Hi there , M4M from your queue
Bold= Highly suggested
Blue= Questionable
Red= Somehow unrankable
[General]
Good luck
Bold= Highly suggested
Blue= Questionable
Red= Somehow unrankable
[General]
- Aimod say something about your map please fix those things
- Try NC on every big white tick , it works
- Make sure each emphasized beat clickable it give nice feeling when playing it
- HP=2 I think 3 might be too much for Easy
- 00:07:104 (2) - Consider curve this , it doesn't flow so natural like 00:08:595 (1) -
- 00:07:104 (2,3) - Small inconsistent in spacing
- 00:08:222 (3) - NC this instead of 00:08:595 (1) -
- 00:09:713 (2) - NC this instead of 00:10:458 (3) -
- 00:09:713 (1,2,3) - imo this might be a bit tricky for Easy I recommend using 1/1 slider here
- 00:12:694 (2,1) - Inconsistent spacing
- 00:14:185 - to 00:19:775 - This rhythm might play better imo the one you use doesn't sound intresting here , I don't know why you skip some white tick
- 00:20:148 (1,2,3,1,2) - This might play better
- 00:33:191 (1,2,3,4) - imo a bit tricky here you end slider on downbeat which contain emphasized beat that make the rhythm inconsistent with 00:32:073 (1) - So try use something like this ( you don't have to use the same rhythm I suggested , just try modify a bit if you think it not suit for your style )
- 00:36:173 - This feel really empty and the rhythm doesn't play well for me , try this
- 00:38:781 (2) - It doesn't play well if you end the slider on downbeat try the rhythm like what I suggested you previously
- 00:48:471 (1) - Maybe try make the reverse arrow on 1/2 beat then add a note here 00:49:961 -
- 00:55:943 - It feel empty here
- 00:59:651 (1) - Look like you miss some emphasized beat try shorten the slider to something like this
- 01:17:166 (1,2,3,4) - imo the rhythm sound a bit weird here try this
- 01:19:775 (5) - NC this instead of 01:20:893 (1) -
- 01:22:384 (1,2) - A bit tricky to read this rhythm Well , I think it okay to use simple rhythm like this as long as it playable for beginners it okay
- 01:28:346 (3) - You miss some emphasized beat here consider using this rhythm
- 01:34:682 (3,4) - How about using slider here instead?
- 01:36:173 - Now the rhythm in 2nd kiai time is really feel inconsistent compare to 1st kiai time try to make the rhythm for each kiai time similiar
- 02:01:328 (1) - Move to 02:01:514 - Beginners need some reaction time
Easy need some work on rhythm and some nc consistentcy also the hitsound sound inconsistent try to play with hitsound a bit for basic hitsound pattern try place clap on every white tick near the big white tick , it works for most of the song in the world
- 00:06:732 (1,2) - Blanket at (1)'s tail?
- 00:08:781 (3) - Spacing 1.3x here , it doesn't need jumps here
- 00:09:340 (1) - this make the rhythm inconsistent because you end this slider on downbeat try this
- 00:15:303 - Feel empty
- 00:15:489 (5) - imo this play weird try this
- 01:23:315 (2,3,4) - imo anti-jumps don't fit here
- 01:24:247 (1,2,3,4) - ^
- 01:29:651 (1,2,3) - ^
- 01:33:937 (1,2,3,4) - ^ for me I would use anti-jumps on something that really emphasized or can predict how the next note sound like
Honestly , this Hard need some works on rhythm , flow , nc consistency , hitsound consistency , well I the best things to do here is try to take a look at some ranked Hard and try to learn by feeling then develope your own Hard that the best way to learn about making Hard , it wii be just too much and very complex if I say all of the basic things about mapping Hard , I would say that learning by yourself work best for Hard and Insane
- Okay well I think this one need some rework , the spacing is quite inconsistent you change the main spacing too much here I guess make sure you don't change your main spacing too much , some jumps also doesn't make sense you should use jumps when you feel like the note there is emphasized , same advice as Hard try to take a look at some ranked Insane and you might get some ideas here , for now it just feel pretty inconsistent in everything they are so many problems that I can't write them all here
Good luck