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Groumiezi
with 0.70 SV


lah aku udah terbiasa dengan kecepatan
Note that "BPM" is not really necessary but important with the music. You can change the SV to slower/inherited point too. at least the OP (opening part) have a low SV with a inherited point, so no one will fail also kiai is the faster SV part.

kalau offset sih
00:00:786 - Add timing point (258 BPM)
00:01:018 - Add timing point (258 BPM)
cobain dulu deh sebelum nolak :v

good luck ya~
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Groumiezi wrote:

with 0.70 SV


lah aku udah terbiasa dengan kecepatan
Note that "BPM" is not really necessary but important with the music. You can change the SV to slower/inherited point too. at least the OP (opening part) have a low SV with a inherited point, so no one will fail also kiai is the faster SV part.

kalau offset sih
00:00:786 - Add timing point (258 BPM)
00:01:018 - Add timing point (258 BPM)
cobain dulu deh sebelum nolak :v

good luck ya~
ok, udah di cobain di diff 4k normal, insane & 7k burst, dan wow... tiba tiba jadi pelan.. >< gw malah tambah kaget... dan yea, many people suggested me to use 129 bpm instead..
karena point dari 129 bpm yg gw pake adalah : biar pemain gak kaget... kasian pemain newbie... itu doang sih...

thanks a lot of your suggestion.. :3
Agka
Since I'm an asshole this will probably be a long post.

All of these are aimed to increase the technical correctness and consistency of your difficulties.
Mostly so it can defend itself of "technically this sucks" people that hate fun. Because I like it as is.

I almost never bother to do this.
So seriously.
Take a few of these suggestions.

[7K IN 'Wind God']
00:01:135 (1135|0,1484|1,1949|6,2414|5) - There's zero reason to layer these in top of each other. Cut the first when the second one starts.
00:02:879 (2879|1,3344|2,3577|3,3810|0) - Same. One up at a time.
00:06:600 (6600|3,7065|4,7298|2,7530|0,8228|6) - Same.
00:09:158 (9158|1,9275|2,9391|3,9507|4) - These and the following stairs make no sense for a repeating drum.
00:10:554 (10554|0,10554|2,10903|4,10903|6) - You're using two of these for a single guitar note. Come on. Besides you're noodling them for no reason other than for difficulty.
00:14:275 (14275|5,14275|4,14623|3,14623|2,14972|1,14972|4,15437|5,15437|2) - Same as before.
00:16:135 (16135|0,16251|1,16368|4,16484|3,16600|0,16717|1,16833|3,16949|4,17065|0,17182|1,17298|3,17414|4) - Once again, no sense. Try using a back and forth pattern.
00:17:996 (17996|4,17996|1,18344|2,18344|5,18693|1,18693|4,19158|3,19158|2) - You know the drill.
00:29:158 (29158|6,29391|0,29623|6,29856|0,30089|6,30321|0) - I can't hear what these are mapped to. I'm a deeply layered mapper. This is a problem.
Seriously. You saw Blue Meteor.
00:32:879 (32879|0,33112|4,33344|1,33577|6,33810|0,34042|6) - Same.
00:40:307 (40307|3,40656|4,41005|2,41237|5,41237|6,41586|1,41586|0,41935|5,41935|6) - Noodled for no reason.
00:46:586 (46586|0,47051|1) - You're layering the lyrics in and out at random with longnotes. Be consistent.
00:53:330 - This whole section is completely overnoodled.
00:59:951 (59951|4,60068|5,60184|5,60300|4,60417|4,60533|3,60649|3) - Usually this kinds of tatatatatatatack percussion isn't mapped as jacks.
01:00:765 - There's nearly no structure at the end. The point-counterpoint thing of the drums' patterns are placed at random.
01:05:649 (65649|4,65649|2,65882|5,65882|1) - One guy speaking- double notes. Same as before.

[7K Burst 'Cruel Shower']
00:00:786 (786|0,786|6,903|5,903|1,1019|2,1019|4) - I see you're using drums and guitar- but neither is patterned properly nor pitch relevant.
00:01:193 - Same problem as before. Back and forths at placed at random with no sense of structure. Similarly sounding parts are being mapped to different patterns.
00:03:693 (3693|5,3810|4,3810|6) - Unintentional awkward bracket.

The first problem is repeated throughout the whole map.

00:25:437 (25437|0,25437|5,25554|1,25670|4,25670|2,25786|3,25903|6,26019|5,26135|4,26135|2,26251|3) - This section, repeating guitar sound. Once again pitch relevancy's completely ignored with not even a back-and-forth 121212-ish pattern.
00:29:856 - This one's to have the same as the previous verse. a back and forth with the spacebar as the base note.
00:37:007 - The same jacks problem as before.
00:57:510 (57510|2,57510|6,57510|4) - these 00:57:858 (57858|1,57858|6,57858|4) - these and so on, put a clap on them
01:05:649 (65649|1,65649|5,65649|3,65882|0,65882|5,65882|1,65882|6) - Three and five notes for a single guy speaking.

[4K IN 'Dempsey Roll']
00:03:344 (3344|2,3577|3,3810|1) - Unnoodle.
00:06:717 (6717|1,7065|3,7298|2,7530|0) - ^
00:29:158 - On the previous section you used Jacks, and on this verse you disregarded them completely. Oooo.
00:41:237 (41237|1,41237|2,41586|3,41586|0,41935|2) - Unnoodle.
00:53:265 - Most of these LNs don't need to exist.

