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Xelia - Illumiscape

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threenash
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Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
threenash
Philippines

Philippines wrote:

  • General
  1. Inconsistent Preview Time. [Beginner] and [Extra] Diff's Preview Time must be 24,231 not 24,224. fix'd

  • Beginner
  1. 00:59:044 (4) - Put a new combo to avoid getting combos to 6. ok

  2. 01:27:279 (1) - I don't really see a need for a new combo, so remove this new combo. Same goes to 01:29:846, 01:32:413, and 01:34:980.

  • Another
  1. 00:29:525 (1,2,3) - I don't think there's a need for an antijump for this one.

  2. 01:09:793 (3) - I hope you are aware that this is not straight. Move this note one grid left. Yup it's intentionnal

  3. 01:19:579 (1,2) - Would be better if you Ctrl + R these sliders individually.

  • This is so awesome, please have some of my babies. <3 Please call me back when you get some more mods. Best of luck! (:
Yay thanks!
Thanks for mod and many stars Philippines!!!! :) will call you again then xD
Reiji-RJ
1,402 posts
Joined April 2010
Reiji-RJ
Hello, Kanna!

General

  1. Extra and Beginner diffs have another preview point. Snap it properly
Beginner

  1. 00:37:226 (1) - you missed whistle
  2. 01:00:327 (1,2,3,4) - make a better square and stack 01:02:253 (4) - with 00:59:686 (6) - properly (nazi)
  3. 01:07:386 (4) - spacing, move little further from (3) as it is inconsistent with 01:05:461 (1,2) -
  4. 01:13:162 (1,2,3,4) - quite hard to read. Newbies could think that slider 01:14:766 (4) - is earlier than 01:14:445 (3) - . Make something like this:
    SPOILER
  5. 01:14:766 (4,1) - this is jump? Move it closer to each other D:
Normal

  • OD - 1
  1. 00:16:691 (1,2,3,4) - strange rhythm D: Make 1/1 sliders:
    SPOILER
    or triplets:
    SPOILER
  2. 00:21:825 (5,1,2) - maybe stack them? or move (1,2) further
  3. 00:24:392 - I suggest you to put clap every second beat in the part with kiai:
    1. 00:24:712 (2) -
    2. 00:25:033 (3) - on reverse
    3. 00:25:996 (4) - on the beginning and end
    4. 00:27:279 (2) - and so on
  4. 00:43:322 (7) - put nc here and remove from 00:44:605 (1) - . Because it's not on downbeat and looks bad.
  5. 00:53:910 (1) - change clap to finish
  6. 00:55:835 - put claps on this part as you have claps here: 01:06:424 -
  7. 01:04:498 (1) - You missed finish in downbeat! Oh you! Remove repeat and add a note with finish:
    SPOILER
  8. 01:10:274 (1,2,3) - looks bad. Try this:
    SPOILER
  9. 01:28:884 (4,5,6,7) - bad bad rhythm :< Make this, please:
    SPOILER
  10. 01:35:942 (x) - add a note stacked with 01:35:621 (6,1) -
  11. And again, you have BAD claps in the kiai part. Put it on every second beat, please.
  12. 01:51:664 (1) - finish instead of clap
  13. 01:52:948 (3) - ^
  14. 01:54:231 (1) - ^
  15. 01:55:835 (2) - ^
Hyper

  • You have a big gap between Normal and Hyper. Try to make it easier. Use less 1/2 rhythm and less streams and jumps.
  1. 00:12:520 (6,7,8) - they are hidden. Move them somewhere else D:
    SPOILER
    meh.
  2. 00:26:317 (4,5,6) - what? No D: Try this:
    SPOILER
  3. 00:31:450 (8,9,10,11) - Bad idea, but you have many many such rhythms. Try to change them, please. It's too hard. I won't point out each moment but if you're going to fix them, go through the whole diff.
  4. 00:36:263 (2,3) - how to read them? They are hidden!
  5. 01:04:338 (5,6,7,8,9) - streams are bad idea D:
  6. 01:36:263 (1) - hidden slider. Try to stack it with the beginning of 01:35:301 (2) -
  7. 01:52:627 (4,1) - It touche the HP bar. Rearrange the pattern to move it down.
Another

  1. 00:06:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I don't like how you used antijumps. This is inconsistent and doesn't fit. Make normal spacing, please
  2. 00:08:348 (1,2,3,4) - maybe make a square?
  3. 00:14:124 (1,2) - after your antijumps I thought it is 1/2. I don't feel such 1/4 rhythm and suggest you to change it.
  4. 00:29:365 (6) - stack it with 00:28:883 (3) - . It is hardly visible.
  5. 00:32:734 (3,4) - ctrl+r them for better flow. And move 00:33:054 (5) - like in this picture (as it hardly visible):
    SPOILER
  6. 00:38:028 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - I really don't like how they are arranged. (1,2) are hidden. Maybe something like this:
    SPOILER
  7. 00:47:974 (3,4) - I would better to make jump between them, like:
    SPOILER
  8. 00:53:108 (3,4) - ^
  9. 00:55:033 (9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same distance between them, but first are 1/4 and second are 1/2. BAD thing D: Make normal spacing, please
  10. 00:59:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
  11. 01:09:472 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ bad spacing between 3,4,5
  12. 01:25:996 (1,2,3,4) - make equal spacing? D:
  13. 01:31:129 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  14. 01:55:515 (1) - too short and unrankable. Extend to 01:56:638 - or remove it and map this part
Extra

  • HP and OD +1
  1. 00:06:744 (3,4) - ctrl+r to better flow
  2. 00:07:386 (3,4) - ^
    SPOILER
    ULTRAFLOW!
  3. 00:11:076 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - where_should_I_tap_mode D: Maybe make some patterns as earlier. For example stack 1,2 and 3,4 and let them make a square
    SPOILER
  4. 00:12:841 (1,2,3,4,5) - remove one repeat from all sliders to make a 1/4 beat between them
    SPOILER
  5. 00:31:771 (9) - this slider is hidden by the hitbirsts :< How about this:
    SPOILER
  6. 00:51:985 (2,3,4,5,6) - make star jumps? 00:52:146 (3,4) - ctrl+r them :O
  7. 01:23:269 (1) - Too fast! Make it slower, because it's unreadable (but I likeeee it)
  8. 01:29:365 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you must rearrange them. They are inreadable, hidden and make no sence D:
    SPOILER
    and don't forget to put new combo on 01:29:846 (6) -, remove from 01:30:167 (1) - and put on 01:30:488 (3) -
  9. 01:43:643 (9) - again as in 00:31:771 (9) -

    SO AWESOME DIFF! *______________*
I begin modding it yesterday so there could be some unnecessary issues as you had some mods today :O
I wish you good luck! I like this map.
threenash
1,043 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
threenash
Reiji-RJ

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Hello, Kanna!

General

  1. Extra and Beginner diffs have another preview point. Snap it properly fix'd
Beginner

  1. 00:37:226 (1) - you missed whistle fix'd
  2. 01:00:327 (1,2,3,4) - make a better square and stack 01:02:253 (4) - with 00:59:686 (6) - properly (nazi) ok
  3. 01:07:386 (4) - spacing, move little further from (3) as it is inconsistent with 01:05:461 (1,2) - fix'd
  4. 01:13:162 (1,2,3,4) - quite hard to read. Newbies could think that slider 01:14:766 (4) - is earlier than 01:14:445 (3) - . Make something like this: fix'd
    SPOILER
  5. 01:14:766 (4,1) - this is jump? Move it closer to each other D: closer now as I've fix'd the previous part
Another

  1. 00:06:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I don't like how you used antijumps. This is inconsistent and doesn't fit. Make normal spacing, please
  2. 00:08:348 (1,2,3,4) - maybe make a square?
  3. 00:14:124 (1,2) - after your antijumps I thought it is 1/2. I don't feel such 1/4 rhythm and suggest you to change it. made them closer
  4. 00:29:365 (6) - stack it with 00:28:883 (3) - . It is hardly visible. fix'd
  5. 00:32:734 (3,4) - ctrl+r them for better flow. And move 00:33:054 (5) - like in this picture (as it hardly visible): ok
    SPOILER
  6. 00:38:028 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - I really don't like how they are arranged. (1,2) are hidden. Maybe something like this: fix'd
    SPOILER
  7. 00:47:974 (3,4) - I would better to make jump between them, like: ok
    SPOILER
  8. 00:53:108 (3,4) - ^ ^
  9. 00:55:033 (9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same distance between them, but first are 1/4 and second are 1/2. BAD thing D: Make normal spacing, please
  10. 00:59:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
  11. 01:09:472 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ bad spacing between 3,4,5 fix'd spacing between 4 and 5
  12. 01:25:996 (1,2,3,4) - make equal spacing? D:
  13. 01:31:129 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  14. 01:55:515 (1) - too short and unrankable. Extend to 01:56:638 - or remove it and map this part 1 000 points bonus is ok → http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/71494/start=15

I begin modding it yesterday so there could be some unnecessary issues as you had some mods today :O
I wish you good luck! I like this map. Thanks!
Thanks for mod Reiji-RJ! :)
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu
hi ~
from our queue.

