1. Extra and Beginner diffs have another preview point. Snap it properly

1. 00:37:226 (1) - you missed whistle
2. 01:00:327 (1,2,3,4) - make a better square and stack 01:02:253 (4) - with 00:59:686 (6) - properly (nazi)
3. 01:07:386 (4) - spacing, move little further from (3) as it is inconsistent with 01:05:461 (1,2) -
4. 01:13:162 (1,2,3,4) - quite hard to read. Newbies could think that slider 01:14:766 (4) - is earlier than 01:14:445 (3) - . Make something like this:
   
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5. 01:14:766 (4,1) - this is jump? Move it closer to each other D:

• OD - 1

1. 00:16:691 (1,2,3,4) - strange rhythm D: Make 1/1 sliders:
   
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   or triplets:
   
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2. 00:21:825 (5,1,2) - maybe stack them? or move (1,2) further
3. 00:24:392 - I suggest you to put clap every second beat in the part with kiai:
   
   1. 00:24:712 (2) -
   2. 00:25:033 (3) - on reverse
   3. 00:25:996 (4) - on the beginning and end
   4. 00:27:279 (2) - and so on
4. 00:43:322 (7) - put nc here and remove from 00:44:605 (1) - . Because it's not on downbeat and looks bad.
5. 00:53:910 (1) - change clap to finish
6. 00:55:835 - put claps on this part as you have claps here: 01:06:424 -
7. 01:04:498 (1) - You missed finish in downbeat! Oh you! Remove repeat and add a note with finish:
   
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8. 01:10:274 (1,2,3) - looks bad. Try this:
   
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9. 01:28:884 (4,5,6,7) - bad bad rhythm :< Make this, please:
   
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10. 01:35:942 (x) - add a note stacked with 01:35:621 (6,1) -
11. And again, you have BAD claps in the kiai part. Put it on every second beat, please.
12. 01:51:664 (1) - finish instead of clap
13. 01:52:948 (3) - ^
14. 01:54:231 (1) - ^
15. 01:55:835 (2) - ^

• You have a big gap between Normal and Hyper. Try to make it easier. Use less 1/2 rhythm and less streams and jumps.

1. 00:12:520 (6,7,8) - they are hidden. Move them somewhere else D:
   
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   meh.
2. 00:26:317 (4,5,6) - what? No D: Try this:
   
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3. 00:31:450 (8,9,10,11) - Bad idea, but you have many many such rhythms. Try to change them, please. It's too hard. I won't point out each moment but if you're going to fix them, go through the whole diff.
4. 00:36:263 (2,3) - how to read them? They are hidden!
5. 01:04:338 (5,6,7,8,9) - streams are bad idea D:
6. 01:36:263 (1) - hidden slider. Try to stack it with the beginning of 01:35:301 (2) -
7. 01:52:627 (4,1) - It touche the HP bar. Rearrange the pattern to move it down.

1. 00:06:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I don't like how you used antijumps. This is inconsistent and doesn't fit. Make normal spacing, please
2. 00:08:348 (1,2,3,4) - maybe make a square?
3. 00:14:124 (1,2) - after your antijumps I thought it is 1/2. I don't feel such 1/4 rhythm and suggest you to change it.
4. 00:29:365 (6) - stack it with 00:28:883 (3) - . It is hardly visible.
5. 00:32:734 (3,4) - ctrl+r them for better flow. And move 00:33:054 (5) - like in this picture (as it hardly visible):
   
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6. 00:38:028 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - I really don't like how they are arranged. (1,2) are hidden. Maybe something like this:
   
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7. 00:47:974 (3,4) - I would better to make jump between them, like:
   
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8. 00:53:108 (3,4) - ^
9. 00:55:033 (9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same distance between them, but first are 1/4 and second are 1/2. BAD thing D: Make normal spacing, please
10. 00:59:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
11. 01:09:472 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ bad spacing between 3,4,5
12. 01:25:996 (1,2,3,4) - make equal spacing? D:
13. 01:31:129 (1,2,3,4) - ^
14. 01:55:515 (1) - too short and unrankable. Extend to 01:56:638 - or remove it and map this part

