XinCrin wrote:
Hi pandorawindy. From my modding queue
StoryboardBeginner
- 00:59:467 -01:00:931 . . .(bg1.jpg)These pulse effects feels a bit rude for a soft and peaceful song. Try to make it softer ok fixed
- 02:01:663 bg1.jpg is not placed correctly over the BG. You should fix it please fixed,thank you for your so responsible checking.
Standard
- 00:25:809 (3) A slider with 2 repetitions could be very hard to read for beginner players. You should remove a repetition and add a circle on 00:28:004. sounds good, fixed!
- 00:33:126 (3) This slider looks and flows very bad in my opinion. I have an better idea , you should try something like this: (CODE+IDEA) fixed
Code+Image184,140,33126,2,0,P|246:92|325:91,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:- 00:46:663 Consider add a circle here , since the music really needs it. In addition , the BPM is very slow. So, you shouldn't have any problems doing this hmm.. maybe this circle not very match this diff...i wanna keep it before more modders point it out..
- 01:12:638 (1,2) This patter doesn't flow very good imo. The tail of (1) doesn't make sense with the beginning of (2). You should try something like this: fixed
- 01:40:443 (2) Looks better if you center this note. yeah,, i have remapped ... so idk if it s better than before.
- 01:41:175 (3) For consistency with your hitsounds pattern. You have to add a Whistle here ok , fixed
01:45:565 (1) This slider could flow better if you make it like 01:42:638 (1) , something like a parallel pattern: fixed
In addition , you should remove the New Combo from this slider , since is really unnecessary- 01:51:419 (1,2) As I said in 01:12:638 (1,2) fixed
Wings
- 00:20:687 (1) A slowdown in a normal diff could be hard to play for some beginner players , you should do a consistent velocity hmm,,,i wanna keep it if its rankable .. because i have no better idea to make some other pattern to express the lyric's mean.
- 00:35:321 (3) A New Combo here is really neccesary , because of your combo patterns. If you do this , remove the NC from 00:36:419 (1) and place it in 00:36:785 (2) fixed
- 00:42:638 (2,3) Fix the spacing between these objects. Since these sliders are breaking your consistent spacing ok thx for you pointed out there issues.
- 00:52:150 (3,4) I hate to be nazi , but this blanket can be improved! oh..god..why dont you like this slider...i just wanna make the sliders more varieties.
- 01:22:150 (5,6) I didn't like how you are following the rhythm here , feels a bit weird since you are using 1/1 slider for this rhythm in the rest of the map. Make it like this: i think the last kiai has the high spirited rhythm..so i dont have plan to add more long sliders in this part.
- 01:39:711 (4) For consistency with your hitsounds pattern. You should add a Whistle at the slider end. In addition , it sound better with the music fixed
- 01:56:541 (4) Move the second sliderpoint (from the middle) to x:480 y:200 for consistency with this pattern : 01:54:346 (1,2,3,4). fixed
Good map , Wings can improve a lot but is not bad really.
- 00:13:370 (4,1) The spacing between these objects feels very close compared to the rest of the mapset. You should fix it! yeah,,, i fixed 1 and 2 s spacing.maybe...this fixed would take indirect effect..
- 00:42:638 (2,3) Fix the spacing between these sliders. Really feels very VERY close oh,not right now,,i ll wait more modders' replies.
- 01:11:175 (2,3) (^) just one cool pattern i guess..
- 01:39:711 (5) For consistency with your hitsounds pattern. You should add a Whistle at the slider end ok
- 01:47:028 (1) I love it <333 ;w;
- 01:54:346 (1,1,1,1) This pattern doesn't play very good imo. You should try another pattern , the current patterns feels more comfortable for a very hard map like THE BIG BLACK maybe LOL...big black...I ll keep it before other replies.
Good luck with your mapset! [/color]