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Backfire
WHY IS THIS IN THE GRAVEYARD.
GOD
DAMN
IT. :C
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
wating dooms' mod ._........almost 1 month Orz
Backfire
AHGHGHGHGHGHGG
*throws keyboard across the room*
You should go yell it him, AHO. :C
Backfire
Yay! It's in pending again <3
Doomsday
Insane mapset goooooo

  1. Timing looks good, It could use -4ms to the offset though, but that is just nitpicking.
Just a suggestion, but how the tickrate for each difficulty differs wildly, perhaps you could make the tickrate similar, or the same throughout the diffs? not a big issue, but at the moment the fact that this is just a bunch of guest difficulties shows because of this, and it looks messy.

[EXTRA] (Sprosive)

How this difficulty managed to get a 4.37 star rating, and managed to get a [H] rating, is beyond me.

I'm not too sure about the slider patterns like at 01:00:806 / 01:30:488 / 01:38:069. These jumps that jump across the screen, after a stream, feel rather cheap. It feels like they're just there to make the player miss. I think it would be better if these jumps were made smaller, and a little more managable. Otherwise it just isn't fun in my opinion :(

^ same with the bit at 01:48:174 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -


00:47:543 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Just to say, I think the whistle hitsound pattern here sound kinda bad :( maybe do something else with the hitsounds here?
01:30:490 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This is just mean. I didn't mind the jumps at the earlier part of the song like this, but these are really cheap jumps. At least could you tone these jumps down? or maybe rearrange them?

[FRANTIC] (ignorethis)

Perhaps a bit more hitsounding would sound nice on this. I understand that not all maps need a lot of hitsounding, but in this case, the same normal hitsound all the time sounds boring in the streams. :o

My main issue with this one is the intro (Start - 00:35:465). I can let the map after this pass to an extent, since at least then the craziness happens in the main part of the song. I'm not gonna approve this diff with the intro like this though :(. I'd remap this intro part so it suits the intro better (e.g. somewhat easier. leave the insane mapping until after the intro.)

[INSANE] (AngelHoney)

I only just passed this. Oh man. If I pass it a second time I'll be pretty proud.

My main problem with this one, is the layout of some of the map. The rhythms used, for the most part, are nice. However, some of it feels lazy:

00:55:122 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These feel like they are laid out in random places, and have no order. the sliders before these were alright since they had a pattern. These feel like they were just placed anywhere.
01:13:280 - 01:22:753 - Same here. With these, the spacing isn't wild here or anything, that works okay. But again, they feel randomly placed, like they were speedmapped in 2 minutes (no offense, but that's what it looks like :(). If they were in some sort of pattern, then it would look cool. At the moment, it doesn't.

00:26:149 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - These jumps are a little harsh for the intro. maybe remove these jumps? or make them a little easier? (the insane stuff is best left for the main part of the song).

[CRAZY] (DJNightmare)

01:27:964 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think these could be laid out better. Like what I said for the slider bit in [Insane], these feel randomly placed and don't play too well. Perhaps they could be put in some sort of pattern?
01:29:227 (1,2,3,4) - And for these sliders, they are in a box pattern. but the jump between (2) and (3) is kinda silly. the player will not see that because it is way too fast. he/she will think that it just goes around the box. You could make (3) and (4) switch places to fix that issue.

Before
[attachment=1:15d00]before.PNG[/attachment:15d00]
After
[attachment=0:15d00]after.PNG[/attachment:15d00]

[ANOTHER] (AngelHoney)

Not much to say about this one. I thought it was okay

and now the Taiko difficulties:

[FIRCE777'S TAIKO]

(Not much point in adding custom combo colours to this diff though, perhaps it helped while editing. Maybe you could change them to the colours used for the normal diffs so it looks better in the editor. No big deal though)

Even though I'm not much of a player of Taiko Inner Oni-type difficulties like this one, I can't make much sense of the rhythms here. It's mostly endless stream, and the placement of don's 'n' katsu's in here feels random. Not a fan of this one at all, sorry Firce :(

[LEPIDON! - TAIKO ONI]

I like this one however. Even though the song doesn't have much to map to in a taiko map, you managed to create some nice rhythms out of it that still play well with the song, in my opinion. I like it, lookin' good to me!

[VERDI'S HELL TAIKO]

Way too tough for me to pass :P, but I can see what you were trying to do with. Quite nice actually.

For the taiko difficulties, I think that Firce's one should be removed (sorry Firce! :(), since Lepidon is a nice Taiko Oni difficulty, and Verdi is a nice Taiko Inner Oni difficulty. I don't think a 3rd one is needed.

I pointed out a lot of things, but I don't think it is bad by any means (even though I'm not a fan of the Frantic diff to be honest. Not my cup of tea). Feel free to take what you want from the mod (and sorry for taking so long D:)
zenki0013
I'm ready
Firce777

Doomsday wrote:

[FIRCE777'S TAIKO]

(Not much point in adding custom combo colours to this diff though, perhaps it helped while editing. Maybe you could change them to the colours used for the normal diffs so it looks better in the editor. No big deal though)

Even though I'm not much of a player of Taiko Inner Oni-type difficulties like this one, I can't make much sense of the rhythms here. It's mostly endless stream, and the placement of don's 'n' katsu's in here feels random. Not a fan of this one at all, sorry Firce :(
ok :(
i remapped :(

Download: RYO - Shuffle Heaven (AngelHoney) [Firce777's Taiko].osu
rustbell
跪了 AHO你帮我改吧
Chewin
Revived.