[Beginner]

00:15:408 (2) - turn off grid snap and put on 258, 281
00:17:974 (4) - use distance snap. and put on 227, 159 (turn off grid snap)
01:29:846 (1) - use distance snap
01:51:664 (1,2) - turn off grid snap and put on 388, 345

[Standard]

00:30:809 (3) - 72, 112
00:43:322 (7) - 2nd point - 404, 320. 3rd - 444, 288
00:43:964 (8) - 2nd - 408, 172. 3rd - 368, 200
01:10:274 (1) - 2nd - 292, 144. 3rd - 248, 88. 4th - 176, 80
01:13:162 (6) - nc
01:14:124 (1) - delete nc
01:39:151 (4,5,6) - maybe like this? i'm so predictable.
01:56:477 (3) - 144, 84

[Hyper]

00:16:691 (1) - 2nd - 268, 104. 3rd - 288, 64
00:17:012 (2) - 2nd - 380, 80. 3rd - 748, 72
00:18:295 (2) - 2nd - 120, 240. 3rd - 120, 284
00:28:242 - finish?
00:32:092 - ^
00:33:375 (6) - ^
00:38:509 - ^
00:43:643 - ^

[Another]

Unsnapped green lines at:
00:39:791
01:50:384
01:50:464

all fine for me.

[Extra]

all fine for me. 2x
___________________

sorry. i don't know how mod so hard map.
star.
and good luck.
threenash
1,043 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
threenash
Beginner and Another updated
Thanks for mod and star Ryuu! :)
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,149 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
Alright let's see what I can find. Mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun.

[General]
i feel that the BG file is too big with 1.5MB. take this one. i changed the file to a .jpg file and the filesize for this is at 231kb.
why don't you enable the letterbox during breaks since you have no video or SB? i think it'd look better during gameplay IMO.
put a bit of shading on the 2nd combo color. some people cant handle the bright white combo color as it might hurt their eyes.

[Beginner]
00:03:857 (1,2,3,4) - instead of a triangle, how about a diamond to make it interesting for players?
00:08:990 (1,2,3,4) - same as above but leave (1) and move (2,3,4).
00:14:124 (1,2,3) - make these 2/1 sliders to follow the piano accurately.
00:23:108 (4) - try to stack the repeat arrow on (1). i think it'd make a sort of nice triangle. moving it here ruins the shape you're supposed to be doing which ruins the flow IMO.
00:33:375 (2) - align this to (1) for a better flow from the previous slider.
00:34:659 (1) - if you follow the suggestion above, move this note between the repeat sliders. same reason as above.
00:42:359 (1,2,3,4) - how about deleting the circles and adding repeats like you did previously?
01:05:461 (1) - i think the default finish would go well with this part as the cymbals sound the same.
01:28:884 (2,1) - just a minor spacing error. it's up to you if you want to fix it.
01:36:263 (1) - same as 01:05:461.
01:40:113 (2,1) - similar to 00:33:375 and 00:34:659.
01:51:664 (1,2) - why not? it's near the end after all.
pretty nice diff and i like the way how you used the 1/1 lines to make it a fun diff.

[Standard]
00:16:691 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - keep your claps consistent. when i heard the clap at (4), that threw me off because the consistency pattern is gone.
00:24:392 (1) - same as 01:05:461 on Beginner.
00:30:809 (3) - since you have the clap at (1), replace the whistle for a clap to keep the consistency.
00:31:771 (4) - same as above but at the end.
00:32:413 (5) - this clap ruins the consistency, so remove it.
00:33:375 (1) - you forgot to add a finish at the end. add it to match the cymbals.
00:38:509 (7) - same as above but a clap at the beginning.
00:55:835 (1) - i highly suggest moving this somewhere else because spinner-osu is covering the beginning and that makes it hard for players to see where the note is.
01:35:942 - add a circle to continue the flow? i think players might hit the slider too early as they're used to that 1/1 rhythm.
01:45:889 (1) - remove the NC because that sound is the same. yes it changes but it's still the same.
01:46:531 (3) - this should be a NC because the instrumental starts all over again and that's where the cymbals are.
01:51:664 (1) - replace the clap for a finish. i find the clap unfitting for this part.
the placements are good, the hitsounds are a problem for me. try to keep them consistent because i don't like to hear claps or whistles at a note that ruins the consistency. this is just my opinion on the hitsounds as i focus on consistency on the hitsounds the most.

[Hyper]
Maybe increase the HP by 1 to put a bit of pressure on players.
00:11:718 (2) - *nazi* move this down a bit to avoid the slight overlap on (1).
00:24:392 (1) - add a finish at the beginning to match the cymbals.
00:36:263 (2,3) - you should space these out because the overlap looks bad. you did it at 00:12:199.
00:55:194 (1) - same as 00:24:392.
01:09:632 (6) - same as 00:11:718 but move this to the left.
01:14:605 (2,3,4,5,6) - personally i don't like to see short streams on hard diffs because it might be too hard for players at this kind of level. replace it for a kick slider to make it easier for players.
01:28:563 (1) - i think it'd look nicer if you can stack this on (3). i also think it's better than the overlap during gameplay.
01:43:964 (1) - move it below (7) so that it'd make a nice blanket during gameplay.

[Another]
00:18:937 - why don't you add a note here? the piano is still going and stopping it here ruins the flow.
00:23:830 - how about adding a stream to follow the long pause in the cymbals?
01:44:285 (2) - do Ctrl+R because this looks too easy for players to clear.
01:55:515 (1) - this is an unrankable spinner. it must reach at least 2k during autoplay to be rankable.
just fix that unrankable spinner and it'll be fine.

[Extra]
increase the HP by 1. the HP drain is lower than the HP drain in another.
00:20:862 (7) - maybe Ctrl+R to make it a bit easier and fun for players?
01:23:589 (1,2) - *nazi* space out these notes so that it doesn't touch the slider.
01:32:092 (3) - move it to the right side. i find this hard to read IMO.
best diff in this mapset IMO.

[Drafura's CtB Insane]
1st time modding a CtB diff so it might not be perfect. i'm willing to learn from this. and if it's possible can you link me to the CtB rules and guidelines?
00:12:681 (7) - personally i don't like this hyperdash. i find it unnecessary since the fruit is close to the note. i suggest stacking this note on (6) to make it easier for players. the hyperdash might surprise players
00:13:162 - hmm remove this break. i find it unnecessary because the duration is short.
00:23:429 - ^
00:44:044 - since you have hyperdashes on (9,10), i think it'd be better if you can add a circle here because i see a potential pattern. 2 straight hyperdashes in 2 notes. the look is the same and it'd put a great challenge for CtB players.

I guess that's it. GL :D
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
http://puu.sh/wj6u

thanks to 249 and RJ, you two's mods are helpful
threenash
1,043 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
threenash
Updated!
Thanks for mod 249 :D
Jebok_old
69 posts
Joined May 2011
Jebok_old
Hello!

[Beginner]
00:24:392 (1,2,3,4) - As you have a lot of single circles already, I think it would be nice if you combined two notes together to make slider; so (1)+(2) = slider and (3)+(4) = slider.
00:34:659 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:13:162 (1,2,3,4) - Highlight this whole combo at Rotate by -50? If you did this then (1) at 01:15:728 looks nice at x:304 and y:112.
01:30:167 (2) - Don't repeat, make it twice as long as there are a little too much of 1/1 length sliders I think. By doing this you can also turn the next combo vertically so that it does not overlap with the part starting at the break until 01:28:563.

