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GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

GugUCorn 2013-08-12T04:43:56+00:00

M4M~

[General]

How about change soft whistle to my map's soft whistle? http://osu.ppy.sh/s/104149 your soft whistle sound is low volume.
Standard BG Size is 1024x768. your BG Size is UNRANKERBLE

[Easy]

00:01:639 (1) - add finish on start of slider.
00:13:225 (2,3,4) - Finish? or add clap on (1),(3)
00:19:949 (1) - end here ?00:21:363?00:21:432?(beat snap divisor 1/6) Anyway, do not end on 00:21:501. and volume down
00:38:880 (4) - down curve
SPOILER
00:43:845 (2) - second slider point move to (156,336)
00:56:673 (4) - clap
01:02:880 (2) - remove finish
01:03:707 (3) - clap. and finish?
01:10:742 (6) - i think clap is more better~
01:16:535 (3,4) - clap?

[-Umi-]

00:11:570 (3) - NC
00:19:845 (1) - same Easy mod
00:24:604 (3,4) - whistle. (3) and (4)'s start of slider.
00:24:811 (4) - NC. read hard stacked note for Normal Player.
00:26:466 (1) - whistle on start of slider.
00:31:432 (1) - NC
00:34:742 (3) - NC?
00:42:604 (1,2) - NC on (2).(remove (1)'s NC)
00:45:501 (3) - red slider point move 1grid down and left.
00:55:845 (3) - NC

[jonathanlfj]

00:13:212 (1) - whistle on arrow of slider.
00:13:832 (2) - whistle
00:17:763 (5) - whistle on first of slider.
00:28:936 (3) - don't need to change S:C1. but don't need to remove this inherited point. add whistle on start of slider and end of slider.
00:30:384 (2) - 1 grid down
00:35:970 (4) - clap on start of slider
00:37:212 (3) - more triangle~. 1grid down
00:38:039 (1) - clap on end of slider.
00:42:591 (4) - remove clap on end of slider
00:54:177 (3) - parallel with previous slider.(end slider point move to (200,116))
00:57:694 (3) - remove clap
01:02:867 (1) - whistle on first of slider
01:23:970 (4) - remove whistle on end of slider?
01:24:384 (1) - end here 01:28:108

[Insane]

00:16:535 (1) - whistle is little awkward,don't you?
00:17:983 (1) - If you want to add whistle,add here on end slider.
00:19:018 (6) - this too.
00:19:845 (1) - yup. whistle on start of slider.
00:21:501 - Add inherited point and 40% volume.
00:21:811 - how about inserting Break time?
00:26:466 (1) - Whistle
00:28:949 (4) - second slider point move 1 grid left
00:39:707 (1) - whistle on start of slider.
00:49:639 (1) - Finish on start of slider?
00:50:880 (5,6) - whistle
00:51:294 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:04:018 (7) - NC
01:14:260 (8) - remove clap?
01:17:777 (1) - whistle?
01:23:570 (5,1) - improper rhythem...remove (1) and expand (5) to 01:24:397. and (5) NC

Setsurei

1,149 posts

Joined May 2012

Setsurei 2013-08-12T06:29:29+00:00

ticket removed from the queue

some ~~lame~~ suggestions lol
this map is good

[Easy]
00:09:914 (3) - I know that this is mirrored, but seems because of flipping the axis is damaged, tail point move a bit, x 220 y 272
00:29:776 (1) - x 122 y 157, center point x 161 y 77, tail point x 256 y 64 (easier to move when grid unsnapped)
00:39:707 (1) - center point x 260 y 84
00:43:845 (2) - center point x 152 y 328
00:51:294 (1) - move the head point a bit, x 324 y 264. center point (x 350 y 191) and tail point (x 323 y 131) remain the same
(I put the value there in case the sliders are moved accidentally)
01:04:535 (1) - move a bit right, x 56 y 280. center point x 132 y 292, tail point x 177 y 257
01:06:190 (2) - copy 01:04:535 (1) - , flip vertical, and move it to x 104 y 192, then rotate like this

SPOILER

01:14:467 (1) - move to x 28 y 268, center point x 110 y 306, tail point x 192 y 252

[Umi's Normal]
00:02:259 (2) - center point x 444 y 192
00:14:052 (3) - 2nd point x 60 y 144, red point x 48 y 84
00:54:604 (1) - center point x 344 y 88, tail point x 408 y 96
01:06:811 (2) - center point x 285 y 110, tail point x 232 y 143

[jonathanlfj's Hard]

please fix this

object not snapped, countdown, letterbox and timing points (use the same kiai time like the other diffs)

00:28:522 (2) - move to x 125 y 230
00:28:936 (3) - move to x 205 y 272
00:32:246 (3) - center point x 320 y 236
00:35:970 (4) - stack this to 00:35:557 (3) - (x 260 y 160)
00:46:315 (1) - center point x 32 y 232, tail point x 44 y 172
00:56:246 (1) - center point x 256 y 332

[Insane]

please fix this

object not snapped

00:04:949 (1) - center point x 64 y 328
00:23:983 (4) - center point x 88 y 264
00:28:949 (4) - center point x 288 y 276
00:40:845 (4) - make it stack properly, DS 0.00x > move to x 204 y 228, center point remain the same (x 152 y 240), tail point x 104 y 224
00:41:156 (5) - x 113 y 229
00:47:156 (4) - center point x 184 y 200, tail point x 264 y 192
01:15:294 (5) - x 343 y 267, center point x 256 y 316, tail point x 175 y 276 < blanket this note 01:14:260 (8) -

that's all
good luck for ranked!

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-08-12T07:03:52+00:00

Setsurei wrote:

ticket removed from the queue

some ~~lame~~ suggestions lol
this map is good

[Easy]
00:09:914 (3) - I know that this is mirrored, but seems because of flipping the axis is damaged, tail point move a bit, x 220 y 272
00:29:776 (1) - x 122 y 157, center point x 161 y 77, tail point x 256 y 64 (easier to move when grid unsnapped)
00:39:707 (1) - center point x 260 y 84
00:43:845 (2) - center point x 152 y 328
00:51:294 (1) - move the head point a bit, x 324 y 264. center point (x 350 y 191) and tail point (x 323 y 131) remain the same
(I put the value there in case the sliders are moved accidentally)
01:04:535 (1) - move a bit right, x 56 y 280. center point x 132 y 292, tail point x 177 y 257
01:06:190 (2) - copy 01:04:535 (1) - , flip vertical, and move it to x 104 y 192, then rotate like this
SPOILER
01:14:467 (1) - move to x 28 y 268, center point x 110 y 306, tail point x 192 y 252

[Insane]
object not snapped
[/centre
00:04:949 (1) - center point x 64 y 328
00:23:983 (4) - center point x 88 y 264
00:28:949 (4) - center point x 288 y 276
00:40:845 (4) - make it stack properly, DS 0.00x > move to x 204 y 228, center point remain the same (x 152 y 240), tail point x 104 y 224
00:41:156 (5) - x 113 y 229
00:47:156 (4) - center point x 184 y 200, tail point x 264 y 192
01:15:294 (5) - x 343 y 267, center point x 256 y 316, tail point x 175 y 276 < blanket this note 01:14:260 (8) -

that's all
good luck for ranked!
fixed all here Thanks for the mod Setsurei~! :3/

FreeSongs wrote:
Hi~
from your M4M queue

[Easy]
perfect~

[Insane]
00:11:983 - add clap
00:13:225 - add finish
00:18:190 - ^
00:19:018 - ^
00:18:604 - remove clap
00:18:811 - 00:19:018 - 00:19:639 - add clap
00:26:466 - add whistle
00:46:328 - add finish
00:47:983 - ^
00:51:294 - ^
01:02:880 - ^
01:06:190 - remove finish
01:16:121 - add finish
01:21:087 - ^
01:21:914 - ^
01:21:501 - remove clap
01:21:707 - 01:21:914 - 01:22:535 - 01:22:742 - add clap

hope this helps
orz don't remember what I fixed err I guess atleast the half :3 soo Thanks for the mod~!! ^^/

[General]

How about change soft whistle to my map's soft whistle? http://osu.ppy.sh/s/104149 your soft whistle sound is low volume. I'll consider as I think it's fine tho
Standard BG Size is 1024x768. your BG Size is UNRANKERBLE meh I'll resize it later =w=
[Easy]

00:01:639 (1) - add finish on start of slider.
00:13:225 (2,3,4) - Finish? or add clap on (1),(3)
00:19:949 (1) - end here ?00:21:363?00:21:432?(beat snap divisor 1/6) Anyway, do not end on 00:21:501. and volume down
00:38:880 (4) - down curve
SPOILER
00:43:845 (2) - second slider point move to (156,336)
00:56:673 (4) - clap
01:02:880 (2) - remove finish
01:03:707 (3) - clap. and finish?
01:10:742 (6) - i think clap is more better~
01:16:535 (3,4) - clap?
[Insane]

00:16:535 (1) - whistle is little awkward,don't you?
00:17:983 (1) - If you want to add whistle,add here on end slider.
00:19:018 (6) - this too.
00:19:845 (1) - yup. whistle on start of slider.
00:21:501 - Add inherited point and 40% volume.
00:21:811 - how about inserting Break time?
00:26:466 (1) - Whistle
00:28:949 (4) - second slider point move 1 grid left
00:39:707 (1) - whistle on start of slider.
00:49:639 (1) - Finish on start of slider?
00:50:880 (5,6) - whistle
00:51:294 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:04:018 (7) - NC
01:14:260 (8) - remove clap?
01:17:777 (1) - whistle?
01:23:570 (5,1) - improper rhythem...remove (1) and expand (5) to 01:24:397. and (5) NC
Don't remember what fixed ><, fixed almost :3~

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Gamu 2013-08-12T10:08:46+00:00

hi~

M4M request :33

[General]

●Song Setup > Design > Countdown > Please turn off the "Enable countdown". Don't need.
●Song Setup > Design > Misc. Toggles > Please turn off the "Letterbox during breaks". Don't need.

[Easy]

●00:28:535 (4) - Move to x:276 y:328?
●00:41:776 (2) - Add clap (start). good sound
●01:10:328 (5) - Move to x:196 y:124. It is shifted slightly
●01:16:949 (4) - finish instead of clap? Because, 00:14:052 (4) - finish.
●01:21:088 (1) - Add whistle (start)?

[umiiiiii]

●00:12:397 (4) - Add finish (start)? It would fit the music.
●00:13:225 (1) - ^
●00:14:052 (3) - ^
●00:16:535 (1) - ^
●00:38:880 (1,2,3) - It is hard to grasp the rhythm for beginners. Repeat slider instead of circles?
●00:49:639 (1) - It is hard to grasp the rhythm for beginners. Therefore, suggestion of rhythm. http://puu.sh/4035a.jpg

[jonathanlfj]

●00:14:039 (3) - finish instead of whistle? It would fit the music.
●00:31:832 (2) - Ctrl+G? I prefer this.
●01:24:384 (1) - circle instead of spinner? I think spinner does not fit..maybe

[Insane]

●OD+1 owo? Recently, OD8 has become common..
●00:14:052 (3) - Add finish (start)? It would fit the music.

good mapset :3
good luck ></

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2013-08-12T10:44:04+00:00

TaMul wrote:
M4M~

[-Umi-]

00:11:570 (3) - NC no >.<
00:19:845 (1) - same Easy mod ^
00:24:604 (3,4) - whistle. (3) and (4)'s start of slider.Don't really lik use whistle
00:24:811 (4) - NC. read hard stacked note for Normal Player. Fixed
00:26:466 (1) - whistle on start of slider. same as before
00:31:432 (1) - NC Fixed
00:34:742 (3) - NC? ^
00:42:604 (1,2) - NC on (2).(remove (1)'s NC) ^
00:45:501 (3) - red slider point move 1grid down and left. ^
00:55:845 (3) - NC ^

FreeSongs wrote:
Hi~
from your M4M queue

[Umi's Normal]
00:43:018 - add finish Fixed
00:50:880 - add finish ^
00:51:087 - remove finish ^
01:07:845 - add finish no
01:10:328 - ^ ^
01:16:121 - ^ ^
01:16:949 - ^ ^
01:21:087 - ^ fixed

