Hello, quick mod for you.
[General]
To me your kiai times don't really make a lot of sense, mainly for the fact that the musical difference between the kiai and the part before it is very minimal. If I were you I would just not do any kiai except for the points where you want the kiai fountain to happen.
I would recommend switching combocolour1 and combocolour2. Right now, combocolour6 and combocolour1 are too similar and it makes it tough to see new combos between the two.
[Easy]
Your comboing for this difficulty is a bit inconsistent. At the beginning you start by NCing after 8 counts, where as after 01:00:728 you start NCing after 16 counts. I recommend that you pick one or the other and stick with it.
OD+1
AR+1
00:33:142 (1) - give this slider a curve so that the lead in from (4) is more natural.
00:34:177 (2,3) - This would feel better with the circle and slider switched around so that the slider begins on a more natural beat. I always think that for this type of music unless vocals or instruments say otherwise, it's better to begin sliders on the stronger first or third beat.
00:35:901 (1,1) - having the circle right after the spinner like that isn't good for your Easy difficulty. Delete the circle and extend the spinner to the circle is.
00:46:935 (3) - NC
00:46:935 (3,4) - I would recommend unstacking these for your easiest difficulty.
00:52:453 (3,1) - swap NCs here to make the NC happen on the downbeat
00:57:970 (3,4) - unstack here also~
00:59:004 (5,1) - here it might be better to just make the spinner a long slider. Right now I think the space between (5,1) is not enough time for beginners to adjust to the spinner, and the spinner is short enough to make it difficult for them to hit.
01:46:246 (1) - starting here I think you should lower the volume a bit. The sliderticks are distracting at this point since it is such a calm section. Another solution would be to make a custom silent slidertick sound and use it here, which I think would be the best way to do it.
01:58:487 (2) - move this slider to 01:58:659 and decrease the length to make it end at the same spot. Right now the switch from white to red tick isn't good for your Easy.
[Normal]
00:31:763 (7) - make this symmetrical across the Y axis please
00:34:177 (3,4) - switch these around for the same reason I gave for the Easy.
00:41:073 (1,2) - switch NC here for consistency with 00:43:832(7,1).
00:54:867 (6,1) - the flow here doesn't work well for me. from (5,6) natural flow would tell you to put the slider lower, so I would say lower (1) a bit. Additionally, adding a curve to (1) would help make it feel better.
00:57:625 (1) - very nazi, but this slider just barely touches the HP bar orz
01:04:522 (7) - a slider like this feels really out of place in a difficulty like this where you don't use a lot of long sliders, especially since this part musically doesn't lend itself well to one. Map it out in a way similar to the rest of the section
01:03:487 (5) - NC
01:09:004 (4) - NC, both of these for consistency with the rest of the difficulty
01:06:246 (1) - another really nazi thing, but moving this to (206,202) is slightly better
01:15:901 (1) - remove NC
[Hard]
00:37:280 (5) - NC here for the change in music
00:37:970 (6) - decrease this by 1 tick in order to make it easier to hit (7).
00:40:211 (5) - nazi stack fix on the end of (3)
00:41:246 (8) - i'd like this better if you unstacked it and moved it to somewhere like (412,200). To me, it feels better to play this when it's not stacked.
00:43:142 (6) - fix stack
00:52:108 (7) - I would prefer this as a 1/4 slider and instead having a circle at 00:52:453 in order to have a strong hit on the downbeat. If you do this, put the NC on the circle instead of at 00:52:625 (1).
00:54:522 (7) - fix stack
01:03:142 (5) - stack this, having the antijump like that is just a bit confusing.
01:09:694 (3,4) - make these identical across the y-axis
01:13:487 (6,1) - again, not a fan of this antijump. Make it normal spacing or stack it.
01:18:659 (5,6) - this doesn't work for me. It looks like (6) happens before it really does. Make the spacing normal here.
01:49:694 - add a slider that ends at 01:50:039 to follow the vocal.
01:55:556 - I'd like an object here just because you follow the vocal so strongly before this, then suddenly you don't. Either add a circle here or add a slider that ends at 01:55:90.
[Insane]
00:55:211 (1) - make this symmetrical across the y-axis
00:55:728 (2) - ^
00:59:177 - add an object here, either a circle or add a repeat to the previous slider.
01:03:315 - I expected to play something here. A repeat on the previous slider is nice or add a circle.
01:14:522 (8) - NC here
01:15:556 (1) - remove NC here
01:25:384 - I don't like the empty space here. Maybe just make 01:25:212 (7) into a slider.
01:37:625 (1) - I don't think this NC is necessary
01:38:315 (1) - or this one
01:51:763 (1) - make this slider symmetrical across the y-axis
01:58:659 (4) - make this slider symmetrical across the y-axis
That's all for me here. You've made a lot of really good improvements since I first saw this map, and it's starting to look very nice. Good luck!
