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theramdans' mod
theramdans wrote:
Hello!
random mod-overall not bad for first map but i found some issues here lol
[General]
You can make the bpm exact 70.00 No.
Avoid using the settings like OD > AR Fixed.
[Easy]
Check AIMOD! This Easy diff has several DS inconsistency! I don't see anything with AiMod... Maybe I have already fixed them.
00:16:784 (2,3) - minor DS error fixed
00:20:215 (4,5) - dont stack, use DS okay
00:21:501 (1) - better curve man changed because of the last point
00:23:646 (2,3) - make both curve, or just either one no, I like how it's currently
00:30:937 (5) - remove reverse sounds ugly for me D:
00:31:794 (6) - 1 1/2 slider here no
00:35:225 (2,3) - suddenly x1.12 DS, not consistent yeah.
00:44:232 (3,4) - again, stack. remove please fixed
00:47:234 (6) - end the slider at 00:47:877, then add a circle at 00:48:306 I changed it on the advice of another mod. I'll see with the next mods.
01:04:389 (2,3) - merge these to one 1/2 slider with 1x reverse no, it should be fine like this.
01:07:391 (5,6) - same^ nope
01:08:677 (1) - this spinner is awkward lol why you don't like it? D:
01:21:543 (3) - 1/2 slider with 1x repeat here changed by another way
01:22:830 (4) - a circle here changed by another way
01:23:259 (5) - 1/1 slider with 1x repeat here changed by another way
01:25:832 (6) - a circle here then put break at 01:26:047 no break. The HP is low.
01:35:267 (3) - better make this long curvy slider instead with repeats this much no, the "long curvy slider" don't point out the great notes. And it's Kiai.
01:42:129 (4) - same same.
WARNING : Why Kiai has wider and some different spacing (1.5, 1.3, 1.2, 1.4) ? this is inconsistent for easy and it is a no-no,and
01:42:987 (4,5) - what is this man, it is not 'easy' at all with sudden big spacing and remove that slider's repeat
Kiai time fully remapped. The spacing will not be higher than 1.3.
01:45:560 (1) - 1/1 slider here (remove repeat) I like how it's placed now.
01:47:705 (2) - drag to 01:47:276 and make it 1/2 beat longer no, I like how it is now
01:51:136 (2,3) - again, unstack these unstacked.
01:50:707 (2,3) - delete these, replace with 1/2 slider with 1x repeat no
01:51:993 - 1/1 slider here? nope.
01:55:853 - 1/2 slider here? yeah why not.
Suggestions:
This is not bad for a first map, but you need to know clearly that Easy diff must be consistent with DS.
I know that and I'm improving.
What you can do more is you can merge 2-3 circles into 1 slider, any length and maybe with reverse
I don't like to do this. I place the elements following my idea. A slider and a circle sounds very different for me.
Then you should reshape your sliders for more creativity, dont be shy to use more curvy sliders (you have a lot of linear sliders there)
I'm improving too in this domain. That's because this is my first map, I suppose.
Avoid using patterns like 01:19:828 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) <- this is not 'Easy' man
Remapped this part.
[Hard]
AR+1 OD-0.5 ; AR+0.5
Generally, this should be interesting if you raise the base SV (to 1.5~1.6 EVEN 2.00+++ haha)
and adding some speedup/slowdown inherited point. So far it is good, but boring in my eyes
It's a calm music and my first beatmap, don't forget it.
One more thing, you can DISABLE DS to make some small jumps or even certain patterns like \STARS/
(there are several parts in the song that you can possibly make \STARS/)
I don't want to make some \STARS/ patterns because the \STARS/ pattern is too much used on a great number of beatmaps.
And because it's a calm music.
00:54:739 (4) - use circles instead (even jumps) changed by another way
01:08:677 (1,2,3,4) - too linear and too firm, make some stars/triangles imo Jumps!
01:10:822 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these are too close and too firm Fixed!
01:14:682 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same, too linear-sharp circle turns Fixed
01:18:970 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ changed a little.
01:25:403 (1,2) - better to not overlap them, make jump if possible remapped
01:31:836 (2,3,4,5) - not sure about this Let's see what the other modders will say.
01:35:053 (3,4,5) - you can make triangle/stars /1/2 slider jumps here I don't want, I like how it is now.
01:38:698 (6,7,8,9) - ^ remapped!
01:48:991 (5,6,7,8) - ^, also the 7 and 8 are not fitting it fits for me
01:52:422 (5,6,1,2) ^ maybe later.
