Not really a mod but kinda is anyway. idk, you asked me to post. Anyhow just looking through the map.
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- You probably haven't hitsounded yet but you should do that.
- 00:21:450 (6,1) - Feels a bit close. Same with 00:22:650 (6,1) - . Reason is probably because you jump at 00:20:250 (6,1) - , and these sections being very similar to each other. 00:23:850 (6,1) - is better, since there's still a slight jump, it's only when the DS don't change at all that I feel it's kinda off.
- 00:35:400 (3,4,5) - Slightly awkward flow. Not really a big deal, but the flow has mostly been circular at this point.
- 00:56:550 (8,9,10) - Try slider-note-slider-note? Since the guitar is on 00:57:150 -
- 00:58:050 (5) - Slightly curve this towards the next stream?
- 01:04:350 (7,8,9,10,11) - It's kinda weird to have these jumps when the previous notes are really close to each other, and with no particular increase in intensity in the song.
- 01:20:550 - fuck you <3
- 01:24:000 (5,6,7) - Just in reply to another mod, you could try to make 1/2 sliders with the sliders being sped up a bit or something, though they're probably fine as-is, as long as you lower the volume of the ends.
- 01:28:200 (2,3,4) - Move this pattern down a bit? Unless you intentionally wanted to make (1,2) overlap, which is kinda silly.
- 01:29:250 (9,1) - You should make these lead into each other more: http://puu.sh/ggHJm.jpg
- 01:30:150 (9,1) - Should probably swap NC.
- 01:40:050 (2,3,4) - Feel too close since you have higher spacing earlier :p
- 01:53:850 (11) - I actually think this works better as two notes, since you have two drumhits on it.
- 01:58:650 (5,6,7,8) - Change these to 2 1/4 sliders? You'll be clicking on the drumthingies.
- 02:16:650 (6) - Looks like it's the same spacing between (5,6) and (6,7). Consider moving the (7) further away or something.
- 02:18:000 (7,1) - Make 1 1/1 slider to be consistent with the same slider later.
- 02:26:250 (6) - Not sure why you made a 1/4 slider instead of a note here, since you use a note at 02:16:650
- 02:31:350 - 03:16:950 - Copy-paste and flipped is lame Well, you changed a few things, but overall you can still see that it's a copy-paste. You should like, rearrange stuff more. Anyhow, whatever I said earlier probably apply here.
- 03:18:750 (2) - Intentionally no NC?
- You did a better job rearranging the kiai, though you can still tell, which sucks
- 03:45:900 (1,2,3) - Dunno that looks kinda ugly.
- 03:47:700 (5,6) - ctrl+g?
- 03:49:950 (8) - People might yell at you for that.
- 04:04:650 (7,1) - and 04:08:250 (6,1) - Same as the beginning.
- 04:23:726 (3,4) - Again just feels a bit too close.
- 05:24:750 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/ggJT9.jpg works better imo though the whole thing is just kinda weird.
- 05:26:850 - haha fuck you more.
- 05:28:950 (13,1) - I actually think moving (13) away from (1) so you get a jump into the next stream would be more interesting. + It feels nice for "restarting" the streams/guitar solo. Same for the other sliders in this section.
- 05:36:450 (2,3,4,5) - 3 Sliders following the guitar works better here imo: http://puu.sh/ggK5i.jpg
- 05:48:150 (13,1) - Same as before etc.
- 05:55:800 (2) - Delete note? I think it's pretty interesting to have a stop like this, and it follows the guitar better.
- 06:00:450 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Nothing wrong with this, but I think http://puu.sh/ggKoj.jpg is a better rhythm, where you stack notes (1,2), (4,5), (8,9) and (10,11).
- 06:07:950 (5,6) - Make a slightly bigger gap here? as well as a gap between 06:08:550 (10,1) -
- 06:19:650 - Dunno about these velocity changers (this 1.6 and the previous and next 1.4) I guess you're trying to follow the "oh-oh-oh" thing going higher in pitch? Anyhow, some of the sliders feel too close during the 1.6 section compared to the sliderspeed.
- 06:24:600 (2,3,4,5,6) - Straight lines are awkward ;;
- 06:32:100 (16) - Make the first part of this slider smoother? So you don't get this ugly thing: http://puu.sh/ggKWa.jpg
- 06:53:100 (12) - Move to 376;32 or somewhere along those lines? For a bigger jump into the repeat slider after it
- 07:17:250 - Nothing wrong with the mapping itself, but this section just feels way too tame compared to all the stuff you had to go through to get here. It's the end of the map, so it just kinda awkward. The guitar is also similar to 00:40:950 - at the beginning (not identical but still), and I think it would fit better if you made this part similar in difficulty as that part.
- 07:36:900 (2,2,2,2) - You'll have to move the pattern more to the right for this, but it'd be cool if you placed the (2)'s a further away for every repeat, so you get a nice jump on the last one.
- 07:49:500 (1) - Make it a slider that ends at 07:50:550 - ? With some wiggles and squiggles and stuff.