[Standard]
00:24:392 (1,2..) - Those two overlap with the slider (5) at the end of last combo. So x:172 and y:104 would be a better placing.
01:40:434 (6) - x:60 and y:368 because the middle should be as close to (5) as the middle of (4) is close to (5).
01:55:835 (2,3) - Flick Horizontally(CTRL+H) as you've used the left size for the previous combo, so now its better if you do this combo on the right side.

[Extra]
Nice difficulty o.o
00:59:044 - New combo here, so that it does not go up to 13.
01:42:199 - New combo

[Hyper]
01:04:498 - New combo
01:37:386 - New combo

[Another]
00:54:552 - New combo
01:09:793 (3) - One grid to the left
01:10:434 (5) - Make straight

I'll give you 2 stars, I love the maps! :D
threenash
1,043 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
threenash
wow thanks for mod and stars Jebok! :)
Quilt
1,476 posts
Joined May 2010
Quilt
Download: Xelia (Archlade) - Illumiscape (Kanna) [Standard].osu

almost fixed~~ >w<//

thx mod~~!
threenash
1,043 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
threenash
updated!
x847606653
524 posts
Joined January 2011
x847606653
Scorpiour may mod this map later XD
I'm a zha modding.just suggestion

Beginner
none

Standard
00:30:809(1) move 4th point to (72.272)?
00:40:605(3) delete finshi?
01:04:498(6) 2nd point(372.204)3rd point(408.260)4th point(408.204)？
01:30:488(6) whistle?
01:44:285(6) 2nd point(344.0)3rd point(272.0)4th point(224.48)?
01:54:873(1) finishi?

Extra
01:28:564(6) stack this on (4)

Hyper
00:33:696(8) overlap
00:53:910() add a circle?

Another
00:59:525(3) move right 1 grid
01:00:327(7) ^
01:09:793(3) move left 1 grid

Thats all what i can find.Nice map,though it's so hard for me.
GL._.
threenash
1,043 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
threenash
Thanks for mod ;)
Impera_old
3 posts
Joined February 2012
Impera_old
:D
Quilt
1,476 posts
Joined May 2010
Quilt
Download: Xelia (Archlade) - Illumiscape (Kanna) [Standard].osu
fixed :D
thx mod~ ><//
threenash
1,043 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
threenash
:arrow: updated
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
Hi there~~mod for your request~~

[General]
  1. Recommend to add a silent sliderslide to your mapset~
    Click here to download sliderslide.wav
[Beginner]
  1. 01:15:408 - i'd like to add a note here:)
  2. 01:45:888 (4) - change it to a slider to 01:46:210 - ?
[Standard]
  1. 00:13:482 (3) - try to separate it to a slider and then note? for the downbeat start a new chorum , a note at 00:14:124 - with NC may be better :)
  2. 00:20:541 (3) - the clap is heard weird a bit..remove it?if u choose so i suppose add a whistle at 00:20:220 (2) - could be better~
  3. 00:31:771 (4) - also recommend to separate to two notes for downbeat :)
  4. 01:33:055 (3) - i suppose mat may issue this slider because of slider overlap.....
[Hyper]
  1. 00:39:472 (3,4) - i suppose make a rectangle with (1,2) is better?
pretty a nice diff~~

[Another]
  1. 00:06:263 (10) - stack with (3) may be better?
  2. 00:14:204 (2) - i suppose it should be on 00:14:285 - ... or add a note ...and similar patterns until 00:23:750 - ...i should say it's a good design but i'd like to follow the piano as well...
  3. 00:34:739 (2,3) - move to next red line and stack with (4) to make a triplet there? heard more smooth :)
  4. 00:37:306 (2,3) - ^
  5. 00:45:969 (8,9) - ^
  6. 00:47:413 - i'd like to add a note here to make a stream with 00:47:493 (1) -
  7. 00:55:514 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - try to make them to three groups then two notes for each? i suppose it's more fit for the music :)
  8. 01:00:808 (2,3) - swap position for better flow?
  9. 01:27:119 (2) - i suppose a note here may be better?
  10. 01:39:873 (8,9) - more triplet issue >.<
  11. 01:45:006 (6,7) - ^
  12. 01:48:857 (7,8) - ^
  13. 01:55:515 (1) - it's really toooooo short T^T
  14. 02:04:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - four notes for each part?
[Extra]
  1. 00:14:686 - try this beat?
  2. 00:16:049 - add a note here and change 00:16:210 (3) - to two notes? i suppose 4 notes from here to 00:16:531 (4) - may be better :)
  3. 00:17:333 - add a note here?
  4. 01:01:611 (2) - move clap to end?
  5. 01:52:146 (4) - remove finish?
That's all~~solid map~~~so good luck with rank~~
threenash
1,043 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
threenash
Thanks for mod Scorpiour!
only fix'd 01:27:119 (2) for Another diff but thinking about the triplets issue :/
galvenize
919 posts
Joined June 2010
galvenize
mdr
threenash
1,043 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
threenash

galvenize wrote:

mdr
What's so hilarious, Hentanize?
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hi there

[Beginners]
01:30:167 (2) - Add clap at repeating slider?
01:35:301 (2) - ^


[Standard]
00:13:482 (3) - Why clap at head slider?
01:40:434 (6) - The head slider is almost offscreen


[Hyper]
01:52:627 (4) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar (just a warning)
01:52:948 (1) - The head slider is touch the HP Bar (just a warning)


Nice map~
Akiyama Mizuki
2,711 posts
Joined March 2009
Akiyama Mizuki
From my ModQ! sry for late

[Beginner]
01:31:129 (1) - Finish

[Standard]
01:46:531 (1) - Clap at reverse arrow

[Extra]
00:50:060 (1) - Whistle

[Another]
00:32:734 (3) - Whistle

[Hyper]
00:28:884 (1) - Whistle

[Drafura CTB]
..........lol

Yay! Go rank! :D
Quilt
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Quilt
Download: Xelia (Archlade) - Illumiscape (Kanna) [Standard].osu
fixed :)

thx~
threenash
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threenash
ok I will update and check mods, not at home atm
threenash
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threenash
:arrow: updated!
Thanks for mod Leorda and 0920! :)
NatsumeRin
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NatsumeRin
reminds me of tsuka... though only a bit.
threenash
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Ah I don't know whether you're talking about Another or Extra but thanks! :)
galvenize
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galvenize

Kanna wrote:

What's so hilarious, galvenize?
couché la.

Download: Xelia (Archlade) - Illumiscape (Kanna) [Hyper].osu
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threenash
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:arrow: updated Hentai diff by Hentanize
Melophobia
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Melophobia
[General]
consider adding muted slider slide, it's really noisy especially in the beginning of song.
difficulty gap between Standard and Hyper is too huge, you may have to make Standard harder and Hyper easier

[Beginner]
00:05:140 (2,3,4) - these finishes are too much and overused imo, try to add some whistles instead
00:10:273 (2,3,4) - ^ same
00:14:124 - you should use higher volume than previous one
00:23:108 (4) - straight slider looks nice here because in this combo you didnt use any curved slider

[Standard]
00:00:007 - Kiaiと同じ音量はいくらなんでも大きいです、-20%くらいを推奨
00:06:103 (4) - ちょっとコンボが長いのでこのへんで切っておきましょう
00:09:953 (4) - 終点whistle
00:13:482 (3) - clapはここには合わないかと
00:19:258 (1,2,3,4,5) - clapの付け方を統一した方がいいかな　なんなら1番目と3番目の白線両方に置いちゃってもいいかと
00:29:525 - ここ以降downbeatだけにclapつけるrogicじゃやや寂しいので3番目の白線にも。
00:37:226 (5) - newcombo追加
01:02:894 (5) - ^
01:05:461 (7,1) - newcombo入れ替え
01:15:728 (1) - うーん、このspinner本当に必要ですか？長いしあんまり要らないと思うんですが..
noteに置き換えてそのままBreakでも良いと思います
01:39:151 (4,5,6) - もうちょっとキレイにおけるかと、中心のnoteのアプローチサークルに合わせると上手く置けます。
http://puu.sh/x5kC