[7K HD 'Shadow Boxing']
00:08:693 - No consistency on the percussion's patterns.
00:12:182 - ^
00:23:577 - ^ And the sound the LN is mapped to is hard to hear
00:25:670 - No consistency on the guitar's patterns even being a single repeated sound. No layer insterted to percussion and it's acknowledged on the hitsounds. ??
00:27:298 - no consistency on the percussions blah
00:29:158 - guitar's patterns single sound blah blah
00:31:019 - percussions blah blah
00:32:879 - guitar blah blah blah
00:41:237 (41237|6,41586|4,41935|2) - Single note guitar layered into something better suitted for a crescendo

[4K HD 'Uppercut']
00:04:275 (4275|3,4275|0) - random suddenly acknowledgement of percussions
00:04:275 (4275|0,4275|3) - the forced consistency on this one because the keycount's so low ohoho perfect though it's awkward that those guitar mapped notes use hitsounds that acknowledge percussion. Same on those that follow.
00:57:044 (57044|3) - random LN that wasn't layered in before when the section was started

[7K NM 'Mitt Hitting']
00:01:949 (1949|1) - move to 00:01:833 - since I guess you're mapping to the guitar
00:03:810 (3810|2) - same pitch as 00:03:344 (3344|4) - why aren't these on the same lane?
00:05:437 (5437|0,5670|3) - Same pitch different lane.
00:08:693 - No consistency on the claps' positions.
00:14:275 (14275|0,14623|4,14972|2,15437|5) - 1537 progression where a 1357 or even 1356 would be more technically correct.
00:29:158 - If I assume these are percussion they're improperly ordered- if I assume these are guitar, these are positioned in a way that's not back and forth or jacky
00:32:879 - Same.
00:34:740 (34740|2,35670|0) - The note at 1 is higher pitched than 3 and yet they're switched around.
00:56:114 - Randomly stopped mapping the white beat
00:57:975 - ^
01:04:486 - This empty part is jarring.

[4K NM 'Kame Guard']
00:13:344 (13344|2,13577|2,13810|2) - Unjustified lane 3 repeated note on the 1/2.
00:14:275 (14275|1,14623|2,14972|0,15437|2) - 2313 where a 1234 would be pitch relevant.
00:33:810 (33810|0,33926|2,34042|3,34275|3,34391|2,34507|0) - random switch from 123 432 123 432 into 134 431
00:41:005 (41005|0,41237|2) - Noodle layering an NM. Shame!
00:49:694 - This whole section is unconsistent on the way it maps percussion.

[7K EZ 'Roadwork']
00:09:391 (9391|1,10321|2) - Move to lane 7.
00:12:647 (12647|1,13112|4,13577|2,14042|5) - Move to lane 1.
00:14:623 (14623|4,14972|2) - Switch lanes around.
00:16:368 (16368|5) - Move to lane 3.
00:19:158 (19158|2) - Move to lane 1.
00:21:019 (21019|4,21484|6) - Swap these notes' lanes around.
00:21:717 (21717|4,22065|0,22414|2,22879|6) - 1357
00:43:098 - Insert notes in 35.
00:43:563 (43563|3) - Move to 6.
00:43:795 (43795|6) - Move to 2.
00:44:028 - Insert at lane 1 and 7.

[4K EZ 'Jab']
00:05:341 - Transform the intro removing all holds and leaving only the head.
00:11:600 (11600|1) - Lane 1.
00:14:275 (14275|0,14623|2,14972|1,15437|3) - 1234.
00:17:996 (17996|1,19158|1) - Lane 1 since that's what you used before.

Yeah.
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Agka wrote:

Since I'm an asshole this will probably be a long post.

All of these are aimed to increase the technical correctness and consistency of your difficulties.
Mostly so it can defend itself of "technically this sucks" people that hate fun. Because I like it as is.

I almost never bother to do this.
So seriously.
Take a few of these suggestions.

few? wat... it's like 80% oh 90% was rearranged as u mod (except some mods that google translate cant translate.. :I ), since i know it's really helpful.. :3

[7K IN 'Wind God']
00:01:135 (1135|0,1484|1,1949|6,2414|5) - There's zero reason to layer these in top of each other. Cut the first when the second one starts.
00:02:879 (2879|1,3344|2,3577|3,3810|0) - Same. One up at a time.
00:06:600 (6600|3,7065|4,7298|2,7530|0,8228|6) - Same.
00:09:158 (9158|1,9275|2,9391|3,9507|4) - These and the following stairs make no sense for a repeating drum.
00:10:554 (10554|0,10554|2,10903|4,10903|6) - You're using two of these for a single guitar note. Come on. Besides you're noodling them for no reason other than for difficulty.
00:14:275 (14275|5,14275|4,14623|3,14623|2,14972|1,14972|4,15437|5,15437|2) - Same as before.
00:16:135 (16135|0,16251|1,16368|4,16484|3,16600|0,16717|1,16833|3,16949|4,17065|0,17182|1,17298|3,17414|4) - Once again, no sense. Try using a back and forth pattern.
00:17:996 (17996|4,17996|1,18344|2,18344|5,18693|1,18693|4,19158|3,19158|2) - You know the drill.
00:29:158 (29158|6,29391|0,29623|6,29856|0,30089|6,30321|0) - I can't hear what these are mapped to. I'm a deeply layered mapper. This is a problem.
Seriously. You saw Blue Meteor.
00:32:879 (32879|0,33112|4,33344|1,33577|6,33810|0,34042|6) - Same.
00:40:307 (40307|3,40656|4,41005|2,41237|5,41237|6,41586|1,41586|0,41935|5,41935|6) - Noodled for no reason.
00:46:586 (46586|0,47051|1) - You're layering the lyrics in and out at random with longnotes. Be consistent.
00:53:330 - This whole section is completely overnoodled.
00:59:951 (59951|4,60068|5,60184|5,60300|4,60417|4,60533|3,60649|3) - Usually this kinds of tatatatatatatack percussion isn't mapped as jacks.
01:00:765 - There's nearly no structure at the end. The point-counterpoint thing of the drums' patterns are placed at random.
01:05:649 (65649|4,65649|2,65882|5,65882|1) - One guy speaking- double notes. Same as before.

