2014-05-08 20:21 Unsfamiliar: ily lanturn

Lapis Aoki wrote:

From Q ~ ! owo hi!!
[Easy]
00:07:804 - NC should start from here. I like the NC at the big white tick, that way there is are followpoints between the gaps for FL players
00:38:771 - ^ ^
01:22:522 (1) - Spinner should end at the big white tick ~ ? :3 music does not end there, should be okay. (sorry osu!mania players)
[Normal]
00:07:804 - NC should start here ~ ? ^
00:21:594 (3) - This shape looks ugly, change shape pwease ~~ i think its ok, it leads into the next slider nicely.

Example

[Hard]
01:20:892 (1) - Remove NC ~ ? NC to accompany slower slider. no change

Gonna give you a star soon ~ ! <3 Amazing and sad song (GL)

Lapis Aoki wrote:

[Julie's Normal]
01:04:619 - Remove whistle.

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Do not manually edit anything in an .osu file that cannot be changed through the Editor. The only exceptions are .osu-specific storyboards and skin-related options such as SliderBorder and SliderTrackOverride.

Setsurei wrote:

[General]
no combo colors?
check AI mod, the unicode are not consistent through the diffs fixeded!
[Easy]
00:00:295 (1,2) - DS fixed all DS problems
00:17:723 (3,4) - ^
00:17:723 (3,1) - avoid overlaps like this, may confuse the newbie woops, this was not intentional. haha
00:23:045 (4,1) - DS
00:26:433 (4,1) - ^
01:01:020 (3,1) - ^
[Normal]
00:41:674 (3,4) - stack properly fixed
01:06:070 (1,3) - avoid hiding the head of (3) slider done
[Hard]
some objects are not snapped, please fix (see AI mod) fixed

sorry for this nazi, so I checked all 5 diffs, the map is nice
that's all good luck[/color]

Setsurei wrote:

[Julie's Normal]
there is unused green line, remove it
01:20:791 - 80791,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0

Setsurei wrote:

[Lanturn's Beginner]
CS 0 is unrankable

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Do not manually edit anything in an .osu file that cannot be changed through the Editor. The only exceptions are .osu-specific storyboards and skin-related options such as SliderBorder and SliderTrackOverride.

Ringating wrote:

from my bg modding queue.

the aspect ratio on the original was 16:10 ( i think) so i made it 16:9 by cropping a bit from the top and bottom and adding a bit to the right and left. I manually filled in the circles that were cropped, since circles are easy. Here is the new bg:

;:;:;:;:

also the new bg is png because there is a lot of solid color in the image, allowing for the deliciousness of lossless png without the huge file sizes normally associated with png.

1. LOOOOL this is so easy <3
2. 00:15:787 (2) - Add a whistle to the repeat yo, there a harp sound there
3. 00:19:658 (1) - ^ Another whistle here but at the end of the slider please.
4. 00:27:400 (1) - At the reverse yo add a whistle as before
5. 00:39:013 (1) - The start of the slider sounds better with a drum finish!

1. 00:04:175 (1) - A whistle at the end of the slider sounds great! basically add some whistles to all the piano sounds.
2. 00:06:110 (3) - Now to the start of the slider add another whistle here also please!
3. 00:08:045 (1) - The end curve after the red point is too curvy! how about you make it less curvy and in that way it makes it blanket better too? http://puu.sh/8HoVl.jpg
4. 00:13:852 (3) - You need to add a whistle to the start of the slider, that piano beat needs to have a sound to it.
5. 00:09:497 (2) - Whistle at the end of the slider? it sounds nice.
6. 00:17:723 (3) - If you plan on adding a whistle to the above, you should add a whistle here too, to make sure you be consistent with the hitsounds used.
7. 00:19:658 (1) - I think you should move the slider end point down a bit more so the blanket can also be improved here as well.
8. 00:21:594 (3) - Whistle added here so you can be consistent 00:13:852 (3) - please add to both , not just one.
9. 00:29:336 (3) - ^
10. 00:24:981 (2) - Whistle here so you can be consistent with 00:09:497 (2) - this time.
11. 00:31:271 (1,2,3) - The whistles when added all of them sound nice, so add one to the end of the slider and to note 2 and 3,
12. 00:35:142 (1) - Add a finish to the start of the slider.
13. 00:35:142 - Volume of kiai needs to be increased to 75% doesn't make sense to make it lower than 00:33:449 - In fact you need to lower the volume of the green line around 00:33:449 - To 50% .
14. 00:54:496 (1) - You should probably center it, so it's a bit more cleaner I suppose and make sure it's nice and symmetrical.
15. 01:02:200 (1) - The end curve can blanket better in this slider, as said previously too , just make the end less curvy and move it down a little bit more here.
16. 01:08:006 (3) - The end of the slider defeinitely needs to be silenced by dropping it to 10% volume, that soft-hitnormal is so loud here that It stands out from the music.