全体的にclapの置き方に統一感が無くて残念な感じが出てます
それとこのdiffが簡単すぎてHyperとのバランスがかなり悪いので
Note増やしてもっとコンスタントにclap置いていく方針の方が良いかと～

[Extra]
00:44:926 (1) - add finish

[Another]
00:39:632 (8,1) - i think you can use larger spacing (1.6x is better to me) for them, but maybe its just me
00:45:969 (8) - i prefer deleting this note and adding note at 00:46:129 - instead to follow music better
00:47:092 - add note?
00:54:070 (2,3,4,5,6) - this stream can be more beautiful imo
01:15:408 - add note
01:45:889 (3,4,5,6) - pitch is getting higher step by step, so how about increasing the spacing step by step as well? just suggestion
01:46:370 (6,1) - i just wonder why you didnt use higher spacing for them. it's a good place to use higher spacing because there's stress in music

[Hyper]
01:56:638 (4) - stack it under 01:55:835 (3) - perfectly

hmm i mostly dislike such a crazy map but Another diff is really nice, i like it!
good luck!
threenash
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threenash
some changes applied to Another
Thanks for mod Melophobia :)
galvenize
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galvenize
Thanks :)
threenash
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threenash
go back to tera plzz
MMzz
Elite Mapper
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MMzz

  • [Another]
    _________________________

    00:06:744 (2,3) - / 00:07:386 (5,6) - / 00:07:707 (1,2,3) - I personally don't think these anti-jumps fit. Whenever I think of an anti-jump I usually think of stops or really clow beats in the music. Why not just stack these?

    00:10:755 (6,7,8,9,10) - Move this pattern down so that 6 stacks where 00:10:274 (3) was?

    00:14:124 (1,2) - I don't understand this, and every other time you do this double note until 00:23:750. There is no instrument in the song that does this, and these are very confusing and hard to play. This whole section would be a lot better and readable if they were triplets. Unless you have a really good reason as to why you did this.

    00:27:279 (2) - Maybe move this up more? This looks really odd because it's touching 1.

    00:34:979 (4) - Move this out more so you have an even flowing jump to the next combo?

    00:54:390 (6) - unsnapped note, resnap to 00:54:392.

  • [Hyper]
    _________________________


    00:42:841 (1) - remove combo

    00:43:643 (6) - add combo

    01:42:359 (4,1) - This would be better if you did the slider then the note. You should fix this because it sounds bad and is breaking your next combo. http://puu.sh/xb3a This would work fine.

    01:52:627 (4,1) - These are touching the HP bar http://puu.sh/xb4z I suggest you fix this. It's not an unrankable issue, but the guidelines suggest you do not do this.

    This is a VERY GOOD hyper. <3

  • [Normal]
    _________________________

    This map is really good beatplacement wise. But the hitsounds need some serious work, they are very messy and inconsistent and that will throw new players off. :(

    Since I don't want to make a very long mod post just for hitsounds you could contact me via IRC and I will try to help you get the hitsounds fixed up.
threenash
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threenash
Fix'd some stuff on Another
Thanks for mod MMzz :)
ouranhshc
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ouranhshc
Found this in #modreqs

Hyper
01:18:295 (1,2,3) - [nazi] make these parallel nvm
all good :D

Another
00:47:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - possibly like this:
SPOILER
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/327493
00:55:514 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - these anti-jumps don't really fit that well, because the spacing is really similar to the 1/4ths that appear before this section. maybe use 0.6x~0.7x for the anti jumps?

01:17:814 (4,5,6) - maybe make this symmetrical to (1,2,3) and ctrl+H : 01:18:295 (1,2)
01:32:413 (3,4,1) - NO NO! WHY! NANDE PANGPANG!

Extra
00:13:001 (2,3,4,5) - are these really needed?

Standard
00:16:691 (4) - New Combo?
01:46:531 - 01:55:835 This section is missing claps

Beginner
01:15:728 - map this break?
galvenize
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galvenize
:!:

Download: Xelia (Archlade) - Illumiscape (Kanna) [Hyper].osu
Star Stream
2,039 posts
Joined June 2010
Star Stream
From my queue

[General]
  1. check Letterbox in Breaks in Standard diff
[Beginner]
  1. Great
[Standard]
  1. 00:10:916 (1) - remove NC to keep your combo rhythm
  2. 00:26:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i don't want to recommend to stack in Normal diff, maybe replace with 1/2 sliders?
  3. 00:33:375 (1) - same as 00:10:916 (1) - , start combo from 00:34:980 (2) -
  4. 00:41:397 (3,5,2) - don't change clap pattern, it's pretty weird
  5. 00:55:835 - ~ plz use clap reguraly
  6. 01:15:408 - clap here
  7. 01:15:728 - add a circle here with finish
  8. 01:25:996 - you'd better shorten your combo rhythm, because of 01:34:017 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and 01:51:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , you don't need to finish your combo at 6 or 8 or so, try shortening combos like 01:31:129 (1,2,3) -
  9. 01:46:210 (8) - clap
  10. 01:51:664 - ~ can't hear the finish sound, and i'd add claps this part too
[Hyper]
  1. 00:05:301 (2) - noisy and doesn't fit with music imo, reduce the arrow?
  2. 00:08:349 (1,2,3,4,1) - i don't want to recommend to use this pattern, because it's pretty hard to play :/ how about a pentagon shape?
  3. 00:10:755 (4) - same as 00:05:301 (2) -, delete?
  4. 00:12:199 (4) - NC due to jump
  5. 00:31:450 (3,4,5,6) - a bit hard to play imo, how about 3 1 instead 2 2
  6. 00:36:584 (3,4,5,6) - ^ and 4 circles and 1 slider will be good as well imo
  7. 00:44:285 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about make a pentagon or star shape with the 5 beats?
  8. 01:16:210 (3) - curve more or delete 2nd tick
  9. 01:52:948 (1) - ctrl+r due to the distance and to be more playable
[Another]
  1. 00:55:514 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - anti-jump is not good idea here because of 00:55:033 (9,10,1) -
  2. 01:25:996 (1,2,3,4) - it may be read as 1/4 beats, use 0.4x or 0.8x
  3. 01:51:664 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - not good, unless it's a hardest diff, i'd reduce distance
  4. 01:56:798 (1) - NC bug, NC here due to after spinner
  5. 01:59:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - how about stack each 2 circles
  6. 02:05:461 (7,8,9) - replace with 1/2 slider with 1 arrow?
[Extra]
  1. 00:07:386 (3,4) - ctrl+r will be more playable and soft movement
  2. 00:27:921 (7,8) - too sharp! orz
  3. 00:29:205 (7,8) - ^
  4. 01:34:338 (1,1,1) - 3.7x in 1/4 beat is too hard imo, how about using 3.0x
  5. 01:56:878 - spinner from here to 01:59:365 - with 10% soft hitsound?
Good luck with rank~
threenash
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threenash
:arrow: updated Hyper
changed some stuff on Another
Thanks for mod ouranhshc PANG PANG and Star Stream! :)
Muya
2,355 posts
Joined August 2009
Muya
[General]
Hyper/Extra/Another, these diff is Insane.
Hyper to easier please. three Insane is unrankable

tags wrote:

of fighters
should be "THE BMS OF FIGHTERS 2010 - The Evolution of War -" please change it

why Hyper is Insane:
1. this song's BPM is 187, it's high
2. a bit many streams
3. too many 1/4 and 1/2,

need a margin.

[Beginner]
00:03:857 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - reduce finish please
01:51:664 (1,2) - these sliders only have a 2 reverse. reduce 1 reverse?

[Standard]
00:38:509 (7,1) - (7) remove clap from 3rd note, (1) add clap
01:04:498 (6) - add clap to both end
01:29:846 (6,1) - don't overlap please

[Extra]
00:13:001 - too small volume
00:13:482 - ^ same
00:23:108 (1,2) - (1)'s end at 00:23:670, (2)'s start at 00:23:750
01:34:258 (8,1,8,1,8,1,8,1) - these spacing is possible...?