• HP and OD +1

1. 00:06:744 (3,4) - ctrl+r to better flow
2. 00:07:386 (3,4) - ^
   
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   ULTRAFLOW!
3. 00:11:076 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - where_should_I_tap_mode D: Maybe make some patterns as earlier. For example stack 1,2 and 3,4 and let them make a square
   
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4. 00:12:841 (1,2,3,4,5) - remove one repeat from all sliders to make a 1/4 beat between them
   
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5. 00:31:771 (9) - this slider is hidden by the hitbirsts :< How about this:
   
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6. 00:51:985 (2,3,4,5,6) - make star jumps? 00:52:146 (3,4) - ctrl+r them :O
7. 01:23:269 (1) - Too fast! Make it slower, because it's unreadable (but I likeeee it)
8. 01:29:365 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you must rearrange them. They are inreadable, hidden and make no sence D:
   
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   and don't forget to put new combo on 01:29:846 (6) -, remove from 01:30:167 (1) - and put on 01:30:488 (3) -
9. 01:43:643 (9) - again as in 00:31:771 (9) -
   
   SO AWESOME DIFF! *______________*

1. Recommend to add a silent sliderslide to your mapset~
   Click here to download sliderslide.wav

1. 01:15:408 - i'd like to add a note here:)
2. 01:45:888 (4) - change it to a slider to 01:46:210 - ?

1. 00:13:482 (3) - try to separate it to a slider and then note? for the downbeat start a new chorum , a note at 00:14:124 - with NC may be better
2. 00:20:541 (3) - the clap is heard weird a bit..remove it?if u choose so i suppose add a whistle at 00:20:220 (2) - could be better~
3. 00:31:771 (4) - also recommend to separate to two notes for downbeat
4. 01:33:055 (3) - i suppose mat may issue this slider because of slider overlap.....

1. 00:39:472 (3,4) - i suppose make a rectangle with (1,2) is better?

1. 00:06:263 (10) - stack with (3) may be better?
2. 00:14:204 (2) - i suppose it should be on 00:14:285 - ... or add a note ...and similar patterns until 00:23:750 - ...i should say it's a good design but i'd like to follow the piano as well...
3. 00:34:739 (2,3) - move to next red line and stack with (4) to make a triplet there? heard more smooth
4. 00:37:306 (2,3) - ^
5. 00:45:969 (8,9) - ^
6. 00:47:413 - i'd like to add a note here to make a stream with 00:47:493 (1) -
7. 00:55:514 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - try to make them to three groups then two notes for each? i suppose it's more fit for the music
8. 01:00:808 (2,3) - swap position for better flow?
9. 01:27:119 (2) - i suppose a note here may be better?
10. 01:39:873 (8,9) - more triplet issue >.<
11. 01:45:006 (6,7) - ^
12. 01:48:857 (7,8) - ^
13. 01:55:515 (1) - it's really toooooo short T^T
14. 02:04:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - four notes for each part?

1. 00:14:686 - try this beat?
   
2. 00:16:049 - add a note here and change 00:16:210 (3) - to two notes? i suppose 4 notes from here to 00:16:531 (4) - may be better
3. 00:17:333 - add a note here?
4. 01:01:611 (2) - move clap to end?
5. 01:52:146 (4) - remove finish?

galvenize wrote:

mdr

Kanna wrote:

What's so hilarious, galvenize?

1. check Letterbox in Breaks in Standard diff

1. Great

1. 00:10:916 (1) - remove NC to keep your combo rhythm
2. 00:26:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i don't want to recommend to stack in Normal diff, maybe replace with 1/2 sliders?
3. 00:33:375 (1) - same as 00:10:916 (1) - , start combo from 00:34:980 (2) -
4. 00:41:397 (3,5,2) - don't change clap pattern, it's pretty weird
5. 00:55:835 - ~ plz use clap reguraly
6. 01:15:408 - clap here
7. 01:15:728 - add a circle here with finish
8. 01:25:996 - you'd better shorten your combo rhythm, because of 01:34:017 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and 01:51:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , you don't need to finish your combo at 6 or 8 or so, try shortening combos like 01:31:129 (1,2,3) -
9. 01:46:210 (8) - clap
10. 01:51:664 - ~ can't hear the finish sound, and i'd add claps this part too

