Hey! From the Strawberry Mousse Modding Team
Sorry for the late mod, I've been really busy as of late.
Let's go!
[General]
Metadata:Correct Title is: Proud of
You
Your "Y" in "You" needs to be capitalized.
Source:
http://www.yesasia.com/global/a-little- ... /info.html (Track 11)
[Beginner]
00:42:638 (1) - Add a finish on the slider head to maintain consistency with the rest of the kiai time.
00:45:565 (1) - Adding a whistle to the slider end sounds nice
01:35:321 (1) - A clap here could be used for vocal emphasis and fits really nicely.
01:29:467 (2) - Adding a clap here would provide really strong vocal emphasis going into 01:30:931 (1) and would sound really good afterwards if you added a clap at 01:32:394 (2) too! Try it! Don't forget to change your storyboard pulses if you do~
01:38:248 (1) - How about a finish and a clap on the tail? You already have a pulse animation in the storyboard, so you should make use of that and use the clap rhythm there, in addition to a stronger chimes sound with the finish.
01:57:272 (1) - I was expecting a clap here since the piano is much stronger at this point and you can use the clap to emphasize that feeling
[Standard]
If you took any hitsounding suggestions from Beginner, remember to add them over to here
00:41:175 (4) - Ctrl+G flows better, and it's similar to 00:43:370 (3,4) but would break your snap. Up to you.
00:40:443 (4,1) - Doesn't flow very well for new players since 4 is coming off the left side and 1 starts on the right. You could Ctrl+H to make it easier for new players to catch it. It will break your snap though, up to you.
00:55:077 (4) - You could rotate this 27 degrees selection centre to make a nice double blanket
01:24:346 (5,5,5) - This is a little awkward since there isn't anything at 01:24:528 that would need a repeat or any sort of hit to be done there. I suggest making it simple and keeping it a 1/2 slider so you can be consistent with your first kiai.
01:45:565 (1) - Bring this a little closer to the left so the overlap looks nicer
[Wings]
00:22:150 (5) - Lower the red slider anchor a little more so it looks nicer
00:45:199 (1) - Add a whistle to the slider end and remove the whistle on 00:45:931 (2). Sounds nicer that way imo.
Not much to say other than the fact that you did a really nice job! Sometimes hitsounds require you to emphasize the feeling in the song rather than just hitsounding to the musical instruments. Keep up the great work and good luck~