1. CXu (5 stars, 309 notes)
2. Hard (4.72 stars, 226 notes)
3. Insane (4.99 stars, 293 notes)
4. Normal (3.67 stars, 121 notes)
5. Piscis' Easy (1.34 stars, 74 notes)
6. Taiko Oni (4.78 stars, 376 notes)

MIZUKI LINA wrote:

All Suggestion
Back Ground should be 1024x768 or 600x800 Done
Volume maybe a little loud try down o.o? Done
Insane
00:35:773 2grid up and 00:36:004 2grid up? Done
00:56:542~01:25:157 kiai? None

There are more than 3 slider speed in 4 diff.. i think its unrankable o.o hmm... i reduced slider speed as possible as i can...
Normal+
HP Drain rate -1 Done

Nice map w

Piscis wrote:

全体的に
Slider Tick Rateは全て統一(Normal+とHardを2に合わせる) Done
Altキーを押してDistance spacingを1.0xに変えれば綺麗に配置できるかも Done
全ての難易度にtag: ctb taiko を追加　タグも全て統一 Done
これは多分ですがranked目指すのであればCTBの譜面はunrankableだと思います出来もいまいちだったのもあって思い切ってCTB譜面を削除しました
Normalでのスライダーの速度変更が多いのはあまりよろしくない 速度変更は2種類のみに修正しました


個人的にEasyが欲しいなと思いました！！！がんばってね！

Piscis wrote:

CTBの譜面消すのならTagsのctbは削除してもいいと思うます Done
Easyつくってもよかですか

Piscis wrote:

できたよー（＾o＾）ﾉ

Shoily wrote:

Hi!
from #modreqs
All suggestions are in blue (青)

General:
Everything seems okay
It would be nice to add at least one more combo color. Maybe green? Done
Yeah!, thats nice better. i did it

Piscis' Easy:
Not many problems in this difficulty.

00:22:340 (1) I think the finish should be here instead of at the end of 00:21:966 (5)

Normal +:

Combo colors:
00:14:982 (8) - Add a new combo Done
00:17:121 (1) - Remove new combo Done
00:21:252 (1) - Remove new combo Done
00:22:388 (5)- Add new combo Done
00:27:902 (5) -Add new combo Done
00:32:560 (1)- Remove new combo Done
00:34:889 (6) - Add new combo Done

and many more... you should add combo color when a new verse/spoken line of the song starts.Some parts you do it perfectly, other parts it seems random.
okey,i did it:]

Song:
00:08:454 (1,2) - These two sliders don't fit very well with the song, please try a different pattern.Maybe this:
Done

Hard:
Combo colors:
It seems combo colors are better placed in this difficulty than Normal + , but still some places where it seems it's placed randomly. Done
i think thats better:D
i did it

Song:
00:08:454 (8,9) - Same suggestion as in the Normal + difficulty. Done
our other difficulties

Insane:

Combo colors:
Same problem as above stated. Done

Song:
00:08:454 - 00:10:816 - This part seems empty compared to other difficulties. Done

Taiko:
I'm not a pro Taiko modder, so I can't give too many tips. However, please state whether this difficulty is Oni or Muzukashii. Done


That is all \:D/
頑張って ~

confeito14 wrote:

KIAI TIME 修正(KIAI TIMEが続く場合新しい緑線の度に☆追加)None

目がチカチカしてしまうのでkiai timeは潮吹き？のみにするために故意に止めてあります　ごめんなさい

[Insane]
音取り配置を5ヶ所ぐらい変えてみました
個人的に繰り返し(スライダー含めた3連打)が嫌いなのと低bpmはよくわからないので参考までに
この辺の提案はたいてい無視されているので気軽にスルーしてください
[attachment=0:7d1c1]YURIA - You (TV Size) (Giffen) [insane mod].osu[/attachment:7d1c1]