1. Following the hitsound suggestions I said in easy here too please. but I'll just mention them again orz
2. 00:06:110 (3) - Add a whistle here already explained why in easy.
3. 00:09:981 (3) - Same add a whistle here please.
4. 00:13:852 (3) - ^
5. 00:17:239 (2) - ^
6. 00:27:400 (1) - How about you try to make this more fun by making the rhythm harder? for some reason this feel's awfully similar to easy, and I suggest you try this : http://puu.sh/8HqtC.jpg
7. 00:32:239 (2,3) - Whistles to this whole thing.
8. 00:33:691 (1) - New combo here, vocals are starting again.
9. 00:48:668 (1) - I prefer you curve it upward than downward, the movement is shifting in a spiral and curving it upward will hint at that downward spiral when you return from the reverse in this slider.
10. 01:08:006 (3) - Lower the volume of the slider end please.

1. 00:04:175 (1,2) - I think it's a bit little overmap here, hmm there no vocals at 2, I don't understand why there needs to be a note added there, just remove it and reverse 1.
2. 00:11:916 (2) - This is like touching the HP bar, a little bit just move it a tiny bit down more so it doesn't touch the hp bar anymore, It's a big problem if it touches.
3. 00:33:691 (1) - LOL I think you missed the drum sampleset for the start of the slider, that clap doesn't sound right there honestly at least for me, sounds pretty bad too to me
4. 01:18:651 (1,2) - Wah, I find it if you used a slider for this part better than if you stacked circles, I can see your trying to make this really easy because were getting to the softer parts but a 3 way stack is >.>
5. 00:21:594 (1) - I don't think you aimed for this slider to be curved like this, how about you try something like this? http://puu.sh/8HrsW.jpg

1. 00:04:175 (1) - I'd prefer you reverse this slider and remove the circle following here, start with something really relaxing first and start to build up, that's pretty much what the song title says.
2. 00:22:320 - I don't think you should really skip any vocals here, the song has really low potential of being hard and interesting and any chance you get to add notes you should really do so it is actually "Hard" that being said you might want to add a slider here and end it at the white tick , try http://puu.sh/8HrOl.jpg
3. 00:33:691 (1) - New combo here?
4. 00:42:642 - I think you need to add a note here, there is a beat here and you need to build up momentum for the next note which is coming up because of its huge strength.
5. 00:44:336 - Same here, try to make the kiai more fun in this diff, by adding a note.
6. 00:56:916 - You need consistency of rhythms and if you plan on adding the note you did for the above there also needs to be a note here also, to remain consistent.
7. 00:59:819 - ^
8. 01:08:006 (1) - Reduce the volume of the end,
9. Apply hitsounds suggestions I said on easy/normal here too.

Tari wrote:

[Julie's Normal]

1. 00:04:175 (1,2) - I think it's a bit little overmap here, hmm there no vocals at 2, I don't understand why there needs to be a note added there, just remove it and reverse 1.
2. 00:11:916 (2) - This is like touching the HP bar, a little bit just move it a tiny bit down more so it doesn't touch the hp bar anymore, It's a big problem if it touches.
3. 00:33:691 (1) - LOL I think you missed the drum sampleset for the start of the slider, that clap doesn't sound right there honestly at least for me, sounds pretty bad too to me
4. 01:18:651 (1,2) - Wah, I find it if you used a slider for this part better than if you stacked circles, I can see your trying to make this really easy because were getting to the softer parts but a 3 way stack is >.>
5. 00:21:594 (1) - I don't think you aimed for this slider to be curved like this, how about you try something like this? http://puu.sh/8HrsW.jpg

