gokugohan12468 wrote:

Here Normal Diff

I lazying for Mapping

1. Tu as beaucoup trop de kiai time, c'est unrankable. Sur les trois, le premier me semble complètement inutile. Je te conseille de l'enlever et tout sera bon.

1. 00:03:084 (1,2,3,4) - Mauvais distance snapping, il doit être constant en Easy.
2. 00:11:084 (1,2,3) - Mal alignés.
3. 00:13:084 (4) - NC.
4. 00:14:084 (6,1) - Mauvais distance snapping.
5. 00:17:084 (3,4) - ^
6. 00:19:584 (1,2) - ^
7. 00:21:584 (3,4,5) - ^ etc.... Je vais pas tous les pointer mais tu as énormément d'erreurs comme celle-là. Je te conseille de tout vérifier et corriger tout ceux qui ne vont pas.
8. 00:23:084 (4) - NC.
9. 00:27:584 (2) - x=400 y=120 pour un parallélogramme parfait.
10. 01:20:084 (4) - NC.
11. 01:35:084 (1,1,1,1) - Ce genre de NC n'est accepté que dans de rare ca. Et là ce n'est pas le cas. Enlève-les.

1. Toujours les mêmes problèmes de distance snapping qui doit être constant en Normal.
2. 00:05:084 (3,4,5) - Mal alignés
3. 00:11:334 (2) - x=176 y=148 rends mieux.
4. 00:57:084 (1,2,3,4,5) - Presque symétrique mais ça ne l'est pas.

1. Il y a beaucoup de streams qui n'ont pas l'air de suivre la chanson. On a parfois l'impression que les notes sont mises aléatoirement. Je te conseille de rechecker un peu tout ça.

1. Kiai is not the same in all diffs
2. Hard has different tags

1. 00:09:084 (5,6,7) - They touch the slider before, it makes that very bad to see and to play, move it to another place?
2. 00:30:584 (4,5) - Same thing
3. 00:53:084 (1,2) - ^ Change sliders' shape
4. 00:20:084 (2) - A symmetrical slider will be better
5. 00:21:584 (3) - Also, making this the opposite will make a nice pattern. Try that:
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:39:084 (5,6) - There's a good pattern in here, but these two beats ruin that, try something like this:
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:42:084 (2) - Copy (1) and rearrange that, so they will be similar!
8. 00:46:084 (2) - Move a bit to the right
9. 00:57:084 (1) - Hidden by the slider, not good to see in an Easy
10. 01:07:084 - Kiai should end here
11. 01:40:084 (2) - Move a bit to the right (remember to fix spacing)
12. 01:45:084 - I'd end kiai here and then add another little kiai time just for that note

1. 00:05:084 (3,4,5) - Make them vertically linear
2. 00:18:584 (6) - Fix spacing
3. 00:19:084 (7) - NC here instead of 00:19:584 (1) -
4. 00:20:084 (2) - Fix spacing
5. 00:23:084 (5,6,7) - Not well spaced :\
6. 00:45:084 (1,2,4,5,) - Not really appropriate for a Normal
7. 00:47:584 (6) - ^
8. 01:02:084 (4) - Little spacing issue
9. 01:13:084 (5) - ^
10. 01:25:584 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue that could be much confusing for noob players

• 
  What rezoons said, I found it overmapped, too many streams. Even if it's a "Hard" diff, it doesn't mean it has to be really hard! Song is quite slow so make it calm and enjoyable but quite challenging at the same time, better recheck it.

1. Hitsounds are too loud for the song, change it to around 70% instead, during Kiai Time you can make it higher to around 80%

Angelic Force wrote:

Hi, M4M from my queue!

Sorry if you didn't read my M4M rules, but just to let you know, I only map 2 difficulties (to be fair since my map only has 1 diff currently). Since your map has more than 2, and you didn't state which 2 difficulties you want modded, I decided to mod the Normal and Hard diffs.