1. 00:05:301 (2) - noisy and doesn't fit with music imo, reduce the arrow?
2. 00:08:349 (1,2,3,4,1) - i don't want to recommend to use this pattern, because it's pretty hard to play :/ how about a pentagon shape?
3. 00:10:755 (4) - same as 00:05:301 (2) -, delete?
4. 00:12:199 (4) - NC due to jump
5. 00:31:450 (3,4,5,6) - a bit hard to play imo, how about 3 1 instead 2 2
6. 00:36:584 (3,4,5,6) - ^ and 4 circles and 1 slider will be good as well imo
7. 00:44:285 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about make a pentagon or star shape with the 5 beats?
8. 01:16:210 (3) - curve more or delete 2nd tick
9. 01:52:948 (1) - ctrl+r due to the distance and to be more playable

1. 00:55:514 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - anti-jump is not good idea here because of 00:55:033 (9,10,1) -
2. 01:25:996 (1,2,3,4) - it may be read as 1/4 beats, use 0.4x or 0.8x
3. 01:51:664 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - not good, unless it's a hardest diff, i'd reduce distance
4. 01:56:798 (1) - NC bug, NC here due to after spinner
5. 01:59:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - how about stack each 2 circles
6. 02:05:461 (7,8,9) - replace with 1/2 slider with 1 arrow?

1. 00:07:386 (3,4) - ctrl+r will be more playable and soft movement
2. 00:27:921 (7,8) - too sharp! orz
3. 00:29:205 (7,8) - ^
4. 01:34:338 (1,1,1) - 3.7x in 1/4 beat is too hard imo, how about using 3.0x
5. 01:56:878 - spinner from here to 01:59:365 - with 10% soft hitsound?

tags wrote:

of fighters

Normal - Quilt
Hyper - galvenize
Extra - LKs

1. Why you don't map the last part? It's done in Another...
2. Order fix: Extra is supposed to be the harder one... right? so HP+1 and OD+1, Another is ... well another X-Insane, but seem a bit easier so... HP+1 OR OD+1. Hyper is already toned down in settings.... Guess why the algorithm consider it harder...

1. Really nothing to say. Only that I'd use long slider too, but there are no errors

1. I don't quite like the fact most slider/circle mix is random there. there are some circle that do follow the music well
   Download: Xelia (Archlade) - Illumiscape (Kanna) [Standard (Mod)].osu
2. So... yeah... I'm suggesting you to recontrol your sliders and use 1/2 sometime.

1. [Rhythm]
   
   1. 00:14:686 (4) - Some place are undermapped, so I'll like to not see overmaps ._.
   2. 00:31:450 (3,4,5,6) - Such patterns in such parts play badder than bad if used in parts without sense. A simple stream was not better? (substitute with a stream all times you use this pattern)
   3. 01:50:381 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - As you repeated 01:46:531 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ... why you don't repeat 01:48:937 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - too?
   4. 01:56:638 (4,5) - Ctrl + R ? 01:56:477 (3,4) as a jump is legit as you have a jump in the pitch :3

1. [Graphic]
   
   1. 00:04:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Order the pattern better
      
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   2. I know it's an Another, but that DOESN'T mean you can jump or antijump like crazy without jumps having sense, and even them being hidden (nosense+hidden=impossible to play). But a better Ordering can correct that (Example). Try too to control pitches of the piano notes too. You can make something really fun to play if you jump when there is a jump in the pitch. You DID use part i REALLY like (example 00:24:873 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1), i like how those plays :3)

1. It's too much to even be modded by me. though the real problems are like overmapping, some jumps feeling random and so. And this with Another would have been considered for Approval time ago.

1. Asked Inamaru for some suggestions about the diff: He did actually like it and suggested to use AR8 and CS5(to balance)

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

Why you don't map the last part? It's done in Another...

