1. Beginner (1.15 stars, 81 notes)
2. Standard (1.82 stars, 139 notes)
3. Wings (2.29 stars, 171 notes)

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Special thanks to alacat Bubbled and CDFA Ranked

BOLD: My mutual friends
Thank all the people who have helped me
alacat
yf_bmp
huafenshaonv
Shirayuki
Fycho
lkx_Shore
sheela901
IamKwaN
fm4a93au04
Yuthuil
Awaken
XinCrin
- H i N a -
inverness
Ryuuka Toki
ichia7x
xLoupGarou
FlobuFlobs
rhalp10
TheForgotten5
Xellie
Artavia
-Nya-
Minakami Yuki
【 Joey 】
No_Gu
【_Crystal】
Hollow Wings
Hinsvar
kamisamaaa
Giralda
Gaia
jinhang_ang

yf_bmp wrote:

如果要rank的话请注意只有最高难度可以自定义命名

huafenshaonv wrote:

[General]
ok
wing2 可以调整 个人感觉白屏效果足够了 wing2 我想突出一下fly的高音。
[Dream]
01:07:516 (1,2) - 这两个弧线更接近点 2太弯了fixed
01:16:297 (4) - 右移一格 x:296 y:320fixed
这个厉害
[Proud]
00:20:687 (1) - 不推荐减速 其实我也很不想减速，，，但是太长了，，但我还想突出through的感觉。。
00:32:394 (1) - 去了NCfixed
00:51:053 (1) - x:360 y340 感觉这个弧线更好fixed
01:54:346 (1,1,1,1,1) - 不需要那么多1突出重音 音效这里开始是渐降效果更好 不跟着歌曲fixed
[Wings]
00:27:272 (4) - 竖直放在之前 00:26:175 (2) - 的位子 这里我也很纠结..flow问题。。
00:53:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 5角星可以用旋转工具 ctrl+shift+r做正 一般跳跃路线也是一笔画路线 不推荐对跳我擦 还有这等高大上工具 太感谢了 all fixed!!!
01:31:480 (2) - 去了这个note 这里01:32:211 加note我想和前面临近的一小段副歌保持一致，我暂且保留可以么
最后个slider拉的好厉害0.0 O_o

- H i N a - wrote:

Hi~ M4M from my queue

General

1. Fine! nice SB

Dream

1. 00:29:467 (2) - move to x:306 y:40fixed
2. 00:30:199 (3) - move to x:449 y:113fixed
3. 00:49:955 (2) - move to x:312 y:280fixed
4. 02:06:053 - turn down volume plz.fixed

Proud

1. 00:30:199 (2,3) - how about this ?Cool,fixed.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:48:126 (1) - move to x:288 y:24 to stack with 00:45:199 (1)ok
3. 01:23:248 (1) - move to x:224 y:96 to stack with 01:20:321 (2)ok
4. 01:23:614 (2) - move to x:328 y:128fixed
5. 02:06:053 - turn down volume plz.fixed

Wings

1. I think it's have too much unsnap distance object, try to reduce it (if this diff is Hard)maybe this diff is between the insane and hard,,,LOL
2. 01:47:028 (1) - wow beautiful! thx
3. 02:06:053 - turn down volume plz.fixed

Good Luck thank you

Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map
Called from ♪ ichia7x's [4Mode] Modding Queue ♪

1. I recommend you to not use that diff name, change it
2. If 'A little love' is just the album, please move it from source to tags

1. 01:40:443 and 01:41:175 - add circle

• 
  Maybe for some reverse slider, change it just 1/1 slider

• 
  Clear~

inverness wrote:

Hello!

[]

1. No tags?HMM..This is my new map,and first time to make the SB.So mostly of time i didn't focused on the songs' messages. but i ll add my tags as soon. thx
2. Hitsounds are bit too loud I guess, try lowering them 10%? maybe you are right.i ll post some test reqs to my friends.
3. Storyboard:
   
   1. Most of your backgrounds are scaled way too large, thus increasing SB load and lagged ancient PCs. If you notice, there's a grid and boundaries in the design editor, you should not scale things larger than the boundaries unless you want to scroll it or whatever. Here, as most images are scrolling horizontally, there's no point of scaling backgrounds this big. I suggest to stick around with the design editor's boundaries in scaling pictures.I agree with you . so i have fixed all my images' size now.
   2. Most pulses are way too zoomed. Pulses are best used less faded, less scaled.fixed
   3. light.png is too big. Try to resize it in a half (or in a quarter)fixed
   4. win1.png and win2.png is also way too big.oh.. jesus..i forgot change the size in my PS..fixed..
   5. Most lyric sprites could be cropped to save SB load.If i fix my lyric size...the lyric effects ll be bad..