2ヶ所ほどほとんどそのまま参考にさせて頂きました　ありがとうございます

comboについては個人差はあるものの、もっと曲に合わせる必要があると思いました

SPOILER

まだまだ未熟なので下のも他の人から見れば間違ってると思いますがなんとなく伝われば
00:15:927 (1) - delete NC
00:22:157 (1) - ^
00:22:388 (2) - NC
00:31:619 (x) - NC
00:32:542 (1) - delete NC
00:33:465 (x) - NC
00:33:927 (1) - delete NC
00:35:311 (6) - NC
00:35:773 (1) - delete NC
00:37:157 (x) - NC
00:50:081 (4) - NC
00:50:311 (1) - delete NC
00:59:773 (x) - NC
01:01:965 (x) - NC
01:03:465 (6) - NC
01:03:927 (1) - delete NC
01:08:773 (1) - ^
01:09:004 (2) - NC
01:20:081 (1) - delete NC
01:20:311 (3) - NC
01:22:388 (1) - delete NC
01:22:850 (x) - NC

Shoily氏のmoddingによりほとんどNCの修正を行いました

[Hard]
この曲では直線のスライダーの多用を避けた方がいいかな Done

直線スライダーをいくつか減らしました

comboについてもやはり修正した方がいいと思います Done

[Normal+]
easy normal の難易度では常にDSを保つことが推奨されています
00:41:773 (2,3,1,2,3) - 特にこの辺りが易しくないです Done
01:24:234 (5,6,7,1) - ^ Done
00:51:350 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ Done
Nomarl+に甘えず下方修正

[Piscis' Easy]
恐らくPiscis's Easy
KIAI TIME

Shoily wrote:

Piscis' Easy:
Not many problems in this difficulty.

00:22:340 (1) I think the finish should be here instead of at the end of 00:21:966 (5)　Fixed

confeito14 wrote:

[Piscis' Easy]
恐らくPiscis's Easy ノーチェンジで
KIAI TIME

Naryuga wrote:

[Piscis' Easy]
[*]Normal+,Hard,Insaneとコンボカラーを統一してください（1色足りません）
[*]00:31:157 (3) - Finishの位置を前後逆にしてみては
[*]01:03:465 (1) - 頭と終点にclap
[*]01:04:388 (1) - remove new combo　気合タイム始めのは雰囲気からNCあってもいいですがが、ここは合わないかなと思いました（後2つも同じく）
[*]01:11:773 (1) - ^
[*]01:19:157 (1) - ^ 全て直しました～

Naryuga wrote:

Hi from #modreqs

red = 必ず直してください
blue = 変更するのを考えてもらいたいです
black = ただの提案、気に入らなければ気軽に無視してください

かなり長くなります

General

• [General]

1. タグから削除→"yuria"、"you"、"shuffle"、"giffen"（タグとして無くても他の所に書いてあるので不要）・ "taiko"（不要） Done
2. ファイル"soft-slidertick.wav"を削除（tick音は消さないほうがいいという考えです） Done

Piscis' Easy

• [Piscis' Easy]

1. Normal+,Hard,Insaneとコンボカラーを統一してください（1色足りません）
2. 00:31:157 (3) - Finishの位置を前後逆にしてみては
3. 01:03:465 (1) - 頭と終点にclap
4. 01:04:388 (1) - remove new combo　気合タイム始めのは雰囲気からNCあってもいいですがが、ここは合わないかなと思いました（後2つも同じく）
5. 01:11:773 (1) - ^
6. 01:19:157 (1) - ^

Normal+

• [Normal+]

1. Circle Size +1? None
2. 全体的に、特にサビにFinishが多過ぎるような気がしました Done サビのfinishを削減しました
3. 00:02:081 (1,1) - 距離をもう少し離した方が良いかと Done
4. 00:33:004 (4) - New combo? Done
5. 00:56:081 (1,2) - (1)の押すタイミングがつかみづらいのでスライダーに? Done
6. 01:03:004 (2) - このスライダーの終点の音が消えるのが不自然です Done 手前のスライダーを長くしました

Hard

• [Hard]

