Alright let's see what I can find. Mod requested on my queue.
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun.
[General]
i feel that the BG file is too big with 1.5MB. take this one. i changed the file to a .jpg file and the filesize for this is at 231kb.
why don't you enable the letterbox during breaks since you have no video or SB? i think it'd look better during gameplay IMO.
put a bit of shading on the 2nd combo color. some people cant handle the bright white combo color as it might hurt their eyes.
[Beginner]
00:03:857 (1,2,3,4) - instead of a triangle, how about a diamond to make it interesting for players?
00:08:990 (1,2,3,4) - same as above but leave (1) and move (2,3,4).
00:14:124 (1,2,3) - make these 2/1 sliders to follow the piano accurately.
00:23:108 (4) - try to stack the repeat arrow on (1). i think it'd make a sort of nice triangle. moving it here ruins the shape you're supposed to be doing which ruins the flow IMO.
00:33:375 (2) - align this to (1) for a better flow from the previous slider.
00:34:659 (1) - if you follow the suggestion above, move this note between the repeat sliders. same reason as above.
00:42:359 (1,2,3,4) - how about deleting the circles and adding repeats like you did previously?
01:05:461 (1) - i think the default finish would go well with this part as the cymbals sound the same.
01:28:884 (2,1) - just a minor spacing error. it's up to you if you want to fix it.
01:36:263 (1) - same as 01:05:461.
01:40:113 (2,1) - similar to 00:33:375 and 00:34:659.
01:51:664 (1,2) - why not? it's near the end after all.
pretty nice diff and i like the way how you used the 1/1 lines to make it a fun diff.
[Standard]
00:16:691 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - keep your claps consistent. when i heard the clap at (4), that threw me off because the consistency pattern is gone.
00:24:392 (1) - same as 01:05:461 on Beginner.
00:30:809 (3) - since you have the clap at (1), replace the whistle for a clap to keep the consistency.
00:31:771 (4) - same as above but at the end.
00:32:413 (5) - this clap ruins the consistency, so remove it.
00:33:375 (1) - you forgot to add a finish at the end. add it to match the cymbals.
00:38:509 (7) - same as above but a clap at the beginning.
00:55:835 (1) - i highly suggest moving this somewhere else because spinner-osu is covering the beginning and that makes it hard for players to see where the note is.
01:35:942 - add a circle to continue the flow? i think players might hit the slider too early as they're used to that 1/1 rhythm.
01:45:889 (1) - remove the NC because that sound is the same. yes it changes but it's still the same.
01:46:531 (3) - this should be a NC because the instrumental starts all over again and that's where the cymbals are.
01:51:664 (1) - replace the clap for a finish. i find the clap unfitting for this part.
the placements are good, the hitsounds are a problem for me. try to keep them consistent because i don't like to hear claps or whistles at a note that ruins the consistency. this is just my opinion on the hitsounds as i focus on consistency on the hitsounds the most.
[Hyper]
Maybe increase the HP by 1 to put a bit of pressure on players.
00:11:718 (2) - *nazi* move this down a bit to avoid the slight overlap on (1).
00:24:392 (1) - add a finish at the beginning to match the cymbals.
00:36:263 (2,3) - you should space these out because the overlap looks bad. you did it at 00:12:199.
00:55:194 (1) - same as 00:24:392.
01:09:632 (6) - same as 00:11:718 but move this to the left.
01:14:605 (2,3,4,5,6) - personally i don't like to see short streams on hard diffs because it might be too hard for players at this kind of level. replace it for a kick slider to make it easier for players.
01:28:563 (1) - i think it'd look nicer if you can stack this on (3). i also think it's better than the overlap during gameplay.
01:43:964 (1) - move it below (7) so that it'd make a nice blanket during gameplay.
[Another]
00:18:937 - why don't you add a note here? the piano is still going and stopping it here ruins the flow.
00:23:830 - how about adding a stream to follow the long pause in the cymbals?
01:44:285 (2) - do Ctrl+R because this looks too easy for players to clear.
01:55:515 (1) - this is an unrankable spinner. it must reach at least 2k during autoplay to be rankable.
just fix that unrankable spinner and it'll be fine.
[Extra]
increase the HP by 1. the HP drain is lower than the HP drain in another.
00:20:862 (7) - maybe Ctrl+R to make it a bit easier and fun for players?
01:23:589 (1,2) - *nazi* space out these notes so that it doesn't touch the slider.
01:32:092 (3) - move it to the right side. i find this hard to read IMO.
best diff in this mapset IMO.
[Drafura's CtB Insane]
1st time modding a CtB diff so it might not be perfect. i'm willing to learn from this. and if it's possible can you link me to the CtB rules and guidelines?
00:12:681 (7) - personally i don't like this hyperdash. i find it unnecessary since the fruit is close to the note. i suggest stacking this note on (6) to make it easier for players. the hyperdash might surprise players
00:13:162 - hmm remove this break. i find it unnecessary because the duration is short.
00:23:429 - ^
00:44:044 - since you have hyperdashes on (9,10), i think it'd be better if you can add a circle here because i see a potential pattern. 2 straight hyperdashes in 2 notes. the look is the same and it'd put a great challenge for CtB players.