kyaaa.... i love 17va's noodle.. D: but well, i re arranged most of noodles into notes.. :I it's works well tho.. :3

[7K Burst 'Cruel Shower']
00:00:786 (786|0,786|6,903|5,903|1,1019|2,1019|4) - I see you're using drums and guitar- but neither is patterned properly nor pitch relevant.
00:01:193 - Same problem as before. Back and forths at placed at random with no sense of structure. Similarly sounding parts are being mapped to different patterns.
00:03:693 (3693|5,3810|4,3810|6) - Unintentional awkward bracket. (but i play with 6 fingers, it's not really hard playing dat brackets lol.. :v)

The first problem is repeated throughout the whole map.

00:25:437 (25437|0,25437|5,25554|1,25670|4,25670|2,25786|3,25903|6,26019|5,26135|4,26135|2,26251|3) - This section, repeating guitar sound. Once again pitch relevancy's completely ignored with not even a back-and-forth 121212-ish pattern. (lol, this is from another mod.. :3 gonna fix it..)

00:29:856 - This one's to have the same as the previous verse. a back and forth with the spacebar as the base note.
00:37:007 - The same jacks problem as before.
00:57:510 (57510|2,57510|6,57510|4) - these 00:57:858 (57858|1,57858|6,57858|4) - these and so on, put a clap on them
01:05:649 (65649|1,65649|5,65649|3,65882|0,65882|5,65882|1,65882|6) - Three and five notes for a single guy speaking.

[4K IN 'Dempsey Roll']
00:03:344 (3344|2,3577|3,3810|1) - Unnoodle.
00:06:717 (6717|1,7065|3,7298|2,7530|0) - ^
00:29:158 - On the previous section you used Jacks, and on this verse you disregarded them completely. Oooo.
00:41:237 (41237|1,41237|2,41586|3,41586|0,41935|2) - Unnoodle.
00:53:265 - Most of these LNs don't need to exist.

[7K HD 'Shadow Boxing']
00:08:693 - No consistency on the percussion's patterns.
00:12:182 - ^
00:23:577 - ^ And the sound the LN is mapped to is hard to hear
00:25:670 - No consistency on the guitar's patterns even being a single repeated sound. No layer insterted to percussion and it's acknowledged on the hitsounds. ?? o.O? it's drum..?
00:27:298 - no consistency on the percussions blah im sorry, idk how to fix those blah blah.. ><
00:29:158 - guitar's patterns single sound blah blah
00:31:019 - percussions blah blah
00:32:879 - guitar blah blah blah
00:41:237 (41237|6,41586|4,41935|2) - Single note guitar layered into something better suitted for a crescendo

[4K HD 'Uppercut']
00:04:275 (4275|3,4275|0) - random suddenly acknowledgement of percussions
00:04:275 (4275|0,4275|3) - the forced consistency on this one because the keycount's so low ohoho perfect though it's awkward that those guitar mapped notes use hitsounds that acknowledge percussion. Same on those that follow. hohoho, how did you know bout dat keycount.. :v
00:57:044 (57044|3) - random LN that wasn't layered in before when the section was started backing vocal plz.. :"< moved to 00:56:579 (56579|3) -

[7K NM 'Mitt Hitting']
00:01:949 (1949|1) - move to 00:01:833 - since I guess you're mapping to the guitar (o.O? isn't it has double guitar like in nm diff..? following another mod)
00:03:810 (3810|2) - same pitch as 00:03:344 (3344|4) - why aren't these on the same lane? (oh shet, so demn accurate)
00:05:437 (5437|0,5670|3) - Same pitch different lane.
00:08:693 - No consistency on the claps' positions.
00:14:275 (14275|0,14623|4,14972|2,15437|5) - 1537 progression where a 1357 or even 1356 would be more technically correct.
00:29:158 - If I assume these are percussion they're improperly ordered- if I assume these are guitar, these are positioned in a way that's not back and forth or jacky
00:32:879 - Same.
00:34:740 (34740|2,35670|0) - The note at 1 is higher pitched than 3 and yet they're switched around.
00:56:114 - Randomly stopped mapping the white beat
00:57:975 - ^
01:04:486 - This empty part is jarring.

[4K NM 'Kame Guard']
00:13:344 (13344|2,13577|2,13810|2) - Unjustified lane 3 repeated note on the 1/2.
00:14:275 (14275|1,14623|2,14972|0,15437|2) - 2313 where a 1234 would be pitch relevant.
00:33:810 (33810|0,33926|2,34042|3,34275|3,34391|2,34507|0) - random switch from 123 432 123 432 into 134 431
00:41:005 (41005|0,41237|2) - Noodle layering an NM. Shame!
00:49:694 - This whole section is unconsistent on the way it maps percussion.

[7K EZ 'Roadwork']
00:09:391 (9391|1,10321|2) - Move to lane 7.
00:12:647 (12647|1,13112|4,13577|2,14042|5) - Move to lane 1.
00:14:623 (14623|4,14972|2) - Switch lanes around.
00:16:368 (16368|5) - Move to lane 3.
00:19:158 (19158|2) - Move to lane 1.
00:21:019 (21019|4,21484|6) - Swap these notes' lanes around.
00:21:717 (21717|4,22065|0,22414|2,22879|6) - 1357
00:43:098 - Insert notes in 35.
00:43:563 (43563|3) - Move to 6.
00:43:795 (43795|6) - Move to 2.
00:44:028 - Insert at lane 1 and 7.