[Another]
00:04:819 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a pentagon? like a 00:03:856 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:12:199 (1,2,3,4) - 00:11:557 (1,2,3,4) - as change to more big spacing?
01:55:515 (1) - don't mute spinner's last please

[Hyper]
can you more easier ?
00:34:338 (2) - try this http://puu.sh/xmzB
01:51:664 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - can you looks more clean?
threenash
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threenash
Curent tags are already more than enough imo and I will discuss with galvenize about Hyper's difficulty since that has already been mentionned in earlier mods

Well thanks for mod Muya :D
AoiX
674 posts
Joined April 2010
AoiX
Request from Queue

>>Aoi's Mod

:!:default=suggestion||bold=notice||red+bold=unrankable
General
  1. seems there has 3 [I] diff...diff spread so strange! :(
Another
  1. 00:05:621 (6) - I think this circle should be remove depends on previous rhythms
  2. 00:10:755 (6) - ^
  3. 00:14:124 (1,2) - player may think this is a 1/2 beat because you have use it before.
  4. 00:15:407 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:55:033 (9) - NC here and remove next NC.To have a clear distinguish
  6. 00:55:514 (2) - if you follow previous mod,also NC this
  7. 01:20:541 (4) - stack this with 01:19:579 (1)'s end will looks better
  8. 01:22:948 (4,5,6) - Ctrl+H it,depends on 01:21:664 (5,6,7,1,2,3)
  9. 02:04:980 (4,5,6) - use 0.6x spacing will looks better
Hyper
  1. 00:05:301 (2) - whistle on 2nd circle,and remove whistle on 00:05:782 (3) -
  2. 00:32:092 (1) - add finish on first circle when 00:37:226 (1) has one
Extra
  1. 00:34:819 (2) - put it like this?http://puu.sh/xrfYto let it like a flow
  2. 01:11:718 (1,2) - not in a line
    DBL
Standard
  1. 01:28:884 (4,5) - stack with 01:26:958 (2) -
  2. 01:34:338 (2,7,1) - stack together
Beginner
  1. N/A
Drafura's CtB Insane
  1. 00:12:841 - delete the break
  2. 00:23:108 - ^
  3. 00:08:990 (5,6) - big jump here is unnecessary
All diff feels wonderful when put separate,but terrible when put them together because of the diff spread
threenash
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threenash
Applied all aesthetic stuff on Another
Thanks for mod AoiX! :)
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
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Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ Kanna ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Another]


  1. 00:05:621 (6) - Remove circle much better.
  2. 00:10:755 (6) - ^
  3. 01:51:664 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't like this parttern,really suddenly and random.

That's all ~ Crazy map ~

Good luck with rank ~
threenash
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threenash
Kept as it was, sorry :(
Thanks anyway for mod Kawayi Rika! :)
spboxer3
Global Moderator
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spboxer3

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
 Black is just suggestion.

:idea: general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. ._. Hyper>Another>Extra?

Beginner



  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. none~

Standard



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:28:242 (5,6,1) -
  2. 01:06:103 (1,4) -
  3. 01:29:846 (6,1) -
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:36:905 (4,6) - [nazi] please make it parallel. It's looks like a bit off ((you can use flip to check this pattern
  2. 01:34:338 (2,7,1) - please let those full stack. It's can let this pattern looks clean. (please use DS x0.0 and close grid to check it.)
  3. 01:52:627 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - make it more like regular pentagon?

Hyper



  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 01:06:103 (4,5,6,1) - a messy pattern. (( (4,5) is coverd (1).
  2. 01:28:242 (3,4,1) - a messy pattern. It's covered by (3,4). but looks not have regularity.

Another


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. OD & HP -1? It's same difficulty for [Another] and [Extra]
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:05:461 (5) - move to x:340 y:144
    before
    after

    if you want to use this pattern:
    288,304,4819,5,0
    368,288,4979,1,0
    316,224,5140,1,4
    392,208,5300,1,0
    340,144,5461,1,0
    284,80,5621,1,0
    200,96,5782,1,0
    176,180,5942,1,0
    232,244,6102,1,0
    260,160,6263,1,0
  2. 01:14:926 (5,7) - please let those full stack. It's can let this pattern looks clean.~

Extra



  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
    [list:22682]00:06:424 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 如同我所說的~spacing有問題↓
    :roll:
  1. 00:51:985 (2,3,4,5,6) - 星形... 你懂吧 現在這樣是歪的...
  2. 01:34:258 (8,1) - 臥槽... 這反人類 絕對會被nuke的...
  3. 01:34:900 (8,1) - ...
  4. 01:35:542 (8,1) - .
    stress...

CTB



  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 00:13:162 - remove this break time?
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:12:681 (7) - How about move to x:200 ? because I don't think 00:12:681 (7) - It's a Hyper fruit way. because it's not a downbeat or need to protrusion.
  2. 00:17:974 (9) - set Hyper fruit for the downbeat and remove hyper fruit from 00:17:814 (8) -
  3. 00:47:974 - strange hyper fruit. maybe set hyper to 00:48:135 - ?

good luck for Ranked~
threenash
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threenash
Changed the pattern and difficulty settings on Another. I'm thinking to reduce Extra's HP Drain by 1 since some players complained about Extra's HP drain. If so, difficulty spread will be like that: Hyper (4,92 stars) < Another (5 stars) < Extra (5 stars). But, of course, it's up to Guest Mappers whether they do agree or not.
Anyway thanks for mod spboxer3!

Edit: Finally kept OD/HP 7 for Another.
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LKs
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LKs
will check allmods tmr http://puu.sh/xErh
threenash
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threenash
updated
Quilt
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Quilt
Download: Xelia (Archlade) - Illumiscape (Kanna) [Standard].osu

fixed
Mod didnt of MMzz is not fixed yet.
threenash
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threenash
updated this one atm
HakuNoKaemi
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HakuNoKaemi
Hihi!

Normal - Quilt
Hyper - galvenize
Extra - LKs
for Normal... you mean Standard right?

[General]
  1. Why you don't map the last part? It's done in Another...
  2. Order fix: Extra is supposed to be the harder one... right? so HP+1 and OD+1, Another is ... well another X-Insane, but seem a bit easier so... HP+1 OR OD+1. Hyper is already toned down in settings.... Guess why the algorithm consider it harder...
[Beginner]
  1. Really nothing to say. Only that I'd use long slider too, but there are no errors
[Standard]
  1. I don't quite like the fact most slider/circle mix is random there. there are some circle that do follow the music well
    Download: Xelia (Archlade) - Illumiscape (Kanna) [Standard (Mod)].osu
  2. So... yeah... I'm suggesting you to recontrol your sliders and use 1/2 sometime.
[Hyper]
  1. [Rhythm]
    1. 00:14:686 (4) - Some place are undermapped, so I'll like to not see overmaps ._.
    2. 00:31:450 (3,4,5,6) - Such patterns in such parts play badder than bad if used in parts without sense. A simple stream was not better? (substitute with a stream all times you use this pattern)
    3. 01:50:381 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - As you repeated 01:46:531 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ... why you don't repeat 01:48:937 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - too?
    4. 01:56:638 (4,5) - Ctrl + R ? 01:56:477 (3,4) as a jump is legit as you have a jump in the pitch :3
[Another]
  1. [Graphic]
    1. 00:04:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Order the pattern better
      SPOILER
    2. I know it's an Another, but that DOESN'T mean you can jump or antijump like crazy without jumps having sense, and even them being hidden (nosense+hidden=impossible to play). But a better Ordering can correct that (Example). Try too to control pitches of the piano notes too. You can make something really fun to play if you jump when there is a jump in the pitch. You DID use part i REALLY like (example 00:24:873 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1), i like how those plays :3)
[Extra]
  1. It's too much to even be modded by me. though the real problems are like overmapping, some jumps feeling random and so. And this with Another would have been considered for Approval time ago.
[Drafura's CTB Insane]
  1. Asked Inamaru for some suggestions about the diff: He did actually like it and suggested to use AR8 and CS5(to balance)
Uhm, I don't want to *herpderp* because I can't even badly play the 2 Xtra
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threenash
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threenash

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

Why you don't map the last part? It's done in Another...
Because Another has been done 5 months ago and I was not aiming for ranking :D Then I received Guest Difficulties 1 month ago but it seems that they all have mapped until 01:56... It's my fault, i forgot to tell them to map the whole song.
Well thanks for mod :P
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Extra]
  1. It's too much to even be modded by me. though the real problems are like overmapping, some jumps feeling random and so. And this with Another would have been considered for Approval time ago.
kanna told me to map a hard and unique map, actually I didn't think a lot while I was mapping.