Map is fine for me, now.
If there's any question please poke me. I can help with anything storyboard-related if you want. I'll be glad to help (-:thank you inverness...thx for your mod..it s very helpful

Shirayuki wrote:

Hello my friend,

Your SB impressed me, and this song was so nostalgic that I gotta mod this!!!

Anyway, here are my suggestions:

Sorry,friend.I replied you so late

[Wings]
00:14:833 (3) - Move this up a bit? It's hiding the lyric, like to x:196 y:233 and blanket (1) like this
00:17:760 (3) - Same, move it to x:472 y:152 to not hide the lyric
00:18:492 (1) - Same
00:22:150 (5) - Same, also I did some Ctrl - H and this one isn't really symmetrical yet ;w;okay, fixed
00:23:614 (3) - Same
00:27:272 (4) - Same
00:29:102 (2) - Same, but this one is tricky, so you might have to change the patern.fixed

About this point of the lyric be hided,hmm..I tried to think many idea to avoid..but..they ll break most of my favorite patterns..so .. finally i give up.i am sorry.

I guess you can check all of your diff and look out for similar cases right, so I'll stop spamming about them

00:15:931 (4,5) - Ctrl - H for a more natural flow imonice fixed.
00:27:272 (4) - Ctrl - G for a more natural flow imook, fixed
00:29:467 (3) - Samefixed
00:30:199 (4,5) - These two has slider velocity a bit too high, it can cause confusion for players playing this map first time, you may want to reduce sv and make this into a smaller heart maybe? xD ok,sv has been reduced. how about 1.5X ?
00:49:224 (3,4) - These two are overlapping a bit, so you might want to move them away from others. (Also they hide both the lines lol)3 has been adjusted
01:47:028 (1) - 10/10 for creativity lol thx ;w;
01:54:346 (1,1,1,1) - These can be in a combo imo, unless you don't want follow point to make the map looks confusingfixed
01:55:809 (1,1) - Ctrl - H? So the flow will be clockwisei prefer my way.could i keep it :3

Overall, I really like this diff ;w; ;w;

[Proud]
I just want to say, awesome job making a normal diff!thx

00:30:199 (2) - Maybe Ctrl - G so it flows a bit better for new player? hmm...I have a beginner diff,dont you know?this diff is standard...so i think this diff must be harder.
00:34:589 (1) - Change it back to the previous combo
00:35:321 (3,1,2,3) - These should be in a combo
00:38:248 (4,1,2,3) - Same.
00:41:175 (4,1,2,3) - Same
00:44:102 (4,1,2,3) - Same, and I think you can look for others too right

honest to say,idk how to make the combo more reasonable; I ll fix them after i make it clear;

00:40:443 (3) - Ctrl - G for a better flow imo I guess harder than beginner diff is better;
00:55:077 (3) - Same, and it'll be natural for players who spin counter clockwise like me too xDI spin clockwise.. XD
01:33:858 (6,7,1,2,3) - These should be in a combo, you should reassign the combo around this part. ok fixed here
01:44:833 (6) - Ctrl - G imo hmm..

A bit too slow, and the first part is kinda expectable to me, but you know what , this is a great map for new players!thank you,,but,,its standard,,,i have beginner diff XD

Overall, except the part that some objects were hiding the lyric, this is a great mapset. I approve! 谢谢!!yuki (谢谢=thanks in chinese)

Ryuuka Toki wrote:

Hi!from my queue
首先还是命名的问题，感觉easy和normal的命名不能改 好的 改过了

Easy

SV1.0吧，基本上easy都是这个sv，也适合舒缓的风格 1.0配上80bpm 的曲子.. 滑条好像蜗牛..
不过不改也没啥问题
试试每条大白线上用finish？柑橘会好一些。whistle不是很合适 副歌我喜欢用finish..
01:11:175 (4) - 改成跟人声的滑条好了改成了三个circle

01:12:272 (5) - add a note
01:58:004 (2) - 这个也改成DS0.8好了，正好一种结束的感觉ok
02:01:480 (1) - add finish好主意

Normal

01:59:559 - 最后一个钢琴是在这里出来的(1/8)，所以你的note不是对着钢琴的，感觉会误导玩家，不过我也没想到什么方法改ORZ O_o 木有法纸...肿么办
02:01:480 (1) - 转盘从红线开始？转盘是会在开始处提前出现的.
总之很好

Wings

CS3.5吧，感觉还是圈太小，慢歌圈大一点好看。哦？ 我试试 ，还不错
SV好高啊，但是打着还是不觉得快，真神奇。
01:14:285 - remove，感觉不是很好打移除了
真心是找不出啥问题，给跪了。

直接rank好了
小时候的回忆啊我小时候听得是国语的..

ichia7x wrote:

Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map
Called from ♪ ichia7x's [4Mode] Modding Queue ♪

[General]

1. I recommend you to not use that diff name, change it fixed
2. If 'A little love' is just the album, please move it from source to tagsfixed

[Dream]

1. 01:40:443 and 01:41:175 - add circleok.