I guess that's it. GL
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun.
[General]
i feel that the BG file is too big with 1.5MB. take this one. i changed the file to a .jpg file and the filesize for this is at 231kb.
why don't you enable the letterbox during breaks since you have no video or SB? i think it'd look better during gameplay IMO.
put a bit of shading on the 2nd combo color. some people cant handle the bright white combo color as it might hurt their eyes.
[Beginner]
00:03:857 (1,2,3,4) - instead of a triangle, how about a diamond to make it interesting for players?
00:08:990 (1,2,3,4) - same as above but leave (1) and move (2,3,4).
00:14:124 (1,2,3) - make these 2/1 sliders to follow the piano accurately.
00:23:108 (4) - try to stack the repeat arrow on (1). i think it'd make a sort of nice triangle. moving it here ruins the shape you're supposed to be doing which ruins the flow IMO.
00:33:375 (2) - align this to (1) for a better flow from the previous slider.
00:34:659 (1) - if you follow the suggestion above, move this note between the repeat sliders. same reason as above.
00:42:359 (1,2,3,4) - how about deleting the circles and adding repeats like you did previously?
01:05:461 (1) - i think the default finish would go well with this part as the cymbals sound the same.
01:28:884 (2,1) - just a minor spacing error. it's up to you if you want to fix it.
01:36:263 (1) - same as 01:05:461.
01:40:113 (2,1) - similar to 00:33:375 and 00:34:659.
01:51:664 (1,2) - why not? it's near the end after all.
pretty nice diff and i like the way how you used the 1/1 lines to make it a fun diff.
[Standard]
00:16:691 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - keep your claps consistent. when i heard the clap at (4), that threw me off because the consistency pattern is gone.
00:24:392 (1) - same as 01:05:461 on Beginner.
00:30:809 (3) - since you have the clap at (1), replace the whistle for a clap to keep the consistency.
00:31:771 (4) - same as above but at the end.
00:32:413 (5) - this clap ruins the consistency, so remove it.
00:33:375 (1) - you forgot to add a finish at the end. add it to match the cymbals.
00:38:509 (7) - same as above but a clap at the beginning.
00:55:835 (1) - i highly suggest moving this somewhere else because spinner-osu is covering the beginning and that makes it hard for players to see where the note is.
01:35:942 - add a circle to continue the flow? i think players might hit the slider too early as they're used to that 1/1 rhythm.
01:45:889 (1) - remove the NC because that sound is the same. yes it changes but it's still the same.
01:46:531 (3) - this should be a NC because the instrumental starts all over again and that's where the cymbals are.
01:51:664 (1) - replace the clap for a finish. i find the clap unfitting for this part.
the placements are good, the hitsounds are a problem for me. try to keep them consistent because i don't like to hear claps or whistles at a note that ruins the consistency. this is just my opinion on the hitsounds as i focus on consistency on the hitsounds the most.
[Hyper]
Maybe increase the HP by 1 to put a bit of pressure on players.
00:11:718 (2) - *nazi* move this down a bit to avoid the slight overlap on (1).
00:24:392 (1) - add a finish at the beginning to match the cymbals.
00:36:263 (2,3) - you should space these out because the overlap looks bad. you did it at 00:12:199.
00:55:194 (1) - same as 00:24:392.
01:09:632 (6) - same as 00:11:718 but move this to the left.
01:14:605 (2,3,4,5,6) - personally i don't like to see short streams on hard diffs because it might be too hard for players at this kind of level. replace it for a kick slider to make it easier for players.
01:28:563 (1) - i think it'd look nicer if you can stack this on (3). i also think it's better than the overlap during gameplay.
01:43:964 (1) - move it below (7) so that it'd make a nice blanket during gameplay.
[Another]
00:18:937 - why don't you add a note here? the piano is still going and stopping it here ruins the flow.
00:23:830 - how about adding a stream to follow the long pause in the cymbals?
01:44:285 (2) - do Ctrl+R because this looks too easy for players to clear.
01:55:515 (1) - this is an unrankable spinner. it must reach at least 2k during autoplay to be rankable.
just fix that unrankable spinner and it'll be fine.
[Extra]
increase the HP by 1. the HP drain is lower than the HP drain in another.
00:20:862 (7) - maybe Ctrl+R to make it a bit easier and fun for players?
01:23:589 (1,2) - *nazi* space out these notes so that it doesn't touch the slider.
01:32:092 (3) - move it to the right side. i find this hard to read IMO.
best diff in this mapset IMO.
[Drafura's CtB Insane]
1st time modding a CtB diff so it might not be perfect. i'm willing to learn from this. and if it's possible can you link me to the CtB rules and guidelines?
00:12:681 (7) - personally i don't like this hyperdash. i find it unnecessary since the fruit is close to the note. i suggest stacking this note on (6) to make it easier for players. the hyperdash might surprise players
00:13:162 - hmm remove this break. i find it unnecessary because the duration is short.
00:23:429 - ^
00:44:044 - since you have hyperdashes on (9,10), i think it'd be better if you can add a circle here because i see a potential pattern. 2 straight hyperdashes in 2 notes. the look is the same and it'd put a great challenge for CtB players.
I guess that's it. GL
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