YES.
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
:) :) :)
Verdisphena
o:
Frostmourne

Chewin wrote:

Revived.

YES.
Finally !
Chyo-Kun
\:D/
Chewin
okay: http://puu.sh/13NXX



Pro map.
I'm going to mod it O:
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
<33333333
Chewin
Ok, let's start.

[General]

  1. Add "ignorethis" and "eggpain" to the tags (Like you did for the frantic diff)
  2. Add a red timing section on 35465 with a BPM of 190,000 on standard diffs
[Extra]

  1. 01:08:227 (4,5,6,7) - This overlap is kinda bothering to play
  2. 01:17:859 (1) - At the first try this increase of SV is sudden and awkward to play.. What about to remove it? Or maybe to advice player about it you could make a particular slider, perhaps something like this? http://puu.sh/14oKC <-- With a slider like this a slider break is almost impossible, so.. it'd be better IMO
  3. 01:32:385 (6) - New combo to keep consistency with next sliders
  4. 01:45:806 (3,4) - I test played this jump more times and.. it's really to huge considering the different spacing you used for triplets with this 0.95x spacing
  5. 01:47:464 (7,1) - Since these circles 01:47:306 (5,6,7) are overlapped this sudden spacing change doesn't fit the gameplay, really. I highly suggest you to remove this circle 01:47:464 (7) and move the tiplet 01:47:227 (4,5,6) to x:24 y:184 to make to have something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/430210
  6. 01:48:095 (7) - Same here ^ Following the previous suggestion you could make the same pattern here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/430216
[Frantic]

  1. 00:07:675 (1,1,3,1,1,3) - Why have you used 2 slider's point to make the curve? Remove one of them to have a better flow and blankets between sliders / previous circle
  2. 00:49:438 (1) - Don't overlap this slider with 00:48:806 (1). Make something like this instead:
    SPOILER


    456,40,49438,6,0,B|520:104|512:208,1,176
  3. 00:58:911 (1) - I'd reduce this slider by 1/2 adding 2 circles on 00:59:148 and 00:59:227
  4. 01:01:438 (5) - New combo
  5. 01:24:332 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Please no. Streams like these (overlapping the (1) with (3) while the (2) isn't overlapped with them) are too bothering to play. I'm saying this as a standard player and believe me; so much triples/streams like these consecutively are impossible and hateful
  6. 01:51:885 (16) - New combo. The kiai time on 01:51:964 should start here btw. Move the green line here
  7. So overmapped.
[Insane]

  1. 00:31:991 (11) - New combo?
[Crazy]

  1. 00:22:833 (1) - Clap on slider's end
[Another]
  1. 00:14:938 (13) - Whistle
  2. 00:17:465 (13) - ^
  3. 00:19:991 (17) - ^
  4. 00:21:254 (10) - ^
  5. 00:22:517 (10) - ^
  6. 00:29:149 (6) - What about to ctrl + r it?
  7. 01:29:543 (2,4) - ^
[Firce777's Taiko]

  1. 01:49:518 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
  2. 01:49:597 (3) - ^
  3. 01:49:755 (1) - ^
  4. 01:49:834 (1) - ^
  5. 01:49:992 (1) - ^
  6. 01:51:018 (1) - ^
  7. 01:51:097 (1) - ^
  8. 01:51:255 (1) - ^
  9. 01:51:413 (2) - ^
  10. 01:51:492 (1) - ^
[Verdi's Hell Taiko]

  1. Add AudioLeadIn: 1500, this diff starts too soon or it'd be better to delete the 00:00:728 (1) to keep consistency with other diffs.
  2. Woa it's awesome
T'oh.
Cygnus
You could put O2Jam as your source. Also, you might wanna do some Difficulty setups in [Extra] to avoid broken star rating.
Verdisphena

Chewin wrote:

[Verdi's Hell Taiko]

  1. Add AudioLeadIn: 1500, this diff starts too soon or it'd be better to delete the 00:00:728 (1) to keep consistency with other diffs. AHO can fix this for me :3
  2. Woa it's awesome
T'oh.
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
im back :3
Aqo
Suddenly, updates on the map!
What's new?
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
remapped the insane diff and fixed something
Wishy
Is old Insane diff anywhere so I can have it too? :D
Wishy
Old insane is here:

http://puu.sh/1DsUo
Keyboard Cat_old
why u deleted crazy? *facepalm*. This map suck now
jung4686
이것도 랭크되면 기록 볼만하겠다;;
Naryuga
As requested, my easier Taiko diffs here!
http://puu.sh/4opKS.zip <-- 2 .osu file in this zip. Thanks!
izzydemon
wwwwwwwwwww
Naryuga
As requested, Taiko Futsuu diff is here!
http://puu.sh/4suEM.osu :3
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
<3
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
all finished~

watting for mod :3
ljqandylee
Hi~ mania mod is coming XD
[DJPop's Normal]
Quite good, but I think this diff is above Normal...
Maybe reduce some multi-keys and make this part: 01:12:964 ~ 01:22:911 not so confusing to players at Normal level would be better, just my opinion.
[DJPop's Insane]
Also nice, just a few suggestions:
00:15:254 - Add note
00:58:912 (58912|5,58912|4) - End at 00:59:385
00:59:544 (59544|2,59544|1) - End at 01:00:016
DJPop

ljqandylee wrote:

Hi~ mania mod is coming XD
- Hi, good to see you're a BAT :)

[DJPop's Normal]
Quite good, but I think this diff is above Normal...
Maybe reduce some multi-keys and make this part: 01:12:964 ~ 01:22:911 not so confusing to players at Normal level would be better, just my opinion.
- Changed that part a bit and reduced some of triple notes.

[DJPop's Insane]
Also nice, just a few suggestions:
00:15:254 - Add note
- Doesn't feel like it should be added.
00:58:912 (58912|5,58912|4) - End at 00:59:385
- Fixed.
00:59:544 (59544|2,59544|1) - End at 01:00:016
- Fixed.
http://puu.sh/4MqWa
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
changed tags~ (add spro to tags)
ZHSteven
好吧看起来现在只差CTB了=。=
抱歉我无能为力。。最近快忙死了

star+2

PS.求您行行好赶紧把rank了吧。。2 years ago 要发霉了TAT
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
感谢! :D

之前有考虑过加CTB 不过找人作图以及mod实在是太麻烦了就省去了w

(虽然全模式都有是不错啦XD
ljqandylee
Fine, Piano'd :)
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
thank you :3
KanaRin
No doubt.
777, lepidon and Verdi are also awesome hard-map mapper.
I love it.

Taiko'd
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
thx kana ww
Naryuga
yay gogo \:3/
Seph
why no ctb diff

gogo all mode diff spread \o\
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

Seph wrote:

why no ctb diff

gogo all mode diff spread \o\
yep i want , but no mapper , so
izzydemon
already camping w/ hddthr for when this is ranked
gogo
Seph

AngelHoney wrote:

Seph wrote:

why no ctb diff

gogo all mode diff spread \o\
yep i want , but no mapper , so
if i werent busy id make you one :(
PyaKura
Hello,

Are you still accepting mania diffs ? I want to make one Hard to close the gap between DJPop's Normal and Insane, and perhaps make an Easy diff afterwards.
pw384
感动
PyaKura
I sent it to AngelHoney already but here's my mania diff for those who want :

[>>>PyaKura's Hard<<<] 7K

It's made to fill the enormous skillgap between DJPop's diffs.
Needs modding I guess.
Nyquill
Actually, normal -> insane is bad enough spread to be unrankable (mania).

You need to add something in the middle there.
mancuso_JM_

Nyquill wrote:

Actually, normal -> insane is bad enough spread to be unrankable (mania).

You need to add something in the middle there.
Wait.. What!?
This map was ranked today with a similar spread..
Nyquill

mancuso_JM_ wrote:

Nyquill wrote:

Actually, normal -> insane is bad enough spread to be unrankable (mania).

You need to add something in the middle there.
Wait.. What!?
This map was ranked today with a similar spread..


Looks like we need to reword RC.
PyaKura
Indeed, I checked the RC before mapping my Hard (which would somehow be considered Insane by the diff rating) but I was not sure if the same RC apllied to mania GDs. Also Mania RC are quite different from STD RC, allowing a minimum of 2 diffs, one of them being non expert and the other being expert or not (which means Inane or Hard, doesn't matter iirc). On a side note, general RC and STD RC seem to be mixed up when I look at them on the wiki. It's not very clear as some general RC only aplly to STD :/

Edit : if a N/H/I spread is still unacceptable I sugggested to make an Easy too in order to balance everything.

Mania RC wrote:

Diff Spread

Each beatmap must have at least 2 difficulties and one of them mustbe Easy/Normal. The key amount of the hardest difficulty in your beatmap set must not be lower than thekey amount of the easier difficulties. Single key amount beatmap set is notsuitablefor this rule. For example:- (Let 4K be lesskeyamountand 7K behigh keyamount) 4K Easy + 7K Insane: Accept 7K Easy + 4K Insane: Deny 4K Easy + 4K Hard + 7K Insane: Accept 7K Easy + 7K Hard + 4K Insane: Deny 4K Easy + 4K Insane + 7KEasy+ 7K Insane: Accept 7K Easy + 7K Normal + 7KHard + 7K Insane: Accept
:o

Edit again : p/2625941
xxbidiao
That should not be a problem because they are GDs and GDs have their 2-diff OK rule...

And if that's OK, let's call that insane hard.


Though on mania insane,

00:37:280 - I would suggest to move the x8.00 part something like 100~200 ms earlier,make it farther from reciting map deal...