[Proud]

• 
  Maybe for some reverse slider, change it just 1/1 slider I think reverse sliders are more reasonable;

[Wings]

• 
  Clear~

Good luck

xLoupGarou wrote:

Sorry for the Late Reply From . . xLoupGarou's Modding Queue

Mod Starts Here

[ General]

*Mp3 --> OK


*BG --> OK


[ Beginner]

00:47:028 (2) - Move ( x:304 y:264 )fixed

[ Standard]

00:29:467 (1,2,3) - I'm suggesting you adjust your slider/s position . . like this for instance



00:32:394 (3,4) - How about doing like this for instance . . .



00:33:858 (5) - Adjust your slider tail on this part



[

ok the sliders' shape have been adjusted.
Wings]

00:27:272 (4) - How about removing the repeat . . I do not recommend you using a repeat on this partok fixed

00:30:199 - Your timing point in here is too fast (2x)? How about reducing it to 1.4 or 1.3 'cause it's a clam song . Plus from the past mods I made for far no one make a timing of 2x also your slider is not a normal slider . . . fixed,how about 1.5X

00:47:028 (5) - Adjust your slider head ( x: 184 y:76 )fixed

01:19:772 (4,5) - I don't recommend you to stack your notes after your slider it's making a blind spot . . plus your AR is fast ( what I think is appropriate for this in Insane diffs . . ) sliders' stack is one of my pattern. i like it ..

01:47:028 (1) - Such Effort in this part I like itthx

01:58:736 (3) - Apply NCfixed

01:59:467 - ^fixed


Remarks :
The Wing Slider as fantastic . . Good Luck~

FlobuFlobs wrote:

Wings

1. Disable epilepsy warning, the SB isnt really fast Honest to say how does the epilepsy warning work;but..if i disable it , one warning appeared in my Aimod.
2. Add angel beats to the tags, cuz you are using a angel beats background?oh..idk this gril with wings.but i have added;
3. Add Hatsune Miku or vocaloid in the tags cuz the SB at 01:33:150 - ok added
4. im not a big fan of those "tic" hitsound,use some softer soundsno it s cool.
5. 00:15:931 (4) - ctrl+H this and 00:16:297 (5) - ctrl+G this for better consistency. like in the rest of the mapfixed
6. 00:22:150 (5,2) - avoid overlapping or stack it under the slider this is my pattern,not hard to read.
7. 00:30:199 (4,5) - x2.00 sv here seems a bit to much and unpredictable, lower it a bitfixed
8. 00:45:382 (2,3) - fix stack my favorite pattern..
9. 00:49:224 (3,4) - avoid overlappingfixed

Well, thats all i can find atm

rhalp10 wrote:

rhalp's Modding Queues [ForEver OPEN]

Hello from my modding queues !! i like your beatmap !!

Fiona Fung - Proud of you

[Easy]
01:26:541 (1) - x:160 y:96 prev:0.99x next:1.68xfixed
01:28:004 (2) - x:216 y:304 prev:1.05x next:1.01xfixed

[Standard]
00:34:589 (1) - x:88 y:168 prev:1.26x next:1.24x
00:34:955 (2) - x:1258 y:272 prev:1.24x next:1.19x
00:35:321 (3) - x:224 y:320 prev:1.19x next:1.35x
00:36:419 (1) - x:432 y:160 prev:1.35x next:1.40x
00:46:663 (3) - x:240 y:152 prev:1.51x next:1.20x

I have changed this pattern.
01:07:516 (1) - x:88 y:56 prev:1.16xfixed
01:22:150 (5) - x:216 y:328 prev:1.12x next:1.13xfixed

GOOD LUCK !! :D

TheForgotten5 wrote:

From queue!

[Wings]
00:23:248 (2) - Stack with the head of (5) in 00:22:150 fixed

[Standard]
OK.

