Lena Park - Inori~You Raise Me Up (TV Size)‬ · forum‬

samplefish

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Topic Starter

samplefish 2014-05-05T21:01:25+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, July 11, 2014 at 10:11:12 PM

Artist: Lena Park
Title: Inori~You Raise Me Up (TV Size)
Source: Romeo x Juliet
Tags: lanturn julie tari opening
BPM: 120
Filesize: 17548kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.26 stars, 77 notes)
Hard (2.55 stars, 108 notes)
Julie's Normal (1.56 stars, 96 notes)
Lanturn's Beginner (0.66 stars, 28 notes)
Normal (1.37 stars, 86 notes)
Risen (3.01 stars, 163 notes)

Download: Lena Park - Inori~You Raise Me Up (TV Size)
Download: Lena Park - Inori~You Raise Me Up (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Risen: Done by Tari

Hard: Done by me

Julie's Normal: Done by Julie

Normal: Done by me

Easy: Done by me

Lanturn's Beginner: Done by Lanturn

Thanks to all the modders, pishifat for timing, Tari, Julie, ~~Lanturn~~, ringating for BG fix, MMzz for bubble and dkun for rank!

my inspiration

English Version: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aJxrX42WcjQ
Ranked Map by kanpakyin: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/34550 (~~timing and~~ hitsounds from that)
pishifat for sexy timing

~~i will reformat this when lanturn turns into a polar bear~~

well.

Last edited by samplefish 2014-07-25T19:58:52+00:00, edited 58 times in total.

pishifat

osu! Paragon

3,818 posts

Joined August 2013

pishifat 2014-05-06T04:51:04+00:00

:3

2014-05-05 17:01 samplefish: arrr
2014-05-05 17:01 samplefish: uh, do you have a second to playtest something
2014-05-05 17:01 pishifat: i do 
2014-05-05 17:01 pishifat: you know that i'm not going to SS whatever you're giving me though i hope
2014-05-05 17:01 samplefish: lol
2014-05-05 17:01 samplefish: its quite slow so probably not
2014-05-05 17:01 samplefish: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/417238 Lena Park - Inori ~You Raise Me Up~ (TV Size)]
2014-05-05 17:02 samplefish: the jumps also suck
2014-05-05 17:02 samplefish: so gl lol
2014-05-05 17:02 samplefish: uh
2014-05-05 17:02 samplefish: you can try on dt if its too slow
2014-05-05 17:02 samplefish: just go through it once
2014-05-05 17:02 pishifat: your messages were blocking circles -.-
2014-05-05 17:02 samplefish: oh sorry lol ;_;
2014-05-05 17:03 pishifat: going to try doubletime
2014-05-05 17:03 pishifat: will not do well
2014-05-05 17:03 samplefish: okay.
2014-05-05 17:04 pishifat: lots of timing confusion
2014-05-05 17:04 pishifat: cuz following lyrics
2014-05-05 17:04 samplefish: mmmm
2014-05-05 17:04 samplefish: i have
2014-05-05 17:04 samplefish: to unstack
2014-05-05 17:04 samplefish: those ntoes a the beginning lol
2014-05-05 17:04 pishifat: yes
2014-05-05 17:04 pishifat: those were pretty weird looking
2014-05-05 17:06 pishifat: the stack around 20 seconds
2014-05-05 17:06 pishifat: also weird looking
2014-05-05 17:06 pishifat: i dunno if you were including that
2014-05-05 17:07 samplefish: oh idk i thought those were ok
2014-05-05 17:07 samplefish: osnap i have class in a bit
2014-05-05 17:08 pishifat: :/
2014-05-05 17:08 pishifat: enjoy your learning
2014-05-05 17:08 pishifat: before that tho, the places where there are new timing things
2014-05-05 17:08 pishifat: first one you have a triple, but it's weird having that when they're not evenly spaced due to timing being wtf
2014-05-05 17:08 pishifat: so better to do the reverse slider thing
2014-05-05 17:09 samplefish: yus
2014-05-05 17:09 pishifat: actually you don't have the 5 circle on the new timing section i think :|
2014-05-05 17:09 pishifat: same with 00:50:603 (1) - 
2014-05-05 17:10 samplefish: lol might as well put this in a post for kudosu
2014-05-05 17:10 samplefish: \o/
2014-05-05 17:10 pishifat: if doing that
2014-05-05 17:10 pishifat: lemme point out more that i noticed :P
2014-05-05 17:10 samplefish: uh ill fix the stuff when i get back o/
2014-05-05 17:11 pishifat: k
2014-05-05 17:11 pishifat: you want things now or then
2014-05-05 21:08 pishifat: i don't get it
2014-05-05 21:08 pishifat: the hard on your map is only 3 stars
2014-05-05 21:08 pishifat: yet it seems harder than the average hard :|
2014-05-05 21:08 samplefish: oh? :o
2014-05-05 21:09 pishifat: like most hards that use distance snap 100% of the time and have extremely simple rhythms
2014-05-05 21:09 pishifat: 4 and a half stars
2014-05-05 21:09 samplefish: higher bpm?
2014-05-05 21:09 samplefish: higher stats?
2014-05-05 21:09 pishifat: even low bpm songs
2014-05-05 21:10 pishifat: on the website though it's got a pretty normal difficulty for a hard
2014-05-05 21:10 pishifat: but just ingame
2014-05-05 21:10 pishifat: it's screwy
2014-05-05 21:10 samplefish: in game is screwy yeah :D
2014-05-05 21:10 pishifat: anyway did you want me to add onto stuff from 4 hours ago
2014-05-05 21:11 samplefish: huuuuuuuuuuuuu sure
2014-05-05 21:11 samplefish: :D
2014-05-05 21:11 pishifat: good
2014-05-05 21:11 pishifat: cuz i have nothing better to do -.-
2014-05-05 21:11 samplefish: yaaay
2014-05-05 21:11 pishifat: so these notes 
2014-05-05 21:11 pishifat: 01:20:224 (1,1,1) - 
2014-05-05 21:12 pishifat: since they have weird timing
2014-05-05 21:12 pishifat: would be best to use distance snap
2014-05-05 21:12 pishifat: they're felt weird even when not doubletiming
2014-05-05 21:12 samplefish: o ya part of me knew that lol
2014-05-05 21:12 samplefish: but the ohter part is like IT FITS MAN
2014-05-05 21:12 samplefish: ill change it
2014-05-05 21:12 samplefish: !
2014-05-05 21:12 samplefish: its too tuff to play anyways.
2014-05-05 21:13 pishifat: mhm
2014-05-05 21:13 pishifat: next thingzor
2014-05-05 21:14 pishifat: i'm working backwards for some reason so this is gonna be weird
2014-05-05 21:14 pishifat: this 01:06:070 (1) - 
2014-05-05 21:14 pishifat: you'll want that spaced evenly between the next coulple notes
2014-05-05 21:14 pishifat: since they're all the same sort of drum thingy
2014-05-05 21:14 pishifat: duno how to explain
2014-05-05 21:14 pishifat: and if you do that, you could probably blanket 3 with the center of the slider too
2014-05-05 21:14 pishifat: while you do that i'll brb :3
2014-05-05 21:18 samplefish: yarhar!
2014-05-05 21:18 pishifat:  now that i think about it actually, that's a pretty heavy note for the end of a slider
2014-05-05 21:19 pishifat: [https://osu.ppy.sh/u/579428 see the section about passive hitsounding on the profile thing]
2014-05-05 21:19 pishifat: some people get really pissy about those
2014-05-05 21:22 samplefish: interesting
2014-05-05 21:23 pishifat: you don't really need to abide by that thing though
2014-05-05 21:23 pishifat: i've seen bats who have maps with passive hitsounding all the time
2014-05-05 21:23 pishifat: just if any of the returners to #modhelp see the map they're gonna complain about it :/
2014-05-05 21:24 samplefish: lol;p
2014-05-05 21:24 pishifat: so whenever you're done doing whatever you're doing say
2014-05-05 21:25 samplefish: oh ive been done :DDD
2014-05-05 21:25 pishifat: oh
2014-05-05 21:25 pishifat: :|
2014-05-05 21:25 samplefish: |:
2014-05-05 21:25 pishifat: well this section
2014-05-05 21:25 pishifat: 01:03:651 (3,4,5,6) - 
2014-05-05 21:25 pishifat: spacing is switching off between 1x and 2x
2014-05-05 21:25 pishifat: which is confusing
2014-05-05 21:26 samplefish: oh yes i know :D
2014-05-05 21:26 samplefish: im going to leave that there to see how it fares.
2014-05-05 21:26 pishifat: mkay
2014-05-05 21:26 samplefish: mainly becaause i played
2014-05-05 21:26 pishifat: imo it's gonna be too hard for a hard diff :P
2014-05-05 21:26 pishifat: or epople will say that 
2014-05-05 21:27 samplefish: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/412288 Halozy - Sentimental Skyscraper]
2014-05-05 21:27 samplefish: oh yeah probably
2014-05-05 21:27 pishifat: slow download is slow
2014-05-05 21:27 pishifat: also 00:50:626 (1) - 
2014-05-05 21:28 pishifat: didn't start it on the red tick still :|
2014-05-05 21:28 samplefish: ey?
2014-05-05 21:28 pishifat: the timing tick i mean
2014-05-05 21:28 samplefish: http://puu.sh/8B86m.jpg ?
2014-05-05 21:28 samplefish: oh
2014-05-05 21:28 samplefish: okay
2014-05-05 21:29 samplefish: not sure
2014-05-05 21:29 samplefish: i just took all this straight from
2014-05-05 21:29 samplefish: the ranked one
2014-05-05 21:30 pishifat: lemme see this ranked one
2014-05-05 21:30 samplefish: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/112285 Lena Park - Inori ~You Raise Me Up~ (TV Size)]
2014-05-05 21:30 samplefish: then agen it was ranked in 2011 lol
2014-05-05 21:31 pishifat: 00:50:626 (2) - 
2014-05-05 21:31 pishifat: they start it on the red tick :|
2014-05-05 21:31 pishifat: the new timing section
2014-05-05 21:31 samplefish: oh thats weird
2014-05-05 21:31 samplefish: idk how that happened XD
2014-05-05 21:32 pishifat: lol
2014-05-05 21:32 pishifat: also the timing on 00:50:361 (13) - 
2014-05-05 21:32 pishifat: seems wrong
2014-05-05 21:32 pishifat: like i know you took it from the ranked thing but...
2014-05-05 21:32 pishifat: play it at 25%
2014-05-05 21:32 pishifat: and you'll see what i mean
2014-05-05 21:32 samplefish: oh
2014-05-05 21:32 pishifat: the drum thing comes after the note
2014-05-05 21:33 samplefish:  mm O_O
2014-05-05 21:33 pishifat: you see what i mean
2014-05-05 21:34 samplefish: i tihnk itll be ok, not sure how to fix it atm lol
2014-05-05 21:35 pishifat: yeah...
2014-05-05 21:35 pishifat: if you have the slider at 50 seconds on the red thing it should be better at least
2014-05-05 21:35 pishifat: next thing
2014-05-05 21:35 pishifat: not importnat but i saw these 00:42:400 (4,1) -  weren't a perfect blanket
2014-05-05 21:35 pishifat: as well as 00:38:045 (5,6) - 
2014-05-05 21:36 samplefish:  okay fixored
2014-05-05 21:37 samplefish: and fixeded
2014-05-05 21:37 pishifat: .
2014-05-05 21:37 pishifat: combo stuff next
2014-05-05 21:37 pishifat: you had about 2 bars per combo
2014-05-05 21:37 pishifat: so 01:12:845 (2) - should probably nc
2014-05-05 21:38 pishifat: and tbh i have no idea why this has a nc 00:07:804 (1) - 
2014-05-05 21:38 pishifat: the note after that i should say
2014-05-05 21:39 samplefish: oh woops
2014-05-05 21:40 samplefish: i shouldnt using this skin to map lol
2014-05-05 21:40 pishifat: lul
2014-05-05 21:40 pishifat: numbers are useful in a game where you're counting circles :|
2014-05-05 21:40 pishifat: 00:30:545 (4) - 
2014-05-05 21:41 pishifat: this one umm
2014-05-05 21:41 pishifat: you've got the straight slider pointing towards it
2014-05-05 21:41 pishifat: but it's not directly towards it
2014-05-05 21:41 pishifat: [http://gyazo.com/b6a1ef7aea78271173f239f35f5dc883 this]
2014-05-05 21:41 samplefish: ey?
2014-05-05 21:41 samplefish: uh
2014-05-05 21:41 samplefish: O_O
2014-05-05 21:41 pishifat: giant slider
2014-05-05 21:41 samplefish: oh okay
2014-05-05 21:41 pishifat: was just to extend :P
2014-05-05 21:41 samplefish: !
2014-05-05 21:42 samplefish: fixeded
2014-05-05 21:42 samplefish: !
2014-05-05 21:42 pishifat: !
2014-05-05 21:42 pishifat: the spacing in the beginning also screws with me
2014-05-05 21:42 pishifat: but i'm just bad so i don't think that needs changing :|
2014-05-05 21:43 samplefish: oh dont worry i cahgned it already
2014-05-05 21:43 samplefish: http://puu.sh/8B8Ou.jpg
2014-05-05 21:43 samplefish: lol
2014-05-05 21:44 pishifat: i was thinking more the jump between 00:05:142 (2,3) - 
2014-05-05 21:44 pishifat: the not jump i should say
2014-05-05 21:44 samplefish: ho ho ho?
2014-05-05 21:44 pishifat: it's not important
2014-05-05 21:44 pishifat: i think it'll be fine
2014-05-05 21:44 samplefish: i think its readable :D
2014-05-05 21:44 pishifat: yeah it is
2014-05-05 21:44 samplefish: (too lazy to rearrange)
2014-05-05 21:45 pishifat: but i failed at reading it the first time i played it so i mad :3
2014-05-05 21:45 pishifat: also 00:13:852 (3) - you could have that pointing towards 4
2014-05-05 21:45 pishifat: and now i'm pointing out stupid stuff so imma stop
2014-05-05 21:46 samplefish: haha alright \o/
2014-05-05 21:46 samplefish: really helpful stuff -^^-
2014-05-05 21:46 samplefish: thanks!
2014-05-05 21:46 pishifat: lemme copy paste some crap then i can earn one whole internet point