1. New comboについての提案がほとんどです。合わないと思ったらスルーしてください！
2. 00:08:542 (8) - NC Done
3. 00:12:234 (1) - ^ Done
4. 00:14:081 (1) - remove NC Done
5. 00:15:004 (2) - NC Done
6. 00:15:927 (1) - remove NC Done
7. 00:21:004 (3,4) - 配置が逆? None
8. 00:33:696 (5) - NC + 次のサークルのNC削除（リズムとW形で1つだけ色違いなので違和感を感じました） Done
9. 00:40:388 (1) - remove NC Done
10. 00:43:157 (1) - ^ Done
11. 00:43:619 (1) - ^ + 次のスライダーにNC Done
12. 01:09:465 (4,5,6,7,1) - whistle削除 Done
13. 01:09:927 (1) - ^ Done
14. 01:12:696 (1) - ^ Done
15. 01:20:542 (1) - ^ Done
16. 01:22:157 (3) - NC Done
17. 01:23:311 (1) - remove NC Done
18. 01:24:234 (4) - NC Done
19. 01:24:696 (1) - remove NC Done
20. 01:25:157 (1) - ^ Done
21. 01:27:927 (4) - NC Done

Insane

• [Insane]

1. New comboについての提案がほとんどです。合わないと思ったらスルーしてください！
2. 00:11:311 (3) - NC Done
3. 00:12:234 (1) - remove NC Done
4. 00:14:081 (1,2,1) - remove, add, remove (NC) Done
5. 00:21:465 (1) - remove NC Done
6. 00:29:311 (1) - ^ Done
7. 00:29:773 (3) - NC　＋　頭にfinish Done
8. 00:49:157 (1) - remove NC Done
9. 00:51:927 (6) - NC Done
10. 00:59:311 (1) - remove NC Done
11. 00:59:773 (3) - NC Done
12. 01:09:465 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - whistle削除 Done
13. 01:26:542 (1) - remove NC Done

taiko Muzukashii

• [taiko Muzukashii]

1. d = don, k = katsu, D = don(big), K = katsu(big)
2. Diff名：Taiko Muzukashii (or Taiko Oni?)　Muzukashii視点で書きます Done
3. HP,OD-2 Oni譜面で5～7くらいが標準なので、Muzukashiiで7は高すぎだと思います Done
4. 太鼓BGが欲しいかな・・・　一応僕もつくれます
5. 大音符(finish)が多過ぎな気がしました
6. HitsoundをNormalのDefaultに替えた方がmodするにはわかりやすいです
7. 00:05:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 1/4直後のスライダーは控えるべきだと思います
8. 00:09:465 (2) - 始点ここから00:10:850のスピンにしてみては Done
9. 00:16:850 (16,1,2) - （リズム提案）---> Done
10. 00:17:773 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - kdd kdd k （1/4の直前・直後の大音符はunrankedです）
11. 00:25:734 (18,19,20,21) - dd d Done
12. 00:33:004 (4) - finish削除 Done
13. 00:37:157 (8) - ^ Done
14. 000:38:311 (15) - ^ Done
15. 00:39:927 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29) - 00:17:773から と同じように Done
16. 00:41:773 (31,32,33,1) - d d k d Done
17. 00:42:696 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - kdd ddd k 9連打はMuzukashiiにしては難し過ぎかなと思います Done
18. 00:43:965 (11,12,13) - k k D Done
19. 00:46:273 (19,20) - finish削除 Done
20. 00:47:311 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31) - ddd kdd d Done
21. [color=0000FF]00:50:888 (3) - 白線に乗せて[/color] Done
22. 00:51:927 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - kdd kdd k Done
23. 00:56:542 から - 音符スピードx1.00で十分な気がします Done
24. 00:58:388 (6,7,8,1) - d d k k Done
25. 01:00:004 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ddd ddk Done
26. 01:01:157 (12) - d Done
27. 01:01:619 (2,3,4,5,6) - k d k Done
28. 01:02:081 (6,7,8,9,10) - k k d k　 Done
29. 01:09:465 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - kdd kdd kdddk d d Done
30. 01:16:850 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - K K ddk k k d Done
31. 01:18:696 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - kkk ddd k Done
32. 01:22:157 (9,10,11) - dkd Done
33. 01:24:234 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - kdd d ddk d k Done
34. 01:27:927 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - kddd kdd Done

長くてごちゃごちゃしてて申し訳ないです
わからないところあったら聞いてください

良いMapsetだと思います！ 　がんばってください！

Piscis wrote:

Shoily wrote:

Piscis' Easy:
Not many problems in this difficulty.