Normal:
01:07:753 (67753|0) - This 1-2-1-2-1-2 style may be too hard for players on this level? Consider 1-7-1-7 for it also suits the later part.
DJPop
I'm fine if you want more Hard diff. I can make it.

xxbidiao wrote:

00:37:280 - I would suggest to move the x8.00 part something like 100~200 ms earlier,make it farther from reciting map deal...
- Fixed

Normal:
01:07:753 (67753|0) - This 1-2-1-2-1-2 style may be too hard for players on this level? Consider 1-7-1-7 for it also suits the later part.
- Changed another way, but still switching left & right.
http://puu.sh/4RyGB
Startrick
.
Reol

Startrick wrote:

it's fine?



AiMod in Hyper diff
No kds to me plz :D

Not only Hyper

Another has unsnapped too :3

i think you need to fix it.
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
eh....i dont know why i cant fix that >_>....

thx for mod!!!

i will try again when i back
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
done~

and added djpop's hard ~

=w=
PyaKura

AngelHoney wrote:

done~

and added djpop's hard ~

=w=
Great ~
ljqandylee
Still high quality XD
[DJPop's Hard]
00:46:911 ~ 00:47:464 - Move all notes 1 column left, for the pitch relevance
01:51:965 (111965|0) - Add a note at 7th column
DJPop

ljqandylee wrote:

[DJPop's Hard]
00:46:911 ~ 00:47:464 - Move all notes 1 column left, for the pitch relevance
- Moved
01:51:965 (111965|0) - Add a note at 7th column
- All diffs have only 1 note here.
http://puu.sh/51Mef.zip
ljqandylee
Fine. Re-piano'd.
ExPew
wait... tis mania mapset all Insane icon loolol

Red - Must Fix
Blue - Consider

[DJPop's Normal]
HP+1 or 2( lowest rate in o!m is 6 )
OD-1 ( bit cruel when normal od is 8)

my guess on this problem to make your Normal diff turn to IN ( most insane icon use for HD+ MX+, im not sure about that. )
- somepart 1/4 triplet
- 2 note press simultaneously with 1/2.


[DJPop's Hard]
HP and OD 7

your insane close enough with my shd ( just i too much use sliders/LNs )
DJPop

ExPew wrote:

wait... tis mania mapset all Insane icon loolol

Red - Must Fix
Blue - Consider

[DJPop's Normal]
HP+1 or 2( lowest rate in o!m is 6 )
- Fixed, didn't know that
OD-1 ( bit cruel when normal od is 8)
- I usually set same OD for every diffs in a map set, fair play

my guess on this problem to make your Normal diff turn to IN ( most insane icon use for HD+ MX+, im not sure about that. )
- somepart 1/4 triplet
- 2 note press simultaneously with 1/2.
- Can't be helped, the song is obviously supposed to be hard :<

[DJPop's Hard]
HP and OD 7
- They said OD7 is too easy :<

your insane close enough with my shd ( just i too much use sliders/LNs )
- Well, I didn't notice there's another mapset :P
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
updated~ thank you :3
xtrem3x
I can make a GD in CTB? .-.
lepidopodus
Seriously, you know how old my Taiko map in this mapset lololol
xtrem3x
understand how long it has been this mapset, I just do to help , anyway, creating two diffs in CTB XD
ljqandylee
[DJPop's Normal]
OD6 is too low, even this is a Normal diff.

I think OD7 is more proper XD
ExPew

DJPop wrote:

ExPew wrote:

wait... tis mania mapset all Insane icon loolol

Red - Must Fix
Blue - Consider

[DJPop's Normal]
HP+1 or 2( lowest rate in o!m is 6 )
- Fixed, didn't know that -you forgot add hp lol
ZHSteven
Just a kindly reminder:
[Extra]
00:52:595 (1) - to 01:02:543 (8) - 在CTB里面是杀人串-,- 如果可以的话能否控制一下横向间距呢?谢谢
其他地方都是passable的,只是这个地方太艰难了=。=
Negri_sk
Star ~
Avena
no CTB?
;----;
pw384
;w; graveyard again.....
PyaKura
Revive this x_x
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
most of bats are afraid of touch this beatmap (:

or "busy"
xtrem3x
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/85802

This map approves in few months and have less diffs and less variety D: ...compared to this mapset having decent diffs for each mode and it takes years without being approved.

also ... I've been busy working here and I have not finished on time GD's I've proposed D:
Working farm mechanic and until now it has begun high season
Pretty Rhythm

AngelHoney wrote:

most of bats are afraid of touch this beatmap (:

or "busy"
because this map has too much stream and jumps, too far distance in the streams :o
RikiH_

AngelHoney wrote:

most of bats are afraid of touch this beatmap (:

or "busy"
Most of them are sleeping. If I were a BAT I'd help you :/
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

AngelHoney wrote:

most of bats are afraid of touch this beatmap (:

or "busy"
because this map has too much stream and jumps, too far distance in the streams :o
but now , it is 2014
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

RikiH_ wrote:

AngelHoney wrote:

most of bats are afraid of touch this beatmap (:

or "busy"
Most of them are sleeping. If I were a BAT I'd help you :/
yep XD thank you ww
DenoisoGoiso
next gigantic o.t.n wow

how many star can i shoot? \:D/
Spy
這圖又墳了 ?
CXu
I'm really sorry your map got graved again before I got here orz.

