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Don't do it too fast. Take your time on editing a beatmap or doing a beatmap. Take it slowly...
Doublecheck your hitsounds as well, a lot of them sound out of place - try and match them up with the instruments in the bgm (claps->snares for example)
Keep at it though!
2 KUDOSU IS KOMEH
from my M4M queue
[General]
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Topic Starter
well,i make normal diff (may)????
Topic Starter
You can do it but you need put the circles, sliders and spinners at the right time. Do your best and I'll try to see if some changes is need to be edit.gokugohan12468 wrote:
well,i make normal diff (may)????
Don't do it too fast. Take your time on editing a beatmap or doing a beatmap. Take it slowly...
Trust Mesheela901 wrote:
You can do it but you need put the circles, sliders and spinners at the right time. Do your best and I'll try to see if some changes is neef to be edit.gokugohan12468 wrote:
well,i make normal diff (may)????
Don't do it too fast. Take your time on editing a beatmap or doing a beatmap. Take it slowly...
Topic Starter
You need time to focus in your beatmap.gokugohan12468 wrote:
Here Normal Diff
I lazying for Mapping
rezoons
Salut 
,
Mod de ma queue:
Toutes tes diffs ont les mêmes défauts:
Beaucoup trop de spinners et d'endroits "vide" qui cassent le rythme. Je te conseille d'enlever une bonne partie des spinners et de mapper à la place ainsi que de combler une partie de ses trous dans la chanson.
Tes maps deviendront beaucoup plus agréables à jouer par la suite.
[Général]
,Mod de ma queue:
Toutes tes diffs ont les mêmes défauts:
Beaucoup trop de spinners et d'endroits "vide" qui cassent le rythme. Je te conseille d'enlever une bonne partie des spinners et de mapper à la place ainsi que de combler une partie de ses trous dans la chanson.
Tes maps deviendront beaucoup plus agréables à jouer par la suite.
[Général]
- Tu as beaucoup trop de kiai time, c'est unrankable. Sur les trois, le premier me semble complètement inutile. Je te conseille de l'enlever et tout sera bon.
- 00:03:084 (1,2,3,4) - Mauvais distance snapping, il doit être constant en Easy.
- 00:11:084 (1,2,3) - Mal alignés.
- 00:13:084 (4) - NC.
- 00:14:084 (6,1) - Mauvais distance snapping.
- 00:17:084 (3,4) - ^
- 00:19:584 (1,2) - ^
- 00:21:584 (3,4,5) - ^ etc.... Je vais pas tous les pointer mais tu as énormément d'erreurs comme celle-là. Je te conseille de tout vérifier et corriger tout ceux qui ne vont pas.
- 00:23:084 (4) - NC.
- 00:27:584 (2) - x=400 y=120 pour un parallélogramme parfait.
- 01:20:084 (4) - NC.
- 01:35:084 (1,1,1,1) - Ce genre de NC n'est accepté que dans de rare ca. Et là ce n'est pas le cas. Enlève-les.
- Toujours les mêmes problèmes de distance snapping qui doit être constant en Normal.
- 00:05:084 (3,4,5) - Mal alignés
- 00:11:334 (2) - x=176 y=148 rends mieux.
- 00:57:084 (1,2,3,4,5) - Presque symétrique mais ça ne l'est pas.
- Il y a beaucoup de streams qui n'ont pas l'air de suivre la chanson. On a parfois l'impression que les notes sont mises aléatoirement. Je te conseille de rechecker un peu tout ça.
Topic Starter
Merci rezoons pour le mod. Je vais essayer de refaire les difficulties.
Hello, M4M from my Modding Queue
[General]
[General]
- Kiai is not the same in all diffs
- Hard has different tags
- 00:09:084 (5,6,7) - They touch the slider before, it makes that very bad to see and to play, move it to another place?
- 00:30:584 (4,5) - Same thing
- 00:53:084 (1,2) - ^ Change sliders' shape
- 00:20:084 (2) - A symmetrical slider will be better
- 00:21:584 (3) - Also, making this the opposite will make a nice pattern. Try that:
- 00:39:084 (5,6) - There's a good pattern in here, but these two beats ruin that, try something like this:
- 00:42:084 (2) - Copy (1) and rearrange that, so they will be similar!
- 00:46:084 (2) - Move a bit to the right
- 00:57:084 (1) - Hidden by the slider, not good to see in an Easy
- 01:07:084 - Kiai should end here
- 01:40:084 (2) - Move a bit to the right (remember to fix spacing)
- 01:45:084 - I'd end kiai here and then add another little kiai time just for that note
- 00:05:084 (3,4,5) - Make them vertically linear
- 00:18:584 (6) - Fix spacing
- 00:19:084 (7) - NC here instead of 00:19:584 (1) -
- 00:20:084 (2) - Fix spacing
- 00:23:084 (5,6,7) - Not well spaced :\
- 00:45:084 (1,2,4,5,) - Not really appropriate for a Normal
- 00:47:584 (6) - ^
- 01:02:084 (4) - Little spacing issue
- 01:13:084 (5) - ^
- 01:25:584 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue that could be much confusing for noob players
What rezoons said, I found it overmapped, too many streams. Even if it's a "Hard" diff, it doesn't mean it has to be really hard! Song is quite slow so make it calm and enjoyable but quite challenging at the same time, better recheck it.
Topic Starter
Thx Leader!
Angelic Force
Hi, M4M from my queue!
Sorry if you didn't read my M4M rules, but just to let you know, I only map 2 difficulties (to be fair since my map only has 1 diff currently). Since your map has more than 2, and you didn't state which 2 difficulties you want modded, I decided to mod the Normal and Hard diffs.
General
Hard
Hope it helped, good luck with the map!
Sorry if you didn't read my M4M rules, but just to let you know, I only map 2 difficulties (to be fair since my map only has 1 diff currently). Since your map has more than 2, and you didn't state which 2 difficulties you want modded, I decided to mod the Normal and Hard diffs.
General
- Hitsounds are too loud for the song, change it to around 70% instead, during Kiai Time you can make it higher to around 80%
SPOILER
- 00:22:334 (6) - Not perfectly straight.
- 00:55:084 (5) - This loop is not symmetrical, looks slightly weird.
- 01:21:584 (8) - This is slightly slanted, not straight compared to 01:21:084 (7)
- 00:52:334 (1) - Move this slider 1/2 a beat later, so it starts from here 00:52:584, because it's hard to hear the background instruments at that part.
Hard
SPOILER
- 00:08:834 (4,5,6,7,8) - Don't stack these notes exactly on each other, maybe space them out to make a little part of the next circle barely visible.
- Try to change the circle size to 4. Most hard maps use circle size 4. Only some difficult insane maps use 5. Circle size 5 makes playing with Hard Rock mod very annoying.
- If you feel that changing the circle size to 4 makes the song too easy, you can change the AR to 7 to compensate for the difference.
Hope it helped, good luck with the map!
Topic Starter
Thanks Angelic Force!Angelic Force wrote:
Hi, M4M from my queue!
Sorry if you didn't read my M4M rules, but just to let you know, I only map 2 difficulties (to be fair since my map only has 1 diff currently). Since your map has more than 2, and you didn't state which 2 difficulties you want modded, I decided to mod the Normal and Hard diffs.
GeneralNormal
- Hitsounds are too loud for the song, change it to around 70% instead, during Kiai Time you can make it higher to around 80% OK
SPOILER
- 00:22:334 (6) - Not perfectly straight. Fixed.
- 00:55:084 (5) - This loop is not symmetrical, looks slightly weird. Change it to a weird shape.
- 01:21:584 (8) - This is slightly slanted, not straight compared to 01:21:084 (7) Fixed
- 00:52:334 (1) - Move this slider 1/2 a beat later, so it starts from here 00:52:584, because it's hard to hear the background instruments at that part. Fixed
HardSPOILER
- 00:08:834 (4,5,6,7,8) - Don't stack these notes exactly on each other, maybe space them out to make a little part of the next circle barely visible. Fixed
- Try to change the circle size to 4. Most hard maps use circle size 4. Only some difficult insane maps use 5. Circle size 5 makes playing with Hard Rock mod very annoying.
- If you feel that changing the circle size to 4 makes the song too easy, you can change the AR to 7 to compensate for the difference. OK
Hope it helped, good luck with the map!
Sorry for late mod and Because of poor English,when I mod other country person's map I can't do my best to describe all what I want to say-,-
General
You should set Current Position as Preview Point in all difs
Easy
00:09:084 (5),(6),(7) - First unbeautifully overlap with slider (4),then hard overlap in Easy difs
00:31:584 - Add hitsound finish
00:43:084 (3),(4),(5) - ~ 00:09:084
00:53:084 (1),(2) - unbeautifully slider,you can made it better
01:07:084 - ~ 00:31:584
01:29:584 (3),(4),(5),(1) - Very hard in basic player
01:43:084 - ~ 00:31:584 I think spinner add finish
Normal
00:15:584 (2) - distance with slider (1),make it balance
00:53:834 (3) - distince
00:57:084 (1),(3),(5) - in one line (2),(4) in other line
01:12:084 - unbeautiful overlap
Hard
You should adjust your distince in hard dif
00:08:834 (4) - distince
00:13:584 (8),(9) - right grid and not overlap
00:39:084 (7) - not overlap
01:37:084 (2) - distince
Good Luck
General
You should set Current Position as Preview Point in all difs
Easy
00:09:084 (5),(6),(7) - First unbeautifully overlap with slider (4),then hard overlap in Easy difs
00:31:584 - Add hitsound finish
00:43:084 (3),(4),(5) - ~ 00:09:084
00:53:084 (1),(2) - unbeautifully slider,you can made it better
01:07:084 - ~ 00:31:584
01:29:584 (3),(4),(5),(1) - Very hard in basic player
01:43:084 - ~ 00:31:584 I think spinner add finish
Normal
00:15:584 (2) - distance with slider (1),make it balance
00:53:834 (3) - distince
00:57:084 (1),(3),(5) - in one line (2),(4) in other line
01:12:084 - unbeautiful overlap
Hard
You should adjust your distince in hard dif
00:08:834 (4) - distince
00:13:584 (8),(9) - right grid and not overlap
00:39:084 (7) - not overlap
01:37:084 (2) - distince
Good Luck
Topic Starter
Thx Lucy_Heartfilia!Lucy_Heartfilia wrote:
Sorry for late mod and Because of poor English,when I mod other country person's map I can't do my best to describe all what I want to say-,-
General
You should set Current Position as Preview Point in all difsFixed
Easy
00:09:084 (5),(6),(7) - First unbeautifully overlap with slider (4),then hard overlap in Easy difsOk
00:31:584 - Add hitsound finishOk
00:43:084 (3),(4),(5) - ~ 00:09:084Ok
00:53:084 (1),(2) - unbeautifully slider,you can made it betterChange it to a weird slider but ok
01:07:084 - ~ 00:31:584 Ok
01:29:584 (3),(4),(5),(1) - Very hard in basic playerOk
01:43:084 - ~ 00:31:584 I think spinner add finishOk
Normal
00:15:584 (2) - distance with slider (1),make it balanceOk
00:53:834 (3) - distinceOk
00:57:084 (1),(3),(5) - in one line (2),(4) in other lineOk
01:12:084 - unbeautiful overlapOk
Hard
You should adjust your distince in hard difI'll check it.
00:08:834 (4) - distinceOk
00:13:584 (8),(9) - right grid and not overlapOk
00:39:084 (7) - not overlapOk
01:37:084 (2) - distinceOk
Good Luck
Hi~ m4m because i want a ticket :3
nice skin
[General]
[Easy]
[Normal]
[Hard]
nice skin
[General]
- 1.Your bg should be 1024x768, the current one is unrankable
2. There's a slight typo in Tags, lol it should be 'human' not 'humain'
3. AiMod says your Hard diff has different Tags. Tags in Hard diff has some words with capital letter, and easy diff and normal diff don't. you should check it and make it consistent.
4. since you have no storyboard, uncheck Letterbox during Breaks
5. the current hitsound is too loud, imo, maybe you can lower it to 70%-80%?
6. it's only suggestion, but how about muting the normal sliderslide?
[Easy]
- AR4 for a song with BPM 120 is too fast, i suggest AR3
OD-1? Since there are short spinners
00:03:084 (1,2) - i'm not really good at this, butif you're going to make a shape like Finn's head, but you could try like this
sorry i don't know how to put codes ;_;
00:07:084 (3) - new combo
00:12:084 (3) - add clap for consistency with 00:14:084 (6) -
00:14:084 (6) - remove finish and add it at 00:13:584 (5) - for consistency with 00:11:584 (2) -
00:17:084 (3) - remove finish and claps, but add claps only at slider's reverse arrow for consistency with 00:15:084 (1) -
00:19:084 (5) - should be nc (long white tick), then remove nc 00:19:584 (1) -
00:23:084 (4) - should be nc (long white tick), then remove nc 00:24:084 (1) -
00:30:584 (4,5) - they are kinda hidden behind previous slider. i suggest to change their position
00:41:084 (1) - distance error with previous circle
00:38:584 (4) - add clap?
00:39:084 (5) - move down one grid so it'll stack better with 00:37:584 (2) -
00:43:584 (4) - i suggest to move it somewhere else, since it's hidden by 00:42:084 (2) -
00:59:084 (4,5) - try not to stack in easiest diff
01:13:584 (4) - add clap for consistency with 01:11:084 (1) -
01:17:084 (4,5) - try not to stack in easiest diff
01:23:084 (1) - distance error with previous slider
01:30:584 (5,1) - try not to stack in easiest diff
kinda weird when the prologue has more hitsounds than the kiai times
[Normal]
- OD-1?
HP-1?
00:13:084 (6) - nc
00:15:084 (1) - distance error
00:17:084 (5) - i suggest to remove finish at slider's tail and reverse arrow
00:23:084 (7) - nc, then remove nc 00:24:084 (1) - , add nc 00:25:084 (3) -
00:31:584 (1) - add finish
00:52:584 (1,2) - stack them properly
01:05:084 (1) - add finish
01:38:084 (1) - remove nc, add nc at 01:39:084 (2) - (long white tick)
00:52:584 (1,2) - why not add flash kiai like easy diff?
you still need to improve the flow, but that'll came through experience
[Hard]
- it's kinda weird when Hard and Normal have the same slider velocity, imo
i suggest to add some notes between 00:03:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - and 00:07:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - for better rhythm flow
i suggest to add some notes between 00:07:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and 00:11:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - for better rhythm flow
aaand there are still more gaps between two patterns that i suggest you to fill with notes
00:13:084 (7,8,9) - stack them properly
00:19:084 (1) - well you can make them symmetry like the picture in easy diff
00:38:834 (6,7,8) - i suggest you to change their position since the current one is really confusing
00:53:209 - lol kiai should start 00:53:084 -
01:07:084 (1) - add finish
imo, i suggest you to make a consistent pattern (rhythm and hitsound) since most of them are irregular. you mostly add sliders and circles to accompany the vocal, much like 2010's style. you can check other people's mapping style
Topic Starter
Thx AlcapatCokelat!
Hi, M4M
Well that's all, good luck with your map!
Here's my map for M4M: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/87626
General
- You only lowered the volume in the Normal diff, lower it in Easy and Hard too.
- Really boring combo colors (grey), try making them more colorful to fit the background.
- I suggest you use Soft hitsounds instead of Normal hitsounds. I think it fits the song better.
- Kiai time is not the same throughout the diffs.
- The slider velocity is the same in each diff, try changing it up next time.
- Really inconsistent hitsounds. Try following the music or making sounds in a certain pattern.
Easy
- 00:03:084 (1,2) - try lining these up perfectly in the middle.
- 00:03:084 (1,2,3) - weird distance here, should always be around 1.00x.
- 00:17:084 (3) - take (1) and copy, paste, ctrl+h, ctrl+j for perfect symmetry here.
- 00:23:084 (1) - watch the distance here.
- 00:25:084 (4,5) - distance is too short between these.
- 00:26:084 (5,6,1) - for perfect triangles, use the ctrl+shift+D tool. It's really useful.
- 00:27:084 (1) - weird distance for the note before and the note after. Suggest moving to x:392 y:276
- 00:53:084 (1,2) - weird distance here, and maybe use a prettier slider shape. Wavy sliders are always a good idea.
- 00:57:084 (1) - in my opinion, it's ugly how this overlaps with the start of (2), and the end of (3).
- 01:16:084 (3) - recommend copying and flipping (1) to make symmetry.
- 01:18:084 (4) - does not stack perfectly on the end of (3).
- 01:19:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe a little too hard for Easy diff.
- 01:28:084 (2) - really ugly overlapping slider, try something else.
- 01:47:084 (1) - if you want a kiai burst on this note, start the kiai time on the note, not before it. this is the only diff you've done this on, though...
