Spy wrote:

Recheck
No need to kudosu again.

[General]
Title of EZ diff correct to 虹のかけら (TV Size)
(You missed a space)
Source : Isshuukan Friends. ←need the dot.
Tags : 一週間フレンズ。 ←need the dot too.

Just these

hutunohito wrote:

[NM]
01:07:992 (67992|2,68901|3,71629|0,72310|1) - idk why they're different

ExUsagi wrote:

one more thing, according to p/3230766 link on that post (on my beatmap), your HD need at least 2.25 star rating if you want to name it like that (Hard)
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Mapset

if you agree, you might need to rename it.. since it's ranking criteria lol

==a don't you think this need more checker + qat?

hutunohito wrote:

[NM]
01:07:992 (67992|2,68901|3,71629|0,72310|1) - idk why they're different it suits the right pitch , also it doesnt really bother the consistency

[EZ]
00:52:992 (52992|1) - move to 1 this is not an issue at all , its playable and not really need an unnecessary changes ,

lZenxl wrote:

Adding to that, NM has wide screen turned off for some reason?

Edit :

The kiai ends at a rather weird area, on 01:12:992 - ?
I would strongly suggest to extend to 01:18:901 -

YunoFanatic wrote:

ya know just an opinion.

As Kifuera-san's FIRST ranked beatmap. you shouldnt focus in here rather than congratulate him cause he finally got his first ranked map.
second of all, dont need to perfect your first ranked map right? like in my gohan wa okazu even tho they know there is still something wrong ( other modder's view not the BAT ) they didnt even bother to post the problem. cuz you know the reason, FIRST RANKED MAP. thirdly, the reason to unrank this one is because of the unsnapped,wrong tittle source artist, checked letterbox turned off widescreen and enabled countdown. you shouldnt focus on the notes and placement atm. you could do that at his second map so ATLEAST you can improve the map but not in his FIRST ranked map. just let it be. you can do this if this is his 2nd 3rd and so on. just congratulate him at the moment dont give pressure.. OPINION THO. my point of view.

Congrat sa ranked map mo <3 yay more PH Mappurs! continue mo lang ung pag mamap mo magiging expertu kadin! <3 Hart Hart :* GOGOGOGO!!!

hutunohito wrote:

YunoFanatic wrote:

ya know just an opinion.

As Kifuera-san's FIRST ranked beatmap. you shouldnt focus in here rather than congratulate him cause he finally got his first ranked map.
second of all, dont need to perfect your first ranked map right? like in my gohan wa okazu even tho they know there is still something wrong ( other modder's view not the BAT ) they didnt even bother to post the problem. cuz you know the reason, FIRST RANKED MAP. thirdly, the reason to unrank this one is because of the unsnapped,wrong tittle source artist, checked letterbox turned off widescreen and enabled countdown. you shouldnt focus on the notes and placement atm. you could do that at his second map so ATLEAST you can improve the map but not in his FIRST ranked map. just let it be. you can do this if this is his 2nd 3rd and so on. just congratulate him at the moment dont give pressure.. OPINION THO. my point of view.

Congrat sa ranked map mo <3 yay more PH Mappurs! continue mo lang ung pag mamap mo magiging expertu kadin! <3 Hart Hart :* GOGOGOGO!!!

I don't hate mapper
I hate BAT because some unfound issues is up to them
And for next map improve

1. Title: 虹のかけら-TV size ver.-
2. Romanized^: Niji no Kakera-TV size ver.-

Source (No.32)

ExUsagi wrote:

TwT roxas y u do diz..

owell, good luck though... xD

hutunohito wrote:

[NM]
01:07:992 (67992|2,68901|3,71629|0,72310|1) - idk why they're different

[EZ]
00:52:992 (52992|1) - move to 1

hutunohito wrote:

[NM]
01:07:992 (67992|2,68901|3,71629|0,72310|1) - idk why they're different nope, i believe it's just ok in this one

[EZ]
00:52:992 (52992|1) - move to 1 -ok, done.

I'm very thankful for the modders who mod this map, including your mod. but, please don't or avoid modding after the map is ranked. because it's just as arcwin have said that it's the QAT's job. welp still thanks.

lZenxl wrote:

hutunohito wrote:

[NM]
01:07:992 (67992|2,68901|3,71629|0,72310|1) - idk why they're different

Adding to that, NM has wide screen turned off for some reason? -ok, done.

Edit :

The kiai ends at a rather weird area, on 01:12:992 - ?
I would strongly suggest to extend to 01:18:901 - -ok, done.

