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Rakuen
( =`・ω・´) Rakuen 楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

Nothing much to mod, it's nice map :)

[Easy]
01:20:659 (4) - Arrange it to make it like 01:21:073 (1,2,3) -
Topic Starter
xChippy

Rakuen wrote:

( =`・ω・´) Rakuen 楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

Nothing much to mod, it's nice map :)

[Easy]
01:20:659 (4) - Arrange it to make it like 01:21:073 (1,2,3) -fixed
Thanks for modding Rakuen :3/!!

Andrea wrote:

Is this ready for my recheck now then? :P
Yep it is :3!
Andrea
Looks much better now to me (:

Bubbled~
Topic Starter
xChippy
Thank you Andrea :3!!!
Kodora
D: Eh, ninja'd by Andrea, feel free to ignore if its not needed~

From LKs queue~

[Insane]

All just some hitsounds suggestions:

  1. 00:21:590 (1) - There is no any extra sound in music, just remove this clap
  2. 00:31:418 (1) - add whistle to the beginning of slider for consistency?
  3. 00:35:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This whistlespam sounds odd. If you want to emphazire your stream here i'd suggest you just use normal sampleset with redused volume instead
  4. 00:46:314 (1) - add finish to the beginning of slider to emphazire vocals here?
  5. 00:50:866 (5,6) - Probably same, claps sounds here not that good. Replace with normal-sampleset instead.
  6. 00:59:556 (1) - add finish to the beginning of slider to emphazire vocals here?
  7. 01:02:452 (6) - maybe add whistle to emphazire vocals?
  8. 01:03:280 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - I's suggest you use normal-sampleset with redused volume at this stream too
  9. 01:10:314 (3) - NC follow pattern?
  10. 01:16:521 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same as at 01:03:280
  11. 01:20:866 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  12. 01:24:487 (1) - Since there in so music at all at the end of spinner you can add blank hitnormal & silence it, or add finish instead
[jonathanlfj's Hard]

*I'd suggest you raise AR and OD by 1 tick to have settings more balanced

  1. 00:04:521 (2,1) - Swap NC's follow music?
  2. 00:06:590 (1,2) - Please use more huge spacing between those notes to make it looks better
  3. 00:15:280 (2,3) - ^
  4. 00:19:831 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:40:521 (3,4) - ^
  6. 00:49:625 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is very counter-intuitive. Please make spacing consistent here.
  7. 00:56:245 (1) - Add whistle to reverse?
  8. 00:57:900 (1) - Whistle to the beginning of slider?
  9. 00:59:556 (1) - Whistle to the reverse & end of slider to emphazire vocals?
  10. 01:01:211 (1,2) - More huge spacing, please
  11. 01:07:831 (1,2) - ^
  12. 01:13:211 (2,3) - ^
  13. 01:19:831 (2,3) - ^
  14. 01:24:487 (1) - Same as at Insane
[Umi's Normal]

  1. 00:04:521 (1,2) - I'd suggest you change this to slider to make it more friendly for beginners
  2. 00:15:693 (3,1) - This overlap doesnt really looks pretty
  3. 00:19:831 (1) - Remove this whistle, there is anything to emphazire at music
  4. 00:29:349 (2) - Replace whistle with finish please
  5. 00:38:866 (1) - add whistles to the beginning & end of sliders to emphazire vocals here
  6. 00:40:521 (1) - Add whistle to the beginning of slider
[Easy]

  1. 00:20:038 (1) - Remove this whistle, there is anything to emphazire at music
  2. 00:23:142 (1) - add whistle to the beginning of slider to emphazire vocals here?
  3. 00:51:280 (1) - ^
  4. 01:24:383 (1) - Same as at Insane


Nice map!
Andrea
Feel free to check Kodora's mod and if you apply something let me know, I'll rebubble this in case.

