Yo; modding here.
*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.
>General
Good luck on the way
*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.
>General
- Minor thing, but don't you think "baka" as the miss text will ruin the calming feeling of the map and will make players feel funny instead? I'd say to just use the regular "miss" or something.
- 01:51:419 - You might want to check the timing here until the end. For example, 01:53:431 (4) (in Wings) sounds off, and the instrument here doesn't seem to be snapped to anything. 01:59:559 (3) (in Wings too) seems to be pretty weird, also, since it has to be snapped to a 1/8 tick.
- 00:14:102 (1,2) - Swap NC? I think that follows the song's rhythm more correctly.
- 00:25:809 (3) - NC? I think you should know why. The combo is too long compared to the other combos btw.
- 01:29:467 (1,2) - Again, swap NC since that goes along with the song better?
- 00:20:687 (1,2) - Don't you think these sliders look too close to each other? Try moving (2) to (232,112) and rotate it anti-clockwise a bit to make a better flow.
- 01:07:516 - Add a circle here to follow the instrument? Might as well do it since you mapped this tick in the other diffs.
- 01:37:882 (3) - Move to (416,72) for a better flow?
- 01:55:809 (3,4) - Move to (388,160) so 01:54:346 (1,2,3,4) will be evenly spaced? Looks neater that way.
- 00:35:321 - Shouldn't you begin the kiai here instead of 00:34:589 like the other diffs? It follows the music better, too. While we're here, NC 00:35:321 (3) too to follow the music (since I think that's the one you're supposed to emphasize with an NC in the beginning of a kiai time).
- 01:19:224 (3) - NC this for the same reason as the suggestion above?
Good luck on the way