General

1. Hitsounds are too loud for the song, change it to around 70% instead, during Kiai Time you can make it higher to around 80% OK

Normal

SPOILER

1. 00:22:334 (6) - Not perfectly straight. Fixed.
2. 00:55:084 (5) - This loop is not symmetrical, looks slightly weird. Change it to a weird shape.
3. 01:21:584 (8) - This is slightly slanted, not straight compared to 01:21:084 (7) Fixed
4. 00:52:334 (1) - Move this slider 1/2 a beat later, so it starts from here 00:52:584, because it's hard to hear the background instruments at that part. Fixed

Hard

SPOILER

1. 00:08:834 (4,5,6,7,8) - Don't stack these notes exactly on each other, maybe space them out to make a little part of the next circle barely visible. Fixed
2. Try to change the circle size to 4. Most hard maps use circle size 4. Only some difficult insane maps use 5. Circle size 5 makes playing with Hard Rock mod very annoying.
3. If you feel that changing the circle size to 4 makes the song too easy, you can change the AR to 7 to compensate for the difference. OK

Hope it helped, good luck with the map!

Lucy_Heartfilia wrote:

Sorry for late mod and Because of poor English,when I mod other country person's map I can't do my best to describe all what I want to say-,-

General
You should set Current Position as Preview Point in all difsFixed

Easy
00:09:084 (5),(6),(7) - First unbeautifully overlap with slider (4),then hard overlap in Easy difsOk
00:31:584 - Add hitsound finishOk
00:43:084 (3),(4),(5) - ~ 00:09:084Ok
00:53:084 (1),(2) - unbeautifully slider,you can made it betterChange it to a weird slider but ok
01:07:084 - ~ 00:31:584 Ok
01:29:584 (3),(4),(5),(1) - Very hard in basic playerOk
01:43:084 - ~ 00:31:584 I think spinner add finishOk

Normal
00:15:584 (2) - distance with slider (1),make it balanceOk
00:53:834 (3) - distinceOk
00:57:084 (1),(3),(5) - in one line (2),(4) in other lineOk
01:12:084 - unbeautiful overlapOk

Hard
You should adjust your distince in hard difI'll check it.
00:08:834 (4) - distinceOk
00:13:584 (8),(9) - right grid and not overlapOk
00:39:084 (7) - not overlapOk
01:37:084 (2) - distinceOk


Good Luck

• 1.Your bg should be 1024x768, the current one is unrankable
  
  2. There's a slight typo in Tags, lol it should be 'human' not 'humain'
  
  3. AiMod says your Hard diff has different Tags. Tags in Hard diff has some words with capital letter, and easy diff and normal diff don't. you should check it and make it consistent.
  
  4. since you have no storyboard, uncheck Letterbox during Breaks
  
  5. the current hitsound is too loud, imo, maybe you can lower it to 70%-80%?
  
  6. it's only suggestion, but how about muting the normal sliderslide?

• AR4 for a song with BPM 120 is too fast, i suggest AR3
  OD-1? Since there are short spinners
  
  00:03:084 (1,2) - i'm not really good at this, butif you're going to make a shape like Finn's head, but you could try like this
  
  SPOILER

  
  sorry i don't know how to put codes ;_;
  00:07:084 (3) - new combo
  00:12:084 (3) - add clap for consistency with 00:14:084 (6) -
  00:14:084 (6) - remove finish and add it at 00:13:584 (5) - for consistency with 00:11:584 (2) -
  00:17:084 (3) - remove finish and claps, but add claps only at slider's reverse arrow for consistency with 00:15:084 (1) -
  00:19:084 (5) - should be nc (long white tick), then remove nc 00:19:584 (1) -
  00:23:084 (4) - should be nc (long white tick), then remove nc 00:24:084 (1) -
  00:30:584 (4,5) - they are kinda hidden behind previous slider. i suggest to change their position
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:41:084 (1) - distance error with previous circle
  00:38:584 (4) - add clap?
  00:39:084 (5) - move down one grid so it'll stack better with 00:37:584 (2) -
  00:43:584 (4) - i suggest to move it somewhere else, since it's hidden by 00:42:084 (2) -
  00:59:084 (4,5) - try not to stack in easiest diff
  01:13:584 (4) - add clap for consistency with 01:11:084 (1) -
  01:17:084 (4,5) - try not to stack in easiest diff
  01:23:084 (1) - distance error with previous slider
  01:30:584 (5,1) - try not to stack in easiest diff
  
  kinda weird when the prologue has more hitsounds than the kiai times

• OD-1?
  HP-1?
  