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-05-06T07:29:03+00:00

Unsfamiliar

540 posts

Joined May 2013

Unsfamiliar 2014-05-08T10:28:28+00:00

SPOILER

2014-05-08 19:36 samplefish: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/417250 Lena Park - Inori~You Raise Me Up (TV Size)]
2014-05-08 19:37 samplefish: it also has an english version, which is just <333
2014-05-08 19:37 Unsfamiliar: Yeah I know the english ver :)
2014-05-08 19:39 Unsfamiliar: such a beautiful song <3
2014-05-08 19:40 samplefish: ikno ;_; when i found the ranked version my heart melted
2014-05-08 19:40 Unsfamiliar: ok~
2014-05-08 19:40 Unsfamiliar: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/417250 Lena Park - Inori~You Raise Me Up (TV Size) [Hard]]
2014-05-08 19:40 Unsfamiliar: a few things maybe
2014-05-08 19:40 Unsfamiliar: 00:06:836 (5) - maybe unstack this from the slider end
2014-05-08 19:41 Unsfamiliar: because
2014-05-08 19:41 Unsfamiliar: 00:04:175 (1,2) - here there is a 1/1 gap
2014-05-08 19:41 Unsfamiliar: with the same sort of pattern
2014-05-08 19:41 samplefish: oh right, okay
2014-05-08 19:41 Unsfamiliar: if you unstack it, it'll also play more fluidly imo
2014-05-08 19:42 samplefish: done
2014-05-08 19:42 Unsfamiliar: 00:09:013 (2,3) - I think you can ctrl+g this rhythm
2014-05-08 19:42 Unsfamiliar: to follow the vocals more closely
2014-05-08 19:42 Unsfamiliar: works way better imo
2014-05-08 19:43 Unsfamiliar: therefore, slider then circle
2014-05-08 19:43 samplefish: okay, ill do it
2014-05-08 19:44 samplefish: or rather, done*
2014-05-08 19:44 Unsfamiliar: 00:11:433 (6,1) - could be a blanket? :3
2014-05-08 19:45 samplefish: oh right.
2014-05-08 19:46 Unsfamiliar: 00:22:320 - wow, this vocal is simply breathtaking!!!
2014-05-08 19:46 Unsfamiliar: and yet it's not mapped ;w;
2014-05-08 19:47 samplefish: hm ill see what i can do
2014-05-08 19:48 Unsfamiliar: 00:38:771 (6,1) - the flow here doesn't bother you?
2014-05-08 19:49 samplefish: whats wrong with it? o:
2014-05-08 19:50 Unsfamiliar: i dunno, it's just a bit unorthodox for me
2014-05-08 19:50 Unsfamiliar: but if it works for you, then that's all that matters :)
2014-05-08 19:51 samplefish: does this make more sense? http://puu.sh/8DUhi.jpg
2014-05-08 19:51 Unsfamiliar: not really lol
2014-05-08 19:52 Unsfamiliar: just leave it, if it will ruin your current pattern
2014-05-08 19:52 samplefish: hm im lost, what is it you have in mind?
2014-05-08 19:54 Unsfamiliar: 01:03:651 (3,4,5) - yep, I remember i messed up here when i played
2014-05-08 19:54 Unsfamiliar: the spacing is pretty confusing
2014-05-08 19:55 samplefish: oh yes lol
2014-05-08 19:55 Unsfamiliar: since you have a 1/1 off-beat gap in the timeline
2014-05-08 19:55 Unsfamiliar: i suggest you make this more obvious and readable
2014-05-08 19:55 Unsfamiliar: perhaps a nice 1/1 stack anti-jump?
2014-05-08 19:57 samplefish: i have no idea what that means ;_;
2014-05-08 19:59 Unsfamiliar: just a sec
2014-05-08 19:59 samplefish: okay
2014-05-08 19:59 Unsfamiliar: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1585319
2014-05-08 19:59 Unsfamiliar: i curved (3) instead of it being straight
2014-05-08 19:59 samplefish: oh i see
2014-05-08 20:00 Unsfamiliar: now that 1/1 stack is on the end of
2014-05-08 20:00 Unsfamiliar: 01:02:200 (1) - 
2014-05-08 20:00 Unsfamiliar: with a new combo to signal the anti-jump
2014-05-08 20:02 Unsfamiliar: 01:03:651 (3,3) - also is blanketed
2014-05-08 20:04 Unsfamiliar: tell me when I can move on :)
2014-05-08 20:05 samplefish: i think i sort of did it
2014-05-08 20:05 samplefish: should be okay.
2014-05-08 20:05 Unsfamiliar: k~
2014-05-08 20:06 Unsfamiliar: one more thing in this diff
2014-05-08 20:06 Unsfamiliar: 01:20:587 - unused green line
2014-05-08 20:06 Unsfamiliar: and the one after it
2014-05-08 20:07 samplefish: oh yes o: nice catch
2014-05-08 20:07 Unsfamiliar: actually, also
2014-05-08 20:07 Unsfamiliar: 01:20:829 (2) - maybe NC
2014-05-08 20:07 Unsfamiliar: to signal the drastic sv change
2014-05-08 20:07 Unsfamiliar: *offset
2014-05-08 20:07 samplefish: alright
2014-05-08 20:08 samplefish: !
2014-05-08 20:08 Unsfamiliar: nice diff!
2014-05-08 20:09 samplefish: :D thanks
2014-05-08 20:09 samplefish: class got canceled the other day, so i made this XD
2014-05-08 20:09 Unsfamiliar: awesome way to spend a day off :P
2014-05-08 20:10 Unsfamiliar: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/417956 Lena Park - Inori~You Raise Me Up (TV Size) [Normal]]
2014-05-08 20:10 samplefish: ! youre doing all of them?
2014-05-08 20:10 samplefish: ;_; youre the best
2014-05-08 20:10 Unsfamiliar: may as well
2014-05-08 20:10 Unsfamiliar: :D
2014-05-08 20:11 Unsfamiliar: 00:18:691 (4,1) - the blanket for the slider end is like perfect!
2014-05-08 20:11 Unsfamiliar: but the one at the slider head is not so perfect...
2014-05-08 20:12 samplefish: hm
2014-05-08 20:13 Unsfamiliar: hmmm?
2014-05-08 20:14 samplefish: 00:18:449 (3) - 
2014-05-08 20:14 samplefish: woops
2014-05-08 20:14 samplefish: http://puu.sh/8DV5J.jpg
2014-05-08 20:14 Unsfamiliar: much better :3
2014-05-08 20:15 samplefish: hurray
2014-05-08 20:16 Unsfamiliar: quite polished
2014-05-08 20:16 Unsfamiliar: nice and neat
2014-05-08 20:17 samplefish: \o/
2014-05-08 20:18 Unsfamiliar: not much to say about the easy
2014-05-08 20:19 Unsfamiliar: it's pretty much just a CS3 version of normal haha
2014-05-08 20:20 samplefish: lol youre right :p
2014-05-08 20:20 Unsfamiliar: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/417503 Lena Park - Inori~You Raise Me Up (TV Size) [Lanturn's Beginner]]
2014-05-08 20:20 Unsfamiliar: omg!
2014-05-08 20:20 Unsfamiliar: difficulty settings all = 0?
2014-05-08 20:20 samplefish: lol, the name before lanturns beginner was lanturns unrankable.
2014-05-08 20:20 samplefish: :3
2014-05-08 20:21 Unsfamiliar: hahaha
2014-05-08 20:21 Unsfamiliar: ily lanturn
2014-05-08 20:21 Unsfamiliar: well, that's all from me ;3
2014-05-08 20:22 Unsfamiliar: super relaxing map
2014-05-08 20:22 Unsfamiliar: angelic song
2014-05-08 20:22 Unsfamiliar: yay
2014-05-08 20:22 samplefish: awesome ;_; thank you so much for your mod!
2014-05-08 20:22 Unsfamiliar: no worries

Good luck \o/

~★

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-05-09T13:21:03+00:00

2014-05-08 20:21 Unsfamiliar: ily lanturn

ily too Unsfamiliar <3 <3

Xiaolin

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Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2014-05-09T18:17:48+00:00

From Q ~ ! owo
[Lanturn's Beginner]
-Um, CS +1 maybe ? If no, I'll play it with all the mods ~ xD

Mission Complete !

[Easy]
00:07:804 - NC should start from here.
00:38:771 - ^
01:22:522 (1) - Spinner should end at the big white tick ~ ? :3
[Normal]
00:07:804 - NC should start here ~ ?
00:21:594 (3) - This shape looks ugly, change shape pwease ~~

Example

[Julie's Normal]
01:04:619 - Remove whistle.
[Hard]
01:20:892 (1) - Remove NC ~ ?

Gonna give you a star soon ~ ! <3 Amazing and sad song (GL)

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-05-09T18:32:45+00:00

cs1 is too small. I'm worried new players will miss the note if I change it.

Lapis too good

SPOILER

;_;

samplefish

1,198 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

samplefish 2014-05-09T18:46:42+00:00

Lapis Aoki wrote:
From Q ~ ! owo hi!!
[Easy]
00:07:804 - NC should start from here. I like the NC at the big white tick, that way there is are followpoints between the gaps for FL players
00:38:771 - ^ ^
01:22:522 (1) - Spinner should end at the big white tick ~ ? :3 music does not end there, should be okay. (sorry osu!mania players)
[Normal]
00:07:804 - NC should start here ~ ? ^
00:21:594 (3) - This shape looks ugly, change shape pwease ~~ i think its ok, it leads into the next slider nicely.
Example
[Hard]
01:20:892 (1) - Remove NC ~ ? NC to accompany slower slider. no change

Gonna give you a star soon ~ ! <3 Amazing and sad song (GL)

thank you for the mod!! i (or we) appreciate it!

Julie

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Joined March 2013

Julie 2014-05-10T01:56:54+00:00

Lapis Aoki wrote:
[Julie's Normal]
01:04:619 - Remove whistle.

Fixed thanks

http://puu.sh/8G6iN.osu

Setsurei

1,149 posts

Joined May 2012

Setsurei 2014-05-10T03:20:52+00:00

[General]
no combo colors?
check AI mod, the unicode are not consistent through the diffs
[Lanturn's Beginner]
CS 0 is unrankable

Ranking Criteria wrote:
Do not manually edit anything in an .osu file that cannot be changed through the Editor. The only exceptions are .osu-specific storyboards and skin-related options such as SliderBorder and SliderTrackOverride.

[Easy]
00:00:295 (1,2) - DS
00:17:723 (3,4) - ^
00:17:723 (3,1) - avoid overlaps like this, may confuse the newbie
00:23:045 (4,1) - DS
00:26:433 (4,1) - ^
01:01:020 (3,1) - ^
[Normal]
00:41:674 (3,4) - stack properly
01:06:070 (1,3) - avoid hiding the head of (3) slider
[Julie's Normal]
there is unused green line, remove it
01:20:791 - 80791,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
[Hard]
some objects are not snapped, please fix (see AI mod)

sorry for this nazi, so I checked all 5 diffs, the map is nice
that's all good luck

samplefish

1,198 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

samplefish 2014-05-10T03:43:55+00:00

Setsurei wrote:
[General]
no combo colors?
check AI mod, the unicode are not consistent through the diffs fixeded!
[Easy]
00:00:295 (1,2) - DS fixed all DS problems
00:17:723 (3,4) - ^
00:17:723 (3,1) - avoid overlaps like this, may confuse the newbie woops, this was not intentional. haha
00:23:045 (4,1) - DS
00:26:433 (4,1) - ^
01:01:020 (3,1) - ^
[Normal]
00:41:674 (3,4) - stack properly fixed
01:06:070 (1,3) - avoid hiding the head of (3) slider done
[Hard]
some objects are not snapped, please fix (see AI mod) fixed

sorry for this nazi, so I checked all 5 diffs, the map is nice
that's all good luck[/color]

thank you for the mod!! i appreciate it!

Julie

1,416 posts

Joined March 2013

Julie 2014-05-10T03:57:41+00:00

Setsurei wrote:

[Julie's Normal]
there is unused green line, remove it
01:20:791 - 80791,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0

Fixed~ Thanks

http://puu.sh/8GdaI.osu

Lanturn

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3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-05-10T09:46:18+00:00

Setsurei wrote:
[Lanturn's Beginner]
CS 0 is unrankable
Ranking Criteria wrote:
Do not manually edit anything in an .osu file that cannot be changed through the Editor. The only exceptions are .osu-specific storyboards and skin-related options such as SliderBorder and SliderTrackOverride.

This I'm going to ask for a rule change in ranking criteria soon. I don't see a reason why this wouldn't be allowed. The map is made especially for it and changing the CS size to something smaller would be just silly.

Ringating

717 posts

Joined August 2013

Ringating 2014-05-10T20:53:32+00:00

from my bg modding queue.

the aspect ratio on the original was 16:10 ( i think) so i made it 16:9 by cropping a bit from the top and bottom and adding a bit to the right and left. I manually filled in the circles that were cropped, since circles are easy. Here is the new bg:

;:;:;:;:

also the new bg is png because there is a lot of solid color in the image, allowing for the deliciousness of lossless png without the huge file sizes normally associated with png.

samplefish

1,198 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

samplefish 2014-05-10T21:11:01+00:00

Ringating wrote:
from my bg modding queue.

the aspect ratio on the original was 16:10 ( i think) so i made it 16:9 by cropping a bit from the top and bottom and adding a bit to the right and left. I manually filled in the circles that were cropped, since circles are easy. Here is the new bg:
;:;:;:;:

also the new bg is png because there is a lot of solid color in the image, allowing for the deliciousness of lossless png without the huge file sizes normally associated with png.

youre the best, as always

thanks!!

Tari

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Joined July 2012

Tari 2014-05-11T01:44:57+00:00

[Beginner]

LOOOOL this is so easy <3
00:15:787 (2) - Add a whistle to the repeat yo, there a harp sound there
00:19:658 (1) - ^ Another whistle here but at the end of the slider please.
00:27:400 (1) - At the reverse yo add a whistle as before
00:39:013 (1) - The start of the slider sounds better with a drum finish!

How to mod this with only 27 objects >.>

[Easy]

00:04:175 (1) - A whistle at the end of the slider sounds great! basically add some whistles to all the piano sounds.
00:06:110 (3) - Now to the start of the slider add another whistle here also please!
00:08:045 (1) - The end curve after the red point is too curvy! how about you make it less curvy and in that way it makes it blanket better too? http://puu.sh/8HoVl.jpg
00:13:852 (3) - You need to add a whistle to the start of the slider, that piano beat needs to have a sound to it.
00:09:497 (2) - Whistle at the end of the slider? it sounds nice.
00:17:723 (3) - If you plan on adding a whistle to the above, you should add a whistle here too, to make sure you be consistent with the hitsounds used.
00:19:658 (1) - I think you should move the slider end point down a bit more so the blanket can also be improved here as well.
00:21:594 (3) - Whistle added here so you can be consistent 00:13:852 (3) - please add to both , not just one.
00:29:336 (3) - ^
00:24:981 (2) - Whistle here so you can be consistent with 00:09:497 (2) - this time.
00:31:271 (1,2,3) - The whistles when added all of them sound nice, so add one to the end of the slider and to note 2 and 3,
00:35:142 (1) - Add a finish to the start of the slider.
00:35:142 - Volume of kiai needs to be increased to 75% doesn't make sense to make it lower than 00:33:449 - In fact you need to lower the volume of the green line around 00:33:449 - To 50% .
00:54:496 (1) - You should probably center it, so it's a bit more cleaner I suppose and make sure it's nice and symmetrical.
01:02:200 (1) - The end curve can blanket better in this slider, as said previously too , just make the end less curvy and move it down a little bit more here.
01:08:006 (3) - The end of the slider defeinitely needs to be silenced by dropping it to 10% volume, that soft-hitnormal is so loud here that It stands out from the music.

[Normal]

Following the hitsound suggestions I said in easy here too please. but I'll just mention them again orz
00:06:110 (3) - Add a whistle here already explained why in easy.
00:09:981 (3) - Same add a whistle here please.
00:13:852 (3) - ^
00:17:239 (2) - ^
00:27:400 (1) - How about you try to make this more fun by making the rhythm harder? for some reason this feel's awfully similar to easy, and I suggest you try this : http://puu.sh/8HqtC.jpg
00:32:239 (2,3) - Whistles to this whole thing.
00:33:691 (1) - New combo here, vocals are starting again.
00:48:668 (1) - I prefer you curve it upward than downward, the movement is shifting in a spiral and curving it upward will hint at that downward spiral when you return from the reverse in this slider.
01:08:006 (3) - Lower the volume of the slider end please.

[Julie's Normal]

00:04:175 (1,2) - I think it's a bit little overmap here, hmm there no vocals at 2, I don't understand why there needs to be a note added there, just remove it and reverse 1.
00:11:916 (2) - This is like touching the HP bar, a little bit just move it a tiny bit down more so it doesn't touch the hp bar anymore, It's a big problem if it touches.
00:33:691 (1) - LOL I think you missed the drum sampleset for the start of the slider, that clap doesn't sound right there honestly at least for me, sounds pretty bad too to me
01:18:651 (1,2) - Wah, I find it if you used a slider for this part better than if you stacked circles, I can see your trying to make this really easy because were getting to the softer parts but a 3 way stack is >.>
00:21:594 (1) - I don't think you aimed for this slider to be curved like this, how about you try something like this? http://puu.sh/8HrsW.jpg

[Hard]

00:04:175 (1) - I'd prefer you reverse this slider and remove the circle following here, start with something really relaxing first and start to build up, that's pretty much what the song title says.
00:22:320 - I don't think you should really skip any vocals here, the song has really low potential of being hard and interesting and any chance you get to add notes you should really do so it is actually "Hard" that being said you might want to add a slider here and end it at the white tick , try http://puu.sh/8HrOl.jpg
00:33:691 (1) - New combo here?
00:42:642 - I think you need to add a note here, there is a beat here and you need to build up momentum for the next note which is coming up because of its huge strength.
00:44:336 - Same here, try to make the kiai more fun in this diff, by adding a note.
00:56:916 - You need consistency of rhythms and if you plan on adding the note you did for the above there also needs to be a note here also, to remain consistent.
00:59:819 - ^
01:08:006 (1) - Reduce the volume of the end,
Apply hitsounds suggestions I said on easy/normal here too.