Normal
- 00:07:584 (2,3) - move so these aren't touching.
- 00:24:084 (4) - watch the distance
- 00:55:084 (5) - well, this slider is odd looking.
- 00:57:084 (1) - watch the distance
- 00:58:584 (6) - distance too short here.
Hard
Nice job.
Nice job.
Well that's all, good luck with your map!
Here's my map for M4M: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/87626
Topic Starter
Thx Cobra!
Sudden mod coming from nowhere.
EASY
00:41:084 What about this? http://puu.sh/3ptuu.png
00:48:584 Add a beat? http://puu.sh/3ptvB.png
01:01:584 A slider instead of 2 circles? http://puu.sh/3ptwC.png
01:12:084 What about this? http://puu.sh/3ptxv.png
01:23:084 and 01:24:084 They look irregular. Change them.
01:38:084 http://puu.sh/3ptyz.png
00:48:584 Add a beat? http://puu.sh/3ptvB.png
01:01:584 A slider instead of 2 circles? http://puu.sh/3ptwC.png
01:12:084 What about this? http://puu.sh/3ptxv.png
01:23:084 and 01:24:084 They look irregular. Change them.
01:38:084 http://puu.sh/3ptyz.png
NORMAL
00:12:084 Change circle position to x:472, y:292.
From 00:20:084 Almost all the sliders are mistimed for some reason,and it almost gave me nausea. I don't know if it is because of a timing change or something, but please, PLEASE, fix 'em all.
01:02:834 http://puu.sh/3ptAx.png
01:16:584 Change circle position to x:408, y:244.
From 00:20:084 Almost all the sliders are mistimed for some reason,
01:02:834 http://puu.sh/3ptAx.png
01:16:584 Change circle position to x:408, y:244.
HARD
Good luck!Hard is also hit by the freakin' mistimed slider syndrome. Worse, that makes sometimes you have two beats at the EXACT same time.
00:18:084 THAT JUMP IS NOT POSSIBLE BY HUMANS... Wait, that's the mistimed slider problem.
00:32:084 That slider looks like... Uh. ಠ_ಠ
00:50:084 Reverse slider.
01:43:584 Same as above.
00:18:084 THAT JUMP IS NOT POSSIBLE BY HUMANS... Wait, that's the mistimed slider problem.
00:32:084 That slider looks like... Uh. ಠ_ಠ
00:50:084 Reverse slider.
01:43:584 Same as above.
Topic Starter
Thx LilyWhite~
[Hard]
00:03:084 (1,2,3) - Everything between here and 00:16:834 (11) - Here is overmapped. Most of these notes aren't in the background music, and it's very unintuitive to play. I'd suggest remapping this section, paying more attention to the beats in the bgm - there doesn't need to be anywhere near this many notes!
00:18:584 (1) - Here, for example, would be a good place to use the streams from before - in order to match the drums in the background
00:22:584 (6) - Add note to match the vocals
00:22:834 (7) - ^
00:56:584 (7) - ^
00:56:834 (8) - ^
01:01:334 (2,3) - Make these one slider, with the start/end replacing those notes
01:14:084 (8) - This note is just in the middle of nowhere, tie it in with the previous pattern by bridging a slider or some notes in there
Double check the beats in this map and make sure you're covering all of them
[Normal]
00:11:084 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Very empty, place some more notes to cover some of the missing beats here
00:30:584 (1,2,3) - Make this a triangle
00:53:084 (2) - Extend this slider a half beat, 00:53:834 (3) - Move this slider back to the next white tick, and extend it's end to replace 00:54:584 (4) -
01:23:084 (1) - This spinner feels out of place
01:36:084 (4,5) - Move these three back a whole beat replacing the note that was there, and place a circle 01:37:084 (6) - Here
01:43:084 (1) - This spinner is awkward, It should start where it ends right now, and continue to the end of the song. Place notes instead here.
[Easy]
00:07:084 (1,2) - Make these two mirrors
00:27:084 (1,2) - Swap these two on the timeline, the circle should come after the repeat slider
00:31:584 (1) - Move the start of this over 00:31:084 (4) - Here, replacing the circle
00:43:084 (3,4,5) - Make a clean triangle
00:57:084 (1,2,3) - ^
01:20:084 (3,4) - I think these might look and feel better if they were parallel to 01:19:084 (1,2) -
There are a lot of missing beats in this mapset - making it feel very empty in places (especially in Hard), I would go back through and double check you've covered all the major beats in both the vocals or the rhythm, depending on the line of music you're following00:03:084 (1,2,3) - Everything between here and 00:16:834 (11) - Here is overmapped. Most of these notes aren't in the background music, and it's very unintuitive to play. I'd suggest remapping this section, paying more attention to the beats in the bgm - there doesn't need to be anywhere near this many notes!
00:18:584 (1) - Here, for example, would be a good place to use the streams from before - in order to match the drums in the background
00:22:584 (6) - Add note to match the vocals
00:22:834 (7) - ^
00:56:584 (7) - ^
00:56:834 (8) - ^
01:01:334 (2,3) - Make these one slider, with the start/end replacing those notes
01:14:084 (8) - This note is just in the middle of nowhere, tie it in with the previous pattern by bridging a slider or some notes in there
Double check the beats in this map and make sure you're covering all of them
[Normal]
00:11:084 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Very empty, place some more notes to cover some of the missing beats here
00:30:584 (1,2,3) - Make this a triangle
00:53:084 (2) - Extend this slider a half beat, 00:53:834 (3) - Move this slider back to the next white tick, and extend it's end to replace 00:54:584 (4) -
01:23:084 (1) - This spinner feels out of place
01:36:084 (4,5) - Move these three back a whole beat replacing the note that was there, and place a circle 01:37:084 (6) - Here
01:43:084 (1) - This spinner is awkward, It should start where it ends right now, and continue to the end of the song. Place notes instead here.
[Easy]
00:07:084 (1,2) - Make these two mirrors
00:27:084 (1,2) - Swap these two on the timeline, the circle should come after the repeat slider
00:31:584 (1) - Move the start of this over 00:31:084 (4) - Here, replacing the circle
00:43:084 (3,4,5) - Make a clean triangle
00:57:084 (1,2,3) - ^
01:20:084 (3,4) - I think these might look and feel better if they were parallel to 01:19:084 (1,2) -
Doublecheck your hitsounds as well, a lot of them sound out of place - try and match them up with the instruments in the bgm (claps->snares for example)
Keep at it though!
M4M from http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2445144/
Dont NC in upbeat
00:23:084 (1,4) - ^
00:13:084 (1,2,3) - use 00:11:084 (1,2,3) ctrl+H ctrl +J
00:09:584 (4) - add clap
00:18:584 (2) - ^
00:21:584 (4) - slider's head add clap
00:33:084 (1) - NC
00:40:084 (6) - remove clap or change it to whistle?
00:44:084 (5) - ^
00:48:084 - add a note with clap or whistle
01:14:084 - ^
01:14:584 (1) - remove this and 01:15:084 add a note
00:44:084 (8) - add whistle
00:44:584 (1) - remove NC
00:45:084 (2) - NC
00:46:834 (6) - move this to 00:47:084
00:53:084 (2) - NC
00:53:584 - add a note
00:53:834 (3) - move this to 00:54:084
00:59:084 (1) - remove NC
01:02:334 (5) - move this to 01:02:584
01:14:584 (1) - remove NC
01:34:584 (1) - ^
01:15:084 (2) - NC
01:35:084 (2) - ^
01:22:584 (1) - remove NC
Good Luck
General
I suggest that add a clap or whistle in every upbeat to fit the musicDont NC in upbeat
Easy
00:07:084 (1) - slider's end add clap00:23:084 (1,4) - ^
00:13:084 (1,2,3) - use 00:11:084 (1,2,3) ctrl+H ctrl +J
00:09:584 (4) - add clap
00:18:584 (2) - ^
00:21:584 (4) - slider's head add clap
00:33:084 (1) - NC
00:40:084 (6) - remove clap or change it to whistle?
00:44:084 (5) - ^
00:48:084 - add a note with clap or whistle
01:14:084 - ^
01:14:584 (1) - remove this and 01:15:084 add a note
Normal
00:40:084 (8) - change clap to whistle?00:44:084 (8) - add whistle
00:44:584 (1) - remove NC
00:45:084 (2) - NC
00:46:834 (6) - move this to 00:47:084
00:53:084 (2) - NC
00:53:584 - add a note
00:53:834 (3) - move this to 00:54:084
00:59:084 (1) - remove NC
01:02:334 (5) - move this to 01:02:584
01:14:584 (1) - remove NC
01:34:584 (1) - ^
01:15:084 (2) - NC
01:35:084 (2) - ^
01:22:584 (1) - remove NC
Good Luck
Yo.
[General]
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Good luck!
[General]
- I don't think that BG really fits here. How about this BG? It's not so bright, so players will be able to focus on hitobjects.
- According to AiBat you have some problems with skinning, see this screenshot for details.
- Your combo colours should be consistent in all diffs.
- consider finding custom hitsound and/or reducing volume. Current hitsounds don't really fit. What's more your hitsounding sounds random sometimes. Please, try to find fiting custom hitsounds and try to re-hitsound it or at least remove extra claps/add missed ones!
Note: poke me if you need any suggestions - Princess Bubblegum and Marceline should be in tags, too. People LOVE them and they're important characters in this cartoon. :<
- Reduce HP Drain by one tick, this is the easiest diff, so we should take care of beginners.
- 00:03:084 (1,2) - nazi - I don't really like the shape of these sliders. Slider changes it's direction too suddenly and it doesn't fit with the music. How about something smoother? example
- 00:10:584 - 00:12:584 - 00:14:584 - I don't really understand what's the point of ignoring such beats. It breaaks your rhythm and you ignore strong beats/vocals, so beginners will be confused!
- 00:17:084 (1) - try to remove NC here, I think it doesn't fit with your pattern and looks kinda weird here.
- 00:33:084 (1) - it's too cruel for beginners, thay don't even except something like this here, remove this circle and drag start of a break here! see?
Note: well, 01:07:584 - drag the break here. It's the same. - 01:16:084 (3,4) - it's the -noly- stack in this diff. It will confuse beginners, so i'drecommend you to unstack them and keep consistent spacing here.
- 01:21:084 (5) - how about adding a repeat to this slider? I think that vocals end on 01:22:084 , therefore slider should end later!
- 01:35:084 (2,3) - nazi - well, what's the point of using this shape here? It looks really strange. In fact, I'd try to make the whole diff a bit neater. (Softer shapes, smother flow and etc.)
Diff looks messy, some random hitsounds and ignored beats should be fixed, but diff isn't that bad!
- AR doesn't match with slider velocity/patterns of this diff. Using higher AR would solve this problen, but since this is a [Normal] diff using higer AR isn't okay :<
- You're overusing 1/2 beats, so this diff is kinda too hard for a [Normal]. Song is relaxing, so let players relax and enjoy the music! Try to make consistent and simpler rhythm. (1/1 rhythm with some 1/2 beats would work great here, try it!)
I think that this diff should be easier, try to use simple and understandable rhythm, less 1/2 beats, lower distance spacing (I'm not sure about this one, tho). And same with hitsounding, try to find fitting custom hitsounds and feel free to poke me again!
- 00:04:959 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - overmapping. Please, try to avoid aovermap, try to follow music. So, we will not be confused by strange rhythm and will enjoy playing your map!
- Jumps/antijumps (spacing changes) are allowed in this kind of diffs. but they should be reasonable, they should fit with music and they should be understandable. In your diff I see a lot of jumps/spacing mistaks that don't fit with music at all. :<
Examples: 00:23:584 (2,3) - 00:27:834 (5,6,7) - 00:41:334 (2,3,4,5) -
Try to work on placement, rhythm and hitsounding. Probably it will require remapping the whole song ;_; But it is really needed here, sorry. :<
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Good luck!
hi
GL!~
Black: Normal suggestion
Red: Unrankable issue
Red: Unrankable issue
[Hard]
00:03:084 (3,4) - this pattern and note is really awkward, i wish you can change it
00:25:834 (10) - move far away please, it's overlap the 00:25:584 (9) -
00:27:084 (1,2) - stack this to 00:27:334 (3) - head?
00:31:084 (1,1) - these spinner length is unrankable, please change it.
00:16:834 (1) - ^
00:41:834 (3) - it's too near with 00:41:334 (2) - , consider move far.
00:46:834 (3) - ugly
00:50:834 (1) - unrankable
01:17:584 (4,5) - +clap ?
01:37:584 (2) - +whistle at head?
00:03:084 (3,4) - this pattern and note is really awkward, i wish you can change it
00:25:834 (10) - move far away please, it's overlap the 00:25:584 (9) -
00:27:084 (1,2) - stack this to 00:27:334 (3) - head?
00:31:084 (1,1) - these spinner length is unrankable, please change it.
00:16:834 (1) - ^
00:41:834 (3) - it's too near with 00:41:334 (2) - , consider move far.
00:46:834 (3) - ugly
00:50:834 (1) - unrankable
01:17:584 (4,5) - +clap ?
01:37:584 (2) - +whistle at head?
[Normal]
00:03:084 (1) - +finish at head?
01:19:084 (1,2,3,4) - make a square? current pattern is bad.
00:03:084 (1) - +finish at head?
01:19:084 (1,2,3,4) - make a square? current pattern is bad.
GL!~
Ok. Here me go! M4M from my queue
[Hard]
00:09:084 (4) - NC
00:12:084 (6,7,8) - Need make them can be straight will nicer
00:20:834 (7) - NC
00:25:084 (5) - ^
01:02:834 (3) - too curved
01:15:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I don't see 1 change in vocal or instrument. Plz change into other pattern
01:18:334 - 01:18:584 - Creat a slider as vocal sings
01:33:084 (4) - NC
01:33:084 (4,6,7,8) - the same problem with 00:12:084 (6,7,8)
01:40:834 (1) - Delete this spin. it is unrankble
01:45:084 (8) - NC
01:47:084 (2) - I think whistle insted of finish will better
[Normal]
00:29:084 (5) - ugly pattern
00:47:084 (4) - the end at 00:47:334 -
00:53:084 (2) - NC
00:55:084 (4) - a slider not blanket
[Easy]
00:25:084 (4) - NC
01:29:084 (3) - NC
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Good luck!
[Hard]
00:09:084 (4) - NC
00:12:084 (6,7,8) - Need make them can be straight will nicer
00:20:834 (7) - NC
00:25:084 (5) - ^
01:02:834 (3) - too curved
01:15:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I don't see 1 change in vocal or instrument. Plz change into other pattern
01:18:334 - 01:18:584 - Creat a slider as vocal sings
01:33:084 (4) - NC
01:33:084 (4,6,7,8) - the same problem with 00:12:084 (6,7,8)
01:40:834 (1) - Delete this spin. it is unrankble
01:45:084 (8) - NC
01:47:084 (2) - I think whistle insted of finish will better
[Normal]
00:29:084 (5) - ugly pattern
00:47:084 (4) - the end at 00:47:334 -
00:53:084 (2) - NC
00:55:084 (4) - a slider not blanket
[Easy]
00:25:084 (4) - NC
01:29:084 (3) - NC
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Good luck!
Topic Starter
Thx Oyatsu~
Fixed all~
Fixed all~
[Hard]
00:14:584 (3) - this circle told me he feels alone
00:38:209 - beat on a blue tick, consider changing it or reducing its volume
from 00:37:084 to 01:06:834 - you follow the vocal too much in this part, the patterns aren't intuitive at all to play, especially for someone that doesn't know the music. Give more importance to white ticks and use them to create the rhythm. Some examples:
00:39:584 - here's a drum that follows this rhythm http://puu.sh/3YywL.jpg
00:43:584 - ^
00:47:584 - ^
00:45:584 - 00:46:584 - circles here would help a lot
00:51:584 (1,2,3,4) - how about something like http://puu.sh/3YyQO.jpg or http://puu.sh/3YySN.jpg ?
01:01:084 (1,2) - i find this pretty unplayable, a circle here 01:01:584 would make its job, and i suggest putting one here too 01:02:584
01:04:584 - i would put one circle here too
01:06:834 (1) - very ugly ending on a red tick alone, here's a good solution http://puu.sh/3Yzbe.jpg
01:38:584 (3) - "i would only have someone near to have a chat with" that's what he said
00:14:584 (3) - this circle told me he feels alone
00:38:209 - beat on a blue tick, consider changing it or reducing its volume
from 00:37:084 to 01:06:834 - you follow the vocal too much in this part, the patterns aren't intuitive at all to play, especially for someone that doesn't know the music. Give more importance to white ticks and use them to create the rhythm. Some examples:
00:39:584 - here's a drum that follows this rhythm http://puu.sh/3YywL.jpg
00:43:584 - ^
00:47:584 - ^
00:45:584 - 00:46:584 - circles here would help a lot
00:51:584 (1,2,3,4) - how about something like http://puu.sh/3YyQO.jpg or http://puu.sh/3YySN.jpg ?