  00:13:084 (6) - nc
  00:15:084 (1) - distance error
  00:17:084 (5) - i suggest to remove finish at slider's tail and reverse arrow
  00:23:084 (7) - nc, then remove nc 00:24:084 (1) - , add nc 00:25:084 (3) -
  00:31:584 (1) - add finish
  00:52:584 (1,2) - stack them properly
  01:05:084 (1) - add finish
  01:38:084 (1) - remove nc, add nc at 01:39:084 (2) - (long white tick)
  00:52:584 (1,2) - why not add flash kiai like easy diff?
  
  you still need to improve the flow, but that'll came through experience

• it's kinda weird when Hard and Normal have the same slider velocity, imo
  
  i suggest to add some notes between 00:03:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - and 00:07:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - for better rhythm flow
  i suggest to add some notes between 00:07:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and 00:11:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - for better rhythm flow
  aaand there are still more gaps between two patterns that i suggest you to fill with notes
  00:13:084 (7,8,9) - stack them properly
  00:19:084 (1) - well you can make them symmetry like the picture in easy diff
  00:38:834 (6,7,8) - i suggest you to change their position since the current one is really confusing
  00:53:209 - lol kiai should start 00:53:084 -
  01:07:084 (1) - add finish
  
  imo, i suggest you to make a consistent pattern (rhythm and hitsound) since most of them are irregular. you mostly add sliders and circles to accompany the vocal, much like 2010's style. you can check other people's mapping style

General

SPOILER

Easy

SPOILER

Normal

1. I don't think that BG really fits here. How about this BG? It's not so bright, so players will be able to focus on hitobjects.
2. According to AiBat you have some problems with skinning, see this screenshot for details.
3. Your combo colours should be consistent in all diffs.
4. consider finding custom hitsound and/or reducing volume. Current hitsounds don't really fit. What's more your hitsounding sounds random sometimes. Please, try to find fiting custom hitsounds and try to re-hitsound it or at least remove extra claps/add missed ones!
   Note: poke me if you need any suggestions
5. Princess Bubblegum and Marceline should be in tags, too. People LOVE them and they're important characters in this cartoon. :<

1. Reduce HP Drain by one tick, this is the easiest diff, so we should take care of beginners.
2. 00:03:084 (1,2) - nazi - I don't really like the shape of these sliders. Slider changes it's direction too suddenly and it doesn't fit with the music. How about something smoother? example
3. 00:10:584 - 00:12:584 - 00:14:584 - I don't really understand what's the point of ignoring such beats. It breaaks your rhythm and you ignore strong beats/vocals, so beginners will be confused!
4. 00:17:084 (1) - try to remove NC here, I think it doesn't fit with your pattern and looks kinda weird here.
5. 00:33:084 (1) - it's too cruel for beginners, thay don't even except something like this here, remove this circle and drag start of a break here! see?
   Note: well, 01:07:584 - drag the break here. It's the same.
6. 01:16:084 (3,4) - it's the -noly- stack in this diff. It will confuse beginners, so i'drecommend you to unstack them and keep consistent spacing here.
7. 01:21:084 (5) - how about adding a repeat to this slider? I think that vocals end on 01:22:084 , therefore slider should end later!
8. 01:35:084 (2,3) - nazi - well, what's the point of using this shape here? It looks really strange. In fact, I'd try to make the whole diff a bit neater. (Softer shapes, smother flow and etc.)
   
   Diff looks messy, some random hitsounds and ignored beats should be fixed, but diff isn't that bad!

1. AR doesn't match with slider velocity/patterns of this diff. Using higher AR would solve this problen, but since this is a [Normal] diff using higer AR isn't okay :<
2. You're overusing 1/2 beats, so this diff is kinda too hard for a [Normal]. Song is relaxing, so let players relax and enjoy the music! Try to make consistent and simpler rhythm. (1/1 rhythm with some 1/2 beats would work great here, try it!)
   
