1. 31's Taiko (4,83 stars, 949 notes)
2. Another (5 stars, 612 notes)
3. Beginner (2,09 stars, 119 notes)
4. Drafura's CtB Platter (5 stars, 443 notes)
5. Extra (4,84 stars, 670 notes)
6. Hyper (4,92 stars, 436 notes)
7. Standard (3,51 stars, 145 notes)

Historical

01/31 | Another completed
04/23 | Extra completed
04/24 | Drafura's CtB Insane completed
04/25 | ZHSteven's mod
04/27 | Hyper completed
05/14 | Normal completed
05/16 | Beginner completed ; Hyper's hitsound-work completed ; Moved to Pending Beatmaps
05/18 | ErufenRito's mod
05/19 | Regou's mod ; Niva's mod
05/20 | [CSGA]Ar3sgice's mod ; Mythol's mod ; LKs become MAT. wow!!
05/21 | Jupiter's mod
05/22 | Normal → Standard ; Philippines's mod ; Reiji-RJ's mod ; [Ryuu]'s mod
05/23 | Byakugan249's mod ; Jebok's mod
05/24 | x847606653's mod
05/25 | Scorpiour's mod
05/26 | Leorda's mod ; bbj0920's mod
05/27 | Melophobia's mod
05/28 | MMzz's mod ; ouranhshc胖胖's mod ; Star Stream's mod ; Muya's mod
05/29 | AoiX's mod ; Kawayi Rika's mod ; spboxer3's mod
05/31 | HakuNoKaemi's mod
06/08 | Drafura's CtB Insane → Drafura's CtB Platter ; arken1015's mod ; Bubbled! (wcx19911123)
06/10 | Bubble popped ; 31's Taiko completed ; Kurai's mod ; Charles445's mod
06/11 | Sallad4ever's mod ; lepidopodus's mod
06/17 | wmfchris's mod
06/18 | arken1015's mod
06/24 | Charles445's mod
07/07 | Kurai's mod
07/08 | Charles445's mod
08/14 | Bubbled! (Charles445)
08/17 | RANKED by Kurai! <3

Kanna wrote:

Sorry someone is already working on it now ;.;

LKs wrote:

http://puu.sh/r4q3

ha, I can't say it's unique :3

anyway, for fun :3

ZHSteven wrote:

Mod for CTB diff:

After I run through this diff, I Think your mapping skill is really better and better.

really a smooth diff, and jumping idea is great~

00:08:983 (5) - I think hyper here will be better. It is here *.*
00:10:748 (6) - [nazi] place this note here better: Fix'd, I love it. I've rearranged (7), (8) to reduce a bit the jump making it smoother to play.

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00:12:834 (8) - this note I think whether you put nearer or create a hyper. This spacing for this note is eggpain... I pick the hyper but reduced a bit the spacing between (6) and (7) to don't hurry much the player and stupidly miss (6).

OK next part is adding note: not sure you will like it but, try sth different~
00:14:999 -, 00:16:283 -, Ok, + redesign pattern to avoid pixel jumps
00:18:529 - , 00:18:850 -, Ok, i've picked dashed triplets
00:22:379 - Ok, redesign last pattern to a jump increase (better looking)
I like those triples~ Me too

00:24:385 (1,2,3,4) - introduce to you a more interesting pattern~~ see the picture:

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It is how a moving slider is made. Hope you like it. I like the idea, applied to (4) too http://puu.sh/rsnZ, following the main idea and aplying for the same kind of patterns in the whole song.
00:26:149 (6) - Ctrl+R better, and if you change, don't forget to rearrange this~ Don't really like it.
00:29:197 (9) - If I were you, I will put this slider 45°. To make it easier. Don't wanna remove the hyper so I've reduced a bit the jump between the two sliders ((8) and (9)).
00:29:999 (3) - again I still suggest you to use a moving slider pattern here. Done
00:33:850 (7,8) - both ctrl+R No, I want the player use one direction for non dashed movements and the other direction for the dashed movement here. I know it could be funnier like you suggest but I have a good feeling here for this kind of gameplay.

the following phrase is the same as above.
(Btw if you apply the change, 00:44:438 (8,9,10) - this will no longer a hyper, nor a bug jump.) I know someone is going to make me change that but I don't want to modify the previous pattern so I'll wait for a better suggestion here I guess (If I don't find by myself a good way to delete these hypers).