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Extra]

1. It's too much to even be modded by me. though the real problems are like overmapping, some jumps feeling random and so. And this with Another would have been considered for Approval time ago.

Kanna wrote:

Ah no problem!
Thanks anyway~

arien666 wrote:

[Drafura's CtB Insane]
00:06:424 (11,1) - Swap new combo Not apllying for now, (irc discution) gonna post on rule/guideline thread to see what to do about that.
00:08:990 (5) - As the melody changes from this note, why don't you add hyperdash on 00:08:830 (4) :3? Cause i'm a baka, fix'd
00:11:558 (11,1) - Swap new combo Not apllying for now, (irc discution) gonna post on rule/guideline thread to see what to do about that.
00:13:162 - Delete this break manually Fix'd
00:19:258 (19,1) - [Suggestion] Like 00:08:990 (5), why don't you add hyperdash on former note :3? If do, swap new combo too :3 Same sad reason xD Fix'd, but didn't swapped combo.
00:21:825 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:23:429 - Also, delete this break manually Fix'd
00:44:445 (8,9,10) - As [Platter], this tech would be broken if user didn't catch first red note ;_; But I don't know about other ways about this orz I don't reject it, since your not the first one mentionning this pattern. I'll try to find something good for this part.
01:29:846 (7,8) - This distance seems like hyperdash-able distance but hard to catch them with normal speed orz, make little farther? Fix'd
01:56:751 - [Suggestion] Move this green line into 01:56:758 :3? Hmmmm, going to talk about that in rules/guideline thread, since you can't hit a note after the timing section it's certainly a good idea to stack all timing section to the right tick for audio changes.



Sorry for late modding ;___; Thank you for modding *.*

arien666 wrote:

[General]


[Extra]
00:13:001 (2,3,4,5) - ??? What's these sliders? just several 1/8 sliders, with 1/4 breaks linking them
00:24:071 (3) - Seriously, moving that distance within 41ms would be very hard. Why don't you reduce 1 return? I think it's ok, as you can see in the pic the last repeat of the slider directs to the note so the movement will be guided (Make end point on 00:24:311 :3)

1. 01:30:167 (2) - Ajoute un clap sur le reverse, tu en as ajouté un à chaque fois sauf là, ça fait zarb..
2. 01:35:301 (2) - ^
3. 01:51:664 (1,2) - Change pas si soudainement de rythme, ça peut surprendre le joueur. Dans les easy faut toujours garder un rythme constant pour cette raison, donc vire un reverse sur chacun de ces sliders.

1. 01:28:884 (4) - You should consider adding a new combo there, for consistency with 01:34:017 (1) and because it's quite needed.
   

1. 00:12:680 (7,8) - J'aime pas la façon dont ces 2 cercle reviennent à un endroit qui vient juste d'être mappé. Ca les cache sous des hitbursts ce qui n'est pas super joli et beaucoup moins lisible. Ca va beaucoup mieux de les placer comme ça pour moi :
   
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2. 00:14:686 (4) - Je vois pas pourquoi tu fais un triple ici, du moins je sais, ça suit quelque chose dans la musique, mais ce que je trouve étrange c'est que au autres endroits similaires tels que 00:15:969 ou encore 00:16:611 tu n'as pas mis de triples. Je vois donc pas il devrait y en avoir un ici.
3. 01:47:172 (3,4,5,6) - J'aime pas vraiment ce pattern, les cercles sont tout compressés ce qui ne va pas avec les patterns précédent qui sont assez aérés. Là ça fait bizarr.e :/
4. 01:48:455 (3,4,5,6,2) - ^