Never ignore mods, they can be helpful at any time.
Oyatsu
Go! Go! :D
Topic Starter
xChippy

Kodora wrote:

D: Eh, ninja'd by Andrea, feel free to ignore if its not needed~ Errr.. ofcourse i won't ignore it you took the time to mod it and yea don't want to waste that also it can help me improve my map :3

From LKs queue~

[Insane]

All just some hitsounds suggestions:

  1. 00:21:590 (1) - There is no any extra sound in music, just remove this clap listen closely there is :O
  2. 00:31:418 (1) - add whistle to the beginning of slider for consistency? The whistle are mapped on that bass(?) idk what instrument it is, so I prefer not to add it at places where it isn't ><
  3. 00:35:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This whistlespam sounds odd. If you want to emphazire your stream here i'd suggest you just use normal sampleset with redused volume instead removed the whistle spam instead
  4. 00:46:314 (1) - add finish to the beginning of slider to emphazire vocals here? added~
  5. 00:50:866 (5,6) - Probably same, claps sounds here not that good. Replace with normal-sampleset instead. fixed
  6. 00:59:556 (1) - add finish to the beginning of slider to emphazire vocals here? nope there is no finish sound so whistle is enough
  7. 01:02:452 (6) - maybe add whistle to emphazire vocals? I prefer the consisntecy i have atm ><
  8. 01:03:280 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - I's suggest you use normal-sampleset with redused volume at this stream too sounds a bit weird to me ><
  9. 01:10:314 (3) - NC follow pattern? Nope it will break NC consistency
  10. 01:16:521 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same as at 01:03:280 Same as above
  11. 01:20:866 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
  12. 01:24:487 (1) - Since there in so music at all at the end of spinner you can add blank hitnormal & silence it, or add finish instead actually idk what you mean ><, but like this it sounds fine tho o-o
[Easy]

  1. 00:20:038 (1) - Remove this whistle, there is anything to emphazire at music fixed
  2. 00:23:142 (1) - add whistle to the beginning of slider to emphazire vocals here? idk but it just sounds weird imo the finish there is enough also since the whistles are mapped on the bass(?)
  3. 00:51:280 (1) - ^ ^ imo it just doesn't fit ><
  4. 01:24:383 (1) - Same as at Insane Same as in Insane srry OAO
Nice map!
Umi

Kodora wrote:

D: Eh, ninja'd by Andrea, feel free to ignore if its not needed~

[Umi's Normal]

  1. 00:04:521 (1,2) - I'd suggest you change this to slider to make it more friendly for beginners Fixed
  2. 00:15:693 (3,1) - This overlap doesnt really looks pretty it's ok for me
  3. 00:19:831 (1) - Remove this whistle, there is anything to emphazire at music Fixed
  4. 00:29:349 (2) - Replace whistle with finish please Fixed
  5. 00:38:866 (1) - add whistles to the beginning & end of sliders to emphazire vocals here Fixed
  6. 00:40:521 (1) - Add whistle to the beginning of slider Fixed
thx for mod kodora :3

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Artist:fripSide
ArtistUnicode:fripSide
Creator:xChippy
Version:Umi's Normal
Source:Toaru Kagaku no Railgun S
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Topic Starter
xChippy
Updated Umi and my diffs :3 now w8 for jonathan~ :3
jonathanlfj

Kodora wrote:

[jonathanlfj's Hard]

*I'd suggest you raise AR and OD by 1 tick to have settings more balanced i prefer the current difficulty setup since it is quite standard for a hard of this bpm