[General]
To me your kiai times don't really make a lot of sense, mainly for the fact that the musical difference between the kiai and the part before it is very minimal. If I were you I would just not do any kiai except for the points where you want the kiai fountain to happen.
I would recommend switching combocolour1 and combocolour2. Right now, combocolour6 and combocolour1 are too similar and it makes it tough to see new combos between the two.
[Easy]
Your comboing for this difficulty is a bit inconsistent. At the beginning you start by NCing after 8 counts, where as after 01:00:728 you start NCing after 16 counts. I recommend that you pick one or the other and stick with it.
OD+1
AR+1
00:33:142 (1) - give this slider a curve so that the lead in from (4) is more natural.
00:34:177 (2,3) - This would feel better with the circle and slider switched around so that the slider begins on a more natural beat. I always think that for this type of music unless vocals or instruments say otherwise, it's better to begin sliders on the stronger first or third beat.
00:35:901 (1,1) - having the circle right after the spinner like that isn't good for your Easy difficulty. Delete the circle and extend the spinner to the circle is.
00:46:935 (3) - NC
00:46:935 (3,4) - I would recommend unstacking these for your easiest difficulty.
00:52:453 (3,1) - swap NCs here to make the NC happen on the downbeat
00:57:970 (3,4) - unstack here also~
00:59:004 (5,1) - here it might be better to just make the spinner a long slider. Right now I think the space between (5,1) is not enough time for beginners to adjust to the spinner, and the spinner is short enough to make it difficult for them to hit.
01:46:246 (1) - starting here I think you should lower the volume a bit. The sliderticks are distracting at this point since it is such a calm section. Another solution would be to make a custom silent slidertick sound and use it here, which I think would be the best way to do it.
01:58:487 (2) - move this slider to 01:58:659 and decrease the length to make it end at the same spot. Right now the switch from white to red tick isn't good for your Easy.
[Normal]
00:31:763 (7) - make this symmetrical across the Y axis please
00:34:177 (3,4) - switch these around for the same reason I gave for the Easy.
00:41:073 (1,2) - switch NC here for consistency with 00:43:832(7,1).
00:54:867 (6,1) - the flow here doesn't work well for me. from (5,6) natural flow would tell you to put the slider lower, so I would say lower (1) a bit. Additionally, adding a curve to (1) would help make it feel better.
00:57:625 (1) - very nazi, but this slider just barely touches the HP bar orz
01:04:522 (7) - a slider like this feels really out of place in a difficulty like this where you don't use a lot of long sliders, especially since this part musically doesn't lend itself well to one. Map it out in a way similar to the rest of the section
01:03:487 (5) - NC
01:09:004 (4) - NC, both of these for consistency with the rest of the difficulty
01:06:246 (1) - another really nazi thing, but moving this to (206,202) is slightly better
01:15:901 (1) - remove NC
[Hard]
00:37:280 (5) - NC here for the change in music
00:37:970 (6) - decrease this by 1 tick in order to make it easier to hit (7).
00:40:211 (5) - nazi stack fix on the end of (3)
00:41:246 (8) - i'd like this better if you unstacked it and moved it to somewhere like (412,200). To me, it feels better to play this when it's not stacked.
00:43:142 (6) - fix stack
00:52:108 (7) - I would prefer this as a 1/4 slider and instead having a circle at 00:52:453 in order to have a strong hit on the downbeat. If you do this, put the NC on the circle instead of at 00:52:625 (1).
00:54:522 (7) - fix stack
01:03:142 (5) - stack this, having the antijump like that is just a bit confusing.
01:09:694 (3,4) - make these identical across the y-axis
01:13:487 (6,1) - again, not a fan of this antijump. Make it normal spacing or stack it.
01:18:659 (5,6) - this doesn't work for me. It looks like (6) happens before it really does. Make the spacing normal here.
01:49:694 - add a slider that ends at 01:50:039 to follow the vocal.
01:55:556 - I'd like an object here just because you follow the vocal so strongly before this, then suddenly you don't. Either add a circle here or add a slider that ends at 01:55:90.
[Insane]
00:55:211 (1) - make this symmetrical across the y-axis
00:55:728 (2) - ^
00:59:177 - add an object here, either a circle or add a repeat to the previous slider.
01:03:315 - I expected to play something here. A repeat on the previous slider is nice or add a circle.
01:14:522 (8) - NC here
01:15:556 (1) - remove NC here
01:25:384 - I don't like the empty space here. Maybe just make 01:25:212 (7) into a slider.
01:37:625 (1) - I don't think this NC is necessary
01:38:315 (1) - or this one
01:51:763 (1) - make this slider symmetrical across the y-axis
01:58:659 (4) - make this slider symmetrical across the y-axis
That's all for me here. You've made a lot of really good improvements since I first saw this map, and it's starting to look very nice. Good luck!