Samui wrote:
Hello hello o/
[Sey's Salad]
00:12:676 (5) - Move to 00:12:568 It follows another beat here, so nope.
00:16:426 (5) - Move to 00:16:481 and move slider end to x416 y192
↑ 00:16:589 - Add note on x424 Should be better now.
00:19:054 (5) - Move to 00:19:017 and move slider end to x232 y192 Changed timeline but keeping position. Also y values aren't important in CTB.
00:23:474 (2) - Move slider end to x432 y192
↑ 00:23:582 - Add note on x408 Why? That would just worsen the timeline.
00:24:687 (2) - Move to 00:24:705 and move slider end to x160 y192 Moved it to 00:24:742 - instead.
00:25:720 (2) - Move to 00:25:575
↑ 00:25:720 - Add note on x256 Nope, skipped that beat on purpose here because it isn't very important.
00:27:314 (2) - Move slider end to x248 y192
↑ 00:27:459 - Add note on x264 Sure. Increased distance a bit.
00:32:242 (2) - Sounds better if it is only a note Yeah, sounds better.
00:44:307 (1) - Move slider end to x304 y192
↑ 00:44:452 - Add note on x288 Adding that note would be too much. But I changed the pattern a little bit.
01:02:531 (2) - Move slider end to x176 y184 Ok.
01:02:966 - Add note on x352 Would be too much for a Salad.
↑ 01:03:111 (1) - remove NC No, a new rhythm starts here.
01:04:633 (3) - Move to 01:04:705 Yup.
01:04:850 (1) - Sounds better if it is only a note Yup.
01:09:524 (2) - Move slider end to x368 y160 It is on x368already, y-position plays no rule in CTB mapping!
Very nice, and good luck!
Thank you! Also I keep my own hitsounds by now. Might be changing it later but I am too lazy right now.mingmichael wrote:
now it's my turn huehue
Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it
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[ Salad]Notes• i don't get what sound which is followed by this note 00:06:879 (3) - , especially the tail of the slider on 00:07:169 - . hm maybe you wanted to use a mirror pattern with this slider 00:06:445 (2) - . it's a nice idea, but actually it doesn't follow any particular sounds and not really well too IMO. okay, try to change the tail this slider 00:06:879 - to be 00:07:024 - , and it would be great if it looks like this I did something else but I remapped it.
• if you use my previous mod, the distance between 00:06:879 (3,1) - is a quite high. i think you can reduce this one by yourself ^
• a 1/6 slider on 00:20:358 - would be great since it will follow the bass sounds well there!. here i have a little suggestion from 00:20:358 - ~ 00:20:937 - :
00:20:358 (2) - is x:168 and 00:20:792 (3) - is x:440 I followed something else here, so nope.
• a vertical slider on 00:20:792 (3) - will be nice IMO. mostly the sliders use the horizontal one, so i think for having some vertical one will make a variation for the patterns, like this one 00:22:097 (3) - Did something dfferent, it was vertical already, jussayin'
• the kiai ends on 00:24:850 - ? any reasons?
• i think the spinner would be great if it starts on 00:35:285 - and it ends on 00:37:749 - like my diff, and also it will keep the consistency for the spinners too huehue Dunno... Somehow I like my version better, I just had a different idea here... Is it really necessary to have that much of consistency between two different GD mappers?
• hm this end of the this spinner 00:39:198 (1) - should end on 00:41:227 - when the last instrument sound (it looks like a electric piano...? i dunno xD) comes out here and a note on 00:41:662 - will be much better than a tail of spinner Fixed.
• move this slider 00:51:662 (2) - to right a bit. just for a little movement between 00:51:263 (1,2) - Done.
• hm the tail of this slider 01:02:531 (2) - , i don't get the function of it ;_; if you wanna to follow the instruments, it should be ended on 01:02:531 (2) - , but it ends on 01:02:821 - . okay, you can use a similar slider like 01:00:792 (1) - which the slider ends on the white strike. IMO this is much better than it ends on 01:02:821 - I made the slider shorter, should be more logic now.
• a single note would be great here 01:04:850 - . it will focus and follow the bass sounds really well. if it's a slider, i don't get any functions for the tail of a slider on 01:04:995 - , like on your diff There is a single note already LOL
• move 01:09:524 (2) - to 01:09:488 (2) - . the instrument sounds end on 01:09:633 - and it sounds really clearly here Voice DEFINITELY starts at 01:09:524 - , so I keep it as it is. Otherwise it would be really off-timed.
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[ Platter]Notes• move 00:09:053 (2) - to a bit left (i suggest to x:80). it's for making a movement between 00:08:618 (1,2,3) - Done.
• the kiai ends on 00:24:850 - ? any reasons?
• this jump is a bit hard for Platter IMO 00:27:024 (1,2) - and i missed it for many times too when i tried this hue. try to move 00:27:314 (2) - to x:144 Ok
• same like Salad for the usage of the spinners i won't explain it again here huehue Me neither huehue
• same like Salad again. it would be better for having a single note on 01:04:850 - . it will emphasize the bass sounds really well with a single note on 01:04:850 - Fixed it and some timing issue here as well :3
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that's all hohooo
nice Platter as always, Sey~! xD
@Nwolf: Before uploading check my Title Unicode, it seems to be broken in the .osu again.
Salad: http://puu.sh/d9W2F/20ef045d7e.osu
Platter: http://puu.sh/d9W3D/6d5eff53fb.osu