00:22:340 (1) I think the finish should be here instead of at the end of 00:21:966 (5)　Fixed

confeito14 wrote:

[Piscis' Easy]
恐らくPiscis's Easy ノーチェンジで
KIAI TIME

Naryuga wrote:

[Piscis' Easy]
[*]Normal+,Hard,Insaneとコンボカラーを統一してください（1色足りません）
[*]00:31:157 (3) - Finishの位置を前後逆にしてみては
[*]01:03:465 (1) - 頭と終点にclap
[*]01:04:388 (1) - remove new combo　気合タイム始めのは雰囲気からNCあってもいいですがが、ここは合わないかなと思いました（後2つも同じく）
[*]01:11:773 (1) - ^
[*]01:19:157 (1) - ^ 全て直しました～

Thank you Modding~

Tagsをpiscisだけにしたので修正したい場合は自分で直してくだしお

Giffen wrote:

とても丁寧なmodding、大変ありがとうございます!
細かい所まで指摘して頂いて嬉しいです
taiko譜面のmoddingは自分がプレイ、Edit共に初心者なためとても参考になりました ありがとうございます><!　役に立てたなら自分としても嬉しいです

厚かましいですがNaryugaさんがよろしければ、太鼓BGを作成して頂けたら嬉しいです...

Taiko BG

Naryuga wrote:

Giffen wrote:

とても丁寧なmodding、大変ありがとうございます!
細かい所まで指摘して頂いて嬉しいです
taiko譜面のmoddingは自分がプレイ、Edit共に初心者なためとても参考になりました ありがとうございます><!　役に立てたなら自分としても嬉しいです

厚かましいですがNaryugaさんがよろしければ、太鼓BGを作成して頂けたら嬉しいです...

　了解です！


(Edit:)完成ー

Taiko BG

何か問題点があれば言ってください。　Star~☆彡

spboxer3 wrote:

from #modres

[general]

• 
  Settings
  

1. Tags:[Piscis' Easy] : piscis, [other] : shuffle piscis Done
2. Stack Leniency is too lower... you at least need to use 0.3 Done i changed "0.7"
3. this song's timing have a bit off~you need find timmer to help you mod this!i recheck this song's timig, i can't find the timing's gap...

[Piscis' Easy]

• 
  Settings
  

1. unused green line:
   00:40:850 -

mapping

[Normal+]

• 
  Settings
  

1. unused green line:
   00:06:004 - Done
   00:06:234 - Done
   00:06:927 - Done
   00:07:157 - Done
   00:07:850 - Done
   00:08:542 - Done
   00:18:696 - Done
   00:26:081 - Done
   00:43:619 - Done
   00:48:234 - Done
   00:53:773 - Done
   01:00:234 - Done
   01:03:004 - Done
   01:03:927 - Done
   01:21:465 - Done
   01:22:388 - Done

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)

1. 00:19:157 (2,4) - Done
2. 00:26:773 (2,3) - Done
3. 00:42:696 (1,3) - Done

mapping

[Hard]

• 
  Settings
  

1. unused green line:
   00:05:542 - Done
   00:18:696 - Done
   00:26:081 - Done
   00:53:773 - Done
   01:00:234 - Done
   01:03:004 - Done
   01:03:927 - Done

mapping

1. 00:26:081 (1,3) - Umm... you can make it stack, I think. Done
2. 00:29:081 (8,1,2) - spacing? it look like a kinda over Done
3. 01:15:465 (2,3,4) - ^ None
   

[Insane]