Pretty nice map, good job.

Julie

1,416 posts

Joined March 2013

Julie 2014-05-11T02:32:27+00:00

Tari wrote:
[Julie's Normal]

00:04:175 (1,2) - I think it's a bit little overmap here, hmm there no vocals at 2, I don't understand why there needs to be a note added there, just remove it and reverse 1.
00:11:916 (2) - This is like touching the HP bar, a little bit just move it a tiny bit down more so it doesn't touch the hp bar anymore, It's a big problem if it touches.
00:33:691 (1) - LOL I think you missed the drum sampleset for the start of the slider, that clap doesn't sound right there honestly at least for me, sounds pretty bad too to me
01:18:651 (1,2) - Wah, I find it if you used a slider for this part better than if you stacked circles, I can see your trying to make this really easy because were getting to the softer parts but a 3 way stack is >.>
00:21:594 (1) - I don't think you aimed for this slider to be curved like this, how about you try something like this? http://puu.sh/8HrsW.jpg

Fixed all thanks for the mod

http://puu.sh/8HvGz.osu

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-05-11T02:51:31+00:00

Tari

Tari wrote:
[Beginner]

LOOOOL this is so easy <3 See my earlier attempt at this song. IT IS HARD! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1589884
00:15:787 (2) - Add a whistle to the repeat yo, there a harp sound there
00:19:658 (1) - ^ Another whistle here but at the end of the slider please.
00:27:400 (1) - At the reverse yo add a whistle as before Done done and done at 10% volume because the whistle sounds too heavy with 20% volume. This is really important.
00:39:013 (1) - The start of the slider sounds better with a drum finish! eww. It might, but I'd rather keep consistency with hitsounds and use samplefish's ~~horrible~~ amazing hitsounds.
How to mod this with only 27 objects >.> :D I'm so bad.

Thank you~

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Inori~You Raise Me Up~.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 33449
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 70909
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.7

[Metadata]
Title:Inori~You Raise Me Up (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:祈り~You Raise Me Up (TV Size)
Artist:Lena Park
ArtistUnicode:박정현
Creator:samplefish
Version:Lanturn's Beginner
Source:Romeo x Juliet
Tags:lanturn julie
BeatmapID:417503
BeatmapSetID:172662

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:0
CircleSize:0
OverallDifficulty:0
ApproachRate:0
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samplefish

1,198 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

samplefish 2014-05-11T03:00:54+00:00

Tari wrote:
[Easy]

00:04:175 (1) - A whistle at the end of the slider sounds great! basically add some whistles to all the piano sounds.
00:06:110 (3) - Now to the start of the slider add another whistle here also please!
00:08:045 (1) - The end curve after the red point is too curvy! how about you make it less curvy and in that way it makes it blanket better too? http://puu.sh/8HoVl.jpg
00:13:852 (3) - You need to add a whistle to the start of the slider, that piano beat needs to have a sound to it.
00:09:497 (2) - Whistle at the end of the slider? it sounds nice.
00:17:723 (3) - If you plan on adding a whistle to the above, you should add a whistle here too, to make sure you be consistent with the hitsounds used.
00:19:658 (1) - I think you should move the slider end point down a bit more so the blanket can also be improved here as well.
00:21:594 (3) - Whistle added here so you can be consistent 00:13:852 (3) - please add to both , not just one.
00:29:336 (3) - ^
00:24:981 (2) - Whistle here so you can be consistent with 00:09:497 (2) - this time.
00:31:271 (1,2,3) - The whistles when added all of them sound nice, so add one to the end of the slider and to note 2 and 3,
00:35:142 (1) - Add a finish to the start of the slider.
00:35:142 - Volume of kiai needs to be increased to 75% doesn't make sense to make it lower than 00:33:449 - In fact you need to lower the volume of the green line around 00:33:449 - To 50% .
00:54:496 (1) - You should probably center it, so it's a bit more cleaner I suppose and make sure it's nice and symmetrical.
01:02:200 (1) - The end curve can blanket better in this slider, as said previously too , just make the end less curvy and move it down a little bit more here.
01:08:006 (3) - The end of the slider defeinitely needs to be silenced by dropping it to 10% volume, that soft-hitnormal is so loud here that It stands out from the music.
done

[Normal]

Following the hitsound suggestions I said in easy here too please. but I'll just mention them again orz
00:06:110 (3) - Add a whistle here already explained why in easy.
00:09:981 (3) - Same add a whistle here please.
00:13:852 (3) - ^
00:17:239 (2) - ^
00:27:400 (1) - How about you try to make this more fun by making the rhythm harder? for some reason this feel's awfully similar to easy, and I suggest you try this : http://puu.sh/8HqtC.jpg
00:32:239 (2,3) - Whistles to this whole thing.
00:33:691 (1) - New combo here, vocals are starting again.
00:48:668 (1) - I prefer you curve it upward than downward, the movement is shifting in a spiral and curving it upward will hint at that downward spiral when you return from the reverse in this slider.
01:08:006 (3) - Lower the volume of the slider end please.
done

[Hard]

00:04:175 (1) - I'd prefer you reverse this slider and remove the circle following here, start with something really relaxing first and start to build up, that's pretty much what the song title says.
00:22:320 - I don't think you should really skip any vocals here, the song has really low potential of being hard and interesting and any chance you get to add notes you should really do so it is actually "Hard" that being said you might want to add a slider here and end it at the white tick , try http://puu.sh/8HrOl.jpg
00:33:691 (1) - New combo here?
00:42:642 - I think you need to add a note here, there is a beat here and you need to build up momentum for the next note which is coming up because of its huge strength.
00:44:336 - Same here, try to make the kiai more fun in this diff, by adding a note. not feeling anything there, no change
00:56:916 - You need consistency of rhythms and if you plan on adding the note you did for the above there also needs to be a note here also, to remain consistent. ^
00:59:819 - ^ ^
01:08:006 (1) - Reduce the volume of the end,
Apply hitsounds suggestions I said on easy/normal here too.
Pretty nice map, good job.

Thank you so much for the amazing mod! it is very much appreciated!

Ayesha Altugle

3,091 posts

Joined October 2011

Ayesha Altugle 2014-05-11T05:23:54+00:00

[General]
Timing is incosistent, fix it!

[Beginner]

Yay CS0 Still alive! and Tick rate 0.5! because Cs2 and Tick rate 1 is too mainstream now we need AR -2

00:11:916 (1) - Symmetry

[Easy]
00:09:497 (2) - Remove whistle on head

[Normal]
00:15:787 (1) - whistle on both head and tail
00:23:529 (1) - whistle on head
00:24:981 (2) - whistle on tail

[Julie's normal]
The hitsound pattern especially on kiai time is incorrect, please make it the same as others

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

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Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-05-11T09:35:26+00:00

vahn10 wrote:
[General]
Timing is incosistent, fix it!

[Beginner]

Yay CS0 Still alive! and Tick rate 0.5! because Cs2 and Tick rate 1 is too mainstream now we need AR -2

00:11:916 (1) - Symmetry Howwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ;_; I think all I had to do was move the first red left one? I'm so bad at this game.

RIP forever me. SAMPY. move the first red left one if you get bored.

samplefish

1,198 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

samplefish 2014-05-11T21:34:33+00:00

vahn10 wrote:
[General]
Timing is incosistent, fix it! fix coming soon lol

[Easy]
00:09:497 (2) - Remove whistle on head nop

[Normal]
00:15:787 (1) - whistle on both head and tail done done and done
00:23:529 (1) - whistle on head
00:24:981 (2) - whistle on tail

thank you for the mod!!

Last edited by samplefish 2014-05-13T06:08:10+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Lanturn

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Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-05-11T21:36:55+00:00

Times a ticking

Julie

1,416 posts

Joined March 2013

Julie 2014-05-11T23:52:41+00:00

vahn10 wrote:
[Julie's normal]
The hitsound pattern especially on kiai time is incorrect, please make it the same as others

Fixed

!!
Thanks for pointing that out :3
http://puu.sh/8IM7a.osu

Narcissu

1,764 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2014-05-13T08:44:37+00:00

[general]
i think you need some custom colours

Combo1 : 255,128,192
Combo2 : 128,128,192
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 128,128,255

you volume is too low imo , maybe player can't get anything return when she click , i suggest you volume more than 30% unless slider tail & spinner

aimod say you Beginner & Easy 's uninherited timing points conflict with other diff.

[Beginner]

aimod say you have two objects unsnaped

your map have some extra timming , plz delete it to reduce file size

[easy]

i suggest your DS use 1.2 or 1.3 instead 1.1，object too closed imo

00:00:295 (1) - use complex slider if the slider too long , and use simple slider if the slider not long ↓↓↓

SPOILER

00:13:852 (3) - the slider arc too big for common slider

00:17:723 (3,4,1) - To separate them ， it's too crowded to read ↓↓↓

SPOILER

00:44:820 (3,4,5) - it's too difficult in Easy diff ， you can merge 00:44:820 (3,4) - ，use a slider

00:48:668 (1) - short slider don't need bend

01:22:522 (3) - ↓↓↓

SPOILER

i'm just pointing out some points , you can change more in your map √

[normal]

DS less than 1.0 is unreasonable imo , why player move mouse in the object slower than in slider ?

00:46:755 (1,2,1,2,3) - it's too confuse to read in normal

01:08:006 (3) - use complex slider if the slider too long ....

01:20:829 - red timing should just the same other diff

why your Normal diff better than your Easy ？

01:22:522 (1) - ↓↓↓

SPOILER

[Julie's Normal]

i suggest your DS use 1.2 instead 1.0，object too closed imo

00:33:691 (1,2) - i suggest you never overlap in Normal diff

00:35:142 (2,3) - jump ?

01:12:845 (1) - try some different slider , consult Hard diff

good luck ><

samplefish

1,198 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

samplefish 2014-05-13T09:15:17+00:00

Narcissu wrote:
[general]
i think you need some custom colours yes yes yes! love it, thank you!

Combo1 : 255,128,192
Combo2 : 128,128,192
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 128,128,255

you volume is too low imo , maybe player can't get anything return when she click , i suggest you volume more than 30% unless slider tail & spinner i think volume is ok

aimod say you Beginner & Easy 's uninherited timing points conflict with other diff. new timing soon!

[easy]

i suggest your DS use 1.2 or 1.3 instead 1.1，object too closed imo 1.1 is good

00:00:295 (1) - use complex slider if the slider too long , and use simple slider if the slider not long ↓↓↓ no change

SPOILER

00:13:852 (3) - the slider arc too big for common slider ?

00:17:723 (3,4,1) - To separate them ， it's too crowded to read ↓↓↓ i think its okay.

SPOILER

00:44:820 (3,4,5) - it's too difficult in Easy diff ， you can merge 00:44:820 (3,4) - ，use a slider changed

00:48:668 (1) - short slider don't need bend i want it in a circle

01:22:522 (3) - ↓↓↓ i will try to add this later!! very nice

SPOILER

i'm just pointing out some points , you can change more in your map √

[normal]

DS less than 1.0 is unreasonable imo , why player move mouse in the object slower than in slider ? many normals do this, i think it plays and looks very nice. 1.0+ distance looks too far and disconnected, not have good blankets with big distance snap

00:46:755 (1,2,1,2,3) - it's too confuse to read in normal i think its ok

01:08:006 (3) - use complex slider if the slider too long .... ill try something new soon

01:20:829 - red timing should just the same other diff new timing coming soon!

why your Normal diff better than your Easy ？uh.. thank you?

01:22:522 (1) - ↓↓↓ ill try to makesomething like this

SPOILER

good luck ><

thank you very much for the mod!

Mortem

705 posts

Joined July 2013

Mortem 2014-05-14T16:53:29+00:00

Hi.
As requested.

Lanturn's Beginner:
I know it's beginner diff, but change CS to at least +1.
00:51:593 - Put circle here.
00:59:335 - same ^^.

Normal:
00:23:529 (1) - Improve the design of the slider.
00:27:400 (1) - Same ^^.
01:08:006 (3) - THIS!! It's like you've been new at mapping. Make shorter slider, and set Slider Velocity to 0.50 for ex.

Julie's Normal:
00:00:295 (1,2,3) - My ears gonna blow. Set here volume at 5-10% not 20%.
00:36:594 (3) - Put it little bit closer to 00:35:142 (2) - For normal diff, it's a big jump.
01:06:070 (2) - Improve slider design. For ex. http://puu.sh/8M7DH.jpg.
01:12:845 (1) - Make a shorter slider that ends in 01:13:812 (and make it better than this one).

Hard:
00:24:981 (2,3) - Little closer to each other.
00:31:271 (1) - Improve slider design. For ex. http://puu.sh/8M7We.jpg
00:32:723 (2,3) - Little closer to each other.

Hope that'll helps
If not, then sorry.
Good Luck!

samplefish

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Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

samplefish 2014-05-14T17:18:19+00:00

Pjecoo wrote:
Hi.
As requested.

Normal:
00:23:529 (1) - Improve the design of the slider. no change
00:27:400 (1) - Same ^^. no change
01:08:006 (3) - THIS!! It's like you've been new at mapping. Make shorter slider, and set Slider Velocity to 0.50 for ex. i would, but i dont want that big of a slider to have a velocity change, the player may not be able to see or feel the big change and mess up there. i think keeping the same velocity is good. i change it at the last slider because it is short and its hard to mess up on.

Hard:
00:24:981 (2,3) - Little closer to each other. i think theyre fine
00:31:271 (1) - Improve slider design. For ex. no changehttp://puu.sh/8M7We.jpg
00:32:723 (2,3) - Little closer to each other.no change

Hope that'll helps
If not, then sorry.
Good Luck!

Thank you for the mod!!

Julie

1,416 posts

Joined March 2013

Julie 2014-05-14T21:03:11+00:00

Narcissu wrote:
[Julie's Normal]

i suggest your DS use 1.2 instead 1.0，object too closed imo

00:33:691 (1,2) - i suggest you never overlap in Normal diff Honnestly, I never put that there, I don't know what happen to my difficulty, been like twice I see it there, I was like wdf, reput at the original place, and give new update...don't know why is still there haha...D: Sowwy, but will be a great tip if I really did this :3!!

00:35:142 (2,3) - jump ? ^

01:12:845 (1) - try some different slider , consult Hard diff I'll see about this one :3

good luck ><

Pjecoo wrote:
Julie's Normal:
00:00:295 (1,2,3) - My ears gonna blow. Set here volume at 5-10% not 20%. Fixed
00:36:594 (3) - Put it little bit closer to 00:35:142 (2) - For normal diff, it's a big jump. Sorry my version didn't get update...don't know how it end up there
01:06:070 (2) - Improve slider design. For ex. http://puu.sh/8M7DH.jpg. Nop trying to do a blanket with next note x,x
01:12:845 (1) - Make a shorter slider that ends in 01:13:812 (and make it better than this one). Fixed

samplefish don't forget to update mine, been a while I don't how 00:35:142 (2) this part end up there >,<!! Julie noob will never do jumps on normal~ :3!!

Here ya go http://puu.sh/8Mrmx.osu don't forget <3!!

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Arlecchino 2014-05-15T02:42:58+00:00

Hello Again samplefish...
here from my Queue hope this helped..
~~Let's try to full mod..~~ ara~ you have 2 normal diff... i just mod 1 diff with same Difficulty
i'll choose one of them...