   I think that this diff should be easier, try to use simple and understandable rhythm, less 1/2 beats, lower distance spacing (I'm not sure about this one, tho). And same with hitsounding, try to find fitting custom hitsounds and feel free to poke me again!

1. 00:04:959 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - overmapping. Please, try to avoid aovermap, try to follow music. So, we will not be confused by strange rhythm and will enjoy playing your map!
2. Jumps/antijumps (spacing changes) are allowed in this kind of diffs. but they should be reasonable, they should fit with music and they should be understandable. In your diff I see a lot of jumps/spacing mistaks that don't fit with music at all. :<
   Examples: 00:23:584 (2,3) - 00:27:834 (5,6,7) - 00:41:334 (2,3,4,5) -
   
   Try to work on placement, rhythm and hitsounding. Probably it will require remapping the whole song ;_; But it is really needed here, sorry. :<

1. I love song, but hard diff have a lot of tricky snaps/overlaps. Everything else is good.

1. 00:40:584 - Add note here?
2. 01:00:584 - ^
3. 01:17:084 (4) - Off the mapset - fix if you want
4. 01:47:084 (1) - I suggest you to delete this and extend slider to that point.

1. 00:05:584 (4,5,6) - Ugly overlap
2. 00:40:584 - Note here?
3. 00:47:084 (4) - Extend this slider
4. 00:53:084 (1) - NC? why?
5. 01:00:084 - Slider here?
6. 01:04:584 - Note here pls.
7. 01:14:584 (8) - Move this note to x:96 y:64
8. 01:18:584 - Note here pls.
9. 01:34:584 (7) - Move this not to x:232 y:284
10. 01:46:584 (2) - Move this slider to 01:46:334

1. 00:02:084 - Start a small stream here. Why not?
2. 00:17:584 (1,2,3) - Useless overlap
3. 00:37:834 (4) - Fix this slider
4. 00:52:709 - Add another note HERE in stream.
5. 01:26:209 - ^
6. 01:41:584 (1,2,3) - Why this overlap? It's ugly

_AI wrote:

M4M >.o/

[Easy]
00:09:584 (4) - A straight line with 00:09:084 (3,5) would work Hmm. I like it better when it's curvy.
00:28:584 (2,3) - Suggest to change it into something like PIC1

PIC1

00:44:584 (6) - Sound like a missing beat here
01:18:584 (6) - ^
01:28:084 (2) - A normal shape will be better than the current one
01:35:084 (2,3) - Change the position of these two slider, don't let 01:37:084 (4,5) overlap them

[Normal]
00:19:084 (1) - Stack on the head of 00:17:084 (4)
00:29:084 (5) - Too curve aren't good
00:40:584 (3) - A straight line with 00:40:084 (2)
00:55:084 (3) - Make the left and right tick equal
01:36:584 (4) - Move down a bit, don't let it touch the head of 01:37:084 (5)
01:40:084 (3) - Curve a bit then move down, don't let it touch 01:38:584 (6)

[Hard]
AR8 will suit better
00:04:834 (6) - Stack on the head of 00:05:084 (7)
00:06:334 (9) - Missing beat
00:07:334 (4,7) - Don't let them touch each other It's okay to me.
00:08:834 (8) - Don't stack, place somewhere else
00:10:334 (5) - Missing beat
00:14:334 (3) - ^
00:16:084 (5) - Change into a single circle
00:16:834 (7) - Extend to 00:17:334
00:19:334 (2) - Make a jump for this
00:24:084 (4) - Add a note
00:26:334 (7) - ^
00:30:334 (7) - ^
00:31:834 (4) - Move down, don't let it touch 00:30:834 (2)
00:41:584 (3) - Stack on 00:39:834 (2)
00:49:334 (2) - Adjust the position, don't let it touch 00:48:584 (4)
00:58:834 (6,7,8) - Don't overlap 00:57:834 (4)
01:04:334 (7) - Missing beat
01:34:334 (7) - ^
01:29:334 (5) - ^
01:15:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - This is very confusing, suggest to change the pattern
01:38:334 (3) - Add note
01:38:834 (5) - ^
01:40:334 (6) - Make some spacing here