• 
  Settings
  

1. unused green line:
   00:06:696 - Done
   00:17:773 - Done
   00:18:696 - Done
   00:26:196 - Done
   00:32:773 - Done
   00:39:927 - Done
   00:49:157 - Done
   00:53:773 - Done
   01:00:234 - Done
   01:03:004 - Done
   01:03:927 - Done
   01:21:465 - Done
   01:22:388 - Done
   01:25:157 - Done
   01:27:927 - Done

mapping

1. 00:35:081 (5,6,7,1) - spacing Done

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.

spboxer3 wrote:

[Piscis' Easy]

• 
  Settings
  

1. unused green line:
   00:40:850 -

Fixed~

mapping

Piscis wrote:

spboxer3 wrote:

[Piscis' Easy]

• 
  Settings
  

1. unused green line:
   00:40:850 -

Fixed~

mapping

tagsについてですが、SourceにShuffle!が入っているので
tagsのshuffleは消していいと思います

BeatofIke wrote:

Nice map.

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find. Found this through #modreqs

General:
Add "opening" in the tags because this is the opening theme of the anime Done
i was gonna say why isn't there a vid but i understand why.
change the white combo color. it'd be hard for players to know whether a slider is a repeat or not. Done

Easy:
00:44:542 (1) - how about making a curved so that it'd blanket sort of around the previous slider. like this
00:46:388 (3) - make this look the same as (1) if you follow the suggestion above.
01:13:157 (3) - ooh i think beginners might let go after the first repeat. this is why i mentioned about the white combo color. suggest that you remove the repeats and add another 1/1 slider to make it easier for beginners.

Normal+
remove the + on normal+. it looks bad and there's users who won't mod your map because of that. Done
try this setup? if you ignore this, then you can use this as a reference. Done
00:17:773 (7) - the hitburst is covering 1 of the repeats on this repeat slider. this would be ok for hard and insane diffs, but on a normal diff it's not. and plus it'd be hard for players to know when this slider ends because of the number of repeats. try to do something easier. Done
00:47:311 (2) - ^ Done
00:56:081 (2) - make this a NC because of new lyrics. Done
overall this is too hard for a normal diff. replace some of the circles for sliders or delete notes to make it easier. okey, i think so i tried it.

Hard:
00:56:542 (1) - remove the NC here because the lyrics are sill going. Done

Insane:
Try AR9. i think it flows nicer than AR8. hoo! its wilder than AR8 Done
00:17:773 (7) - make this a NC because it follows the drums. Done
00:27:927 (5) - a NC here because of new lyrics. Done
00:39:927 (4) - same as 00:17:773 Done
00:47:311 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - how about a stream to challenge players? Done

This is the best I can do. GL

NewRulerNA wrote:

Mod reqより

[General]
提案ですがTVsizeの曲なので動画を追加してみては？ None

音付けが優れているように思えません
私はそちらの指摘が得意では無いので他の人に任せる形になってしまいますが、音付けに関してのModをより多くしてもらった方が良いと思います

[Piscis's Easy]
気になったのは細かな1点のみ

00:05:773 (1) - スライダーの形が歪んでいるので修正を


[Normal]
Normalなので全体の完全なDistanceの統一をするべきだと個人的に思います Done
このままで行くとしても、間を置くのかどうかがかなり分かりにくく、目押し前提の譜面となっているように感じます

00:08:542 (1) 00:11:773 (2) - ヒットバーストが被ってしまいそうなので移動させたほうがいいかも Done
00:21:927 (5,1) - 被っているのがNormalとしては見にくいので被らないように移動 Done
00:31:619 (1,2,3,1,2) - ゴチャゴチャした配置で非常に分かりにくく感じました Done
01:16:157 (2,3) - 始点に戻る配置はNormalでは難しいかな Done

[Hard]

00:08:542 (1) - ここの速度低下は分かりにくいのでは？ Done x0.75にしました
00:15:004 (1,2) - スライダーの形をどちらかに揃える Done
00:34:850 (6,7) - ^ Done
00:36:465 (10) - あくまでも個人的になのですが、下の方に行き過ぎかと Done
00:40:388 (8,1) - 8のスライダーのヒットバーストが隠れていて1のスライダーのターンが分かりにくいです Done