01:01:084 (1,2) - i find this pretty unplayable, a circle here 01:01:584 would make its job, and i suggest putting one here too 01:02:584
01:04:584 - i would put one circle here too
01:06:834 (1) - very ugly ending on a red tick alone, here's a good solution http://puu.sh/3Yzbe.jpg
01:38:584 (3) - "i would only have someone near to have a chat with" that's what he said
[Normal]
00:09:084 (3,4,5,6) - awful pattern and hardly readable, a cross or a square would fit better
00:29:084 (5) - add a reverse http://puu.sh/3YBG3.jpg
00:52:584 (1) - this isn't snapped (you can see on AiMod)
00:09:084 (3,4,5,6) - awful pattern and hardly readable, a cross or a square would fit better
00:29:084 (5) - add a reverse http://puu.sh/3YBG3.jpg
00:52:584 (1) - this isn't snapped (you can see on AiMod)
Topic Starter
Thanks Sephibro~
All fixed~
All fixed~
Sharpy_old
[General]
- I love song, but hard diff have a lot of tricky snaps/overlaps. Everything else is good.
- 00:40:584 - Add note here?
- 01:00:584 - ^
- 01:17:084 (4) - Off the mapset - fix if you want
- 01:47:084 (1) - I suggest you to delete this and extend slider to that point.
- 00:05:584 (4,5,6) - Ugly overlap
- 00:40:584 - Note here?
- 00:47:084 (4) - Extend this slider
- 00:53:084 (1) - NC? why?
- 01:00:084 - Slider here?
- 01:04:584 - Note here pls.
- 01:14:584 (8) - Move this note to x:96 y:64
- 01:18:584 - Note here pls.
- 01:34:584 (7) - Move this not to x:232 y:284
- 01:46:584 (2) - Move this slider to 01:46:334
- 00:02:084 - Start a small stream here. Why not?
- 00:17:584 (1,2,3) - Useless overlap
- 00:37:834 (4) - Fix this slider
- 00:52:709 - Add another note HERE in stream.
- 01:26:209 - ^
- 01:41:584 (1,2,3) - Why this overlap? It's ugly
Topic Starter
Thanks Sharpy~
Fixed some~
Fixed some~
Hello
m4m on your queue
[General]
Offset: 2084 - Your hard was starting too early also so that the big white tick lands on the drum
I wasn't sure what you were following at some points in the song (esp. Hard)
Hitsounds didn't fit and were pretty noisy (esp. Hard) consider a custom sample set, even if its just the clap, I dislike the soft hitclap used here
[Easy]
00:03:084 (1) - Shorten the slider by a beat?
[Normal]
00:05:084 (3,4,5,6) - Fix 3,4,5 or 4,5,6 into a triangle pattern
00:26:084 (4) - move back 1/2 beat to follow guitar
00:57:584 (2) - remove clap
[Hard]
00:02:084 (1,2,3,4,5) - Keep the stream going all the way to 00:03:084 , its strange how you drop the drum roll halfway through and suddenly follow vocals
00:03:084 (1) - Replace with just a circle and remove clap
00:03:334 (2) - Whistle to end of slider
00:04:084 (2,3) - ^same as the above two or a slider for 1 beat to follow vocals
00:05:084 (5) - Adds unneeded noise try
to follow guitar or a slider for 1 beat to follow vocal
00:07:084 (3) - You'll recognize them by now, the ends of the slider just don't land on anything and claps sound forced making this map untidy and noisy
00:09:084 (1,2,3,4,5) - replace with a triangle on each 1/2 beat?
00:13:084 (1,2) - replace with this [img]http://i40.tinypic.com/260vapz.jpg[/img
00:16:334 (6,7,1) - You could make this neater also make a better blanket
00:37:834 (4) - Replace with a slider for 1 beat and a circle on the w hite tick
Repeat offenders I won't list
Good luck!
m4m on your queue
[General]
Offset: 2084 - Your hard was starting too early also so that the big white tick lands on the drum
I wasn't sure what you were following at some points in the song (esp. Hard)
Hitsounds didn't fit and were pretty noisy (esp. Hard) consider a custom sample set, even if its just the clap, I dislike the soft hitclap used here
[Easy]
00:03:084 (1) - Shorten the slider by a beat?
[Normal]
00:05:084 (3,4,5,6) - Fix 3,4,5 or 4,5,6 into a triangle pattern
00:26:084 (4) - move back 1/2 beat to follow guitar
00:57:584 (2) - remove clap
[Hard]
00:02:084 (1,2,3,4,5) - Keep the stream going all the way to 00:03:084 , its strange how you drop the drum roll halfway through and suddenly follow vocals
00:03:084 (1) - Replace with just a circle and remove clap
00:03:334 (2) - Whistle to end of slider
00:04:084 (2,3) - ^same as the above two or a slider for 1 beat to follow vocals
00:05:084 (5) - Adds unneeded noise try
00:07:084 (3) - You'll recognize them by now, the ends of the slider just don't land on anything and claps sound forced making this map untidy and noisy
00:09:084 (1,2,3,4,5) - replace with a triangle on each 1/2 beat?
00:13:084 (1,2) - replace with this [img]http://i40.tinypic.com/260vapz.jpg[/img
00:16:334 (6,7,1) - You could make this neater also make a better blanket
00:37:834 (4) - Replace with a slider for 1 beat and a circle on the w hite tick
Something
01:22:834 (3) - move back 1/2 beat?01:11:834 (3) - Double blanket :3
x:224 y:176
x:224 y:176
Repeat offenders I won't list
Good luck!
Shohei Ohtani
Regular Show is better js.
Overall:
It'd be nice for some hitsound consistency. Try putting claps on the 2nd and 4th white ticks
mp3 cuts out really suddenly. Edit the mp3 in audacity and have it fade out.
Hard:
00:02:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This feels odd to play, as I'm expecting (1) to go with the flow that this creates, but I'm thrown to the other side and the rest of this pattern goes rightward o3o. Possibly adjust this stream to make it flow a bit better?
00:04:084 (2) - Spacing inconsistency
00:07:334 (4) - ^
00:09:084 (1,2,3,4,5) - This doesn't really follow much anything in the music
00:15:084 (1) - Anti-jump plays incredibly weird, especially since there's no indication of one being needed in the music
00:37:834 (4) - Really random jump o3o
00:52:084 (2) - Big no no, especially for streams. Don't shorten the spacing until after the first note of the stream is placed
tl;dr explore the magical world of distance spacing and don't put so many streams if you don't have to. Not every map has to be super fun fun jumpy time xxdd
Normal:
01:14:584 (8) - Distance spacing oh no come back
Nothing really like in terms of individual stuff I can point out. The biggest issue is that the notes just seem kind of there instead of like, making patterns and all
Easy:
01:35:084 (2,3,4,5) - Like creativity is cool and all but these don't really look all too stellar. It's best for short slider to just leave them simple, and save complexity for the longer sliders
Same as normal.
It can get kind of 1/1y at times, which can get boring.
uguu. I know I didn't point out much specifics, but there's nothing technically wrong with the normal and easy diff, it's just that like a lot of it is just the general comments.
Overall:
It'd be nice for some hitsound consistency. Try putting claps on the 2nd and 4th white ticks
mp3 cuts out really suddenly. Edit the mp3 in audacity and have it fade out.
Hard:
00:02:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This feels odd to play, as I'm expecting (1) to go with the flow that this creates, but I'm thrown to the other side and the rest of this pattern goes rightward o3o. Possibly adjust this stream to make it flow a bit better?
00:04:084 (2) - Spacing inconsistency
00:07:334 (4) - ^
00:09:084 (1,2,3,4,5) - This doesn't really follow much anything in the music
00:15:084 (1) - Anti-jump plays incredibly weird, especially since there's no indication of one being needed in the music
00:37:834 (4) - Really random jump o3o
00:52:084 (2) - Big no no, especially for streams. Don't shorten the spacing until after the first note of the stream is placed
tl;dr explore the magical world of distance spacing and don't put so many streams if you don't have to. Not every map has to be super fun fun jumpy time xxdd
Normal:
01:14:584 (8) - Distance spacing oh no come back
Nothing really like in terms of individual stuff I can point out. The biggest issue is that the notes just seem kind of there instead of like, making patterns and all
Easy:
01:35:084 (2,3,4,5) - Like creativity is cool and all but these don't really look all too stellar. It's best for short slider to just leave them simple, and save complexity for the longer sliders
Same as normal.
It can get kind of 1/1y at times, which can get boring.
uguu. I know I didn't point out much specifics, but there's nothing technically wrong with the normal and easy diff, it's just that like a lot of it is just the general comments.
here's your ticket
hmm placement is quite good but you may need more experience on hitsounding~
anyway, good luck xD
Easy
00:13:084 (1) - delete NC
00:25:084 (1) - ^
01:08:084 - not used green line
00:13:084 (1) - delete NC
00:25:084 (1) - ^
01:08:084 - not used green line
Normal
01:41:584 (1) - delete NC
- HP,AR,OD -1 and CS+1
01:41:584 (1) - delete NC
Hard
00:03:834 (1) - delete this NC and add it 00:04:084 (2) - here
00:27:209 (2,3) - well i don't think this stack is good idea on hard diff, try to avoid stack?
00:27:084 (1) - delete NC
00:34:584 - not used green line
01:12:834 (1,2,3,4,5) - wat a big jump,it'll be better if you decrease disance
01:17:084 (3) - set 1.0x DS? -nazi
01:18:334 (1) - delete NC
01:41:584 (1) - ^
00:03:834 (1) - delete this NC and add it 00:04:084 (2) - here
00:27:209 (2,3) - well i don't think this stack is good idea on hard diff, try to avoid stack?
00:27:084 (1) - delete NC
00:34:584 - not used green line
01:12:834 (1,2,3,4,5) - wat a big jump,it'll be better if you decrease disance
01:17:084 (3) - set 1.0x DS? -nazi
01:18:334 (1) - delete NC
01:41:584 (1) - ^
hmm placement is quite good but you may need more experience on hitsounding~
anyway, good luck xD
Topic Starter
Thanks MeatloafCereal, CDFA and HelloSCV~
All Fixed~
All Fixed~
Hiii Sheela! Returning the favour with m4m.
Insane
Normal
Easy
That's all from me! Calm song. Some inconsistencies with the hit sounds and the streams in Insane, but nice overall. Good luck! Have a star too~
Insane
- 00:12:084 (6,7,8) - I think you should keep distance snap consistent for the triplets. See this one is different 00:15:084 (1,2,3).
- 00:18:334 - Was a stream that starts here removed due to prior mods? In the song you can hear the 1/4 beat drum from there and ending here 00:19:084.
- 00:19:084 (1) - The triplet seems necessary to me. It would sound better, in my opinion, if you just replace this 1/4 slider with a single note at 00:19:084 with a finish on it.
- 00:20:084 (4,5) - This double finish doesn't really sound good. If you want to have a finish here, remove the one on (5).
- 00:21:084 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make a nice curve here? Also have the last note in the same plane as (7).
- 00:37:584 (3,4) - You can hear the potential points for claps in the song. Like here on (3) and on the head of the (4) slider.
- 00:38:584 (5) - ^
- 00:39:584 (1,2) - ^On (1), you already have one on (2).
- 00:41:334 (2) - Remove clap. You get the idea right? ><
- 00:41:584 - Add note with the clap.
- 00:52:084 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - This should be a continuous stream all the way up to (1) of the new combo. So add note here 00:52:709 & here 00:52:959 (unless someone told you to remove it).
- 00:57:084 (3,4) - Blanket.
- 01:29:084 (5) - Hmm I don't about this kick slider. Personally I wouldn't have it here.
Normal
- Consider increasing CS? It shouldn't really be smaller than Insane ><
- Otherwise, no other problems
Easy
- Nice
That's all from me! Calm song. Some inconsistencies with the hit sounds and the streams in Insane, but nice overall. Good luck! Have a star too~
Topic Starter
Thanks Unfamiliar~
I reduce the CS in normal and I increase in insane.
I reduce the CS in normal and I increase in insane.
10crystalmask01
Ello! Random mod!
Hope this helps~!
Random mod![General]
00:13:084 (5) - NC
00:39:084 (5) - ^
00:53:084 (1,2) - I suggest you try re-modelling these two to make something more symmetrical,like this for example:
Nice
[Normal]
00:42:084 - I suggest putting 00:41:084 (1,2) - here as well for steady rhythm.
01:13:084 - ^
01:28:084 (1) - Ahem:
Symmetry! 
01:31:084 (1) - Too far from previous object.
01:32:084 (1) - Ahem:
01:45:584 (1,2,3) - Hmm.
This diff looks ok. Still could use some improvement.
- Honestly, I don't think Kai time is really necessary in this type of music,mainly cause it's so chill.
- Lacking hitsound. Try using this hitsound pattern:
You can use it for either clap or whistle. Hits that land on the white ticks marked with an x are the ones that must have a hitsound. Only the ones marked with an x
Apply this to all your diffs
00:13:084 (5) - NC
00:39:084 (5) - ^
00:53:084 (1,2) - I suggest you try re-modelling these two to make something more symmetrical,like this for example:
Nice
[Normal]
00:42:084 - I suggest putting 00:41:084 (1,2) - here as well for steady rhythm.
01:13:084 - ^
01:28:084 (1) - Ahem:
01:31:084 (1) - Too far from previous object.
01:32:084 (1) - Ahem:
01:45:584 (1,2,3) - Hmm.
This diff looks ok. Still could use some improvement.
Hope this helps~!
Hello! i noticed you changed your hard into insane and tried it, i'm here for a couple suggestions
00:02:084 (1) - this stream starts too abruptly, how about letting a double reverse slider introduce it? http://puu.sh/4c6yM.jpg
00:48:834 (1) - delete this circle
00:49:084 (5) - ^ if you did that, NC this
01:03:584 - why this hitsound?
01:29:834 (5) - a circle alone on a red tick plays really bad, i suggest one of these two http://puu.sh/4c6Kn.jpg or http://puu.sh/4c6Mc.jpg
01:40:084 (5,6) - i would put (5) a little closer to (6) http://puu.sh/4c6P4.jpg
Btw i think it's ok if you rename this diff back into Hard, it's maybe too easy to be called insane...120 bpm short streams are ok on hard
And if you name it Insane, you'll have to make a hard for better diff spread > just renaming this into Hard is highly suggested!
Good luck!
00:02:084 (1) - this stream starts too abruptly, how about letting a double reverse slider introduce it? http://puu.sh/4c6yM.jpg
00:48:834 (1) - delete this circle
00:49:084 (5) - ^ if you did that, NC this
01:03:584 - why this hitsound?
01:29:834 (5) - a circle alone on a red tick plays really bad, i suggest one of these two http://puu.sh/4c6Kn.jpg or http://puu.sh/4c6Mc.jpg
01:40:084 (5,6) - i would put (5) a little closer to (6) http://puu.sh/4c6P4.jpg
Btw i think it's ok if you rename this diff back into Hard, it's maybe too easy to be called insane...120 bpm short streams are ok on hard
And if you name it Insane, you'll have to make a hard for better diff spread > just renaming this into Hard is highly suggested!
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Thanks again Sephibro~
Hi~ sheela901
[Easy]
00:46:084 (2) - At the end of clap?
01:20:584 (4) - clap
01:29:084 (1) - Remove NC
01:32:084 (2) - 01:31:084 (1) - It looks good and should be similarly
[Normal]
No Pick :3
[Hard]
00:04:084 (1) - Remove NC
00:08:084 (1) - ^
00:46:584 - Add Note
GL~
[Easy]
00:46:084 (2) - At the end of clap?