Setsurei wrote:

ticket removed from the queue

[Umi's Normal]
00:02:259 (2) - center point x 444 y 192
00:14:052 (3) - 2nd point x 60 y 144, red point x 48 y 84
00:54:604 (1) - center point x 344 y 88, tail point x 408 y 96
01:06:811 (2) - center point x 285 y 110, tail point x 232 y 143
All fixed

-Gamu- wrote:
hi~

M4M request :33

[umiiiiii]

●00:12:397 (4) - Add finish (start)? It would fit the music. Fixed
●00:13:225 (1) - ^ ^
●00:14:052 (3) - ^ ^
●00:16:535 (1) - ^ ^
●00:38:880 (1,2,3) - It is hard to grasp the rhythm for beginners. Repeat slider instead of circles? ^
●00:49:639 (1) - It is hard to grasp the rhythm for beginners. Therefore, suggestion of rhythm. http://puu.sh/4035a.jpg I think it's ok on slider >.<

Thx for mod everyone

here my diff

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Eternal Reality.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 51294
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 76535
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:eternal reality (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:eternal reality (TV Size)
Artist:fripSide
ArtistUnicode:fripSide
Creator:xChippy
Version:Umi's Normal
Source:Toaru Kagaku no Railgun S
Tags:a certain scientific とある科学の超電磁砲 s -Umi- jonathanlfj
BeatmapID:286760
BeatmapSetID:108719

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Music Video.avi"
0,0,"rsz_misakaa.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1639,413.793103448276,4,2,2,50,1,0
8259,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
19845,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
23156,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
28949,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
49639,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
51294,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
71156,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 95,12,233
Combo2 : 10,235,235
Combo3 : 5,5,240

[HitObjects]
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304,120,54190,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,120,54397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,120,54604,6,0,P|344:88|408:96,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,184,55225,2,0,P|400:232|376:296,1,120
312,296,55845,2,0,L|176:272,2,120,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,184,57087,2,0,L|268:132,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,72,57914,6,0,B|140:116|140:116|92:124|80:172,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,224,58535,2,0,P|118:253|192:252,1,120
248,216,59156,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,160,59363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,124,59570,6,0,P|416:112|436:124,1,90
448,212,60190,2,0,P|412:232|324:212,1,120
312,160,60811,2,0,P|264:156|236:172,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,220,61225,6,0,P|156:230|120:210,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,172,61845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,92,62259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,92,62466,2,0,B|216:64|216:64|296:64,2,120,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,224,63707,2,0,B|216:252|216:252|296:252,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,188,64535,5,4,0:0:0:0:
468,256,64845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,324,65156,2,0,P|336:340|268:316,1,120
236,280,65776,2,0,L|160:296,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,208,66501,5,0,0:0:0:0:
346,120,66811,2,0,P|285:110|232:143,1,120
196,192,67432,2,0,L|140:160,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,144,67845,6,0,P|47:186|52:248,2,90,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,80,68880,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,80,69087,2,0,P|240:68|316:88,1,120,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,212,69914,2,0,P|238:222|178:210,2,120,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,140,71156,6,0,B|420:80|420:80|440:64|496:64,2,120,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,256,72397,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,256,72604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,256,72811,6,0,B|320:316|320:316|300:332|244:332,2,120,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,204,73845,2,0,L|252:156,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,112,74259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,112,74466,6,0,P|160:144|100:144,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,196,75087,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,244,75294,2,0,P|164:244|212:276,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,300,75914,6,0,L|344:280,1,60
308,224,76328,2,0,L|376:204,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,152,76742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,100,76949,2,0,L|220:72,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,112,77776,6,0,P|84:144|72:228,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,260,78397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,260,78604,2,0,P|220:228|235:160,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,76,79432,6,0,B|388:88|388:88|392:136|436:152,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,204,80052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,256,80259,2,0,B|381:265|377:313|377:313|330:325,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,304,80880,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,260,81087,6,0,P|168:232|124:236,2,90,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,240,81914,2,0,P|305:185|328:166,2,90,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82742,12,4,84397,0:0:0:0:

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-08-12T15:03:30+00:00

-Gamu- wrote:
hi~

M4M request :33

[General]

●Song Setup > Design > Countdown > Please turn off the "Enable countdown". Don't need. fixed
●Song Setup > Design > Misc. Toggles > Please turn off the "Letterbox during breaks". Don't need. fixed

[Easy]

●00:28:535 (4) - Move to x:276 y:328? fixed
●00:41:776 (2) - Add clap (start). good sound fixed
●01:10:328 (5) - Move to x:196 y:124. It is shifted slightly how about 196|122 =w=/
●01:16:949 (4) - finish instead of clap? Because, 00:14:052 (4) - finish. fixed
●01:21:088 (1) - Add whistle (start)? fixed

[Insane]

●OD+1 owo? Recently, OD8 has become common.. fixed
●00:14:052 (3) - Add finish (start)? It would fit the music. fixed

good mapset :3
good luck ></

Thanks for the mod Gamu~! :3/ I'll mod yours soon~

HabiHolic

5,486 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-08-13T08:37:33+00:00

good map~! star!

Oyatsu

1,908 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2013-08-13T08:54:14+00:00

Hi there. Sama sama sama~

[General]

Need soft-sliderslide. I can hear sound when I play slider. It is inaudible.

[Isane]

Add clap iin these. Hitsound will be better
- 00:04:535 (4)
- 00:02:880 (4)
- 00:06:190 (5)
00:12:397 (5) - 00:13:639 (1) - I can hear the same rhythm these. COnsider and put NC sensible
00:19:742 (11) - Difficult for player is here.
00:21:294 (1) - Add whistle at end will better
00:28:742 (3) - 380/288 to blanket
00:34:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - After a normal hitsound. This patern is quiet. What's this? Put clap at 00:34:328 (1) - and 00:35:156 (5) -
00:57:087 (4) - NC?

[jona's Hard]
Again. Meet you =w=

00:02:867 (2,3) - I think clap at (2) will better than add at (3). Let try to make and feel
00:04:522 (2) - The same at 00:02:867 (2,3) - . If I don't the same it, you also didn't put hitsound true with them
00:28:936 (3) - NC? NC is fine if nope, it still good
00:38:039 (1) - Whistle at end. That is your plan or false. Fix it into clap. Like: 00:39:694 (1) -
01:12:384 (5) - Hidden this. I killed me when try to test. I though only have circle
01:23:970 (4) - Try to increase slider's speed. I think it will more sensible with rhythm here

[Umi's normal]
Maybe. First GD I mod for you

00:02:880 (3) - NC? fine or also fine if nope
00:19:845 (1) - Add whistle this spin

Other is fine for me

[Easy]

00:14:052 (4) - Instead of this. Change into slider start at 00:14:052 - and end at 00:14:466 - . I don't understand here
00:39:707 (1) - Tail at 244/184 to blanket
00:50:880 (2) - Clap of S. Plan of your or only false? if nope, suggest fix
00:52:949 (2) - Can make this slider the same as 00:51:294 (1) -
01:09:500 (3) - NC plz.

OK. Good luck! Chippy

xChippy

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Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-08-13T10:41:35+00:00

Oyatsu wrote:
Hi there. Sama sama sama~
[General]
Need soft-sliderslide. I can hear sound when I play slider. It is inaudible.fixed
[Isane]
Add clap iin these. Hitsound will be better Nope I hitsounded this strictly to the music and theres no clap at those parts did something else tho
- 00:04:535 (4)
- 00:02:880 (4)
- 00:06:190 (5)
00:12:397 (5) - 00:13:639 (1) - I can hear the same rhythm these. COnsider and put NC sensible did something else
00:19:742 (11) - Difficult for player is here. fixed
00:21:294 (1) - Add whistle at end will better Put on slider body instead
00:28:742 (3) - 380/288 to blanket blanket is fine look at the approach circle
00:34:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - After a normal hitsound. This patern is quiet. What's this? Put clap at 00:34:328 (1) - and 00:35:156 (5) - same as above hitsounded strictly to the music
00:57:087 (4) - NC? nope it will break consistency
[Easy]
00:14:052 (4) - Instead of this. Change into slider start at 00:14:052 - and end at 00:14:466 - . I don't understand here I'll consider
00:39:707 (1) - Tail at 244/184 to blanket Blanket is fine tho look at the approach circle :3
00:50:880 (2) - Clap of S. Plan of your or only false? if nope, suggest fix fixed
00:52:949 (2) - Can make this slider the same as 00:51:294 (1) - fixed
01:09:500 (3) - NC plz. why It would break consistency with other combo's
OK. Good luck! Chippy

Thanks for the mod Oyatsu~! =w=/

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2013-08-14T02:33:28+00:00

That was a lot of mods

FreeSongs wrote:
[jonathanlfj's Hard]
00:38:453 - clap instead of whistle? nice catch
01:21:901 - add finish would like to keep consistent with 00:19:005 (2)
01:23:970 - remove clap its heard in the music i'd like to keep it
00:43:018 - add finish ok

TaMul wrote:
[jonathanlfj]

00:13:212 (1) - whistle on arrow of slider. sure
00:13:832 (2) - whistle ok
00:17:763 (5) - whistle on first of slider. using clap instead, dont want two hitsounds on one for this diff
00:28:936 (3) - don't need to change S:C1. but don't need to remove this inherited point. add whistle on start of slider and end of slider. removed green line, as of hitsound i prefer finish here
00:30:384 (2) - 1 grid down ok
00:35:970 (4) - clap on start of slider ~
00:37:212 (3) - more triangle~. 1grid down the triangle looks better to me with the current coordinate
00:38:039 (1) - clap on end of slider. kk
00:42:591 (4) - remove clap on end of slider this was intentional since the music introduced a heavy beat here
00:54:177 (3) - parallel with previous slider.(end slider point move to (200,116)) aite
00:57:694 (3) - remove clap again the music here suggests some cool clap patterns
01:02:867 (1) - whistle on first of slider the finish overrides it anyways, prefer using single-hitsound
01:23:970 (4) - remove whistle on end of slider? i would like to keep it for the loud instruments in the back
01:24:384 (1) - end here 01:28:108 aite

Setsurei wrote:
[jonathanlfj's Hard]
object not snapped, countdown, letterbox and timing points (use the same kiai time like the other diffs) fixed everything cept the kiai time difference, guest diffs are allowed to use different kiai times as long as it fits the song
00:28:522 (2) - move to x 125 y 230
00:28:936 (3) - move to x 205 y 272
00:32:246 (3) - center point x 320 y 236
00:35:970 (4) - stack this to 00:35:557 (3) - (x 260 y 160) manual stack to prevent stack leniency from coming into effect
00:46:315 (1) - center point x 32 y 232, tail point x 44 y 172
00:56:246 (1) - center point x 256 y 332
fixed all unless commented in red, but just a heads up in cases like this most people wont apply them, since maps are usually mapped with grid snap and moving coordinates like this might ruin consistency

-Gamu- wrote:
[jonathanlfj]

●00:14:039 (3) - finish instead of whistle? It would fit the music. sure
●00:31:832 (2) - Ctrl+G? I prefer this. ok
●01:24:384 (1) - circle instead of spinner? I think spinner does not fit..maybe well the fade out kinda asks for it...added a circle at 01:24:384 to compensate (moved spinner back)

Oyatsu wrote:
[jona's Hard]
Again. Meet you =w= hihi~
00:02:867 (2,3) - I think clap at (2) will better than add at (3). Let try to make and feel prefer clap at (3) for the heavy drum beat, but added whistle at (2) since it sounds like a clap anyways
00:04:522 (2) - The same at 00:02:867 (2,3) - . If I don't the same it, you also didn't put hitsound true with them well for this one i prefer the whistle at the end since the start has a more electric sound playing
00:28:936 (3) - NC? NC is fine if nope, it still good good trick
00:38:039 (1) - Whistle at end. That is your plan or false. Fix it into clap. Like: 00:39:694 (1) - clapp
01:12:384 (5) - Hidden this. I killed me when try to test. I though only have circle got rid of it
01:23:970 (4) - Try to increase slider's speed. I think it will more sensible with rhythm here since i added a note at 01:24:384 i think i will keep this as-is for simplicity

Thanks for the mod everyone~
http://puu.sh/41ynb.zip

thzz

579 posts

Joined May 2012

thzz 2013-08-14T04:58:36+00:00

Hi~ from my queue

[General]

There're some simple wrongs in this mapset. Check AiMod~

[Easy]

00:06:604 (2,3) - I think 00:04:949 (1) - and 00:07:432 (3) - are too close. I suggest to move like this.
image

00:06:604 (2) - x:44 y:232
00:07:432 (3) - x:156 y:260
00:16:535 (3) - Add finish on head (remove whistle). There's a same sound as 00:14:880 (1) - 's head.
01:19:432 (3) - ^
00:38:052 (3,4) - I feel this resisting flow is a little suddenly. Like this arrangement isn't bad imo.
image
01:22:845 (1) - Add finish.