[4K EZ 'Jab']
00:05:341 - Transform the intro removing all holds and leaving only the head.
00:11:600 (11600|1) - Lane 1.
00:14:275 (14275|0,14623|2,14972|1,15437|3) - 1234.
00:17:996 (17996|1,19158|1) - Lane 1 since that's what you used before.

Yeah.
gee, how to mod like you..? i mean, i need more mods like this...
dionzz99

ajeemaniz wrote:

gee, how to mod like you..? i mean, i need more mods like this...
wtf?!?! lol...
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

dionzz99 wrote:

ajeemaniz wrote:

gee, how to mod like you..? i mean, i need more mods like this...
wtf?!?! lol...
dude, it's not about 'subjective' mod to build nothing, but 'objective' mod to build something great & helping..
and idk how to do it.. .__.
[Shi-Ra]
Hello, there are mods for your mania chart ^w^
Concentrated on 7K diffs~

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 for 7K diffs)
7k NM 'Mitt Hitting'
Inside :3
The first that you need to do here is to check > AiMod Errors < and fix 'em all. There are alot of unsnapped notes and timing conflicts, you need to resnap notes and fix timings before going for rank~

00:03:344 (3344|4,3577|6,3810|4) - I recommend you to re-model this part by moving these LNs to 6th>4th>2nd columns accordingly, it'll be more suitable with your next going patterns here

00:14:042 (14042|1) - move this one to 2nd column, it'll be more comfortable stair transition for your pattern

00:22:879 (22879|6) - I think you need to move this LN to 4th column, it'll be more suitable with your previous and next going patterns according to this part

00:32:996 (32996|3,33112|5,33461|3,33577|5) - hmm...I suggest you to move these pairs of notes to 2nd and 4th columns to make them more comfortable to play here

00:34:042 (34042|6,34507|6) - and these two notes you need to move into 5th column, same reason like above

00:41:005 (41005|1,41005|3) - you can turn these LNs into single notes coz there's no need to use LNs according to the sounds, single notes are more comfortable to play here

00:57:975 (57975|1) - I recommend you to move this note to 3rd column, it'll be more comfortable to play this stair transition in this way

7k HD 'Shadow Boxing'
Inside :3
00:04:275 (4275|3) - I suggest you to move this note to 2nd column, it'll be more comfortalbe chort transition here

00:22:996 (22996|5) - I think you need to move this one to 3rd column, it'll be more suitable transition with your stair pattern here

00:24:972 (24972|5) - there's no need to place chord so I recommend you to delete this note, there's no double beat to accent it with two notes

Here 00:25:670 - I recommend you to re-arrange these repeating notes into more different stream, now it plays monotonously

00:44:493 (44493|2,44726|1) - I suggest you to move these notes to 1st and 2nd columns accordingly and perform here comfortable transition between your chords

00:53:330 - you can add here one more note to 6th column according to the strong beat

00:55:882 (55882|2,55998|3,56114|2,56230|3,56347|2) - hm...I recommend you to spread these notes between 3rd and 5th columns, it'll be more comfortable place for trill

7k IN 'Wind God'
Inside :3
From 00:08:926 to 00:10:321 - I recommend you to re-arrange this pattern, try to spread notes between all columns here, it'll be more suitable for this part

00:14:042 (14042|1) - I suggesst you to move this note to 3rd column, it'll be more comfortable to play with your previous pattern here

00:16:368 (16368|6) - and this one you can move to 2nd column to make more suitable transition between your previous and next going patterns

00:23:810 (23810|2,24275|2,27530|5,27996|5,28461|4,28926|4) - I'm not sure, why are you using three note chords here, there are no three different sounds for all of them, so I recommend you to delete extra notes

00:41:237 (41237|5,41586|1,41935|5) - I think you can delete these LNs, there's only one accentable sound and you one LNs is enough for each sound here

00:52:284 - cut here extra notes please, they are unsuitable here, two note chords are enough to use for this part

01:05:184 (65184|3) - move this one to 0 column, it'll be mroe suitable with your next going chord here

7k Burst 'Cruel Shower'
Inside :3
Hm...seems like no problems for this diff, without LNs it plays comfortable, good job owob

Hope this helps~
Good luck :3/
Evening
Shouldn't this be TV Size or Short Vers. ?

This is just a section of the full version :


Also, the BPM in my opinion should be DOUBLE ( 258 BPM ) This song is too fast/intense to be in the 100~150 BPM range.
Yes, this is technically faster than freedom dive
It's pretty easy to judge the BPM depending on your gut feeling and the intensity of the music.


The Offset is also TOTALLY OFF


The First Timing Point should be
BPM : 258
OFFSET : 320

The Offset cannot be determined from 00:01:017 - To 00:08:692 - there's no strong beat on that section.
The Next section has a Vocal and guitar that you can determine from

For example:

00:10:553 - The Vocal emphasizes and goes on a different beat, the guitar starts to play ( Change in Music instrumental pattern )
00:12:413 - Change in Music instrumental pattern
00:14:274 - The Vocal emphasizes again and goes on a different beat, the guitar starts to play again ( Change in Music instrumental pattern )
the pattern goes on, you can see that these patterns fall on the LONG white line.

The Second Timing Point is Correct, the drum snare halved in speed

00:45:888 - You need to add a timing point here that is 258 BPM, the drum snare doubled in speed

00:53:330 - Replace this timing point with a inheriting point, no one uses Timing points to trigger kiai time, volume changes, etc. when there's no BPM or Offset change, I strongly suggest to change it.

I know that players who are novice cannot play at this high BPM, but it is the SONG BPM, you cannot change the SONG BPM, it's like changing the speed of freedom dive to 27.7775 BPM, the beats will still be correct, but it is definitely wrong in the BPM.