01:20:584 (4) - clap
01:29:084 (1) - Remove NC
01:32:084 (2) - 01:31:084 (1) - It looks good and should be similarly
[Normal]
No Pick :3
[Hard]
00:04:084 (1) - Remove NC
00:08:084 (1) - ^
00:46:584 - Add Note
GL~
Hellow. M4M from Kirin's modding queue
Let's begin o/
[Easy]
Nothing wrong
[Normal]
00:15:084 (1) Move that slider at x:40 y:356 like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/964297
[Hard]
01:25:584 (1,2,3,4,5) Try to make that stream uniform like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/964310
Good luck for ranking :3
Let's begin o/
[Easy]
Nothing wrong
[Normal]
00:15:084 (1) Move that slider at x:40 y:356 like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/964297
[Hard]
01:25:584 (1,2,3,4,5) Try to make that stream uniform like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/964310
Good luck for ranking :3
Ah couldn't find that much thing, i will just give 2 stars okay. ;_; Good luck
Topic Starter
Thanks HabiHolic and MasterKirin. All fixed and thanks UnderminE for two stars~
After taking a serious look, let's see:
[Easy]
00:37:084 - whistle
00:39:084 - whistle
00:41:084 - whistle
00:43:084 - whistle
00:45:084 - whistle
00:47:084 - whistle
00:53:084 - whistle
00:57:084 - whistle
00:58:084 - whistle
00:59:084 - whistle
01:01:084 - whistle
01:01:834 - whistle
01:02:334 - whistle
01:04:084 - whistle
01:11:084 - whistle
01:15:084 - whistle
01:19:084 - whistle
01:21:834 - whistle
01:27:084 - whistle
01:31:084 - whistle
01:35:084 - whistle
01:37:084 - whistle
01:39:084 - whistle
01:40:084 - whistle
01:41:084 - whistle
[Normal]
same whistles in Easy, and these ones:
00:09:334 - whistle
00:09:834 - whistle
00:13:334 - whistle
00:13:834 - whistle
00:23:334 - whistle
00:25:334 - whistle
00:25:834 - whistle
00:30:834 - whistle
00:41:334 - whistle
00:42:334 - whistle
00:52:834 - whistle
01:03:834 - whistle
01:07:084 - finish?
01:11:334 - whistle
01:13:334 - whistle
01:33:334 - whistle
01:35:334 - whistle
01:40:334 - whistle
01:45:834 - whistle
01:46:334 - whistle
00:39:084 (1) - NC
00:43:084 - NC
00:59:084 - NC
01:33:084 (1) - NC
01:41:084 - NC
AR: 5
HP: 4
OD: 4
[Hard]
Same hitsounds i said in Normal diff, it really needs soft whistles.
Good luck now!
[Easy]
00:37:084 - whistle
00:39:084 - whistle
00:41:084 - whistle
00:43:084 - whistle
00:45:084 - whistle
00:47:084 - whistle
00:53:084 - whistle
00:57:084 - whistle
00:58:084 - whistle
00:59:084 - whistle
01:01:084 - whistle
01:01:834 - whistle
01:02:334 - whistle
01:04:084 - whistle
01:11:084 - whistle
01:15:084 - whistle
01:19:084 - whistle
01:21:834 - whistle
01:27:084 - whistle
01:31:084 - whistle
01:35:084 - whistle
01:37:084 - whistle
01:39:084 - whistle
01:40:084 - whistle
01:41:084 - whistle
[Normal]
same whistles in Easy, and these ones:
00:09:334 - whistle
00:09:834 - whistle
00:13:334 - whistle
00:13:834 - whistle
00:23:334 - whistle
00:25:334 - whistle
00:25:834 - whistle
00:30:834 - whistle
00:41:334 - whistle
00:42:334 - whistle
00:52:834 - whistle
01:03:834 - whistle
01:07:084 - finish?
01:11:334 - whistle
01:13:334 - whistle
01:33:334 - whistle
01:35:334 - whistle
01:40:334 - whistle
01:45:834 - whistle
01:46:334 - whistle
00:39:084 (1) - NC
00:43:084 - NC
00:59:084 - NC
01:33:084 (1) - NC
01:41:084 - NC
AR: 5
HP: 4
OD: 4
[Hard]
Same hitsounds i said in Normal diff, it really needs soft whistles.
Good luck now!
Topic Starter
Thanks~ All fixed~
Hi ! M4M from my modding queue
General
- First of all, I have to say that the skin is completly totally amazing !!!
- I tought maybe you could make your Easy and Normal diffs start at the same time as your Hard diff, so players that can't play the Hard one are not "penalized" and play less because of this ?
Easy
Perfect diff
Normal
00:10:584 - I think a circle here would make sense (You put one on the other diffs and it sounds great !)
00:14:584 - Same ^
00:48:084 - & 00:48:334 - & 00:48:584 - I think circles here would sound great too
00:56:584 - Circle here as well ?
Hard
01:15:084 (1) - Stack it with the 01:13:834 (5) - ?
Great job !!
Starred & good luck
General
- First of all, I have to say that the skin is completly totally amazing !!!
- I tought maybe you could make your Easy and Normal diffs start at the same time as your Hard diff, so players that can't play the Hard one are not "penalized" and play less because of this ?
Easy
Perfect diff
Normal
00:10:584 - I think a circle here would make sense
(You put one on the other diffs and it sounds great !)00:14:584 - Same ^
00:48:084 - & 00:48:334 - & 00:48:584 - I think circles here would sound great too
00:56:584 - Circle here as well ?
Hard
01:15:084 (1) - Stack it with the 01:13:834 (5) - ?
Great job !!
Starred & good luck
Topic Starter
Thanks Atema for the star and mod. All fixed~
Hi! M4M from my queue
EASY
00:19:584 (2,4) - stack them?
00:40:084 (2,3) - move them in a way to stak 00:38:584 (4,3) - if you want
00:47:084 (3,4) - I'd suggest to move them in a way that 00:47:584 (4) - don't touch 00:46:084 (2) - , just to be precise
01:00:584 (6) - add a clap
01:45:584 (1) - this is an easy diff and this is too soon after the spinner, you should: or make this slider start a bit later, or make the spinner end earlier.
NORMAL
00:40:084 (2,3) - what do you think ok place them in a way that they are symmetric with 00:38:084 (3,4) - ? maybe you can also just move them some grids down
00:48:584 (7) - add clap
00:53:084 (1) - add clap at the end of the slider
00:56:584 (4) - add clap
01:14:584 (4) - ^
01:19:084 (1) - fix spacing
01:47:084 (3) - move 1 grid up?
HARD
00:02:584 (2,3,4,5,1) - make the curve of this stream better
00:09:084 (1,2,3,4) - why is the spacing so weird here?
00:17:834 - add a note?
00:39:584 (1,2) - weird spacing
00:46:584 (4,1) - stack them?
00:57:834 (4) - make the curve of this slider follow better the previous one
01:00:334 - add a note
01:00:584 - ^
01:12:584 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - all this notes are at the same distance in the song, but why did you used this weird spacing? you should use the same for each one of these note, since there is no jump in the music. if you just want to make this harded, just use a higher spacing, but use always the same for each note
01:15:084 (1,2,3,4,6,1) - in this case, instead it's ok, because there is a sort of pattern in this notes
that's all, GL with this map!
EASY
00:19:584 (2,4) - stack them?
00:40:084 (2,3) - move them in a way to stak 00:38:584 (4,3) - if you want
00:47:084 (3,4) - I'd suggest to move them in a way that 00:47:584 (4) - don't touch 00:46:084 (2) - , just to be precise
01:00:584 (6) - add a clap
01:45:584 (1) - this is an easy diff and this is too soon after the spinner, you should: or make this slider start a bit later, or make the spinner end earlier.
NORMAL
00:40:084 (2,3) - what do you think ok place them in a way that they are symmetric with 00:38:084 (3,4) - ? maybe you can also just move them some grids down
00:48:584 (7) - add clap
00:53:084 (1) - add clap at the end of the slider
00:56:584 (4) - add clap
01:14:584 (4) - ^
01:19:084 (1) - fix spacing
01:47:084 (3) - move 1 grid up?
HARD
00:02:584 (2,3,4,5,1) - make the curve of this stream better
00:09:084 (1,2,3,4) - why is the spacing so weird here?
00:17:834 - add a note?
00:39:584 (1,2) - weird spacing
00:46:584 (4,1) - stack them?
00:57:834 (4) - make the curve of this slider follow better the previous one
01:00:334 - add a note
01:00:584 - ^
01:12:584 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - all this notes are at the same distance in the song, but why did you used this weird spacing? you should use the same for each one of these note, since there is no jump in the music. if you just want to make this harded, just use a higher spacing, but use always the same for each note
01:15:084 (1,2,3,4,6,1) - in this case, instead it's ok, because there is a sort of pattern in this notes
that's all, GL with this map!
Hi~ From your PM Mod Request. :3
[General]
I like the song. As well as Adventure time. XD
The only concern about is the Adventure time spinner skin. Just my personal opinion. I Don't like the logo spinning. XD
[Easy]
00:09:584 (4,5,6) - Make a better triangle. Move 00:09:584 (4) to x:180 y:204, 00:10:084 (5) x:176 y:104 and 00:10:584 (6) x:96 y:160. Looks better imo
00:11:584 (2) - You may want to move the circle away from 00:10:584 (6) if you're implementing the following above.
00:14:584 (4) - Move circle to x:248 y:92 to blanket with 00:15:084 (1) :3
[Normal]
Hm.. Both the CS and Distance Snap looks a bit far. Suggest lowering these two.
01:19:084 (1,2,3,4) - How about making a square?
01:25:584 (1) - Move circle closer to the center. The time distance is very short.
01:38:584 - Add a circle with clap hitsound. :3
[Hard]
CS. >_<
00:18:334 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - This troubled me. Why not a curve instead?
00:22:334 - Add and Stack a circle to 00:22:584 (1) . Sounds better.
01:38:584 (3,1) - The distance between these two is too short. Might want to either stack it, or separate them.
That's it for me. Good luck to your map! I hope you like my mod. >_<
[General]
I like the song. As well as Adventure time. XD
The only concern about is the Adventure time spinner skin. Just my personal opinion. I Don't like the logo spinning. XD
[Easy]
00:09:584 (4,5,6) - Make a better triangle. Move 00:09:584 (4) to x:180 y:204, 00:10:084 (5) x:176 y:104 and 00:10:584 (6) x:96 y:160. Looks better imo
00:11:584 (2) - You may want to move the circle away from 00:10:584 (6) if you're implementing the following above.
00:14:584 (4) - Move circle to x:248 y:92 to blanket with 00:15:084 (1) :3
[Normal]
Hm.. Both the CS and Distance Snap looks a bit far. Suggest lowering these two.
01:19:084 (1,2,3,4) - How about making a square?
01:25:584 (1) - Move circle closer to the center. The time distance is very short.
01:38:584 - Add a circle with clap hitsound. :3
[Hard]
CS. >_<
00:18:334 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - This troubled me. Why not a curve instead?
00:22:334 - Add and Stack a circle to 00:22:584 (1) . Sounds better.
01:38:584 (3,1) - The distance between these two is too short. Might want to either stack it, or separate them.
That's it for me. Good luck to your map! I hope you like my mod. >_<
Topic Starter
Thanks luxoDeh and Fr33z3R~ All fixed.
hey, from my queue
I didn't really try in this diff, I guess it just looks okay.
A little better then Easy mode.
wowowowowow this diff had streams ahem ahem!
But I guess it's alright, I did manage to pass it. Make the sliders go faster though, it pretty much feels like Normal mode but with the increase approach rate.
Cheers!
I didn't really try in this diff, I guess it just looks okay.
A little better then Easy mode.
wowowowowow this diff had streams ahem ahem!
But I guess it's alright, I did manage to pass it. Make the sliders go faster though, it pretty much feels like Normal mode but with the increase approach rate.
Cheers!
M4M >.o/
[Easy]
00:09:584 (4) - A straight line with 00:09:084 (3,5) would work
00:28:584 (2,3) - Suggest to change it into something like PIC1
00:44:584 (6) - Sound like a missing beat here
01:18:584 (6) - ^
01:28:084 (2) - A normal shape will be better than the current one
01:35:084 (2,3) - Change the position of these two slider, don't let 01:37:084 (4,5) overlap them
[Normal]
00:19:084 (1) - Stack on the head of 00:17:084 (4)
00:29:084 (5) - Too curve aren't good
00:40:584 (3) - A straight line with 00:40:084 (2)
00:55:084 (3) - Make the left and right tick equal
01:36:584 (4) - Move down a bit, don't let it touch the head of 01:37:084 (5)
01:40:084 (3) - Curve a bit then move down, don't let it touch 01:38:584 (6)
[Hard]
AR8 will suit better
00:04:834 (6) - Stack on the head of 00:05:084 (7)
00:06:334 (9) - Missing beat
00:07:334 (4,7) - Don't let them touch each other
00:08:834 (8) - Don't stack, place somewhere else
00:10:334 (5) - Missing beat
00:14:334 (3) - ^
00:16:084 (5) - Change into a single circle
00:16:834 (7) - Extend to 00:17:334
00:19:334 (2) - Make a jump for this
00:24:084 (4) - Add a note
00:26:334 (7) - ^
00:30:334 (7) - ^
00:31:834 (4) - Move down, don't let it touch 00:30:834 (2)
00:41:584 (3) - Stack on 00:39:834 (2)
00:49:334 (2) - Adjust the position, don't let it touch 00:48:584 (4)
00:58:834 (6,7,8) - Don't overlap 00:57:834 (4)
01:04:334 (7) - Missing beat
01:34:334 (7) - ^
01:29:334 (5) - ^
01:15:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - This is very confusing, suggest to change the pattern
01:38:334 (3) - Add note
01:38:834 (5) - ^
01:40:334 (6) - Make some spacing here
Great good in easy and normal, Hard is kinda messy actually :p
Good luck btw~ >.o/
[Easy]
00:09:584 (4) - A straight line with 00:09:084 (3,5) would work
00:28:584 (2,3) - Suggest to change it into something like PIC1
00:44:584 (6) - Sound like a missing beat here
01:18:584 (6) - ^
01:28:084 (2) - A normal shape will be better than the current one
01:35:084 (2,3) - Change the position of these two slider, don't let 01:37:084 (4,5) overlap them
[Normal]
00:19:084 (1) - Stack on the head of 00:17:084 (4)
00:29:084 (5) - Too curve aren't good
00:40:584 (3) - A straight line with 00:40:084 (2)
00:55:084 (3) - Make the left and right tick equal
01:36:584 (4) - Move down a bit, don't let it touch the head of 01:37:084 (5)
01:40:084 (3) - Curve a bit then move down, don't let it touch 01:38:584 (6)
[Hard]
AR8 will suit better
00:04:834 (6) - Stack on the head of 00:05:084 (7)
00:06:334 (9) - Missing beat
00:07:334 (4,7) - Don't let them touch each other
00:08:834 (8) - Don't stack, place somewhere else
00:10:334 (5) - Missing beat
00:14:334 (3) - ^
00:16:084 (5) - Change into a single circle
00:16:834 (7) - Extend to 00:17:334
00:19:334 (2) - Make a jump for this
00:24:084 (4) - Add a note
00:26:334 (7) - ^
00:30:334 (7) - ^
00:31:834 (4) - Move down, don't let it touch 00:30:834 (2)
00:41:584 (3) - Stack on 00:39:834 (2)
00:49:334 (2) - Adjust the position, don't let it touch 00:48:584 (4)
00:58:834 (6,7,8) - Don't overlap 00:57:834 (4)
01:04:334 (7) - Missing beat
01:34:334 (7) - ^
01:29:334 (5) - ^
01:15:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - This is very confusing, suggest to change the pattern
01:38:334 (3) - Add note
01:38:834 (5) - ^
01:40:334 (6) - Make some spacing here
Great good in easy and normal, Hard is kinda messy actually :p
Good luck btw~ >.o/
Topic Starter
_AI wrote:
M4M >.o/
[Easy]
00:09:584 (4) - A straight line with 00:09:084 (3,5) would work Hmm. I like it better when it's curvy.
00:28:584 (2,3) - Suggest to change it into something like PIC1
00:44:584 (6) - Sound like a missing beat here
01:18:584 (6) - ^
01:28:084 (2) - A normal shape will be better than the current one
01:35:084 (2,3) - Change the position of these two slider, don't let 01:37:084 (4,5) overlap them
[Normal]
00:19:084 (1) - Stack on the head of 00:17:084 (4)
00:29:084 (5) - Too curve aren't good
00:40:584 (3) - A straight line with 00:40:084 (2)
00:55:084 (3) - Make the left and right tick equal
01:36:584 (4) - Move down a bit, don't let it touch the head of 01:37:084 (5)
01:40:084 (3) - Curve a bit then move down, don't let it touch 01:38:584 (6)
[Hard]
AR8 will suit better
00:04:834 (6) - Stack on the head of 00:05:084 (7)
00:06:334 (9) - Missing beat
00:07:334 (4,7) - Don't let them touch each other It's okay to me.