Tari wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:04:175 (1) - A whistle at the end of the slider sounds great! basically add some whistles to all the piano sounds.
2. 00:06:110 (3) - Now to the start of the slider add another whistle here also please!
3. 00:08:045 (1) - The end curve after the red point is too curvy! how about you make it less curvy and in that way it makes it blanket better too? http://puu.sh/8HoVl.jpg
4. 00:13:852 (3) - You need to add a whistle to the start of the slider, that piano beat needs to have a sound to it.
5. 00:09:497 (2) - Whistle at the end of the slider? it sounds nice.
6. 00:17:723 (3) - If you plan on adding a whistle to the above, you should add a whistle here too, to make sure you be consistent with the hitsounds used.
7. 00:19:658 (1) - I think you should move the slider end point down a bit more so the blanket can also be improved here as well.
8. 00:21:594 (3) - Whistle added here so you can be consistent 00:13:852 (3) - please add to both , not just one.
9. 00:29:336 (3) - ^
10. 00:24:981 (2) - Whistle here so you can be consistent with 00:09:497 (2) - this time.
11. 00:31:271 (1,2,3) - The whistles when added all of them sound nice, so add one to the end of the slider and to note 2 and 3,
12. 00:35:142 (1) - Add a finish to the start of the slider.
13. 00:35:142 - Volume of kiai needs to be increased to 75% doesn't make sense to make it lower than 00:33:449 - In fact you need to lower the volume of the green line around 00:33:449 - To 50% .
14. 00:54:496 (1) - You should probably center it, so it's a bit more cleaner I suppose and make sure it's nice and symmetrical.
15. 01:02:200 (1) - The end curve can blanket better in this slider, as said previously too , just make the end less curvy and move it down a little bit more here.
16. 01:08:006 (3) - The end of the slider defeinitely needs to be silenced by dropping it to 10% volume, that soft-hitnormal is so loud here that It stands out from the music.

done

[Normal]

1. Following the hitsound suggestions I said in easy here too please. but I'll just mention them again orz
2. 00:06:110 (3) - Add a whistle here already explained why in easy.
3. 00:09:981 (3) - Same add a whistle here please.
4. 00:13:852 (3) - ^
5. 00:17:239 (2) - ^
6. 00:27:400 (1) - How about you try to make this more fun by making the rhythm harder? for some reason this feel's awfully similar to easy, and I suggest you try this : http://puu.sh/8HqtC.jpg
7. 00:32:239 (2,3) - Whistles to this whole thing.
8. 00:33:691 (1) - New combo here, vocals are starting again.
9. 00:48:668 (1) - I prefer you curve it upward than downward, the movement is shifting in a spiral and curving it upward will hint at that downward spiral when you return from the reverse in this slider.
10. 01:08:006 (3) - Lower the volume of the slider end please.

done

[Hard]

1. 00:04:175 (1) - I'd prefer you reverse this slider and remove the circle following here, start with something really relaxing first and start to build up, that's pretty much what the song title says.
2. 00:22:320 - I don't think you should really skip any vocals here, the song has really low potential of being hard and interesting and any chance you get to add notes you should really do so it is actually "Hard" that being said you might want to add a slider here and end it at the white tick , try http://puu.sh/8HrOl.jpg
3. 00:33:691 (1) - New combo here?
4. 00:42:642 - I think you need to add a note here, there is a beat here and you need to build up momentum for the next note which is coming up because of its huge strength.
5. 00:44:336 - Same here, try to make the kiai more fun in this diff, by adding a note. not feeling anything there, no change
6. 00:56:916 - You need consistency of rhythms and if you plan on adding the note you did for the above there also needs to be a note here also, to remain consistent. ^
7. 00:59:819 - ^ ^
8. 01:08:006 (1) - Reduce the volume of the end,
9. Apply hitsounds suggestions I said on easy/normal here too.

Pretty nice map, good job.

vahn10 wrote:

[General]
Timing is incosistent, fix it!

[Beginner]

Yay CS0 Still alive! and Tick rate 0.5! because Cs2 and Tick rate 1 is too mainstream now we need AR -2

00:11:916 (1) - Symmetry Howwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ;_; I think all I had to do was move the first red left one? I'm so bad at this game.

vahn10 wrote:

[General]
Timing is incosistent, fix it! fix coming soon lol

[Easy]
00:09:497 (2) - Remove whistle on head nop


[Normal]
00:15:787 (1) - whistle on both head and tail done done and done
00:23:529 (1) - whistle on head
00:24:981 (2) - whistle on tail

vahn10 wrote:

[Julie's normal]
The hitsound pattern especially on kiai time is incorrect, please make it the same as others

Narcissu wrote:

[general]
i think you need some custom colours yes yes yes! love it, thank you!