As for the speed change RANGE, you can LOWER the overall SV to like 0.5x so that the range will become lesser.

I saw that some people complaining that the SB load is a bit high,



I suggest to remove part of the "left.png" and "right.png" at the part that is barely visible so the SB load will not be that high

You might need to move the SB timing by a bit since you changed the OFFSET

lel good luck

k bye
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hello, there are mods for your mania chart ^w^
Concentrated on 7K diffs~

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 for 7K diffs)
7k NM 'Mitt Hitting'
Inside :3
The first that you need to do here is to check > AiMod Errors < and fix 'em all. There are alot of unsnapped notes and timing conflicts, you need to resnap notes and fix timings before going for rank~ (fixed.. geez, i forget to check object snap on this diff..)

00:03:344 (3344|4,3577|6,3810|4) - I recommend you to re-model this part by moving these LNs to 6th>4th>2nd columns accordingly, it'll be more suitable with your next going patterns here

00:14:042 (14042|1) - move this one to 2nd column, it'll be more comfortable stair transition for your pattern

00:22:879 (22879|6) - I think you need to move this LN to 4th column, it'll be more suitable with your previous and next going patterns according to this part

00:32:996 (32996|3,33112|5,33461|3,33577|5) - hmm...I suggest you to move these pairs of notes to 2nd and 4th columns to make them more comfortable to play here

00:34:042 (34042|6,34507|6) - and these two notes you need to move into 5th column, same reason like above

00:41:005 (41005|1,41005|3) - you can turn these LNs into single notes coz there's no need to use LNs according to the sounds, single notes are more comfortable to play here

00:57:975 (57975|1) - I recommend you to move this note to 3rd column, it'll be more comfortable to play this stair transition in this way

kyaa... everything is fixed.. :D

7k HD 'Shadow Boxing'
Inside :3
00:04:275 (4275|3) - I suggest you to move this note to 2nd column, it'll be more comfortalbe chort transition here

00:22:996 (22996|5) - I think you need to move this one to 3rd column, it'll be more suitable transition with your stair pattern here

00:24:972 (24972|5) - there's no need to place chord so I recommend you to delete this note, there's no double beat to accent it with two notes

Here 00:25:670 - I recommend you to re-arrange these repeating notes into more different stream, now it plays monotonously

00:44:493 (44493|2,44726|1) - I suggest you to move these notes to 1st and 2nd columns accordingly and perform here comfortable transition between your chords

00:53:330 - you can add here one more note to 6th column according to the strong beat

00:55:882 (55882|2,55998|3,56114|2,56230|3,56347|2) - hm...I recommend you to spread these notes between 3rd and 5th columns, it'll be more comfortable place for trill

everything is fixed tho.. :D

7k IN 'Wind God'
Inside :3
From 00:08:926 to 00:10:321 - I recommend you to re-arrange this pattern, try to spread notes between all columns here, it'll be more suitable for this part

00:14:042 (14042|1) - I suggesst you to move this note to 3rd column, it'll be more comfortable to play with your previous pattern here

00:16:368 (16368|6) - and this one you can move to 2nd column to make more suitable transition between your previous and next going patterns

00:23:810 (23810|2,24275|2,27530|5,27996|5,28461|4,28926|4) - I'm not sure, why are you using three note chords here, there are no three different sounds for all of them, so I recommend you to delete extra notes (o.o i tot the sound is loud enough.. or..? ._. i add some missing 3rd notes instead cropping it into 2 notes instead since it's kinda... idk, 2 notes making it lil bit easier... is that ok..? )

00:41:237 (41237|5,41586|1,41935|5) - I think you can delete these LNs, there's only one accentable sound and you one LNs is enough for each sound here (ok! changed into single notes instead ln.. :"< noodle...)

00:52:284 - cut here extra notes please, they are unsuitable here, two note chords are enough to use for this part (.__. i like this part using 3 notes... >< is that ok if im not cut em...?)

01:05:184 (65184|3) - move this one to 0 column, it'll be mroe suitable with your next going chord here

7k Burst 'Cruel Shower'
Inside :3
Hm...seems like no problems for this diff, without LNs it plays comfortable, good job owob

Hope this helps~
Good luck :3/
Q__Q i never thought that u will mod my map so quick after i request... thanks shi-ra! :D
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

lZenxl wrote:

Shouldn't this be TV Size or Short Vers. ? O_o i know this is TV size, but... o__o? what should i do?

This is just a section of the full version :


Also, the BPM in my opinion should be DOUBLE ( 258 BPM ) This song is too fast/intense to be in the 100~150 BPM range.
Yes, this is technically faster than freedom dive
It's pretty easy to judge the BPM depending on your gut feeling and the intensity of the music. ... i dont know, but yea, on second thought, i think i gonna change the BPM into 258 for good... :3


The Offset is also TOTALLY OFF

geez, thanks, finally... :3

The First Timing Point should be
BPM : 258
OFFSET : 320

The Offset cannot be determined from 00:01:017 - To 00:08:692 - there's no strong beat on that section.
The Next section has a Vocal and guitar that you can determine from

For example:

00:10:553 - The Vocal emphasizes and goes on a different beat, the guitar starts to play ( Change in Music instrumental pattern )
00:12:413 - Change in Music instrumental pattern
00:14:274 - The Vocal emphasizes again and goes on a different beat, the guitar starts to play again ( Change in Music instrumental pattern )
the pattern goes on, you can see that these patterns fall on the LONG white line.

The Second Timing Point is Correct, the drum snare halved in speed

00:45:888 - You need to add a timing point here that is 258 BPM, the drum snare doubled in speed

00:53:330 - Replace this timing point with a inheriting point, no one uses Timing points to trigger kiai time, volume changes, etc. when there's no BPM or Offset change, I strongly suggest to change it.