00:08:834 (8) - Don't stack, place somewhere else
00:10:334 (5) - Missing beat
00:14:334 (3) - ^
00:16:084 (5) - Change into a single circle
00:16:834 (7) - Extend to 00:17:334
00:19:334 (2) - Make a jump for this
00:24:084 (4) - Add a note
00:26:334 (7) - ^
00:30:334 (7) - ^
00:31:834 (4) - Move down, don't let it touch 00:30:834 (2)
00:41:584 (3) - Stack on 00:39:834 (2)
00:49:334 (2) - Adjust the position, don't let it touch 00:48:584 (4)
00:58:834 (6,7,8) - Don't overlap 00:57:834 (4)
01:04:334 (7) - Missing beat
01:34:334 (7) - ^
01:29:334 (5) - ^
01:15:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - This is very confusing, suggest to change the pattern
01:38:334 (3) - Add note
01:38:834 (5) - ^
01:40:334 (6) - Make some spacing here
Great good in easy and normal, Hard is kinda messy actually :p
Good luck btw~ >.o/
Hi! PM request, sorry for the late reply
[Hard]
[Hard]
- 00:12:334 (8) - make the new combo here
- 00:15:334 (3) - adjust this slider so it flows better with 00:15:834 (4)
- 00:37:584 (3,4) - make the spacing consistent
- 00:52:959 (9) - 1 grid down
- 00:57:084 (3,4) - fix the blanket
- 00:58:834 (6) - I suggest you putting this in this slider tail → 00:57:084 (3) as it's better for readability
- 01:12:834 (1,2,3,4) - fix this, it's a bit ugly. Make spacing better and maybe change a bit the shape if you want to keep that shape
- 01:18:834 (1,2) - fix this blanket
- 01:36:084 (6) - 2 grid left
- 01:36:209 (7) - 1 grid left
- I can't find anything wrong here, diff looks ok from here.
Topic Starter
Thanks Puncia. All fixed.
10crystalmask01
Ello! ^^ Here for a re-check!
Hope this helps~! ^^
[Easy]
00:03:084 (1) - Try adding a finish to the head for a good intro!
00:27:084 (1) - Add clap on the head.
00:44:584 (6) - ^
01:04:584 - A note should be here.
01:18:584 (6) - Don't forget to add the clap!
01:29:584 (4) - ^
Really neat flow you've made!
[Normal]
00:02:584 (2) - Add clap
00:03:084 (1) - ^ On the tail.
00:10:584 (7) - ^
00:14:584 (5) - ^
00:30:584 - I prefer spinner starting here instead.
00:44:584 (4) - Add clap
00:48:084 (5) - NC
00:55:084 (3) - Add clap on the reverse.
01:00:084 (2) - Add clap on the tail.
01:18:584 (6) - ^
01:29:584 (4) - ^
01:46:334 (2) - Add clap on the tail.
Just missing a few claps really.
[Hard]
00:11:084 (3) - Use 2 hit circles here instead for consistency with 00:12:084 (6,7) -
00:18:334 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Try changing the default hits to drum-hit instead on these objects as well. Refer back to 00:02:084 (1,2,3,4,5,1).
00:52:084 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
00:56:584 (1) - Add clap
01:00:584 (10) - ^
01:17:584 (4) - ^
01:18:334 (6) - ^ On the tail.
01:25:584 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stream should've been at 01:26:084 - 01:27:084 with drum hitsound :S
This diff still needs some work with hitsounding. And the flow is a bit questionable.
00:03:084 (1) - Try adding a finish to the head for a good intro!
00:27:084 (1) - Add clap on the head.
00:44:584 (6) - ^
01:04:584 - A note should be here.
01:18:584 (6) - Don't forget to add the clap!
01:29:584 (4) - ^
Really neat flow you've made!
[Normal]
00:02:584 (2) - Add clap
00:03:084 (1) - ^ On the tail.
00:10:584 (7) - ^
00:14:584 (5) - ^
00:30:584 - I prefer spinner starting here instead.
00:44:584 (4) - Add clap
00:48:084 (5) - NC
00:55:084 (3) - Add clap on the reverse.
01:00:084 (2) - Add clap on the tail.
01:18:584 (6) - ^
01:29:584 (4) - ^
01:46:334 (2) - Add clap on the tail.
Just missing a few claps really.
[Hard]
- What happened to the clap pattern in this diff?! try to keep it consistent and similar to your previous diffs!
This is the clap pattern I hear, based on how you've placed it:
00:11:084 (3) - Use 2 hit circles here instead for consistency with 00:12:084 (6,7) -
00:18:334 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Try changing the default hits to drum-hit instead on these objects as well. Refer back to 00:02:084 (1,2,3,4,5,1).
00:52:084 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
00:56:584 (1) - Add clap
01:00:584 (10) - ^
01:17:584 (4) - ^
01:18:334 (6) - ^ On the tail.
01:25:584 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stream should've been at 01:26:084 - 01:27:084 with drum hitsound :S
This diff still needs some work with hitsounding. And the flow is a bit questionable.
Hope this helps~! ^^
Sorry to late mod
[General]
[General]
- you used 1366x768 BG. Check "Widescreen Support" in Setup,Design Tab.
- 00:27:084 (1) - remove clap on first of slider and add clap on arrow of slider.
- 00:29:084 (3) - 1 grid right.
- 00:53:084 (1) - Finish? on first of slider
- 01:37:084 (4) - perfectly stack on 01:35:084 (2).
- 00:09:084 (3) - NC?
- 00:10:584 (7) - whistle?
- 00:13:584 (3,4) - Ctrl+G. because of 00:09:084 (3,4,5,6)
- 00:25:084 (1,2,3,4) - make it like 00:09:084 (3,4,5,6)
- 00:30:584 (1) - Finish
- 01:02:584 (4) - whistle on end of slider
- 00:43:834 (2,4) - whistle?
- 00:49:334 (2) - clap on end of slider
- 00:50:584 - add note?(with clap)
- 00:51:584 (1) - clap
- 01:02:584 (4) - clap
- 01:04:834 (1,2,3,4) - add hitsound
- 01:28:834 (4) - perfeclty stack on 01:28:334 (3)
- 01:29:584 (6) - clap
- 01:38:584 (4) - ^
Topic Starter
Thanks TaMul. All fixed.
HI~
a little bit late orz
nice map~
[Hard]
00:45:834 blanket
00:46:834 ^
00:53:584 ^
01:03:334 ^
[Normal]
i think this diff is too random，maybe you need recheack？
[Easy]
00:46:084 too close
01:16:084 this slider looks ugly
good luck~
a little bit late orz
nice map~
[Hard]
00:45:834 blanket
00:46:834 ^
00:53:584 ^
01:03:334 ^
[Normal]
i think this diff is too random，maybe you need recheack？
[Easy]
00:46:084 too close
01:16:084 this slider looks ugly
good luck~
Topic Starter
Thanks wonders. All fixed.
(From m4m queue)
Sorry for late mod~
[Overall]
I like your mapset so far, even if this is one of the worst songs I've ever heard in osu. The easy and normal diff are really good, but the look of the hard diff needs some work to be ready for rank.
[Easy]
No problems here, well done :3
[Normal]
00:30:584 (1) - The spinner should be begin one white tick later.
[Hard]
The main problem with this is the look of the difficulty. It doesn't meet the mapping standards of 2013, as some circles seem randomly placed, even if you've been using distance snap. Every circle should have a reason to be placed at it's exact position. You may use triangles, blankets (as you've been already doing), straight lines, distance snap and ovals for this. Surprisingly, this starts to get better and better during the diff until the problem is gone at around 40 seconds. You should maybe remap the part until 40 seconds in the style of the rest.
Those could be triangles with 2 sides of the same length:
00:03:334 (2,3,4) -
00:03:834 (3,4,5) -
00:04:334 (5,6,8) -
00:06:334 (9,3,4) -
00:09:084 (1,2,3) -
00:09:334 (2,3,4) -
00:10:584 (1,2,3) -
00:15:834 (4,5,6) -
00:23:084 (1,2,3) -
00:23:834 (3,4,5) -
00:26:334 (7,1,2) -
...
Good luck with this mapset ^^ ~
Sorry for late mod~
[Overall]
I like your mapset so far, even if this is one of the worst songs I've ever heard in osu. The easy and normal diff are really good, but the look of the hard diff needs some work to be ready for rank.
[Easy]
No problems here, well done :3
[Normal]
00:30:584 (1) - The spinner should be begin one white tick later.
[Hard]
The main problem with this is the look of the difficulty. It doesn't meet the mapping standards of 2013, as some circles seem randomly placed, even if you've been using distance snap. Every circle should have a reason to be placed at it's exact position. You may use triangles, blankets (as you've been already doing), straight lines, distance snap and ovals for this. Surprisingly, this starts to get better and better during the diff until the problem is gone at around 40 seconds. You should maybe remap the part until 40 seconds in the style of the rest.
Those could be triangles with 2 sides of the same length:
00:03:334 (2,3,4) -
00:03:834 (3,4,5) -
00:04:334 (5,6,8) -
00:06:334 (9,3,4) -
00:09:084 (1,2,3) -
00:09:334 (2,3,4) -
00:10:584 (1,2,3) -
00:15:834 (4,5,6) -
00:23:084 (1,2,3) -
00:23:834 (3,4,5) -
00:26:334 (7,1,2) -
...
Good luck with this mapset ^^ ~
HI~ sheela901 M4M from my queue
General:
- Missing Skin Files:
hitcircleoverlay.png
spinner-clear.png
spinner-spin.png - Unused Image Files:
fruit-bananas-overlay.png
fruit-bananas.png
fruit-ryuuta.png
hit100g.png
pippidonclear0.png
pippidonclear1.png
pippidonclear2.png
pippidonclear3.png
pippidonclear4.png
pippidonclear5.png
pippidonclear6.png
pippidonclear7.png
pippidonclear8.png
pippidonfail0.png
pippidonfail1.png
pippidonidle0.png
pippidonidle1.png
pippidonkiai0.png
pippidonkiai1.png
pippidonkiai2.png
pippidonkiai3.png
taiko-bar-left.png
taiko-bar-right-glow.png
taiko-bar-right.png
taiko-flower-group.png
taiko-slider-fail.png
taiko-slider.png
taikobigcircle.png
taikobigcircleoverlay-0.png
taikohitcircle.png
taikohitcircleoverlay-0.png
Hard:
- 00:03:084 (1,2) - I preffer if you convert they 2 in a 1/1 slider fiting very nice the vocals
- 00:05:584 add clap
- 00:06:084 add a circle here actually this place feel really empty
- 00:06:334 (9,1,2,3,4) - maybe make a star pattern the actually one look really bad
- 00:11:084 (3,4,5) - Kinda hard to read try to make it like 00:12:084 (7,8,1) -
- 00:09:834 (4) - try to move this some grids to the right to improve the flow with previous and next beat
- 00:28:084 (1) - conver this in 2 circles is better for the gameplay lie you did on almost all the diff
- 00:29:084 (4,5) - this 2 sliders feel a little overmapped try THIS
- 00:32:584 (1,2) - make a jump here actualy this one play really bad x_x need more space
- 00:38:834 (6,1) - Fix the distance
- 00:44:334 (3,4) - use a properly distance or stack they perfect like previous
- 00:45:834 (3,5) - this overlap look really bad try to make this clean and better readable
- 00:47:584 (1,2) - better stack this
- 00:53:584 (2,3) - thinks like this I mean the distance is really confuse to play you should go in all the map and be consistent with the distance and make some jumps but actually this have alot of bad spacing imo
- 01:25:584 add NC here iknow is a bug
- 01:00:334 (9,10) - distance
- well the spacing is kinda bad here x_x try to be more consistent
Normal:
- 00:09:084 (1,2) - Fix the distance
- 00:10:584 (5,1) - same as above dont make this jumps on a normal D:
- 00:13:834 (4,5) - ^
- 00:15:084 (1,2) - ^
- 00:22:584 (5,1) - ^
- 00:25:084 (1,2,3,4) - same here try to use always 1.0 distance in all this diff
- 00:25:834 (4,5,1) - ^
- 00:42:084 (2,3) - ^
- 00:56:584 (4,1) - like I told you this jumps are not good to do in a normal x_x
- 01:20:584 (4,5) - ^
- 01:25:584 (1,2,3) - make a perfect triangle here?
- 01:38:584 (6,1) - Fix the distance
- 01:45:584 (1,2) - ^
- well generally try to use the same distance in all this diff x_x
Easy:
- 00:03:084 (1) - try to make this one symetrical x_x
- 00:05:084 (2,1) - Fix the distance
- 00:11:084 (1,2) - same as above
- 00:14:584 (2,1) - you can improve this blanked a little
- 00:19:084 (1,2) - distance here
- 00:28:584 (2,3) - ^
- 00:38:584 (3,1) - same as above x_x
- 00:44:584 (6,1) - use a properly distanc ethis jumps are not ok for an easy
- 00:53:084 (1,2,1) - use the smae distance
- 01:00:584 (6,1) - Fix the distance
- 01:18:584 (6,1) - dont use jumps in easy orz use a properly distance here
Okay the main problem in your map is the distance some times is kinda random try to be more consisten with it GL :3 dont give up :3
Topic Starter
Thanks Desperate-kun and Natsu.
Hello, M4M Req. I am Chinese. Poor English sorry.
[General]
None.
[Easy]
00:07:084 (1,2) -They can blanket in mutual.
00:10:084 (5) - blanket
01:01:584 (2) - Do not give this too close at 01:00:584 (6) .
[Normal]
00:18:584 (5) - blanket the 00:17:084 (4) .
01:11:334 (2) - ^ the 01:12:084 (4) .
[Hard] OD+1 ?
[Other]
1.If you have any mod questions, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you Ranked.
3.Can you help me my map for a mod? Thanks!
[General]
None.
[Easy]
00:07:084 (1,2) -They can blanket in mutual.
00:10:084 (5) - blanket
01:01:584 (2) - Do not give this too close at 01:00:584 (6) .
[Normal]
00:18:584 (5) - blanket the 00:17:084 (4) .
01:11:334 (2) - ^ the 01:12:084 (4) .
[Hard] OD+1 ?
SPOILER
00:14:584 (4) - +clap?
00:43:084 (6) - DS?
00:46:584 (4) - ^
00:47:584 (1,2) - stack the 00:46:834 (5) 's front ?
00:57:084 (3) - 00:57:834 (4) blanket the (3)'end.
01:05:334 (2) - Do not give this too close at 01:04:834 (1) .
01:05:834 (3) - blanket the 01:05:334 (2) 's end.
01:21:084 (1) - blanket bad.
01:47:084 (2) - volume 40 or 50 ?
00:43:084 (6) - DS?
00:46:584 (4) - ^
00:47:584 (1,2) - stack the 00:46:834 (5) 's front ?
00:57:084 (3) - 00:57:834 (4) blanket the (3)'end.
01:05:334 (2) - Do not give this too close at 01:04:834 (1) .
01:05:834 (3) - blanket the 01:05:334 (2) 's end.
01:21:084 (1) - blanket bad.
01:47:084 (2) - volume 40 or 50 ?
[Other]
1.If you have any mod questions, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you Ranked.
3.Can you help me my map for a mod? Thanks!
Topic Starter
Thanks smallboatsmallboat wrote:
Hello, M4M Req. I am Chinese. Poor English sorry.
[General]
None.
[Easy]
00:07:084 (1,2) -They can blanket in mutual.
00:10:084 (5) - blanket
01:01:584 (2) - Do not give this too close at 01:00:584 (6) .
[Normal]
00:18:584 (5) - blanket the 00:17:084 (4) .
01:11:334 (2) - ^ the 01:12:084 (4) .
[Hard] OD+1 ?SPOILER00:14:584 (4) - +clap?
00:43:084 (6) - DS?
00:46:584 (4) - ^
00:47:584 (1,2) - stack the 00:46:834 (5) 's front ? It'll affect the distance but I only stack 00:47:834 (2) .
00:57:084 (3) - 00:57:834 (4) blanket the (3)'end.
01:05:334 (2) - Do not give this too close at 01:04:834 (1) .
01:05:834 (3) - blanket the 01:05:334 (2) 's end.
01:21:084 (1) - blanket bad.
01:47:084 (2) - volume 40 or 50 ? This circle make a finish to the song. So, 80% is okay.
[Other]
1.If you have any mod questions, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you Ranked. Thanks
3.Can you help me my map for a mod? Thanks! Sure
[General]
- offset may be too quick.
Try 2104±4.
[Hard]
- AR-1 OD+1
- 00:16:334 (6) - put it at x396y266? I think you shouldn't change the distance suddenly imo.
- 00:37:834 (4) - try this pattern.And change nexts applicably
- 00:41:834 (4,5) - what about these?
- 00:45:834 (3,5) - blanket?
- 00:49:834 (3,5) - change them into symmetric figure looks better.
- 00:52:084 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - flow may not be very good..I advise you not to break the trajectory
- 00:53:084 ~ 00:56:334 Rhythm is too relaxing..imo it should be full.
- 00:57:834 (4) - ctrl+g?
- 01:06:584 (4) - ^
- 01:20:584 the hitsound here sounds sudden.
- 01:25:584 (1,2,3,4,5) - why stream? I can't hear any whatever drumbeat or vocal.
- 01:26:084 stream should start from here.