Combo1 : 255,128,192
Combo2 : 128,128,192
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 128,128,255

you volume is too low imo , maybe player can't get anything return when she click , i suggest you volume more than 30% unless slider tail & spinner i think volume is ok

aimod say you Beginner & Easy 's uninherited timing points conflict with other diff. new timing soon!

[easy]

i suggest your DS use 1.2 or 1.3 instead 1.1，object too closed imo 1.1 is good

00:00:295 (1) - use complex slider if the slider too long , and use simple slider if the slider not long ↓↓↓ no change

SPOILER

00:13:852 (3) - the slider arc too big for common slider ?

00:17:723 (3,4,1) - To separate them ， it's too crowded to read ↓↓↓ i think its okay.

SPOILER

00:44:820 (3,4,5) - it's too difficult in Easy diff ， you can merge 00:44:820 (3,4) - ，use a slider changed

00:48:668 (1) - short slider don't need bend i want it in a circle

01:22:522 (3) - ↓↓↓ i will try to add this later!! very nice

SPOILER

i'm just pointing out some points , you can change more in your map √

[normal]

DS less than 1.0 is unreasonable imo , why player move mouse in the object slower than in slider ? many normals do this, i think it plays and looks very nice. 1.0+ distance looks too far and disconnected, not have good blankets with big distance snap

00:46:755 (1,2,1,2,3) - it's too confuse to read in normal i think its ok

01:08:006 (3) - use complex slider if the slider too long .... ill try something new soon

01:20:829 - red timing should just the same other diff new timing coming soon!

why your Normal diff better than your Easy ？uh.. thank you?

01:22:522 (1) - ↓↓↓ ill try to makesomething like this

SPOILER

good luck ><

Pjecoo wrote:

Hi.
As requested.

Normal:
00:23:529 (1) - Improve the design of the slider. no change
00:27:400 (1) - Same ^^. no change
01:08:006 (3) - THIS!! It's like you've been new at mapping. Make shorter slider, and set Slider Velocity to 0.50 for ex. i would, but i dont want that big of a slider to have a velocity change, the player may not be able to see or feel the big change and mess up there. i think keeping the same velocity is good. i change it at the last slider because it is short and its hard to mess up on.

Hard:
00:24:981 (2,3) - Little closer to each other. i think theyre fine
00:31:271 (1) - Improve slider design. For ex. no changehttp://puu.sh/8M7We.jpg
00:32:723 (2,3) - Little closer to each other.no change

Hope that'll helps
If not, then sorry.
Good Luck!

Narcissu wrote:

[Julie's Normal]

i suggest your DS use 1.2 instead 1.0，object too closed imo

00:33:691 (1,2) - i suggest you never overlap in Normal diff Honnestly, I never put that there, I don't know what happen to my difficulty, been like twice I see it there, I was like wdf, reput at the original place, and give new update...don't know why is still there haha...D: Sowwy, but will be a great tip if I really did this :3!!

00:35:142 (2,3) - jump ? ^

01:12:845 (1) - try some different slider , consult Hard diff I'll see about this one :3

good luck ><

Pjecoo wrote:

Julie's Normal:
00:00:295 (1,2,3) - My ears gonna blow. Set here volume at 5-10% not 20%. Fixed
00:36:594 (3) - Put it little bit closer to 00:35:142 (2) - For normal diff, it's a big jump. Sorry my version didn't get update...don't know how it end up there
01:06:070 (2) - Improve slider design. For ex. http://puu.sh/8M7DH.jpg. Nop trying to do a blanket with next note x,x
01:12:845 (1) - Make a shorter slider that ends in 01:13:812 (and make it better than this one). Fixed

Marinska wrote:

Hello Again samplefish...
here from my Queue hope this helped..
Let's try to full mod.. ara~ you have 2 normal diff... i just mod 1 diff with same Difficulty
i'll choose one of them...

[General]
It's (TV Size) song Right.. so add Ed or Op in Tag done, thanks!