[General]
It's (TV Size) song Right.. so add Ed or Op in Tag

[Laturn's Beginner]
Clean I Guess
[Easy]
01:12:845 (4)- x:88 y:56 for remove distance conflik in Aimod

[Normal]
Open Aimod check distance snap
01:04:861 (4)- x:60 y:256 same like easy... to remove distance conflik in Aimod
01:12:845 (4) - x:476 y:344 ^^
I'm just suggest you to place the note at there..
but is up to you to place it in anywhere but you must remove distance snap conflik in Aimod for Easy and Normal Diff

[Julie's Normal]
I just mod 1 diff Normal.. and i choose Normal diff by the owner
i'm not mod 2 diff with same Difficulty .. you sleepy now..

[Hard]
00:34:416 (3) - check the distance.. (3) is to far than (1) to (2) i suggest to use 1.2x distance snap
just it for hard i think.. or check Aimod.. and try to remove unuseless timming point

[Risen]
Check Aimod some note isn't snapped
00:04:900 (2) - keep 2.0x disnap
00:10:949 (3) - whistle in head ?
01:03:167 (3) - Ctrl + g
Spiner start at 01:23:006 make spacing of (2) and Spiner

I think just it ... i hope this helped...
Nice song~! btw.. really enjoy it..
sorry for my bad mod.. wrote Fixed,changed,or added..
so i can learning about my modding...

samplefish

1,198 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

samplefish 2014-05-15T03:20:03+00:00

Marinska wrote:
Hello Again samplefish...
here from my Queue hope this helped..
~~Let's try to full mod..~~ ara~ you have 2 normal diff... i just mod 1 diff with same Difficulty
i'll choose one of them...

[General]
It's (TV Size) song Right.. so add Ed or Op in Tag done, thanks!

[Easy]
01:12:845 (4)- x:88 y:56 for remove distance conflik in Aimod no change

[Normal]
Open Aimod check distance snap
01:04:861 (4)- x:60 y:256 same like easy... to remove distance conflik in Aimod fixed
01:12:845 (4) - x:476 y:344 ^^ no change
I'm just suggest you to place the note at there.. not sure where you mean
but is up to you to place it in anywhere but you must remove distance snap conflik in Aimod for Easy and Normal Diff fixed one, rest are fine

[Hard]
00:34:416 (3) - check the distance.. (3) is to far than (1) to (2) i suggest to use 1.2x distance snap changed
just it for hard i think.. or check Aimod.. and try to remove unuseless timming point

I think just it ... i hope this helped...
Nice song~! btw.. really enjoy it..
sorry for my bad mod.. wrote Fixed,changed,or added..
so i can learning about my modding...

thank you for the mod!

ps, you didnt give me feedback on my mod on your plaza map, you only quoted it and said "changed some"

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-05-15T03:55:03+00:00

Pjecoo wrote:
Hi.
As requested.

Lanturn's Beginner:
I know it's beginner diff, but change CS to at least +1. I'm worried new players will miss if the circle size is any smaller.
00:51:593 - Put circle here. No vocals really playing at this time, so no point to it.
00:59:335 - same ^^. ^

thanks.

Holy craparoni sample my diff is off or something

. What did you do to the other diffs but didn't change in mine? 0_o

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Arlecchino 2014-05-15T04:07:46+00:00

samplefish wrote:
ps, you didnt give me feedback on my mod on your plaza map, you only quoted it and said "changed some"

so much mod there so i can't say it Fixed,or changed.. sorry for that... m(_ _ )m
never try again ~! `3`

F D Flourite

811 posts

Joined March 2013

F D Flourite 2014-05-15T04:18:26+00:00

From my Modding Queue~

Well, I'm sorry that I finished some diffs' mods several days ago. Maybe you've got a new one but I didn't check my mods anymore~

And I didn't mod the Risen diff because you added it after your post in my queue so I regard it as WIP. Sorry.

Non-emphasis -- something I think is able to be better in my own opinion.
Bold-emphasis -- something I highly recommend to be fixed.
Red-emphasis -- Unrankable issue or something serious like that.

P.S.

I'm sorry that I may be honest to point out the things I don't like.
All "the beginning of a section" that I mentioned means the long-white-line/first-white-line.

[General]

Plz make the WidescreenStoryboard consistent in all diffs. You didn't turn it on in Easy but did it in other diffs. I suggest you turn everyone off because you have no SB.
Ranking Criteria wrote:
Uninherited timing sections must be the same in every difficulty.
Therefore, even though you got the timing from kpy's map, the ranking criteria changed. You must fix it.
Besides, there are so many inherited time points unsnapped...

[Lanturn]

I'm also wondering about the CS problem. You should ask BATs for sure message.
Well, I think a louder sound is needed for beginners, especially the part out of Kiai time, so that they can find the rhythm more easily with it. Maybe about 5%~10% volume up?
00:27:400 (1) - All right here. But it make no sense for the beginners. Maybe they will think it is common in all maps.
00:43:852 - You know how to add the green line to change the hitsound. So I'm wondering whether you know how to use the green line to change the hitsound of slidertick. If the slidertick here sounds the same as Clap, it will be great!
00:47:723 - 00:49:635 - ^ I strongly recommend to add it at these 2 places because it is really empty!
00:57:400 - ^ A heavy sound here in the music.
01:01:260 - ^
01:03:167 - ^
00:56:432 (3) - Move the white point in the middle to x|104 y|216, and the point at the tail to x|132 y|292.

[Easy]

Also a bit volume up will be fine.
00:09:497 (2) - I don't think there need 2 whistle here. It's better to remove the latter one imo.
00:24:981 (2) - ^
00:17:723 (3) - Move the red point to x|425 y|242 for better blanket. But you have to move the following ones to keep the distance consistent. It depends on you.
00:23:045 (4) - It is ok to make it straight since it is ugly in curve style.
00:26:433 (4) - Add a whistle on the head? Since the voice here is really loud.
00:29:336 (3) - It will be really better if you remove the tail whistle imo.
00:37:078 (3) - Add a finish on the head will be really better.
00:44:820 (3,1) - ^ But pay attention you need to remove the green lines here.00:44:699 - 00:44:941 - (It is not snapped, but you know which two I'm saying)
00:52:561 (3) - ^
00:54:496 (1) - ^ Both head and tail. Since they are all on the beginning of a timing section.
01:02:200 (1) - ^
01:04:135 (3) - ^
01:08:006 (3) - ^
00:42:884 (1) - Move the tail point to x|332 y|239
00:49:635 (3) - Add whistle on the head.
01:00:300 (2) - ^
00:49:635 (3) - Move the white point in the middle to x|95 y|282, and the point at the tail to x|117 y|301.
Ranking Criteria wrote:
Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible.
01:08:006 (3) - The tail's silence is kinda unrankable! You must fix it or ask BATs to make sure of it.
After all, you got the hitsound from kpy. So I think you should make full use of them since they are really good!

[Normal]

00:09:981 (3) - The same as EZ. Don't have to whistle here even though it is on the beginning of a section. All the hitsounds are for better listening but not for the so-called consistent imo.
00:17:239 (2) - Well, I don't like the double whistle here either. BUT I think 00:24:981 (2) - is ok, since the piano here is in a high pitch.
00:32:239 (2) - ^
00:35:142 (1) - You'd better use a heavier Finish hitsound here. It is a very stressed sound.
Well, add Finish on most of the beginning of a section in Kiai time will improve your hitsound a lot, just as I've mentioned in EZ.
00:44:578 (2,3,4,5) - I don't suggest you use pattern like this. Because players will think they share the same feeling of the song. But even though the rhythm here is the same, the feeling is totally different.
If you don't know what I'm talking about, plz click this
00:44:578 (2,3) - They share a whole part "Kimi e".
00:45:787 (4) - This is used for make the rhythm better but cannot be found in vocal.
00:46:029 (5) - This is a start of a new part.
So I think 00:44:578 (2,3) - and 00:45:787 (4,5) - have totally different feelings since 00:45:787 (4,5) - is not a complete part.
00:49:635 (3) - I highly suggest you add a hitsound on the head. Because the tone of the vocal is high. Emphasizing it DOES make sense. However, I don't know which hitsound should be chosen because no one in your hitsounds fit this IMO.
01:08:006 (3) - The same as EZ.

[Julie]

The same Finish problem. I guess you should add more Finish hitsound on the beginning of sections. 00:42:884 (2) - for example.
00:04:175 (1) - I really DO NOT suggest you do that. It will mislead many players!
00:09:981 (3) - The same as EZ & NM.
00:11:916 (2) - Why did you add it on the tail?
00:17:239 (1) - Set NC here is not a good idea. Not a beginning of a section nor a beginning of a new part of vocal.
01:03:651 (1) - ^
00:27:884 (2) - Remove whistle here will be better.
00:33:691 (1,2) - Ugly patterns with overlap... A not well-designed overlap is usually unpopular. Don't try it.
00:35:142 (2,3) - So you're training players' reading skills by making much farther distance? That's not a good idea!
00:39:013 (1,3) - Not a good idea to add whistle here. Sounds really weird.
00:40:949 (1) - What's wrong with it? Why is it a soft-clap instead of a finish? Somehow Awful...
00:58:125 (1) - ^
00:41:916 (1) - 2 consecutive claps are not a good idea at all! Remove the latter one, plz.
00:44:820 (2) - ^ I'm sorry to say that this clap is really redundant.
00:48:207 (1) - A bad clap. You really needn't add so many claps to stress the sounds that are not stressed in the music. It is somehow meaningless in Normal Diff. Even in Insane/Ex diffs, this work is hard to do either.
00:48:668 (2) - Not a good finish at the tail. Move it to the head of 00:50:626 (1) - .
00:57:884 (3,4,5,6) - Not a good rhythm and NC. The real stressed sound is at 00:58:367 - . So you'd better make some changes on 00:58:125 (4) - to make 00:58:125 (4) - a single circle or a beginning of a slider for better rhythm and NC controlling.
01:01:740 (1) - Remove NC.
01:02:200 (5) - Move the fourth point from the head x|389 y|104, and make the tail point to x|416 y|179.Also add a clap at tail.
01:06:070 (2) - Add a clap at tail.
01:08:006 (1) - Too close from the previous one.
01:20:829 (1) - ^ because you slow down the BPM. But I highly suggest you keep the distance consistent.
Overall - Umm, you can work better on patterns such as blankets or symmetrical things but not just make little bit weird long sliders. Besides, you'd better do more work on the hitsound. It seems that you are not so good at it.

[Hard]

Almost the same hitsound opinion in EZ and NM, so I'm not gonna mention it again.
00:33:933 (2,3,4) - Not a good idea to make them straight because it seems not beautiful with 00:33:691 (1) - too close to 00:34:416 (3) - . Try to make 00:34:416 (3) - more downward will be better. Also for better flow.
00:42:642 (5) - ^ Upward.
00:41:674 (3,1) - A little bit touched with each other. Try to seperate them.
00:49:635 (4,5,6,7,8) - A weird rhythm? At least for me.

[At last]
At least you did a great job in patterns and most of the rhythms~

Good luck~

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-05-15T05:04:36+00:00

FD

F D Flourite wrote:
[Lanturn]
I'm also wondering about the CS problem. You should ask BATs for sure message. In due time. I don't really see why people would have a problem with it. The notes are set so they correctly play nice for this CS.
Well, I think a louder sound is needed for beginners, especially the part out of Kiai time, so that they can find the rhythm more easily with it. Maybe about 5%~10% volume up? I don't feel this is necessary but I'll keep my eyes out for more volume suggestions like these.
00:27:400 (1) - All right here. But it make no sense for the beginners. Maybe they will think it is common in all maps. I don't think new players would think this way. Considering there are more than enough sliders are the beginning to help prevent any confusion.
00:43:852 - You know how to add the green line to change the hitsound. So I'm wondering whether you know how to use the green line to change the hitsound of slidertick. If the slidertick here sounds the same as Clap, it will be great! Basically this will cover all below, but I don't plan on using slider ticks to create a clap effect. The main reason is that this is a difficulty made especially for new players to the game. Hearing an extra clap when not expected will cause panic and confusion, so I'm skipping this.
00:47:723 - 00:49:635 - ^ I strongly recommend to add it at these 2 places because it is really empty!
00:57:400 - ^ A heavy sound here in the music.
01:01:260 - ^
01:03:167 - ^
00:56:432 (3) - Move the white point in the middle to x|104 y|216, and the point at the tail to x|132 y|292. Fixed this. used a few different coordinates though to get the blanket set correctly.

Thanks for the mod.

I have no idea anymore. I need that timing mod so I can fix all the timing issues.

SPOILER

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 33449
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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TitleUnicode:祈り~You Raise Me Up (TV Size)
Artist:Lena Park
ArtistUnicode:박정현
Creator:samplefish
Version:Lanturn's Beginner
Source:Romeo x Juliet
Tags:lanturn julie tari op
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BeatmapSetID:172662

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:0
OverallDifficulty:0
ApproachRate:0
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samplefish

1,198 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

samplefish 2014-05-15T06:25:13+00:00

F D Flourite wrote:
From my Modding Queue~

Well, I'm sorry that I finished some diffs' mods several days ago. Maybe you've got a new one but I didn't check my mods anymore~
And I didn't mod the Risen diff because you added it after your post in my queue so I regard it as WIP. Sorry.

Non-emphasis -- something I think is able to be better in my own opinion.
Bold-emphasis -- something I highly recommend to be fixed.
Red-emphasis -- Unrankable issue or something serious like that.

P.S.
I'm sorry that I may be honest to point out the things I don't like.
All "the beginning of a section" that I mentioned means the long-white-line/first-white-line.
[General]
Plz make the WidescreenStoryboard consistent in all diffs. You didn't turn it on in Easy but did it in other diffs. I suggest you turn everyone off because you have no SB. fixed
Ranking Criteria wrote:
Uninherited timing sections must be the same in every difficulty.
Therefore, even though you got the timing from kpy's map, the ranking criteria changed. You must fix it. working to fix, expecting new timing soon!
Besides, there are so many inherited time points unsnapped...

[Easy]
Also a bit volume up will be fine. i think its ok
00:09:497 (2) - I don't think there need 2 whistle here. It's better to remove the latter one imo. no change
00:24:981 (2) - ^ ^
00:17:723 (3) - Move the red point to x|425 y|242 for better blanket. But you have to move the following ones to keep the distance consistent. It depends on you. changed
00:23:045 (4) - It is ok to make it straight since it is ugly in curve style. done
00:26:433 (4) - Add a whistle on the head? Since the voice here is really loud. done
00:29:336 (3) - It will be really better if you remove the tail whistle imo. yes
00:37:078 (3) - Add a finish on the head will be really better. done.
00:44:820 (3,1) - ^ But pay attention you need to remove the green lines here.00:44:699 - 00:44:941 - (It is not snapped, but you know which two I'm saying) fixed all
00:52:561 (3) - ^
00:54:496 (1) - ^ Both head and tail. Since they are all on the beginning of a timing section. not sure what you mean, but added finishes to them. hopefully thats what you meant
01:02:200 (1) - ^
01:04:135 (3) - ^
01:08:006 (3) - ^
00:42:884 (1) - Move the tail point to x|332 y|239 done
00:49:635 (3) - Add whistle on the head. done
01:00:300 (2) - ^
00:49:635 (3) - Move the white point in the middle to x|95 y|282, and the point at the tail to x|117 y|301. looks funky, are these the right points?
Ranking Criteria wrote:
Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible.
01:08:006 (3) - The tail's silence is kinda unrankable! You must fix it or ask BATs to make sure of it. unsilenced
After all, you got the hitsound from kpy. So I think you should make full use of them since they are really good!
[Normal]
00:09:981 (3) - The same as EZ. Don't have to whistle here even though it is on the beginning of a section. All the hitsounds are for better listening but not for the so-called consistent imo. i like to have them with the piano.
00:17:239 (2) - Well, I don't like the double whistle here either. BUT I think 00:24:981 (2) - is ok, since the piano here is in a high pitch. i think theyre both ok
00:32:239 (2) - ^ ^
00:35:142 (1) - You'd better use a heavier Finish hitsound here. It is a very stressed sound. [/color]
Well, add Finish on most of the beginning of a section in Kiai time will improve your hitsound a lot, just as I've mentioned in EZ. added some.
00:44:578 (2,3,4,5) - I don't suggest you use pattern like this. Because players will think they share the same feeling of the song. But even though the rhythm here is the same, the feeling is totally different. fixed, very nice point.
If you don't know what I'm talking about, plz click this
00:44:578 (2,3) - They share a whole part "Kimi e".
00:45:787 (4) - This is used for make the rhythm better but cannot be found in vocal.
00:46:029 (5) - This is a start of a new part.
So I think 00:44:578 (2,3) - and 00:45:787 (4,5) - have totally different feelings since 00:45:787 (4,5) - is not a complete part.
00:49:635 (3) - I highly suggest you add a hitsound on the head. Because the tone of the vocal is high. Emphasizing it DOES make sense. However, I don't know which hitsound should be chosen because no one in your hitsounds fit this IMO. i hope a whistle will do.
01:08:006 (3) - The same as EZ. fixed
[Hard]
Almost the same hitsound opinion in EZ and NM, so I'm not gonna mention it again. changed a few.
00:33:933 (2,3,4) - Not a good idea to make them straight because it seems not beautiful with 00:33:691 (1) - too close to 00:34:416 (3) - . Try to make 00:34:416 (3) - more downward will be better. Also for better flow. changed it up
00:42:642 (5) - ^ Upward. changed
00:41:674 (3,1) - A little bit touched with each other. Try to seperate them. oky
00:49:635 (4,5,6,7,8) - A weird rhythm? At least for me. mm no change
[At last]
At least you did a great job in patterns and most of the rhythms~

Good luck~

really good mod, thank you so much!! i really appreciate this!