[Umi's Normal]

00:26:466 (1,2,3) - You can make better flow imo. How about like this?
image
01:00:811 (3) - Move to downside left? Just a suggetion.
image
01:10:328 - You can add finish at here if you put finish 01:09:501 - .
01:16:121 - Add finish.
01:16:949 - ^

[jonathanlfj's Hard]

I think these whistles are unnecessary. You can make more faithfulness for this song to remove these.
1. 00:02:246 -
2. 00:03:901 -
3. 00:04:729 -
4. 00:05:557 -
00:36:384 (1) - I prefer if you add whistle on head.
00:39:694 (1) - ^
00:43:005 (1) - ^
00:44:660 (1) - ^
00:46:315 (1) - ^
00:47:970 (1) - ^

[Insane]

00:04:742 (5) - You may need jump between 00:04:949 (1) - I think.
example
00:39:707 (1) - Ctrl+G. Keeping flow from 00:39:190 (4,5) - toward the upside is better imo.
00:09:707 (8,1) - Make jump here is better. For example, stack 00:09:914 (1) - with 00:09:294 (6) - .
00:38:052 (1) - How about to use like this shape to make flow.
image
00:38:466 (2) - Then, I think using same shape with 00:38:052 (1) - (Ctrl+<+G) is better.
00:54:397 (7,1) - You should take more distance between these. (1.4x at least imo)
00:58:535 (4) - Add whistle on the tale. (considering 00:52:121 - )
01:23:570 (5) - I think returning one more time is more faithful for this song.

That's all, Good luck~

xChippy

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Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-08-14T07:43:19+00:00

Cah-m wrote:
Hi~ from my queue

[General]
There're some simple wrongs in this mapset. Check AiMod~fixed
[Easy]
00:06:604 (2,3) - I think 00:04:949 (1) - and 00:07:432 (3) - are too close. I suggest to move like this.
image

00:06:604 (2) - x:44 y:232
00:07:432 (3) - x:156 y:260
00:16:535 (3) - Add finish on head (remove whistle). There's a same sound as 00:14:880 (1) - 's head.
01:19:432 (3) - ^
00:38:052 (3,4) - I feel this resisting flow is a little suddenly. Like this arrangement isn't bad imo.
image
01:22:845 (1) - Add finish.
all fixed~
[Insane]
00:04:742 (5) - You may need jump between 00:04:949 (1) - I think.
example
00:39:707 (1) - Ctrl+G. Keeping flow from 00:39:190 (4,5) - toward the upside is better imo.
00:09:707 (8,1) - Make jump here is better. For example, stack 00:09:914 (1) - with 00:09:294 (6) - .
00:38:052 (1) - How about to use like this shape to make flow.
image
00:38:466 (2) - Then, I think using same shape with 00:38:052 (1) - (Ctrl+<+G) is better.
00:54:397 (7,1) - You should take more distance between these. (1.4x at least imo)
00:58:535 (4) - Add whistle on the tale. (considering 00:52:121 - )
01:23:570 (5) - I think returning one more time is more faithful for this song.Nope I dont hear one more time o-o
no comment= fixed~
That's all, Good luck~

Thanks for the mod Cah-m~! :3/

Charles445

Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon

2,881 posts

Joined March 2009

Charles445 2013-08-15T18:32:16+00:00

Offset 1625

no KD

xChippy

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Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-08-15T21:08:14+00:00

Thanks Charles~ fixed it :3

RandF

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Joined March 2013

RandF 2013-08-16T09:36:30+00:00

From my queue~

[Easy]

00:50:866 (2) - x244 y:324 - it looks better, I think

[Umi's Normal]

Good!

[jonathanlfj's Hard]

00:28:521 (2) - exchange start for end
00:35:556 (3,4) - it is better to stack correctly

[Insane]

01:15:900 (1,2,3,1) - it is better to uniform DS
01:24:383 (1) - move to x:256 y:192

Almost good!
That's fine! ~☆

~Good Luck~

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-08-16T10:57:44+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~

[Easy]
00:50:866 (2) - x244 y:324 - it looks better, I think
[Insane]
01:15:900 (1,2,3,1) - it is better to uniform DS
01:24:383 (1) - move to x:256 y:192
Almost good!
That's fine! ~☆
all fixed :3
~Good Luck~

Thanks for mod and Star :3~!

happy623

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Joined April 2010

happy623 2013-08-17T18:46:07+00:00

yooo

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fripSide!! <3333333333333333333333333

General

add "opening" in tags

Easy

open your .osu file and correct it into 0.9
SPOILER
00:19:935 (1) - this spinner is appeared to fast for Easy imo, newbies may not have enough time to catch the spinner, try to start at 00:20:038 - ?
00:35:556 (4) - hmm, idk if you'd like it or not, add a whistle at the head?
00:56:659 (4) - add a clap here? Because you added clap at 01:02:866 (2) - 's tail, btw you didnt add at 01:09:900 (4) - , you can remove the clap at 01:02:866 (2) or add claps at 00:56:659 (4) and 01:09:900 (4) -. I think its better to consist them
01:01:211 (1) - copy paste from 00:59:556 (2) - ? and put it like the following, if you take it, dont forget to snap the following notes :
SPOILER
01:06:176 (2) - something nazi, blanket the tail of 01:04:521 (1) - ?
SPOILER
01:07:831 (1) - remove this NC, and NC at 01:09:487 (3) - Since vocal changed at 01:09:487 (3)
01:22:831 (1) - Same as above spinner issue, start it at 01:22:935 (1) instead
nice diff

Umi's Normal

Increase your volume from 60% to 70%? I think the current one is too small
Try to put some whistles from 00:01:625 to 00:07:831 - ?
00:19:004 (3) - symmetrize with 00:18:176 (1) - ? Move it 2 grid down if you want
00:55:831 (3) - put a whistle at 00:56:245 -. Since I can hear the music is going up at that time, putting a whistle there is fit imo, if you change this, make sure to put a whistle at 01:02:866 and 01:09:487 too!

jonathanlfj's Hard

00:28:935 (1) - make a small jump here? its fit imo
01:23:969 (4) - try this flow? :
SPOILER
00:56:245 (1) - nazi, move the last anchor to x180 y296 to get a better blanket
nice hard diff again QwQ

Insane

00:20:659 (4) - NC here? to notice ppl for a huge jump
00:34:935 (4) - NC here? seems more notable for a triangle xD
01:23:556 (5) - this reverse slider should be 1/6 instead of 1/4
01:26:866 - you ended your diff here, but Easy is ended at 01:24:383 -, consist them?

thats all~

take my star and good luck!

xChippy

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Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-08-17T19:13:00+00:00

happy623 wrote:
yooo

req via PM

fripSide!! <3333333333333333333333333 \(^.^)/

General
add "opening" in tags
fixed

Easy
open your .osu file and correct it into 0.9
SPOILER
00:19:935 (1) - this spinner is appeared to fast for Easy imo, newbies may not have enough time to catch the spinner, try to start at 00:20:038 - ?
00:35:556 (4) - hmm, idk if you'd like it or not, add a whistle at the head?
00:56:659 (4) - add a clap here? Because you added clap at 01:02:866 (2) - 's tail, btw you didnt add at 01:09:900 (4) - , you can remove the clap at 01:02:866 (2) or add claps at 00:56:659 (4) and 01:09:900 (4) -. I think its better to consist them
01:01:211 (1) - copy paste from 00:59:556 (2) - ? and put it like the following, if you take it, dont forget to snap the following notes :
SPOILER
01:06:176 (2) - something nazi, blanket the tail of 01:04:521 (1) - ?
SPOILER
01:07:831 (1) - remove this NC, and NC at 01:09:487 (3) - Since vocal changed at 01:09:487 (3)
01:22:831 (1) - Same as above spinner issue, start it at 01:22:935 (1) instead
nice diff
All fixed here

Insane
00:20:659 (4) - NC here? to notice ppl for a huge jump fixed
00:34:935 (4) - NC here? seems more notable for a triangle xD fixed
01:23:556 (5) - this reverse slider should be 1/6 instead of 1/4 it's already 1/6 tho =w=/
01:26:866 - you ended your diff here, but Easy is ended at 01:24:383 -, consist them? Made the easy end at 01:26:866 :3

thats all~
take my star and good luck!

Thanks for the mod and star happy623~ :3/!!

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2013-08-18T10:08:56+00:00

Form queue

[General]
(suggestion)All diff end at 01:24:383 -

[Insane]
01:23:556 (5) - End in 01:24:314 - ?

[Normal]
00:19:831 (1) - vol. = 5%?

[Easy]
maybe can add slidertick
00:20:038 (1) - vol. = 5%?

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-08-18T16:16:29+00:00

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
Form queue

[General]
(suggestion)All diff end at 01:24:383 - nah prefer ending at the one I have now since the music stops than

[Insane]
01:23:556 (5) - End in 01:24:314 - ? ^

[Easy]
maybe can add slidertick
00:20:038 (1) - vol. = 5%? fixed

Thanks for the mod :3/!

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2013-08-18T20:33:58+00:00

back from holiday sorry for delay >.<

thx modders !

some changes :3

diff

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Eternal Reality.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 51294
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 76535
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:eternal reality (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:eternal reality (TV Size)
Artist:fripSide
ArtistUnicode:fripSide
Creator:xChippy
Version:Umi's Normal
Source:Toaru Kagaku no Railgun S
Tags:a certain scientific とある科学の超電磁砲 s -Umi- jonathanlfj Opening
BeatmapID:286760
BeatmapSetID:108719

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Music Video.avi"
0,0,"Misaka~Kuroko.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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8245,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
19831,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
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28935,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
49625,-100,4,2,2,60,0,0
51280,-100,4,2,2,70,0,1
71142,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0


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Combo2 : 10,235,235
Combo3 : 5,5,240

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Alarido

1,744 posts

Joined September 2012

Alarido 2013-08-20T13:43:03+00:00

Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND VII (Mappers with Ranked Maps)

Legenda wrote:
→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

No complaints in general issues.
[Easy]
01:15:693 - Add a note here at x:232 y:180 -- unless you want keep this space to allow a small recovery/hand reposition opportunity to the player c:
01:17:349 - I feel I could suggest the same here, but it seems not possible due to spacing irregularity it would cause here, then let's leave it blank, so player might will be allowed to make a pause here too (by pausing the game really, since there's no breaks here -- and no need for them 'coz this is TV size

)

[Umi's Normal]
* Fine ^^

[jonathanlfj's Hard]
jonaaaa~
* Nice patterns and whistle using... but I missed the symmetry before kiai~ (so noticeable on your maps c: )

00:07:004 (2,3,4) - Also is possible arrange these like >>> http://puu.sh/46oEN.jpg

[Insane]
* Amazing and challenging

Thaaat's it, so star for so high quality

Rank this soon!!!!! I wanna play the N & H ^^

Att.