But we can revise patterns that needs revision
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threenash
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threenash
Extra is great
Quilt
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Quilt
Download: Xelia (Archlade) - Illumiscape (Kanna) [Standard].osu

fixed

>>HakuNoKaemi thank you for modding
threenash
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threenash
updated
Thank you Quilt
kriers
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kriers
gotta love this map
threenash
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threenash
:P
galvenize
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galvenize
:)
threenash
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threenash
:cry:
kriers
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kriers
8-)
Konei
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Konei
Sorry >.<

Can't mod because I don't find anything wrong :3

Nice map~ Would star but no kudosu left :lol:




Good luck~
threenash
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threenash
Ah no problem! :)
Thanks anyway~
Konei
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Konei

Kanna wrote:

Ah no problem! :)
Thanks anyway~

Heya~ Now I've got Kudosu to star your map :3


Starrr~~*
threenash
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threenash
Thanks for 15th star :3
arien666
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arien666
[General]
Damn Star Rating... Star rating is Extra<Another<Hyper but real difficulty seems like Hyper<Another<Extra... DAMN STAR RATING!!!

[Standard]
00:08:349 (4) - [Suggestion] As (1),(2),(3) are just 1/1, why don't you make it 1/1 too :3?
00:12:199 (4,5) - Wonder if 1/2 timing distance might be little hard on [Normal]'s beginning part ;_;
00:32:413 (5) - New combo to make combo length same as others :3?

[Extra]
00:13:001 (2,3,4,5) - ??? What's these sliders?
00:24:071 (3) - Seriously, moving that distance within 41ms would be very hard. Why don't you reduce 1 return? (Make end point on 00:24:311 :3)

[Drafura's CtB Insane]
00:06:424 (11,1) - Swap new combo
00:08:990 (5) - As the melody changes from this note, why don't you add hyperdash on 00:08:830 (4) :3?
00:11:558 (11,1) - Swap new combo
00:13:162 - Delete this break manually
00:19:258 (19,1) - [Suggestion] Like 00:08:990 (5), why don't you add hyperdash on former note :3? If do, swap new combo too :3
00:21:825 (4,5) - ^
00:23:429 - Also, delete this break manually
00:44:445 (8,9,10) - As [Platter], this tech would be broken if user didn't catch first red note ;_; But I don't know about other ways about this orz
01:29:846 (7,8) - This distance seems like hyperdash-able distance but hard to catch them with normal speed orz, make little farther?
01:56:751 - [Suggestion] Move this green line into 01:56:758 :3?



Sorry for late modding ;___;
Drafura
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Drafura

arien666 wrote:

[Drafura's CtB Insane]
00:06:424 (11,1) - Swap new combo Not apllying for now, (irc discution) gonna post on rule/guideline thread to see what to do about that.
00:08:990 (5) - As the melody changes from this note, why don't you add hyperdash on 00:08:830 (4) :3? Cause i'm a baka, fix'd
00:11:558 (11,1) - Swap new combo Not apllying for now, (irc discution) gonna post on rule/guideline thread to see what to do about that.
00:13:162 - Delete this break manually Fix'd
00:19:258 (19,1) - [Suggestion] Like 00:08:990 (5), why don't you add hyperdash on former note :3? If do, swap new combo too :3 Same sad reason xD Fix'd, but didn't swapped combo.
00:21:825 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:23:429 - Also, delete this break manually Fix'd
00:44:445 (8,9,10) - As [Platter], this tech would be broken if user didn't catch first red note ;_; But I don't know about other ways about this orz I don't reject it, since your not the first one mentionning this pattern. I'll try to find something good for this part.
01:29:846 (7,8) - This distance seems like hyperdash-able distance but hard to catch them with normal speed orz, make little farther? Fix'd
01:56:751 - [Suggestion] Move this green line into 01:56:758 :3? Hmmmm, going to talk about that in rules/guideline thread, since you can't hit a note after the timing section it's certainly a good idea to stack all timing section to the right tick for audio changes.



Sorry for late modding ;___; Thank you for modding *.*
[Drafura's CtB Platter] @Kanna : nouveau nom pour s'accorder sur les rules CtB.
threenash
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Topic Starter
threenash
OK
Thanks for mod aru
wcx19911123
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wcx19911123
checked and bubbled
this is awesome
LKs
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LKs

arien666 wrote:

[General]


[Extra]
00:13:001 (2,3,4,5) - ??? What's these sliders? just several 1/8 sliders, with 1/4 breaks linking them
00:24:071 (3) - Seriously, moving that distance within 41ms would be very hard. Why don't you reduce 1 return? I think it's ok, as you can see in the pic the last repeat of the slider directs to the note so the movement will be guided (Make end point on 00:24:311 :3)
thanks

EDIT: thanks wcx
Snowy Dream
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Snowy Dream
congratz > <
threenash
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threenash
wow cool!
Thanks wcx and Snowy :D













sup Alex
galvenize
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galvenize
"ça t'en bouche un coin"

looool
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threenash
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threenash
LOL
Cyclohexane
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Cyclohexane
Hm.

This... Is very innovative.
Yeah.

Good luck, Kanna.
Mapper 31
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Mapper 31
http://puu.sh/A0DH

~_~..
Kurai
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Kurai
Ok tout le monde parle de ça sur #french alors je la mod :u

[Beginner]
  1. 01:30:167 (2) - Ajoute un clap sur le reverse, tu en as ajouté un à chaque fois sauf là, ça fait zarb..
  2. 01:35:301 (2) - ^
  3. 01:51:664 (1,2) - Change pas si soudainement de rythme, ça peut surprendre le joueur. Dans les easy faut toujours garder un rythme constant pour cette raison, donc vire un reverse sur chacun de ces sliders.
[Standard]
  1. 01:28:884 (4) - You should consider adding a new combo there, for consistency with 01:34:017 (1) and because it's quite needed.
[Hyper]
  1. 00:12:680 (7,8) - J'aime pas la façon dont ces 2 cercle reviennent à un endroit qui vient juste d'être mappé. Ca les cache sous des hitbursts ce qui n'est pas super joli et beaucoup moins lisible. Ca va beaucoup mieux de les placer comme ça pour moi :
    SPOILER
  2. 00:14:686 (4) - Je vois pas pourquoi tu fais un triple ici, du moins je sais, ça suit quelque chose dans la musique, mais ce que je trouve étrange c'est que au autres endroits similaires tels que 00:15:969 ou encore 00:16:611 tu n'as pas mis de triples. Je vois donc pas il devrait y en avoir un ici.
  3. 01:47:172 (3,4,5,6) - J'aime pas vraiment ce pattern, les cercles sont tout compressés ce qui ne va pas avec les patterns précédent qui sont assez aérés. Là ça fait bizarr.e :/
  4. 01:48:455 (3,4,5,6,2) - ^
[Another]
  1. 00:08:348 (1,2,3) - Un aussi grand jump ne va pas bien pour une partie si calme, réduit le.
  2. 00:08:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  3. 00:12:841 (1) - Remonte le un peu au dessus, je le trouve trop loins de la précédente note.
  4. 00:37:225 (1,2,3) - Le triple ne devrait pas ce trouver là mais à 00:37:466.
  5. 00:48:375 - Tu devrais continuer à avoir un triple comme précédemment sinon c'est comme si quelque chose manquait. Sinon j'aime pas ce changement de spacing avec 00:47:814 (2,3,4,5,6,7), ça ne me semble pas approprié du tout. De plus pourquoi avoir un changement spacing ici et pas ailleurs, si tu en met un ici, il doit y avoir la même chose aux endroit similaire sinon ça n'a pas de sens, bien entendu ce spacing est une mauvaise idée donc utilise le même spacing qu'aux endroits identique.
  6. 01:07:386 (3,4,5,6,7) - Pourquoi tu mets ce pattern sous le précédent ? C'est nul et moche.
  7. 01:15:728 jusqu'à 01:25:996 - Non, pourquoi soudainement un spacing immense sur une partie à peu près calme ? De un c'est pas très logique et de deux ça va pas du tout ...
  8. 01:51:664 jusqu'à 01:54:231 - ... euh, je sais pas quoi dire à part que ça se joue terriblement mal, que c'est ridiculement difficile à jouer, correspond pas du tout avec le reste de la map et que c'est horriblement laid..
  9. 01:54:552 (5,1) - Bon j'vais pas te faire un dessin, mais 1/4 jump sur du 187 BPM, lolno.
  10. 01:55:515 (1) - Ce spinner est beaucoup trop petit, même 700 ms quoi ... la taille minimum c'est 750 ms sinon c'est trop surprenant et injouable.
[Extra]
  1. 00:10:595 (4) - Why does this slider ends on a blue tick which follows nothing when there is a piano note at 00:10:755 that should be followed ?
  2. 01:34:258 (8,1) - Don't use 1/4 jumps please, that's just ridiculous ...
  3. 01:34:900 (8,1) - ^
  4. 01:35:542 (8,1) - ^
  5. 01:55:675 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
[Drafura's CtB Platter]
  1. 00:48:135 (2) - J'aime pas cet hyperdash, ça va pas avec ce qu'il y a avant de un mais je sais pas, je trouve pas non plus qu'il ai lieu d'être. Tu devrais p'tet suivre le même schéma que précédemment.
  2. 01:49:258 (1,2,3,4) - Ce pattern casse le flow je trouve, ce serait pas mieux de faire un truc du genre à la place ? :
    SPOILER
  3. 01:56:638 (12) - Pour mettre plus l'accent sur la fin, je te propose de plutôt transformer ce slider en deux cercle avec un assez grand jump entre eux.
Charles445
Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon
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Charles445
KURAI WHERE DID YOU COME FROM I JUST FINISHED MY MOD