I know that players who are novice cannot play at this high BPM, but it is the SONG BPM, you cannot change the SONG BPM, it's like changing the speed of freedom dive to 27.7775 BPM, the beats will still be correct, but it is definitely wrong in the BPM.

As for the speed change RANGE, you can LOWER the overall SV to like 0.5x so that the range will become lesser.

I saw that some people complaining that the SB load is a bit high,



I suggest to remove part of the "left.png" and "right.png" at the part that is barely visible so the SB load will not be that high

You might need to move the SB timing by a bit since you changed the OFFSET

lel good luck

k bye

WAAARRRGRHT!!! finally, there's an answer for my BPM problem...!!! :@ thanks a looott..!!!
ArcherLove
;w; ...
Blocko
Hello, ajeemaniz!
Mod by request.

Mod
[General]
OK! :)


4K Column wrote:

1|2|3|4
[4k EZ 'Jab']
00:06:598 (6598|0) - Move to 2
00:15:901 Add note to 2
00:25:436 (25436|2) - Move to 3
01:00:533 (60533|3) - Move to 3

[4k NM 'Kame Guard']
00:02:413 (2413|0) - Move to 3
00:02:645 (2645|0,2878|2) - Move to 2 so it follows with the pattern/unique rhythm
00:23:808 (23808|2,24273|2) - Move to 2
00:28:459 (28459|2,28924|2) - Move to 4
00:32:180 (32180|2,32645|2) - Move to 1
00:40:307 (40307|2,40656|3) - Move 1 column to the left
00:51:701 Add note to 4 so the crashes are as strong with the notes

[4k HD 'Uppercut']
00:21:715 (21715|1) - Move to 1
00:29:156 to 00:31:017 Rearrange the notes so the 1st column isn't empty
00:52:748 Add note to 1 and 2 (still hear a beat from it)

[4k IN 'Dempsey Roll']
00:00:785 (785|2,901|1,1017|2) - Ctrl + H to follow pitch relevancy
00:52:748 Add note to 1 and 2 (still hear a beat from it)
00:54:021 (54021|2,54137|3) - Switch these around
01:02:392 (62392|1,62509|2) - Switch these around



7K Column wrote:

1|2|3|4|5|6|7
[7k EZ 'Roadwork']
00:32:878 (32878|0) - Move to 2
00:38:459 Maybe rearrange it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1729826

[7k NM 'Mitt Hitting']
Looks good but I just had to nitpick one thing.
00:10:552 (10552|1) - Move to 4

[7k HD 'Shadow Boxing']
Some of the patterns there are fun to play.
00:07:064 (7064|0) - Move to 2
00:44:958 (44958|5) - Move to 3

[7k IN 'Wind God']
OK! This looks really good! :)

[7k Burst 'Cruel Shower']
00:53:789 (53789|4) - Move to 6
00:57:510 (57510|4) - ^
01:01:927 (61927|5) - Move to 7

I hope this helps! Good luck with the map! :D
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Blocko wrote:

Hello, ajeemaniz!
Mod by request.

Mod
[General]
OK! :)


4K Column wrote:

1|2|3|4
[4k EZ 'Jab']
00:06:598 (6598|0) - Move to 2
00:15:901 Add note to 2
00:25:436 (25436|2) - Move to 3
01:00:533 (60533|3) - Move to 3

all done

[4k NM 'Kame Guard']
00:02:413 (2413|0) - Move to 3
00:02:645 (2645|0,2878|2) - Move to 2 so it follows with the pattern/unique rhythm
00:23:808 (23808|2,24273|2) - Move to 2
00:28:459 (28459|2,28924|2) - Move to 4
00:32:180 (32180|2,32645|2) - Move to 1
00:40:307 (40307|2,40656|3) - Move 1 column to the left
00:51:701 Add note to 4 so the crashes are as strong with the notes

all done

[4k HD 'Uppercut']
00:21:715 (21715|1) - Move to 1
00:29:156 to 00:31:017 Rearrange the notes so the 1st column isn't empty
00:52:748 Add note to 1 and 2 (still hear a beat from it)

[4k IN 'Dempsey Roll']
00:00:785 (785|2,901|1,1017|2) - Ctrl + H to follow pitch relevancy
00:52:748 Add note to 1 and 2 (still hear a beat from it)
00:54:021 (54021|2,54137|3) - Switch these around
01:02:392 (62392|1,62509|2) - Switch these around



7K Column wrote:

1|2|3|4|5|6|7
[7k EZ 'Roadwork']
00:32:878 (32878|0) - Move to 2
00:38:459 Maybe rearrange it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1729826

[7k NM 'Mitt Hitting']
Looks good but I just had to nitpick one thing.
00:10:552 (10552|1) - Move to 4

[7k HD 'Shadow Boxing']
Some of the patterns there are fun to play.
00:07:064 (7064|0) - Move to 2
00:44:958 (44958|5) - Move to 3

[7k IN 'Wind God']
OK! This looks really good! :)

[7k Burst 'Cruel Shower']
00:53:789 (53789|4) - Move to 6
00:57:510 (57510|4) - ^
01:01:927 (61927|5) - Move to 7

I hope this helps! Good luck with the map! :D
all done, whoaa....
aaa.. you came right before [shi-ra] will finalize this map.. thank you blocko!!!
[Shi-Ra]
Irc overmapping & general fixed, no more problems for me. Bubbled /o/
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Irc overmapping & general fixed, no more problems for me. Bubbled /o/
awwyiss.. never expected gonna be bubbled so soon, aaaaaaaaahh thank you [shi-ra]!! :D
ArcherLove
=w=
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

ArcherLove wrote:

=w=


no doubt you gonna rank it sooner than mine.. :v
ArcherLove
lol I hope, tapi optimis aja de !! :D
[Shi-Ra]
Bubble repaired~
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Bubble repaired~
ahuehuehue, thanks again.. xD
Roxas
According to this, your 4k IN, 7k IN and 7k Burst's star rating must be above 3.75 stars if you want to name them like that (Insane)...