[Beginner]
01:10:443 (3) - NC fixed

Good luck! thank you for mod

Xellie wrote:

Hi Hi from my queue
[General]
I don't know of beginner and standard are vaild names for ranked maps, I'm like 80% sure they have to have easy or normal or something in their name expect the highest difficulty hmm..honest to say i am a little confuse about this point.I just mimic it from the maps i have ever seen.
[Standard]
00:16:297 (3) - could blanket the 2 better fixed
00:17:760 (1) - I'd pull the middle node back like one time to blanket 4 perfectly yoo..good idea i guess : )
00:19:224 (3) - would pull middle node up once to blanket perfectly ok
00:22:150 (2) - could blanket 3 better fixed
00:25:077 (3) - could blanket 4 better fixed
00:27:272 (2) - maybe move this up to be parallel with 00:26:541 (1) - cause the flow feels a little weird the way they are now (would need to shift notes that come after to fit) weird? parallel pattern is a good choice , but i prefer now.
00:28:004 (3) - could blanket the follow circle of the slider better fixed
00:38:248 (4) - overlaps 00:36:419 (1) - some i think it s not a big issue for players.
00:41:175 (4) - could blanket the follow circle of 3 better fixed
01:10:443 (6) - could blanket follow circle a little better fixed
01:14:467 (5) - the curve of this feels too harsh to me ohh..this is one of my patterns.. i call it 180 degree turn to back slider ... LOL
01:52:882 (3) - harsh curve again ^
I like the map overall but I focused on fixing the blankets cause I feel it needs the really smooth curve feeling to match the song :3
thx
[Wings]
00:23:248 (2) - the overlap with 5 is meh fixed
00:30:199 (4,5) - this is cute :3 :3
00:45:931 (3) - maybe make this a curve instead of a straight line hmm,, i have no plan to change...
00:51:419 (2) - this overlaps 00:49:955 (4) - some fixed
01:19:772 (4,5) - overlaps 01:20:687 (2) - some and feels messy not a big issue i guess...:3
01:47:028 (1) - o god O_o

All and All I really like the map, Hope I helped some,and good luck getting it ranked <3 thank you for modding!

• ■ I like your sb skills. shoot star.

Artavia wrote:

[Beginner]

00:25:809 (1) - Remove NC fixed

00:45:565 (1) - Remove NC and 00:47:028 (2) - NC and 00:48:492 (1) - Remove NC fixed


[Standard]

00:30:199 (2) - Ctrl+Ji guess you wanna say ctrl+G fixed

01:08:980 (4) - ^ fixed

01:26:541 (2) - Remove whistleoh thx.. fixed

01:35:321 (4) - ^ fixed

01:57:272 (1) - Remove NC fixed


[Wings]

00:13:370 (1) - Remove NC fixed

00:30:199 (4) - NC (because the change of speed) fixed

00:55:809 (1) - Remove NC fixed

01:27:455 (5) - Remove hmm .. i follow the vocal , so ,, i want to keep it..

01:47:028 (1) - So nice... but i think this unrank sliderunrank?,,hmm..i think it s real reasonable slider with the wings shape and the lyric..


[End...]

• ■ I like your sb skills. shoot star. wow,thanks a lot

Hi pandorawindy. From my modding queue

1. 00:59:467 -01:00:931 . . .(bg1.jpg)These pulse effects feels a bit rude for a soft and peaceful song. Try to make it softer
2. 02:01:663 bg1.jpg is not placed correctly over the BG. You should fix it please

1. 00:25:809 (3) A slider with 2 repetitions could be very hard to read for beginner players. You should remove a repetition and add a circle on 00:28:004.
2. 00:33:126 (3) This slider looks and flows very bad in my opinion. I have an better idea , you should try something like this: (CODE+IDEA)
   
   Code+Image

   
   

   184,140,33126,2,0,P|246:92|325:91,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:46:663 Consider add a circle here , since the music really needs it. In addition , the BPM is very slow. So, you shouldn't have any problems doing this
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:12:638 (1,2) This patter doesn't flow very good imo. The tail of (1) doesn't make sense with the beginning of (2). You should try something like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:40:443 (2) Looks better if you center this note.
6. 01:41:175 (3) For consistency with your hitsounds pattern. You have to add a Whistle here
   01:45:565 (1) This slider could flow better if you make it like 01:42:638 (1) , something like a parallel pattern:
   
   SPOILER

   
   In addition , you should remove the New Combo from this slider , since is really unnecessary
7. 01:51:419 (1,2) As I said in 01:12:638 (1,2)