Great good in easy and normal, Hard is kinda messy actually :p
Good luck btw~ >.o/

1. 00:12:334 (8) - make the new combo here
2. 00:15:334 (3) - adjust this slider so it flows better with 00:15:834 (4)
3. 00:37:584 (3,4) - make the spacing consistent
4. 00:52:959 (9) - 1 grid down
5. 00:57:084 (3,4) - fix the blanket
6. 00:58:834 (6) - I suggest you putting this in this slider tail → 00:57:084 (3) as it's better for readability
7. 01:12:834 (1,2,3,4) - fix this, it's a bit ugly. Make spacing better and maybe change a bit the shape if you want to keep that shape
8. 01:18:834 (1,2) - fix this blanket
9. 01:36:084 (6) - 2 grid left
10. 01:36:209 (7) - 1 grid left

1. I can't find anything wrong here, diff looks ok from here.

1. you used 1366x768 BG. Check "Widescreen Support" in Setup,Design Tab.

1. 00:27:084 (1) - remove clap on first of slider and add clap on arrow of slider.
2. 00:29:084 (3) - 1 grid right.
3. 00:53:084 (1) - Finish? on first of slider
4. 01:37:084 (4) - perfectly stack on 01:35:084 (2).

1. 00:09:084 (3) - NC?
2. 00:10:584 (7) - whistle?
3. 00:13:584 (3,4) - Ctrl+G. because of 00:09:084 (3,4,5,6)
4. 00:25:084 (1,2,3,4) - make it like 00:09:084 (3,4,5,6)
5. 00:30:584 (1) - Finish
6. 01:02:584 (4) - whistle on end of slider

1. 00:43:834 (2,4) - whistle?
2. 00:49:334 (2) - clap on end of slider
3. 00:50:584 - add note?(with clap)
4. 00:51:584 (1) - clap
5. 01:02:584 (4) - clap
6. 01:04:834 (1,2,3,4) - add hitsound
7. 01:28:834 (4) - perfeclty stack on 01:28:334 (3)
8. 01:29:584 (6) - clap
9. 01:38:584 (4) - ^

smallboat wrote:

Hello, M4M Req. I am Chinese. Poor English sorry.

[General]

None.

[Easy]
00:07:084 (1,2) -They can blanket in mutual.
00:10:084 (5) - blanket
01:01:584 (2) - Do not give this too close at 01:00:584 (6) .


[Normal]
00:18:584 (5) - blanket the 00:17:084 (4) .
01:11:334 (2) - ^ the 01:12:084 (4) .


[Hard] OD+1 ?

SPOILER

00:14:584 (4) - +clap?
00:43:084 (6) - DS?
00:46:584 (4) - ^
00:47:584 (1,2) - stack the 00:46:834 (5) 's front ? It'll affect the distance but I only stack 00:47:834 (2) .
00:57:084 (3) - 00:57:834 (4) blanket the (3)'end.
01:05:334 (2) - Do not give this too close at 01:04:834 (1) .
01:05:834 (3) - blanket the 01:05:334 (2) 's end.
01:21:084 (1) - blanket bad.
01:47:084 (2) - volume 40 or 50 ? This circle make a finish to the song. So, 80% is okay.

[Other]

1.If you have any mod questions, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you Ranked. Thanks
3.Can you help me my map for a mod? Thanks! Sure

MachineGunt wrote:

I can make one map in taiko :3? plz thanks

iNickel wrote:

Hi! M4M Here!
[General]
01:47:076 - This Kiai time makes no sense! Just a big finish.

[Easy]
01:01:576 (2,3) - This is too hard for beginners!I think it's okay. I saw other map having the same type.
01:45:826 (1) - to 01:45:576 I agree but, if I move it to here, some players couldn't reach the slider.

[Normal]
00:09:076 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure, but I think this is too hard for Normal...
00:13:076 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:23:076 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:25:076 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:12:076 (4) - to 01:11:826 I'll let it here.