[Easy]
01:12:845 (4)- x:88 y:56 for remove distance conflik in Aimod no change

[Normal]
Open Aimod check distance snap
01:04:861 (4)- x:60 y:256 same like easy... to remove distance conflik in Aimod fixed
01:12:845 (4) - x:476 y:344 ^^ no change
I'm just suggest you to place the note at there.. not sure where you mean
but is up to you to place it in anywhere but you must remove distance snap conflik in Aimod for Easy and Normal Diff fixed one, rest are fine

[Hard]
00:34:416 (3) - check the distance.. (3) is to far than (1) to (2) i suggest to use 1.2x distance snap changed
just it for hard i think.. or check Aimod.. and try to remove unuseless timming point

I think just it ... i hope this helped...
Nice song~! btw.. really enjoy it..
sorry for my bad mod.. wrote Fixed,changed,or added..
so i can learning about my modding...

Pjecoo wrote:

Hi.
As requested.

Lanturn's Beginner:
I know it's beginner diff, but change CS to at least +1. I'm worried new players will miss if the circle size is any smaller.
00:51:593 - Put circle here. No vocals really playing at this time, so no point to it.
00:59:335 - same ^^. ^

samplefish wrote:

ps, you didnt give me feedback on my mod on your plaza map, you only quoted it and said "changed some"

1. I'm sorry that I may be honest to point out the things I don't like.
2. All "the beginning of a section" that I mentioned means the long-white-line/first-white-line.

1. Plz make the WidescreenStoryboard consistent in all diffs. You didn't turn it on in Easy but did it in other diffs. I suggest you turn everyone off because you have no SB.

2. Ranking Criteria wrote:

   Uninherited timing sections must be the same in every difficulty.

   Therefore, even though you got the timing from kpy's map, the ranking criteria changed. You must fix it.
3. Besides, there are so many inherited time points unsnapped...

1. I'm also wondering about the CS problem. You should ask BATs for sure message.
2. Well, I think a louder sound is needed for beginners, especially the part out of Kiai time, so that they can find the rhythm more easily with it. Maybe about 5%~10% volume up?
3. 00:27:400 (1) - All right here. But it make no sense for the beginners. Maybe they will think it is common in all maps.
4. 00:43:852 - You know how to add the green line to change the hitsound. So I'm wondering whether you know how to use the green line to change the hitsound of slidertick. If the slidertick here sounds the same as Clap, it will be great!
5. 00:47:723 - 00:49:635 - ^ I strongly recommend to add it at these 2 places because it is really empty!
6. 00:57:400 - ^ A heavy sound here in the music.
7. 01:01:260 - ^
8. 01:03:167 - ^
9. 00:56:432 (3) - Move the white point in the middle to x|104 y|216, and the point at the tail to x|132 y|292.

1. Also a bit volume up will be fine.
2. 00:09:497 (2) - I don't think there need 2 whistle here. It's better to remove the latter one imo.
3. 00:24:981 (2) - ^
4. 00:17:723 (3) - Move the red point to x|425 y|242 for better blanket. But you have to move the following ones to keep the distance consistent. It depends on you.
5. 00:23:045 (4) - It is ok to make it straight since it is ugly in curve style.
6. 00:26:433 (4) - Add a whistle on the head? Since the voice here is really loud.
7. 00:29:336 (3) - It will be really better if you remove the tail whistle imo.
8. 00:37:078 (3) - Add a finish on the head will be really better.
9. 00:44:820 (3,1) - ^ But pay attention you need to remove the green lines here.00:44:699 - 00:44:941 - (It is not snapped, but you know which two I'm saying)
10. 00:52:561 (3) - ^
11. 00:54:496 (1) - ^ Both head and tail. Since they are all on the beginning of a timing section.
12. 01:02:200 (1) - ^
13. 01:04:135 (3) - ^
14. 01:08:006 (3) - ^
15. 00:42:884 (1) - Move the tail point to x|332 y|239
16. 00:49:635 (3) - Add whistle on the head.
17. 01:00:300 (2) - ^
18. 00:49:635 (3) - Move the white point in the middle to x|95 y|282, and the point at the tail to x|117 y|301.

19. Ranking Criteria wrote:

    Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible.

    01:08:006 (3) - The tail's silence is kinda unrankable! You must fix it or ask BATs to make sure of it.
20. After all, you got the hitsound from kpy. So I think you should make full use of them since they are really good!