- 01:47:084 (2) - put it at x240y379 may be better
[Normal]
- Too many circles..Normal should have many beautiful sliders imo
- None
[Easy]
- None.
- Good Diff~
Topic Starter
Okay, but I have to find a Taiko BAT.MachineGunt wrote:
I can make one map in taiko :3? plz thanks
OMG this taiko diff o.o
[Machine's Taiko Oni]
Well..
01:06:854 (118,119,120,121,122) - These 1/8, i think is better a 1/6 like 01:06:854 (118,119,120,121) - http://puu.sh/5553m.jpg
01:15:604 (27,28,29,30,31) - the same, change for another 1/6 01:15:604 (27,28,29,30) - http://puu.sh/555aj.jpg
01:40:854 (118,119,120,121,122) - remove these 1/8, and better a 1/4 kkd 01:40:854 (118,119,120) - http://puu.sh/555lB.jpg
I hope I have helped ^^
[Machine's Taiko Oni]
Well..
01:06:854 (118,119,120,121,122) - These 1/8, i think is better a 1/6 like 01:06:854 (118,119,120,121) - http://puu.sh/5553m.jpg
01:15:604 (27,28,29,30,31) - the same, change for another 1/6 01:15:604 (27,28,29,30) - http://puu.sh/555aj.jpg
01:40:854 (118,119,120,121,122) - remove these 1/8, and better a 1/4 kkd 01:40:854 (118,119,120) - http://puu.sh/555lB.jpg
I hope I have helped ^^
Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue!
General
- 01:47:104 - Here are two timing points in one place. Remove one.
- Due to your combo colour usage http://puu.sh/57Fsh.jpg this reserve arrow is hard to read. Change the colour or brighten the arrow up a little more.
Easy
00:13:104 (1) - NC is not needed. Remove it.
00:37:104 (1,1) - You change your combo pattern again. Remove the 2nd NC.
Normal
00:09:104 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:13:104 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:25:104 (1,2,3,4) - Spread this out a little more, its not good readable. Something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078282 , or find someting better.
00:53:104 (1) - NC not needed, remove it.
01:17:104 (5,6) - Movement from sliderend to the next circle plays weird, you should move the circle to the left side so it flows better.
Hard
00:09:104 (1,2,3,4) - Why is this spacing so weird made here. Try to make the spacing solid and consistant.
00:13:104 (1) - Remove NC, not needed.
00:22:604 (9,1,2) - First fix the spacing up a little here, and second, try to make the flow better with moving the circle left. Currently it plays very linear and not so good.
00:26:354 (7,1,2,3) - You need to fix up the spacing here, or else players play it different than it should be.
00:37:854 (4,5) - ^
01:02:854 (5,6) - Blanket this better.
01:15:854 (4,5,6) - , 01:18:354 (6,1,2) - Spacing is inconsistant again.
01:38:854 (5,1) - If you stack this its not readable enough to actually play it good. Unstack it to solve the issue.
Well, a lot of spacing differences and changes and some streams which i dont understand soundwise, but the set it fine overall.
General
- 01:47:104 - Here are two timing points in one place. Remove one.
- Due to your combo colour usage http://puu.sh/57Fsh.jpg this reserve arrow is hard to read. Change the colour or brighten the arrow up a little more.
Easy
00:13:104 (1) - NC is not needed. Remove it.
00:37:104 (1,1) - You change your combo pattern again. Remove the 2nd NC.
Normal
00:09:104 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:13:104 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:25:104 (1,2,3,4) - Spread this out a little more, its not good readable. Something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078282 , or find someting better.
00:53:104 (1) - NC not needed, remove it.
01:17:104 (5,6) - Movement from sliderend to the next circle plays weird, you should move the circle to the left side so it flows better.
Hard
00:09:104 (1,2,3,4) - Why is this spacing so weird made here. Try to make the spacing solid and consistant.
00:13:104 (1) - Remove NC, not needed.
00:22:604 (9,1,2) - First fix the spacing up a little here, and second, try to make the flow better with moving the circle left. Currently it plays very linear and not so good.
00:26:354 (7,1,2,3) - You need to fix up the spacing here, or else players play it different than it should be.
00:37:854 (4,5) - ^
01:02:854 (5,6) - Blanket this better.
01:15:854 (4,5,6) - , 01:18:354 (6,1,2) - Spacing is inconsistant again.
01:38:854 (5,1) - If you stack this its not readable enough to actually play it good. Unstack it to solve the issue.
Well, a lot of spacing differences and changes and some streams which i dont understand soundwise, but the set it fine overall.
clearing old requests~
Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable
[General]
you are missing the following skin files:
hitcircleoverlay.png
spinner-clear.png
spinner-spin.png
please add them as they are required to complete the skin set you are using for this map. You can choose to get them from the template skin under the skins folder in your osu! directory if you don't plan on making custom ones
add this code to the [Colours] sections of the .osu files to complete your hit circles skin:
SliderBorder: 255,255,255
imo the offset is a bit late, try 2090 (-14) instead
[Easy]
lots of unsanpped green lines, resnap them if possible
00:08:104 (2) - spacing here can be improved which will also fix the blanket
00:19:104 (1) - sounds like a new verse, should have a finish on this note
00:37:604 (2) - missing clap on start
00:53:104 (1,2) - i would perfectly center this by moving it right 2 grids, seems to be your intention anyways
01:02:854 (4) - instead of this, you can break it up into note + slider to better represent the vocals. 01:04:604 (5) - missing clap
01:16:104 (3) - clap on end
01:28:104 (2) - ^
01:35:104 (2,3) - try curving them more gently to give a more natural flow: 01:45:854 (1) - you can perfectly center this for a better outro effect (e.g. x:193 y:207)
[Normal]
00:05:604 (4) - missing clap
00:09:104 (1,2,3,4) - this sounds especially delayed with the current offset, which is why i suggested to do -14ms
00:24:104 (4) - to keep consisten with your other 4-note patterns this should be moved to 00:23:854
00:30:604 (6) - clap
00:53:104 (2) - should have a NC here considering how you dealt with previous occurrences
01:02:604 (4,5,6) - missing claps on all of these
01:17:104 (5,6) - avoid the partial overlap between 5 and 6; you can make the curve on 5 smoother by using a red control point in the middle:
01:35:104 (1,2) - this is a bit anti-flow considering the direction of 01:35:104 (1). Try a pattern like this (note 01:36:604 (4) is stacked at the start of 01:35:104 (1)):
[Hard]
00:03:104 (1) - missing clap on end
00:10:604 (1) - clap
00:20:354 (6) - clap on end
00:28:104 (1,2,3) - this has a rather extreme jump from 00:27:854 (6) which is quite unexpected, consider reducing the spacing to 2.0x or below
00:31:104 (3) - missing clap on end, also on 00:32:604 (1) there should be a clap
00:48:604 (4) - clap
00:49:354 (2) - did you clap on the wrong place? the clap in the music happens on the slider end
00:53:604 (2,6) - clap on start
01:04:604 (8) - clap
01:12:854 (1,2,3,4,5) - construct this star better, the skew is noticeable while playing
01:17:604 (4) - according to a previous pattern, NC is supposed to be here instead of 01:16:604 (1)
01:21:604 (2) - clap on start
01:26:249 - unsnapped green line, snap to 01:26:229
01:26:979 - there should be another note here to follow the 1/4s in the music and lead into the kiai
01:43:354 (2,6) - clap end
01:46:354 - add a note here to catch the guitars, feels a bit awkward to skip over that beat; also clap on start of 01:46:604 (1)
Flow in this diff is fine, but some spacing and positioning of notes can be handled better
Game-play wise the diffs are fine, but there are a lot of hitsounding inconsistencies with missing claps and whistle patters (which i did not mention since i dont know if they were done intentionally or not). Also you need two taiko diffs in order for this set to be rankable, i.e. add a muzukashii diff. Thats about all i can say right now, if you have any questions feel free to pm me. Good luck~
Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable
[General]
you are missing the following skin files:
hitcircleoverlay.png
spinner-clear.png
spinner-spin.png
please add them as they are required to complete the skin set you are using for this map. You can choose to get them from the template skin under the skins folder in your osu! directory if you don't plan on making custom ones
add this code to the [Colours] sections of the .osu files to complete your hit circles skin:
SliderBorder: 255,255,255
imo the offset is a bit late, try 2090 (-14) instead
[Easy]
lots of unsanpped green lines, resnap them if possible
00:08:104 (2) - spacing here can be improved which will also fix the blanket
00:19:104 (1) - sounds like a new verse, should have a finish on this note
00:37:604 (2) - missing clap on start
00:53:104 (1,2) - i would perfectly center this by moving it right 2 grids, seems to be your intention anyways
01:02:854 (4) - instead of this, you can break it up into note + slider to better represent the vocals. 01:04:604 (5) - missing clap
01:16:104 (3) - clap on end
01:28:104 (2) - ^
01:35:104 (2,3) - try curving them more gently to give a more natural flow: 01:45:854 (1) - you can perfectly center this for a better outro effect (e.g. x:193 y:207)
[Normal]
00:05:604 (4) - missing clap
00:09:104 (1,2,3,4) - this sounds especially delayed with the current offset, which is why i suggested to do -14ms
00:24:104 (4) - to keep consisten with your other 4-note patterns this should be moved to 00:23:854
00:30:604 (6) - clap
00:53:104 (2) - should have a NC here considering how you dealt with previous occurrences
01:02:604 (4,5,6) - missing claps on all of these
01:17:104 (5,6) - avoid the partial overlap between 5 and 6; you can make the curve on 5 smoother by using a red control point in the middle:
01:35:104 (1,2) - this is a bit anti-flow considering the direction of 01:35:104 (1). Try a pattern like this (note 01:36:604 (4) is stacked at the start of 01:35:104 (1)):
[Hard]
00:03:104 (1) - missing clap on end
00:10:604 (1) - clap
00:20:354 (6) - clap on end
00:28:104 (1,2,3) - this has a rather extreme jump from 00:27:854 (6) which is quite unexpected, consider reducing the spacing to 2.0x or below
00:31:104 (3) - missing clap on end, also on 00:32:604 (1) there should be a clap
00:48:604 (4) - clap
00:49:354 (2) - did you clap on the wrong place? the clap in the music happens on the slider end
00:53:604 (2,6) - clap on start
01:04:604 (8) - clap
01:12:854 (1,2,3,4,5) - construct this star better, the skew is noticeable while playing
01:17:604 (4) - according to a previous pattern, NC is supposed to be here instead of 01:16:604 (1)
01:21:604 (2) - clap on start
01:26:249 - unsnapped green line, snap to 01:26:229
01:26:979 - there should be another note here to follow the 1/4s in the music and lead into the kiai
01:43:354 (2,6) - clap end
01:46:354 - add a note here to catch the guitars, feels a bit awkward to skip over that beat; also clap on start of 01:46:604 (1)
Flow in this diff is fine, but some spacing and positioning of notes can be handled better
Game-play wise the diffs are fine, but there are a lot of hitsounding inconsistencies with missing claps and whistle patters (which i did not mention since i dont know if they were done intentionally or not). Also you need two taiko diffs in order for this set to be rankable, i.e. add a muzukashii diff. Thats about all i can say right now, if you have any questions feel free to pm me. Good luck~
Topic Starter
Thanks BounceBabe and jonathanlfj. All fixed.
Little timing check, sorry for not checking it before
Offset: 2076
you'll have to resnap all the green lines too
Also, my custom skin colors fit perfectly, here are the codes if you want to try them
100,255,0
210,255,0
0,130,255
Offset: 2076
you'll have to resnap all the green lines too
Also, my custom skin colors fit perfectly, here are the codes if you want to try them
100,255,0
210,255,0
0,130,255
Topic Starter
Thanks Sephibro. Edit the offset to 2076 and the colors.
From my queueueue
I'll try my best to point things out that were not already pointed out by modders before.
Remember to fix the timing points
Please resnap and call me back
I'll try my best to point things out that were not already pointed out by modders before.
Remember to fix the timing points
[Easy]
Fix this difficulty's timing and snap all the notes, then call me back.
[Hard]
Same with this difficulty
- 00:28:590 (2,3) - could be fixed better
- 00:40:590 (6) - this makes the map look really cluttered and is partially hidden by 00:38:590 (3) remap this part (for people not using the skin)
- 01:04:590 (6) - fix spacing
- 01:37:090 (4) - if you are going to do this stack it neatly underneath 01:35:090 (2) 's beginning
Fix this difficulty's timing and snap all the notes, then call me back.