00:51:016 (4) - make this stack to 2's end Ahah I really really love this hyper, if more modders complain about it i'll change it. But I still think this hyper makes this part epic.
00:55:026 (1,2,3) - this 3 better stack together. I see your point but I want to indicate here the direction of the next pattern (don't wanna trap players) so I've modified it to a curve, I think it follows your idea pretty well.
01:00:240 (8,9) - really needs hyperdash? I prefer make it smooth, and make the following 1,2 a jump. Nice, fix'd.
01:02:727 (8,9) - don't think hyper here is a good idea.. think twice. In my eyes it fits pretty well, i'll wait for more mods to change it.
01:03:208 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:07:379 (4,5) - Ctrl+R, and adjust the spacing to prevent bug jump. I don't get what you wanted here ? ctrl-R when I select both or Ctrl-R each one bye one ? Can't see the bug jump for both methods *.*
01:10:427 (4,5,6) - stack together Making a curve too.
01:15:240 (25) - I dont suggest hyper here.. but seems a lot of people like this kind of pattern, it is your choice. Keeping, waiting more mods to modify.
01:28:556 (1) - to 01:31:283 (2) - too much repeat pattern. Kinda remap the second part of the section, I hope it's better.
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In fact, in your map, this kind of this pattern is too much:

...............X
..........X
X
....X

so I suggest change some of these to other patterns in order not to make people feel boring.
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From 01:36:577 (1) - to the rest:
Nothing to say, just a suggestion:

do not place horizontal slider jump too much. try to use more vertical jump, and reverse note.
Your pattern is good, but abuse them in a map will make them become awful, isn't it? Yes I maybe abused a bit for the end but the music is so epic at this point... I think I need more ideas to rework it xD tldr; waiting for new mods.

Overall, I can only say, this is the best map I have ever moded recently. Thank you !
Great song!! Thanks Kanna and Xelia!
And btw... why I cannot meet this kind of good song ><! I meet it by luck, then propose myself to Kanna xD

below is a ctb diff I made for fun. I will be very happy if you could place it in creator words. Nice, thank you !

Thanks Thank you, huge mod I appreciate

1. 00:23:101 (4) - (optional) Perhaps curve this to the left (endpoint in x:124 y:200) and add a slight curve upward to let it flow better together with your (1,2,3)?
2. 00:30:160 (2,3) - Is the spacing increase here intentional? I know it's meant to be symmetrical, but you can just move (2) one grid left and up (and adjust (3)) to get both symmetry and spacing consistency :3
3. 00:36:577 (4) - This note's comboburst overlaps your next (1)'s path, I know it's not unrankable but it's still visible in play mode due to low AR. Perhaps try this?
   
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4. 00:43:636 (3,4) - Eh... You don't have to place this nearly overlapping (2) I think, for example you can just put (3) in x:92 y:220 so (2) perfectly "cuts" (3) in the center~
5. 00:57:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Again, these two almost overlaps - (3)'s comboburst will somewhat cover (6) in play mode, I suggest to move (4,5,6) lower-left more
6. 01:05:454 (1,2,3,4) - I don't really like this back-and-forth formation to be honest... Fan formation do better here imo (all you need to adjust is (1,2,3)'s position - leave (4) as is) :
   
