Wings
00:30:199 (1,2) - You should make it so the top and the bottom of these sliders overlap the same amount. Something more like this: http://puu.sh/aykrN/907058bf16.jpg
00:45:199 (1,2,3) - This is a good combo, but a little hard to read because previously, you have been stacking a lot of 1/2 notes, so at first it looks like these are 1/2 note stacks, not 1/4 notes. I would offset the stacks just a little, to give the player a little hint that they are 1/4 notes. http://puu.sh/aykKl/36175c280b.jpg
01:08:614 (3,4,5) - ^
01:13:736 (5,6,7,8) - ^ See like right here it is hard to tell when it is a 1/4 note and when it is a 1/2 note
00:49:224 (3,4) - Can you make these look more like this? http://puu.sh/aykQT/9fb160d124.jpg Looks better imo
00:55:809 (1) - I would remove this NC
01:11:541 (3) - Make this a 1/2 slider instead?
01:47:028 (1) - O.O Wow, nice
01:59:559 - It sounds like the last note should be here.
Really nice diff! The biggest problem is the stacked 1/2 notes and 1/4 notes that look the same
00:30:199 (1,2) - You should make it so the top and the bottom of these sliders overlap the same amount. Something more like this: http://puu.sh/aykrN/907058bf16.jpg
00:45:199 (1,2,3) - This is a good combo, but a little hard to read because previously, you have been stacking a lot of 1/2 notes, so at first it looks like these are 1/2 note stacks, not 1/4 notes. I would offset the stacks just a little, to give the player a little hint that they are 1/4 notes. http://puu.sh/aykKl/36175c280b.jpg
01:08:614 (3,4,5) - ^
01:13:736 (5,6,7,8) - ^ See like right here it is hard to tell when it is a 1/4 note and when it is a 1/2 note
00:49:224 (3,4) - Can you make these look more like this? http://puu.sh/aykQT/9fb160d124.jpg Looks better imo
00:55:809 (1) - I would remove this NC
01:11:541 (3) - Make this a 1/2 slider instead?
01:47:028 (1) - O.O Wow, nice
01:59:559 - It sounds like the last note should be here.
Really nice diff! The biggest problem is the stacked 1/2 notes and 1/4 notes that look the same
Standard
00:52:882 (4) - You should soften the curve on the left side a little bit: http://puu.sh/aylpB/ab7030190d.jpg
01:30:931 (4) - NC?
01:42:272 (1) - Hmm, i think it would sound better with this note removed
00:52:882 (4) - You should soften the curve on the left side a little bit: http://puu.sh/aylpB/ab7030190d.jpg
01:30:931 (4) - NC?
01:42:272 (1) - Hmm, i think it would sound better with this note removed
Beginner
01:47:028 (1) - Silence the end of this spinner
That's all I could find
01:47:028 (1) - Silence the end of this spinner
That's all I could find
Really nice mapset, and great storyboard! ^-^
Good luck, and thanks for the M4M!