[General]
  1. DJPop's mania-diffs have a bpm change at 00:35:386, BPM of 23.750. BPM should be the same throughout all diffs, since, well, same song.
  2. AIBat tells me there's inconsistency in tags as well:
    From what I see, - [DJPop's Insane] & [DJPop's Normal] does not have "spro" as tag.
  3. Remove Audio lead-in from [Verdi's Hell Taiko], as osu! automatically adds lead-in now.
  4. Consider writing a list of the difficulty progression in the description, since generally Hyper = Hard and Another = Insane, and you have both in this set, where at least Hyper is definitely harder than Hard, so a list could be useful :P
  5. Also, your spread is fine for the most part, but there is a bit of a gap between Normal and Hard, mostly because of how many 1/2's you have in hard, whereas there is almost none in Normal. If possible, try to make the spread here a little bit better.
  6. For all diffs except Another: add a spinner at 01:52:911 - ? I think it fits fairly well, and currently it just kinda feels like the map ends pretty abruptly.
  7. And to me, I'd almost like to say OD8 for ExtrA, OD7 for Another, and OD6 for Insane. Gives a bit more progression in the OD there, but that's more up to you. I can see why you'd want to keep it at OD7 as well :P
  8. A huge chunk of this mod are personal opinion and preference. Feel free to disagree with me.
[ExtrA]
  1. Hp -1. Even though HP7 is low, due to the high amount of streams the drain is still really unforgiving, and you barely get any HP increase on the 1/2 parts of the song. HP6 is at least a little better.
  2. 00:14:938 (13) - New combo for this (and similar ones for this section), to be consistent with 01:04:911 (1) -
  3. 00:23:622 (4,5) - I think a slight spacing-change here, similar to 00:26:149 (4,5) - and 00:28:675 (4,5) - would fit fairly well with the high-pitch of the song.
  4. 00:31:044 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Same as above, for (4,5) and 00:31:833 (2,3) -
  5. 00:36:096 - Lower the volume for this part to 5~10%.
  6. 00:39:332 (8,9) - Instead of this kinda randomlooking disconnect, make a sharp angle between (7,8), for the pitch-change?
  7. 00:51:885 (8,9) - Same as above, a slight disconnect/angle in the stream, as well as a new combo on (9) (consistent with 00:50:701 (1) - ) would make it easier to break the stream up a bit.
  8. 00:52:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Man I wish you did something like http://puu.sh/6JMkA.jpg , though that might be a bit hard to read/play =3=.
  9. 00:56:385 (1,2) - Moving them a little: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1308813 might slightly help the flow a bit here (currently feels slightly cramped).
  10. 01:02:701 (1,28) - Long combo is long. Add a new combo at (17). Same for the other long combos.
  11. 01:44:227 (12,1) - tbh, a motion to 01:44:543 (2) - feels more natural than to (1) here, mostly because of the fairly horizontal motion before this part, so the (1) feels a bit... forced movement I guess.
  12. 01:45:648 (1) - ctrl+g? Feels like a more natural cursor movement to curve in rather than going up-down-up :P
  13. 01:48:648 (4,5) - Again the flow isn't that good here imo. Every slider changes direction, except these two, that go in a straight line.
  14. 01:49:832 (2) - Move up 2 gridlvl4.
[Another]
  1. 00:07:675 (1,2,3) - 00:08:938 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try stacking (3) with (1) instead of (2), (and (4) with (6)) and see if you like that. Imo, it works with the repeat 00:08:149 (4) - , as well as giving the pattern a jump at the.. idk what to call it melodic parts.
  2. 00:12:412 (10) - Add a drum-whistle?
  3. 00:22:991 - 00:31:675 - I think adding some soft-whistles could be pretty nice, since just hearing the constant hitnormal is a bit boring :P
  4. 00:24:096 (1,2) - 00:26:623 (1,2) - Imo, adding a slight jump here feels more natural due to the pitch-change, as well as being consistent with the spacing change at 00:29:149 (1,2,3,4,1) - .
  5. 00:35:543 - You should turn the kiai off here. That blinking is seriously weird when there's no music going.
  6. 00:48:174 (1,2) - What about a rhythm like http://puu.sh/6K0yq.jpg? It feels like you have to drag your cursor a bit when you're playing the 3/4's you have currently.
  7. 00:51:490 (3,4) - Might want to space this out a bit, just to make the fast slider feel too abrupt.
  8. 00:58:911 (1,2) - I understand the speedup, but the change is pretty big compared to the sliders before it, making them seem and feel disconnected from the rest of the map.
  9. 01:06:332 (5) - While there's nothing wrong with it, it just plays weird to me. Doing the same as 01:08:859 (8,9,1) - just feels better overall imo.
  10. 01:07:753 (1,2,3) - Try reversing the order: http://puu.sh/6K1ki.jpg. Starting the triple on the white tick feels off.
  11. 01:13:280 - Same as earlier, some soft-whistles would be great here.
  12. 01:13:911 (4) - Stack with 01:13:438 (2) - end? Following the change in pitch.
  13. 01:21:806 (1,2) - Move them closer so it's easier to read, and end (1) on 1/8 at 01:22:240 - .
  14. 01:25:280 (14) - Sounds like 1/8 to me, and not 1/6.
  15. 01:27:806 (14) - Same as above^
  16. 01:33:964 (2,1) - Thaaaaaaat's a huge 1/4 jump. These sliderjumps are okay for the most part because of sliderleniency, but since this is a slider->note jump, you should reduce this a bit. Changing the order of 01:33:648 (1,2) - might do the trick.
  17. 01:34:280 - I don't think I understand your whistles for this part, as you sometime don't use them for a while, before using them again.