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7. 01:14:758 (4) - Uh, this is very minor, but move the midpoint and endpoint more to the lower-right so it will encircled perfectly by (3)?
8. 01:30:160 (2) - Whistle on slider's repeat here? It fits with the high-pitched synth :3
9. 01:35:294 (2) - Same as above~
10. 01:41:390 (1,2,3,4) - Again, minor stuff here - but assuming you're creating a diamond here, (2) should be one grid left and (3) should be one grid right (you can also try the fan pattern I mentioned earlier though, it's fancy as well~ )
11. 01:46:524 (1,2,3) - ...I understand you're trying to intensify this part by adding more whistles, but you don't have to put the whistles on all three (I suggest to remove the whistle on (3), it will emphasize the previous two whistles) xD - This suggestion applies to next parts like this
12. 01:51:657 (1,2) - This is another good example of the suggestion above. If you remove the whistles on the second repeat, the claps will blend better with the song ~

1. 00:03:850 (1,2,...) - Why no hitsounds at all for the opening part >_< - imo, you can just add whistle everytime this music hits high note, for example (1)'s end and (2)'s end...
2. 00:05:775 (3) - Move this upward a bit so (3) doesn't got covered by (2)'s comboburst?
3. 00:08:021 (1,5) - (optional) Uhm, I think this straight slider could play more solid if you arrange it like this:
   
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4. 00:13:475 (3) - Well, placing clap here isn't bad, but you should support this clap with another consistent claps every 4/1 - that means, you should add clap consistently on 00:14:438 (1)'s repeat, 00:15:721 (3)'s repeat, and so on (:
5. 00:16:684 (4,5,6) - Hmm, (4,6)'s curve is very untidy imo, I think you can just encircle (5) like this here:
   
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6. 00:18:609 (6,7) - 10 combo streak on Normal is definitely too long, add new combo on either (6) or (7)~
7. 00:29:518 (5) - Hmm, don't really get the clap on slider's start here... Try finish on slider's start and whistle on slider's end instead?
8. 00:32:085 (1) - Don't stop your whistling here! This is a really excellent place for a whistle >_<
9. 00:37:219 (5) - Very minor stuff, but try to make this perfectly centered? (you'll have to disable grid snap to make this perfectly centered)
10. 00:41:711 (3,5) - To make the hitsound more consistent, add clap on (3)'s end and (5) ~
11. 00:44:278 (6) - Eh... I don't get why you dragged this so close to (3), you still have a lot of play area upward... I suggest to put this on x:208 y:32 to avoid clustering~ Also, (optional) if you followed the suggestion above, you can add whistle here as well (:
12. 00:55:828 (1) - Move this somewhere (perhaps more to the upper-right) - This will get covered by spinner's comboburst, which looks bad in play mode >_<
13. 00:59:679 (1) - (optional) Slider wave here? Looks good with your previous 00:57:754 (2) (:
14. 01:04:491 (1) - I highly suggest to remove the slider's repeat and add a note on 01:05:454 (x) with finish because that cymbal from the song needs to be accompanied xD
15. 01:06:096 (x) - If you followed my suggestion above, add note (with whistle) here to fill the blank~ (2/1 gap between notes sounds better in any way compared to 3/1 gap here)
16. 01:10:267 (6) - New combo here - again, you don't need a combo streak this long in a Normal difficulty~
17. 01:15:721 (x) - I can still hear a note here from the song. Perhaps add a circle here (with finish) and start the spinner 1/4 after?
18. 01:25:989 (1,2,3) - For this pattern, actually what you need to do is copy-paste (1) two times, and rotate it by 120° and 240° in order like this:
    
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19. 01:31:122 (1,2) - Hmm, perhaps use two repeats on both slider (instead of only one)?
20. 01:34:010 (4) - Add new combo here - you don't need a 9-combo streak in Normal diff (:
21. 01:34:331 (5,6,7,8,9) - In these five, I suggest to put the whistles only on (7) and (9) - that's where the synth hits high notes (:
22. 01:36:256 (1) - Don't use clap here for the chorus' beginning, a finish would blend better with the song~
23. 01:45:882 (1,2,3) - Consecutively, add whistle on (1), whistle on (2), and finish on (3)'s start :3