[Hard]
Same with this difficulty
Please resnap and call me back
hey
taiko mods come as request
Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it
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Muzukashii]
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Oni]
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okay that's all
i think, you should find another taiko modders to check them again (at least 3 modders). all these taiko diffs need improvement with the patterns and notes
goodluck
taiko mods come as request
Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it
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General
☞ HP changed to be 4 or 5. 6 is unrankable for Muzukashii diff
☞ all Muzukashii and Oni diff must use 1.40x or 1.60x for the Slider Velocity
☞ delete 01:25:221 - timing point. there's not usefull because it has a same volume, sample like the previous timing points
☞ delete 01:47:076 - timing point! all taiko diffs aren't allowed use a short kiai like you used
☞ change all the volume to be 70% (45% is too low) and also change all the sampleset to be N or Normal. N gives stronger sound than S (soft)
☞ all Muzukashii and Oni diff must use 1.40x or 1.60x for the Slider Velocity
☞ delete 01:25:221 - timing point. there's not usefull because it has a same volume, sample like the previous timing points
☞ delete 01:47:076 - timing point! all taiko diffs aren't allowed use a short kiai like you used
☞ change all the volume to be 70% (45% is too low) and also change all the sampleset to be N or Normal. N gives stronger sound than S (soft)
Notes Structure
☞ all the notes are unsnapped! snap them please
☞ ooo triplet or ooo aren't allowed in Muzukashii diff
☞ some kat suggestions which will be given. just see on the Notes box
☞ ooo triplet or ooo aren't allowed in Muzukashii diff
☞ some kat suggestions which will be given. just see on the Notes box
Notes
• kat at 00:03:576 - . it will follow the kick sound like 00:04:576 -. and you used it too at 00:53:576 - << they have a same part of song and same pitch sounds too. so, please be consistent with it
• 00:06:576 - and 00:06:826 - change to be kats too. same like above. it'll follow the kick sound at 00:06:576 - , and 00:06:826 - is to keep the vocal pitch sound like 00:06:576 - which will be kat (if you change it)
• from 00:09:326 - until 00:09:576 - can be changed to be ooo. the reason is at the second suggestions on the Notes Structure box
• kat too at 00:14:576 - . it'll follow the kick sound and vocal too as well
• from 00:18:326 - until 00:18:576 - change to be ooo. the reason is at the second suggestions on the Notes Structure box
• kat too at 00:19:576 - if you change 00:03:576 - to be kat too. because it should have a same basic pattern/structure
• from 00:26:576 - until 00:27:326 - change to be o o o o. it will make a better failing pitch sounds (for vocal). and then, the one of the kat at 00:26:576 - will follow the kick sound from the song as well
• delete 00:44:451 -. the reason is at the second suggestions on the Notes Structure box. and then, at that part too isn't fit well to use triplet. so just use 1/2notes there. and change 00:44:576 - to be kat to follow the kick sound
• delete 00:48:451 -. there's not usefull to use triplet at there (and there's not any reasons to use it too). and then change 00:48:576 - to be kat. same like above, to follow the kick sound
• from 00:52:326 - until 00:52:576 - change to be ooo. the reason is at the second suggestions on the Notes Structure box
• change 00:57:576 - and 00:57:826 - to be o o. because it will follow the vocal sound (the pitch sound becomes lower at 00:57:826 - , not at 00:57:576 -. and then, if you change them, it will follow the kick sound again at 00:57:576 -
• from 00:59:326 - until 00:59:576 - change to be ooo. the reason is at the second suggestions on the Notes Structure box
• kat at 01:00:576 - , to follow the kick sound. like you use it at 01:01:076 - and 00:59:576 - (if you use my previous mod)
• kat too at 01:04:576 - . same like above, to follow the kick sound as well, like 01:03:576 - and 01:05:076 - that you have put kats at there
• kat too at 01:08:576 -. same like above again, to follow the kick sound, like 01:07:576 -
• inconsistent pattern at 01:09:326 - and 01:09:576 - . they should be o o, because you put them too after the finisher like 01:07:326 - and 01:07:576 -
• kat too at 01:10:576 - . to follow the kick sound again
• kat at 01:14:576 - ? to follow the kick sound again
• from 01:14:826 - until 01:15:076 - change to be ooo. the reason is at the second suggestions on the Notes Structure box
• kat again at 01:17:576 - . to follow the kick sound as well
• delete 01:26:951 - , if you want keep the finisher at 01:27:076 -. it's not allowed use finisher after triplet
• kat again at 01:45:576 - . to follow the kick sound
• from 01:46:326 - until 01:46:576 - change to be ooo. the triplet which is given much stronger and better than the previous one that you used. and then, the kat at 01:46:576 - will follow the kick sound as well too
• 00:06:576 - and 00:06:826 - change to be kats too. same like above. it'll follow the kick sound at 00:06:576 - , and 00:06:826 - is to keep the vocal pitch sound like 00:06:576 - which will be kat (if you change it)
• from 00:09:326 - until 00:09:576 - can be changed to be ooo. the reason is at the second suggestions on the Notes Structure box
• kat too at 00:14:576 - . it'll follow the kick sound and vocal too as well
• from 00:18:326 - until 00:18:576 - change to be ooo. the reason is at the second suggestions on the Notes Structure box
• kat too at 00:19:576 - if you change 00:03:576 - to be kat too. because it should have a same basic pattern/structure
• from 00:26:576 - until 00:27:326 - change to be o o o o. it will make a better failing pitch sounds (for vocal). and then, the one of the kat at 00:26:576 - will follow the kick sound from the song as well
• delete 00:44:451 -. the reason is at the second suggestions on the Notes Structure box. and then, at that part too isn't fit well to use triplet. so just use 1/2notes there. and change 00:44:576 - to be kat to follow the kick sound
• delete 00:48:451 -. there's not usefull to use triplet at there (and there's not any reasons to use it too). and then change 00:48:576 - to be kat. same like above, to follow the kick sound
• from 00:52:326 - until 00:52:576 - change to be ooo. the reason is at the second suggestions on the Notes Structure box
• change 00:57:576 - and 00:57:826 - to be o o. because it will follow the vocal sound (the pitch sound becomes lower at 00:57:826 - , not at 00:57:576 -. and then, if you change them, it will follow the kick sound again at 00:57:576 -
• from 00:59:326 - until 00:59:576 - change to be ooo. the reason is at the second suggestions on the Notes Structure box
• kat at 01:00:576 - , to follow the kick sound. like you use it at 01:01:076 - and 00:59:576 - (if you use my previous mod)
• kat too at 01:04:576 - . same like above, to follow the kick sound as well, like 01:03:576 - and 01:05:076 - that you have put kats at there
• kat too at 01:08:576 -. same like above again, to follow the kick sound, like 01:07:576 -
• inconsistent pattern at 01:09:326 - and 01:09:576 - . they should be o o, because you put them too after the finisher like 01:07:326 - and 01:07:576 -
• kat too at 01:10:576 - . to follow the kick sound again
• kat at 01:14:576 - ? to follow the kick sound again
• from 01:14:826 - until 01:15:076 - change to be ooo. the reason is at the second suggestions on the Notes Structure box
• kat again at 01:17:576 - . to follow the kick sound as well
• delete 01:26:951 - , if you want keep the finisher at 01:27:076 -. it's not allowed use finisher after triplet
• kat again at 01:45:576 - . to follow the kick sound
• from 01:46:326 - until 01:46:576 - change to be ooo. the triplet which is given much stronger and better than the previous one that you used. and then, the kat at 01:46:576 - will follow the kick sound as well too
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General
☞ HP changed to be 4 or 5. 6 is too high for this song
☞ all Muzukashii and Oni diff must use 1.40x or 1.60x for the Slider Velocity
☞ delete 01:25:221 - timing point. there's not usefull because it has a same volume, sample like the previous timing points
☞ delete 01:47:076 - timing point! all taiko diffs aren't allowed use a short kiai like you used
☞ change all the volume to be 70% (45% is too low) and also change all the sampleset to be N or Normal. N gives stronger sound than S (soft)
☞ all Muzukashii and Oni diff must use 1.40x or 1.60x for the Slider Velocity
☞ delete 01:25:221 - timing point. there's not usefull because it has a same volume, sample like the previous timing points
☞ delete 01:47:076 - timing point! all taiko diffs aren't allowed use a short kiai like you used
☞ change all the volume to be 70% (45% is too low) and also change all the sampleset to be N or Normal. N gives stronger sound than S (soft)
Notes Structure
☞ too many misusing finishers! the suggestion notes can be looked at the Notes box
☞ consider with the patterns that you used again there
☞ consider with the last patterns, start from 01:40:840 - until end. consider with them (1/4beatsnapdivisor notes without any break)
☞ consider with the patterns that you used again there
☞ consider with the last patterns, start from 01:40:840 - until end. consider with them (1/4beatsnapdivisor notes without any break)
Notes
• remove the finishers at 00:06:090 - and 00:06:590 -. there's not any reasons to use it. there's not any strong sounds at there or finishers sounds at there
• remove finisher at 00:07:840 - . the reason is same like above
• remove finishers at 00:15:590 - ; 00:16:090 - and 00:16:340 - . the reason is same like the first reason
• remove finishers at 00:17:340 - and 00:17:840 - too
• from 00:15:090 - until 00:17:840 - , i have a suggestion about the notes after you remove the finishers there http://puu.sh/5h7if.jpg
• remove the finishers at 00:25:840 - and 00:26:090 -
• remove finishers at 00:28:340 - and 00:28:590 -
• kat at 00:51:590 - , to follow the kick sound at there. you used to many don notes which will make a monotonous sounds and patterns too
• remove finishers at 00:54:590 - and 00:54:840 -
• remove finisher at 01:03:840 - . the finisher isn't allowed appear after triplet
• delete this note! 01:06:965 - . it has 2 notes at there._.
• kat at 01:12:590 - , it will follow the kick sound much better well than don
• kats at 01:13:590 - and 01:13:715 - . it's same like above, it will follow the kick sound at 01:13:590 - and at 01:13:715 - will make a more variaty note
• delete 01:15:715 - . it has 2 notes there._.
• kat too at 01:24:590 - to follow the kick sound
• kat again at 01:25:590 - to follow the kick sound as well like above
• remove finishers at 01:28:590 - and 01:28:840 -
• kat again at 01:32:590 - to follow the kick sound again there
• remove finisher at 01:34:090 -
• remove finisher at 01:37:840 - . finisher isn't allowed put after triplet like you used there
• remove finishers at 01:40:340 - and 01:40:590 -
• remove finisher at 00:07:840 - . the reason is same like above
• remove finishers at 00:15:590 - ; 00:16:090 - and 00:16:340 - . the reason is same like the first reason
• remove finishers at 00:17:340 - and 00:17:840 - too
• from 00:15:090 - until 00:17:840 - , i have a suggestion about the notes after you remove the finishers there http://puu.sh/5h7if.jpg
• remove the finishers at 00:25:840 - and 00:26:090 -
• remove finishers at 00:28:340 - and 00:28:590 -
• kat at 00:51:590 - , to follow the kick sound at there. you used to many don notes which will make a monotonous sounds and patterns too
• remove finishers at 00:54:590 - and 00:54:840 -
• remove finisher at 01:03:840 - . the finisher isn't allowed appear after triplet
• delete this note! 01:06:965 - . it has 2 notes at there._.
• kat at 01:12:590 - , it will follow the kick sound much better well than don
• kats at 01:13:590 - and 01:13:715 - . it's same like above, it will follow the kick sound at 01:13:590 - and at 01:13:715 - will make a more variaty note
• delete 01:15:715 - . it has 2 notes there._.
• kat too at 01:24:590 - to follow the kick sound
• kat again at 01:25:590 - to follow the kick sound as well like above
• remove finishers at 01:28:590 - and 01:28:840 -
• kat again at 01:32:590 - to follow the kick sound again there
• remove finisher at 01:34:090 -
• remove finisher at 01:37:840 - . finisher isn't allowed put after triplet like you used there
• remove finishers at 01:40:340 - and 01:40:590 -
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okay that's all
i think, you should find another taiko modders to check them again (at least 3 modders). all these taiko diffs need improvement with the patterns and notes
goodluck
Topic Starter
Thanks mingmichael. All fixed, I think.
Hi! M4M Here!
[General]
01:47:076 - This Kiai time makes no sense!
[Easy]
01:01:576 (2,3) - This is too hard for beginners!
01:45:826 (1) - to 01:45:576
[Normal]
00:09:076 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure, but I think this is too hard for Normal...
00:13:076 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:23:076 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:25:076 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:12:076 (4) - to 01:11:826
[Hard]
00:18:576 (6) - This clap makes no sense!
00:44:576 (4) - Add clap
00:43:076 (6) - Too far from 00:42:576 (5)
00:42:576 (5) - Too close from 00:41:826 (4)
That's All! Good Luck!
[General]
01:47:076 - This Kiai time makes no sense!
[Easy]
01:01:576 (2,3) - This is too hard for beginners!
01:45:826 (1) - to 01:45:576
[Normal]
00:09:076 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure, but I think this is too hard for Normal...
00:13:076 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:23:076 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:25:076 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:12:076 (4) - to 01:11:826
[Hard]
00:18:576 (6) - This clap makes no sense!
00:44:576 (4) - Add clap
00:43:076 (6) - Too far from 00:42:576 (5)
00:42:576 (5) - Too close from 00:41:826 (4)
That's All! Good Luck!
Topic Starter
iNickel wrote:
Hi! M4M Here!
[General]
01:47:076 - This Kiai time makes no sense! Just a big finish.
[Easy]
01:01:576 (2,3) - This is too hard for beginners!I think it's okay. I saw other map having the same type.
01:45:826 (1) - to 01:45:576 I agree but, if I move it to here, some players couldn't reach the slider.
[Normal]
00:09:076 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure, but I think this is too hard for Normal...
00:13:076 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:23:076 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:25:076 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:12:076 (4) - to 01:11:826 I'll let it here.
[Hard]
00:18:576 (6) - This clap makes no sense!
00:44:576 (4) - Add clap
00:43:076 (6) - Too far from 00:42:576 (5)
00:42:576 (5) - Too close from 00:41:826 (4)
That's All! Good Luck!
Easy
00:37:576 (2) Move the second slider point to x:216 y:160 and then the third to x:264 y:144
00:47:576 (4) Move this slider to x:324 y:180
00:54:826 add hc
01:12:576 (3) Move the second slider point to x:348 y:252 and then the last to y:240 y:264
Normal
00:03:076 (1,2) Maybe do those sliders a bot more curvy
00:29:076 (5) Do this slider like this maybe http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1108266
00:57:076 (1) Why this distance? Maybe no far distance there.
Hard
00:03:826 (2) Move it to x:312
00:16:076 Maybe a tripler here? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1108281
00:49:826 (3) Move the second slider point to x:332 y:152
Thats all
Good Luck :3
00:37:576 (2) Move the second slider point to x:216 y:160 and then the third to x:264 y:144
00:47:576 (4) Move this slider to x:324 y:180
00:54:826 add hc
01:12:576 (3) Move the second slider point to x:348 y:252 and then the last to y:240 y:264
Normal
00:03:076 (1,2) Maybe do those sliders a bot more curvy
00:29:076 (5) Do this slider like this maybe http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1108266
00:57:076 (1) Why this distance? Maybe no far distance there.
Hard
00:03:826 (2) Move it to x:312
00:16:076 Maybe a tripler here? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1108281
00:49:826 (3) Move the second slider point to x:332 y:152
Thats all
Good Luck :3
Topic Starter
Thanks Come[Back]Home. All fixed.
Hi sheela !!! M4M from Queue
Currently, I can't mod Taiko, I'm just a novice on this art c:
Thanks for M4M and hope it be helpful (:
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Unrankable ─ 
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Tips & tricks ─ ♥ Greetings ─ * Comments ─
Lines with no marks are mods.
Unrankable ─ Doubtful ─ Tips & tricks ─ ♥ Greetings ─ * Comments ─ Lines with no marks are mods.
[Easy]
♥ No complaints ^^ VERY GOOD EASY DIFF ^^
[Normal]
* There are some small discrepancies on spacing... and also a few ones I noticed while playing, so I consider them as not so small to be ignored.
* In fact, some patterns still need a bit more work. For example: the transition on 00:04:076 (2,3) - feels me broken, since the slider tail (in truth, the slider shape) suggests me where's the next note, but I find it elsewhere. If it's part of your mapping style, I'm inclined to accept it, athough not agreeing with.
* The opposition at 00:09:576 (4,5) - feels me interesting (: and remind me some mapping style from my love ♥
00:14:576 (3) - Move to x:148 y:264 to fix spacing with the prior and next sliders.
00:20:076 (3) - It would land better on next slider's head by doing a curve like this → http://puu.sh/5mw6z.jpg
00:58:576 (4) - Move to x:364 y:236 to fix spacing here.
01:20:576 (4) - Move by 1 grid right for perfectness together with 01:18:576 (6) -
01:21:076 (5,6) - Placement would be improved a lot here. Suggestion → http://puu.sh/5mwnU.jpg ← and, of course, 01:22:576 (6) - at x:256 y:276.
01:25:576 (1,2,3) - Better appearance → http://puu.sh/5mwDj.jpg ← In order to achieve this: make 01:25:576 (1) - stay on x:256 y:132, 01:26:076 (2) - on x:328 y:252 and 01:26:576 (3) - on x:188 y:252.
and the patterns at last Kiai would be centralized, unless not aiming axial symmetry. But would be nicer (:
[Hard]
* It feels good, including the streams that are OK and fit tightly the song I just complaint with some triplets (mighty not all!). I feel it's a bit like a plague on harder diffs, since a few mappers abuse of them by placing them where has no music reason to do it. And by triplets, I'm saying not to normal triplets (three notes, either stacked or not), but also "combined triplets" such 00:11:076 (3,4,5) - i.e., a "note, note, slider" or a "slider, note, note" patterns.
00:11:076 (3,4,5) - There's no place for (4) here. It feels overmapped.
00:12:076 (7,8,1) - Same as last, in relation to (8).
00:15:076 (1,2,3) - ^ (2)
00:16:076 (5,6,7) - ^ (6)
00:27:076 (3,4,5) - ^ (4)
00:28:076 (1,2,3) - ^ (2)
Well... if you're willing to keep some of them, the solution you done at 01:31:076 (3,4) - feels me better, with a silencing pair of green lines around the tail of 1/4 slider (like the last sliders on harder diff of my ranked map, for an example).
* In general, placements would be improved too. Look for some advanced modders (I'm not so good, my weaknesses are noticeable).
♥ No complaints ^^ VERY GOOD EASY DIFF ^^
[Normal]
* There are some small discrepancies on spacing... and also a few ones I noticed while playing, so I consider them as not so small to be ignored.
* In fact, some patterns still need a bit more work. For example: the transition on 00:04:076 (2,3) - feels me broken, since the slider tail (in truth, the slider shape) suggests me where's the next note, but I find it elsewhere. If it's part of your mapping style, I'm inclined to accept it, athough not agreeing with.
* The opposition at 00:09:576 (4,5) - feels me interesting (: and remind me some mapping style from my love ♥
00:14:576 (3) - Move to x:148 y:264 to fix spacing with the prior and next sliders.
00:20:076 (3) - It would land better on next slider's head by doing a curve like this → http://puu.sh/5mw6z.jpg
00:58:576 (4) - Move to x:364 y:236 to fix spacing here.
01:20:576 (4) - Move by 1 grid right for perfectness together with 01:18:576 (6) -
01:21:076 (5,6) - Placement would be improved a lot here. Suggestion → http://puu.sh/5mwnU.jpg ← and, of course, 01:22:576 (6) - at x:256 y:276.
01:25:576 (1,2,3) - Better appearance → http://puu.sh/5mwDj.jpg ← In order to achieve this: make 01:25:576 (1) - stay on x:256 y:132, 01:26:076 (2) - on x:328 y:252 and 01:26:576 (3) - on x:188 y:252.
and the patterns at last Kiai would be centralized, unless not aiming axial symmetry. But would be nicer (:
[Hard]
* It feels good, including the streams that are OK and fit tightly the song
I just complaint with some triplets (mighty not all!). I feel it's a bit like a plague on harder diffs, since a few mappers abuse of them by placing them where has no music reason to do it. And by triplets, I'm saying not to normal triplets (three notes, either stacked or not), but also "combined triplets" such 00:11:076 (3,4,5) - i.e., a "note, note, slider" or a "slider, note, note" patterns.00:11:076 (3,4,5) - There's no place for (4) here. It feels overmapped.
00:12:076 (7,8,1) - Same as last, in relation to (8).
00:15:076 (1,2,3) - ^ (2)
00:16:076 (5,6,7) - ^ (6)
00:27:076 (3,4,5) - ^ (4)
00:28:076 (1,2,3) - ^ (2)
Well... if you're willing to keep some of them, the solution you done at 01:31:076 (3,4) - feels me better, with a silencing pair of green lines around the tail of 1/4 slider (like the last sliders on harder diff of my ranked map, for an example).