[Hard]
00:18:576 (6) - This clap makes no sense!
00:44:576 (4) - Add clap
00:43:076 (6) - Too far from 00:42:576 (5)
00:42:576 (5) - Too close from 00:41:826 (4)

That's All! Good Luck!

1. Check letterbox please and unherited Timing points. then overall good

1. 00:26:088 (5) - stack with 00:23:088 (1) ?
2. 00:30:588 (4) - stack with 00:26:588 (6) ?
3. 01:28:088 (2) - Ummm.. this?
   
   SPOILER

   
   Or copy paste the code :
   

   416,164,88088,2,0,P|416:246|396:272,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

4. 01:37:088 (4,5) - hue bad slider

1. 00:03:088 (1) - move the 2nd point to 204,152
2. 00:29:088 (5) - Wave slider? ahh i have a great wave slider
   
   SPOILER

   [spoilerbox]
   Or copy paste the code :
   

   336,48,29088,2,0,B|368:64|404:44|404:44|440:24|476:44,1,140

3. 00:39:088 (1) - Too curve
4. 01:01:588 (2,3) - MMmmm, so different at 01:02:588 (4) D:
   [spoilerbox]
5. \:D/

1. 01:41:076 (1,2) - blanket

DenoisoGoiso wrote:

2 KUDOSU IS KOMEH
from my M4M queue

[General]

1. Check letterbox please and unherited Timing points. then overall good

I think that without letterbox is more better.

[Easy]

1. 00:26:088 (5) - stack with 00:23:088 (1) ? Okay
2. 00:30:588 (4) - stack with 00:26:588 (6) ? The one I use is okay
3. 01:28:088 (2) - Ummm.. this? Okay
   
   SPOILER

   
   Or copy paste the code :
   

   416,164,88088,2,0,P|416:246|396:272,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

4. - hue bad slider Okay

[Normal]

1. 00:03:088 (1) - move the 2nd point to 204,152 No
2. 00:29:088 (5) - Wave slider? ahh i have a great wave slider Okay
   
   SPOILER

   [spoilerbox]
   Or copy paste the code :
   

   336,48,29088,2,0,B|368:64|404:44|404:44|440:24|476:44,1,140

3. 00:39:088 (1) - Too curve No change
4. 01:01:588 (2,3) - MMmmm, so different at 01:02:588 (4) D: Okay
   [spoilerbox]
5. \:D/

[Hard]

1. 01:41:076 (1,2) - blanket Okay

ahuehuehuehue good luck

Winek wrote:

Sorry I'm really late for my Mod. I seen a cockroach into my room, and hid into my bed rapidly!

[Easy]
00:43:576 (4,5) - Have these two have same x axis I like the way it was.
01:02:576 (3) - While holding this note press maj. It will find a perfect diagonal of the previous note.
01:15:076 (1,2) - Same Y axis Nazi. I like the way it was.
01:37:076 (4,5) - I don't know if you did on purpose but you forgot clap at the end of sliders I forgot. Thanks.
01:41:076 (3) - I seriously think that whistle is out of place I think is okay.

[Normal]
00:37:076 (1,2) - Same Y axis No. I want to match the pattern of 00:38:076 (3,4) .
00:38:076 (3,4) - ^ No. The reason I write above is the reason I don't want to change.
Nothing else

[Hard]
00:52:826 (8) - That whistle sound doesn't fit the music at all. Okay.
01:26:576 (5) - Add a clap here. It will fit more with (1) Okay.

Sorry, I can't mod Taiko.
Hopes i helped you

Loli -[Koinuri] wrote:

Hello, hope this mod will be good enough

All my mods are usually just placement suggestions to make maps look nicer and flow better when playing (my opinion, of course)
[General]
I think spinners should be consistent throughout the whole mapset.