  18. 01:36:648 (9,1) - Rearraging the pattern before or after so you can stack these two notes would be nice, for consistency with the stacking at 01:35:385 (14,1) - , and just the general feeling of stopping before starting again.
  19. 01:38:543 (4,1) - Yeah, huge jump is huge. If possible, you should reduce this a bit. Also, ctrl+g on 01:38:227 (2,4) - ? for circular motion.
[Insane]
  1. 00:14:938 (10) - New combo on these sliders, to be consistent with ExtrA (that is, if you did change that in ExtrA).
  2. 00:22:043 (6,7) - (6) 1 gridlvl4 to the right, (7) 1 to the left.
  3. 00:28:044 (2) - Finish.
  4. 00:57:964 (2,3,4,5) - Try a rhythm like this: http://puu.sh/6K3q2.jpg? Currently 00:58:122 (3) - just skips over 00:58:280 - .
  5. 01:05:227 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't see a reason for this part having irregular spacing. Might as well form a complete pentagon with 01:04:753 (8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
  6. 01:04:911 (10) - New combo. Same reason as first. Do this for the rest as well.
  7. 01:11:069 (10,11,1) - Smooth this curve out a bit?
  8. 01:49:438 (1,2,3,4) - As before, I think a rhythm like http://puu.sh/6K47k.jpg works better.
[Hyper]
  1. For the king for the land for the mountains.
  2. 00:07:675 (1,2,3) - Spacing I have no clue why I keep pointing out these random nazi things.
  3. 00:57:648 (1,2) - Deleting (2) and making (1) a 1/1 slider, similar to Insane and ExtrA works better imo, instead of that awkward stack kinda killing your cursor flow :p
  4. 00:58:911 (1,2,1,2) - Probably just me, but that overlap where they don't stack just ticks me off. Stack the 00:59:543 (2,1) - ends properly/make symmetrical?
  5. 01:30:490 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The general movement you have to make with the cursor for these sliders are fairly awkward to play. This is mostly due to the 90 degree turns back and forth. I like how they look, but a different pattern might play better for this part.
  6. 01:45:964 (2) - ctrl+g? Follows the path of 01:45:648 (1) -
[Hard]
  1. As I was saying in General, I think some of the 1/2 "streams" might be a bit too long in this. If you compare Hyper at 00:37:438 - with Hard, you can see that you use a mix of sliders and circles in Hyper as well. Imo, you should do something similar for the 1/2s at 00:32:938 - 00:42:332 - as well, as hitting constant 1/2 ad 190bpm like this is fairly tiring, and a pretty huge jump compared to Normal, which only features 1/1.
  2. Try AR7 as well. The jump from AR5 to AR8 is quite big between N->H after all.
  3. 00:11:465 (1) - Make symmetrical? :P
  4. 00:23:149 (1) - End at 00:27:570 - , add two notes at 00:27:886 - and 00:28:044 - , then start the 00:28:044 (1) - spinner at 00:28:201 -
  5. 01:04:595 (3,4) - Quite a big jump there, considering you don't even use a jump for the other parts 01:07:122 (3,4) - . Consider rearranging it a bit and getting rid of that jump, to be more consistent.
  6. 01:13:122 (1) - Same as previous spinner.
  7. 01:22:911 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - While this section in general is a bit better, I still think a going double-slider-double-slider might be better than straight up sliders. (or slider-double-slider-double ofc). Same with the other similar patterns.
  8. 01:51:964 - Add a note here with finish and NC, to be consistent with the other diffs.
[Normal]
  1. OD and HP +1 or +2. It's currently the same as Easy, which doesn't really make sense.
  2. Also, the map consists only of 1/1. Since it is a normal, you might want to mix it up slightly by adding some 1/2's, though it's up to you. The most important thing is probably to make Hard slightly easier to make the gap less of a gap.
  3. 00:35:780 - Add in the break here.
  4. 00:57:016 (5,6,1) - You should move the (5,6) from (1), too keep your stacks as doubles.
  5. 01:22:911 (1) - Make symmetrical? Just kinda bothers me :P
  6. 01:43:753 (4) - Move to 240;104, just to make the 4 sliders in this combo look evenly spaced.
[Easy]
  1. 00:02:623 - 00:12:412 - The spacing here is pretty big. It's not too smooth to play due to the low SV compared to the spacing, and how relaxed the music is. You should space these with 1.0x imo.
  2. 00:23:149 (1) - Such a long spinner can be pretty tiring for a complete beginner, and tbh it's also quite boring to a complete beginner :P Imo, using long sliders or similar to map this part would be a better idea. Also, I don't quite get the lowered volume at 00:27:728 -.
  3. 00:57:648 (1,2) - Swap the order of these two, so the slider comes before the circle.
  4. 01:04:911 (5,1,2) - You should probably keep the stacks to being double's only, so there is less confusion. If possible, I'd like if you usntacked the 2/1 at 00:16:517 (3,4,1) - as well, so you only have 1/1 double stacks, just to make reading simpler, but since those where close together, it's fairly easy to tell the difference in time. Still, if possible, you should unstack those 2/1, as well as 1 of the notes in thes triples imo.
  5. 01:13:122 (1) - Same as the previous spinner.
  6. 01:34:280 - 01:44:069 - Spacing is getting really big here. Fast cursor movement is still something that's hard for a beginner, especially if he/she needs to speed up and slow down his movements. You should reduce the spacing here at least a little bit imo.
  7. 01:51:964 - Add note with finish and NC, to keep consistency with all the other diffs.
Aaaaand that's all. Poke me when you're done I guess, and good luck!
DJPop
rustbell