1. 00:20:687 (1) A slowdown in a normal diff could be hard to play for some beginner players , you should do a consistent velocity
2. 00:35:321 (3) A New Combo here is really neccesary , because of your combo patterns. If you do this , remove the NC from 00:36:419 (1) and place it in 00:36:785 (2)
3. 00:42:638 (2,3) Fix the spacing between these objects. Since these sliders are breaking your consistent spacing
4. 00:52:150 (3,4) I hate to be nazi , but this blanket can be improved!
5. 01:22:150 (5,6) I didn't like how you are following the rhythm here , feels a bit weird since you are using 1/1 slider for this rhythm in the rest of the map. Make it like this:
   
   Example

   
6. 01:39:711 (4) For consistency with your hitsounds pattern. You should add a Whistle at the slider end. In addition , it sound better with the music
7. 01:56:541 (4) Move the second sliderpoint (from the middle) to x:480 y:200 for consistency with this pattern : 01:54:346 (1,2,3,4).
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:13:370 (4,1) The spacing between these objects feels very close compared to the rest of the mapset. You should fix it!
2. 00:42:638 (2,3) Fix the spacing between these sliders. Really feels very VERY close
3. 01:11:175 (2,3) (^)
4. 01:39:711 (5) For consistency with your hitsounds pattern. You should add a Whistle at the slider end
5. 01:47:028 (1) I love it <333
6. 01:54:346 (1,1,1,1) This pattern doesn't play very good imo. You should try another pattern , the current patterns feels more comfortable for a very hard map like THE BIG BLACK maybe

Good map , Wings can improve a lot but is not bad really.
Good luck with your mapset!

Fycho wrote:

我来给sb点个赞，take my star:>

XinCrin wrote:

Hi pandorawindy. From my modding queue

Storyboard

1. 00:59:467 -01:00:931 . . .(bg1.jpg)These pulse effects feels a bit rude for a soft and peaceful song. Try to make it softer ok fixed
2. 02:01:663 bg1.jpg is not placed correctly over the BG. You should fix it please fixed,thank you for your so responsible checking.

Beginner

1. 00:25:809 (3) A slider with 2 repetitions could be very hard to read for beginner players. You should remove a repetition and add a circle on 00:28:004. sounds good, fixed!
2. 00:33:126 (3) This slider looks and flows very bad in my opinion. I have an better idea , you should try something like this: (CODE+IDEA) fixed
   
   Code+Image

   
   

   184,140,33126,2,0,P|246:92|325:91,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:46:663 Consider add a circle here , since the music really needs it. In addition , the BPM is very slow. So, you shouldn't have any problems doing this hmm.. maybe this circle not very match this diff...i wanna keep it before more modders point it out..
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:12:638 (1,2) This patter doesn't flow very good imo. The tail of (1) doesn't make sense with the beginning of (2). You should try something like this: fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:40:443 (2) Looks better if you center this note. yeah,, i have remapped ... so idk if it s better than before.
6. 01:41:175 (3) For consistency with your hitsounds pattern. You have to add a Whistle here ok , fixed
   01:45:565 (1) This slider could flow better if you make it like 01:42:638 (1) , something like a parallel pattern: fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
   In addition , you should remove the New Combo from this slider , since is really unnecessary
7. 01:51:419 (1,2) As I said in 01:12:638 (1,2) fixed

Standard

1. 00:20:687 (1) A slowdown in a normal diff could be hard to play for some beginner players , you should do a consistent velocity hmm,,,i wanna keep it if its rankable .. because i have no better idea to make some other pattern to express the lyric's mean.
2. 00:35:321 (3) A New Combo here is really neccesary , because of your combo patterns. If you do this , remove the NC from 00:36:419 (1) and place it in 00:36:785 (2) fixed
3. 00:42:638 (2,3) Fix the spacing between these objects. Since these sliders are breaking your consistent spacing ok thx for you pointed out there issues.
4. 00:52:150 (3,4) I hate to be nazi , but this blanket can be improved! oh..god..why dont you like this slider...i just wanna make the sliders more varieties.
5. 01:22:150 (5,6) I didn't like how you are following the rhythm here , feels a bit weird since you are using 1/1 slider for this rhythm in the rest of the map. Make it like this: i think the last kiai has the high spirited rhythm..so i dont have plan to add more long sliders in this part.
   