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-08-20T14:00:31+00:00

m4m here in game

Normal
00:02:866 (3,4) - circle in blue tick is hard for newbie imo. try http://puu.sh/46p6N.jpg instead
00:12:383 (4) - make it blanket with 00:11:556 (3) - for more neat?
00:19:004 (3) - copy paste from 00:18:176 (1) - to make blanket ~
00:28:107 (4) - NC for consistency, due you NC every stanza
00:44:659 (1) - spacing 1,28x D:
00:49:625 (1,2) - try http://puu.sh/46pjI.jpg, more follow vocal due high vocal in 00:50:452 -
01:04:521 (1,2) - merge into slider pls, circle in blue tick is hard for newbie D:

Hard
Clean, i can't catch anything orz . Nice jonathan /o/

Easy and Insane irc mod here

20:01 Xinely: ready?
20:01 xChippy: yep
20:01 Xinely: general : remove rsz_misakaa.jpg , seems you no use that BG 
20:01 xChippy: hurr I don't have it tho o-o
20:01 Xinely: OAO
20:02 Xinely: http://puu.sh/46nCc.png
20:02 Xinely: lol
20:02 Xinely: okay nvm about it
20:02 Xinely: maybe just bug as in my previous map
20:02 xChippy: did you reDL or update o-o?
20:02 xChippy: I mean DL o-o
20:02 Xinely: re dl
20:03 xChippy: orz
20:03 xChippy: o-o
20:03 Xinely: nvm it lol
20:03 xChippy: ok =w=/
20:04 Xinely: just nazi here
20:05 Xinely: how about add new combo colour , soft purple? yeah.. idk why i think about this, maybe because u have soft blue , so just consistency lol
20:05 Xinely: http://puu.sh/46nJ2.png
20:06 Xinely: u can make soft slider tick (clap) for 00:08:659 - in easy to make consistency
20:06 xChippy: ok done =w=/
20:06 Xinely: yeah add in every 2nd whitetick haha xD
20:06 xChippy: ye =w=/
20:06 xChippy: I'll do that soon =w=/
20:06 Xinely: 00:11:969 - no need clap here lol
20:07 Xinely: ^ if you follow my suggestion about claptick
20:07 xChippy: I'll add all the slider ticks later than :3/
20:08 Xinely: 00:28:935 - no need volume 70% , just use 50% . you make me surprise lol
20:08 xChippy: okay =w=
20:09 Xinely: 00:29:762 - 60% volume here.. i just think louder lol
20:10 xChippy: done =w=
20:11 Xinely: 00:42:590 (3) - no need finish imo , louder in 00:43:004 - 
20:12 Xinely: 00:49:625 (1) - finish in tail? (just suggestion)
20:13 xChippy: Fixed the first one as for the second one I dont think the sound is powerfull enough :3
20:13 Xinely: 01:10:728 (4) - so nazi. y : 193..  or 01:09:487 (1) -  y:192 lol
20:14 xChippy: done =w=
20:14 Xinely: 01:11:142 (1,3) - why suddenly not have whistle in 3rd white tick?  
20:14 Xinely: imo need it lol
20:15 Xinely: just suggestion again , 01:17:762 - kiai fountain? (if you aplly this, aplly in all diff to consistency)
20:16 xChippy: for first one hmm I thought making it consistent with 00:08:288 this section 
20:16 xChippy: okay applying both =w=
20:17 xChippy: and the fountain errr
20:17 Xinely: lol
20:17 Xinely: 01:22:728 (3) - finish in tail?
20:17 Xinely: 01:19:004 (2,3) - make it blanket http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/938235
20:17 Xinely: easy done 
20:19 xChippy: No finish sound in tail tho ><, fixed the blanket :3
20:19 *Xinely is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/284104 fripSide - eternal reality (TV Size) [Insane]]
20:19 Xinely: AR-1? 
20:20 Xinely: i just think bpm 145 not fit with AR 9. also u are not use "really" fast SV so imo AR 8 is best
20:20 xChippy:  but the kia
20:20 xChippy: o-o
20:21 Xinely: dafuq 1,5x
20:21 xChippy: ye =w=
20:21 Xinely: crazy lol
20:21 xChippy: As I said I like testing new things =w=/
20:22 Xinely: 00:03:073 (5) - remove clap and add in 00:02:866 (4) - clap not fit in red tick imo
20:23 Xinely: 00:04:521 (4) - add clap.. so plain since in 00:02:866 (4,5) - u add hitsound
20:24 xChippy: well the reason for the clap is for the low beat tho o-o
20:24 Xinely: 00:02:245 (3,3,3) - add whistle in head?
20:25 xChippy: done
20:25 Xinely: 00:06:590 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - love it <3
20:26 xChippy: \(^.^)/
20:26 Xinely: 00:18:590 (3) - clap?
20:27 xChippy:  done 
20:28 Xinely: become love this song
20:28 xChippy:  :3
20:28 xChippy: fripside <3
20:28 Xinely: lemme make ctb diff *runs
20:28 xChippy: lol =w=
20:28 Xinely: hahaha jk
20:29 Xinely: 00:28:935 (4) - make jump due loud instrumen?
20:29 Xinely: upload SS, wait
20:30 Xinely: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/938260
20:32 xChippy:  done~
20:32 Xinely: 00:48:280 - add note?
20:32 xChippy: I hear no sound tho o-o
20:33 Xinely: just like 00:47:452 - i heard it D:
20:34 Xinely: 01:17:245 (6) - NC it due spacing change
20:35 Xinely: nice insane lol , insane done
20:35 xChippy: The first one: Extended (1) instead on blue tick and second one done~
20:36 xChippy: thanks ^.^/
20:36 xChippy: Don't forget to post log =w=
20:36 Xinely: okay

asdf i want map this song
Good Luck ~

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-08-20T14:34:58+00:00

Alarido wrote:
Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND VII (Mappers with Ranked Maps)

Legenda wrote:
→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
No complaints in general issues.
[Easy]
01:15:693 - Add a note here at x:232 y:180 -- unless you want keep this space to allow a small recovery/hand reposition opportunity to the player c:
01:17:349 - I feel I could suggest the same here, but it seems not possible due to spacing irregularity it would cause here, then let's leave it blank, so player might will be allowed to make a pause here too (by pausing the game really, since there's no breaks here -- and no need for them 'coz this is TV size )
Yep these were to allow the newer players to recover but I did do some changes with the first suggestion :3

[Insane]
* Amazing and challenging Glad to hear that ^.^

Thaaat's it, so star for so high quality

Rank this soon!!!!! I wanna play the N & H ^^ orz don't want to play my diffs =w=?

Att.

Thanks for the mod Alarido ^.^/!!!

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2013-08-20T14:49:44+00:00

[Umi's Normal]
01:09:073 (3) - Put a repeat to 01:09:280 that ends at 01:09:487 ?

[jonathanlfj's Hard]
00:20:142 (2) - Move to one grid to the up for the distance.
00:35:969 (4) - Stick with the head of 00:35:556 (3) ?

I found nothing else. Good Luck and star!

Kinomi

1,229 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2013-08-20T15:01:42+00:00

again fripside,again jonathanlfj's Hard

I come again.

will eidt later

General

insane looks cool.

Easy

00:33:487 (1,2,3) - maybe add clap is better,since you add clap at 00:31:004 (2) -

Umi's Normal

maybe you should add more hit sounds from
00:29:762 (1) - to 00:50:866 (2) -

00:49:625 (1) - not very good, though you follow the drum,it is the only one even repeat in this diff.
myabe follow the vocal is better or try other pattern

01:04:831 (2) - it's 145 BPM and it's blue line but you use a note ._.,it will make newbie feel confused,change 1 and 2 to a slider is better imo

01:06:487 (1) - ^

jonathanlfj's Hard

真鬼畜的hard

00:49:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 超鬼畜不能多说...

00:50:866 (5,6) - 这两个和前面节奏不一样，如果你不改的话NC一下好一点

01:23:556 (1,2,3,4) - 这边是连着的吧，换成5连怎么样

Insane

00:01:625 (1,2,3) - there is a problem that 3 ,compare to 1 and 2,is better to stress,it has higher pitch,so the big spacing between 1 and 2,the small spacing between 2 and 3 is not a good idea.Try to swap the spacing, it will be more playable and interesting.
and there are many similar parts.

00:06:900 (2,3,4,5) - too big spacing,it is hard to read and break the difficulty balance,try to do some change

in fact kiai is not very high.it does not have a very big difference from parts before,so this big change of sv is not very good imo.

and after kiai,in fact the sv reduced but the song become higher in some parts like 01:11:866 (5,5) -

another problem is that the long streams are really slow(because of the small spacing) compared to other objects' big-spacing jump
for example 01:03:280 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - this.

that's all.no other big problems.

just some suggestions.
the map is interesting.
good luck for rank.

Alarido

1,744 posts

Joined September 2012

Alarido 2013-08-20T17:36:44+00:00

xChippy wrote:
Rank this soon!!!!! I wanna play the N & H ^^ orz don't want to play my diffs =w=?

About the Insane: I can't pass it this time ._. (need trainig a lot)

I'll play the Easy with HD+HR+DT aiming SSH

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-08-20T18:45:41+00:00

baldrace wrote:
again fripside,again jonathanlfj's Hard yep :3/

I come again.

will eidt later

General

insane looks cool. \(=w=)/

Easy

00:33:487 (1,2,3) - maybe add clap is better,since you add clap at 00:31:004 (2) - only added clap on (1) o-o

Insane

00:01:625 (1,2,3) - there is a problem that 3 ,compare to 1 and 2,is better to stress,it has higher pitch,so the big spacing between 1 and 2,the small spacing between 2 and 3 is not a good idea.Try to swap the spacing, it will be more playable and interesting.
and there are many similar parts. fixed some

00:06:900 (2,3,4,5) - too big spacing,it is hard to read and break the difficulty balance,try to do some change Decreased spacing a bit

in fact kiai is not very high.it does not have a very big difference from parts before,so this big change of sv is not very good imo.

and after kiai,in fact the sv reduced but the song become higher in some parts like 01:11:866 (5,5) -

another problem is that the long streams are really slow(because of the small spacing) compared to other objects' big-spacing jump
for example 01:03:280 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - this.

Ye about the SV i know it's too high but ye I want the kia to be the most challenging part.. errr I might lower it later
that's all.no other big problems.

just some suggestions.
the map is interesting.
good luck for rank.

Thanks for the mod baldraceee~~ :3/!!!

Alarido wrote:
xChippy wrote:
Rank this soon!!!!! I wanna play the N & H ^^ orz don't want to play my diffs =w=?
About the Insane: I can't pass it this time ._. (need trainig a lot)

I'll play the Easy with HD+HR+DT aiming SSH

Hehe okay~ :3/ gogo ^^

ZLOdeuka-

1,442 posts

Joined June 2009

ZLOdeuka- 2013-08-21T17:31:08+00:00

Hello~

[Umi's Normal]

00:03:590 (4) - new combo and 00:04:521 (1) - remove new combo and 00:04:935 (3) - new combo

[jonathanlfj's Hard]

00:28:935 (1) - remove new combo

00:35:969 (4) - align with 00:35:556 (3)

[Insane]

00:05:245 (2,3) -it confuses. do the same distance as the previous sliders.

perfect map

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-08-21T19:02:02+00:00

ZLOdeuka- wrote:
Hello~

[Insane]

00:05:245 (2,3) -it confuses. do the same distance as the previous sliders. fixed~

perfect map

Thanks for modding ZLO :3/ !!~

luxoDeh

1,497 posts

Joined February 2012

luxoDeh 2013-08-22T00:34:48+00:00

Hi! mod from my queue.

EASY

00:46:314 (1,3) - what do you think of stacking them?
00:51:280 (1,1) - ^
01:14:038 (4) - try to move it at exactly the same high of 01:12:383 (2) -

UMI'S NORMAL

00:03:590 (4) - maybe leave a single note on a blue line it's not so easy to read for a normal diff... I suggesto to replace it with a slider like in this way:

SPOILER

01:04:521 (1,2) - also in this case, maybe it's better replace with a slider

JONATHANLFJ'S HARD

00:19:004 (2) - why don't you move it at y:112? just like the previous one? just to keep some symmetry
00:30:590 (3,1) - stack them perfectly
00:35:556 (3,4) - hm... I don't know if this unstacking was intentional or not

INSANE

00:07:728 - I think you should add a note here to keep the consistence
very good fiff!