1. 00:05:294 (2) - (optional) Make this encircle (1)? (because your previous 00:04:171 (3) is encircling (2)) >_<
2. 00:13:573 - Add whistle here - really fits the high note here :3
3. 00:11:871 (3,4,5) - I'd rather CTRL+J (3) here (to let it flow together with (1,2), because this slider wave is curved downward) and swap (4) and (5)'s position for a slightly better flow, but this is not a must xD
4. 00:15:401 (1,2) - (optional) Another minor thing here for aesthetics, perhaps curve (1) rightward a bit (instead of leftward) and add a slight curve to the left for (2)?
5. 00:18:930 (5,6) - Would be nice imo if these two is moved to the left a bit to avoid (3)'s comboburst touching it, but again it's not a must~
6. 00:24:385 (1) - Why no finish on chorus' start here? o.o
7. 00:28:877 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm, I don't think the anti-jump on (2,3) gets the song's intenseness... A simple jump like this will get into the song's intenseness here:
   
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8. 00:32:566 (2,3,4,5) - Is it intentional to make this diamond formation doesn't close perfectly on (4,5)? Well, it's not that hard to catch though, but alternatively you can use a triangle here with (4,5) stacked~
9. 00:42:032 (9) - Minor stuff, but move the endpoint a bit lower (and the midpoint to the left a bit, if you want) to create a good symmetry here :3
10. 00:54:064 (1,2,3) - Hmm, why don't start the whistle from here? Whistle fits on (1)'s start and (2) here - also, (optional) tilting (1) to the left a bit would flow good~
11. 01:04:331 (5,6,7,8,9) - I personally disliked how this stack looks in play mode... Perhaps use a 1/4 repeating slider for (5,6,7)? It will flow better imo because the slider's move xD - also, add whistle on (5)~
12. 01:10:267 (8) - (optional) Curve this rightward a bit (inward of (7)) to sustain (7)'s curve?
13. 01:14:598 (2,7,8) - Add whistle on these three to keep your whistling consistent with 01:04:331 (5,6,7,8,9)
14. 01:20:534 (5) - (optional) Stack this to (1)'s start? I personally feel this part needs intensification :3
15. 01:27:272 (1) - Whistle is missing on slider's start here (previously you added whistle on 01:25:989 (1), though >_<)
16. 01:30:481 (1,2,3,4) - Something bugs me about this pattern... I personally feel something's just not right about how it flows, perhaps use an accelerated spacing here? (it also plays good with your next (1))~
    
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17. 01:42:513 (1) - (optional) I'd rather curve this rightward a bit to make this slider directs to 01:41:871 (3)'s end, thus improving flow (:
18. 01:51:336 (3) - Minor stuff, but move this to x:327 y:321 to let (1,2,3) arranged in a perfect triangle?
19. 01:55:828 (3,4) - They aren't perfectly stacked, but this is barely noticeable in play mode~

1. 00:05:133 (3,5,6,7,8,9) - Try to arrange like this? This will also stack (8) to your previous 00:04:491 (5) ~
   