   Example

   
6. 01:39:711 (4) For consistency with your hitsounds pattern. You should add a Whistle at the slider end. In addition , it sound better with the music fixed
7. 01:56:541 (4) Move the second sliderpoint (from the middle) to x:480 y:200 for consistency with this pattern : 01:54:346 (1,2,3,4). fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

Wings

1. 00:13:370 (4,1) The spacing between these objects feels very close compared to the rest of the mapset. You should fix it! yeah,,, i fixed 1 and 2 s spacing.maybe...this fixed would take indirect effect..
2. 00:42:638 (2,3) Fix the spacing between these sliders. Really feels very VERY close oh,not right now,,i ll wait more modders' replies.
3. 01:11:175 (2,3) (^) just one cool pattern i guess..
4. 01:39:711 (5) For consistency with your hitsounds pattern. You should add a Whistle at the slider end ok
5. 01:47:028 (1) I love it <333 ;w;
6. 01:54:346 (1,1,1,1) This pattern doesn't play very good imo. You should try another pattern , the current patterns feels more comfortable for a very hard map like THE BIG BLACK maybe LOL...big black...I ll keep it before other replies.

Good map , Wings can improve a lot but is not bad really.
Good luck with your mapset! [/color]

-Nya- wrote:

Hey! M4M from my modding queue.
Well, here's my mod:

Beginner:
1) Check AiMod~ There is one DS issue. fixed..thank you for point it out.
2) 01:14:102~ I don't really like this slider's shape. Maybe mirror these two sliders: 01:12:638 and 01:14:102 instead. Like this: ok fixed..

Picture

Use the copy and paste option, and then turn the slider 180 degrees. i remapped..
3) 01:36:053~ Rather turn this slider the other way? Like this: good idea..

Picture

It's just a suggestion.
4) 01:44:833~ Maybe blanket this hitcircle instead with this slider: 01:45:565. ok i have remapped here,idk how about my new pattern now..
5) 01:51:419 and 01:52:882~ Also rather mirror these two sliders. remapped

Picture

Standard:
1) 01:20:687~ Rather do this? sounds good , i fixed..but not the symmetrical pattern..

Picture

It looks neater to me this wayok
2) 01:28:004~ Make this slider more identical to this slider: 01:26:541. ok

Picture

That's all suggestions I have for this diff. Great diff, btw.

Wings:
1) 00:19:955~ Stack this hitcircle on this hitcircle: 00:18:492. just one new patterns appeared..hmm..i wanna keep it before more replies i get..
2) 00:38:248~ Move this slider to X:268 Y:288. It will then stack this slider: 00:35:321 in a way. ok
3) 01:24:346~ Stack these three hitcircles on this hitcircle: 01:23:248. unnecessary i guess..
4) 01:47:028~ LOVE this slider! thx
Excellent diff!

I love your SB, and it's overall a great mapset.
Good Luck! thx for modding

Yuthuil wrote:

Easy:

I think you should change the distance snap divisor to 0.8 or 0.7, that way you'll achieve much more pattern. good idea..remapped...

00:29:467 (2,3) - Blanket two into three. ok
00:32:394 (2,3) - ^ ok
00:39:711 (1,2,1) - Try something like this? http://puu.sh/avScs/84c501d20c.jpg ok
00:54:346 (1) - shorten, and add a spinner at 00:55:809 that ends at 00:57:638 - this will also shorten the huge break slightly. good.. fixed
01:47:028 (1) - end this here 01:48:858. sounds a little terrible after i fixed it..
01:52:150 - try something like this - http://puu.sh/avSvr/ceae97b6c6.jpg hmm..not bad..but i prefer my sliders' shape.
01:57:272 (1) - blanket. fixed
02:07:882 The SB here 'thank you for playing is out of the screen, consider resizing. really?..fixed..

Normal:

00:16:297 (3) - blanket properly. ok
00:26:541 (1,2) - try something like this - http://puu.sh/avSKD/724a652e6a.jpg hmm..not bad..but i prefer my sliders' shape.
00:29:467 (1,2,3) - try this - http://puu.sh/avSSO/8d18e0d21c.jpg but neater sorry for the crappy shot.wow ..so cool..but i have remapped..
01:38:248 (2) - blanket hitcircle one with this slider? fixed
01:54:346 (1) - ^ fixed

Wings:

Change HP drain to 5 or 4, 6 is way too high (and annoying) for hard. maybe i ll fix it if others point it out..
AR 7? this is an extremely relaxing kind of slow song, so I think even 7.5 doesn't really fit. i ll keep it before more replies i get.

00:30:199 (1) - the SV change here is unnecessary. no,sliders are too short to be a heart if i dont increase the sv here.
01:47:028 (1) - this is amazing! I have no imagination when it comes to sliders... O_o

You have a really nice SB too, star for this. thx for modding

Minakami Yuki wrote:

From my queue of M4M

1. Grey——Just some complaints.
2. Black——My personal suggestions.
3. Bold——Highly recommended.
4. Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you have to fix it.