[Insane]
AR-1 None
00:18:696 (1,2) - スライダーの形をどちらかに統一 Done
00:36:465 (5,8,11) - ^ Done
00:48:234 (1,2,3,4,5) - 音取りが優れているようには思えません、叩くタイミングをもっと分かりやすくなるように工夫をするか、別の音取りをするのが良いと思います Done
01:15:465 (2,4) - スライダーの形をどちらかに統一 Done

スライダーの形が全体を見ると統一されておらず、譜面として綺麗ではないように思えました
もう少し使うスライダーの種類を減らすべきだと思います

かなり厳しい指摘もありますが、がんばってください

NewRulerNA wrote:

スライダーの形が全体を見ると統一されておらず、譜面として綺麗ではないように思えました
もう少し使うスライダーの種類を減らすべきだと思います

Byakugan249 wrote:

Easy:
00:44:542 (1) - how about making a curved so that it'd blanket sort of around the previous slider. like this　fixed
00:46:388 (3) - make this look the same as (1) if you follow the suggestion above. fixed
01:13:157 (3) - ooh i think beginners might let go after the first repeat. this is why i mentioned about the white combo color. suggest that you remove the repeats and add another 1/1 slider to make it easier for beginners. fixed

NewRulerNA wrote:

[Piscis's Easy]
気になったのは細かな1点のみ

00:05:773 (1) - スライダーの形が歪んでいるので修正を　直しました

Piscis wrote:

thank you modding ~
アップデートお願いします

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1. Kiai times in [Insane] and [Taiko Muzukashii] differs from the other difficulties. Please make them the same. (Actually not sure if it's completely unrankable, but putting it as red anyway.
2. soft-hitfinish.wav has a bit of silence in the beginning. This means the hitsound sounds late. Try using this one.
3. Also, lower the volume on your soft-hitclap.wav a bit? It's very high.

1. Try to not use so many finishes ;_; Here are some suggestions to how you could use other hitsounds:
2. 00:26:081 (1) - I would use whistle only on the sliderstart here. The song is much softer on this part, and it doesn't fit to have clap on every beat and finish on every other beat.
3. 00:27:927 (2) - ^
4. 00:29:773 (1) - ^
5. 00:30:696 (2) - Remove clap, add whistle
6. 00:32:542 (1) - Remove finish
7. 00:33:465 (1,2,3) - Only whistles on slider start.
   etc etc
8. 00:51:927 (1) - This spinner should end on 00:54:581

1. Please don't use so many finishes everywhere. It's like you're using them instead of claps, and it hurts my ears ;w;
2. 00:03:004 - This 1.30x section doesn't fit here in Normal at all. Remove it, then remove repeats from 00:03:004 (1,2). Remember that the sliderend is unsnapped after you deleted the inherited section, so resnap it.
3. 00:05:536 - Unsnapped inherited timing section. this should be at 00:05:542, though if you remove the previous timing section, this one is not needed anymore.
4. 00:13:157 (4) - Spacing.
5. 00:14:081 (5) - This would be better if you did like this imo:
   
6. 00:15:927 (2) - Line up with 00:15:004 (1)
7. 00:24:234 (4) - New combo
8. 00:25:273 (1) - This should actually be on the 1/6, starting at 00:25:311 (or rather 00:25:081). I don't recommend using 1/6 in a Normal though. You could supplement this section by making a slider instead like this:
   
9. 00:29:773 (5) - New combo
10. 00:28:619 - Add note here?
11. 00:30:696 (8) - Remove this, and move 00:30:927 (9) to 00:30:696 instead. Then add note at 00:31:388
12. 00:39:004 (5) - New combo.
13. 00:40:388 (8,1) - This is hard to read for a [Normal] Can you not stack them?
14. 00:44:542 (5) - New combo
15. 00:58:388 (4) - Extend this so the repeat is on 00:58:734 - instead.
16. 01:02:081 (8) - I don't think it's a good idea to stack under such a short slider.
17. 01:04:388 (5) - ^
18. 01:11:773 (2,3,1,2) - A bit hard for normal?
19. 01:15:465 (9,1) - Swap new combo.
20. 01:17:773 (5) - Move it out like this? http://puu.sh/lwEM
21. 01:22:850 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern might be a bit confusing.