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2. 00:07:379 (5,6) - Looking from (4)'s shape, it will flow better if you place (5) slightly higher from (6) instead of slightly lower (:
3. 00:09:304 (3) - Minor stuff here, move this one grid (lv4) down and right so (1,3,5) is spaced equally
4. 00:12:833 (5) - Hmm, I think this note's placement breaks your (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)'s pattern - perhaps put this stacked below (4) or create another jump here to preserve (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)'s beautiful shape?
5. 00:14:759 (4,4,3) - (optional) Starting from here until the chorus, I suggest to put claps on (4)'s start and so on to emphasize the "sacredness" - you don't have to add if you feel it'll be too noisy, though~
6. 00:18:609 (5) - Move to x:128 y:168 to keep symmetry here? (uhm, well, if you can't get the symmetry, CTRL+H this and compare with 00:19:892 (4)'s end) xD
7. 00:24:705 (3,6,9) - Although your current claps are patterned, but still it's highly recommended to put the claps on the white ticks instead of red ticks (on the red ticks ((5,8,11) etc.) whistle fits more imo) - This suggestion applies to next parts like this
8. 00:27:272 (2,5) - If you followed the suggestion above, it's also highly suggested not to stop your claps here ~
9. 00:34:972 (4) - Hmm, an anti-jump after a jump here isn't a good idea imo, it will lost this part's intenseness. Perhaps create a triangle jump on (3,4,5) instead?
10. 00:39:144 (5,6,7,8) - (optional) For variation, it's not a bad idea to put (6,7) like this imo:
    
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11. 00:45:240 (3) - This note is closer to (4) compared with its distance to (2)
12. 00:48:769 (1) - This slider's repeat is partially covered by 00:48:128 (4)'s hitburst, I know it's not impossible to read but still... Perhaps arrange in a fan formation like this?
    
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13. 00:54:866 (9) - Uh, is this note really required? There's barely something to follow from the song here... I suggest to remove this note and stack (8) above 00:55:026 (10) - the pause after jump here fits this part's atmosphere xD
14. 00:58:555 (3) - (optional) Remove this whistle to emphasize your whistles on (2) and (4)?
15. 01:00:320 (7) - ...missing whistle here o.o
16. 01:07:860 (6,7) - Why stacked >_< - Stack here kills this part's flow imo, creating a S-shaped stream would flow better here~
17. 01:10:427 (5,6,7) - It will be ambiguous to tell how many notes here due to (4)'s comboburst obscuring this part - I suggest a repeating slider here (:
18. 01:22:941 (4,5,6) - Emphasize the tilt here - compared to your previous 01:22:299 (1,2,3), this one looks like they're arranged in a straight line although they are not >_<
19. 01:25:347 (3) - Add whistle here? (you already have one on 01:20:213 (3)'s start, so... xD)
20. 01:25:668 (6) - (optional) I love your flow on (1,2) with its slight curve, and I think the flow can be continued if (5,6,7) is arranged in an arc by moving (6) lower a bit :3
21. 01:45:882 (3,4,5,6) - Pretty much same as 00:39:144 (5,6,7,8) here, placing (4) lower and (5) higher a bit for variation isn't a bad idea~
22. 01:55:508 (1) - Yes, this spinner is rankable (Autoplay got 1000 here and no objects visible after the spinner) - actually what I want to suggest here is a gradual volume increase here, would get to the song's climax better this way xD
23. 02:04:491 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Uh, I really dislike this ending, it doesn't reflect what the song's ending should be (dramatic)... Try accelerated spacing combined with a slider fan like this perhaps?
    
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1. 00:08:983 (1) - Finish on slider's start here? You have a finish on 00:03:850 (1), and the song doesn't change much here o.o
2. 00:08:021 (3) - (optional) This is just my personal preference, but perhaps make this encircle (2) instead? I personally feel the jump from (3,4) will be better this way because it won't be obscured by (1)'s comboburst
3. 00:14:117 (1) - Again, this is just my personal preference, maybe arrange this slider like:
   
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4. 00:22:139 (3,4) - CTRL+R to form a circular movement here? (You've done the same thing on (5,6,7,8) xD
5. 00:23:101 (1) - Add whistle on slider's start here to accompany the instrument (feels quite empty without it o.o)
6. 00:24:866 (4,5,6,7,8) - (optional) Although this stream is compressed (contains less spacing) compared to the other stream, but it doesn't mean you can't curve it >_<
   