[General]

1. Good Storyboard and good song.

[Easy]

1. 02:01:480 (1) - 不像hard前面有个转盘，所以这里的从02:01:297 - 开始比较好 fixed

[Standard]

1. od4
2. 00:31:663 (1) - 这个NC没啥必要 fixed
3. 00:34:589 (1) - ^ fixed
4. 00:33:858 (3,1) - 间距稍微缩小点 好细心，谢谢
5. 00:40:443 (3,4) - blanket^
6. 00:45:565 (2) - 这个可以不要stack在1上，做个围绕3的blanket比较好 是啊
7. 00:46:663 (3,4) - 没包好 = =
8. 02:01:480 (1) - 同easy okay

[Wings]

1. 01:24:346 (3,4,5) - 尽量不要白线起三连，把4删了吧 行
2. 01:27:272 (4,5,6) - ^ fixed
3. 01:36:053 (1,2,3) - fixed
4. 01:47:028 (1) - 赞 ;w;

好歌，图作为1st也很不错
Hard的SV偏高了点，导致有些note的间距过大，不过我想了想，82bpm，也就不指出来了，问题不大
对称摆的还是挺好的
good luck!谢谢yuki.

[ Joey ] wrote:

Wings
00:30:199 (1,2) - You should make it so the top and the bottom of these sliders overlap the same amount. Something more like this: http://puu.sh/aykrN/907058bf16.jpg sounds good,, but i prefer mine,i think your 'heart' is a little thin..O_o
00:45:199 (1,2,3) - This is a good combo, but a little hard to read because previously, you have been stacking a lot of 1/2 notes, so at first it looks like these are 1/2 note stacks, not 1/4 notes. I would offset the stacks just a little, to give the player a little hint that they are 1/4 notes. http://puu.sh/aykKl/36175c280b.jpgno. this is a soft song , only 82 bpm. Not too hard to read i guess,I just think the patterns ll be a little harsh if i fix them..
01:08:614 (3,4,5) - ^
01:13:736 (5,6,7,8) - ^ See like right here it is hard to tell when it is a 1/4 note and when it is a 1/2 note
00:49:224 (3,4) - Can you make these look more like this? http://puu.sh/aykQT/9fb160d124.jpg Looks better imo the flow ll be bad..so no change.
00:55:809 (1) - I would remove this NC ok
01:11:541 (3) - Make this a 1/2 slider instead? ok
01:47:028 (1) - O.O Wow, nice O_o
01:59:559 - It sounds like the last note should be here. fixed
Really nice diff! The biggest problem is the stacked 1/2 notes and 1/4 notes that look the same

Standard
00:52:882 (4) - You should soften the curve on the left side a little bit: http://puu.sh/aylpB/ab7030190d.jpg fixed
01:30:931 (4) - NC? ok
01:42:272 (1) - Hmm, i think it would sound better with this note removed ok

Beginner
01:47:028 (1) - Silence the end of this spinner fixed
That's all I could find

Really nice mapset, and great storyboard! ^-^
Good luck, and thanks for the M4M!
thank you for modding!

lkx_Shore wrote:

[General]
在01:59:102 - 插一条bpm:68的红线，然后挪动后面的物件对其时间轴 最后一个note是1/8，我试着插入tp，但是效果不怎么好O_o
你的缩圈皮肤底下总感觉有一层光...我觉得那不太好,是指这个 额..我最喜欢的skin..---http://puu.sh/ayGNl/943da5c371.png

[Standard]
01:57:638 - 为什么要漏掉这个音 这里..我好像没有发现有什么特殊的音效啊，btw，我跟的钢琴声。
02:01:297 (1) - 太长了，不如让他在02:04:616 - 停止，其他难度一样 但是钢琴确实是在02:06:053 - 停止的啊T_T

[Wings]
AR用7.3会好点，OD可以+1。好的
01:53:431 (4) - 延长到01:53:797 - ，现在的情况意义不明 这里..钢琴声很微妙..左手和弦和右手弹奏卡了1/4的时差..