  1. 00:04:521 (2,1) - Swap NC's follow music? ok
  2. 00:06:590 (1,2) - Please use more huge spacing between those notes to make it looks better i am intentionally lowering spacing here so the 1/4s will be easier to hit (especially on DT)
  3. 00:15:280 (2,3) - ^
  4. 00:19:831 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:40:521 (3,4) - ^
  6. 00:49:625 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is very counter-intuitive. Please make spacing consistent here. changed to zig zag flow
  7. 00:56:245 (1) - Add whistle to reverse? sounds a bit extra here, since the whistle in the music plays at the red line
  8. 00:57:900 (1) - Whistle to the beginning of slider? sure
  9. 00:59:556 (1) - Whistle to the reverse & end of slider to emphazire vocals? added at the end, not a fan of using whistles on blue ticks
  10. 01:01:211 (1,2) - More huge spacing, please same as what i've mentioned at 00:06:590 (1,2)
  11. 01:07:831 (1,2) - ^
  12. 01:13:211 (2,3) - ^
  13. 01:19:831 (2,3) - ^
  14. 01:24:487 (1) - Same as at Insane im pretty sure there are some rankability debates about silent hitnormals, i'd rather stick to the 5% volume to be safe on this
Thanks for the mod!
http://puu.sh/4sozh.zip
Topic Starter
xChippy
All updated~ now w8 for Andrea :3/
Andrea
Okay, I'm glad to see you fixed stuff from Kodora's mod as well. Let's get this rolling again!

Re-Bubbled~
Topic Starter
xChippy
Thanks Andrea \(>w<)/
Rakuen
Cool!

Hope it can be ranked soon :)
Oyatsu
Who BAT rank this plz!! or I will rank it. lol :) 888th post, yea!!
FireFoxZX
YAY this beatmap turned out nicely :) WOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOO
Andrea
Wow nobody checked this bubble yet? This is sad.
Garven
Andrea is sad because this set isn't set to tick rate 2.

[Easy]
Should raise the volume a bit. It's pretty quiet...
01:07:831 (3) - New combo
01:09:487 (1) - Remove new combo

[Normal]
This would look a lot better with circle size -1
00:52:521 (3,4,1) - Move these down and right 2 grids.
01:05:142 (2,3,4,5) - Rather boring with no hitsounds

[Hard]
00:06:590 (3,4) - What rhythm is this? :/
00:37:211 (3,4) - ^
00:40:521 (3,4) - Gah, now they're suddenly everywhere. At least during the intro most of them actually fit the song. Now they're just kind of there to be wrong or something.
00:28:935 (3) - I think this would have more impact as circles instead of a slider

[Insane]
These hitsounds are way too quiet. Raise the volume overall a bit.
00:21:280 (1) - Why the slowdown? There's nothing here in the music to really indicate that kind of drastic velocity change.
00:23:142 (1) - This section is kind of a mess spacing-wise. You switch between 1.5 and 1.2 all over the place with pretty much zero consistency.
01:14:866 (3,4,5) - Suddenly tiny spacing. Move that out a bit.

Hard's use of bad rhythms was kind of annoying considering the general difficulty level of it. Insane and easy were way too quiet and the Insane needs to normalize spacing so that it's at least consistent with itself.
Umi

Garven wrote:

[Normal]
This would look a lot better with circle size -1 Ok changed into CS 4
00:52:521 (3,4,1) - Move these down and right 2 grids. Fixed more or less with the DS
01:05:142 (2,3,4,5) - Rather boring with no hitsounds Add clap on (3) and whistle (2) and (5)
thx for mod

diff
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Garven
Er sorry, I meant CS 4 on the normal.
Umi
oh okay, well i agree now, i edited my previous post
Topic Starter
xChippy
Orz my computer is having some problems.. Trying to fix this ASAP , but might take a while as it seems to be serious plus I need to study for exams so have to find some time to fix the computer

btw I'm on my phone atm
jonathanlfj

Garven wrote:

[Hard]
00:06:590 (3,4) - What rhythm is this? :/ if you listen carefully there is a synth playing at 00:06:590, and immediately the vocals start at 00:07:004; this is the best setup i can think to cover both sounds
00:37:211 (3,4) - ^ this is similar, except in reverse
00:40:521 (3,4) - Gah, now they're suddenly everywhere. At least during the intro most of them actually fit the song. Now they're just kind of there to be wrong or something. my rational is the same for all these; covering both the instrumentals and vocals. If you disagree with me i dont mind changing them, but this is just what i think represents the music best
00:28:935 (3) - I think this would have more impact as circles instead of a slider sure
I will post my update once Garven replies about the issues on the 3/4 sliders ><
Garven
jonathan:

It's your choice on the rhythms - I simply find them distasteful against the main crux of the music at that point and compared to your primary focus with the mapping overall in the map. If you don't want to change them, it's fine.

xChip:

Take your time - this entire week is going to be hell for me, so I might not be able to do a full recheck until the weekend anyway.
Topic Starter
xChippy
Orz finally fixed my computer @.@ (OMG Hard disk is broken T_T)

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
Should raise the volume a bit. It's pretty quiet... Raised the volume
01:07:831 (3) - New combo fixed
01:09:487 (1) - Remove new combo fixed

[Insane]
These hitsounds are way too quiet. Raise the volume overall a bit. Also raised it a bit
00:21:280 (1) - Why the slowdown? There's nothing here in the music to really indicate that kind of drastic velocity change. I thought it played better, anyways fixed~~
00:23:142 (1) - This section is kind of a mess spacing-wise. You switch between 1.5 and 1.2 all over the place with pretty much zero consistency. Snapped the section to 1.2
01:14:866 (3,4,5) - Suddenly tiny spacing. Move that out a bit. fixed

Hard's use of bad rhythms was kind of annoying considering the general difficulty level of it. Insane and easy were way too quiet and the Insane needs to normalize spacing so that it's at least consistent with itself.
Thanks for modding Garven~~ :3/
Updated my diffs/Umi's w8ing for jonathan's update :3/
jonathanlfj
looks like u finxed ur computer chippy :D

@Garven: Thanks for understanding my point of view. here is the update: http://puu.sh/4UjCF.zip
Topic Starter
xChippy
Aight~~ All updated :3/
Garven
[Insane]
Let's clean up some of the remaining spacing at the end of this
01:16:314 (3,1) -
01:18:590 (5,6) -
01:19:625 (2,3) -
01:21:487 (3,4) -
There are others between these too, but these are the biggest offenders. Try to make it more uniform and more obvious when you're using jumps. It's still all over the place here.
Topic Starter
xChippy

Garven wrote:

[Insane]
Let's clean up some of the remaining spacing at the end of this
01:16:314 (3,1) -
01:18:590 (5,6) -
01:19:625 (2,3) -
01:21:487 (3,4) -
fixed all
There are others between these too, but these are the biggest offenders. Try to make it more uniform and more obvious when you're using jumps. It's still all over the place here.
Yea... I'll do my best to improve my jumps in the future :3 I've always been bad in Jumps/patterns @.@
Thanks Garven!! :3/
Garven
Much better.
Secretpipe
Yeah ! Bubble !
Topic Starter
xChippy
Thx for rebubble Garven :3/
Giralda
Gogogo!
Topic Starter
xChippy
Thx for the support :3/! But I'm kinda starting to doubt whether this will be ranked....
Oyatsu
Oh, xChippy-chan. Don't give up!! I support you :)
Momochikun

xChippy wrote:

Thx for the support :3/! But I'm kinda starting to doubt whether this will be ranked....
Soon..
grumd
Hi.