Samah

423 posts

Joined May 2010

Samah 2014-05-15T13:28:18+00:00

From queue:

[Lanturn's Beginner]
HOLY MASSIVE HITCIRCLES BATMAN.
I.... I don't even. <_<
They're so big that turning on Easy mod doesn't affect the size.
SV 0.40 with distance snap 1.5x. that's crazy! XD
Anyway...
00:02:246 (2,1) - Move these apart a little bit.
01:05:103 (2,1) - Make this blanket nicer. It's a bit sharp.

[Easy]
00:04:175 (1) - Move this up a tiny bit. They overlap during play.

[Normal]
01:05:103 (5,1) - Could you make this blanket smoother? Maybe like this: http://puu.sh/8NbAA.jpg
I know it doesn't look much different... XD

136,356,66070,6,0,B|208:382|248:332|248:332|311:375|359:334,1,220,4|8,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:

[Julie's Normal]
00:06:110 (2,1) - Too close together! D: Move (3) and (1) like this, then fix spacing for the rest of the combo: http://puu.sh/8NcfY.jpg

[Hard]
00:24:981 (2) - Move like this: http://puu.sh/8Ncxp.jpg
00:26:191 (4) - Add NC.
00:27:400 (1) - Remove NC.
00:32:723 (2) - Move like this: http://puu.sh/8NcBu.jpg
00:33:933 (2) - Fix spacing like this: http://puu.sh/8NcDe.jpg
00:36:836 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - If you change distance spacing to 1.1x and make the blanketing nice: http://puu.sh/8NcPc.jpg
This code also moves (1,2) of the next combo to stack properly with slider (5).

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312,216,41191,1,8,0:0:0:0:

00:42:400 (4,5) - Move these closer to the slider: http://puu.sh/8NcVx.jpg
01:01:260 (6) - Nicer blanket:

344,243,61260,2,0,P|309:302|345:366,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Risen]
This song is too slow-paced for AR8 I think. Try dropping to AR7?
00:40:949 (5,1) - Move these either closer together, or farther apart. At the moment it's a very strange half-jump.
00:42:400 (4,5,1) - A jump doesn't fit the music at this point. I think these should have equal spacing.
00:42:884 (1,2,3) - ^
00:46:755 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this a nicer shape. The star is a bit squished at the moment. This is nicer: http://puu.sh/8Ndrl.jpg

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00:49:151 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - It think it's a bad idea to have a stream here due to the red timing points. Maybe move the stream to a different bar?
01:06:796 (2,3,4,5,6) - This looks nicer: http://puu.sh/8NdAp.jpg

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272,176,67522,1,8,3:0:0:0:
176,304,67764,1,8,3:0:0:0:

01:10:909 (1,2) - Blanket this better?

Lovely song, great maps.

Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2014-05-15T16:34:32+00:00

Ahh so many mods

samplefish

1,198 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

samplefish 2014-05-15T20:07:22+00:00

Samah wrote:
From queue:

[Easy]
00:04:175 (1) - Move this up a tiny bit. They overlap during play. fixed

[Normal]
01:05:103 (5,1) - Could you make this blanket smoother? Maybe like this: http://puu.sh/8NbAA.jpg i changed it myself, thanks for pointing it out!!
I know it doesn't look much different... XD
136,356,66070,6,0,B|208:382|248:332|248:332|311:375|359:334,1,220,4|8,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
[Hard]
00:24:981 (2) - Move like this: http://puu.sh/8Ncxp.jpg no change
00:26:191 (4) - Add NC. no change
00:27:400 (1) - Remove NC. ^
00:32:723 (2) - Move like this: http://puu.sh/8NcBu.jpg i want the 1.3 spacing on those three notes
00:33:933 (2) - Fix spacing like this: http://puu.sh/8NcDe.jpg changed, and thank you very much for the code!
00:36:836 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - If you change distance spacing to 1.1x and make the blanketing nice: http://puu.sh/8NcPc.jpg
This code also moves (1,2) of the next combo to stack properly with slider (5).
433,93,36836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,144,37078,2,0,B|464:168|436:168|436:168|424:224|371:231,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,156,37804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,216,38045,2,0,P|339:284|424:292,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,227,38771,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,216,39013,6,0,B|264:224|240:260|240:260|176:164|60:204,2,280,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,216,41191,1,8,0:0:0:0:
00:42:400 (4,5) - Move these closer to the slider: http://puu.sh/8NcVx.jpg there were kind of originally like that, haha. i like them better like this
01:01:260 (6) - Nicer blanket: fixed, thank you for the code once again!
344,243,61260,2,0,P|309:302|345:366,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Lovely song, great maps.

thank you for the great mod! i really appreciate the time you spent on it (you made the codes on top of the suggestions too!)

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-05-15T21:08:24+00:00

Samah wrote:
From queue:

[Lanturn's Beginner]
HOLY MASSIVE HITCIRCLES BATMAN.
I.... I don't even. <_<
They're so big that turning on Easy mod doesn't affect the size. :3 Totally is a beginner difficulty.. no?
SV 0.40 with distance snap 1.5x. that's crazy! XD
Anyway...
00:02:246 (2,1) - Move these apart a little bit. I changed this pattern around. I didn't like the tail end of (2)
01:05:103 (2,1) - Make this blanket nicer. It's a bit sharp. Fixed thanks.

Lanturn's Beginner <3 (F you sampy)

Lanturn's Beginner

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Creator:samplefish
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Kihhou

1,040 posts

Joined March 2013

Kihhou 2014-05-16T00:41:16+00:00

Hihi NM from queue-

[General]

00:32:239 - this part is off. the hitcircles hit after the piano might need to change bpm or offset for this small section

[Easy]

this feels the same as your Normal diff in terms of how difficult it is o3o

[Julie's Normal]

00:33:691 (1) - i would suggest changing this into a 1-reverse slider so that it separates itself from the next big vocal section at 00:35:142 (2). it also follows the vocals and drums nicely!
00:35:142 (2) - add NC for a new section, especially kiai time section
01:07:038 - youre skipping a pretty big drum section here D: maybe shorten slider and add a 1-reverse slider during the drums? like so~
--
01:12:845 (1) - the head of the slider has the biggest impact! the tail is pretty weak. same with the vocals. the vocal at 01:13:812 - is a lot stronger than the one at 01:12:845 - . to match up strong with strong, i suggest doing something like this! it also captures the vocals in the middle at 01:13:329 - . note that in my suggested example, i took out the hitcircle at 01:14:780 -
--

[Risen]

00:06:110 (1) - ctrl g this slider would make it flow better from the previous slider
00:40:949 (5) - add NC to start NC on the large white tick & at guitar section in music
00:41:191 (1) - remove NC
01:04:135 (5) - add ^ except for drum
01:04:377 (1) - remove^
01:22:280 (2,1) - your spinner is ontop of your slider o_o can you do that? is that rankable? im not sure lol
--

couldnt find anything wrong with the diffs i didnt list~
Hope this helped~
Good luck!

samplefish

1,198 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

samplefish 2014-05-16T01:21:40+00:00

Kihhou wrote:
Hihi NM from queue-

[General]
00:32:239 - this part is off. the hitcircles hit after the piano might need to change bpm or offset for this small section
hoping to get a new timing thing soon, ;_;

[Easy]
this feels the same as your Normal diff in terms of how difficult it is o3o
:D

couldnt find anything wrong with the diffs i didnt list~
Hope this helped~
Good luck!

thanks for the mod!

Julie

1,416 posts

Joined March 2013

Julie 2014-05-16T01:45:02+00:00

F D Flourite wrote:
[Julie]
The same Finish problem. I guess you should add more Finish hitsound on the beginning of sections. 00:42:884 (2) - for example.
00:04:175 (1) - I really DO NOT suggest you do that. It will mislead many players!
00:09:981 (3) - The same as EZ & NM. I'll consider it >,<
00:11:916 (2) - Why did you add it on the tail?
00:17:239 (1) - Set NC here is not a good idea. Not a beginning of a section nor a beginning of a new part of vocal.
01:03:651 (1) - ^ Keeping this >,<
00:27:884 (2) - Remove whistle here will be better.
00:33:691 (1,2) - Ugly patterns with overlap... A not well-designed overlap is usually unpopular. Don't try it. You got the old version for some reason, and it was a mistake, I don't know how that happen
00:35:142 (2,3) - So you're training players' reading skills by making much farther distance? That's not a good idea! ^ reason above, ofc I'll never do such thing on normal >,<!!
00:39:013 (1,3) - Not a good idea to add whistle here. Sounds really weird.
00:40:949 (1) - What's wrong with it? Why is it a soft-clap instead of a finish? Somehow Awful...
00:58:125 (1) - ^
00:41:916 (1) - 2 consecutive claps are not a good idea at all! Remove the latter one, plz.
00:44:820 (2) - ^ I'm sorry to say that this clap is really redundant.
00:48:207 (1) - A bad clap. You really needn't add so many claps to stress the sounds that are not stressed in the music. It is somehow meaningless in Normal Diff. Even in Insane/Ex diffs, this work is hard to do either.
00:48:668 (2) - Not a good finish at the tail. Move it to the head of 00:50:626 (1) - .
00:57:884 (3,4,5,6) - Not a good rhythm and NC. The real stressed sound is at 00:58:367 - . So you'd better make some changes on 00:58:125 (4) - to make 00:58:125 (4) - a single circle or a beginning of a slider for better rhythm and NC controlling.
01:01:740 (1) - Remove NC.
01:02:200 (5) - Move the fourth point from the head x|389 y|104, and make the tail point to x|416 y|179.Also add a clap at tail.
01:06:070 (2) - Add a clap at tail.
01:08:006 (1) - Too close from the previous one.
01:20:829 (1) - ^ because you slow down the BPM. But I highly suggest you keep the distance consistent.
Overall - Umm, you can work better on patterns such as blankets or symmetrical things but not just make little bit weird long sliders. Besides, you'd better do more work on the hitsound. It seems that you are not so good at it. Hurt, but truth :3! I'm still a beginner, and I'm really happy samplefish gave me a chance, can't wait for summer, so I can train even more on it, I'm learning each day more and more stuff, so I'll keep those tips

Fixed all, thanks for the mod ^^

Samah wrote:
[Julie's Normal]
00:06:110 (2,1) - Too close together! D: Move (3) and (1) like this, then fix spacing for the rest of the combo: http://puu.sh/8NcfY.jpg

Ohh I fixed this one while doing last mod, this part was always fishy for me so deleted (3) and made a better blanket with (1)
Nice catch ;D

http://puu.sh/8O0wD.osu

deejaydray

166 posts

Joined October 2013

deejaydray 2014-05-16T20:52:31+00:00

Hey there, NM from my queue

You told me to choose which difficulties I want to mod, so here it is:

HARD:

First of all, this HARD difficulty seems a little bit too easy in my opinion, only 3 stars, a low SV and a quite low OD. Before I start, I suggest the following (it's up to you to change them or not):

change Overall Difficulty (OD) from 5 to 6

change Slider Velocity from 1.40 to 1.50 or 1.60

there are too many KIAI time sections, more than 30% of the song is KIAI, consider removing some KIAI sections, for example delete between 00:50:603 and 01:06:070 -(of course, if you decide to do this, you have to edit the other difficulties as well)

00:48:668 (1) - remove NC from here and add it at 00:49:635 (4)
00:54:496 (1) - instead of this slider, I would choose the same style that you chose for 00:57:158 (2,3) here's an image for example:

00:59:093 - add a circle here
01:20:829 (1) - no need for NC here

RISEN:

00:17:602 - add a circle here (and re-position some objects if necessary)
00:34:779 - add a circle here and then at 00:35:021
00:42:521 - ^same as above, add a circle here and at 00:42:763
00:49:635 (8) - NC here
01:08:006 (1) - this slider looks odd in my opinion, like it has been randomly put there, maybe because it's different than the others. It's just a suggestion, but consider changing its shape

Well, that's all! ^^ Good Job, I like your map!

Good Luck with it!

samplefish

1,198 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

samplefish 2014-05-17T04:08:36+00:00

deejaydray wrote:
Hey there, NM from my queue

You told me to choose which difficulties I want to mod, so here it is:

HARD:

First of all, this HARD difficulty seems a little bit too easy in my opinion, only 3 stars, a low SV and a quite low OD. Before I start, I suggest the following (it's up to you to change them or not): at 65 bpm, i feel that the hard is just where it needs to be. just because the map is easier than other hards doesnt mean its not a hard. quote unquote lanturn

change Overall Difficulty (OD) from 5 to 6 no change to any of these
change Slider Velocity from 1.40 to 1.50 or 1.60
there are too many KIAI time sections, more than 30% of the song is KIAI, consider removing some KIAI sections, for example delete between 00:50:603 and 01:06:070 -(of course, if you decide to do this, you have to edit the other difficulties as well)

00:48:668 (1) - remove NC from here and add it at 00:49:635 (4) NC for BPM change
00:54:496 (1) - instead of this slider, I would choose the same style that you chose for 00:57:158 (2,3) here's an image for example: no change

00:59:093 - add a circle here theres no sound there, no change
01:20:829 (1) - no need for NC here fixed

Well, that's all! ^^ Good Job, I like your map! Good Luck with it!

thank you for your mod!

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2014-05-18T11:11:01+00:00

[Lanturn's Beginner]
00:46:755 (1) - unsnap
plz try this

156,52,46755,6,0,B|220:124|236:164|236:164|256:180|276:164|276:164|292:124|356:52,1,320.098682511,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:00:300 (1) - unsanp, try this code too

348,192,60300,6,0,B|388:164|388:164|436:184|500:164,1,158.3333333333

and add a circle on 01:04:135 - x352 y356

i think this can fix this

00:50:246 - unsnap green line

[Insane]
00:50:603 (1) - unsnap
01:20:829 - delete this timing point

samplefish

1,198 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

samplefish 2014-05-18T11:24:17+00:00

nothing for me

sad day

Rare

1,119 posts

Joined August 2010

Rare 2014-05-18T14:42:21+00:00

from my modding queue
[Beginner]
increase drain+1 AR+2 OD+1
unsnapped 00:50:625 -
unsnapped 01:00:300 (1) -
unsnapped 00:50:246 -

[Easy]
Drain AR OD +1 each.
00:06:110 (3) - pref end this at 00:07:078 - is better.
00:15:062 (4,1) - seems like following vocal at (4), but suddenly you following music at (1). hard to play for beginner. i want to change this.
00:19:658 (1) - add whistle to end? it sound like good.
00:31:271 (1) - i want to hitsound something. i like whistle to head.
00:57:400 (3) - this placement is better much to music http://puu.sh/8R8Ax.jpg
01:00:300 (2,3) - let's try this http://puu.sh/8R8Ep.jpg or http://puu.sh/8R8JX.jpg
01:02:200 (1) - add whistle to head?
01:08:006 (3) - end this at 01:09:941 - or 01:10:425 -

[Normal]
00:11:916 (1) - add whistle to end if you like this
00:30:545 (5,6) - pref follow music

00:35:142 (1) - you can use addtions. change to soft from auto.
01:08:006 (3) - pref end this at 01:10:425 -

[Julie's Normal]
not add video?

