Hello DoKo, Krfawy here! :3
Whoever told you about me is going to get raped with my blonde nature if you don't tell me who it was. ;_;
Good luck!
- Well, I don't really think the accurate combo colours are matching the BG very well. Personally I advice something soft-toned, for example this.
- Where are hitsounds? Remember you have to HS the map, otherwise it's not possible to make it approved!
- 00:52:200 (3) - The beginning of this slider is so shaky... I doubt it is rankable nowadays. To be honest I don't know how you want to stress this riff here, but maybe you could try to make something more simple without so many curves and direction changes.
- 00:53:400 (8) - Can you improve this blanket, please?
- 00:54:150 (11) - Well, maybe it's not as unrankable as the previous slider, but try to place the red points a bit closer so it's not wubbling that much. Maybe use something similar like 04:25:491 (11) - this?
- 01:24:000 (5,6,7) - Is there a possibility to make it 1/2 instead of 3/4 sliders? Now it doesn't sound well, I believe the better way would be to make it 1/2 as in the previous moments because now it seems to be a bit sloppy. Or if possible, to make 1/2 sliders and circles between note gap. What do you think about it?
- 01:36:600 (10) - Again the same thing, but this time only to this one slider.
- 02:01:050 (7,8,9,10) - could you stack it properly due 02:00:450 (5) - this slider? You know, blanket thing is a nazi thing, but design is an important thing nowadays.
- 02:54:000 (5,6) - I think you know why I've pointed this moment. The same goes to 03:06:600 (10,11) - this.
- 03:27:000 (2) - Blanket it, please. ;_;
- 03:52:800 (10) - This one too.
- 04:23:020 (9) - Well, I am wondering if you could straighten the slider a little bit so it's less curvy, for example like this. Now it's quite 808 and someone probably will point it out, so I'm doing it now.
- 04:58:650 (3) - Well, the spacing which starts from here is insanely huge... Streams like that for that long... I am just not into this kind of thing if it lasts too long.
- 05:02:550 (14) - Again, the slider form is quite unrankable I believe (because of too much wubbly structure).
- 05:07:050 (13) - Blanket Terrora.
- 05:09:300 (9) - Again unrankable thing I think.
- 05:26:850 (1) - Those streams part 2... Are you sure you want to keep such construction? I don't think BNs and QATs will be willing on thing like this, it's not 2012.
- 05:31:350 (13) - Dat wubbling slider! Again I recommend to copy or make something similar like 04:25:491 (11) - this to avoid too much dangerous red points in the sliders.
Good luck!