— Insane

  • 00:02:245 (3) - The biggest problem about these sliders is that the distance between (3) and (4) is the same as the distance between (3) and (2). I'll refer to basic osu! standard guideline "Beat placement should follow the time-distance equality rule". So, to be sure nobody misunderstands your rhythm, nobody thinks that (4) is another 1/4, either make (2) and (3) closer (http://puu.sh/57qv7.jpg) or (3) and (4) farther (http://puu.sh/57qx7.jpg)
    00:03:900 (3,4) - Same here.
    00:05:969 (4) - Same here.
    00:07:831 (6) - Same here, even though it doesn't seem to be too close, still the heads of sliders are close enough. You should separate 1/4 combo (00:06:590 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) from 1/2 combo (00:07:831 (6,1) - ). Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1077406
    00:43:314 (2,3) - This is a quite bad rhythm. You're not used to play offbeat 1/4 sliders. Here they both start at blue tick, which is not that hard as white and red. 00:43:418 - for example, at this point, at the white tick, sounds a bass sound, which should have been emphasized, but it is placed on a slider end, when player doesn't hit a button. In this case, you can try these rhythms instead: http://puu.sh/57qPe.jpg http://puu.sh/57qQa.jpg http://puu.sh/57qQz.jpg
    00:44:969 (2,3) - Same
    00:51:280 - I really doubt that this speedup is needed here. I don't think the song gets 1.5 times faster or harder in kiai, it barely gets a 10% increase in tensity. I'd not make it 1.5x, but 1.2x at maximum.
    01:04:004 - This is again a blue-tick problem. You start a stream from an offbeat note, so it's quite hard to understand when to start presing buttons after the repeating slider. This should look much better: http://puu.sh/57r17.jpg
    01:11:142 - This slowdown looks even worse than the speedup. It feels that you just have set the kiai end artificially, since almost nothing changes in the song itself. But you make a huge difference in the SV. If you want to keep the speedup, let it last until 01:24:487 - , same for kiai time.
    01:17:245 (1) - Same blue tick stuff here as at 01:11:142 -
— Hard

  • 00:18:176 (1) - This should be placed closer to the previous slider maybe? http://puu.sh/57s2m.jpg Idk, this is the only jump that didn't feel good for me.
— Normal
Easy is good, no problems there :3
Topic Starter
xChippy

grumd wrote:

Hi.

— Insane

  • 00:02:245 (3) - The biggest problem about these sliders is that the distance between (3) and (4) is the same as the distance between (3) and (2). I'll refer to basic osu! standard guideline "Beat placement should follow the time-distance equality rule". So, to be sure nobody misunderstands your rhythm, nobody thinks that (4) is another 1/4, either make (2) and (3) closer (http://puu.sh/57qv7.jpg) or (3) and (4) farther (http://puu.sh/57qx7.jpg)
    00:03:900 (3,4) - Same here.
    00:05:969 (4) - Same here.
    00:07:831 (6) - Same here, even though it doesn't seem to be too close, still the heads of sliders are close enough. You should separate 1/4 combo (00:06:590 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) from 1/2 combo (00:07:831 (6,1) - ). Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1077406
    00:43:314 (2,3) - This is a quite bad rhythm. You're not used to play offbeat 1/4 sliders. Here they both start at blue tick, which is not that hard as white and red. 00:43:418 - for example, at this point, at the white tick, sounds a bass sound, which should have been emphasized, but it is placed on a slider end, when player doesn't hit a button. In this case, you can try these rhythms instead: http://puu.sh/57qPe.jpg http://puu.sh/57qQa.jpg http://puu.sh/57qQz.jpg
    00:44:969 (2,3) - Same
    00:51:280 - I really doubt that this speedup is needed here. I don't think the song gets 1.5 times faster or harder in kiai, it barely gets a 10% increase in tensity. I'd not make it 1.5x, but 1.2x at maximum.
    01:04:004 - This is again a blue-tick problem. You start a stream from an offbeat note, so it's quite hard to understand when to start presing buttons after the repeating slider. This should look much better: http://puu.sh/57r17.jpg
    01:11:142 - This slowdown looks even worse than the speedup. It feels that you just have set the kiai end artificially, since almost nothing changes in the song itself. But you make a huge difference in the SV. If you want to keep the speedup, let it last until 01:24:487 - , same for kiai time.
    01:17:245 (1) - Same blue tick stuff here as at 01:11:142 -
Everything should be fixed But I'm not sure whether I applied it correctly. But I think it was correctly :) Changed kia time to 1.20x
Easy is good, no problems there :3
Thanks for modding grumd :3/!!!
Stefan

xChippy wrote:

Thx for the support :3/! But I'm kinda starting to doubt whether this will be ranked....
>3 months ago

I see no problems there. That's not a long time.
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