Beginner
  1. 01:51:664 (1,2) - Short multiple repeat sliders like these are extremely hard to read for beginner players. The reason they are is because the second repeat has to be guessed. Since these are the only double repeats in the map, these are unexpected. Change them into single sliders.
There's quite a large gap in between Hyper and Another.
Another seems oriented towards very pro players, but Hyper seems oriented towards average players.
Semi-pros get screwed. (and extra is just for insane uber pros).

Another
  1. Because of how you new comboed the map, there are spots where there are huge drain sections like from 00:55:354 to 01:36:183 (40 seconds long of insane drain). You should either go through the map and have more consistent new combos or drop the HP drain by 1.
  2. 00:55:033 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - A spaced out stream followed by compressed 1/2 is extremely, EXTREMELY hard to read (and unnecessarily so). For this section, space 1/2 out so the objects are either fully stacked or not touching each other at all.
  3. 01:37:385 (1) - This slider is unsnapped by 2 ms, just move it around on the timeline to fix it.
  4. 01:51:664 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is overkill. It's way harder than the rest of the difficulty. Make it all closer together.
  5. 01:55:515 (1) - End this spinner at 01:56:477 instead. Where it stops now sounds awkward, and makes the spinner really short.
Extra

  • Since I can't evaluate this difficulty myself because I'm not an insane uber pro, I got an insane uber pro, fartownik, to help me out.
    Italicized things are suggestions by fartownik. Otherwise it's by me.
  1. 00:13:001 (2,3,4,5) - Overmapped.
  2. 00:23:750 (2,3) - Overmapped. Overmapped, plays okay.
  3. 00:26:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps are really harsh.
  4. 00:28:242 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps are really harsh.
  5. 00:32:092 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These jumps are also really harsh.
  6. 01:34:258 (8,1) - This stream jump is a big mistake.
  7. 01:34:900 (8,1) - This stream jump is a big mistake.
  8. 01:35:542 (8,1) - This stream jump is a big mistake.
  9. 01:36:184 (8,1) - This stream jump is a big mistake.
    For those stream jumps, try replacing each (7,8) with a slider at (7) instead. Sliders make stream jumps easier.
    I'd prefer if you just make them closer so it's a regular long stream.
  10. 01:55:995 (2,1) - This jump is too big.

Also, Mapper 31 just posted a taiko difficulty in the thread, you might want to consider adding it if it's good.
galvenize
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galvenize

Kurai wrote:

[Hyper]

[*]00:14:686 (4) - Je vois pas pourquoi tu fais un triple ici, du moins je sais, ça suit quelque chose dans la musique, mais ce que je trouve étrange c'est que au autres endroits similaires tels que 00:15:969 ou encore 00:16:611 tu n'as pas mis de triples. Je vois donc pas il devrait y en avoir un ici.
J'ai rajouté un triplet sur 00:19:819 (3,4) pour équillibrer.

http://puu.sh/A1pE
LKs
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LKs

Kurai wrote:

[Extra]
  1. 00:10:595 (4) - Why does this slider ends on a blue tick which follows nothing when there is a piano note at 00:10:755 that should be followed ? fixed
  2. 01:34:258 (8,1) - Don't use 1/4 jumps please, that's just ridiculous ... yes I think so. fixed by charles' suggestion
  3. 01:34:900 (8,1) - ^
  4. 01:35:542 (8,1) - ^
  5. 01:55:675 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^ see my reply below (charles's mod)
[/list]

Charles445 wrote:

Extra

  • Since I can't evaluate this difficulty myself because I'm not an insane uber pro, I got an insane uber pro, fartownik, to help me out.
    Italicized things are suggestions by fartownik. Otherwise it's by me.
  1. 00:13:001 (2,3,4,5) - Overmapped. changed to 1/4 sliders
  2. 00:23:750 (2,3) - Overmapped. Overmapped, plays okay. 1/8 isn't overmapped here, keep
  3. 00:26:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps are really harsh. if all people against this, I will change, but I still wanna see is it a necessary to make the change
  4. 00:28:242 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps are really harsh.
  5. 00:32:092 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These jumps are also really harsh. this one is much easier imo
  6. 01:34:258 (8,1) - This stream jump is a big mistake. fixed
  7. 01:34:900 (8,1) - This stream jump is a big mistake.
  8. 01:35:542 (8,1) - This stream jump is a big mistake.
  9. 01:36:184 (8,1) - This stream jump is a big mistake. keep the circle here, since the jump is no that large
    For those stream jumps, try replacing each (7,8) with a slider at (7) instead. Sliders make stream jumps easier.
    I'd prefer if you just make them closer so it's a regular long stream.
  10. 01:55:995 (2,1) - This jump is too big.decreased the spacing
Thanks 2 BATs and farto

http://puu.sh/A1HJ
threenash
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threenash
  1. Added 31's Taiko. Thanks Mapper 31!
  2. Mod for Standard applied with Quilt's permission
  3. Hyper updated
  4. Extra updated
SPOILER

Kurai wrote:

[Beginner]
  1. 01:30:167 (2) - Ajoute un clap sur le reverse, tu en as ajouté un à chaque fois sauf là, ça fait zarb.. fix'd
  2. 01:35:301 (2) - ^ fix'd
  3. 01:51:664 (1,2) - Change pas si soudainement de rythme, ça peut surprendre le joueur. Dans les easy faut toujours garder un rythme constant pour cette raison, donc vire un reverse sur chacun de ces sliders. fix'd
[Another]
  1. 00:08:348 (1,2,3) - Un aussi grand jump ne va pas bien pour une partie si calme, réduit le.
  2. 00:08:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  3. 00:12:841 (1) - Remonte le un peu au dessus, je le trouve trop loins de la précédente note. fix'd
  4. 00:37:225 (1,2,3) - Le triple ne devrait pas ce trouver là mais à 00:37:466. fix'd
  5. 00:48:375 - Tu devrais continuer à avoir un triple comme précédemment sinon c'est comme si quelque chose manquait. Sinon j'aime pas ce changement de spacing avec 00:47:814 (2,3,4,5,6,7), ça ne me semble pas approprié du tout. De plus pourquoi avoir un changement spacing ici et pas ailleurs, si tu en met un ici, il doit y avoir la même chose aux endroit similaire sinon ça n'a pas de sens, bien entendu ce spacing est une mauvaise idée donc utilise le même spacing qu'aux endroits identique. spacing fix'd
  6. 01:07:386 (3,4,5,6,7) - Pourquoi tu mets ce pattern sous le précédent ? C'est nul et moche. fix'd
  7. 01:15:728 jusqu'à 01:25:996 - Non, pourquoi soudainement un spacing immense sur une partie à peu près calme ? De un c'est pas très logique et de deux ça va pas du tout ...
  8. 01:51:664 jusqu'à 01:54:231 - ... euh, je sais pas quoi dire à part que ça se joue terriblement mal, que c'est ridiculement difficile à jouer, correspond pas du tout avec le reste de la map et que c'est horriblement laid.. hm fix'd
  9. 01:54:552 (5,1) - Bon j'vais pas te faire un dessin, mais 1/4 jump sur du 187 BPM, lolno.
  10. 01:55:515 (1) - Ce spinner est beaucoup trop petit, même 700 ms quoi ... la taille minimum c'est 750 ms sinon c'est trop surprenant et injouable fix'd

