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umm i'm falling asleep, its too slow for me, i tried though, :p
combo 1 and 2 are too alike
[HARD]
interesting, but its very linear and compressed. try to make full use of the playing field. i do acknowledge the challenges encountered due to the low bpm though. try to do more blanketing and curved sliders. also, keep ds constant, its much neater.
00:15:497 (2) - ds?
00:34:796 (2,3) - can be blanketed
00:52:380 (4) - NC here, remove NC after
01:05:246 (7) - pretty ugly overlap, try to have the sliders perpendicular to the flow
01:08:248 (5) - too close
01:11:465 (4) - incorporating 1/4 sliders into a stream is very confusing to the fingers. try having 5 and 6 stacking below the slider.
01:23:152 (4,5) - too close
01:26:690 (4) - ^
01:33:552 (1,3) - stack?
02:07:861 (3) - blanket
02:10:863 (2,3) - can be blanketed better, here's a guide (i havent changed it)
[NORMAL]
00:23:646 (1,2,3) - this portion is staggered weirdly, fix it
00:25:790 (5) - either blanket or let it flow regualrly
00:27:506 (1) - blanket
[HARD]
interesting, but its very linear and compressed. try to make full use of the playing field. i do acknowledge the challenges encountered due to the low bpm though. try to do more blanketing and curved sliders. also, keep ds constant, its much neater.
00:15:497 (2) - ds?
00:34:796 (2,3) - can be blanketed
00:52:380 (4) - NC here, remove NC after
01:05:246 (7) - pretty ugly overlap, try to have the sliders perpendicular to the flow
01:08:248 (5) - too close
01:11:465 (4) - incorporating 1/4 sliders into a stream is very confusing to the fingers. try having 5 and 6 stacking below the slider.
01:23:152 (4,5) - too close
01:26:690 (4) - ^
01:33:552 (1,3) - stack?
02:07:861 (3) - blanket
02:10:863 (2,3) - can be blanketed better, here's a guide (i havent changed it)
SPOILER
[img]02:10:863%20(2,3)%20-[/img]
[NORMAL]
00:23:646 (1,2,3) - this portion is staggered weirdly, fix it
00:25:790 (5) - either blanket or let it flow regualrly
00:27:506 (1) - blanket
umm i'm falling asleep, its too slow for me, i tried though, :p