00:20:384 (2) - pref remove this.
00:33:691 (1,2) - switch to NC
00:35:142 (2) - add something to hitsound to head.
00:39:981 (2) - add clap
01:05:103 (1,2) - switch to NC

[Hard]
drain+1?
00:08:045 (1) - i want add whistle to head.
00:24:981 (2,3,4) - unreadable placement, hard to play for player
00:31:271 (1) - add whistle to head

[Risen]
unsnapped 00:51:086 -
Uninherited timing points conflict with other diffs 00:50:626 -
00:23:045 (3,1) - flow is better this http://puu.sh/8RaD4.jpg
00:28:852 (4,5,1) - pref fit music this http://puu.sh/8RaIs.jpg
00:34:900 (6) - Sampleset : Auto Addtions : Drum Hitsound : Finish is better to music.
00:49:514 (7) - pref remove this. if you remove this, will be fit music.
01:22:280 (2) - pref remove then 01:22:764 (1) - start this at 01:22:522 -

Sinch's Testplay

[insane] 00:29:336 (1) - It's better to use the DS same as last note's.

other diffs are looks good for me.

samplefish

1,198 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

samplefish 2014-05-18T21:47:33+00:00

Rare wrote:
from my modding queue

[Easy]
Drain AR OD +1 each. done
00:06:110 (3) - pref end this at 00:07:078 - is better. changed
00:15:062 (4,1) - seems like following vocal at (4), but suddenly you following music at (1). hard to play for beginner. i want to change this. i think its ok, no change
00:19:658 (1) - add whistle to end? it sound like good. added
00:31:271 (1) - i want to hitsound something. i like whistle to head. added
00:57:400 (3) - this placement is better much to music http://puu.sh/8R8Ax.jpg changed
01:00:300 (2,3) - let's try this http://puu.sh/8R8Ep.jpg or http://puu.sh/8R8JX.jpg no change
01:02:200 (1) - add whistle to head?ok
01:08:006 (3) - end this at 01:09:941 - or 01:10:425 - id like to end it on vocal end

[Normal]
00:11:916 (1) - add whistle to end if you like this added
00:30:545 (5,6) - pref follow music :(
00:35:142 (1) - you can use addtions. change to soft from auto. not sure what you meant, changed head of slider to drum and soft addition
01:08:006 (3) - pref end this at 01:10:425 - pref end vocals

[Julie's Normal]
not add video? added

[Hard]
drain+1? no change
00:08:045 (1) - i want add whistle to head.added
00:24:981 (2,3,4) - unreadable placement, hard to play for player changed a bit, hopefully its better
00:31:271 (1) - add whistle to head done

Sinch's Testplay
[insane] 00:29:336 (1) - It's better to use the DS same as last note's.

other diffs are looks good for me.

thank you very much for the mod, you two!

Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2014-05-18T23:57:12+00:00

Marinska

Marinska wrote:
Hello Again samplefish...
here from my Queue hope this helped..
~~Let's try to full mod..~~ ara~ you have 2 normal diff... i just mod 1 diff with same Difficulty
i'll choose one of them...

[Risen]
Check Aimod some note isn't snapped
00:04:900 (2) - keep 2.0x disnap
00:10:949 (3) - whistle in head ? no change, there is no harp sound there.
01:03:167 (3) - Ctrl + g nope, I want some variation, and show the drum beat in the start so I leave a jump to the slider.
Spiner start at 01:23:006 make spacing of (2) and Spiner

I think just it ... i hope this helped...
Nice song~! btw.. really enjoy it..
sorry for my bad mod.. wrote Fixed,changed,or added..
so i can learning about my modding...

Samah

Samah wrote:
From queue:

[Risen]
This song is too slow-paced for AR8 I think. Try dropping to AR7?
00:40:949 (5,1) - Move these either closer together, or farther apart. At the moment it's a very strange half-jump. No change, being consistent with 01:04:135 (5,1) -
00:42:400 (4,5,1) - A jump doesn't fit the music at this point. I think these should have equal spacing.
00:42:884 (1,2,3) - ^
00:46:755 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this a nicer shape. The star is a bit squished at the moment. This is nicer: http://puu.sh/8Ndrl.jpg
328,44,46755,5,0,0:0:0:0:
392,192,46997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,112,47239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,92,47481,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,200,47723,2,0,P|276:244|272:284,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:49:151 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - It think it's a bad idea to have a stream here due to the red timing points. Maybe move the stream to a different bar? No Change, the streams fit the music tbh.
01:06:796 (2,3,4,5,6) - This looks nicer: http://puu.sh/8NdAp.jpg
332,256,66796,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,208,67038,1,8,3:0:0:0:
272,336,67280,1,8,3:0:0:0:
272,176,67522,1,8,3:0:0:0:
176,304,67764,1,8,3:0:0:0:
01:10:909 (1,2) - Blanket this better?

Lovely song, great maps.

Kihhou

Kihhou wrote:
Hihi NM from queue-

[Risen]
00:06:110 (1) - ctrl g this slider would make it flow better from the previous slider No, there needs to be some direction to 1 , that beat is huge as well as a jump.
00:40:949 (5) - add NC to start NC on the large white tick & at guitar section in music Nope, the jump start needs a FC in order to be more readable, as well as that pause.
00:41:191 (1) - remove NC
01:04:135 (5) - add ^ except for drum Same as above.
01:04:377 (1) - remove^
01:22:280 (2,1) - your spinner is ontop of your slider o_o can you do that? is that rankable? im not sure lol
[box=--]
couldnt find anything wrong with the diffs i didnt list~
Hope this helped~
Good luck!

deejaydray

deejaydray wrote:
Hey there, NM from my queue

RISEN:

00:17:602 - add a circle here (and re-position some objects if necessary) Orz, no I wanted to do jumps more than triplets here, since this song is soft, so no change to all of these.
00:34:779 - add a circle here and then at 00:35:021
00:42:521 - ^same as above, add a circle here and at 00:42:763
00:49:635 (8) - NC here No need, little strange to have a new combo in the middle of stream, since all the notes together are used to form the stream and there no cue in the music that shows it.
01:08:006 (1) - this slider looks odd in my opinion, like it has been randomly put there, maybe because it's different than the others. It's just a suggestion, but consider changing its shape It's to make the slowdown a little bit more readable, I started the slider like that to signal a slowdown.

Well, that's all! ^^ Good Job, I like your map! Good Luck with it!

Rare

Rare wrote:
from my modding queue

[Risen]
unsnapped 00:51:086 -
Uninherited timing points conflict with other diffs 00:50:626 -
00:23:045 (3,1) - flow is better this http://puu.sh/8RaD4.jpg
00:28:852 (4,5,1) - pref fit music this http://puu.sh/8RaIs.jpg No change, that 3/4 is weird orz
00:34:900 (6) - Sampleset : Auto Addtions : Drum Hitsound : Finish is better to music.
00:49:514 (7) - pref remove this. if you remove this, will be fit music.
01:22:280 (2) - pref remove then 01:22:764 (1) - start this at 01:22:522 - No change, I follow sounds in the background.

[box=Sinch's Testplay][insane] 00:29:336 (1) - It's better to use the DS same as last note's.

other diffs are looks good for me.

@Kawaiwkyik:All fixed.

Thanks all mod :3

http://puu.sh/8RRRq.osu

OblivioN

OblivioN 2014-05-20T05:08:31+00:00

I think the map is perfect for ranked, just fix some blanket and stack.
shoot star

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2014-05-20T10:41:17+00:00

Hey, thank you for M4M! I am not sure if my mod will be good enough, but here it is :3

[General]00:42:642 and 00:50:246 - why is kiai timed toggled off around here? I don't see why. (I took the timings out of Lanturn's diff but it seems pretty much the same to all of them.

[Lanturn's Beginner]00:54:496 - I don't think the whistle fits here
01:09:941 - Perhaps you can reduce the audio here to 5%? The hitsound in the end of the slider is just annoying

[Easy]01:12:845 (4) - I think you can make the slider reverse so it will fit the vocal and move the spinner to 01:14:054
00:30:787 (6) - This feels really off vocal, perhaps you can make the pattern like that http://puu.sh/8TGLi.jpg
00:32:239 (2) - I just noticed but here the offset changes and it becomes a bit earlier and then it changes to the normal one

[Julie's Normal]00:06:110 (2) - In the end of the slider change the hitsound volume to 5%, it is ugly :\

[Hard]00:37:078 (3,6) - stack end properly

[Risen]00:31:271 (1) - CTRL + G will make a really nice pattern here imo
00:32:723 (4) - the offset here seems off
00:34:416 (5) - You should make this slider point toward the next circle
00:59:093 (2,3,4) - The pattern here is not that good, there's no flow and it is just weird, consider changing it

Really nice song and mapset, good luck!

samplefish

1,198 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

samplefish 2014-05-20T10:49:08+00:00

OblivioN wrote:
I think the map is perfect for ranked, just fix some blanket and stack.
shoot star

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-05-20T12:00:34+00:00

samplefish wrote:
OblivioN wrote:
I think the map is perfect for ranked, just fix some blanket and stack.
shoot star

Go to bed. :heart:

samplefish

1,198 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

samplefish 2014-05-20T21:13:47+00:00

Avishay wrote:
Hey, thank you for M4M! I am not sure if my mod will be good enough, but here it is :3

[General]00:42:642 and 00:50:246 - why is kiai timed toggled off around here? I don't see why. (I took the timings out of Lanturn's diff but it seems pretty much the same to all of them. kiai fountain for GLAMOROUS STARS

[Easy]01:12:845 (4) - I think you can make the slider reverse so it will fit the vocal and move the spinner to 01:14:054 i like what i have better, no change
00:30:787 (6) - This feels really off vocal, perhaps you can make the pattern like that im confused, the note you linked started on aa white tick but your picture starts on red, not sure exactly what you want, but i like what i have. http://puu.sh/8TGLi.jpg
00:32:239 (2) - I just noticed but here the offset changes and it becomes a bit earlier and then it changes to the normal one really not sure what you mean by this

[Hard]00:37:078 (3,6) - stack end properly done

Really nice song and mapset, good luck!

thanks for the mod

samplefish

1,198 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

samplefish 2014-05-22T21:58:45+00:00

Swimmin'

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-05-26T01:39:13+00:00

Fixed both Avishay, thanks.

SPOILER

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 33449
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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TitleUnicode:祈り~You Raise Me Up (TV Size)
Artist:Lena Park
ArtistUnicode:박정현
Creator:samplefish
Version:Lanturn's Beginner
Source:Romeo x Juliet
Tags:lanturn julie tari opening
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CircleSize:0
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256,192,82522,12,0,89054,0:0:0:0:

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-05-26T14:56:11+00:00

Hi~Hi~，Mod request from BMT Modding Team
good song，suggestion with hitsounds.

[Lanturn's Beginner]
zero star lol
00:17:723 - 10%
00:19:658 (1) - slider head also add finish
00:21:594 (2) - blanket beautifully
00:29:336 - 20%
00:32:239 (2) - slider end I prefer normal additions
00:54:496 change to finish

[Easy]
00:42:400 50% and add whistle
00:44:820 (3) - slider head add whistle
00:46:755 (1) - slider head add finish
00:52:561 (3) - slider head add whistle
00:58:367 finish
01:08:006 (3) - 10%

[Normal]
00:30:787 (6) - 00:30:787 here no piano or vocal，maybe you should start at 00:31:029
00:42:400 the same suggest as easy
00:44:820 (3) - slider head add whistle
00:46:755 (1) - slider head add finish
00:52:561 (3) - slider head add whistle
01:08:006 (3) - 10%

[Julie's Normal]
00:04:175 (1) - slider head add finish
00:19:658 (1) - slider head change to finish
00:26:433 (1) - slider end change to finish
00:28:368 (3) - change to whistle
00:35:142 (2) - slider head add finish
00:39:013 (1) - slider head add whistle
00:44:820 (2) - SC1 slider head add whistle
00:52:561 (1) - ^
00:54:496 (1) - slider head add finish
00:58:367 (4) - delete clap，not good hitsound
01:04:135 (2,3) - a bit strange ，try this rhythm：
http://puu.sh/91ZsM.png ←2 head add finish，end add clap
01:06:070 (2) - slider head add finish

[Hard]
00:05:142 add whistle
00:39:013 whistle
00:44:820 (3) - slider head add whistle
00:46:755 (1) - slider head add finish
00:52:561 (3) - slider head add whistle
01:06:070 (1) - slider head add finish

hope it help you~
good luck!

KuroSenpai112

114 posts

Joined December 2013

KuroSenpai112 2014-05-26T23:19:56+00:00

Hi there from modding queue! These are just suggestions so you don't need to follow them!

[Normal]
01:19:619 (1) - I suggest timing the slider like this: http://gyazo.com/f0fdd263c8247d7e9d223a8787a19530 , it sounds better imo.

[Julie's Normal]
01:16:716 (2) - Slightly tilt this slider so it looks like this: http://gyazo.com/9620905ad920477c7e441a2680b8857c

[Hard]
01:07:522 (3,4) - move (3) to x:296 y:84 and (4) to x:276 y:196 for better flow.

samplefish

1,198 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

samplefish 2014-05-27T07:41:19+00:00

Sellenite wrote:
Hi~Hi~，Mod request from BMT Modding Team
good song，suggestion with hitsounds.

[Easy]
00:42:400 50% and add whistle
00:44:820 (3) - slider head add whistle
00:46:755 (1) - slider head add finish
00:52:561 (3) - slider head add whistle
00:58:367 finish
01:08:006 (3) - 10% i think all sliders have to be audible. correct me if im wrong (i had this at 5% in an earlier version, but changed it)

[Normal]
00:30:787 (6) - 00:30:787 here no piano or vocal，maybe you should start at 00:31:029
00:42:400 the same suggest as easy
00:44:820 (3) - slider head add whistle
00:46:755 (1) - slider head add finish
00:52:561 (3) - slider head add whistle
01:08:006 (3) - 10% ^

[Hard]
00:05:142 add whistle dont think the sound is that significant there
00:39:013 whistle
00:44:820 (3) - slider head add whistle
00:46:755 (1) - slider head add finish
00:52:561 (3) - slider head add whistle
01:06:070 (1) - slider head add finish

hope it help you~
good luck!

very helpful hitsound mod, thanks!

samplefish

1,198 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

samplefish 2014-05-27T07:42:39+00:00

TheForgotten5 wrote:
Hi there from modding queue! These are just suggestions so you don't need to follow them!

[Normal]
01:19:619 (1) - I suggest timing the slider like this: http://gyazo.com/f0fdd263c8247d7e9d223a8787a19530 , it sounds better imo. too hard to hit. no change

[Hard]
01:07:522 (3,4) - move (3) to x:296 y:84 and (4) to x:276 y:196 for better flow.no change

thank you for your time!

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2014-05-29T07:50:03+00:00

from BMT

General

The gap between Hard and Risen a little big.consider to set hp5 in Hard and hp6 in Risen
timing about 10ms late

Lanturn's Beginner

a strange diff but seems creative

first, let's talk about the unreasonable difficult set.I remember that editing things which cant's do in-game by modify .osu file is against with ranking Ranking Criteria.then i think ar0 is unnecessary.it will make notes weird to look and very very ugly imo.consider to change this.maybe using cs2 will make it better
beside this,there still a little problem
00:19:658 (1,2) - you haven't blanket will here.you can make slider2's end higher to make it looks better.