1. 00:05:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part sounds very weird imo. Could you try another rhythm pattern here?
2. 00:25:273 (1,2,1,2) - The pattern here is confusing even for a hard. Sliders stacked on each other in different beats. You should space this out.
3. 00:40:850 (1) - You don't have a long time to react to the 2nd repeat on this slider. Consider unstacking this?
4. 00:58:388 (4) - New combo?
5. 01:03:004 (2) - Unsnapped sliderend
6. 01:21:465 - Why this 1.50x section? Feels very weird.

1. OD -1. OD9 doesn't fit with a song like this.
2. 00:09:927 (2,3,4,1,2) - I feel this mapping is uneccesary. There is nothing here in the song that this is mapped to.
3. 00:25:273 (2,3,4) - This section should be 1/6
4. 00:34:388 (4,5) - Fix the spacing here so it looks more even with the rest of the pattern~
5. 00:37:157 (6,10) - Overlap ;_;
6. 01:25:157 (1) - Extend to 01:25:619?
7. 01:26:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This looks very randomly placed. Maybe put in some kind of pattern?

CXu wrote:

Hi there
I love this song~~ >w</

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I'd prefer that you quote my post and state which changes you make, and which you have not. Thanks~
If you have any problems understanding what the hell I'm talking about, feel free to poke me in-game!

[Color guide]

1. Red text means that the issue is unrankable.
2. Blue text is a strongly recommended suggestion.
3. Black text is a regular suggestion.

[General]

1. Kiai times in [Insane] and [Taiko Muzukashii] differs from the other difficulties. Please make them the same. (Actually not sure if it's completely unrankable, but putting it as red anyway. Done
2. soft-hitfinish.wav has a bit of silence in the beginning. This means the hitsound sounds late. Try using this one. Done
3. Also, lower the volume on your soft-hitclap.wav a bit? It's very high.

[Piscis' Easy]

1. Try to not use so many finishes ;_; Here are some suggestions to how you could use other hitsounds:
2. 00:26:081 (1) - I would use whistle only on the sliderstart here. The song is much softer on this part, and it doesn't fit to have clap on every beat and finish on every other beat.
3. 00:27:927 (2) - ^
4. 00:29:773 (1) - ^
5. 00:30:696 (2) - Remove clap, add whistle
6. 00:32:542 (1) - Remove finish
7. 00:33:465 (1,2,3) - Only whistles on slider start.
   etc etc
8. 00:51:927 (1) - This spinner should end on 00:54:581

There's actually not much to comment on here. I would prefer that you didn't use so many finishes though.

[Normal]

1. Please don't use so many finishes everywhere. It's like you're using them instead of claps, and it hurts my ears ;w; Done
2. 00:03:004 - This 1.30x section doesn't fit here in Normal at all. Remove it, then remove repeats from 00:03:004 (1,2). Remember that the sliderend is unsnapped after you deleted the inherited section, so resnap it. Done
3. 00:05:536 - Unsnapped inherited timing section. this should be at 00:05:542, though if you remove the previous timing section, this one is not needed anymore. Done
4. 00:13:157 (4) - Spacing. Done
5. 00:14:081 (5) - This would be better if you did like this imo: Done
   
6. 00:15:927 (2) - Line up with 00:15:004 (1) None
7. 00:24:234 (4) - New combo Done
8. 00:25:273 (1) - This should actually be on the 1/6, starting at 00:25:311 (or rather 00:25:081). I don't recommend using 1/6 in a Normal though. You could supplement this section by making a slider instead like this: Done
   
