Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue!
General- In this short song are a lot of spinners, 5 overall, you should reduce them with some simple dnb mapping. I counted this up, the playtime is around 20 seconds overall, so the gameplay is a little repetetive.
Easy
00:46:929 (1) - The current flow is a bit weak. The repeat slider is straight and then a circle after but a little below. It doesn't play as good. If you move the 2nd point of the slider a little up and move the circle more to the left of the previous slider end it flows better. Like this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105857401:31:067 (4) - This slightly offscreen and unrankable. You just need to move this up a little to fix it. It's an easy fix.
01:50:364 (3,1) - , 01:55:882 (3,1) - Even though they are timing wise far away, you shouldn't stack them because beginners don't know this very good yet and this is not something you should use in an Easy or Normal.
Overall nice difficultie!
Normal00:33:136 (1) - This is also slightly offscreen. Move it up a little.
00:53:826 (3,4,5,6) - Just a tiny metnion: 00:53:136 (2,3,4) - the flow isn't good here because the slider goes straight up and this is a little off this movement. So you'd need to move this and rotate this so it can be played easier and nicer. 00:54:516 (5,6,1) - Here it's better because the 6 circle makes a slight curve. You can but don't have to fix it. It's just a bit odd looking and playing.
01:01:067 (1,3) - , 01:10:378 (3,1) - , 01:26:929 (4,1) - You could blanket this better.
01:35:722 (6,7) - This is a little lack of flow due to the first slider going upwards and the next starting below the previous one. You can fix this up or make it better if you move the 2nd slider up a little.
01:53:124 (2,3) - You can't use this spacing here because it's the same spacing as 01:51:727 (1,2) - this 1/1 pattern has. You need to move this further away. Same with 01:57:249 (1) -
Hard00:38:309 (2) - Compared to this spacing 00:36:929 (4,1) - . The circle and the long repeat slider (streamslider) have the pretty much same or similar spacing of that previous pattern. Move the circle closer or make one more repeat so it's not played wrong.
00:52:447 (1) - This circle is a little hidden, when playing this might lead to a missclick. You should unstack them.
00:54:171 (7,8,9) - I don't understand this spacing. You had such nice consistant spacing on the previous pattern and make this unneeded spacing change. It doesn't make sense. You can easily fix this.#
01:01:240 (2,3) - Due to this jump on these sliders, 01:02:619 (4,5,1) - this can be played as jump as well because mostly its a repeating pattern you make when you have such a jump. You should make this spacing bigger or remove the previous jump to fix this problem.
01:08:998 (1,2) - This is obviously a mistake. The spacing is slightly off from the normal one. Fix this please. Also it looks very unattractive when playing to have a nonsense spacing change in there.
01:28:481 (4,5) - Spacing difference again. That's an easy fix.
01:30:550 (4) - Move this one grid left so it makes a better triangle pattern with the two sliderstarts.
01:40:895 (6,7) - This overlapp look ugly. You should move the long slider away from the small one or stack it.
Insane00:41:067 (9) - This would work better if you also make it let go out, not in. Just reverse it. It makes the pattern play better and doesn't feel so outstanding.
00:45:895 (1,2,3,4) - Currently the spacing is 2,24x - 2,19x - 2,3x - 2,29x. If you make these consistant it would definately play better. It's only a tiny difference so it's an easy fix.
00:49:343 (7,8,9) - This tripple is invented and not in the music. You should remove the pointless 8 circle.
00:54:516 (7) - If you make this circle straight then you wouldn't have a spacing difference from 00:54:516 (7,8) - compared to 00:54:171 (6,7) - . Also, since you go very symmetric on this part you should make it straight.
01:01:412 (3,4) - The spacing here is 2x and here 01:02:274 (5,6) - 1,9x. Make this more consistant.
01:04:860 (5) - , 01:06:757 (2) - Compared to your other jumps this is very big. You should make this a little smaller so it doesn't feel so off.
01:17:274 (1,2,3) - This doesn't work at all. You have a 1/2 rythm but you have a jump from 1 to2 and then this weird clustered spacing on 2 to 3. Why? Just simply move the 2 between the sliders so it's a little more obvious how to play. 01:18:480 (4,5) - Stack these to avoid this issue too.
01:23:826 (3) - Again, this jump is too big compared to your others, this is above 3.
01:25:205 (7) - The circle is not clearly visible when playing. Move it to the right so you can see it better.
01:36:929 (1,2,3) - This pattern is a little werid to play because you have 1 to 2 small spacing and then this jump from 2 to 3. The placement of these is also not very good looking. Maybe find someting more fitting, you could space it more so it fits to the next jumps or you can try something like this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1058623 It makes your spacing from 1-2-3 changing to 2x and it would make a better transition and lead in for the incomming jumps.
01:39:516 (2,4) - The curve spacing is a little off compared to 01:39:516 (2,3) - . Easy fix. Also you could make a nice looking triangle with these 01:39:516 (2,4,1) - , fits better to the placement.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105862701:43:136 (5) - I think a 1/2 slider here would fit better than this circle. It feels a little cut off.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105863201:50:364 (5,1) - Again, even though it a long time away, this spacing needs to be bigger since you have 1. more time between them going 2. 01:50:037 (4,5) - this is the same spacing.
01:53:641 (2,3) - When you had this spacing, you can't make it like this 01:54:503 (4,5) - . It's just not right and very unfitting. Also 01:55:192 (5,6,7) - compared to this 01:54:503 (4,5) - , 01:55:192 (5,6,7) - this should have more spacing, since it is a 1/2 and not a 1/4.
Overall, nice mapset!