Easy

seems good on this diff.here are some little problems

volume in KIAI part maybe too louder than before? 65% could be enough.
00:33:691 (4) - you can add three drum sound on this repeat slider to follow the music.
you may haven't use NC suitable in this diff
00:48:668 (1) - NC here is inconsistent to previous part.if you'd like to set NC every 8 beat, ensure they are consistent in the whole diff.
01:12:845 (4) - NC here due to interval

Julie's Normal

NC is weird in this diff too.keep NCs consistently is necessary for a map.I recommend set NC at heavy beats on longer white line will make the map neater.below are my suggestion. try to NC every 4 beats

00:05:868 (1,2) - swap NC
00:13:610 (1,2) - swap NC
00:17:723 (5) - add NC here
00:26:433 (1) - here isn't only wrong with NC.making heavy beat on slider's end will decrease the feeling of hit, so break out this slider into a 1/1 slider and a circle like this and NC at the circle is fine imo like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1654991
00:24:981 (1,2) - swap NC
00:26:433 (1,2) - swap NC
00:31:271 (3,1) - swap NC
00:33:691 (1,2) - swap NC.NC for KIAI's start
00:41:916 (1,2) - swap NC
00:44:336 (1,2) - swap NC
00:46:271 (1,2) - swap NC
00:48:207 (1,2) - swap NC
00:48:207 (1,2) - swap NC
00:58:367 (4) - add NC and
00:59:820 (1,2) - swap NC
01:02:200 (5) - add NC
01:03:651 (1,2) - swap NC
01:05:103 (1,2) - swap NC
beside this, here are some little problems
00:29:336 (1,2) - seems looks better like thishttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1655003
01:13:812 - you lose this vocal by set it on slider's end.try this?https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1655027
01:20:829 (1) - hump to lower left to achieve a better flow like thishttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1655034
work harder on this diff to make it better

Hard

star rating 3.15! if it is too easy as a Hard diff?
below are some details and personal suggestion

00:33:691 (1,2,3,4,5) - try to use drum sampleset to follow the music?
00:39:013 (1,3) - overlap here is ugly.move them further
00:49:635 (4,5,6,7,8) - add some sound effect to make the feeling of hit here stronger?
00:50:119 (8,9) - consider to change these two circle into a slider to follow the vocal here?
00:50:626 - use a stronger sound effect here to stress the strong vocal here?
nice diff XD

Risen

nice diff too XD
here are some personal suggestion

use Raise as diff name may more suitable

00:06:836 (3) - move to 217丨137 can make flow better and looks better
00:09:013 (4) - reverse selection will make flow better here.have a try!
00:17:723 (1) - move to 25丨326 can make a well blanket
00:33:933 (2,3) - you should set drun sound here instead soft sampleset to follow the music .-.
00:34:900 (6) - in fact, the drum is correctly at 00:34:870 and i suggest to reduce volume of this circle or here sounds a little weird
00:37:078 (1) - you can blanket well at here like thishttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1655078
```
406,248,37078,6,0,P|323:241|257:291,1,170,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
```
01:03:167 (3) - reverse selection will make flow better here.
01:08:006 (1,2,3,1,2) - consider to add a blank slidertick sound to avoid the extra sound here

that's all
nice song and good luck

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-05-29T08:26:11+00:00

With the CS being at 0, (which is also against ranking criteria as I had to manually edit the .osu file to change from cs2 to cs0) AR0 actually looks pretty fast and fits well. A full 0 mapset actually plays fairly nicely.

Fixed the one spot better anyways. thanks.

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Inori~You Raise Me Up~.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 33449
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 70909
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.7

[Metadata]
Title:Inori~You Raise Me Up (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:祈り~You Raise Me Up (TV Size)
Artist:Lena Park
ArtistUnicode:박정현
Creator:samplefish
Version:Lanturn's Beginner
Source:Romeo x Juliet
Tags:lanturn julie tari opening
BeatmapID:417503
BeatmapSetID:172662

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:0
CircleSize:0
OverallDifficulty:0
ApproachRate:0
SliderMultiplier:0.4
SliderTickRate:0.5

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"madokervid.avi"
0,0,"madokaThing.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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69095,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
73329,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
89054,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,192
Combo2 : 128,128,192
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 128,128,255

[HitObjects]
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48,128,11916,6,0,B|101:128|101:128|152:96|152:96|208:96,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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351,227,24497,1,0,0:0:0:0:
462,271,25465,1,4,0:0:0:0:
328,72,27400,6,0,B|280:96|280:96|256:120|232:96|232:96|184:72,2,160,2|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-05-30T02:11:41+00:00

Finally unsilenced lmaooo

General:
You're sourcing this as Romeo x Juliet but the background and video are from Madoka. It's not like there isn't any video for this song or anything, or any relevant Romeo x Juliet stuff. If you wanna map madoka, map madoka ~~and why has nobody mentioned this before like did it take 6 pages for people to realize "wait a second this isn't madoka~~

Risen:
00:00:295 (1,2,3) - This can be removed.
00:43:610 (2) - The jumps are done pretty nicely in this map, but this jump stands out since it doesn't fit that well
00:57:400 (5) - This is so close to being a shape but where this is placed, its not. And a shape would be nice
01:08:006 (1,2,3,1,2) - aaaaaAAAaaAAAaAAa. This isn't really something to really map. This is where a spinner should be. It's not really metronomic, so mapping it doesn't make sense.

Hard:
00:00:295 (1) - As with the other diffs, this can be removed, since it's not really easy to hear
00:42:400 (4,5) - Add a drumclap on (4), and drumfinish on (5)

Julie:
00:05:868 (1,2) - Stylistically, this doesn't work, because it suddenly goes from strictly following vocals, to being REALLY freeflowing and not following vocals. I'd suggest removing (1) so the sliders would work better.
00:17:723 (5) - Odd slider shape, especially since it's not really blanketing anything
00:26:433 (1) - ^. This one just looks unsymmetrical in general
00:42:884 (2) - Make this curve more notable. Right now it looks in between a curve and a straight line
00:48:668 (2) - eh
00:54:496 (1) - ^. If you wanna make this better, have your midpoints more in the middle, so it's symmetrical
01:02:200 (5) - Add hitnormal on the endo f the slider

Normal:
00:36:836 (2,3,4,5,6) - A LITTLE bit too much for a normal
01:08:006 (3) - I could ask for something a little bit more creative, but it's not really anything wrong I guess.

Easy:
01:08:006 (3) - This could be more creative too
01:12:845 (4) - NC

Beginner:
A lot of unrankablity in this map, which has been mentioned a lot before, and hasn't been changed at all. I feel like a lot of this unrankable stuff is made moreso to be like "wow haha guys im unrankable what are you gonna do about it" (refer to https://osu.ppy.sh/s/33074 )

samplefish

1,198 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

samplefish 2014-05-30T02:27:59+00:00

ZZHBOY wrote:
from BMT
General
The gap between Hard and Risen a little big.consider to set hp5 in Hard and hp6 in Risen no change on hard
timing about 10ms late
looking into this!

Easy
seems good on this diff.here are some little problems
volume in KIAI part maybe too louder than before? 65% could be enough.
00:33:691 (4) - you can add three drum sound on this repeat slider to follow the music.
you may haven't use NC suitable in this diff
00:48:668 (1) - NC here is inconsistent to previous part.if you'd like to set NC every 8 beat, ensure they are consistent in the whole diff.
01:12:845 (4) - NC here due to interval i think its all still one sentence in the song, plus i like the followpoint line

Hard
star rating 3.15! if it is too easy as a Hard diff? see below comment
below are some details and personal suggestion
00:33:691 (1,2,3,4,5) - try to use drum sampleset to follow the music?
00:39:013 (1,3) - overlap here is ugly.move them further
00:49:635 (4,5,6,7,8) - add some sound effect to make the feeling of hit here stronger?
00:50:119 (8,9) - consider to change these two circle into a slider to follow the vocal here? i like this better
00:50:626 - use a stronger sound effect here to stress the strong vocal here?
nice diff XD

that's all
nice song and good luck

about hard not being hard:

samplefish wrote:
at 65 bpm, i feel that the hard is just where it needs to be. just because the map is easier than other hards doesnt mean its not a hard. quote unquote lanturn

thank you for the mod!!

samplefish

1,198 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

samplefish 2014-05-30T02:53:14+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Finally unsilenced lmaooo hurray

General:
You're sourcing this as Romeo x Juliet but the background and video are from Madoka. It's not like there isn't any video for this song or anything, or any relevant Romeo x Juliet stuff. If you wanna map madoka, map madoka ~~and why has nobody mentioned this before like did it take 6 pages for people to realize "wait a second this isn't madoka~~1. i think the story behind madoka fits this song very much, should be a good enough reason, 2.refer to https://osu.ppy.sh/s/58029, 3.asked BAT, said was ok, and 4 for kicks i hate romeo x juliet

Hard:
00:00:295 (1) - As with the other diffs, this can be removed, since it's not really easy to hear keeping it
00:42:400 (4,5) - Add a drumclap on (4), and drumfinish on (5)

Normal:
00:36:836 (2,3,4,5,6) - A LITTLE bit too much for a normal took out the 1/2s
01:08:006 (3) - I could ask for something a little bit more creative, but it's not really anything wrong I guess. no change

Easy:
01:08:006 (3) - This could be more creative too no change
01:12:845 (4) - NC not 100% sure, but im feeling the vocals are from the same sentence, plus i like the followline.

not changing to romeo x juliet unless unrankable. anything less than that, and im keeping it.

thanks for the mod!

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-05-30T03:20:01+00:00

Actually this was made to be a beginner map. nothing more, nothing less. If I remove the red points to get everything snapped properly. Then it will conflict with the other difficulties. Using 0.5 Tick rate because this map has double bpm and tick rate 1 (which is basically tick rate 2 on correct BPM) wouldn't fit at all. AR/CS 0 work very well together and actually makes the map easier to play than most people think AR0 does.

I was originally waiting on a timing from elsewhere, but it seems like it won't happen. So even though all of this stuff is unrankable. It has very good reasons to do so. I'm not trying to troll anything here CDFA.

Julie

1,416 posts

Joined March 2013

Julie 2014-05-30T23:48:35+00:00

Rare

Rare wrote:
[Julie's Normal]
not add video?
00:20:384 (2) - pref remove this.
00:33:691 (1,2) - switch to NC
00:35:142 (2) - add something to hitsound to head.
00:39:981 (2) - add clap
01:05:103 (1,2) - switch to NC I don't think I'll do that one xD

Fixed all~ Thank you

Avishay

Avishay wrote:
[Julie's Normal]00:06:110 (2) - In the end of the slider change the hitsound volume to 5%, it is ugly :\

Roger that sir ^^

Sellenite

Sellenite wrote:
[Julie's Normal]
00:04:175 (1) - slider head add finish
00:19:658 (1) - slider head change to finish
00:26:433 (1) - slider end change to finish
00:28:368 (3) - change to whistle
00:35:142 (2) - slider head add finish
00:39:013 (1) - slider head add whistle
00:44:820 (2) - SC1 slider head add whistle
00:52:561 (1) - ^
00:54:496 (1) - slider head add finish
00:58:367 (4) - delete clap，not good hitsound
01:04:135 (2,3) - a bit strange ，try this rhythm：
http://puu.sh/91ZsM.png ←2 head add finish，end add clap
01:06:070 (2) - slider head add finish

Woah big thanks for the hitsound mod *^*

ZZHBOY

ZZHBOY wrote:
Julie's Normal
NC is weird in this diff too.keep NCs consistently is necessary for a map.I recommend set NC at heavy beats on longer white line will make the map neater.below are my suggestion. try to NC every 4 beats

00:05:868 (1,2) - swap NC
00:13:610 (1,2) - swap NC
00:17:723 (5) - add NC here
00:26:433 (1) - here isn't only wrong with NC.making heavy beat on slider's end will decrease the feeling of hit, so break out this slider into a 1/1 slider and a circle like this and NC at the circle is fine imo like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1654991
00:24:981 (1,2) - swap NC
00:26:433 (1,2) - swap NC
00:31:271 (3,1) - swap NC
00:33:691 (1,2) - swap NC.NC for KIAI's start
00:41:916 (1,2) - swap NC
00:44:336 (1,2) - swap NC
00:46:271 (1,2) - swap NC
00:48:207 (1,2) - swap NC
00:48:207 (1,2) - swap NC
00:58:367 (4) - add NC and
00:59:820 (1,2) - swap NC
01:02:200 (5) - add NC
01:03:651 (1,2) - swap NC
01:05:103 (1,2) - swap NC
beside this, here are some little problems
00:29:336 (1,2) - seems looks better like thishttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1655003
01:13:812 - you lose this vocal by set it on slider's end.try this?https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1655027
01:20:829 (1) - hump to lower left to achieve a better flow like thishttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1655034
work harder on this diff to make it better

Thanks for the mod, sorry caused trouble >///<

CDFA

CDFA wrote:
Julie:
00:05:868 (1,2) - Stylistically, this doesn't work, because it suddenly goes from strictly following vocals, to being REALLY freeflowing and not following vocals. I'd suggest removing (1) so the sliders would work better.
00:17:723 (5) - Odd slider shape, especially since it's not really blanketing anything
00:26:433 (1) - ^. This one just looks unsymmetrical in general Fixed from another mods, did something else
00:42:884 (2) - Make this curve more notable. Right now it looks in between a curve and a straight line
00:48:668 (2) - eh pfft keeping~ rofl xD
00:54:496 (1) - ^. If you wanna make this better, have your midpoints more in the middle, so it's symmetrical I try something else but thanks
01:02:200 (5) - Add hitnormal on the endo f the slider [color=#FF0000]Imma keep it like that >,</color]

Thank youuuu~

http://puu.sh/98hQ5.osu

dkun

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dkun 2014-05-31T00:35:16+00:00

Lanturn wrote:
Actually this was made to be a beginner map. nothing more, nothing less. If I remove the red points to get everything snapped properly. Then it will conflict with the other difficulties. Using 0.5 Tick rate because this map has double bpm and tick rate 1 (which is basically tick rate 2 on correct BPM) wouldn't fit at all. AR/CS 0 work very well together and actually makes the map easier to play than most people think AR0 does.

I was originally waiting on a timing from elsewhere, but it seems like it won't happen. So even though all of this stuff is unrankable. It has very good reasons to do so. I'm not trying to troll anything here CDFA.

It's still unrankable. If the BPM is double, halve it (on all difficulties). This is a good compromise, is it not? 0.5 was removed for good reason. We assume that mappers use the correct BPM as such.

On top of that, we do not manually edit the .osu files for things like these. This includes your diff settings at zero, fwiw.

Good reason or not, there's still alternative (in turn, more correct) ways to take to avoid all of this.

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-05-31T01:34:26+00:00

FFS. I'll respond to this when I can think straight.

For now, sample has full control over my difficulty.

dkun

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dkun 2014-05-31T02:47:55+00:00

"isn't going to happen, so the BPM won't be halved" -- There's alternatives for this timing check that you speak of. There are various people that are talented in this aspect. Why do you assume that it's impossible?

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-05-31T02:50:03+00:00

I was going to originally edit my post saying that sample has literally tried many many different people and queues, and not a single one has gotten back to him, so he left it as is. But then I edited out my post because yeah.

Apparently it was already too late though and you read something I regret writing.

dkun

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dkun 2014-05-31T02:52:25+00:00

What impeccable timing, huh?

We'll see. I like your difficulty, please don't misunderstand me. Rest assured, I'll find someone that can assist with the timing.

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-05-31T03:15:59+00:00

In that case, thanks.... and thanks.

The timing would help fix almost everything, except the CS issue.

I'm just headstrong about it I guess. I don't know. I've been really tempted to open a thread about manually editing stuff through the .osu file, but when I think twice about it, it really just is about wanting my preferences to be passable, without any other thought. I don't think a reason like that is good enough to create a topic over.

Anyways, sample has taken over my diff for now. I told him to just delete it if it becomes too much of a hassle.

dkun

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dkun 2014-05-31T03:31:07+00:00

I know where you're coming from. The rules are not meant to be black and white alone, but alas, we're here now.