01:54:138 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - these sounds weird to me >_> fixed!
Well,,, basically you have to do more curve on the sliders, or switch and alter between curve and linear/sharp turn sliders.
I'm working on it.
Not a bad map, but needs more work!
Sorry for rly long delay, I've been busy and tired all this week so that I kept forgetting this
Don't worry, it's fine
Good luck! Thanks!
Ovoui's mod
Ovoui wrote:
slt Hi
[Général]
C'est assez bien je trouve, mais y'a pas mal de chose a revoir pour rank o/
Je sais bien ^^
[Easy]
00:18:071 (3) - Pas tès joli je trouve, tu pourais améliorer ton blanket comme ça Amélioré d'une autre façon. Je fais en sorte qu'AiMod ne me signale aucune erreur, c'est mon challenge pour une première map
00:40:372 (1) - Je verrais plus quelque chose comme cela Nope, car les deux sliders (2 et 3) ne seront ni parallèles ni blanketés. En l'occurrence j'ai choisi un blanket, bien qu'il soit plutôt éloigné.
00:45:519 (5) - ce blanket peut-être améliorer Hein, y'avait un blanket ici ? Fixed.
00:47:234 (6) - ici, ce slider est bizarre ca va mieu ca je trouve Il n'est pas comme ça pour rien. Il s'agit d'un slider 5/4, c'est peu commun mais il fallait marquer le rythme.
01:07:820 (7) - Ca va mieu comme ca je trouve Approuvé.
01:23:689 (6,7,8,1) - ca fait un peu trop 2008 a mon gout ^^ Fixed dans le précédent mod.
01:45:560 (1) - j'ai l'impression que ce slider n'est pas en rythme Il s'agit d'un offbeat.
01:54:138 (3) - ce blanket peut etre amélioré Un peu modifié dans le dernier mod.
01:57:569 (2) - celui la aussi est pas trop en rythme je crois Il s'agit encore d'un offbeat...
[Hard]
00:36:083 (4,5) - deplace le 4 à (284;232) et 5 à (360;216) Modifié un peu.
00:54:739 (4) - j'suis pas sur que ce soit en rythme Ceci est un offbeat !
01:08:677 (1,2,3,4) - ca fait trop rectiligne je trouve Changé dans le mod précédent.
01:10:822 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - pareil ici Pareil là.
01:25:618 (2) - pas trop en rythme non plus je crois CECI EST UN OFFBEAT
J'ai pas trouvé grand chose a dire, dsl D: C'est déjà super
j'espere que ca t'aidera quand même et gl pour rank o/ Merci ^^
Hollow Wings' mod
[quote="Hollow Wings"]from Scorpiour's Modding Queue
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good luck Thank you! /quote]
General
- ur hs's volume in the beginning part is a bit too loud, low down them plz, it's a quiet song Added some timing points.
- i hightly recommend u to mute the slider tracks' hs, or it'll be too noisy I did it in the past, but there was an upload problem. Fixed!
Hard
- 00:24:503 (3,4) - blanket maybe well, yes, why not
- 02:07:432 (2,3) - ^ yeah.
- 01:16:397 (5) - arrange ds fixed in the previous mod
- 01:22:401 (3,4,5) - this will be a bit confusing in reading that pattern in a hard diff... maybe spread them to avoid that overlap
- fine with those rhythms, what's more, i think they r a bit interesting. but as for the composing... i should say it's pretty straightforward, but not that welcomed nowadays. maybe u can mod more others' maps and see what they have do to their stuffs
Hmm... I dunno... I can't remove this 1/8 circle at all, because it fits really great with the song... For now I can only let it like this, I will ask my friends modders to know what they can advice to me.
Easy
- 00:27:506 (1,2) - blanket with ds kept already did my best here
- 00:34:797 (2,3) - perfect this blanket okay
- 00:54:954 (4,5) - ^ Did I really mapped this ?
- 01:47:705 (3,4) - ^ should be fixed
- 01:57:569 (2,3) - ^ same
- 00:40:372 (1,2) - lol why not blanket here? In fact there is one, but I can't improve it because of the distances
- 01:53:710 (2,3) - ^ can't do much better.
- 00:51:094 (1) - nc setting from here's a bit confusing, maybe just set them at the heavy beats in long white lines, rather than following those patterns removed NC. Should be enough.
good luck Thank you! /quote]
Thank you so much for your mods !! They was really helpful!! (even if I took more than 4 hours to check these mods!)