Hi there
I love this song~~ >w</
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I'd prefer that you quote my post and state which changes you make, and which you have not. Thanks~
If you have any problems understanding what the hell I'm talking about, feel free to poke me in-game!
[Color guide]
[Normal]
[Hard]
[Insane]
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Both [Hard] and [Insane] are good, only [Normal] had a few things that I felt was weird. Good job
Nice mapset!
Good luck~
Long modpost is long
I love this song~~ >w</
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I'd prefer that you quote my post and state which changes you make, and which you have not. Thanks~
If you have any problems understanding what the hell I'm talking about, feel free to poke me in-game!
[Color guide]
- Red text means that the issue is unrankable.
- Blue text is a strongly recommended suggestion.
- Black text is a regular suggestion.
- Kiai times in [Insane] and [Taiko Muzukashii] differs from the other difficulties. Please make them the same. (Actually not sure if it's completely unrankable, but putting it as red anyway.
- soft-hitfinish.wav has a bit of silence in the beginning. This means the hitsound sounds late. Try using this one.
- Also, lower the volume on your soft-hitclap.wav a bit? It's very high.
- Try to not use so many finishes ;_; Here are some suggestions to how you could use other hitsounds:
- 00:26:081 (1) - I would use whistle only on the sliderstart here. The song is much softer on this part, and it doesn't fit to have clap on every beat and finish on every other beat.
- 00:27:927 (2) - ^
- 00:29:773 (1) - ^
- 00:30:696 (2) - Remove clap, add whistle
- 00:32:542 (1) - Remove finish
- 00:33:465 (1,2,3) - Only whistles on slider start.
etc etc - 00:51:927 (1) - This spinner should end on 00:54:581
[Normal]
- Please don't use so many finishes everywhere. It's like you're using them instead of claps, and it hurts my ears ;w;
- 00:03:004 - This 1.30x section doesn't fit here in Normal at all. Remove it, then remove repeats from 00:03:004 (1,2). Remember that the sliderend is unsnapped after you deleted the inherited section, so resnap it.
- 00:05:536 - Unsnapped inherited timing section. this should be at 00:05:542, though if you remove the previous timing section, this one is not needed anymore.
- 00:13:157 (4) - Spacing.
- 00:14:081 (5) - This would be better if you did like this imo:
- 00:15:927 (2) - Line up with 00:15:004 (1)
- 00:24:234 (4) - New combo
- 00:25:273 (1) - This should actually be on the 1/6, starting at 00:25:311 (or rather 00:25:081). I don't recommend using 1/6 in a Normal though. You could supplement this section by making a slider instead like this:
- 00:29:773 (5) - New combo
- 00:28:619 - Add note here?
- 00:30:696 (8) - Remove this, and move 00:30:927 (9) to 00:30:696 instead. Then add note at 00:31:388
- 00:39:004 (5) - New combo.
- 00:40:388 (8,1) - This is hard to read for a [Normal] Can you not stack them?
- 00:44:542 (5) - New combo
- 00:58:388 (4) - Extend this so the repeat is on 00:58:734 - instead.
- 01:02:081 (8) - I don't think it's a good idea to stack under such a short slider.
- 01:04:388 (5) - ^
- 01:11:773 (2,3,1,2) - A bit hard for normal?
- 01:15:465 (9,1) - Swap new combo.
- 01:17:773 (5) - Move it out like this? http://puu.sh/lwEM
- 01:22:850 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern might be a bit confusing.
[Hard]
- 00:05:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part sounds very weird imo. Could you try another rhythm pattern here?
- 00:25:273 (1,2,1,2) - The pattern here is confusing even for a hard. Sliders stacked on each other in different beats. You should space this out.
- 00:40:850 (1) - You don't have a long time to react to the 2nd repeat on this slider. Consider unstacking this?
- 00:58:388 (4) - New combo?
- 01:03:004 (2) - Unsnapped sliderend
- 01:21:465 - Why this 1.50x section? Feels very weird.
[Insane]
- OD -1. OD9 doesn't fit with a song like this.
- 00:09:927 (2,3,4,1,2) - I feel this mapping is uneccesary. There is nothing here in the song that this is mapped to.
- 00:25:273 (2,3,4) - This section should be 1/6
- 00:34:388 (4,5) - Fix the spacing here so it looks more even with the rest of the pattern~
- 00:37:157 (6,10) - Overlap ;_;
- 01:25:157 (1) - Extend to 01:25:619?
- 01:26:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This looks very randomly placed. Maybe put in some kind of pattern?
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Both [Hard] and [Insane] are good, only [Normal] had a few things that I felt was weird. Good job
Nice mapset!
Good luck~
Long modpost is long