Well that's all, there's nothing more to say XD I mean, this map is awesome and all the diffs are good! I think this will be ranked soon :3 (*give star)

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2013-08-22T04:18:56+00:00

dayum that was a lot of mods

Cah-m wrote:
[jonathanlfj's Hard]
I think these whistles are unnecessary. You can make more faithfulness for this song to remove these.
00:02:246 -
00:03:901 -
00:04:729 -
00:05:557 -
removed all but the 3rd one
00:36:384 (1) - I prefer if you add whistle on head.
00:39:694 (1) - ^
00:43:005 (1) - ^
00:44:660 (1) - ^
00:46:315 (1) - ^
00:47:970 (1) - ^
not really a big fan of compounding whistles and finishes unless the music really calls for it

RandomEffect wrote:
[jonathanlfj's Hard]
00:28:521 (2) - exchange start for end i prefer the more linear approach here since it flows more comfortably for me
00:35:556 (3,4) - it is better to stack correctly ok so many people have said to perfectly stack this so i guess i will do it

happy623 wrote:
jonathanlfj's Hard
00:28:935 (1) - make a small jump here? its fit imo did ctrl+g
01:23:969 (4) - try this flow? : did some minor adjustments, main reason to not make it perfectly linear is so 01:23:556 (1,2,3,4,5) can look more pleasing as a combo
SPOILER
00:56:245 (1) - nazi, move the last anchor to x180 y296 to get a better blanket that kinda ruins the symmetry there
nice hard diff again QwQ tyty

Alarido wrote:
[jonathanlfj's Hard]
jonaaaa~ o/
* Nice patterns and whistle using... but I missed the symmetry before kiai~ (so noticeable on your maps c: ) i would have used symmetry if the rhythm there wasnt so troll xD, though its still pretty "symmetric" on the y-axis even now
00:07:004 (2,3,4) - Also is possible arrange these like >>> http://puu.sh/46oEN.jpg good idea

sheela901 wrote:
[jonathanlfj's Hard]
00:20:142 (2) - Move to one grid to the up for the distance. kk
00:35:969 (4) - Stick with the head of 00:35:556 (3) ? done via previous mod

baldrace wrote:
jonathanlfj's Hard

真鬼畜的hard 不会吧我DT能无压力FC的啊

00:49:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 超鬼畜不能多说... 嘛这个玩过一次第二次就无压力了（骗pc)
00:50:866 (5,6) - 这两个和前面节奏不一样，如果你不改的话NC一下好一点 stack了一下应该更好读了

01:23:556 (1,2,3,4) - 这边是连着的吧，换成5连怎么样那样的话就真的鬼畜了，特别是在最后的一段的话

ZLOdeuka- wrote:
[jonathanlfj's Hard]

00:28:935 (1) - remove new combo ok

00:35:969 (4) - align with 00:35:556 (3) done through previous modding

luxoDeh wrote:
JONATHANLFJ'S HARD

00:19:004 (2) - why don't you move it at y:112? just like the previous one? just to keep some symmetry that would cause the jump to be pretty large which might make it unnecessarily difficult
00:30:590 (3,1) - stack them perfectly ok
00:35:556 (3,4) - hm... I don't know if this unstacking was intentional or not modded out already

Thanks for all the modding~
http://puu.sh/47OR0.zip

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-08-22T07:42:08+00:00

luxoDeh wrote:
Hi! mod from my queue.

EASY

00:46:314 (1,3) - what do you think of stacking them?
00:51:280 (1,1) - ^
01:14:038 (4) - try to move it at exactly the same high of 01:12:383 (2) -
all fixed
INSANE

00:07:728 - I think you should add a note here to keep the consistence I prefer not tho as it doesn't provide the same sound as the others~
very good fiff! Thanks

Well that's all, there's nothing more to say XD I mean, this map is awesome and all the diffs are good! I think this will be ranked soon :3 (*give star)

Thanks for the mod and star\(^.^)/!!!

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2013-08-22T21:33:30+00:00

Xinely wrote:
m4m here in game

Normal
00:02:866 (3,4) - circle in blue tick is hard for newbie imo. try http://puu.sh/46p6N.jpg instead
00:12:383 (4) - make it blanket with 00:11:556 (3) - for more neat?
00:19:004 (3) - copy paste from 00:18:176 (1) - to make blanket ~
00:28:107 (4) - NC for consistency, due you NC every stanza
00:44:659 (1) - spacing 1,28x D:
00:49:625 (1,2) - try http://puu.sh/46pjI.jpg, more follow vocal due high vocal in 00:50:452 -
01:04:521 (1,2) - merge into slider pls, circle in blue tick is hard for newbie D:
All
Fixed

sheela901 wrote:
[Umi's Normal]
01:09:073 (3) - Put a repeat to 01:09:280 that ends at 01:09:487 ? no change prefer how it's now

baldrace wrote:
I come again.

Umi's Normal

maybe you should add more hit sounds from
00:29:762 (1) - to 00:50:866 (2) - Added some hitsounds :3

00:49:625 (1) - not very good, though you follow the drum,it is the only one even repeat in this diff.
myabe follow the vocal is better or try other pattern Fixed with previous mod

01:04:831 (2) - it's 145 BPM and it's blue line but you use a note ._.,it will make newbie feel confused,change 1 and 2 to a slider is better imo ^

01:06:487 (1) - ^ Fixed

ZLOdeuka- wrote:
Hello~

[Umi's Normal]

00:03:590 (4) - new combo and 00:04:521 (1) - remove new combo and 00:04:935 (3) - new combo My NC make sense

luxoDeh wrote:
Hi! mod from my queue.

UMI'S NORMAL

00:03:590 (4) - maybe leave a single note on a blue line it's not so easy to read for a normal diff... I suggesto to replace it with a slider like in this way:
SPOILER
Fixed with previous mod
01:04:521 (1,2) - also in this case, maybe it's better replace with a slider Fixed with previous mod

Thx for mods everyone :3

diff

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Eternal Reality.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 51294
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:eternal reality (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:eternal reality (TV Size)
Artist:fripSide
ArtistUnicode:fripSide
Creator:xChippy
Version:Umi's Normal
Source:Toaru Kagaku no Railgun S
Tags:a certain scientific とある科学の超電磁砲 s -Umi- jonathanlfj Opening
BeatmapID:286760
BeatmapSetID:108719

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-08-22T22:02:26+00:00

All up to date~

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,490 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2013-08-27T13:34:08+00:00

hi ~from pm~

Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[general]
Leadin=1000 is enough，no need 1500

[insane]

00:19:418 (10) –add clap on head
00:35:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) –add whistle on the stream
00:42:590 (6) –The finish on sliderhead is no need and a little noisy imo
00:47:969 (1) –add finish on head
00:49:625 (1) –add finish on head
00:50:866 (5) –add finish
01:03:280 (2) –add whistle on it(,or you can add whistle on this stream)
01:10:314 (3,4) –I prefer the spacing is bigger than now . This shortened spacing is not interesting here 01:10:728 (4) –can be put upper than now
01:11:142 (1) –move to (256,347)
01:13:521 (5,6) –If making a jump here it will much better imo

[ jonathanlfj's Hard]

00:07:418 (3) –这个你怎么想的啊，明显ctrl+G后flow顺很多，而且这里不需要跳吧
00:08:866 (3) –加whistle和00:10:314 (2) -前后统一
00:15:280 (2) –尾whistle
00:17:142 (3) -^
00:19:004 (2) –这个头上空着音效感觉怪怪的
00:20:142 (2,5) –我觉得这两个首加whistle更好点
00:23:969 (3) –移到312,286做个正三角好看，滑条跳也不合适
00:28:935 (3) –首whistle
00:49:211 (5) –尾加clap
00:52:935 (1) –这里突然用折返然后少了个clap音听起来不舒服，用00:51:280 (1,2) –一样的试试
00:59:556 (1) –同上
01:11:762 (3) –whistle？
01:17:142 (5) –这个头加whistle比较好
01:18:383 (3) –whistle
01:19:004 (5) –首上whistle去掉啊，不和谐
01:23:038 (2) –尾上whistle
01:24:383 (5) –一根大白线NC一次这个也NC下吧

其实KIAI有些圈与圈之间间距还可以再大点，打起来不如insane带感

[ Umi's Normal]

00:03:280 (4) –whistle on the head in unsuitable imo,try using finish instead
00:04:935 (3) –remove whistle
00:09:693 (4) –I think removing this is better since you didn’t add at 00:10:935 - 00:16:314 -00:17:969 -00:19:625 –
00:19:831 (1) –here need a silence. So remove the whistle on spinner and set a lower volume
00:31:418 (1) –add whistle on tail
00:35:556 (3) –whistle on head
00:39:693 (2) –remove finish? It’s noisy imo
00:41:969 (4) –add whistle on tail
00:50:452 (3) –add whistle on head
00:51:900 (2) –whistle on head
00:52:935 (1) -^
00:53:556 (2) -^
00:55:211 (2) -^(I think more whistles can be added to KIAI at the same pattern)
00:57:073 (4) –add whistle on head
00:53:556 (2) –expend it to 00:53:969 -.The vocal doesn’t end at blue tick and there is no vocal at blue tick
00:54:590 (1) –expend it to 00:55:004 – to be consist with 00:51:280 (1) –
I suggestion you follow vocal at all these00:51:590 -00:53:245 -00:54:900 -00:58:211 -00:59:866 -01:01:521 –and so on.Otherwise you can all follow drum to add all clap and avoid making them a mess
00:59:349 (4,2,3) –These seem a little mess,try stacking 01:00:797 (3) -wite00:59:349 (4) –
01:11:142 (1) –add clap on reserve arrow
01:21:073 (1) –remove finish on the tail and add a whistle instead
01:21:900 (2) –You can add finish on this head imo
01:21:900 (2) –add whistle on tail

[easy]

00:33:900 (2,3) –why not add clap on the tail?
01:09:487 (1,2,3,4) –If making them at the center line I to equal 01:11:142 (1)’s disstance with01:10:728 (4) –and 01:09:487 (1) –it will better imo
01:22:728 (3) –add whistle on head

That’s all.Thank you for req~ good luck:D

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-08-27T15:54:41+00:00

Fycho wrote:
hi ~from pm~

Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[general]
Leadin=1000 is enough，no need 1500

[insane]

00:19:418 (10) –add clap on head fixed
00:35:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) –add whistle on the stream fixed did reduce the sound cuz it sounded a bit noisy
00:42:590 (6) –The finish on sliderhead is no need and a little noisy imo fixed
00:47:969 (1) –add finish on head fixed
00:49:625 (1) –add finish on head fixed
00:50:866 (5) –add finish fixed
01:03:280 (2) –add whistle on it(,or you can add whistle on this stream) fixed
01:10:314 (3,4) –I prefer the spacing is bigger than now . This shortened spacing is not interesting here 01:10:728 (4) –can be put upper than now Imo it's fine tho but I'll consider increasing the spacing ~.~
01:11:142 (1) –move to (256,347) fixed
01:13:521 (5,6) –If making a jump here it will much better imo fixed I think

[easy]
00:33:900 (2,3) –why not add clap on the tail? fixed
01:09:487 (1,2,3,4) –If making them at the center line I to equal 01:11:142 (1)’s disstance with01:10:728 (4) –and 01:09:487 (1) –it will better imo fixed
01:22:728 (3) –add whistle on head fixed

That’s all.Thank you for req~ good luck:D

Thanks for the mod Fycho~ :3/!!!

NewRulerNA

1,301 posts

Joined December 2010

NewRulerNA 2013-08-28T07:40:18+00:00

my bad mod here
red: Unrankable issue.
blue: may be unrankable issue.
Bold: not unrankable, but should fix it.

[General]

looks fine to me

[Easy]

why did not use hitclap on slider tick?
I think would be better to do because unable to follow if upbeats do not have circle or slider head/tail
00:34:728 (3,4,1) - these sliders follow vocal and instruments, but rhythm is mixed so may not be better.
suggestion:
00:34:728 ~ 00:35:556 - vocal
00:35:969 - instruments
00:36:383 ~ vocal
1. 00:34:728 (3) - 2/1 slider
2. 00:35:969 (4) - circle
3. 00:36:383 (1) - 1/1 slider (or 2/1 ?)
00:49:625 (1,2) - add (default) soft-finish at all notes. melody varies after 00:51:280 so would be better to add a change.
01:22:728 (3) - what does this slider end follow? vocal become weaker... if you hope to use slider, better to follow inst at slider end imo. to sum up, should be end at 01:23:969 - .