9. 00:29:773 (5) - New combo Done
10. 00:28:619 - Add note here? Done
11. 00:30:696 (8) - Remove this, and move 00:30:927 (9) to 00:30:696 instead. Then add note at 00:31:388 Done
12. 00:39:004 (5) - New combo. Done
13. 00:40:388 (8,1) - This is hard to read for a [Normal] Can you not stack them? Done
14. 00:44:542 (5) - New combo Done
15. 00:58:388 (4) - Extend this so the repeat is on 00:58:734 - instead. Done
16. 01:02:081 (8) - I don't think it's a good idea to stack under such a short slider. Done
17. 01:04:388 (5) - ^ Done
18. 01:11:773 (2,3,1,2) - A bit hard for normal? Done
19. 01:15:465 (9,1) - Swap new combo. Done
20. 01:17:773 (5) - Move it out like this? http://puu.sh/lwEM Done
21. 01:22:850 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern might be a bit confusing. Done

A bit hard for a [Normal] (not that I can say anything, I make kinda hard Normals myself xD)

yeah,i think so... i try to change to easy

[Hard]

1. 00:05:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part sounds very weird imo. Could you try another rhythm pattern here? Done
2. 00:25:273 (1,2,1,2) - The pattern here is confusing even for a hard. Sliders stacked on each other in different beats. You should space this out. Done
3. 00:40:850 (1) - You don't have a long time to react to the 2nd repeat on this slider. Consider unstacking this? Done
4. 00:58:388 (4) - New combo? Done
5. 01:03:004 (2) - Unsnapped sliderend Done
6. 01:21:465 - Why this 1.50x section? Feels very weird. Done

I like this diff But finishes ;_;

[Insane]

1. OD -1. OD9 doesn't fit with a song like this. Done
2. 00:09:927 (2,3,4,1,2) - I feel this mapping is uneccesary. There is nothing here in the song that this is mapped to. Done
3. 00:25:273 (2,3,4) - This section should be 1/6 Done
4. 00:34:388 (4,5) - Fix the spacing here so it looks more even with the rest of the pattern~ Done
5. 00:37:157 (6,10) - Overlap ;_; Done
6. 01:25:157 (1) - Extend to 01:25:619? Done
7. 01:26:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This looks very randomly placed. Maybe put in some kind of pattern? Done

I like this too xD But yeah finishes ;_;


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Both [Hard] and [Insane] are good, only [Normal] had a few things that I felt was weird. Good job
Nice mapset!
Good luck~
Long modpost is long

CXu wrote:

[Piscis' Easy]

1. Try to not use so many finishes ;_; Here are some suggestions to how you could use other hitsounds:
2. 00:26:081 (1) - I would use whistle only on the sliderstart here. The song is much softer on this part, and it doesn't fit to have clap on every beat and finish on every other beat.
3. 00:27:927 (2) - ^
4. 00:29:773 (1) - ^
5. 00:30:696 (2) - Remove clap, add whistle
6. 00:32:542 (1) - Remove finish
7. 00:33:465 (1,2,3) - Only whistles on slider start.
   etc etc
8. 00:51:927 (1) - This spinner should end on 00:54:581

There's actually not much to comment on here. I would prefer that you didn't use so many finishes though.

Piscis wrote:

CXu wrote:

[Piscis' Easy]

1. Try to not use so many finishes ;_; Here are some suggestions to how you could use other hitsounds:
2. 00:26:081 (1) - I would use whistle only on the sliderstart here. The song is much softer on this part, and it doesn't fit to have clap on every beat and finish on every other beat.
3. 00:27:927 (2) - ^
4. 00:29:773 (1) - ^
5. 00:30:696 (2) - Remove clap, add whistle
6. 00:32:542 (1) - Remove finish
7. 00:33:465 (1,2,3) - Only whistles on slider start.
   etc etc
8. 00:51:927 (1) - This spinner should end on 00:54:581

There's actually not much to comment on here. I would prefer that you didn't use so many finishes though.

All fixed! thank you~

ヒットサウンドを色々と変えました～

Piscis wrote:

すいませんもう一回updateしてください
確認してみたら前と同じものっぽいので・・・