做得很用心，但主难度最大的问题是不会控制间距，无脑的对称和blanket是没有益处的...
简单的说，00:55:809 (3) - 这个是重音，那么完美就要有一个跳的过程来突出这个音。
而这里你选择的是摆五角星梗过渡....这和高潮平铺1.0x其实没什么区别...我同意你的观点，但是我的初衷在于如何将排版做的简洁干净，利用slider shape表达歌词大意。关于对称..我联想到的是翅膀，这也是为什么diff叫wings的原因,我不太希望它像普通hard一样,我希望它拥有自己独特的个性:)
然后还有一个技巧就是，sv随着歌曲变化而变化。
例如：01:42:272 (1) - 这里开始歌曲缓和了，那么完美可以用一个稍微低一点的sv。开始高潮的地方 这一点10/10 agree ! 已经做了修改。

也可以用稍微高点sv...

加油 谢谢

pandorawindy wrote:

lkx_Shore wrote:

做得很用心，但主难度最大的问题是不会控制间距，无脑的对称和blanket是没有益处的...
简单的说，00:55:809 (3) - 这个是重音，那么完美就要有一个跳的过程来突出这个音。
而这里你选择的是摆五角星梗过渡....这和高潮平铺1.0x其实没什么区别...我同意你的观点，但是我的初衷在于如何将排版做的简洁干净，利用slider shape表达歌词大意。关于对称..我联想到的是翅膀，这也是为什么diff叫wings的原因,我不太希望它像普通hard一样,我希望它拥有自己独特的个性:) 排版不是画画...虽然要让他整洁干净但同时也得简历在表现出音乐的基础上，不然脱离了音乐再怎么干净都没有意义，至于这个对称个性...对称流基本都这样，除了你后面拉的翅膀形状滑条，其他地方没有人会想到和这个对称是表达一对翅膀的意思的....

lkx_Shore wrote:

做得很用心，但主难度最大的问题是不会控制间距，无脑的对称和blanket是没有益处的...
简单的说，00:55:809 (3) - 这个是重音，那么完美就要有一个跳的过程来突出这个音。
而这里你选择的是摆五角星梗过渡....这和高潮平铺1.0x其实没什么区别...我同意你的观点，但是我的初衷在于如何将排版做的简洁干净，利用slider shape表达歌词大意。关于对称..我联想到的是翅膀，这也是为什么diff叫wings的原因,我不太希望它像普通hard一样,我希望它拥有自己独特的个性:) 排版不是画画...虽然要让他整洁干净但同时也得简历在表现出音乐的基础上，不然脱离了音乐再怎么干净都没有意义，至于这个对称个性...对称流基本都这样，除了你后面拉的翅膀形状滑条，其他地方没有人会想到和这个对称是表达一对翅膀的意思的....

好的，很有道理，我决定参考你的建议来重做一下..等我重做完之后，可以请你再来评价一下么

pandorawindy wrote:

好的，很有道理，我决定参考你的建议来重做一下..等我重做完之后，可以请你再来评价一下么

No_Gu wrote:

M4M from my queue

tag里面怎么乱遭的。。hatsune miku vocaloid angel beats跟歌无关 虽然你SB里有
01:19:224 - 这段开始重音那一闪的SB我觉得可以稍微减弱点 现在有点恍 好的 ， 近期 做一下调整。

[B]
00:14:102 (1,2) - 换NC fixed
00:17:028 (1,2) - ^ fixed
感觉你好像不太会加NC...NC一般都加在downbeat也就是长白线上 我推荐EN是2个downbeat1个NC。然后HI是1个downbeat1个NC
01:28:004 (2) - 去掉sliderbody的声音
01:42:638 (1,2,3,1) - 这边就不如做个完全对称比如把23换成一个对称的slider fixed

[S]
00:39:711 (2,3,4) - 说不出来的怪怪的感觉。。试试这样 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1876622 好的
00:54:346 (2,3) - 你好像还意外的很喜欢用这样的slider。。 O_o
01:11:541 (3) - 这种slider不太好领flow，不过低难度也无妨
01:47:028 (3) - 结尾有个whistle好点fixed
01:59:102 (4,5) - 这种很不好找时值的还是别在N里放circle了。把4连个slider到5去吧 fixed

[W]
00:29:467 (3) - 我觉得ctrl+g舒服点 如果改了后面心注意改一下前后 额 。。个人习惯问题吧。。
01:32:943 (1) - 再弯点吧 hao
01:47:028 (1) - 其实看中间点能发现哪里还是不太好不过这样已经很不错了。。
01:55:077 (1,1,1) - NC没意义啊 fixed
这diff总有种因为歌太简单所以特意做的满天飞的感觉。。其实我觉得SV慢点更好些吧。。。整体上看没上面两个diff那么舒服了不过也还可以
重做了
恩。还行吧 不过我不太喜欢那个hitnormal 好像大部分歌曲soft normal hit都是这个音效吧- -(..