[Umi's Normal]

00:02:866 - missing clap?
00:08:866 (2) - remove. this part follow vocal, but 00:09:073 (3) - 's head does not fit vocal because vocal start in 00:08:969 - . think unable to follow vocal at this section, so suggest to follow instruments.
00:15:487 (2) - ^
00:24:383 (2,3) - fmm rhythm is fine, but a bit hard as slow part imo. suggest to exchange to 1/2 slider.
00:27:900 - why did not put any notes? such as 00:24:590 - ....
00:29:349 (2) - finish rather than whistle? because have same sound as 00:28:935 - .
00:36:383 (1) - why did you use 3/2 slider...? at least melody did not have a changing... should be like 00:39:693 (2) - .
01:15:073 (2,3,1,2,3) - would you like to have changing?
1. 01:15:280 (2) - 1/1 slider
2. 01:16:107 (1) - 1/2 slider
3. 01:16:521 (2) - ^
notice: 01:15:073 (2) - is same as 00:08:866 (2)
01:18:383 (2) - same as 00:08:866 (2)
01:20:038 (2) - ^
01:21:073 (1,2) - this rhythm is really odd imo because 01:11:142 ~ 01:20:866 - did not follow vocal (or simplify). btw this include case you did not change some my suggestions.

you can made simple such as above.

[jonathanlfj's Hard]

00:22:211 - put any note here? you can hear instruments like 00:21:797 - 00:22:418 - . it is bit small but not makes sense to ignore its sound imo.
00:49:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - melody varies greatly after this section, so would be better to more harder imo.

like this

[Insane]

01:23:556 (5) - why did you set end at 01:24:245 - ? I think end at 01:24:314.

just one

mod time: 2.5 hours

good luck ^^

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-08-28T15:07:06+00:00

NewRulerNA wrote:
my bad mod here
red: Unrankable issue.
blue: may be unrankable issue.
Bold: not unrankable, but should fix it.

[General]
looks fine to me
[Easy]
why did not use hitclap on slider tick?
I think would be better to do because unable to follow if upbeats do not have circle or slider head/tail
00:34:728 (3,4,1) - these sliders follow vocal and instruments, but rhythm is mixed so may not be better.
suggestion:
00:34:728 ~ 00:35:556 - vocal
00:35:969 - instruments
00:36:383 ~ vocal

00:34:728 (3) - 2/1 slider
00:35:969 (4) - circle
00:36:383 (1) - 1/1 slider (or 2/1 ?)
00:49:625 (1,2) - add (default) soft-finish at all notes. melody varies after 00:51:280 so would be better to add a change.
01:22:728 (3) - what does this slider end follow? vocal become weaker... if you hope to use slider, better to follow inst at slider end imo. to sum up, should be end at 01:23:969 - .
all fixed
[Insane]
01:23:556 (5) - why did you set end at 01:24:245 - ? I think end at 01:24:314. fixed~
just one

mod time: 2.5 hours

good luck ^^

Thanks for the mod NewRulerNA :3/~~!!!

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,573 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-09-03T16:07:02+00:00

From my queue of normal mod

[General]
I'm not good at modding hitsounds so... according to other modders

[Easy]
01:19:418 (3,4,1) - A little harder to play
01:22:728 (3) - move to (132,136)

[Umi's Normal]
00:02:866 (3) - clap?

[jonathanlfj's Hard]
Looks fine.

[Insane]
Awesome!
I think that……
From 00:36:383 - to 00:42:590 - the vocal is lower and you can use 0.8x
01:09:487 (1,2) - ctrl+h→ctrl+g，makes a harder jump

Uh,that's all,I'm a new modder and I hope that it will help you.
I like fripSide's song,and I will play it if it gets ranked.
Good luck with your song

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-09-04T14:09:21+00:00

mtbbsben wrote:
From my queue of normal mod

[General]
I'm not good at modding hitsounds so... according to other modders

[Easy]
01:19:418 (3,4,1) - A little harder to play huh o-o?
01:22:728 (3) - move to (132,136) fixed

[Insane]
Awesome!
I think that……
From 00:36:383 - to 00:42:590 - the vocal is lower and you can use 0.8x nope imo it should be higher instead but no change
01:09:487 (1,2) - ctrl+h→ctrl+g，makes a harder jump don't want it to hard

Uh,that's all,I'm a new modder and I hope that it will help you.
I like fripSide's song,and I will play it if it gets ranked.
Good luck with your song

Thanks for the mod~ :3!!

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,573 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-09-04T16:01:05+00:00

xChippy wrote:
Thanks for the mod~ :3!!

one more

forget to star~

shoot——————————————————→ ★

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-09-06T15:28:50+00:00

Thanks for the star <3 :3/!

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2013-09-06T20:10:06+00:00

thx for mod fixed a lot :3 so lazy to reply >.<

diff

osu file format v12

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AudioFilename: Eternal Reality.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 51294
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:eternal reality (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:eternal reality (TV Size)
Artist:fripSide
ArtistUnicode:fripSide
Creator:xChippy
Version:Umi's Normal
Source:Toaru Kagaku no Railgun S
Tags:a certain scientific とある科学の超電磁砲 s -Umi- jonathanlfj Opening
BeatmapID:286760
BeatmapSetID:108719

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2013-09-07T07:21:13+00:00

mod replies

Fycho wrote:
[ jonathanlfj's Hard]

00:07:418 (3) –这个你怎么想的啊，明显ctrl+G后flow顺很多，而且这里不需要跳吧也对
00:08:866 (3) –加whistle和00:10:314 (2) -前后统一好，下面的也加了
00:15:280 (2) –尾whistle
00:17:142 (3) -^
00:19:004 (2) –这个头上空着音效感觉怪怪的加clap
00:20:142 (2,5) –我觉得这两个首加whistle更好点不错
00:23:969 (3) –移到312,286做个正三角好看，滑条跳也不合适比较喜欢这种跳，而且vocal下的也是重音
00:28:935 (3) –首whistle 我一般whistle跟finish不一起用的（影响taiko）
00:49:211 (5) –尾加clap 好
00:52:935 (1) –这里突然用折返然后少了个clap音听起来不舒服，用00:51:280 (1,2) –一样的试试这是为了多一点花样
00:59:556 (1) –同上 ^
01:11:762 (3) –whistle？这个和下面的都加了
01:17:142 (5) –这个头加whistle比较好
01:18:383 (3) –whistle
01:19:004 (5) –首上whistle去掉啊，不和谐这里音乐有很响的高音所以我加了
01:23:038 (2) –尾上whistle
01:24:383 (5) –一根大白线NC一次这个也NC下吧这个主要是为了好看，跟01:23:556 (1,2,3,4,5) 形成一个combo
其实KIAI有些圈与圈之间间距还可以再大点，打起来不如insane带感嘛上dt的时候会简单一些

NewRulerNA wrote:
[jonathanlfj's Hard]
00:22:211 - put any note here? you can hear instruments like 00:21:797 - 00:22:418 - . it is bit small but not makes sense to ignore its sound imo. that will kinda overthrow difficulty since i didnt use anything beyond triplets, and this is a quiet section too
00:49:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - melody varies greatly after this section, so would be better to more harder imo. honestly this is a good idea, but i cant think of a way to make the sliders play well here without breaking spacing big time, which i think will be too hard for this diff; prefer to keep this as-is

like this

Thanks for modding!
http://puu.sh/4l5sd.zip

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-09-07T07:49:21+00:00

Updated~

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2013-09-13T13:30:42+00:00

~General~

Title is incorrect, please change it to "eternal reality - TV size -".
It would be nice if you make the kiai time and colours the same on all the difficulties.
Disable the Widescreen support on all the difficulties since you're not really using a storyboard.

~Easy~

00:20:038 (1) - Add a whistle at the end of this spinner, it sounds pretty nice.

~Umi's Normal~

00:04:521 (1,2,3) - Stacking all of these circles together isn't a good idea for a Normal imo, I'd space them like the rest of the difficulty.
00:24:383 (2,3,1) - Same as above for the same reason.
00:46:314 (1,2) - Spacing is too large here, please fix it properly.
00:52:521 (3,4,1) - Stacking all of these circles together isn't a good idea for a Normal imo, I'd space them like the rest of the difficulty.
00:54:176 (3,4,1) - Same as above for the same reason.
01:12:383 (2,3,1) - You know what I'm going to say about this again, I guess.

~jonathanlfj's Hard~

01:24:487 (1) - I think it would be better if you end this spinner at 01:26:866 like the other difficulties.

~Insane~

00:21:590 - I'd add a spinner here and make it end at 00:22:728 with a clap hitsound on it.
00:33:487 - It really feels like you're missing a circle here. If you're going to add it, make sure to also add a clap on it.
01:15:073 (4,5) - This small jump feels random if you ask me, I'd suggest you to space these normally instead.

Well done! Feel free to call me back once everything is ready.

Oyatsu

1,908 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2013-09-13T13:33:39+00:00

o3o. Go! Go!

There was ChouCho some day ago lol

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2013-09-13T13:59:08+00:00

Andrea wrote:
~Umi's Normal~
00:04:521 (1,2,3) - Stacking all of these circles together isn't a good idea for a Normal imo, I'd space them like the rest of the difficulty.
00:24:383 (2,3,1) - Same as above for the same reason.
00:46:314 (1,2) - Spacing is too large here, please fix it properly.
00:52:521 (3,4,1) - Stacking all of these circles together isn't a good idea for a Normal imo, I'd space them like the rest of the difficulty.
00:54:176 (3,4,1) - Same as above for the same reason.
01:12:383 (2,3,1) - You know what I'm going to say about this again, I guess.
Fixed all excepted 00:52:521 (3,4,1) - and 00:54:176 (3,4,1) - during the kiai time.

thx for mod o/

diff

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 51294
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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TitleUnicode:eternal reality (TV Size)
Artist:fripSide
ArtistUnicode:fripSide
Creator:xChippy
Version:Umi's Normal
Source:Toaru Kagaku no Railgun S
Tags:a certain scientific とある科学の超電磁砲 s -Umi- jonathanlfj Opening
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xChippy

1,941 posts

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Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-09-13T14:30:11+00:00

Andrea wrote:
~General~
Title is incorrect, please change it to "eternal reality - TV size -". fixed
It would be nice if you make the kiai time and colours the same on all the difficulties. Fixed the colours but yea the kia time doesn't have to be the same in GD's right o-o, they already mentioned it in previous mods =w=/
Disable the Widescreen support on all the difficulties since you're not really using a storyboard.fixed
~Easy~
00:20:038 (1) - Add a whistle at the end of this spinner, it sounds pretty nice.fixed
~jonathanlfj's Hard~
01:24:487 (1) - I think it would be better if you end this spinner at 01:26:866 like the other difficulties. actually I changed my diff to end at the same time as in jonathan's diff as the music stops there :3
~Insane~
00:21:590 - I'd add a spinner here and make it end at 00:22:728 with a clap hitsound on it.
00:33:487 - It really feels like you're missing a circle here. If you're going to add it, make sure to also add a clap on it.
01:15:073 (4,5) - This small jump feels random if you ask me, I'd suggest you to space these normally instead. fixed all
Well done! Feel free to call me back once everything is ready.

Thanks for the mod Andrea~ :3/!!!

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

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Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2013-09-14T02:40:43+00:00

@xChippy feel free to change the spinner end for me and adjust difficulty settings and stuff

and for kiai time i would prefer to keep my settings but if necessary change that as well

xChippy

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Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-09-14T13:39:15+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
@xChippy feel free to change the spinner end for me and adjust difficulty settings and stuff

and for kiai time i would prefer to keep my settings but if necessary change that as well

Well I changed my spinners instead should be fine as I listened to it =w= yea and fixed the widescreen etc kia should be fine I guess o-o

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-09-15T00:33:33+00:00

Is this ready for my recheck now then?

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2013-09-15T06:05:26+00:00

( =`･ω･´) Rakuen 楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

Nothing much to mod, it's nice map

[Easy]
01:20:659 (4) - Arrange it to make it like 01:21:073 (1,2,3) -

xChippy

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xChippy 2013-09-15T07:00:59+00:00

Rakuen wrote:
( =`･ω･´) Rakuen 楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

Nothing much to mod, it's nice map

[Easy]
01:20:659 (4) - Arrange it to make it like 01:21:073 (1,2,3) -fixed

Thanks for modding Rakuen :3/!!