Charles445 wrote:

Beginner
  1. 01:51:664 (1,2) - Short multiple repeat sliders like these are extremely hard to read for beginner players. The reason they are is because the second repeat has to be guessed. Since these are the only double repeats in the map, these are unexpected. Change them into single sliders. fix'd
Another
  1. Because of how you new comboed the map, there are spots where there are huge drain sections like from 00:55:354 to 01:36:183 (40 seconds long of insane drain). You should either go through the map and have more consistent new combos or drop the HP drain by 1. Fix'd nc's consistency
  2. 00:55:033 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - A spaced out stream followed by compressed 1/2 is extremely, EXTREMELY hard to read (and unnecessarily so). For this section, space 1/2 out so the objects are either fully stacked or not touching each other at all. fix'd
  3. 01:37:385 (1) - This slider is unsnapped by 2 ms, just move it around on the timeline to fix it. fix'd
  4. 01:51:664 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is overkill. It's way harder than the rest of the difficulty. Make it all closer together. fix'd (x0,8 spacing in each combo)
  5. 01:55:515 (1) - End this spinner at 01:56:477 instead. Where it stops now sounds awkward, and makes the spinner really short. fix'd
Weew getting 2 BATs at the same time was an unexpected thing :o. Anyway, applied almost everything for my difficulties. I hope map is better now. Thanks for your mods guys! :D
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galvenize
919 posts
Joined June 2010
galvenize

Kanna wrote:

Weew getting 2 BATs at the same time was an unexpected thing :o. Anyway, applied almost everything for my difficulties. I hope map is better now. Thanks for your mods guys! :D
threenash
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Topic Starter
threenash
bleh
Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
I agree with the harsh jump mentioned by Charles on the Extra diff, while they are playable it's more of a tedious jumps rather than a fun one. I really suggest to consider to decrease the jump or if it's possible, use another pattern. While your at it, maybe decrease the distance of 01:56:477 (1) too? cause after the 1/4 jump it's quite harsh for the player to aim at the close spaced stream

Also, might as well use 1 tick slider on Another diff, as the only places that actually have slider tick are 00:24:873 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) and other similar places which doesn't give any noticeable sound, it also make the slider to be very harsh
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs

Sallad4ever wrote:

I agree with the harsh jump mentioned by Charles on the Extra diff, while they are playable it's more of a tedious jumps rather than a fun one. I really suggest to consider to decrease the jump or if it's possible, use another pattern. While your at it, maybe decrease the distance of 01:56:477 (1) too? cause after the 1/4 jump it's quite harsh for the player to aim at the close spaced stream

fixed the pattern and reduced spacing

http://puu.sh/A7sE

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http://puu.sh/A7tB old pattern
http://puu.sh/A7ui new pattern
threenash
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Topic Starter
threenash
  1. Extra updated
  2. Used 1 tick slider on Another difficulty
Thanks Sallad! :)
lepidopodus
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Joined November 2009
lepidopodus
31's Taiko
- Generally nice map. Just some suggestions.
- Timing section in 3777: First few fast-passing barlines might be annoying. Move this to 7. (Yeah, same time with the sole uninherited section in this map.)
00:05:942 (12) - d? Compared with kkddkkdd pattern in right next to this.
00:08:028 (25) - d?
00:10:916 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47) - kddkkkdk?
00:14:124 (53) ~ 00:23:108 (123) - Pattern itself is nice. Lowering volume a bit? How about HS 0.75 or 0.66?
00:22:948 (121,122,123) - Just suggestion, how about kdk?
00:37:707 (240,241,242,243,244,245,246) - Consider using some other patterns than kkdkddk here. This kiai part can be decided in to 4 divisions which contains 4 measures and to maintain good compositions, using kkdkddk and kkdkd(may be optional) only in 1st, 2nd measures in each division would be better.
00:44:926 (308), 00:46:210 (319), 00:47:493 (332), 00:48:777 (343) - k?
00:54:632 (395) - remove?
01:15:087 (570,571,572,573,574) - Overlapping notes like this isn't looking so good, but well, choice is yours.
01:25:996 (629) ~ 01:33:696 (687) - How about HS 0.75 or 0.66? Just a suggestion as always.
01:33:696 (687,688,689,690,691,692,693,694) - Since this is mere 'd d d d d d d d', how about gradual speed up, if you followed my advice in right above? Or just set HS to some value in middle of 0.66 or 0.75 and 1.00. (영어를 이해 못할까봐 적자면, 그 노트 하나씩 속도 올리는거 있지 않습니까, 뭐 속도 차이는 적어서 많이 티가 나지는 않겠지만... 아니면 그냥 0.66 또는 0.75와 1.00 사이의 중간값을 쓰던가.)
01:34:980 (695) ~ 01:36:183 (710) - Just to mention, I guess keeping this as HS 1.0 might be better due to 01:36:263 (711) if you followed my suggestion above.
01:46:450 (807), 01:56:718 (912) - Pitch is going up, so how about k?
01:56:798 (913) - Lower volume from here? If you can drop HS in here that might be good, with stream right before this one blocks that, I guess.

Nice map. Have a star. (Star might not worth cause there are already so many MATs and BATs in here, but I think the map is nice, so I couldn't resist, lol.)
31은 이해 안되면 문의합니다.
threenash
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Topic Starter
threenash
Thanks for Taiko mod, lepi! I appreciate your star :)
rickyboi
839 posts
Joined October 2008
rickyboi
This map needs more stars. You can have mine.

GO FOR RANK!
Drafura
osu! Alumni
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Drafura

Kurai wrote:

[Drafura's CtB Platter]
  1. 00:48:135 (2) - J'aime pas cet hyperdash, ça va pas avec ce qu'il y a avant de un mais je sais pas, je trouve pas non plus qu'il ai lieu d'être. Tu devrais p'tet suivre le même schéma que précédemment. Fix'd
  2. 01:49:258 (1,2,3,4) - Ce pattern casse le flow je trouve, ce serait pas mieux de faire un truc du genre à la place ? :
    SPOILER
    Fix'd (avec une position un peu différente, plus sexy je trouve, mais dans le même ordre d'idée)
  3. 01:56:638 (12) - Pour mettre plus l'accent sur la fin, je te propose de plutôt transformer ce slider en deux cercle avec un assez grand jump entre eux. Ok mais j'ai gardé un slider pour pas casser la gueule du pattern (slider 2x)
@Kanna : http://puu.sh/AgAi
threenash
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Topic Starter
threenash
  1. Platter updated
yay thanks for star ricky!! :D you're now a part of the map too lool
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
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wmfchris
- tag mapper_31

[Taiko]
- remove letterbox during breaks
- imo the drum sound is pretty loud and covered the song. try -10%
00:08:028 - you mapped according to the melody so d here.
00:22:948 - kdk?
01:56:798 - I wonder why this section is not slowed down

that's all for me. The patterns might be complicated but briefly fit the song imo. Remember to check lepi's mod too.
threenash
1,043 posts
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Topic Starter
threenash
  1. Added to tags: Mapper_31
  2. Removed Letterbox during breaks in Taiko for Mapper 31
Thanks for Taiko mod Wmf!
Now waiting for Mapper 31's reply :)
arien666
6,312 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[31's Taiko]
01:15:648 - I suggest to change this HS into 0.8. It would be better to read notes between HS change point
01:56:798 - As wmfchris said, I wonder why this part's HS is still x1... Try to change into 0.8~0.9 ?



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threenash
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threenash
What Denied kudosu whereas I've done nothing yet lol
Anyway thanks for mod! Waiting for Mapper 31 ;_;
Mapper 31
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Mapper 31
well i don't remember what i changed
http://puu.sh/C41P
threenash
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threenash
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soulfear
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soulfear
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