Plus, I think you need more mods for this map, try to find other 2-3 good modders and call me back!
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Roxas wrote:

According to this, your 4k IN, 7k IN and 7k Burst's star rating must be above 3.75 stars if you want to name them like that (Insane)... // o_o i didn't realize that.. it's hard to overchord them.. hue...

Plus, I think you need more mods for this map, try to find other 2-3 good modders and call me back!
ok will remap them with proper diff weight and ask for other mods (as i already "mod" my own ugly map, demn :p).. or if that doesn't works, i will rename them into HD+ instead and popping the bubbled first.. hue..

EDIT : updated! 7k Burst! and 7k IN are insane now, 4k IN renamed into 4k HD+ instead.. :3
Ayachi-
Column: 1 2 3 4
1 2 3 4 5 6 7

[4k EZ 'Jab]
00:01:482 (1482|0) - Suggest move to column 2 (higher than the next note)
00:03:808 (3808|1) - move to column 3 , same pitch as 00:03:343 (3343|2) -
00:05:203 (5203|0) - move to column 3 because this note is higher than 00:06:133 (6133|0) -
00:29:157 (29157|3) - move to 3 and 00:29:389 (29389|2) - move to 4
00:40:656 (40656|2) - move to 00:40:540 - or 00:40:772 -
00:41:586 (41586|1) - move to 00:41:702 -

[7k EZ 'Roadwork]
00:06:599 (6599|0) - move to column 2 because same pitch as 00:06:133 (6133|1) -
00:07:064 (7064|4) - move to 6
00:07:296 (7296|2) - move to 4
00:07:529 (7529|6) - move to 2 or 3
00:19:854 (19854|3) - no sound, remove
00:30:785 (30785|2) - move to 00:30:552 -

[7k NM 'Mitt Hitting]
00:15:436 (15436|6,15436|5) - remove and start something at 00:15:668 - (maybe)
00:19:156 (19156|1,19156|2) - remove and start something at 00:19:389 -
00:22:877 - ^
00:34:971 (34971|5,35436|5) - move to other hand

[4k NM 'Kame Guard']
00:03:808 (3808|1) - move to column 3
00:04:622 (4622|3) - ^
00:04:738 (4738|2) - move to 4
00:04:854 (4854|1) - move to 3
00:05:203 (5203|3) - move to 2
00:11:598 - add a note
00:11:598 (11598|1) - start at 00:11:947 -
00:15:436 - Add a note and LN start 00:15:668 -(maybe)
00:23:110 - ^ same kind of things

[4k HD 'Uppercut' ]
00:11:947 - LN should end here(maybe)
00:15:668 - ^
00:19:389 - ^
00:40:307 - Add a note

[7k HD 'Shadow Boxing' ]
good

[4k HD+ 'Dempsey Roll']
00:11:947 - LN ends and add another note(maybe)
00:15:668 - ^
00:19:389 - ^
00:23:110 - ^

[7k Burst! 'Cruel Shower]
00:04:738 - move 2 notes to 00:04:854 -

[7k IN 'Wind God]
good

Good luck on getting the bubble repaired !
LordRaika
ntr w mod , klo bs lgs IRC aja, lgi g puny trllu byk wktu... ^^

nnti w bntu tuk spread u jadi balance....
tu yg kata BAT nya mau tuh...
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

Column: 1 2 3 4
1 2 3 4 5 6 7

[4k EZ 'Jab]
00:01:482 (1482|0) - Suggest move to column 2 (higher than the next note)
00:03:808 (3808|1) - move to column 3 , same pitch as 00:03:343 (3343|2) -
00:05:203 (5203|0) - move to column (2?) because this note is higher than 00:06:133 (6133|0) -
00:29:157 (29157|3) - move to 3 and 00:29:389 (29389|2) - move to 4
00:40:656 (40656|2) - move to 00:40:540 - or 00:40:772 - // following trough guitar
00:41:586 (41586|1) - move to 00:41:702 - // same case ^

[7k EZ 'Roadwork]
00:06:599 (6599|0) - move to column 2 because same pitch as 00:06:133 (6133|1) -
00:07:064 (7064|4) - move to 6
00:07:296 (7296|2) - move to 4
00:07:529 (7529|6) - move to 2 or 3
// nothing changed
00:19:854 (19854|3) - no sound, remove // bass kick..? o.O
00:30:785 (30785|2) - move to 00:30:552 - // nothing changed

[7k NM 'Mitt Hitting]
00:15:436 (15436|6,15436|5) - remove and start something at 00:15:668 - (maybe) // already correct
00:19:156 (19156|1,19156|2) - remove and start something at 00:19:389 - // same ^
00:22:877 - ^
00:34:971 (34971|5,35436|5) - move to other hand // D: this... ok!

[4k NM 'Kame Guard']
00:03:808 (3808|1) - move to column 3
00:04:622 (4622|3) - ^
00:04:738 (4738|2) - move to 4
00:04:854 (4854|1) - move to 3
00:05:203 (5203|3) - move to 2
// none changed, but considered
00:11:598 - add a note // nothing changed
00:11:598 (11598|1) - start at 00:11:947 -
00:15:436 - Add a note and LN start 00:15:668 -(maybe)
00:23:110 - ^ same kind of things
// already correct, no changes

[4k HD 'Uppercut' ]
00:11:947 - LN should end here(maybe) // O.o same as other diffs? nope..
00:15:668 - ^
00:19:389 - ^
==?
00:40:307 - Add a note

[7k HD 'Shadow Boxing' ]
good

[4k HD+ 'Dempsey Roll']
00:11:947 - LN ends and add another note(maybe)
00:15:668 - ^
00:19:389 - ^
00:23:110 - ^


nothing changed..