We'll see how this plays out! I hope to bring a nice compromise to the table.

neonat

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neonat 2014-05-31T17:25:17+00:00

Actually, I think 62 BPM with an offset of 300 seems to be fine throughout the whole song, why not just use that instead? 124 BPM is honestly too fast as it's twice the actual speed

Risen

00:08:529 (2) - this drum hitsound is pretty isolated and an odd one out
00:10:949 (3) - ^
00:18:691 (3) - ^
00:26:433 (3) - ^
00:17:239 (4,1) - blanket them
00:17:723 (1,3) - ^
00:22:320 (2) - make it 1/2 beat instead of 1/1 so it ends when she let's go of the word, instead of going over it, which makes this part really awkward and out of place
00:26:433 (3,4) - blanket them
00:31:755 (2,3) - ^
00:37:078 (1,2) - ^ as they all seem like they are trying to blanket, yet they aren't
00:39:497 (2,3) - ^
01:03:651 (4) - why not ctrl-g this, making the flow better, as well because the music's tone goes up, which would coincide with the slider
01:09:941 (3,1,2) - they really do not make sense, if you want this part filled, just use a spinner

samplefish

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samplefish 2014-06-01T00:11:54+00:00

neonat wrote:
Actually, I think 62 BPM with an offset of 300 seems to be fine throughout the whole song, why not just use that instead? 124 BPM is honestly too fast as it's twice the actual speed

while i am admittedly blindly following the ranked map's timing, they had quite a fuss about the timing over at the ranked version. though its from 2011, im sure if it was just a steady bpm throughout they wouldnt have had that much of a problem timing this. hopefully dkun can get someone on the timing thing soon

Tari

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Tari 2014-06-01T20:11:38+00:00

CDFA

CDFA wrote:
Finally unsilenced lmaooo

General:
You're sourcing this as Romeo x Juliet but the background and video are from Madoka. It's not like there isn't any video for this song or anything, or any relevant Romeo x Juliet stuff. If you wanna map madoka, map madoka ~~and why has nobody mentioned this before like did it take 6 pages for people to realize "wait a second this isn't madoka~~

Risen:
00:00:295 (1,2,3) - This can be removed. Why? this combo helps lead to start of vocals with zig-zag movement
00:43:610 (2) - The jumps are done pretty nicely in this map, but this jump stands out since it doesn't fit that well
00:57:400 (5) - This is so close to being a shape but where this is placed, its not. And a shape would be nice
01:08:006 (1,2,3,1,2) - aaaaaAAAaaAAAaAAa. This isn't really something to really map. This is where a spinner should be. It's not really metronomic, so mapping it doesn't make sense.

Hard:
00:00:295 (1) - As with the other diffs, this can be removed, since it's not really easy to hear
00:42:400 (4,5) - Add a drumclap on (4), and drumfinish on (5)

Julie:
00:05:868 (1,2) - Stylistically, this doesn't work, because it suddenly goes from strictly following vocals, to being REALLY freeflowing and not following vocals. I'd suggest removing (1) so the sliders would work better.
00:17:723 (5) - Odd slider shape, especially since it's not really blanketing anything
00:26:433 (1) - ^. This one just looks unsymmetrical in general
00:42:884 (2) - Make this curve more notable. Right now it looks in between a curve and a straight line
00:48:668 (2) - eh
00:54:496 (1) - ^. If you wanna make this better, have your midpoints more in the middle, so it's symmetrical
01:02:200 (5) - Add hitnormal on the endo f the slider

Normal:
00:36:836 (2,3,4,5,6) - A LITTLE bit too much for a normal
01:08:006 (3) - I could ask for something a little bit more creative, but it's not really anything wrong I guess.

Easy:
01:08:006 (3) - This could be more creative too
01:12:845 (4) - NC

Beginner:
A lot of unrankablity in this map, which has been mentioned a lot before, and hasn't been changed at all. I feel like a lot of this unrankable stuff is made moreso to be like "wow haha guys im unrankable what are you gonna do about it" (refer to https://osu.ppy.sh/s/33074 )

neonat

neonat wrote:
Actually, I think 62 BPM with an offset of 300 seems to be fine throughout the whole song, why not just use that instead? 124 BPM is honestly too fast as it's twice the actual speed
Risen

00:08:529 (2) - this drum hitsound is pretty isolated and an odd one out
00:10:949 (3) - ^ Nope, it sounds really great here and you notice all of them have same rhythm and the same "cluck" sound at the start.
00:18:691 (3) - ^
00:26:433 (3) - ^
00:17:239 (4,1) - blanket them
00:17:723 (1,3) - ^
00:22:320 (2) - make it 1/2 beat instead of 1/1 so it ends when she let's go of the word, instead of going over it, which makes this part really awkward and out of place I don't think its a good idea here, I'm following vocals and it seems fine to be honest.
00:26:433 (3,4) - blanket them
00:31:755 (2,3) - ^
00:37:078 (1,2) - ^ as they all seem like they are trying to blanket, yet they aren't
00:39:497 (2,3) - ^
01:03:651 (4) - why not ctrl-g this, making the flow better, as well because the music's tone goes up, which would coincide with the slider
01:09:941 (3,1,2) - they really do not make sense, if you want this part filled, just use a spinner

ZZHBOY

ZZHBOY wrote:
from BMT
General
The gap between Hard and Risen a little big.consider to set hp5 in Hard and hp6 in Risen
timing about 10ms late

Lanturn's Beginner
a strange diff but seems creative
first, let's talk about the unreasonable difficult set.I remember that editing things which cant's do in-game by modify .osu file is against with ranking Ranking Criteria.then i think ar0 is unnecessary.it will make notes weird to look and very very ugly imo.consider to change this.maybe using cs2 will make it better
beside this,there still a little problem
00:19:658 (1,2) - you haven't blanket will here.you can make slider2's end higher to make it looks better.

Easy
seems good on this diff.here are some little problems
volume in KIAI part maybe too louder than before? 65% could be enough.
00:33:691 (4) - you can add three drum sound on this repeat slider to follow the music.
you may haven't use NC suitable in this diff
00:48:668 (1) - NC here is inconsistent to previous part.if you'd like to set NC every 8 beat, ensure they are consistent in the whole diff.
01:12:845 (4) - NC here due to interval

Julie's Normal
NC is weird in this diff too.keep NCs consistently is necessary for a map.I recommend set NC at heavy beats on longer white line will make the map neater.below are my suggestion. try to NC every 4 beats

00:05:868 (1,2) - swap NC
00:13:610 (1,2) - swap NC
00:17:723 (5) - add NC here
00:26:433 (1) - here isn't only wrong with NC.making heavy beat on slider's end will decrease the feeling of hit, so break out this slider into a 1/1 slider and a circle like this and NC at the circle is fine imo like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1654991
00:24:981 (1,2) - swap NC
00:26:433 (1,2) - swap NC
00:31:271 (3,1) - swap NC
00:33:691 (1,2) - swap NC.NC for KIAI's start
00:41:916 (1,2) - swap NC
00:44:336 (1,2) - swap NC
00:46:271 (1,2) - swap NC
00:48:207 (1,2) - swap NC
00:48:207 (1,2) - swap NC
00:58:367 (4) - add NC and
00:59:820 (1,2) - swap NC
01:02:200 (5) - add NC
01:03:651 (1,2) - swap NC
01:05:103 (1,2) - swap NC
beside this, here are some little problems
00:29:336 (1,2) - seems looks better like thishttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1655003
01:13:812 - you lose this vocal by set it on slider's end.try this?https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1655027
01:20:829 (1) - hump to lower left to achieve a better flow like thishttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1655034
work harder on this diff to make it better

Hard
star rating 3.15! if it is too easy as a Hard diff?
below are some details and personal suggestion
00:33:691 (1,2,3,4,5) - try to use drum sampleset to follow the music?
00:39:013 (1,3) - overlap here is ugly.move them further
00:49:635 (4,5,6,7,8) - add some sound effect to make the feeling of hit here stronger?
00:50:119 (8,9) - consider to change these two circle into a slider to follow the vocal here?
00:50:626 - use a stronger sound effect here to stress the strong vocal here?
nice diff XD
Risen
nice diff too XD
here are some personal suggestion
use Raise as diff name may more suitable
00:06:836 (3) - move to 217丨137 can make flow better and looks better
00:09:013 (4) - reverse selection will make flow better here.have a try! I prefer mine, and yours feel little too jumpy orz
00:17:723 (1) - move to 25丨326 can make a well blanket
00:33:933 (2,3) - you should set drun sound here instead soft sampleset to follow the music .-.
00:34:900 (6) - in fact, the drum is correctly at 00:34:870 and i suggest to reduce volume of this circle or here sounds a little weird
00:37:078 (1) - you can blanket well at here like thishttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1655078
406,248,37078,6,0,P|323:241|257:291,1,170,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
01:03:167 (3) - reverse selection will make flow better here.
01:08:006 (1,2,3,1,2) - consider to add a blank slidertick sound to avoid the extra sound here
that's all
nice song and good luck

Thanks for the mods, there are so many if I miss any sorry

https://www.dropbox.com/s/5w19t3ldzlfo0 ... sen%5D.osu

Neta

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Neta 2014-06-02T08:16:56+00:00

Here's some mod from my modding queue

[Julie's Normal]

how about OD +1 to spread diff over Normal Under Hard diff?
00:33:207 - how about add 40%volume line here? to make volume goes bigger 20, 30, 40
00:40:465 (3) - i think Finish is more fit here
01:03:167 - missed Clap here?
01:07:764 ~ 01:08:853 - try this beat. i think it's more fit on Vocal
SPOILER
01:29:054 - Volume down here? add 5% sounds fine

Patterns and placements looks fine

Nice Song~ GL

Aruka

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Aruka 2014-06-02T09:19:42+00:00

Lanturn's Beginner: I would put 3 circles or a backslider to 00:33:691- 00:34:658 because it fits better

Risen: - 00:32:723 (4) - This slider is one beat too short,01:08:006 (1) - Make this backslider slightly longer so it fits better to the rhythm

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-06-02T13:54:09+00:00

I'm not too fond in mapping lead-in vocals for the beginner diff as shown at the beginning of the song.

Thanks for the suggestion though.

Julie

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Julie 2014-06-04T00:50:51+00:00

Neta wrote:
Here's some mod from my modding queue

[Julie's Normal]
how about OD +1 to spread diff over Normal Under Hard diff?
00:33:207 - how about add 40%volume line here? to make volume goes bigger 20, 30, 40
00:40:465 (3) - i think Finish is more fit here
01:03:167 - missed Clap here?
01:07:764 ~ 01:08:853 - try this beat. i think it's more fit on Vocal
SPOILER
01:29:054 - Volume down here? add 5% sounds fine
Patterns and placements looks fine

Nice Song~ GL

All fixed :3 Thanks for the mod

http://puu.sh/9e26t.osu

Okoayu

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Okoayu 2014-06-05T19:20:37+00:00

General

Short Song, short mod
I do like this song even though it's so slow
Sorry about potato delay for this but i had stuff to do

Risen

uhh this sond is hella slow why did i agree on modding this?
00:04:175 (1) - imo 20% for the green line here sounds too loud to me, maybe consider making it a bit more quiet
00:13:731 (5) - adding a whistle for the piano might be nice here
00:38:045 (3) - contrary to things like 00:39:981 (3) - or 00:42:884 (1) - , the vocal on the red tick seems to be strong enough to be mapped for me (an 1/2 repeat or / 1/2 slider + 1 circle should be appropriate)
00:42:884 (1) - how about trying a blanket with 00:41:916 (3) - ?
00:46:392 - would consider this vocal to be mapped out? so that you could go for a 3/4 triangle here or sth like that
01:13:812 (1) - idk if this one should end around here 01:19:740 - better o_o
00:41:191 (1,2) - & 01:04:377 (1,2) - just saying that i don't like these antijumps and think they're better off spaced out imo

Gl with your map!

Shurelia

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Shurelia 2014-06-05T22:37:16+00:00

おっす!やったよ!
from my queue~
[General]

Add "Puella Madoka Magica" , "Anime" to the tags

[lanturn's Beginner]

00:11:916 (1) - Move this to x: 80 , y:80 , so the distance will be same with the other objects.
Fix all of these, please~ : http://puu.sh/9gIAs/9107eaf57f.png
The Circles is soooooo Huge!!! XD

[Easy]

00:05:868 (2,3) - Stack is not recommended for easy~
00:07:804 (4,1) - ^^^
00:10:707 (3,4) - ^^^
00:13:610 (2,3) - ^^^
00:21:352 (2,3) - ^^^
00:26:191 (3,4) - ^^^
00:29:094 (2,3) - ^^^
00:36:836 (2,3) - ^^^
00:38:771 (5,1) - ^^^
00:44:578 (2,3) - ^^^
00:45:787 (4,5) - ^^^ all of the stacked object should be changed , i suggest
Fix all of these~ : http://puu.sh/9gIZ6/020e203287.png
01:04:135 (3,4,5) - Too hard to be read by Easy Player in my opinion.
I didn't recommend to use SV multiplier on easy diff~

[Normal]

01:19:619 (1) - Increase the lenght a bit , so the tail would be at "red" on the timeline, it fit the song.
01:20:829 (2) - Remove Whistle. Sounds better to me~

[Julie's Normal]

Already Good~

[Hard]

00:33:933 (2) - Anti Jump, i suggest to move it a bit. x:472 , y:280 would be good enough~
01:12:845 (2) - How about change this slider into 2 circles ?

[Risen]

Fix all of these ~ : http://puu.sh/9gKYH/60ff70bbcf.png

That's all from me, hope this help~

And also, i'm truly sorry for the lateness. I've been busy + sick for the past weeks. Sorry

samplefish

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Topic Starter

samplefish 2014-06-06T02:57:58+00:00

Shurelia wrote:
おっす!やったよ!
from my queue~
[General]
Add "Puella Madoka Magica" , "Anime" to the tags the source itself has nothing to do with madoka, and anime will be in genre

[Easy]
00:05:868 (2,3) - Stack is not recommended for easy~ i think theyre ok, since they all have the same rhythm
00:07:804 (4,1) - ^^^
00:10:707 (3,4) - ^^^
00:13:610 (2,3) - ^^^
00:21:352 (2,3) - ^^^
00:26:191 (3,4) - ^^^
00:29:094 (2,3) - ^^^
00:36:836 (2,3) - ^^^
00:38:771 (5,1) - ^^^
00:44:578 (2,3) - ^^^
00:45:787 (4,5) - ^^^ all of the stacked object should be changed , i suggest
Fix all of these~ : http://puu.sh/9gIZ6/020e203287.png
01:04:135 (3,4,5) - Too hard to be read by Easy Player in my opinion. its alright i think
I didn't recommend to use SV multiplier on easy diff~ theyre not drastic changes, theyre actually very subtle. shouldnt be a problem

[Normal]
01:19:619 (1) - Increase the lenght a bit , so the tail would be at "red" on the timeline, it fit the song. i dont think so
01:20:829 (2) - Remove Whistle. Sounds better to me~ no change

[Hard]
00:33:933 (2) - Anti Jump, i suggest to move it a bit. x:472 , y:280 would be good enough~ ok
01:12:845 (2) - How about change this slider into 2 circles ? too hard to time perfectly for players since such a long pause

And also, i'm truly sorry for the lateness. I've been busy + sick for the past weeks. Sorry

its okay, no worries! glad you are feeling good enough to mod again, and thanks for the mod!!

Last edited by samplefish 2014-06-08T23:13:35+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-06-07T15:38:28+00:00

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Inori~You Raise Me Up~.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 33449
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 70909
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.7

[Metadata]
Title:Inori~You Raise Me Up (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:祈り~You Raise Me Up (TV Size)
Artist:Lena Park
ArtistUnicode:박정현
Creator:samplefish
Version:Lanturn's Beginner
Source:Romeo x Juliet
Tags:lanturn julie tari opening
BeatmapID:417503
BeatmapSetID:172662

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CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:0
ApproachRate:1
SliderMultiplier:0.4
SliderTickRate:1

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Lena Park - Inori~You Raise Me Up (TV Size)

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