Hi '-'
From my modding queue
[General]
- I'm not a timing expert but in the end of the song you have two timings points with the same offset (red point)
- Combo Colour : Use a black instead of the green one ?
[Easy]
- 00:27:625 (1,2,1) - I think you can make a better blanket with this, like for exemple http://puu.sh/4dASm.jpg
- 00:33:142 (1) - I think a beginner would start this slider at the top. But if you ctrl+g this one you need also to change (2,3,4) :s
- 01:16:935 (6) - This note have actually a strange placement I see more in this position x=344,y=136
- 01:29:004 (1,2,3,4) - Can you rework on this pattern ? I think you can make a better diamond if you make one less sharp.
- 01:46:246 (1) - I think this rythm is more logical with the song http://puu.sh/4dBjW.jpg
- 01:51:727 (1) - ^
[Normal]
- 00:31:763 (7) - I don't think this note placement is logic with your pattern. But if you change this need you need to rework the slider shape for the distance spacing.
- 00:35:211 (5,6) - Move 5 a little and stack 6 with (1) http://puu.sh/4dBxi.jpg
- 00:39:694 (3,4,5) - Random spacing ? 1* / 1,15* / 1* when you use ,9* in the rest of the map
- 00:54:177 (4) - *nazi* y=100 for a perfect square
- 01:04:866 (4,1) - Can you center (4) for have a better look overlap ?
- 01:15:384 (2,3) - Random 1,15* spacing :s
- 01:24:177 (1) - Add a curve ? You don't really use isolated straight sliders in the rest of the map :s
[Hard]
- 00:33:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) I think you can make a better pattern while keeping duo notes. You can try for example to make 2 rectangles with a slight shift between the 2notes
- 00:36:591 (3) - One step to the right to make a better blanket with (2)
- 00:41:418 (1) - It would be better if your slider curves down instead of curving up or just make this curves more for a better blanket with (2).
- 00:55:211 (1) - Ctrl+g and rework this to make something like that ? http://puu.sh/4dCHj.jpg or if you don't want to ctrl+g just change your slider a little for a better blanket http://puu.sh/4dCJn.jpg
- 01:20:728 (3,5) - Stack them ?
- 01:29:867 (2) - and 01:30:212 (3) - Ctrl+g for a better flow but a worse distance spacing :s
- 01:31:418 (2) - Same as 00:55:211 (1) -(second suggestion)
[Insane]
- Ok for me but I need to sleep. I'm gonna recheck this after sleeping but not sure if I can't find anything.
It's really a nice first map =)
Star
From my modding queue
[General]
- I'm not a timing expert but in the end of the song you have two timings points with the same offset (red point)
- Combo Colour : Use a black instead of the green one ?
[Easy]
- 00:27:625 (1,2,1) - I think you can make a better blanket with this, like for exemple http://puu.sh/4dASm.jpg
- 00:33:142 (1) - I think a beginner would start this slider at the top. But if you ctrl+g this one you need also to change (2,3,4) :s
- 01:16:935 (6) - This note have actually a strange placement I see more in this position x=344,y=136
- 01:29:004 (1,2,3,4) - Can you rework on this pattern ? I think you can make a better diamond if you make one less sharp.
- 01:46:246 (1) - I think this rythm is more logical with the song http://puu.sh/4dBjW.jpg
- 01:51:727 (1) - ^
[Normal]
- 00:31:763 (7) - I don't think this note placement is logic with your pattern. But if you change this need you need to rework the slider shape for the distance spacing.
- 00:35:211 (5,6) - Move 5 a little and stack 6 with (1) http://puu.sh/4dBxi.jpg
- 00:39:694 (3,4,5) - Random spacing ? 1* / 1,15* / 1* when you use ,9* in the rest of the map
- 00:54:177 (4) - *nazi* y=100 for a perfect square
- 01:04:866 (4,1) - Can you center (4) for have a better look overlap ?
- 01:15:384 (2,3) - Random 1,15* spacing :s
- 01:24:177 (1) - Add a curve ? You don't really use isolated straight sliders in the rest of the map :s
[Hard]
- 00:33:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) I think you can make a better pattern while keeping duo notes. You can try for example to make 2 rectangles with a slight shift between the 2notes
- 00:36:591 (3) - One step to the right to make a better blanket with (2)
- 00:41:418 (1) - It would be better if your slider curves down instead of curving up or just make this curves more for a better blanket with (2).
- 00:55:211 (1) - Ctrl+g and rework this to make something like that ? http://puu.sh/4dCHj.jpg or if you don't want to ctrl+g just change your slider a little for a better blanket http://puu.sh/4dCJn.jpg
- 01:20:728 (3,5) - Stack them ?
- 01:29:867 (2) - and 01:30:212 (3) - Ctrl+g for a better flow but a worse distance spacing :s
- 01:31:418 (2) - Same as 00:55:211 (1) -(second suggestion)
[Insane]
- Ok for me but I need to sleep. I'm gonna recheck this after sleeping but not sure if I can't find anything.
It's really a nice first map =)
Star