1. 00:08:348 (1,2,3) - Un aussi grand jump ne va pas bien pour une partie si calme, réduit le.
2. 00:08:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
3. 00:12:841 (1) - Remonte le un peu au dessus, je le trouve trop loins de la précédente note.
4. 00:37:225 (1,2,3) - Le triple ne devrait pas ce trouver là mais à 00:37:466.
5. 00:48:375 - Tu devrais continuer à avoir un triple comme précédemment sinon c'est comme si quelque chose manquait. Sinon j'aime pas ce changement de spacing avec 00:47:814 (2,3,4,5,6,7), ça ne me semble pas approprié du tout. De plus pourquoi avoir un changement spacing ici et pas ailleurs, si tu en met un ici, il doit y avoir la même chose aux endroit similaire sinon ça n'a pas de sens, bien entendu ce spacing est une mauvaise idée donc utilise le même spacing qu'aux endroits identique.
6. 01:07:386 (3,4,5,6,7) - Pourquoi tu mets ce pattern sous le précédent ? C'est nul et moche.
7. 01:15:728 jusqu'à 01:25:996 - Non, pourquoi soudainement un spacing immense sur une partie à peu près calme ? De un c'est pas très logique et de deux ça va pas du tout ...
8. 01:51:664 jusqu'à 01:54:231 - ... euh, je sais pas quoi dire à part que ça se joue terriblement mal, que c'est ridiculement difficile à jouer, correspond pas du tout avec le reste de la map et que c'est horriblement laid..
9. 01:54:552 (5,1) - Bon j'vais pas te faire un dessin, mais 1/4 jump sur du 187 BPM, lolno.
10. 01:55:515 (1) - Ce spinner est beaucoup trop petit, même 700 ms quoi ... la taille minimum c'est 750 ms sinon c'est trop surprenant et injouable.

1. 00:10:595 (4) - Why does this slider ends on a blue tick which follows nothing when there is a piano note at 00:10:755 that should be followed ?
2. 01:34:258 (8,1) - Don't use 1/4 jumps please, that's just ridiculous ...
3. 01:34:900 (8,1) - ^
4. 01:35:542 (8,1) - ^
5. 01:55:675 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^

1. 00:48:135 (2) - J'aime pas cet hyperdash, ça va pas avec ce qu'il y a avant de un mais je sais pas, je trouve pas non plus qu'il ai lieu d'être. Tu devrais p'tet suivre le même schéma que précédemment.
2. 01:49:258 (1,2,3,4) - Ce pattern casse le flow je trouve, ce serait pas mieux de faire un truc du genre à la place ? :
   
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3. 01:56:638 (12) - Pour mettre plus l'accent sur la fin, je te propose de plutôt transformer ce slider en deux cercle avec un assez grand jump entre eux.

1. 01:51:664 (1,2) - Short multiple repeat sliders like these are extremely hard to read for beginner players. The reason they are is because the second repeat has to be guessed. Since these are the only double repeats in the map, these are unexpected. Change them into single sliders.

1. Because of how you new comboed the map, there are spots where there are huge drain sections like from 00:55:354 to 01:36:183 (40 seconds long of insane drain). You should either go through the map and have more consistent new combos or drop the HP drain by 1.
2. 00:55:033 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - A spaced out stream followed by compressed 1/2 is extremely, EXTREMELY hard to read (and unnecessarily so). For this section, space 1/2 out so the objects are either fully stacked or not touching each other at all.
3. 01:37:385 (1) - This slider is unsnapped by 2 ms, just move it around on the timeline to fix it.
4. 01:51:664 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is overkill. It's way harder than the rest of the difficulty. Make it all closer together.
5. 01:55:515 (1) - End this spinner at 01:56:477 instead. Where it stops now sounds awkward, and makes the spinner really short.

• 
  Since I can't evaluate this difficulty myself because I'm not an insane uber pro, I got an insane uber pro, fartownik, to help me out.
  Italicized things are suggestions by fartownik. Otherwise it's by me.

1. 00:13:001 (2,3,4,5) - Overmapped.
2. 00:23:750 (2,3) - Overmapped. Overmapped, plays okay.
3. 00:26:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps are really harsh.
4. 00:28:242 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps are really harsh.
5. 00:32:092 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These jumps are also really harsh.
6. 01:34:258 (8,1) - This stream jump is a big mistake.
7. 01:34:900 (8,1) - This stream jump is a big mistake.
8. 01:35:542 (8,1) - This stream jump is a big mistake.
9. 01:36:184 (8,1) - This stream jump is a big mistake.
   For those stream jumps, try replacing each (7,8) with a slider at (7) instead. Sliders make stream jumps easier.
   I'd prefer if you just make them closer so it's a regular long stream.
10. 01:55:995 (2,1) - This jump is too big.