KSHR wrote:

Sorry for the delay, but I have to disqualified for incorrect metadata.

[Metadata]

1. Title: 虹のかけら-TV size ver.- -ok, done.
2. Romanized^: Niji no Kakera-TV size ver.- -ok, done.

Source (No.32)

According to this map thread, apparently some patterns in EZ and NM should be fixed.
Since I'm not familiar with osu! mania as some of you know, I will leave it to mania BATs.

-thank you sir KSHR

Spy wrote:

OK,seems almost fix

- 09/18 Edit -
Sorry I forgot to rebubble it.

kifuera456 wrote:

Spy wrote:

OK,seems almost fix

- 09/18 Edit -
Sorry I forgot to rebubble it.

Ow that's nice, thank you sir spy

Rumia- wrote:

just some suggestion before we get this back to requalified

just neating the hitsound a little bit and a little suggestion
[EZ]
00:00:720 (720|0,1401|1,2310|2,3220|3) - whistle -ok, done.
00:42:765 - add a note with drum finish -ok, done.
00:50:038 (50038|1) - drum finish -ok, done.
00:54:810 (54810|3,55265|2) - how about swap collumn with each other ? looks more patternwise imo , like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2047438 -ok, done.
00:31:629 (31629|2) - extend this hold to the next hold like you did this 01:00:720 (60720|3) - -since both bat (spy and you ), i'll change this one. ok done
01:20:947 (80947|2,81174|1) - remove whistle -ok, done.
01:21:856 (81856|3,82083|2) - ^ -ok, done.
01:22:765 (82765|1,82992|2) - ^ -ok, done.
01:24:810 (84810|1) - move to 3 -ok, done.

[NM]
00:00:720 (720|0,1401|3) - whistle like you did on last part -ok, done.
00:02:310 (2310|3,3220|2) - ^ -ok, done.
00:04:356 (4356|3,5038|0) - i think the drum whistle arent necessary , it would be better without them -ok, done.
00:55:038 - add a note ? for consistency like you did in 00:53:220 (53220|1) - and 00:56:856 (56856|2) - nope, it's just ok in this one
01:05:947 - add a note here is fine -ok, done.
01:12:310 (72310|1) - this should be normal note and 01:12:538 (72538|2) - is hold like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2047417 -ok, done.
01:15:492 - i think you shouldnt ignore this drum though -ok, done.
01:20:947 (80947|2,81174|1) - remove whistle -ok, done.
01:21:856 (81856|0,82083|1) - ^ -ok, done.
01:22:765 (82765|3,82992|1) - ^ -ok, done.

[HD]
00:00:947 (947|0,1174|1) - i guess remove the whistle sounds better -ok, done.
00:01:856 (1856|3,2083|2) - ^ -ok, done.
00:02:765 (2765|0,2992|1) - ^ -ok, done.
00:42:765 (42765|3,42992|2) - i think soft normal fits better ? -ok, done. yup, it's sounds good.
00:44:583 (44583|1,45038|1,45492|1,45947|1) - add finish drum too , the soft normal sounds weird -ok, done.
00:46:401 (46401|2,46856|2,47310|1,47765|1) - ^ -ok, done.
00:50:265 (50265|1) - change to drum finish suits better imo too -ok, done.
00:56:629 (56629|0) - hmm i think this hold is misplaced by 1/2? it should be like this -ok, done.
00:57:765 - recommend you to add a note since there is a repeating violin here ,
which is u catch the long violin so i think its better if you should catch this too. -ok, done.
01:00:947 - add a hold like this ? , according to violin sound too -ok, done.
01:04:810 - the flute sounds are good to catch too , here a pattern suggestion in case if you like to add them https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2047383 -ok, done.
01:08:901 (68901|0) - i suggest to move it to 3 , with the repeating violin fits the pitch relevancy too -ok, done.
01:11:629 (71629|3) - also i think this is overly extended , i think it should end here 01:12:310 - ? -ok, done.
01:12:310 (72310|1) - another point is this violin starts here , in addition , add a note at the current time to show the
repeated violin like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2047392 -ok, done.
01:20:720 (80720|3) - remove finish -ok, done.
01:20:947 (80947|2,81174|1) - same as intro part remove whistle -ok, done.
01:21:856 (81856|0,82083|1) - ^ -ok, done.
01:22:765 (82765|1,82992|2) - ^ -ok, done.

thats all , call me back ~

Rumia- wrote:

nice mapset ! re-qualified ~

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Re-grats kifuera456 \(owo)/