[Easy]
00:13:076 (3) - I think mirroring 00:11:076 (1) - create better flow. Right now, you have to turn sharply from 00:12:576 (2) - in order to follow the slider
00:27:076 (1) - Blanket with 00:26:576 (6) - ?
00:44:576 (6) - Move it so it creates straight line with 4 and 5? (0,156) looks nice
00:57:576 (2,3) - (104,76) for 2, (188, 132) for 3. They make a nice blanket around 00:55:076 (2) -

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Slider is just to show blanket

[Normal]
01:12:076 (4) - Moving it to around (384,168) blankets 3 and the tail is also blanketed by 1,2, and 3.
01:17:076 (5) - I think shape of this can be better to nicely blanket 6. I'm too bad at sliders to give any suggestions though
Nothing much to say about Normal

[Hard]
I'm not really sure about those streams... it seems too hard to be in Hards.
00:28:326 (2) - Overlap with 00:27:826 (5) - looks kind of ugly to me
00:47:576 (1) - Move to blanket with 00:46:826 (5) - ?
01:11:826 (3) - This seems like it can blanket bit better

I should learn taiko mapping.

happy623 wrote:

haloo here

As your request sooo long ago, sorry for huge delay ;w;

General

1. Remove the Widescreen support tick, This function is only for widescreen StoryBoard to use
2. From my point of view, you can try to increase the Audio Lead-In to 500 or 1000, current one is just a little bit too fast imo, just need change the AudioLeadIn in your .osu file
3. To be honest, I think the spinner of the skin is quite hard to read out if you were newbie, they might not know that it suppose to be a spinner, and they might not react it. Just personal, what do you think of it? I think the same.

Easy

1. 00:27:076 (1,3) - just a little nazi stuff here, try to make this two sliders to be symmetrical, just copy-pasting 00:29:076 (3) - and apply to 00:27:076 (1) - , and turn 00:27:076 (1) - by anti-clockwise 10°. Since 00:27:076 (1) - is a bit curved much, so I suggest you use 00:29:076 (3) - to be copied, tl;dr, here is the example that if you applied this suggestion :
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:58:576 (2,3,4) - just a nazi thought to make the flow better, what you need is move 00:59:076 (3) - a bit down and curve the slider less :
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:18:076 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - Personally, the notes maybe too much for here, it will feel a bit boring from it, especially in easier diffs, so I suggest you to change 2 or 4 or them become sliders, and make it more fun!

Normal

1. 00:13:076 (1,2) - according to your ds, so it is better to move 00:15:076 (1) - 1 grid up
2. 00:42:076 (2,3) - for me, this didnt flow really good here, so it will feel a bit odd and difficult to the Normal Players, if I were you, I would bent the slider a bit in order to make the flow great and look clean : like this, and what you did right in 01:35:076 (1,2) - ! Once you agree with me, there is another same case in this diff, 01:13:076 (1,2) -

Hard

1. I suggest you use OD6 in order to make it harder if you dont care about the diff spread
2. 00:14:576 (6) - hmm, I think the clap should be on the white tick instead of the red tick here
3. 00:21:201 (3,5) - look, I suppose this two objects is overmapped, and this is unrankable according to the Ranking Criteria, as I heard in 25% and it is quite sure that these two objects landed on nothing, you'd better remove it
4. 00:28:326 (2) - a clap is missed in the tail by refer to your hitsound pattern
5. 00:57:826 (4) - umm, remove the clap from the tail? as the music here isnt really high, adding a clap here feels sudden for me, moreover, this also break your hitsound pattern if you placed a clap here
6. 01:13:576 (8) - should be clap here to consist with the pattern
7. 01:31:201 (4) - I understand it is intentional, but may I ask the reason that you reduce the volume? Players may feel they missed if you reduce the volume to nearly muted. On the other hand, this object is overmapped and you should remove it :< I didn't know that I reduce the volume here.
8. 01:32:201 (2) - okay from here, As I consulted with some mappers, I saw you have many overmapped objects in this diff, you may need to spend your time and try to check the diff seriously, to make sure every object are on the beat and with the music, furthermore, you can refer to this link about Overmapping issue t/125409

thats all I suppose
The major issue is only the overmapping in Hard, hope you understand my mod, if you have any problem, dont hesitate to ask me!
Good Luck!