Hi pandorawindy. From my modding queue
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Good luck with your mapset!
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- 00:59:467 -01:00:931 . . .(bg1.jpg)These pulse effects feels a bit rude for a soft and peaceful song. Try to make it softer
- 02:01:663 bg1.jpg is not placed correctly over the BG. You should fix it please
- 00:25:809 (3) A slider with 2 repetitions could be very hard to read for beginner players. You should remove a repetition and add a circle on 00:28:004.
- 00:33:126 (3) This slider looks and flows very bad in my opinion. I have an better idea , you should try something like this: (CODE+IDEA)Code+Image
184,140,33126,2,0,P|246:92|325:91,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
- 00:46:663 Consider add a circle here , since the music really needs it. In addition , the BPM is very slow. So, you shouldn't have any problems doing this
- 01:12:638 (1,2) This patter doesn't flow very good imo. The tail of (1) doesn't make sense with the beginning of (2). You should try something like this:
- 01:40:443 (2) Looks better if you center this note.
- 01:41:175 (3) For consistency with your hitsounds pattern. You have to add a Whistle here
01:45:565 (1) This slider could flow better if you make it like 01:42:638 (1) , something like a parallel pattern:
In addition , you should remove the New Combo from this slider , since is really unnecessary - 01:51:419 (1,2) As I said in 01:12:638 (1,2)
- 00:20:687 (1) A slowdown in a normal diff could be hard to play for some beginner players , you should do a consistent velocity
- 00:35:321 (3) A New Combo here is really neccesary , because of your combo patterns. If you do this , remove the NC from 00:36:419 (1) and place it in 00:36:785 (2)
- 00:42:638 (2,3) Fix the spacing between these objects. Since these sliders are breaking your consistent spacing
- 00:52:150 (3,4) I hate to be nazi , but this blanket can be improved!
- 01:22:150 (5,6) I didn't like how you are following the rhythm here , feels a bit weird since you are using 1/1 slider for this rhythm in the rest of the map. Make it like this:
- 01:39:711 (4) For consistency with your hitsounds pattern. You should add a Whistle at the slider end. In addition , it sound better with the music
- 01:56:541 (4) Move the second sliderpoint (from the middle) to x:480 y:200 for consistency with this pattern : 01:54:346 (1,2,3,4).
- 00:13:370 (4,1) The spacing between these objects feels very close compared to the rest of the mapset. You should fix it!
- 00:42:638 (2,3) Fix the spacing between these sliders. Really feels very VERY close
- 01:11:175 (2,3) (^)
- 01:39:711 (5) For consistency with your hitsounds pattern. You should add a Whistle at the slider end
- 01:47:028 (1) I love it <333
- 01:54:346 (1,1,1,1) This pattern doesn't play very good imo. You should try another pattern , the current patterns feels more comfortable for a very hard map like THE BIG BLACK maybe
Good luck with your mapset!