[7k Burst! 'Cruel Shower]
00:04:738 - move 2 notes to 00:04:854 -

[7k IN 'Wind God]
good

Good luck on getting the bubble repaired !
thanks.. ;-; it's welping much...
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

lordraika wrote:

ntr w mod , klo bs lgs IRC aja, lgi g puny trllu byk wktu... ^^

nnti w bntu tuk spread u jadi balance....
tu yg kata BAT nya mau tuh...
hue... roger boss..
Ichigaki
Hi ajeemaniz~
just caught you on #osumania about this map ww`3`)

Here's the text fyi `3`)
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

ichia7x wrote:

Hi ajeemaniz~
just caught you on #osumania about this map ww`3`)

Here's the text fyi `3`)
demn welping! last mods from raika / yuutosan, and i ready to rank this.. thanks a lot.. :D
puxtu
oh come on, bat! rank this awesome map already
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

puxtu wrote:

oh come on, bat! rank this awesome map already
Q__Q it's ugly as duck.. thanks for your support..
- Yuuto -
Halo, Re-check req from modding queue

Dsini aku cmn memperbaiki beberapa patterns saja ya, soalnya aku yakin kok sdh high rated quality map kamu

[7K IN]

00:00:901 (901|6) - delete

00:15:087 (15087|4) - move ke 6

00:16:947 (16947|4) - move ke 7

00:17:180 (17180|2) - move ke 4

00:17:645 (17645|2) - move ke 2

00:59:137 (59137|1) - move ke 4, klau terlalu rapat jd kurang nyaman

01:05:648 (65648|1,65881|5) - mnding delete ini . soalnya bagus bgt bagian itu apa lg klau gk ada note yg ganggu org ngomong hekireki, dn jg disana gk ada instrumen

[7K Burst]

00:11:715 - Disini add note di 3, soalnya kulihat clap stand for 3 notes sblmnya, tp disini cmn 2 note

00:12:180 - add note di 2 sm alasannya kaya diatas


  • 00:51:469 - delete salah satu

    atau

    00:51:701 - add note satu lagi

    00:51:934 - ^

    soalnya tiga di atas memiliki suara yg sama
00:57:044 - add note di 5, cymbal sama kaya sblmnya : 00:55:184 (55184|0,55184|6,55184|2,55184|1) -

01:05:648 (65648|1,65881|5) - sdh tau lah alasannya :v note : jgn lupa di diff yg lain jg di delete, tp klau itu kesukaanmu, diemin aja juga gpp sih.

Maaf cuman mod sgini, diff lainnya udh patterned well kok. Good luck ya!
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Yuutosan wrote:

Halo, Re-check req from modding queue

Dsini aku cmn memperbaiki beberapa patterns saja ya, soalnya aku yakin kok sdh high rated quality map kamu

[7K IN]

00:00:901 (901|6) - delete // :"< nuu

00:15:087 (15087|4) - move ke 6

00:16:947 (16947|4) - move ke 7

00:17:180 (17180|2) - move ke 4

00:17:645 (17645|2) - move ke 2

00:59:137 (59137|1) - move ke 4, klau terlalu rapat jd kurang nyaman // 00:59:137 (59137|2) - ke 7

01:05:648 (65648|1,65881|5) - mnding delete ini . soalnya bagus bgt bagian itu apa lg klau gk ada note yg ganggu org ngomong hekireki, dn jg disana gk ada instrumen // considered.. :"<

[7K Burst]

00:11:715 - Disini add note di 3, soalnya kulihat clap stand for 3 notes sblmnya, tp disini cmn 2 note

00:12:180 - add note di 2 sm alasannya kaya diatas


  • 00:51:469 - delete salah satu

    atau

    00:51:701 - add note satu lagi

    00:51:934 - ^
    // this

    soalnya tiga di atas memiliki suara yg sama
00:57:044 - add note di 5, cymbal sama kaya sblmnya : 00:55:184 (55184|0,55184|6,55184|2,55184|1) - // <3

01:05:648 (65648|1,65881|5) - sdh tau lah alasannya :v note : jgn lupa di diff yg lain jg di delete, tp klau itu kesukaanmu, diemin aja juga gpp sih.
// considered.. :"<

Maaf cuman mod sgini, diff lainnya udh patterned well kok. Good luck ya!
no reply = ok
makasih ya.. ;-; welping so much!
LordRaika
yuup, thts all :D

GL~

ranked~ :)
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

lordraika wrote:

yuup, thts all :D

GL~

ranked~ :)
even at the last moments, you don't expect a kudos..
LordRaika
XD heyyy

so why you are the one who is crying???
XD

nah, i dont need kudosu to mod something haha
Ichigaki


Coba liat, ada yang salah lho :v

7k Burst :v

/me run~
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

ichia7x wrote:



Coba liat, ada yang salah lho :v

7k Burst :v

/me run~
gak salaah kok.. kalo gk pake tanda seru, jadi mirip beatmap 'Accel World'... :v
Zan-
7k Burst!
7'k'
bukannya biar seragam jadi 7K . K gede
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Shinnzan wrote:

7k Burst!
7'k'
bukannya biar seragam jadi 7K . K gede
O_O oiya loh! makasih ya zaan..

final update! x3
- Yuuto -
owo
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