[General]
consider adding muted slider slide, it's really noisy especially in the beginning of song.
difficulty gap between Standard and Hyper is too huge, you may have to make Standard harder and Hyper easier
[Beginner]
00:05:140 (2,3,4) - these finishes are too much and overused imo, try to add some whistles instead
00:10:273 (2,3,4) - ^ same
00:14:124 - you should use higher volume than previous one
00:23:108 (4) - straight slider looks nice here because in this combo you didnt use any curved slider
[Standard]
00:00:007 - Kiaiと同じ音量はいくらなんでも大きいです、-20%くらいを推奨
00:06:103 (4) - ちょっとコンボが長いのでこのへんで切っておきましょう
00:09:953 (4) - 終点whistle
00:13:482 (3) - clapはここには合わないかと
00:19:258 (1,2,3,4,5) - clapの付け方を統一した方がいいかな なんなら1番目と3番目の白線両方に置いちゃってもいいかと
00:29:525 - ここ以降downbeatだけにclapつけるrogicじゃやや寂しいので3番目の白線にも。
00:37:226 (5) - newcombo追加
01:02:894 (5) - ^
01:05:461 (7,1) - newcombo入れ替え
01:15:728 (1) - うーん、このspinner本当に必要ですか?長いしあんまり要らないと思うんですが..
noteに置き換えてそのままBreakでも良いと思います
01:39:151 (4,5,6) - もうちょっとキレイにおけるかと、中心のnoteのアプローチサークルに合わせると上手く置けます。
http://puu.sh/x5kC全体的にclapの置き方に統一感が無くて残念な感じが出てます
それとこのdiffが簡単すぎてHyperとのバランスがかなり悪いので
Note増やしてもっとコンスタントにclap置いていく方針の方が良いかと~
[Extra]
00:44:926 (1) - add finish
[Another]
00:39:632 (8,1) - i think you can use larger spacing (1.6x is better to me) for them, but maybe its just me
00:45:969 (8) - i prefer deleting this note and adding note at 00:46:129 - instead to follow music better
00:47:092 - add note?
00:54:070 (2,3,4,5,6) - this stream can be more beautiful imo
01:15:408 - add note
01:45:889 (3,4,5,6) - pitch is getting higher step by step, so how about increasing the spacing step by step as well? just suggestion
01:46:370 (6,1) - i just wonder why you didnt use higher spacing for them. it's a good place to use higher spacing because there's stress in music
[Hyper]
01:56:638 (4) - stack it under 01:55:835 (3) - perfectly
hmm i mostly dislike such a crazy map but Another diff is really nice, i like it!
good luck!