1. 00:09:981 (3) - The same as EZ. Don't have to whistle here even though it is on the beginning of a section. All the hitsounds are for better listening but not for the so-called consistent imo.
2. 00:17:239 (2) - Well, I don't like the double whistle here either. BUT I think 00:24:981 (2) - is ok, since the piano here is in a high pitch.
3. 00:32:239 (2) - ^
4. 00:35:142 (1) - You'd better use a heavier Finish hitsound here. It is a very stressed sound.
5. Well, add Finish on most of the beginning of a section in Kiai time will improve your hitsound a lot, just as I've mentioned in EZ.
6. 00:44:578 (2,3,4,5) - I don't suggest you use pattern like this. Because players will think they share the same feeling of the song. But even though the rhythm here is the same, the feeling is totally different.
   
   If you don't know what I'm talking about, plz click this

   00:44:578 (2,3) - They share a whole part "Kimi e".
   00:45:787 (4) - This is used for make the rhythm better but cannot be found in vocal.
   00:46:029 (5) - This is a start of a new part.
   So I think 00:44:578 (2,3) - and 00:45:787 (4,5) - have totally different feelings since 00:45:787 (4,5) - is not a complete part.
7. 00:49:635 (3) - I highly suggest you add a hitsound on the head. Because the tone of the vocal is high. Emphasizing it DOES make sense. However, I don't know which hitsound should be chosen because no one in your hitsounds fit this IMO.
8. 01:08:006 (3) - The same as EZ.

1. The same Finish problem. I guess you should add more Finish hitsound on the beginning of sections. 00:42:884 (2) - for example.
2. 00:04:175 (1) - I really DO NOT suggest you do that. It will mislead many players!
3. 00:09:981 (3) - The same as EZ & NM.
4. 00:11:916 (2) - Why did you add it on the tail?
5. 00:17:239 (1) - Set NC here is not a good idea. Not a beginning of a section nor a beginning of a new part of vocal.
6. 01:03:651 (1) - ^
7. 00:27:884 (2) - Remove whistle here will be better.
8. 00:33:691 (1,2) - Ugly patterns with overlap... A not well-designed overlap is usually unpopular. Don't try it.
9. 00:35:142 (2,3) - So you're training players' reading skills by making much farther distance? That's not a good idea!
10. 00:39:013 (1,3) - Not a good idea to add whistle here. Sounds really weird.
11. 00:40:949 (1) - What's wrong with it? Why is it a soft-clap instead of a finish? Somehow Awful...
12. 00:58:125 (1) - ^
13. 00:41:916 (1) - 2 consecutive claps are not a good idea at all! Remove the latter one, plz.
14. 00:44:820 (2) - ^ I'm sorry to say that this clap is really redundant.
15. 00:48:207 (1) - A bad clap. You really needn't add so many claps to stress the sounds that are not stressed in the music. It is somehow meaningless in Normal Diff. Even in Insane/Ex diffs, this work is hard to do either.
16. 00:48:668 (2) - Not a good finish at the tail. Move it to the head of 00:50:626 (1) - .
17. 00:57:884 (3,4,5,6) - Not a good rhythm and NC. The real stressed sound is at 00:58:367 - . So you'd better make some changes on 00:58:125 (4) - to make 00:58:125 (4) - a single circle or a beginning of a slider for better rhythm and NC controlling.
18. 01:01:740 (1) - Remove NC.
19. 01:02:200 (5) - Move the fourth point from the head x|389 y|104, and make the tail point to x|416 y|179.Also add a clap at tail.
20. 01:06:070 (2) - Add a clap at tail.
21. 01:08:006 (1) - Too close from the previous one.
22. 01:20:829 (1) - ^ because you slow down the BPM. But I highly suggest you keep the distance consistent.
23. Overall - Umm, you can work better on patterns such as blankets or symmetrical things but not just make little bit weird long sliders. Besides, you'd better do more work on the hitsound. It seems that you are not so good at it.

1. Almost the same hitsound opinion in EZ and NM, so I'm not gonna mention it again.
2. 00:33:933 (2,3,4) - Not a good idea to make them straight because it seems not beautiful with 00:33:691 (1) - too close to 00:34:416 (3) - . Try to make 00:34:416 (3) - more downward will be better. Also for better flow.
3. 00:42:642 (5) - ^ Upward.
4. 00:41:674 (3,1) - A little bit touched with each other. Try to seperate them.
5. 00:49:635 (4,5,6,7,8) - A weird rhythm? At least for me.