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7. 00:30:721 (11) - This note plays tricky imo... I think it will be more intuitive if (10,11,1) is a moving stream instead of a jump on (11) to (1), but this is not a must~
8. 00:34:331 (3) - Curve this symmetrically to the left to emphasize your windmill pattern more?
9. 00:39:465 (5,6,7,8,1) - Again here, I prefer an arc-shaped stream, but it's just my personal preference :3
10. 00:41:390 (2) - To let your next stream flow better, you can add a bezier curve this slider actually - just be careful not to let it go offscreen~
11. 00:50:534 (3) - Stack this to (6)? To be honest I can't really get (2,3,4,5,6)'s pattern, stacking this to (6) will make this part tidier I think o.o
12. 01:00:802 (3) - (optional) Put in x:0 y:36 to let (2,3,4,5) forms a fan formation?
13. 01:05:775 (2) - Curve this (both to the left or right is fine, but I prefer to the right) slightly to sustain your next stream's flow?
14. 01:14:759 (3,4,5) - (optional) I'd rather replace (3,4,5) with a single repeating slider here, it plays better with your next (6) imo~
15. 01:23:262 (1) - Uhm, the speed-up is quite shocking for me (because it looks similar with your previous three sliders)... but nothing much to do here, really >_< - I suggest a whistle on this slider's end, though (:
16. 01:29:358 (3,4,5,6,7,2,3,4) - I can't read this part orz Try this to increase readability? (basically it's just back-and-forth) :
    
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17. 01:42:353 (10,11,1) - Same as what I suggested on 00:30:721 (11)
18. 01:56:791 (5) - Finish (either soft-hitfinish or S:C1 as other diffs did) here?

Niva wrote:

[Extra]

1. 00:08:983 (1) - Finish on slider's start here? You have a finish on 00:03:850 (1), and the song doesn't change much here o.o ok
2. 00:08:021 (3) - (optional) This is just my personal preference, but perhaps make this encircle (2) instead? I personally feel the jump from (3,4) will be better this way because it won't be obscured by (1)'s comboburst want a straight line here, a curve may doesn't fit my eyes
3. 00:14:117 (1) - Again, this is just my personal preference, maybe arrange this slider like:
   
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   Not bad, but a bit far away from my mapping style..
4. 00:22:139 (3,4) - CTRL+R to form a circular movement here? (You've done the same thing on (5,6,7,8) xD yes
5. 00:23:101 (1) - Add whistle on slider's start here to accompany the instrument (feels quite empty without it o.o) ok
6. 00:24:866 (4,5,6,7,8) - (optional) Although this stream is compressed (contains less spacing) compared to the other stream, but it doesn't mean you can't curve it >_<
   
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7. 00:30:721 (11) - This note plays tricky imo... I think it will be more intuitive if (10,11,1) is a moving stream instead of a jump on (11) to (1), but this is not a must~ agree
8. 00:34:331 (3) - Curve this symmetrically to the left to emphasize your windmill pattern more?
9. 00:39:465 (5,6,7,8,1) - Again here, I prefer an arc-shaped stream, but it's just my personal preference :3
10. 00:41:390 (2) - To let your next stream flow better, you can add a bezier curve this slider actually - just be careful not to let it go offscreen~ haha, changed
11. 00:50:534 (3) - Stack this to (6)? To be honest I can't really get (2,3,4,5,6)'s pattern, stacking this to (6) will make this part tidier I think o.o
12. 01:00:802 (3) - (optional) Put in x:0 y:36 to let (2,3,4,5) forms a fan formation? ok
13. 01:05:775 (2) - Curve this (both to the left or right is fine, but I prefer to the right) slightly to sustain your next stream's flow?
14. 01:14:759 (3,4,5) - (optional) I'd rather replace (3,4,5) with a single repeating slider here, it plays better with your next (6) imo~
15. 01:23:262 (1) - Uhm, the speed-up is quite shocking for me (because it looks similar with your previous three sliders)... but nothing much to do here, really >_< - I suggest a whistle on this slider's end, though (: adddedd
16. 01:29:358 (3,4,5,6,7,2,3,4) - I can't read this part orz Try this to increase readability? (basically it's just back-and-forth) :
    
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    Kinda confusing here, but I think aapproach circle can help..so let's see others' opinion
17. 01:42:353 (10,11,1) - Same as what I suggested on 00:30:721 (11) ye
18. 01:56:791 (5) - Finish (either soft-hitfinish or S:C1 as other diffs did) here?