* In general, placements would be improved too. Look for some advanced modders (I'm not so good, my weaknesses are noticeable).
Currently, I can't mod Taiko, I'm just a novice on this art c:
Thanks for M4M and hope it be helpful (:
Att.
Topic Starter
Thanks Alarido. All fixed, I think.
Hi, m4m.
[General]
offset=1076?
[Easy]
00:08:076 (2) - move to 336|192
00:27:076 (1) - blanket better
00:42:076 (2) - move to 276|216
01:17:076 (4) - move the last little square to 196|48
01:24:076 (2) - the last little is off-screen
01:36:076 (3) - blanket better
01:40:076 (2) - ^
[Normal]
00:45:076 (1) - blanket better
00:53:076 (1) - ^
01:21:076 (5) - move the last little square to 352|132
01:36:576 (4) - move to 264|212
01:37:076 (5) - blanket better
[Hard]
00:16:826 (6) - blanket better
00:23:326 (2) - ^
00:27:326 (4) - ^
00:53:576 (2) - ^
00:59:076 (7) - nc?
01:11:326 (2) - blanket better
01:43:326 (2) - ^
Goodluck.
[General]
offset=1076?
[Easy]
00:08:076 (2) - move to 336|192
00:27:076 (1) - blanket better
00:42:076 (2) - move to 276|216
01:17:076 (4) - move the last little square to 196|48
01:24:076 (2) - the last little is off-screen
01:36:076 (3) - blanket better
01:40:076 (2) - ^
[Normal]
00:45:076 (1) - blanket better
00:53:076 (1) - ^
01:21:076 (5) - move the last little square to 352|132
01:36:576 (4) - move to 264|212
01:37:076 (5) - blanket better
[Hard]
00:16:826 (6) - blanket better
00:23:326 (2) - ^
00:27:326 (4) - ^
00:53:576 (2) - ^
00:59:076 (7) - nc?
01:11:326 (2) - blanket better
01:43:326 (2) - ^
Goodluck.
Topic Starter
Thanks rinsukir. All fixed, I think.
hello ~
here's m4m from my queue
remember they are just purely some suggestion from me, feel free to igrone this :3
oh my 7th page
[Easy]
00:28:576 (2) - how about move this circle to x:344 y:366? quite nazi here but to make it a bit farther from 00:26:576 (6) for a better looking. and i guess you can take a rest about 2 last pattern since there's a spinner afterwards
00:47:576 (4) - how about this slider? http://puu.sh/5uKRT simply curve blanket'ed with 00:47:076 (3) and end at middle screen so it makes easy for newbie to catch the spinner to get a max bonus as possible
01:27:076 (1) - adding finish here should be nicer instead of whistle. kiai time is always nice to start a note with a finish sound even there is no cymbal sound at the song, right?
01:40:076 (2) - remove this whistle to be consistency with 01:36:076 (3)
[Normal]
00:10:576 (5) - feels gap here. i wonder if you can remove this note and add 1/2 slider with clap on tail at 00:10:326? try it
00:14:576 (3) - same here too
00:24:576 (3) - yeah this too
00:26:576 (3) - hueeeee :3
00:53:076 (1) - adding finish here? totally same reason like easy that i mentioned
01:11:076 (1,2,3) - better to make these notes symmetrical because it easier to read
01:12:076 (4) - move this slider 1 grid to left for a perfect blanket
01:27:076 (1) - adding finish here? and yeah still same reason as easy
i think you could improve some random placement in this diff. there are so many kind of variety beautiful pattern to make like pentagon or smth?
[Insane]
00:05:826 (7) - can you stack this perfectly with 00:04:326 (4)'s tail?
00:06:326 (9,1,2,3,4) - how about this polygon? http://puu.sh/5uM5Q
01:27:076 (1) - ^
i think that's all
good luck with your map >w<
here's m4m from my queue
remember they are just purely some suggestion from me, feel free to igrone this :3
oh my 7th page
[Easy]
00:28:576 (2) - how about move this circle to x:344 y:366? quite nazi here but to make it a bit farther from 00:26:576 (6) for a better looking. and i guess you can take a rest about 2 last pattern since there's a spinner afterwards
00:47:576 (4) - how about this slider? http://puu.sh/5uKRT simply curve blanket'ed with 00:47:076 (3) and end at middle screen so it makes easy for newbie to catch the spinner to get a max bonus as possible
SPOILER
01:01:576 (2,3,4,5) - only these notes that i see at red tick, it made the clap sound feels missing here. since this is easy, better maybe you can move them to white tick? try to make it consistency with the clap sound tho372,36,47576,2,0,P|376:132|296:188,1,200
01:27:076 (1) - adding finish here should be nicer instead of whistle. kiai time is always nice to start a note with a finish sound even there is no cymbal sound at the song, right?
01:40:076 (2) - remove this whistle to be consistency with 01:36:076 (3)
[Normal]
00:10:576 (5) - feels gap here. i wonder if you can remove this note and add 1/2 slider with clap on tail at 00:10:326? try it
00:14:576 (3) - same here too
00:24:576 (3) - yeah this too
00:26:576 (3) - hueeeee :3
00:53:076 (1) - adding finish here? totally same reason like easy that i mentioned
01:11:076 (1,2,3) - better to make these notes symmetrical because it easier to read
01:12:076 (4) - move this slider 1 grid to left for a perfect blanket
01:27:076 (1) - adding finish here? and yeah still same reason as easy
i think you could improve some random placement in this diff. there are so many kind of variety beautiful pattern to make like pentagon or smth?
[Insane]
00:05:826 (7) - can you stack this perfectly with 00:04:326 (4)'s tail?
00:06:326 (9,1,2,3,4) - how about this polygon? http://puu.sh/5uM5Q
SPOILER
00:53:076 (1) - adding finish here? as easyyyy c:408,140,6326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,28,6576,5,8,0:0:0:0:
324,173,6826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,50,7076,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,104,7326,2,0,P|214:112|178:88,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:27:076 (1) - ^
i think that's all
good luck with your map >w<
Topic Starter
Sorry for the late respond. Thanks Vhy, all fixed.
Hello~ :3
Here's a Taiko Mod via My Taiko Moding Queue
I am glad if it becomes helpful.
Here's a Taiko Mod via My Taiko Moding Queue
I am glad if it becomes helpful.
My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D , K is Big Notes .. d,k.
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D , K is Big Notes .. d,k.
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
[General]
- none.
[Muzukashii]
- 00:15:576 (42) – k
- 00:20:076 (56) – d
- 00:22:576 (64) – k
- 00:30:826 (89) – add d
- 00:32:826 (94) – k is better pattern
- 00:33:326 (96,97) – swap if you change 94
- 00:34:576 (100) – k
- 00:35:326 (102,103) – swap
- 00:36:576 (3) – k
- 00:50:576 (44,46,47) – kdk
- 00:58:576 (69,71) – kd
- 01:21:076 (35) – add d
- 01:21:201 (36) - ^ cause be same 00:47:076 (32,33,34) -
- 01:24:826 (47) – k want to accent
- 01:38:576 (90) - k
- 01:26:201 (51) – add d?
[Oni]
Good Luck! - 00:06:076 (24) – d
- 00:08:826 (37,38,39) – how about swap?
- 00:10:951 (4) – k same 00:06:826 (27,28,29) -
- 00:12:076 (9) – delete?
- 00:12:951 (12) – d? if you like..
- 00:14:076 (18) - k hihat follow. and plays better I think.
- 00:18:201 (40,41) – swap. Want to 41 k
- Either change k
00:20:576 (5) – follow sneadrum(High pitch drum)
00:20:076 (3) - follow vocal ,, and patterned d d kddk d d k.. - 00:22:076 (13) - delete
- 00:24:076 (21) - d
- 00:24:951 (27) - ^ is better.
- 00:25:576 (30) – add d cause drums no stopped, and vocal also no stopped.
- 00:27:576 (37) – k
- 00:39:576 (16) - k is better. Can follow snea drum, and louder hihat sounds.
- 00:41:826 (30,31) – k pitch kept ,and following snea drums
- 00:50:576 (35) – k want to accent (is fit as music)and follow snea.
- 01:24:576 (35) -^
- 00:52:076 (42) – k vocal sounds this timing,and follow snea.
- 00:58:576 (75) – k
- 01:14:826 (24) – d
Topic Starter
Thanks JUDYDANNY. All fixed, I think.
[Hard]
open
try this ↓
00:14:576 - slider 2/4
00:19:576 (2) - slider here 2/4
00:19:576 - circle here
01:17:076 (9) - move to X:353 Y:282
01:25:576 - circle here
01:28:076 - ^
01:28:201 - ^
01:32:076 - ^
01:32:076 - ^
01:39:076 - slider here
nice song~
01:35:076 (3,4) -01:39:076 (1,2) - is follow the singing
01:40:826 (6,7,1) - 01:44:076 (4,5,6) - is follow the rhythm
Don't use two style in the singing and rhythm at random
Good luck for you~
try this ↓
00:14:576 - slider 2/4
00:19:576 (2) - slider here 2/4
00:19:576 - circle here
01:17:076 (9) - move to X:353 Y:282
01:25:576 - circle here
01:28:076 - ^
01:28:201 - ^
01:32:076 - ^
01:32:076 - ^
01:39:076 - slider here
nice song~
01:35:076 (3,4) -01:39:076 (1,2) - is follow the singing
01:40:826 (6,7,1) - 01:44:076 (4,5,6) - is follow the rhythm
Don't use two style in the singing and rhythm at random
Good luck for you~
Topic Starter
Thanks tellertheworld. One thing is, I didn't change:
00:19:576 (2) - slider here 2/4
Anyway, thanks.
00:19:576 (2) - slider here 2/4
Anyway, thanks.
from my M4M queue
[General]
- Check letterbox please and unherited Timing points. then overall good
- 00:26:088 (5) - stack with 00:23:088 (1) ?
- 00:30:588 (4) - stack with 00:26:588 (6) ?
- 01:28:088 (2) - Ummm.. this?
Or copy paste the code :416,164,88088,2,0,P|416:246|396:272,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
- 01:37:088 (4,5) - hue bad slider
- 00:03:088 (1) - move the 2nd point to 204,152
- 00:29:088 (5) - Wave slider? ahh i have a great wave sliderSPOILER
[spoilerbox]
Or copy paste the code :336,48,29088,2,0,B|368:64|404:44|404:44|440:24|476:44,1,140
- 00:39:088 (1) - Too curve
- 01:01:588 (2,3) - MMmmm, so different at 01:02:588 (4) D:
[spoilerbox] - \:D/
- 01:41:076 (1,2) - blanket
Lol error
Topic Starter
Thanks for the mod DenoisoGoiso.DenoisoGoiso wrote:
2 KUDOSU IS KOMEH
from my M4M queue
[General]I think that without letterbox is more better.
- Check letterbox please and unherited Timing points. then overall good
[Easy][Normal]
- 00:26:088 (5) - stack with 00:23:088 (1) ? Okay
- 00:30:588 (4) - stack with 00:26:588 (6) ? The one I use is okay
- 01:28:088 (2) - Ummm.. this? Okay
Or copy paste the code :416,164,88088,2,0,P|416:246|396:272,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:- - hue bad slider Okay
[Hard]
- 00:03:088 (1) - move the 2nd point to 204,152 No
- 00:29:088 (5) - Wave slider? ahh i have a great wave slider Okay
SPOILER
Or copy paste the code :336,48,29088,2,0,B|368:64|404:44|404:44|440:24|476:44,1,140- 00:39:088 (1) - Too curve No change
- 01:01:588 (2,3) - MMmmm, so different at 01:02:588 (4) D: Okay
[spoilerbox]- \:D/
ahuehuehuehue good luck
- 01:41:076 (1,2) - blanket Okay
Hello M4M
[Easy]
00:47:588 (4) - make it a clap slider
01:13:588 (3) - add the tick hitsound
01:14:588 - add a clap note here
01:15:088 (1) - move to x:80 y:144 (nazi!)
[Normal]
00:10:588 (5) - remove clap at slider end and put at the start
00:14:588 (3) - ^
00:24:588 (3) - clap at slider start
00:26:588 (3) - ^
00:29:088 (5) - clap at slider bounce
01:11:588 (3) - clap
01:40:588 (4) - move to x:76 y:148 (looks neater)
[Taiko]
Nothing to say on these ones
[Hard]
00:19:576 (3) - clap
01:26:826 (6) - NC
01:27:076 (1) -remove NC
ADVENTURE TIME! insta-fave love the map and skin
[Easy]
00:47:588 (4) - make it a clap slider
01:13:588 (3) - add the tick hitsound
01:14:588 - add a clap note here
01:15:088 (1) - move to x:80 y:144 (nazi!)
[Normal]
00:10:588 (5) - remove clap at slider end and put at the start
00:14:588 (3) - ^
00:24:588 (3) - clap at slider start
00:26:588 (3) - ^
00:29:088 (5) - clap at slider bounce
01:11:588 (3) - clap
01:40:588 (4) - move to x:76 y:148 (looks neater)
[Taiko]
Nothing to say on these ones
[Hard]
00:19:576 (3) - clap
01:26:826 (6) - NC
01:27:076 (1) -remove NC
ADVENTURE TIME! insta-fave love the map and skin
Topic Starter
Thanks RatedNC17. I didn't change, in the Hard section, the last two suggestions.
Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.
[General]
Easy and Normal have a different offset with everything else, make the necessary changes
[Muzukashii]
nothing~
[Kioshi's Taiko Oni]
00:22:076 - add d? it serves as bridging to the kd kd part since going into it from a break feels weird
00:32:951 (1) - start at 00:33:076, it sounds better that way
00:53:076 (50) - change to d to fit the drums
01:27:076 (50) - ^
good luck for rank~
All are suggestions unless in red.
[General]
Easy and Normal have a different offset with everything else, make the necessary changes
[Muzukashii]
nothing~
[Kioshi's Taiko Oni]
00:22:076 - add d? it serves as bridging to the kd kd part since going into it from a break feels weird
00:32:951 (1) - start at 00:33:076, it sounds better that way
00:53:076 (50) - change to d to fit the drums
01:27:076 (50) - ^
good luck for rank~
Topic Starter
Thanks CoroQuetz. All fixed.
Sorry I'm really late for my Mod. I seen a cockroach into my room, and hid into my bed rapidly!
[Easy]
00:43:576 (4,5) - Have these two have same x axis
01:02:576 (3) - While holding this note press maj. It will find a perfect diagonal of the previous note.
01:15:076 (1,2) - Same Y axis
01:37:076 (4,5) - I don't know if you did on purpose but you forgot clap at the end of sliders
01:41:076 (3) - I seriously think that whistle is out of place
[Normal]
00:37:076 (1,2) - Same Y axis
00:38:076 (3,4) - ^
Nothing else
[Hard]
00:52:826 (8) - That whistle sound doesn't fit the music at all.
01:26:576 (5) - Add a clap here. It will fit more with (1)
Sorry, I can't mod Taiko.
Hopes i helped you
[Easy]
00:43:576 (4,5) - Have these two have same x axis
01:02:576 (3) - While holding this note press maj. It will find a perfect diagonal of the previous note.
01:15:076 (1,2) - Same Y axis
01:37:076 (4,5) - I don't know if you did on purpose but you forgot clap at the end of sliders
01:41:076 (3) - I seriously think that whistle is out of place
[Normal]
00:37:076 (1,2) - Same Y axis
00:38:076 (3,4) - ^
Nothing else
[Hard]
00:52:826 (8) - That whistle sound doesn't fit the music at all.
01:26:576 (5) - Add a clap here. It will fit more with (1)
Sorry, I can't mod Taiko.
Hopes i helped you
Topic Starter
Thanks for the mod Winek.Winek wrote:
Sorry I'm really late for my Mod. I seen a cockroach into my room, and hid into my bed rapidly!
[Easy]
00:43:576 (4,5) - Have these two have same x axis I like the way it was.
01:02:576 (3) - While holding this note press maj. It will find a perfect diagonal of the previous note.
01:15:076 (1,2) - Same Y axis Nazi. I like the way it was.
01:37:076 (4,5) - I don't know if you did on purpose but you forgot clap at the end of sliders I forgot. Thanks.
01:41:076 (3) - I seriously think that whistle is out of place I think is okay.
[Normal]
00:37:076 (1,2) - Same Y axis No. I want to match the pattern of 00:38:076 (3,4) .
00:38:076 (3,4) - ^ No. The reason I write above is the reason I don't want to change.
Nothing else
[Hard]
00:52:826 (8) - That whistle sound doesn't fit the music at all. Okay.
01:26:576 (5) - Add a clap here. It will fit more with (1) Okay.
Sorry, I can't mod Taiko.
Hopes i helped you