F D Flourite wrote:

From my Modding Queue~

Well, I'm sorry that I finished some diffs' mods several days ago. Maybe you've got a new one but I didn't check my mods anymore~
And I didn't mod the Risen diff because you added it after your post in my queue so I regard it as WIP. Sorry.

Non-emphasis -- something I think is able to be better in my own opinion.
Bold-emphasis -- something I highly recommend to be fixed.
Red-emphasis -- Unrankable issue or something serious like that.

P.S.

1. I'm sorry that I may be honest to point out the things I don't like.
2. All "the beginning of a section" that I mentioned means the long-white-line/first-white-line.

[General]

1. Plz make the WidescreenStoryboard consistent in all diffs. You didn't turn it on in Easy but did it in other diffs. I suggest you turn everyone off because you have no SB. fixed

2. Ranking Criteria wrote:

   Uninherited timing sections must be the same in every difficulty.

   Therefore, even though you got the timing from kpy's map, the ranking criteria changed. You must fix it. working to fix, expecting new timing soon!
3. Besides, there are so many inherited time points unsnapped...

[Easy]

1. Also a bit volume up will be fine. i think its ok
2. 00:09:497 (2) - I don't think there need 2 whistle here. It's better to remove the latter one imo. no change
3. 00:24:981 (2) - ^ ^
4. 00:17:723 (3) - Move the red point to x|425 y|242 for better blanket. But you have to move the following ones to keep the distance consistent. It depends on you. changed
5. 00:23:045 (4) - It is ok to make it straight since it is ugly in curve style. done
6. 00:26:433 (4) - Add a whistle on the head? Since the voice here is really loud. done
7. 00:29:336 (3) - It will be really better if you remove the tail whistle imo. yes
8. 00:37:078 (3) - Add a finish on the head will be really better. done.
9. 00:44:820 (3,1) - ^ But pay attention you need to remove the green lines here.00:44:699 - 00:44:941 - (It is not snapped, but you know which two I'm saying) fixed all
10. 00:52:561 (3) - ^
11. 00:54:496 (1) - ^ Both head and tail. Since they are all on the beginning of a timing section. not sure what you mean, but added finishes to them. hopefully thats what you meant
12. 01:02:200 (1) - ^
13. 01:04:135 (3) - ^
14. 01:08:006 (3) - ^
15. 00:42:884 (1) - Move the tail point to x|332 y|239 done
16. 00:49:635 (3) - Add whistle on the head. done
17. 01:00:300 (2) - ^
18. 00:49:635 (3) - Move the white point in the middle to x|95 y|282, and the point at the tail to x|117 y|301. looks funky, are these the right points?

19. Ranking Criteria wrote:

    Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible.

    01:08:006 (3) - The tail's silence is kinda unrankable! You must fix it or ask BATs to make sure of it. unsilenced
20. After all, you got the hitsound from kpy. So I think you should make full use of them since they are really good!

[Normal]

1. 00:09:981 (3) - The same as EZ. Don't have to whistle here even though it is on the beginning of a section. All the hitsounds are for better listening but not for the so-called consistent imo. i like to have them with the piano.
2. 00:17:239 (2) - Well, I don't like the double whistle here either. BUT I think 00:24:981 (2) - is ok, since the piano here is in a high pitch. i think theyre both ok
3. 00:32:239 (2) - ^ ^
4. 00:35:142 (1) - You'd better use a heavier Finish hitsound here. It is a very stressed sound. [/color]
5. Well, add Finish on most of the beginning of a section in Kiai time will improve your hitsound a lot, just as I've mentioned in EZ. added some.
6. 00:44:578 (2,3,4,5) - I don't suggest you use pattern like this. Because players will think they share the same feeling of the song. But even though the rhythm here is the same, the feeling is totally different. fixed, very nice point.
   