Good luck, Kanna (^_^)~

LKs wrote:

Why didn't u give comments on my diff =3=

1. od-1
2. 01:14:766 (4) - ._.
3. 01:51:664 (1,2) - don't use kick slider in this way ._. longer slider is better

1. diff name doesn't fit... how about Advanced or Standard ..?
2. I think spacing is a little big as CS4 normal, also some combos are too long ... maybe use circle size 3..?
3. 01:33:055 (3) - plz don't stack

1. 00:31:450 (8,9,10,11) - sounds random, why not just stack 2 circles on the slider o.o
2. 00:36:263 (2,3) - change these to a slider across? I think better to play
3. 00:39:151 (1,2,3,4) - consider making 3,4 jumps (put 3 to (274,134) and 4 to (243,248))
4. 00:44:605 (3,4) - ^
5. 01:06:584 (4) - make circle? fits song more..
6. 01:25:835 (4) - plz stack on white 1...
7. 01:47:172 (3,5) - ctrl+r
8. 01:48:455 (3,5) - ^

1. cs 5 is too hard o.o ...
2. 00:06:263 (10) - stack at (3) is better
3. ...why so many 1/2s mapped as 1/4, plz change all to 1/2 ... maybe need 0.5x green section o.o?
4. 00:29:365 (6) - move to stack with 3 or to bottom of 3 ?
5. 00:33:054 (5) - it's kind of hidden by the hitburst, can't see this is a slider ...
6. 00:33:696 (2) - ctrl+r
7. 00:42:359 (1,2) - this doesn't look good imo o.o should stack the end together
8. 01:28:563 (3) - ?
9. 01:51:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - why? doesn't fit imo ..
10. I think this 1/2 slow part needs more work orz

1. too hard for me o.o
2. 00:17:172 (5) - ?
3. 01:12:039 (2) - 不科学
4. 01:12:520 (4,5,6,7,8) - 就这个很违和
5. 01:34:258 (8,1) - 无法直视
6. LKs神触o.o

Static Noise Bird wrote:

Extra is way too difficult, but overall the mapset seems all fine~ (tried to mod from request on my queue)

1. Extra and Beginner diffs have another preview point. Snap it properly

1. 00:37:226 (1) - you missed whistle
2. 01:00:327 (1,2,3,4) - make a better square and stack 01:02:253 (4) - with 00:59:686 (6) - properly (nazi)
3. 01:07:386 (4) - spacing, move little further from (3) as it is inconsistent with 01:05:461 (1,2) -
4. 01:13:162 (1,2,3,4) - quite hard to read. Newbies could think that slider 01:14:766 (4) - is earlier than 01:14:445 (3) - . Make something like this:
   
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5. 01:14:766 (4,1) - this is jump? Move it closer to each other D:

• OD - 1

1. 00:16:691 (1,2,3,4) - strange rhythm D: Make 1/1 sliders:
   
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   or triplets:
   
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2. 00:21:825 (5,1,2) - maybe stack them? or move (1,2) further
3. 00:24:392 - I suggest you to put clap every second beat in the part with kiai:
   
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   2. 00:25:033 (3) - on reverse
   3. 00:25:996 (4) - on the beginning and end
   4. 00:27:279 (2) - and so on
4. 00:43:322 (7) - put nc here and remove from 00:44:605 (1) - . Because it's not on downbeat and looks bad.
5. 00:53:910 (1) - change clap to finish
6. 00:55:835 - put claps on this part as you have claps here: 01:06:424 -
7. 01:04:498 (1) - You missed finish in downbeat! Oh you! Remove repeat and add a note with finish:
   