Andrea wrote:
Is this ready for my recheck now then?

Yep it is :3!

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-09-15T13:10:19+00:00

Looks much better now to me (:

Bubbled~

xChippy

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xChippy 2013-09-15T13:14:21+00:00

Thank you Andrea :3!!!

Kodora

Kodora 2013-09-15T13:45:15+00:00

D: Eh, ninja'd by Andrea, feel free to ignore if its not needed~

From LKs queue~

[Insane]

All just some hitsounds suggestions:

00:21:590 (1) - There is no any extra sound in music, just remove this clap
00:31:418 (1) - add whistle to the beginning of slider for consistency?
00:35:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This whistlespam sounds odd. If you want to emphazire your stream here i'd suggest you just use normal sampleset with redused volume instead
00:46:314 (1) - add finish to the beginning of slider to emphazire vocals here?
00:50:866 (5,6) - Probably same, claps sounds here not that good. Replace with normal-sampleset instead.
00:59:556 (1) - add finish to the beginning of slider to emphazire vocals here?
01:02:452 (6) - maybe add whistle to emphazire vocals?
01:03:280 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - I's suggest you use normal-sampleset with redused volume at this stream too
01:10:314 (3) - NC follow pattern?
01:16:521 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same as at 01:03:280
01:20:866 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:24:487 (1) - Since there in so music at all at the end of spinner you can add blank hitnormal & silence it, or add finish instead
[jonathanlfj's Hard]

*I'd suggest you raise AR and OD by 1 tick to have settings more balanced

00:04:521 (2,1) - Swap NC's follow music?
00:06:590 (1,2) - Please use more huge spacing between those notes to make it looks better
00:15:280 (2,3) - ^
00:19:831 (1,2) - ^
00:40:521 (3,4) - ^
00:49:625 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is very counter-intuitive. Please make spacing consistent here.
00:56:245 (1) - Add whistle to reverse?
00:57:900 (1) - Whistle to the beginning of slider?
00:59:556 (1) - Whistle to the reverse & end of slider to emphazire vocals?
01:01:211 (1,2) - More huge spacing, please
01:07:831 (1,2) - ^
01:13:211 (2,3) - ^
01:19:831 (2,3) - ^
01:24:487 (1) - Same as at Insane
[Umi's Normal]

00:04:521 (1,2) - I'd suggest you change this to slider to make it more friendly for beginners
00:15:693 (3,1) - This overlap doesnt really looks pretty
00:19:831 (1) - Remove this whistle, there is anything to emphazire at music
00:29:349 (2) - Replace whistle with finish please
00:38:866 (1) - add whistles to the beginning & end of sliders to emphazire vocals here
00:40:521 (1) - Add whistle to the beginning of slider
[Easy]

00:20:038 (1) - Remove this whistle, there is anything to emphazire at music
00:23:142 (1) - add whistle to the beginning of slider to emphazire vocals here?
00:51:280 (1) - ^
01:24:383 (1) - Same as at Insane

Nice map!

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-09-15T14:00:00+00:00

Feel free to check Kodora's mod and if you apply something let me know, I'll rebubble this in case.

Never ignore mods, they can be helpful at any time.

Oyatsu

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Oyatsu 2013-09-15T14:25:30+00:00

Go! Go!

xChippy

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xChippy 2013-09-15T14:32:47+00:00

Kodora wrote:
D: Eh, ninja'd by Andrea, feel free to ignore if its not needed~ Errr.. ofcourse i won't ignore it you took the time to mod it and yea don't want to waste that also it can help me improve my map :3

From LKs queue~

[Insane]

All just some hitsounds suggestions:

00:21:590 (1) - There is no any extra sound in music, just remove this clap listen closely there is :O
00:31:418 (1) - add whistle to the beginning of slider for consistency? The whistle are mapped on that bass(?) idk what instrument it is, so I prefer not to add it at places where it isn't ><
00:35:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This whistlespam sounds odd. If you want to emphazire your stream here i'd suggest you just use normal sampleset with redused volume instead removed the whistle spam instead
00:46:314 (1) - add finish to the beginning of slider to emphazire vocals here? added~
00:50:866 (5,6) - Probably same, claps sounds here not that good. Replace with normal-sampleset instead. fixed
00:59:556 (1) - add finish to the beginning of slider to emphazire vocals here? nope there is no finish sound so whistle is enough
01:02:452 (6) - maybe add whistle to emphazire vocals? I prefer the consisntecy i have atm ><
01:03:280 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - I's suggest you use normal-sampleset with redused volume at this stream too sounds a bit weird to me ><
01:10:314 (3) - NC follow pattern? Nope it will break NC consistency
01:16:521 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same as at 01:03:280 Same as above
01:20:866 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
01:24:487 (1) - Since there in so music at all at the end of spinner you can add blank hitnormal & silence it, or add finish instead actually idk what you mean ><, but like this it sounds fine tho o-o
[Easy]

00:20:038 (1) - Remove this whistle, there is anything to emphazire at music fixed
00:23:142 (1) - add whistle to the beginning of slider to emphazire vocals here? idk but it just sounds weird imo the finish there is enough also since the whistles are mapped on the bass(?)
00:51:280 (1) - ^ ^ imo it just doesn't fit ><
01:24:383 (1) - Same as at Insane Same as in Insane srry OAO
Nice map!

Last edited by xChippy 2013-09-15T14:43:21+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Umi

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Umi 2013-09-15T14:35:47+00:00

Kodora wrote:
D: Eh, ninja'd by Andrea, feel free to ignore if its not needed~

[Umi's Normal]

00:04:521 (1,2) - I'd suggest you change this to slider to make it more friendly for beginners Fixed
00:15:693 (3,1) - This overlap doesnt really looks pretty it's ok for me
00:19:831 (1) - Remove this whistle, there is anything to emphazire at music Fixed
00:29:349 (2) - Replace whistle with finish please Fixed
00:38:866 (1) - add whistles to the beginning & end of sliders to emphazire vocals here Fixed
00:40:521 (1) - Add whistle to the beginning of slider Fixed

thx for mod kodora :3

diff

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xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-09-15T14:38:17+00:00

Updated Umi and my diffs :3 now w8 for jonathan~ :3

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2013-09-15T23:39:51+00:00

Kodora wrote:
[jonathanlfj's Hard]

*I'd suggest you raise AR and OD by 1 tick to have settings more balanced i prefer the current difficulty setup since it is quite standard for a hard of this bpm

00:04:521 (2,1) - Swap NC's follow music? ok
00:06:590 (1,2) - Please use more huge spacing between those notes to make it looks better i am intentionally lowering spacing here so the 1/4s will be easier to hit (especially on DT)
00:15:280 (2,3) - ^
00:19:831 (1,2) - ^
00:40:521 (3,4) - ^
00:49:625 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is very counter-intuitive. Please make spacing consistent here. changed to zig zag flow
00:56:245 (1) - Add whistle to reverse? sounds a bit extra here, since the whistle in the music plays at the red line
00:57:900 (1) - Whistle to the beginning of slider? sure
00:59:556 (1) - Whistle to the reverse & end of slider to emphazire vocals? added at the end, not a fan of using whistles on blue ticks
01:01:211 (1,2) - More huge spacing, please same as what i've mentioned at 00:06:590 (1,2)
01:07:831 (1,2) - ^
01:13:211 (2,3) - ^
01:19:831 (2,3) - ^
01:24:487 (1) - Same as at Insane im pretty sure there are some rankability debates about silent hitnormals, i'd rather stick to the 5% volume to be safe on this

Thanks for the mod!
http://puu.sh/4sozh.zip

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-09-16T04:53:12+00:00

All updated~ now w8 for Andrea :3/

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2013-09-16T15:40:23+00:00

Okay, I'm glad to see you fixed stuff from Kodora's mod as well. Let's get this rolling again!

Re-Bubbled~

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-09-16T15:46:20+00:00

Thanks Andrea \(>w<)/

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2013-09-21T07:19:40+00:00

Cool!

Hope it can be ranked soon

Oyatsu

1,908 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2013-10-02T15:53:39+00:00

Who BAT rank this plz!! or I will rank it. lol

888th post, yea!!

SPOILER

FireFoxZX

205 posts

Joined April 2013

FireFoxZX 2013-10-08T17:32:54+00:00

YAY this beatmap turned out nicely

WOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOO

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2013-10-13T09:57:11+00:00

Wow nobody checked this bubble yet? This is sad.

Garven

osu! Alumni

5,857 posts

Joined January 2010

Garven 2013-10-13T18:42:57+00:00

Andrea is sad because this set isn't set to tick rate 2.

[Easy]
Should raise the volume a bit. It's pretty quiet...
01:07:831 (3) - New combo
01:09:487 (1) - Remove new combo

[Normal]
This would look a lot better with circle size -1
00:52:521 (3,4,1) - Move these down and right 2 grids.
01:05:142 (2,3,4,5) - Rather boring with no hitsounds

[Hard]
00:06:590 (3,4) - What rhythm is this? :/
00:37:211 (3,4) - ^
00:40:521 (3,4) - Gah, now they're suddenly everywhere. At least during the intro most of them actually fit the song. Now they're just kind of there to be wrong or something.
00:28:935 (3) - I think this would have more impact as circles instead of a slider

[Insane]
These hitsounds are way too quiet. Raise the volume overall a bit.
00:21:280 (1) - Why the slowdown? There's nothing here in the music to really indicate that kind of drastic velocity change.
00:23:142 (1) - This section is kind of a mess spacing-wise. You switch between 1.5 and 1.2 all over the place with pretty much zero consistency.
01:14:866 (3,4,5) - Suddenly tiny spacing. Move that out a bit.

Hard's use of bad rhythms was kind of annoying considering the general difficulty level of it. Insane and easy were way too quiet and the Insane needs to normalize spacing so that it's at least consistent with itself.

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2013-10-13T19:12:46+00:00

Garven wrote:
[Normal]
This would look a lot better with circle size -1 Ok changed into CS 4
00:52:521 (3,4,1) - Move these down and right 2 grids. Fixed more or less with the DS
01:05:142 (2,3,4,5) - Rather boring with no hitsounds Add clap on (3) and whistle (2) and (5)

thx for mod

diff

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 51294
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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BeatDivisor: 4
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Title:eternal reality - TV size -
TitleUnicode:eternal reality - TV size -
Artist:fripSide
ArtistUnicode:fripSide
Creator:xChippy
Version:Umi's Normal
Source:Toaru Kagaku no Railgun S
Tags:a certain scientific とある科学の超電磁砲 s -Umi- jonathanlfj Opening
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326,148,38866,6,0,P|338:110|306:54,2,90,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,210,39693,2,0,P|274:246|286:322,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,277,40521,6,0,P|177:213|163:171,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,95,41142,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,95,41349,2,0,P|240:71|276:95,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,99,41969,2,0,P|373:103|406:92,1,60
328,220,42590,1,12,0:0:0:0:
328,220,43004,6,0,P|272:232|228:212,2,90,6|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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484,224,44659,6,0,B|472:156|472:156|424:124,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,108,45280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,168,45487,2,0,B|311:210|311:210|243:222,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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168,223,47142,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,223,47556,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,92,47969,6,0,P|220:72|172:96,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,152,48590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,152,48797,2,0,L|144:280,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,315,49418,1,0,0:0:0:0:
253,292,49625,6,0,P|305:260|365:260,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,221,50245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,156,50452,2,0,P|385:114|370:57,1,120
240,68,51280,6,0,B|192:56|192:56|176:84|112:96,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,128,51900,2,0,P|52:172|80:248,1,120
126,269,52521,1,8,0:0:0:0:
126,269,52728,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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277,301,53556,2,0,P|302:255|300:206,1,90
304,120,54176,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,120,54383,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,120,54590,6,0,P|344:88|408:96,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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312,296,55831,2,0,L|176:272,2,120,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,184,57073,2,0,L|268:132,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,72,57900,6,0,B|140:116|140:116|92:124|80:172,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,224,58521,2,0,P|118:253|192:252,1,120
252,228,59142,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,176,59349,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,124,59556,6,0,P|416:112|436:124,1,90
448,212,60176,2,0,P|412:232|324:212,1,120
312,160,60797,2,0,P|264:156|236:172,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,220,61211,6,0,P|156:230|120:210,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,172,61831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,92,62245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,92,62452,2,0,B|216:64|216:64|296:64,2,120,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,224,63693,2,0,B|216:252|216:252|296:252,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,184,64521,6,0,L|464:252,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,324,65142,2,0,P|336:340|268:316,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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305,187,66176,2,0,P|355:196|402:177,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,97,66797,2,0,P|284:90|230:120,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,176,67418,2,0,L|133:152,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,144,67831,6,0,P|47:186|52:248,2,90,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,80,68866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,80,69073,2,0,P|240:68|316:88,1,120,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,212,69900,2,0,P|238:222|178:210,2,120,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,140,71142,6,0,B|420:80|420:80|440:64|496:64,2,120,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,256,72383,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,256,72797,6,0,B|320:316|320:316|300:332|244:332,2,120,6|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,204,73831,2,0,L|252:156,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,112,74245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,112,74452,6,0,P|160:144|100:144,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,196,75073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,244,75280,2,0,P|164:244|212:276,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,300,75900,6,0,L|344:280,1,60,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,224,76314,2,0,L|376:204,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,152,76728,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,100,76935,2,0,L|220:72,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,112,77762,6,0,P|84:144|72:228,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,260,78383,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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452,204,80038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,256,80245,2,0,B|381:265|377:313|377:313|330:325,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,304,80866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,260,81073,6,0,P|168:232|124:236,2,90,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Garven

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Garven 2013-10-13T19:38:55+00:00

Er sorry, I meant CS 4 on the normal.

