[Beginner]
[Easy]
- LOOOOL this is so easy <3
- 00:15:787 (2) - Add a whistle to the repeat yo, there a harp sound there
- 00:19:658 (1) - ^ Another whistle here but at the end of the slider please.
- 00:27:400 (1) - At the reverse yo add a whistle as before
- 00:39:013 (1) - The start of the slider sounds better with a drum finish!
[Easy]
- 00:04:175 (1) - A whistle at the end of the slider sounds great! basically add some whistles to all the piano sounds.
- 00:06:110 (3) - Now to the start of the slider add another whistle here also please!
- 00:08:045 (1) - The end curve after the red point is too curvy! how about you make it less curvy and in that way it makes it blanket better too? http://puu.sh/8HoVl.jpg
- 00:13:852 (3) - You need to add a whistle to the start of the slider, that piano beat needs to have a sound to it.
- 00:09:497 (2) - Whistle at the end of the slider? it sounds nice.
- 00:17:723 (3) - If you plan on adding a whistle to the above, you should add a whistle here too, to make sure you be consistent with the hitsounds used.
- 00:19:658 (1) - I think you should move the slider end point down a bit more so the blanket can also be improved here as well.
- 00:21:594 (3) - Whistle added here so you can be consistent 00:13:852 (3) - please add to both , not just one.
- 00:29:336 (3) - ^
- 00:24:981 (2) - Whistle here so you can be consistent with 00:09:497 (2) - this time.
- 00:31:271 (1,2,3) - The whistles when added all of them sound nice, so add one to the end of the slider and to note 2 and 3,
- 00:35:142 (1) - Add a finish to the start of the slider.
- 00:35:142 - Volume of kiai needs to be increased to 75% doesn't make sense to make it lower than 00:33:449 - In fact you need to lower the volume of the green line around 00:33:449 - To 50% .
- 00:54:496 (1) - You should probably center it, so it's a bit more cleaner I suppose and make sure it's nice and symmetrical.
- 01:02:200 (1) - The end curve can blanket better in this slider, as said previously too , just make the end less curvy and move it down a little bit more here.
- 01:08:006 (3) - The end of the slider defeinitely needs to be silenced by dropping it to 10% volume, that soft-hitnormal is so loud here that It stands out from the music.
- Following the hitsound suggestions I said in easy here too please. but I'll just mention them again orz
- 00:06:110 (3) - Add a whistle here already explained why in easy.
- 00:09:981 (3) - Same add a whistle here please.
- 00:13:852 (3) - ^
- 00:17:239 (2) - ^
- 00:27:400 (1) - How about you try to make this more fun by making the rhythm harder? for some reason this feel's awfully similar to easy, and I suggest you try this : http://puu.sh/8HqtC.jpg
- 00:32:239 (2,3) - Whistles to this whole thing.
- 00:33:691 (1) - New combo here, vocals are starting again.
- 00:48:668 (1) - I prefer you curve it upward than downward, the movement is shifting in a spiral and curving it upward will hint at that downward spiral when you return from the reverse in this slider.
- 01:08:006 (3) - Lower the volume of the slider end please.
- 00:04:175 (1,2) - I think it's a bit little overmap here, hmm there no vocals at 2, I don't understand why there needs to be a note added there, just remove it and reverse 1.
- 00:11:916 (2) - This is like touching the HP bar, a little bit just move it a tiny bit down more so it doesn't touch the hp bar anymore, It's a big problem if it touches.
- 00:33:691 (1) - LOL I think you missed the drum sampleset for the start of the slider, that clap doesn't sound right there honestly at least for me, sounds pretty bad too to me
- 01:18:651 (1,2) - Wah, I find it if you used a slider for this part better than if you stacked circles, I can see your trying to make this really easy because were getting to the softer parts but a 3 way stack is >.>
- 00:21:594 (1) - I don't think you aimed for this slider to be curved like this, how about you try something like this? http://puu.sh/8HrsW.jpg
- 00:04:175 (1) - I'd prefer you reverse this slider and remove the circle following here, start with something really relaxing first and start to build up, that's pretty much what the song title says.
- 00:22:320 - I don't think you should really skip any vocals here, the song has really low potential of being hard and interesting and any chance you get to add notes you should really do so it is actually "Hard" that being said you might want to add a slider here and end it at the white tick , try http://puu.sh/8HrOl.jpg
- 00:33:691 (1) - New combo here?
- 00:42:642 - I think you need to add a note here, there is a beat here and you need to build up momentum for the next note which is coming up because of its huge strength.
- 00:44:336 - Same here, try to make the kiai more fun in this diff, by adding a note.
- 00:56:916 - You need consistency of rhythms and if you plan on adding the note you did for the above there also needs to be a note here also, to remain consistent.
- 00:59:819 - ^
- 01:08:006 (1) - Reduce the volume of the end,
- Apply hitsounds suggestions I said on easy/normal here too.