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8. 01:10:274 (1,2,3) - looks bad. Try this:
   
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9. 01:28:884 (4,5,6,7) - bad bad rhythm :< Make this, please:
   
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10. 01:35:942 (x) - add a note stacked with 01:35:621 (6,1) -
11. And again, you have BAD claps in the kiai part. Put it on every second beat, please.
12. 01:51:664 (1) - finish instead of clap
13. 01:52:948 (3) - ^
14. 01:54:231 (1) - ^
15. 01:55:835 (2) - ^

• You have a big gap between Normal and Hyper. Try to make it easier. Use less 1/2 rhythm and less streams and jumps.

1. 00:12:520 (6,7,8) - they are hidden. Move them somewhere else D:
   
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   meh.
2. 00:26:317 (4,5,6) - what? No D: Try this:
   
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3. 00:31:450 (8,9,10,11) - Bad idea, but you have many many such rhythms. Try to change them, please. It's too hard. I won't point out each moment but if you're going to fix them, go through the whole diff.
4. 00:36:263 (2,3) - how to read them? They are hidden!
5. 01:04:338 (5,6,7,8,9) - streams are bad idea D:
6. 01:36:263 (1) - hidden slider. Try to stack it with the beginning of 01:35:301 (2) -
7. 01:52:627 (4,1) - It touche the HP bar. Rearrange the pattern to move it down.

1. 00:06:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I don't like how you used antijumps. This is inconsistent and doesn't fit. Make normal spacing, please
2. 00:08:348 (1,2,3,4) - maybe make a square?
3. 00:14:124 (1,2) - after your antijumps I thought it is 1/2. I don't feel such 1/4 rhythm and suggest you to change it.
4. 00:29:365 (6) - stack it with 00:28:883 (3) - . It is hardly visible.
5. 00:32:734 (3,4) - ctrl+r them for better flow. And move 00:33:054 (5) - like in this picture (as it hardly visible):
   
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6. 00:38:028 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - I really don't like how they are arranged. (1,2) are hidden. Maybe something like this:
   
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7. 00:47:974 (3,4) - I would better to make jump between them, like:
   
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8. 00:53:108 (3,4) - ^
9. 00:55:033 (9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same distance between them, but first are 1/4 and second are 1/2. BAD thing D: Make normal spacing, please
10. 00:59:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
11. 01:09:472 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ bad spacing between 3,4,5
12. 01:25:996 (1,2,3,4) - make equal spacing? D:
13. 01:31:129 (1,2,3,4) - ^
14. 01:55:515 (1) - too short and unrankable. Extend to 01:56:638 - or remove it and map this part

• HP and OD +1

1. 00:06:744 (3,4) - ctrl+r to better flow
2. 00:07:386 (3,4) - ^
   
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   ULTRAFLOW!
3. 00:11:076 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - where_should_I_tap_mode D: Maybe make some patterns as earlier. For example stack 1,2 and 3,4 and let them make a square
   
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4. 00:12:841 (1,2,3,4,5) - remove one repeat from all sliders to make a 1/4 beat between them
   
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5. 00:31:771 (9) - this slider is hidden by the hitbirsts :< How about this:
   
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6. 00:51:985 (2,3,4,5,6) - make star jumps? 00:52:146 (3,4) - ctrl+r them :O
7. 01:23:269 (1) - Too fast! Make it slower, because it's unreadable (but I likeeee it)
8. 01:29:365 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you must rearrange them. They are inreadable, hidden and make no sence D:
   
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   and don't forget to put new combo on 01:29:846 (6) -, remove from 01:30:167 (1) - and put on 01:30:488 (3) -
9. 01:43:643 (9) - again as in 00:31:771 (9) -
   
   SO AWESOME DIFF! *______________*