CXu wrote:

[Another]
  1. 00:07:675 (1,2,3) - 00:08:938 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try stacking (3) with (1) instead of (2), (and (4) with (6)) and see if you like that. Imo, it works with the repeat 00:08:149 (4) - , as well as giving the pattern a jump at the.. idk what to call it melodic parts.no
  2. 00:12:412 (10) - Add a drum-whistle? ok
  3. 00:22:991 - 00:31:675 - I think adding some soft-whistles could be pretty nice, since just hearing the constant hitnormal is a bit boring :P i totally have no idea about how to deal with the hitsounds here :o anyway i tried my best
  4. 00:24:096 (1,2) - 00:26:623 (1,2) - Imo, adding a slight jump here feels more natural due to the pitch-change, as well as being consistent with the spacing change at 00:29:149 (1,2,3,4,1) - .ok
  5. 00:35:543 - You should turn the kiai off here. That blinking is seriously weird when there's no music going.ok
  6. 00:48:174 (1,2) - What about a rhythm like http://puu.sh/6K0yq.jpg? It feels like you have to drag your cursor a bit when you're playing the 3/4's you have currently.ok
  7. 00:51:490 (3,4) - Might want to space this out a bit, just to make the fast slider feel too abrupt.ok
  8. 00:58:911 (1,2) - I understand the speedup, but the change is pretty big compared to the sliders before it, making them seem and feel disconnected from the rest of the map.ok
  9. 01:06:332 (5) - While there's nothing wrong with it, it just plays weird to me. Doing the same as 01:08:859 (8,9,1) - just feels better overall imo.ok
  10. 01:07:753 (1,2,3) - Try reversing the order: http://puu.sh/6K1ki.jpg. Starting the triple on the white tick feels off.ok
  11. 01:13:280 - Same as earlier, some soft-whistles would be great here.same as above
  12. 01:13:911 (4) - Stack with 01:13:438 (2) - end? Following the change in pitch.ok
  13. 01:21:806 (1,2) - Move them closer so it's easier to read, and end (1) on 1/8 at 01:22:240 - .ok
  14. 01:25:280 (14) - Sounds like 1/8 to me, and not 1/6.fixed
  15. 01:27:806 (14) - Same as above^fixed
  16. 01:33:964 (2,1) - Thaaaaaaat's a huge 1/4 jump. These sliderjumps are okay for the most part because of sliderleniency, but since this is a slider->note jump, you should reduce this a bit. Changing the order of 01:33:648 (1,2) - might do the trick.changed to a slider->slider jump
  17. 01:34:280 - I don't think I understand your whistles for this part, as you sometime don't use them for a while, before using them again.fixed
  18. 01:36:648 (9,1) - Rearraging the pattern before or after so you can stack these two notes would be nice, for consistency with the stacking at 01:35:385 (14,1) - , and just the general feeling of stopping before starting again.ok
  19. 01:38:543 (4,1) - Yeah, huge jump is huge. If possible, you should reduce this a bit. Also, ctrl+g on 01:38:227 (2,4) - ? for circular motion.ok for reduce
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Topic Starter
AngelHoney
really thank you ! CXu!!

almost done i think :3

waiting for you back ovo
DJPop

CXu wrote:

[General]
[list][*]DJPop's mania-diffs have a bpm change at 00:35:386, BPM of 23.750. BPM should be the same throughout all diffs, since, well, same song.
It was intended to make a pause technique, no changes.
CXu
I'll check the map again sometime during the weekend. Anyway:
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Osu!mania_Ranki ... ria#Timing

Edit: Oh yeah I forgot to mention, but it's also in the general ranking criteria, and it's not so much that the slowdown is bad or anything (I don't play o!m, so I can't tell), but yeah.
PyaKura

CXu wrote:

I'll check the map again sometime during the weekend. Anyway:
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Osu!mania_Ranki ... ria#Timing
BPM change is not much an issue here, and is actually a great idea. I don't know what's up with this rule, there is absolutely no valid reason in not allowing a different BPM for a short part of the song if it works. I do agree that it is stupid to use BPM changes to change the scrolling speed progressively though. (Not hating on anyone, after reading myself again I found myself rather blunt :o )

What bothers me here though is that weird x8.0 SV multiplier during the 23,75 BPM part, it just doesn't feel right. I know what you wanted to do and it really makes a cool effect, but readability-wise it's really so-so. I suggest you add another BPM change (back to the original 190 BPM) to have a visual feedback (this adds a white line when the BPM changes) and predict the moment when the song starts again, and remove that weird SV multiplier. As it stands now, you literally have to know this part by heart (read : know the exact timing) to be able to play it without missing. Screenshot of what I want to say just below.

