:50:238 (1,2,3) - 1/6 but i guess it's okay on the insane. but, if you placed a triple there, you should also place one 00:52:572 (4,5) - between these two for consistency. I get your point, but considering that this is the last bar in the section before the transition, I'd like to keep this
5. 01:04:738 (5,6,7) - imo this is a little too spaced, unneeded large ds. also doesn't capture sound on the blue tick 01:04:822 - Fixed sound and made spacing slightly smaller and more consistent
6. 01:06:405 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ music on the 1/4 quiets down, still relatively large ds compared to the streams or 1/4ths found in the kiai. They are comparatively larger but this is on purpose, because the momentum from 01:05:905 (1,2,3) - leading up to that stream is huge in itself, but doesn't add much pressure due to it being sliders. Keeping this for now unless I get a good suggestion
7. 01:11:405 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 1/6 but i guess it's okay on the insane. Yeah it's just for playability
8. 01:19:405 (5,6,7) - feels unnatural to hit the 3/4 because this rhythm is only used once in the entire map, but i guess it's fine. Well yeah, the section in the music is unique
9. 01:44:405 (3,4) - unstacked here while 01:45:405 (3,4) - these are stacked, same music. Fixed
10. 01:51:405 (4) - NC for consistency with 01:56:738 (1) - Done
11. 01:54:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - NC on 4 like you did here: 01:11:405 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - or remove the nc there instead, also 1/6 but it's okay. Added NC
12. 01:57:655 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Link odd introduction of double which shouldn't be there, makes it a lot harder to read. also missing hard on the white tick 01:57:738 - This isn't an introduction, though. There's no use in switching from one intrument to another just because you'd otherwise skip a white tick. I'm following the flute here, and since the flute dictates most of the outro I decided to keep doing that until the next instrument came to the foreground (in this case a bass synth)
13. 01:59:405 (3,1) - NC on (3) instead for pairs instead? Sure
14. 01:59:738 (3,4) - possibly make this a larger jump instead of a glide to (4)? perhaps stack (4) on 01:58:905 (2) - Why? I don't really understand what you want here. This is a triple, why make a jump? The section's calm, song is over, no need for fancy things.

smsh150 wrote:

[Tess' Insane]

1. 01:21:072 (1) - maybe add here NC? 01:21:238 (3) - Added here instead
2. 01:55:072 (3,4) - I suggest to do Ctrl + G for both of them. It would flow maybe better, idk, up to you! No thanks, that would make the section inconsistent. It flows nicely as it is.

Karia wrote:

• Bonzi's Normal

1. 00:11:405 (2) - Change the slider shape a bit? This hidden sliderside is not fit with Normal imo changed
2. 00:29:072 (2) - hmm.. the 1.0 DS is better imo like other 1/1 rhythms. no change here because of star rating rising too much if i do this in every section :/
3. 00:33:905 - add a note? ok
4. 00:39:738 (2) - Same DS opinion ohshit i didn't saw this
5. 00:43:238 (2) - Needless note in Normal to me i don't think so
6. 00:50:405 (6,1) - DS ohshit i dind't saw this either
7. 01:04:405 (4,5,6) - a bit weird rhythm. try note - note - slider? nah, it would end up having the slider on a minor sound
8. 01:12:322 (2) - Maybe really hard to catch exact rhythm to Normal players. Plz consider change 01:12:322 (2,3) - this to one slider. It'll be better to catch the rhythm imo ok
9. 01:43:738 (6) - same DS opinion ok
10. 01:54:988 (1,2) - same as 01:12:322 (2) - changed

Karia wrote:

Teach me how to moddiing orz

• Easy

1. 00:53:072 (4) - , 01:02:738 (2) - 1/2 repeat slider is too hard in this bpm imo. plz consider different rhythm ;w; tbh it's fine, it's just a repeat.

• Pritiphyxia's Hyper

1. 00:55:405 (3,4,5) - There is no 1/4 beat. Change to 1/2 or 1/6 plz The heavy noisy drums in the back are 1/4
2. 02:03:738 (2) - stack on (1)'s tail and add a note at 02:03:655 - ? too hard to read

gl

newyams99 wrote:

Hi from queue~

General

I feel there could be an audio volume reduction to 70% or something at 01:06:738 up to 01:12:072 or the kiai time. Same at 01:49:405 to 01:54:738. Seems unnecessary to me, unchanged.

Muzukashii

02:03:572 (1,2,3,4) - This might be hard for Muzukashii level players to follow up after the spinner. I'd suggest removing the triplets if you're going to do this. I feel like it's fine tbh

That's all for now. Will edit and have MM's diffs modded soon.

Karia wrote:

• General

1. Compare with all Extra, Tess' AR feels high even if they are GD.. It works, I don't really think I should lower it. Lowering it by 0.1 would be lame imo, so leaving it as it is for now.

• Tess' Insane

1. 00:04:738 (1) - 1/6 feels better cuz it's more loud. But this isn't 1/6
2. 00:21:405 (7) - NC Done
3. 01:04:738 (5,6,7) - Reduce the DS? A bit hard in-playing.. It's actually because the DS is too low, so the pattern doesn't match its own momentum. Increased instead.
4. 01:06:405 (1,2,3,4,1) - Not suitable DS in Insane It's suitable enough to match the previous slider's momentum, look good and be enjoyable to play :p

gl Thanks!~

Sala- wrote:

[Tess' Insane]

Good map, but the very end could be a bit more fluent. The spaced triplet doesn't realy fit there and it doesn't look too good. I made an example on how I would end the map. I don't really understand what you mean, so I won't change this.