Umi

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Umi 2013-10-13T19:45:56+00:00

oh okay, well i agree now, i edited my previous post

xChippy

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xChippy 2013-10-13T20:17:22+00:00

Orz my computer is having some problems.. Trying to fix this ASAP , but might take a while as it seems to be serious plus I need to study for exams so have to find some time to fix the computer

btw I'm on my phone atm

jonathanlfj

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jonathanlfj 2013-10-14T01:50:27+00:00

Garven wrote:
[Hard]
00:06:590 (3,4) - What rhythm is this? :/ if you listen carefully there is a synth playing at 00:06:590, and immediately the vocals start at 00:07:004; this is the best setup i can think to cover both sounds
00:37:211 (3,4) - ^ this is similar, except in reverse
00:40:521 (3,4) - Gah, now they're suddenly everywhere. At least during the intro most of them actually fit the song. Now they're just kind of there to be wrong or something. my rational is the same for all these; covering both the instrumentals and vocals. If you disagree with me i dont mind changing them, but this is just what i think represents the music best
00:28:935 (3) - I think this would have more impact as circles instead of a slider sure

I will post my update once Garven replies about the issues on the 3/4 sliders ><

Garven

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Garven 2013-10-14T09:36:12+00:00

jonathan:

It's your choice on the rhythms - I simply find them distasteful against the main crux of the music at that point and compared to your primary focus with the mapping overall in the map. If you don't want to change them, it's fine.

xChip:

Take your time - this entire week is going to be hell for me, so I might not be able to do a full recheck until the weekend anyway.

xChippy

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xChippy 2013-10-19T19:54:40+00:00

Orz finally fixed my computer @.@ (OMG Hard disk is broken T_T)

Garven wrote:
[Easy]
Should raise the volume a bit. It's pretty quiet... Raised the volume
01:07:831 (3) - New combo fixed
01:09:487 (1) - Remove new combo fixed

[Insane]
These hitsounds are way too quiet. Raise the volume overall a bit. Also raised it a bit
00:21:280 (1) - Why the slowdown? There's nothing here in the music to really indicate that kind of drastic velocity change. I thought it played better, anyways fixed~~
00:23:142 (1) - This section is kind of a mess spacing-wise. You switch between 1.5 and 1.2 all over the place with pretty much zero consistency. Snapped the section to 1.2
01:14:866 (3,4,5) - Suddenly tiny spacing. Move that out a bit. fixed

Hard's use of bad rhythms was kind of annoying considering the general difficulty level of it. Insane and easy were way too quiet and the Insane needs to normalize spacing so that it's at least consistent with itself.

Thanks for modding Garven~~ :3/
Updated my diffs/Umi's w8ing for jonathan's update :3/

jonathanlfj

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jonathanlfj 2013-10-20T00:22:37+00:00

looks like u finxed ur computer chippy

@Garven: Thanks for understanding my point of view. here is the update: http://puu.sh/4UjCF.zip

xChippy

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xChippy 2013-10-20T09:25:14+00:00

Aight~~ All updated :3/

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Garven 2013-10-23T02:18:06+00:00

[Insane]
Let's clean up some of the remaining spacing at the end of this
01:16:314 (3,1) -
01:18:590 (5,6) -
01:19:625 (2,3) -
01:21:487 (3,4) -
There are others between these too, but these are the biggest offenders. Try to make it more uniform and more obvious when you're using jumps. It's still all over the place here.

xChippy

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xChippy 2013-10-23T07:27:18+00:00

Garven wrote:
[Insane]
Let's clean up some of the remaining spacing at the end of this
01:16:314 (3,1) -
01:18:590 (5,6) -
01:19:625 (2,3) -
01:21:487 (3,4) -
fixed all
There are others between these too, but these are the biggest offenders. Try to make it more uniform and more obvious when you're using jumps. It's still all over the place here.

Yea... I'll do my best to improve my jumps in the future :3 I've always been bad in Jumps/patterns @.@
Thanks Garven!! :3/

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Garven 2013-10-23T13:20:03+00:00

Much better.

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Secretpipe 2013-10-23T14:28:19+00:00

Yeah ! Bubble !

xChippy

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xChippy 2013-10-23T14:54:28+00:00

Thx for rebubble Garven :3/

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Giralda 2013-11-01T11:27:33+00:00

Gogogo!

xChippy

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xChippy 2013-11-01T15:20:06+00:00

Thx for the support :3/! But I'm kinda starting to doubt whether this will be ranked....

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Oyatsu 2013-11-03T00:39:30+00:00

Oh, xChippy-chan. Don't give up!! I support you

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Momochikun 2013-11-03T11:20:42+00:00

xChippy wrote:
Thx for the support :3/! But I'm kinda starting to doubt whether this will be ranked....

Soon..

grumd

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grumd 2013-11-03T11:22:35+00:00

Hi.

— Insane

00:02:245 (3) - The biggest problem about these sliders is that the distance between (3) and (4) is the same as the distance between (3) and (2). I'll refer to basic osu! standard guideline "Beat placement should follow the time-distance equality rule". So, to be sure nobody misunderstands your rhythm, nobody thinks that (4) is another 1/4, either make (2) and (3) closer (http://puu.sh/57qv7.jpg) or (3) and (4) farther (http://puu.sh/57qx7.jpg)
00:03:900 (3,4) - Same here.
00:05:969 (4) - Same here.
00:07:831 (6) - Same here, even though it doesn't seem to be too close, still the heads of sliders are close enough. You should separate 1/4 combo (00:06:590 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) from 1/2 combo (00:07:831 (6,1) - ). Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1077406
00:43:314 (2,3) - This is a quite bad rhythm. You're not used to play offbeat 1/4 sliders. Here they both start at blue tick, which is not that hard as white and red. 00:43:418 - for example, at this point, at the white tick, sounds a bass sound, which should have been emphasized, but it is placed on a slider end, when player doesn't hit a button. In this case, you can try these rhythms instead: http://puu.sh/57qPe.jpg http://puu.sh/57qQa.jpg http://puu.sh/57qQz.jpg
00:44:969 (2,3) - Same
00:51:280 - I really doubt that this speedup is needed here. I don't think the song gets 1.5 times faster or harder in kiai, it barely gets a 10% increase in tensity. I'd not make it 1.5x, but 1.2x at maximum.
01:04:004 - This is again a blue-tick problem. You start a stream from an offbeat note, so it's quite hard to understand when to start presing buttons after the repeating slider. This should look much better: http://puu.sh/57r17.jpg
01:11:142 - This slowdown looks even worse than the speedup. It feels that you just have set the kiai end artificially, since almost nothing changes in the song itself. But you make a huge difference in the SV. If you want to keep the speedup, let it last until 01:24:487 - , same for kiai time.
01:17:245 (1) - Same blue tick stuff here as at 01:11:142 -

— Hard

00:18:176 (1) - This should be placed closer to the previous slider maybe? http://puu.sh/57s2m.jpg Idk, this is the only jump that didn't feel good for me.

— Normal

00:49:625 - Maybe follow synth instead of vocals here? It has more interesting rhythm: http://puu.sh/57sdh.jpg

Easy is good, no problems there :3

xChippy

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xChippy 2013-11-03T13:32:19+00:00

grumd wrote:
Hi.

— Insane

00:02:245 (3) - The biggest problem about these sliders is that the distance between (3) and (4) is the same as the distance between (3) and (2). I'll refer to basic osu! standard guideline "Beat placement should follow the time-distance equality rule". So, to be sure nobody misunderstands your rhythm, nobody thinks that (4) is another 1/4, either make (2) and (3) closer (http://puu.sh/57qv7.jpg) or (3) and (4) farther (http://puu.sh/57qx7.jpg)
00:03:900 (3,4) - Same here.
00:05:969 (4) - Same here.
00:07:831 (6) - Same here, even though it doesn't seem to be too close, still the heads of sliders are close enough. You should separate 1/4 combo (00:06:590 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) from 1/2 combo (00:07:831 (6,1) - ). Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1077406
00:43:314 (2,3) - This is a quite bad rhythm. You're not used to play offbeat 1/4 sliders. Here they both start at blue tick, which is not that hard as white and red. 00:43:418 - for example, at this point, at the white tick, sounds a bass sound, which should have been emphasized, but it is placed on a slider end, when player doesn't hit a button. In this case, you can try these rhythms instead: http://puu.sh/57qPe.jpg http://puu.sh/57qQa.jpg http://puu.sh/57qQz.jpg
00:44:969 (2,3) - Same
00:51:280 - I really doubt that this speedup is needed here. I don't think the song gets 1.5 times faster or harder in kiai, it barely gets a 10% increase in tensity. I'd not make it 1.5x, but 1.2x at maximum.
01:04:004 - This is again a blue-tick problem. You start a stream from an offbeat note, so it's quite hard to understand when to start presing buttons after the repeating slider. This should look much better: http://puu.sh/57r17.jpg
01:11:142 - This slowdown looks even worse than the speedup. It feels that you just have set the kiai end artificially, since almost nothing changes in the song itself. But you make a huge difference in the SV. If you want to keep the speedup, let it last until 01:24:487 - , same for kiai time.
01:17:245 (1) - Same blue tick stuff here as at 01:11:142 -
Everything should be fixed But I'm not sure whether I applied it correctly. But I think it was correctly Changed kia time to 1.20x
Easy is good, no problems there :3

Thanks for modding grumd :3/!!!

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Stefan 2013-11-03T13:33:36+00:00

xChippy wrote:
Thx for the support :3/! But I'm kinda starting to doubt whether this will be ranked....

>3 months ago

I see no problems there. That's not a long time.

Umi

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Umi 2013-11-03T15:42:07+00:00

grumd wrote:
Hi.

— Normal

00:49:625 - Maybe follow synth instead of vocals here? It has more interesting rhythm: http://puu.sh/57sdh.jpg it was already like this before, but i changed my mind and preferred not use blue tick here, so no change

thx for mod anyways :3

jonathanlfj

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jonathanlfj 2013-11-04T00:41:53+00:00

fixed what grumd said.
http://puu.sh/586TR.zip
get this rolling chippy~

xChippy

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xChippy 2013-11-04T06:17:50+00:00

All updated~~

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grumd 2013-11-06T10:20:48+00:00

Sorry for the delay, here's the ~~recheck.~~ rebubble.

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Oyatsu 2013-11-06T12:05:02+00:00

oh God. This is #3 bubbled. Don't give down. xChippy

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Umi 2013-11-06T13:29:00+00:00

Lol ?

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xChippy 2013-11-06T15:50:15+00:00

Thx for rebubble grumd *w*

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