00:35:386 - It is lacking notes for the last sounds (listen to this part with 25% speed).

Try doing this. It plays better this way. I've also added 3 random notes (selected) to show you where you forgot to put them. If you the scrolling to starts again before the next notes hit the judgement line you can add a 190 BPM change earlier and keep the current 190 BPM change. This way, you still have a visual feedback as to when the scrolling speed changes and the white ticks in the rest of the songs follow the beat correctly.

What I just wrote may sounds very confusing, so just ask (here or PM) if you don't understand (whether it is DJPop, BATs, or other people), I'll try my best to make it clearer. >.<

00:41:859 (41859|5) - No sound ? I understand it's for symmetry though.

Anyways, great quality map, good luck and get this ranked guys !
DJPop

CXu wrote:

I'll check the map again sometime during the weekend. Anyway:
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Osu!mania_Ranki ... ria#Timing

Edit: Oh yeah I forgot to mention, but it's also in the general ranking criteria, and it's not so much that the slowdown is bad or anything (I don't play o!m, so I can't tell), but yeah.
- That stupid rule again >___>
It has the same effect as x0.01 without red timing and was presented in original version of this song

PyaKura wrote:

What bothers me here though is that weird x8.0 SV multiplier during the 23,75 BPM part, it just doesn't feel right. I know what you wanted to do and it really makes a cool effect, but readability-wise it's really so-so. I suggest you add another BPM change (back to the original 190 BPM) to have a visual feedback (this adds a white line when the BPM changes) and predict the moment when the song starts again, and remove that weird SV multiplier. As it stands now, you literally have to know this part by heart (read : know the exact timing) to be able to play it without missing. Screenshot of what I want to say just below.
- 23.75 = 190 / 8, same effect as using x0.01 without red timing.

00:35:386 - It is lacking notes for the last sounds (listen to this part with 25% speed).

Try doing this. It plays better this way. I've also added 3 random notes (selected) to show you where you forgot to put them. If you the scrolling to starts again before the next notes hit the judgement line you can add a 190 BPM change earlier and keep the current 190 BPM change. This way, you still have a visual feedback as to when the scrolling speed changes and the white ticks in the rest of the songs follow the beat correctly.
- Assuming cymbal sound is the sign of suddenly stop. This technique is from the original O2Jam version (official).
Also there's no space to add them if the rooms are intended to be consistent.




What I just wrote may sounds very confusing, so just ask (here or PM) if you don't understand (whether it is DJPop, BATs, or other people), I'll try my best to make it clearer. >.<

00:41:859 (41859|5) - No sound ? I understand it's for symmetry though.
-Just default hitsounds like the pattern around.

Anyways, great quality map, good luck and get this ranked guys !
pw384
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PyaKura
@DJPop : yes I see what you mean. This doesn't prevent the scrl spd change to be unreable unless you know the timing by heart. What about replacing your x8 multiplier during the 23,75 BPM part by 190 BPM (because as you said, 23,75*8 = 190) directly for visual feedback and readability (keep the next 190 BPM so that the white ticks follow the beat correctly)? Doing so doesn't change the way the song is played, it's just less of a gamble when you don't know the song. The white line helps you predict a scrl spd change. Can't test this right now, will do so in a bit. :>

Edit : Okay try this then. It doesn't change anything speed wise (keeping your slowdown effect) but adds readability.

About the three notes I've added, it just feels weird to not having to play them, because they are there and exist :v.
DJPop

PyaKura wrote:

@DJPop : yes I see what you mean. This doesn't prevent the scrl spd change to be unreable unless you know the timing by heart. What about replacing your x8 multiplier during the 23,75 BPM part by 190 BPM (because as you said, 23,75*8 = 190) directly for visual feedback and readability (keep the next 190 BPM so that the white ticks follow the beat correctly)? Doing so doesn't change the way the song is played, it's just less of a gamble when you don't know the song. The white line helps you predict a scrl spd change. Can't test this right now, will do so in a bit. :>

Edit : Okay try this then. It doesn't change anything speed wise (keeping your slowdown effect) but adds readability.

About the three notes I've added, it just feels weird to not having to play them, because they are there and exist :v.

- Looks ugly for me D:
I understand your point about readability, but it's intended and easy to notice. Players can pass them finely by just playing it on 2nd time.
Lokovodo
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CXu
orz... I really hope I have the time to look at this again this weekend. Sorry ;w;
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
O_Q
UnderminE
Come on ;__;
PyaKura
AngelHoney I really don't know how you can be so patient with this mapset lol... no giving up !
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

PyaKura wrote:

AngelHoney I really don't know how you can be so patient with this mapset lol... no giving up !
because you dont know how many bats i asked and be rejected ;p
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