Lots of active/passive issues here, you have strong beats landing on either slider ticks, reverses, and ends (passive objects) as opposed to slider starts and circles (active objects). My recommendation to you would be to go through each of your rhythms, and see if its nice and makes sense to play! - Jenny, Lust
Generally watch your spacing, remember that a spacing of 1.0 is the length of the slider, so below that reduces the intensity of play and above that is a speedier play. So try to make patterns with this in mind, I pointed out a few which were offensively obvious; so skim through the map and fix them. If you need a bit of help, hit me up. - Hula
00:02:131 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe it would be a good idea to change 2,3,4,5 to a kick-slider (a slider with several repeats, just like 00:02:131 (1) - ) as well - Kitokofox, Jenny
00:02:631 (2,3,4,5) - How about decreasing the volume of those hitsounds? They sound quite noisy as they are now. - Irreversible
00:04:131 - I personally would like to see a long slider here; it goes well with the vocals and supports the calm part of this song. (00:04:131 - to 00:04:631 - ) - Irreversible
00:07:131 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think that you should put the sliders a beat backwards, so slider is at 3 and 6 instead of 4 and 7. It feels more fitting with the music. In fact, a few of the sliders sound quite a bit at odd intervals throughout the map. I know this because I have fallen victim to it in my own maps. There’s plenty of chances in the song to use a slider with the rhythm and the vocals, if you want to. - Kitokofox
00:08:131 (6,7) - This is a quite weird antijump, and there is no real indicator for this. I suggest spacing it normal, without any addition or decreasing of the DS. - Irreversible
00:08:881 (8,1) - This stack is a bit awkward, i don’t really see a reason for this, nothing noticeable to be emphasized for this stack - Kibbleru
00:11:381 (4) - You might want to move that a little to the right, it doesn’t really look tidy like this. I mean, the curve gets way too harsh in comparison with the rest of the note complex you’ve got there. - rEdo
00:11:881 (5,6) - Why are you using another kind of DS again here? You should really stay consistent, in order to keep the diff as polished as possible. - Irreversible
00:13:131 (3) - Consider moving this slider to 00:12:881 - to follow vocals? - Kibbleru
00:15:381 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern, well the sliders don’t really compliment each other; is there a chance you could try redoing this pattern? Keep in mind that the flow should be prioritized here. Also, make sure that you stay consistent with the DS, where you’re not intending to place a jump - Irreversible
00:18:381 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - I think this is too lengthy of a stream for a hard difficulty. It was probably accptable in the beginning of the song. I was thinking of taking away the 8 and doing a little fancy with the 9.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1531872 I came up with this I guess, you can try if you want. - Kitokofox
00:18:631 (6) - Missing clap ! - Shiro
00:19:131 (1,2,3,4,5) - What’s up with this spacing again? Try staying consistent, unless you’re trying to emphasize something special; but I don’t think this is the case here! You might try a pentagon shape here, press CTRL + SHIFT + D once, and you’ll figure out how to make a good looking one. - Irreversible
00:23:131 (1,2) - What’s up with this distance snap change? Seems way too big to be acceptable. - rEdo
00:23:881 (3) - To keep the flow here, I suggest moving 3 down, so it follows the path of slider 2.
