just some suggestion before we get this back to requalified
just neating the hitsound a little bit and a little suggestion
[EZ]
00:00:720 (720|0,1401|1,2310|2,3220|3) - whistle
00:42:765 - add a note with drum finish
00:50:038 (50038|1) - drum finish
00:54:810 (54810|3,55265|2) - how about swap collumn with each other ? looks more patternwise imo , like
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/204743800:31:629 (31629|2) - extend this hold to the next hold like you did this 01:00:720 (60720|3) -
01:20:947 (80947|2,81174|1) - remove whistle
01:21:856 (81856|3,82083|2) - ^
01:22:765 (82765|1,82992|2) - ^
01:24:810 (84810|1) - move to 3
[NM]
00:00:720 (720|0,1401|3) - whistle like you did on last part
00:02:310 (2310|3,3220|2) - ^
00:04:356 (4356|3,5038|0) - i think the drum whistle arent necessary , it would be better without them
00:55:038 - add a note ? for consistency like you did in 00:53:220 (53220|1) - and 00:56:856 (56856|2) -
01:05:947 - add a note here is fine
01:12:310 (72310|1) - this should be normal note and 01:12:538 (72538|2) - is hold like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/204741701:15:492 - i think you shouldnt ignore this drum though
01:20:947 (80947|2,81174|1) - remove whistle
01:21:856 (81856|0,82083|1) - ^
01:22:765 (82765|3,82992|1) - ^
[HD]
00:00:947 (947|0,1174|1) - i guess remove the whistle sounds better
00:01:856 (1856|3,2083|2) - ^
00:02:765 (2765|0,2992|1) - ^
00:42:765 (42765|3,42992|2) - i think soft normal fits better ?
00:44:583 (44583|1,45038|1,45492|1,45947|1) - add finish drum too , the soft normal sounds weird
00:46:401 (46401|2,46856|2,47310|1,47765|1) - ^
00:50:265 (50265|1) - change to drum finish suits better imo too
00:56:629 (56629|0) - hmm i think this hold is misplaced by 1/2?
it should be like this00:57:765 - recommend you to add a note since there is a repeating violin here ,
which is u catch the long violin so i think its better if you should catch this too.
01:00:947 - add a hold like
this ? , according to violin sound too
01:04:810 - the flute sounds are good to catch too
, here a pattern suggestion in case if you like to add them
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/204738301:08:901 (68901|0) - i suggest to move it to 3 , with the repeating violin fits the pitch relevancy too
01:11:629 (71629|3) - also i think this is overly extended , i think it should end here 01:12:310 - ?
01:12:310 (72310|1) - another point is this violin starts here , in addition , add a note at the current time to show the
repeated violin like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/204739201:20:720 (80720|3) - remove finish
01:20:947 (80947|2,81174|1) - same as intro part remove whistle
01:21:856 (81856|0,82083|1) - ^
01:22:765 (82765|1,82992|2) - ^
thats all , call me back ~