   If you don't know what I'm talking about, plz click this

   00:44:578 (2,3) - They share a whole part "Kimi e".
   00:45:787 (4) - This is used for make the rhythm better but cannot be found in vocal.
   00:46:029 (5) - This is a start of a new part.
   So I think 00:44:578 (2,3) - and 00:45:787 (4,5) - have totally different feelings since 00:45:787 (4,5) - is not a complete part.
7. 00:49:635 (3) - I highly suggest you add a hitsound on the head. Because the tone of the vocal is high. Emphasizing it DOES make sense. However, I don't know which hitsound should be chosen because no one in your hitsounds fit this IMO. i hope a whistle will do.
8. 01:08:006 (3) - The same as EZ. fixed

[Hard]

1. Almost the same hitsound opinion in EZ and NM, so I'm not gonna mention it again. changed a few.
2. 00:33:933 (2,3,4) - Not a good idea to make them straight because it seems not beautiful with 00:33:691 (1) - too close to 00:34:416 (3) - . Try to make 00:34:416 (3) - more downward will be better. Also for better flow. changed it up
3. 00:42:642 (5) - ^ Upward. changed
4. 00:41:674 (3,1) - A little bit touched with each other. Try to seperate them. oky
5. 00:49:635 (4,5,6,7,8) - A weird rhythm? At least for me. mm no change

[At last]
At least you did a great job in patterns and most of the rhythms~

Good luck~

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Samah wrote:

From queue:

[Easy]
00:04:175 (1) - Move this up a tiny bit. They overlap during play. fixed

[Normal]
01:05:103 (5,1) - Could you make this blanket smoother? Maybe like this: http://puu.sh/8NbAA.jpg i changed it myself, thanks for pointing it out!!
I know it doesn't look much different... XD

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[Hard]
00:24:981 (2) - Move like this: http://puu.sh/8Ncxp.jpg no change
00:26:191 (4) - Add NC. no change
00:27:400 (1) - Remove NC. ^
00:32:723 (2) - Move like this: http://puu.sh/8NcBu.jpg i want the 1.3 spacing on those three notes
00:33:933 (2) - Fix spacing like this: http://puu.sh/8NcDe.jpg changed, and thank you very much for the code!
00:36:836 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - If you change distance spacing to 1.1x and make the blanketing nice: http://puu.sh/8NcPc.jpg
This code also moves (1,2) of the next combo to stack properly with slider (5).

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00:42:400 (4,5) - Move these closer to the slider: http://puu.sh/8NcVx.jpg there were kind of originally like that, haha. i like them better like this
01:01:260 (6) - Nicer blanket: fixed, thank you for the code once again!

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Lovely song, great maps.

thank you for the great mod! i really appreciate the time you spent on it (you made the codes on top of the suggestions too!)

Samah wrote:

From queue:

[Lanturn's Beginner]
HOLY MASSIVE HITCIRCLES BATMAN.
I.... I don't even. <_<
They're so big that turning on Easy mod doesn't affect the size. :3 Totally is a beginner difficulty.. no?
SV 0.40 with distance snap 1.5x. that's crazy! XD
Anyway...
00:02:246 (2,1) - Move these apart a little bit. I changed this pattern around. I didn't like the tail end of (2)
01:05:103 (2,1) - Make this blanket nicer. It's a bit sharp. Fixed thanks.

osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:祈り~You Raise Me Up (TV Size)
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Version:Lanturn's Beginner
Source:Romeo x Juliet
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1. 00:32:239 - this part is off. the hitcircles hit after the piano might need to change bpm or offset for this small section

1. this feels the same as your Normal diff in terms of how difficult it is o3o

1. 00:33:691 (1) - i would suggest changing this into a 1-reverse slider so that it separates itself from the next big vocal section at 00:35:142 (2). it also follows the vocals and drums nicely!
2. 00:35:142 (2) - add NC for a new section, especially kiai time section
3. 01:07:038 - youre skipping a pretty big drum section here D: maybe shorten slider and add a 1-reverse slider during the drums? like so~
   
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4. 01:12:845 (1) - the head of the slider has the biggest impact! the tail is pretty weak. same with the vocals. the vocal at 01:13:812 - is a lot stronger than the one at 01:12:845 - . to match up strong with strong, i suggest doing something like this! it also captures the vocals in the middle at 01:13:329 - . note that in my suggested example, i took out the hitcircle at 01:14:780 -
   
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1. 00:06:110 (1) - ctrl g this slider would make it flow better from the previous slider
2. 00:40:949 (5) - add NC to start NC on the large white tick & at guitar section in music
3. 00:41:191 (1) - remove NC
4. 01:04:135 (5) - add ^ except for drum
5. 01:04:377 (1) - remove^
6. 01:22:280 (2,1) - your spinner is ontop of your slider o_o can you do that? is that rankable? im not sure lol
   
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