Kurai wrote:

[Hyper]

[*]00:14:686 (4) - Je vois pas pourquoi tu fais un triple ici, du moins je sais, ça suit quelque chose dans la musique, mais ce que je trouve étrange c'est que au autres endroits similaires tels que 00:15:969 ou encore 00:16:611 tu n'as pas mis de triples. Je vois donc pas il devrait y en avoir un ici.

Kurai wrote:

[Extra]

1. 00:10:595 (4) - Why does this slider ends on a blue tick which follows nothing when there is a piano note at 00:10:755 that should be followed ? fixed
2. 01:34:258 (8,1) - Don't use 1/4 jumps please, that's just ridiculous ... yes I think so. fixed by charles' suggestion
3. 01:34:900 (8,1) - ^
4. 01:35:542 (8,1) - ^
5. 01:55:675 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^ see my reply below (charles's mod)

[/list]

Charles445 wrote:

Extra

• 
  Since I can't evaluate this difficulty myself because I'm not an insane uber pro, I got an insane uber pro, fartownik, to help me out.
  Italicized things are suggestions by fartownik. Otherwise it's by me.

1. 00:13:001 (2,3,4,5) - Overmapped. changed to 1/4 sliders
2. 00:23:750 (2,3) - Overmapped. Overmapped, plays okay. 1/8 isn't overmapped here, keep
3. 00:26:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps are really harsh. if all people against this, I will change, but I still wanna see is it a necessary to make the change
4. 00:28:242 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps are really harsh.
5. 00:32:092 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These jumps are also really harsh. this one is much easier imo
6. 01:34:258 (8,1) - This stream jump is a big mistake. fixed
7. 01:34:900 (8,1) - This stream jump is a big mistake.
8. 01:35:542 (8,1) - This stream jump is a big mistake.
9. 01:36:184 (8,1) - This stream jump is a big mistake. keep the circle here, since the jump is no that large
   For those stream jumps, try replacing each (7,8) with a slider at (7) instead. Sliders make stream jumps easier.
   I'd prefer if you just make them closer so it's a regular long stream.
10. 01:55:995 (2,1) - This jump is too big.decreased the spacing

1. Added 31's Taiko. Thanks Mapper 31!
2. Mod for Standard applied with Quilt's permission
3. Hyper updated
4. Extra updated

Kanna wrote:

Weew getting 2 BATs at the same time was an unexpected thing . Anyway, applied almost everything for my difficulties. I hope map is better now. Thanks for your mods guys!

Sallad4ever wrote:

I agree with the harsh jump mentioned by Charles on the Extra diff, while they are playable it's more of a tedious jumps rather than a fun one. I really suggest to consider to decrease the jump or if it's possible, use another pattern. While your at it, maybe decrease the distance of 01:56:477 (1) too? cause after the 1/4 jump it's quite harsh for the player to aim at the close spaced stream

1. Extra updated
2. Used 1 tick slider on Another difficulty

Kurai wrote:

[Drafura's CtB Platter]

1. 00:48:135 (2) - J'aime pas cet hyperdash, ça va pas avec ce qu'il y a avant de un mais je sais pas, je trouve pas non plus qu'il ai lieu d'être. Tu devrais p'tet suivre le même schéma que précédemment. Fix'd
2. 01:49:258 (1,2,3,4) - Ce pattern casse le flow je trouve, ce serait pas mieux de faire un truc du genre à la place ? :
   
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   Fix'd (avec une position un peu différente, plus sexy je trouve, mais dans le même ordre d'idée)
3. 01:56:638 (12) - Pour mettre plus l'accent sur la fin, je te propose de plutôt transformer ce slider en deux cercle avec un assez grand jump entre eux. Ok mais j'ai gardé un slider pour pas casser la gueule du pattern (slider 2x)

1. Platter updated