http://puu.sh/8gscR/93e39a263e.jpg - Irreversible
00:37:881 (4) - Put this on x:121 y:135 to complete the square as it looks tidier, maybe rotate the slider and reshape it slightly. I’m not a huge fan of off beat sliders, but this isn’t too offensive. - Hula
00:38:881 (6) - this slider overlaps 00:37:631 (3,4) - in a bad way, try to rework the pattern to get rid of it - Kibbleru
00:41:881 (4,6) - the overlap makes this part look extremely messy and cramped space the blanket out a bit - Kibbleru
00:44:381 (3,4) - Once again weird distance snap decrease. - rEdo
00:49:881 (3,5) - Copy and paste the same slider please, preferably (5). - Hula
00:52:131 (2,3) - I like how this looks, you could use it in the beginning of the song too. Style is one thing and consistency is another. - Kitokofox
00:53:131 (1) - Make this a 1/1 slider with a clap on the slider end. It follows the vocals better and flows out of the 2 repeating sliders much more nicely. Since before there was this real speedup in flow which wasn’t justified. - Hula
00:54:381 (5) - Put a ½ slider on the white tick previous, this fixes the issue of making the 1/1 before and also follows the vocals better. - Hula
00:57:881 (4,5,6,1) - this part flows very awkwardly considering you have to jump back and forth from (5) to (6) to (1). consider repositioning things a bit. - Kibbleru
01:03:381 (6) - consider ctrl g’ing this slider, i think it will flow better, also the blanket could be improved - Kibbleru, Hula
01:02:881 (5) - As you can see, slider 5 goes down, and 6 is on the top, with a pretty harsh angle, I don’t think it doesn’t play that good. You can try replacing it, I think you should get the idea now! - Irreversible
01:04:631 (8,1) - Avoid stacking these because the (1) slider plays faster with no real reason in the music. Try just readjusting what you have to something like this,
http://puu.sh/8gt2R.jpg . - Hula
01:12:631 (4,5,6,7) - Try making this one symmetric? - Irreversible
01:13:631 (8) - I’d say new combo here. - rEdo
01:16:131 (5) - I’m wondering why you didn’t finish the star pattern here, it would have been neat. - Irreversible
01:16:131 (5,6,7,8,9) - If you want to keep this pattern, try getting a neater curve then. Ctrl + Shift + D will help you again. - Irreversible
01:19:131 (2) - DS this to 1.0x because a reduction in spacing makes the map less intense, but there’s no reason for that to be the case, since the song is pretty steady at this point. - Hula
01:21:631 (2) - DS this to 1.0x, for the same reason as above. - Hula
01:26:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Streams with increasing distance snap are fine, but… not in this case. Increase it by a much lower amount or stick to one distance snap as a whole. - rEdo
01:26:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - The stream here looks a little odd, and it also too much stream for a Hard difficulty. The changed snap at the end looks a little odd compared to the rest. I suggest you make it slowly faster or don’t increase it at all. - Kitokofox
01:27:131 (1) - I think you should make this note a slider instead of 2. - Kitokofox
01:27:131 (1) - add a finish hitsound to lead in the kiai better? - Irreversible
01:27:131 (1,2) - Replace this with a 1/1 slider, the vocals cover a length of 1 beat so there’s no reason to have a passive slider which will play clunkily since it’s offbeat. Basically the same reason as before with the lead into the kiai. - Hula
01:28:881 (4,5,6,7,8) - That seems like a really odd pattern to me; how is the stack explained? I would, once again, go with normal spacing, so the diff looks more polished overall. - Irreversible
01:30:381 (9,1,2,3) - (9) and (1) have a vertical spacing difference of 8 coords and (2) and (3) have a vertical spacing difference of 12 coords. Make this difference the same so it’s geometrically a square at an angle. - Hula
01:31:381 (4,2) - I like the symmetry, but overlapping sliders isn’t a good thing. - Kitokofox
01:31:881 (5,2,1) - Spacing again, stay consistent. - Irreversible
01:32:881 (3) - Why is there a reduced spacing, increase it from the previous object please. - Hula
01:33:631 (3,4,5) - I don’t see a real need for these 1/4s, I think they should stay as two 1/2s.
01:41:131 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved - Lust
01:44:881 (6,1) - why the spacing change? the music doesn’t really demand it IMO - Lust
01:46:381 (5) - 168:260 for better stack on the hitburst - Lust
01:47:256 - Maybe a spinner with fading green lines to finish out the difficulty? - Lust, Kitokofox
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I just complaint with some triplets (mighty not all!). I feel it's a bit like a plague on harder diffs, since a few mappers abuse of them by placing them where has no music reason to do it. And by triplets, I'm saying not to normal triplets (three notes, either stacked or not), but also "combined triplets" such 00:11:076 (3,4,5) - i.e., a "note, note, slider" or a "slider, note, note" patterns.
